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Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)

Aapke hisab se story ki lead lady kise hona chahiye

  • Monica

    Votes: 19 76.0%
  • Rashmi

    Votes: 12 48.0%
  • Sheetal

    Votes: 7 28.0%

  • Total voters
    25
  • Poll closed .

Sona

Smiling can make u and others happy
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"aur isi ke saath ohm's law...."

Physics ka class chal raha tha aur saare students gaur se padh rahe the.aur notes le rahe the

"Wo dekh wo raha yug"ek student ne kaha aur paper ka rocket bana uthkar yug ke upar maar diya

Yug ne us paper ko uthaya aur usko haath me hi daba liya aur mudkar dekha

"Ha ha dekh kaise dekh raha...."baat halal me atak gayi.ek bhayavah chehra dikha us ladke ko yug ke chehre ki jagah.peela pad gaya wo aur chupchap baith gaya

Na kisi se batchit na hasna aur na hi apne dosto se milna
Yug ne aaj apne baal ko saamne ki aur kar diya.aankhen baalon se dhaki hui.shirt ke button khule hue aur cuffs chade hue
School ke bahar a gaya yug

Rashmi ka dil zoro se dhadak raha tha.yug uski aur hi a raha tha

"Yug...tum..y y yahan.??"rashmi ka chehra yug ko dekh laal ho gaya tha

"Hi rashmi"yug bola aur upar se neeche tak rashmi ko dekhne laga
Rashmi ke skirt kaafi chote the.yug ki aankhen wahi atak gayi

Rashmi sharma ke laal ho rahi thi.uska dil zoro se dhadak raha tha.

Tabhi yug ka phone baj utha

"Hello??"yug ne phone uthaya aur rashmi ki dekh kar shararat ke saath muskuraya

"Sasuka bol raha hoon.yug us mask ke baare me baat karni thi.koi problem to nahi ho rahi hai na usse??"sasuka ne poochha

"Problem??wo kya hota hai.acha bore mat kijiye bye"yug ne phone rakh diya aur ek flying kiss rashmi ko dekar cycle chala kar apne ghar pohuncha

Udhar sasuka soch me pad gaya

"Kya soch me doobe hue ho??"master yani red clan ke master ne poochha

"Master lagta hai yug...."sasuka chup ho gaya

"Poori baat"master bola

"Uske paas master ahru ka m mask h hai shayad"sasuka nazrein jhukakar bola

"Kya???ye mujhe ab bata rahe ho??utho abhi"master uthkar khada ho gaya

"Kya hua master??"sasuka ne poochha

"Abhi ke abhi india jaana hai "master bola aur hakka bakka dikh rahe sasuka ko lekar chalne laga

"Waise mask ke baare me thoda bohut suna hai master,wo master ahru..."sasuka bolte bolte master ko dekhkar ruk gaya

"Mask of death"master bola

"Kya??"sasuka uchal pada

"Kai sadiyon pehle hamare hi clan ki sthapna jisne ki"master bola

"Yani jisne red clan ko janm diya"sasuka bola

"Bilkul aur us ninja ne hi red clan ka ek gaon basaya tha.uske pass kai shaktiyan thi.aur use darr tha ki shaktiyan kisi galat haathon ne na chali jaaye."master bolte bolte ruk gaya

"Usne apne meditation ko ek mask ka roop de diya.aur is mask ko generation ke bad generation ko pass kiya gaya.jisne bhi ye mask pehna uske paas apar shaktiyan thi.aur unhone us mask ko control kar bade se bade ninja ko haraya.har ek ninja ise apne shishya ko deta jo fir ek samay ke baad apne shishya ko deta tha.aise hi ek ke baad ek hote hue master ahru ke paas pohuncha ye mask"master bola

"Samjha lekin fir to is mask se koi problem nahi hona chahiye us bacche ko"sasuka bola

"Mask ki taqat agar us ladke se zyada hui,ya agar us ladke ne us mask par kaabu nahi paya to wo mask us ladke par kaabu pa lega,aur us ladke me dabi hui uski saari negative character ko saamne layega,sahi waqt par nahi roka gaya to wo waisa ban jayega jaisa wo nahi banna chahta "master bola

"Jaldi kijiye fir "sasuka bola aur car ki speed badha di

"Ek baat aur boli hai sasuka"master bola

"Boliye master"sasuka bola

"Ye mera akhiri mission hoga,jald se jald tumhe naya master dhoondna hoga"master aankhen band karte hue bola

Sasuka master ko dekhne laga.uske dimag me bohut kuch chal raha tha
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"Sab kuch to le liya ,tum logo ko kuch lena hai shiksha??yug??"poly bolu

Mahine ka pehla din tha aur poly apne bachhon ke saath mall me aayi hui thi.

"List ka saara saman to le liya"plot ne ek baar fir chek kiya.yug chup chap idhar udhar dekh raha tha aur kuch bole bina wo aur shiksha kaafi door a gaye the.aur mall ke bahar a gaye the.halka sa sunsaan tha jagah bas do ladke khade the

"Wo dekh kya maal hai,ekdum tight"ek ladka shiksha ko dekh kar bole.

Yug wahan gaya aur ek ka collar pakad kar bola
"Kiske baare me bol raha tha??"

"Abey hat jaanta nahi mai koun...."

DHADDDDDDD

yug ke ek punch ne us ladke ko udakar door fenk diya aur wo wahi behosh ho gaya

Doosre ladke ko koi mauka milta isse pehle hi

THADDDD

ek kick ne use bhi behoshi ke duniya me pohuncha diya

"Bhaiyya kya hua??"shikha awaz sunkar daudkar aayi

"Hua ye ki aise chote kapde pehenkar apni nabhi aur pair ki numaish karegi to ye aise hi maar khate rahenge,sharm bech khayi hai ya pocket money kam pad rahe hai to apna jism bhi bech aati hai"yug bola

"BHAIYAAAAAA"gurraya shiksha.aur rote hue yug ko dekhne lagi.aaj tak yug ne itne kadwe bol kabhi nahi bola.chi ghinn aati hai usse ab
Shiksha apna chehra dhakte hue bhag gayi poly ke paas

Yug ko koi fark nahi pada.tabhi use door se esha dikhai di jo ek ladke ke saaththi

"Hi esha"yug esha ke paas jakar bola

"Hi yug"esha boli.pata tha use ki yug ne bartein aur uske chamcho ki kaise dhulai ki
Tab se yug ke aas paas ghoom rahi thi.aaj mauka mila use

"Ekdum hot lag rahi ho"bol yug ne apna haath esha ke kamar me rakh diya

"Abe o ye meri gf hai" uske saath wala ladka bola

Yug ne uska collar pakar utha diya zameen se

"Choro use yug uff mai kehti hoon choro use"esha boli

Yug ne use chor diya aur esha ke chehre ko pakda aur

Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Ek kiss jad diya aur chala gaya.esha roti rahi.us ladke ne esha ko sambhala

"You will pay for this you bastard"esha ke saath wala ladka bola
Nice update sir
Mask ne yug ko bad boy bna diya
Waiting for next update
 

Asif khan

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O Teri ki ye yug ko Kia ho raha h itna change
I think mask ki waja se ho raha h
Negative energy havi ho rahi h yug pe
Ye master ne esa q bola Sasuke ko k 2sra master dhoond lo
Kahi yug k 7 amna samna to nahi ho ga
 

Swaraj

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Guys jab Maine fantasy based story likhna shuru kiya to akash ki legacy no nazar andaz kar ek kamzor hero aapke saamne pesh kiya
Jo abhi young hai
School student hai,jisme maturity ki kami hai
Mujhe laga nahi tha ki meri story ko aap log itna like karege aur yug ke saath jud jayenge.
1,00,000 views ke liye sabhi Readers,critic aur review dene walo ko dil se thanks.
Yug ka adventure abhi khatam nahi hua hai
Saath rahiye
 

Swaraj

Well-Known Member
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O Teri ki ye yug ko Kia ho raha h itna change
I think mask ki waja se ho raha h
Negative energy havi ho rahi h yug pe
Ye master ne esa q bola Sasuke ko k 2sra master dhoond lo
Kahi yug k 7 amna samna to nahi ho ga
Bro jaisa aapne pichle kuch updates me padha ki yug par mask havi ho raha hai.yug to powerful ho raha hai.lekin saath hi saath uska negative character saamne a raha hai
Saath rahiye
 
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