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Shubham par to pehle se hi nazar thi yug ki
Dekhte hai kab pakda Jaata hai
Monica aur yug ki chemistry bhi tayyar ho gayi hai
Lekin eagle clan ko next update me hi introduce karna chahta hoon
Yoshodo ka introduction sirf isliye tha kyunki uske powers ja ek hissa dikhana tha
Saath rahiye
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Yug baat khatam karke jaise hi a raha tha usne door ek saaye ko dekha
"koun hai wahan??" yug ne awaz lagai aur wo saaya thithak gaya
"koun hai wahan??" yug fir bola aur zor zor se chalne laga
Wo saaya bhi Saamne rakhe ek bike me chadh gaya aur bike ki speed badha di
"shit" bol yug bhi waha rakhe asla ki bike uthakar speed badha kar us saaye ka Peecha karne laga
Bike bohut speed se ja rahi thi aur yug bhi usi speed se ja raha tha. Uske dimag me kai sawal uth rahe the
Bike seedha monica ke ghar ke Paas ja rahi thi aur tabhi yug ke bike ke Saamne ek maa apne bachhe ko liye ja rahi thi
KREEEEEEECCCCCHHHHHHHHHHH
Yug ne brake lagaya
"aap thik to hai na??" yug ne poocha lekin us maa aur bachhe ne kuch nahi kaha aur yug ko dekhti rahi. Yug bike lekar fir chal pada monica ke party me
Wo maa aur bachha dhua yani smoke bankar udd gaye
Tabhi wo saaya dikha yug ko monica ke room ke bahar tha wo saaya. Kahin monica ko to......
OH god
Yug jhat se bike park kar chalang maarkar us saaye ko khojne laga lekin wo kahin nahi tha
THAK THAK
THAK THAK
do baar knock karne ke baad monica ne khidki kholi
"YUG??? OMG" monica yug ko dekhkar hairan hui lekin yug nahi hua
Isse pehle monica kuch kehti yug Ander a chuka tha
"kya kar rahe ho is Waqt yahan?? Party to khatam ho chuki hai" monica boli aur fir uski nazar yug par gayi jo uske transparent gown ko dekh raha tha
Ganimat hai bra panty pehen rakha tha usne
"kya ho raha hai?? Kal se dekh rahi hoon bohut tharki ban rahe ho" monica boli aur dono haath apne seene par rakh diye usne
"to kisi aur ko dekhun??" yug haskar bola
"karke dekho fir dekho mai kaise tumhara khoon pee jaati hoon" bol monica ne yug ka collar pakda
Lekin Saath hi monica ka gown khul gaya aur yug ki aankhen badi badi ho gayi
"aise.... Mat dekho yug...." monica aankhen neeche kar boli
Yug ki aankhen monica ke seene se hoti hui uske pet me gayi. Uski gehri nabhi ki taraf uska haath ja hi raha tha
THUPPP......
Yug ka dhyan bhatka
Monica ne aankhen band kar li apni.
MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH
Apne hont monica ke hont ke sath jod diye yug ne
Monica ne aankhen kholi. Yug ja chuka tha
Pagal kahin ka. Monica has padi aur khidki band kar sone chali vayi
Udhar yug khidki se neeche utra. Usne koi aahat suni thi. Monica ke kamre me koi nahi hai yani monica safe hai
"arey yug??" abhi tak gaya nahi?? Party to kab ki khatam ho gayi hai"scooty me baithe hue jyoti ne poocha
" tu kya kar rahi hai yahan jyoti?? "poocha yug ne
" arey baba mai to shubham ka wait kar rahi hoon. Usne wait karne ko bola tha aur kahin gaya tha. Pata nahi abhi tak kyun nahi aaya wo"jyoti boli
Tabhi shubham aata dikhai diya yug ko
"kahan gaya tha shubham??" yug ne poocha
"kuch kaam tha Yaar. Tu kya kar raha hai waise??" shubham ne poocha
"arey ye to apni darling se chup chup kar milne gaya hoga, kyun yug??" jyoti haskar boli
Yug ke kaano me jyoti ki baat gayi hi nahi wo sirf shubham ko dekhe ja raha tha
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Wahi kisi jungle ke kone me
" maine apna kaam kar diya hai master "ek shaks bola
"hmm,pata kiya ladke ke baare me??" master ne poocha
"Haan thoda bohut. Jald aapke Saamne aaunga" bol wo shaks Saamne aaya
"eagle clan ab shahar par raaj karega ha ha ha" bol duen me udd gaya wo shaks
Tabhi police ki jeep wahan aayi aur us me se prakash utra
"tumhe pakka yakeen hai koi tha wahan par???" prakash ne poocha
"Haan sir maine kisi ko dekha tha shayad" driver bola
"shayad?? Aur shayad ke wajah se yahan le aaye??" prakash khush nahi tha
"H
Sorry sir mujhe laga ki...." driver chup ho gaya
Prakash ka mood off ho gaya. Kitna acha mauka tha aaj us shaks ko pakadne ka. Fir pata chal Jaata ki wo yug hai ta nahi. Lekin is driver ke chakkar me...
Kuch to hone wala hai shahar me aur wo bhi bohut bura lekin kya???
Commissioner sir ko inform karna hoga
Udhar yug wahan se chup kar sab kuch dekh raha tha. Us shaks ka gayab hona aur fir inspector ka wahan aana. Kuch samajh me nahi aaya lekin aaj use pakka yakeen ho gaya hai ki shubham ka kuch na kuch to lena dena hai is maamle se aur drugs se bhi
Aur us gayab hone wale shaks ka bhi kuch na kuch rishta to hai shubham ke saath
Sabse bada question hai ki kyun??? Kyun aisa kar raha hai shubham?? Paison ke liye?? Ya kiske liye???
Ye sab sochne ka Waqt nahi hai. Raat bohut ho gayi hai agar is Waqt ghar na pohuncha to problem ho jayegi uske liye
Isliye wo apne ghar ki aur rawana hua
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POLICE STATION
"arey asha?? Kya hua bina bataye yahan??" prakash ne poocha
"kyun nahi aana chahiye tha??" asha ne kaha
"arey mera matlab wo nahi tha" prakash bola
"Mr prakash mai sirf ye Kehne aayi hoon ki yug ke oopar jo shaque ka keeda aapke dimag me hai use nikal dijiye" asha boli
"asha tum Keh rahi ho ye. Maine kitne saboot dikhaye.." prakash bola
"bas inspector Saab. Teen din pehle jab wo mask wala aadmi Saare shahar me taandav macha raha tha yug mere Paas hi tha" asha boli
Prakash chaunk pada
"kyun acha nahi laga na ki mera innocent bhatija aap ke shaque ke ghere se bahar a gaya??" asha ne poocha
"asha mai to bas apni duty kar.."
"bas sir bas. Ab agar mere Saath rishta rakhna hai to yug ki koi baat hamare beech nahi hogi" asha boli aur pair patakti hui chali gayi
Prakash soch me doob gaya.
"koun hai wahan??" yug ne awaz lagai aur wo saaya thithak gaya
"koun hai wahan??" yug fir bola aur zor zor se chalne laga
Wo saaya bhi Saamne rakhe ek bike me chadh gaya aur bike ki speed badha di
"shit" bol yug bhi waha rakhe asla ki bike uthakar speed badha kar us saaye ka Peecha karne laga
Bike bohut speed se ja rahi thi aur yug bhi usi speed se ja raha tha. Uske dimag me kai sawal uth rahe the
Bike seedha monica ke ghar ke Paas ja rahi thi aur tabhi yug ke bike ke Saamne ek maa apne bachhe ko liye ja rahi thi
KREEEEEEECCCCCHHHHHHHHHHH
Yug ne brake lagaya
"aap thik to hai na??" yug ne poocha lekin us maa aur bachhe ne kuch nahi kaha aur yug ko dekhti rahi. Yug bike lekar fir chal pada monica ke party me
Wo maa aur bachha dhua yani smoke bankar udd gaye
Tabhi wo saaya dikha yug ko monica ke room ke bahar tha wo saaya. Kahin monica ko to......
OH god
Yug jhat se bike park kar chalang maarkar us saaye ko khojne laga lekin wo kahin nahi tha
THAK THAK
THAK THAK
do baar knock karne ke baad monica ne khidki kholi
"YUG??? OMG" monica yug ko dekhkar hairan hui lekin yug nahi hua
Isse pehle monica kuch kehti yug Ander a chuka tha
"kya kar rahe ho is Waqt yahan?? Party to khatam ho chuki hai" monica boli aur fir uski nazar yug par gayi jo uske transparent gown ko dekh raha tha
Ganimat hai bra panty pehen rakha tha usne
"kya ho raha hai?? Kal se dekh rahi hoon bohut tharki ban rahe ho" monica boli aur dono haath apne seene par rakh diye usne
"to kisi aur ko dekhun??" yug haskar bola
"karke dekho fir dekho mai kaise tumhara khoon pee jaati hoon" bol monica ne yug ka collar pakda
Lekin Saath hi monica ka gown khul gaya aur yug ki aankhen badi badi ho gayi
"aise.... Mat dekho yug...." monica aankhen neeche kar boli
Yug ki aankhen monica ke seene se hoti hui uske pet me gayi. Uski gehri nabhi ki taraf uska haath ja hi raha tha
THUPPP......
Yug ka dhyan bhatka
Monica ne aankhen band kar li apni.
MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH
Apne hont monica ke hont ke sath jod diye yug ne
Monica ne aankhen kholi. Yug ja chuka tha
Pagal kahin ka. Monica has padi aur khidki band kar sone chali vayi
Udhar yug khidki se neeche utra. Usne koi aahat suni thi. Monica ke kamre me koi nahi hai yani monica safe hai
"arey yug??" abhi tak gaya nahi?? Party to kab ki khatam ho gayi hai"scooty me baithe hue jyoti ne poocha
" tu kya kar rahi hai yahan jyoti?? "poocha yug ne
" arey baba mai to shubham ka wait kar rahi hoon. Usne wait karne ko bola tha aur kahin gaya tha. Pata nahi abhi tak kyun nahi aaya wo"jyoti boli
Tabhi shubham aata dikhai diya yug ko
"kahan gaya tha shubham??" yug ne poocha
"kuch kaam tha Yaar. Tu kya kar raha hai waise??" shubham ne poocha
"arey ye to apni darling se chup chup kar milne gaya hoga, kyun yug??" jyoti haskar boli
Yug ke kaano me jyoti ki baat gayi hi nahi wo sirf shubham ko dekhe ja raha tha
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Wahi kisi jungle ke kone me
" maine apna kaam kar diya hai master "ek shaks bola
"hmm,pata kiya ladke ke baare me??" master ne poocha
"Haan thoda bohut. Jald aapke Saamne aaunga" bol wo shaks Saamne aaya
"eagle clan ab shahar par raaj karega ha ha ha" bol duen me udd gaya wo shaks
Tabhi police ki jeep wahan aayi aur us me se prakash utra
"tumhe pakka yakeen hai koi tha wahan par???" prakash ne poocha
"Haan sir maine kisi ko dekha tha shayad" driver bola
"shayad?? Aur shayad ke wajah se yahan le aaye??" prakash khush nahi tha
"H
Sorry sir mujhe laga ki...." driver chup ho gaya
Prakash ka mood off ho gaya. Kitna acha mauka tha aaj us shaks ko pakadne ka. Fir pata chal Jaata ki wo yug hai ta nahi. Lekin is driver ke chakkar me...
Kuch to hone wala hai shahar me aur wo bhi bohut bura lekin kya???
Commissioner sir ko inform karna hoga
Udhar yug wahan se chup kar sab kuch dekh raha tha. Us shaks ka gayab hona aur fir inspector ka wahan aana. Kuch samajh me nahi aaya lekin aaj use pakka yakeen ho gaya hai ki shubham ka kuch na kuch to lena dena hai is maamle se aur drugs se bhi
Aur us gayab hone wale shaks ka bhi kuch na kuch rishta to hai shubham ke saath
Sabse bada question hai ki kyun??? Kyun aisa kar raha hai shubham?? Paison ke liye?? Ya kiske liye???
Ye sab sochne ka Waqt nahi hai. Raat bohut ho gayi hai agar is Waqt ghar na pohuncha to problem ho jayegi uske liye
Isliye wo apne ghar ki aur rawana hua
----------------------------------------------------------------------
POLICE STATION
"arey asha?? Kya hua bina bataye yahan??" prakash ne poocha
"kyun nahi aana chahiye tha??" asha ne kaha
"arey mera matlab wo nahi tha" prakash bola
"Mr prakash mai sirf ye Kehne aayi hoon ki yug ke oopar jo shaque ka keeda aapke dimag me hai use nikal dijiye" asha boli
"asha tum Keh rahi ho ye. Maine kitne saboot dikhaye.." prakash bola
"bas inspector Saab. Teen din pehle jab wo mask wala aadmi Saare shahar me taandav macha raha tha yug mere Paas hi tha" asha boli
Prakash chaunk pada
"kyun acha nahi laga na ki mera innocent bhatija aap ke shaque ke ghere se bahar a gaya??" asha ne poocha
"asha mai to bas apni duty kar.."
"bas sir bas. Ab agar mere Saath rishta rakhna hai to yug ki koi baat hamare beech nahi hogi" asha boli aur pair patakti hui chali gayi
Prakash soch me doob gaya.
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great update of a great story by a great writer....
Only one limitation that is slow updates....
Give it a pace bhai.
Only one limitation that is slow updates....
Give it a pace bhai.
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Shubham kon hai kiw yug ke har waqt follow krta hai .wo saya Kon tha Jo gyab ho gya ..eagle members ka kiy lafda hai Bhai kiy ye dark clain se alag hai ya sath .
Sahar Mai kiy hoga .kuch to bada hoga aisa mujhe v LG RHA hai kiw ki har koi apna chal cl RHA hai..
Yug or Monica clo kuch to scene bna..
Shubham kon hai kiw yug ke har waqt follow krta hai .wo saya Kon tha Jo gyab ho gya ..eagle members ka kiy lafda hai Bhai kiy ye dark clain se alag hai ya sath .
Sahar Mai kiy hoga .kuch to bada hoga aisa mujhe v LG RHA hai kiw ki har koi apna chal cl RHA hai..
Yug or Monica clo kuch to scene bna..
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ha ha ha............ is yug ke chakkar mein kitni prem kahaniyan khatm hongi.................
sahil ki ho hi gayi
prakash ki hone wali hai...............
aur shubham.............wo to abhi net practice me hi pakda gaya...........tournament se pahle hi
sahil ki ho hi gayi
prakash ki hone wali hai...............
aur shubham.............wo to abhi net practice me hi pakda gaya...........tournament se pahle hi
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