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Mada' Kahani ek Bade Ghar ki' pada?story to achi lg rhi h but dekhte kaha tak jati h ye story gud luck
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Azra ka ghar jis jaghe tha wahan aaspas muslim aabadi us gali ka aakhri ghar azra ka tha. azra ke ghar ke side me ak bda ground tha jisme log kuda daalkar jaate thay.
ghar ka gujara shi chal rha tha sub apni apni jindgi me kush thay. sirf ak insaan ko chodkar wo thi azra.
jo raat ke 2 bje bed per leti apni shohar ke sath bitaai hui raton ko yaad karke aansu baha rhi thi.
wo bechari apne man ko aansu ke jariye halka kar rhi thi.
kuch der ro kar azra apne dupatte se aansu saaf karti hai or so jaati hai.
subhe abdulla uthkar aangan me bane bathroom me nhane ghus jaata hai or nhakar kurta pajama daalta hai or baal wagerah set karke
breakfast ke liye kitchen ki taraf badh jata hai
jahan uski ammi or aapi pakiza breakfast ki tayyar kar rhi thi.
abdulla:- ammi nasta ban gya kyaaaa......
ammi koi jawab nhi deti to aapi pakiza......bhaiiii bus kuch der or lgegi or pakiza bahar aa jati hai.
abdulla ko samjh aa gya thaaa ki ammi ka mood khraab hua pda hai jiski wajhe usko bhi malum thi jo ammi ke akelepan ki wajhe se tha.
abdulla apni ammi ke pass jata hai or piche se usko jhappi daal leta hai
azra ammi chonk jaati lekin dusre hi pal usko abdulla ka muh jo ki azra ammi ke kandhe per tha dikhta hai or ahh beta tum.....
haan ammi kya hua hai meri pyari si ammi ko jo mood khraab hai aapka
ammi:- kuch nhiii beta tum betho bahar mai abhi nasta lekar aati hun....
abdulla bakhubi janta tha ki uski ammi akelepan ki shikar rahti hai use ak aesa sathi chahiye jisse wo apna man halka kar ske...
aaj azra ko apne shohar ki kmi khal rhi thi lekin is baat ka ahsaas wo apne bachho ko nhi karana chahati thi..
beharhaal azra ne table per nasta lgaaya or teeno milke nasta karne lge..
nasta karke azra apni beti paliza ke sath bete se ye kahkar madarse nikal gyi ki ghar ki dekhbhal rakhe or bahar naa jaaye. dono maa beti madarse ke liye gadhi se jaati thi jo madarse ke bachho ko madarsa pahunchati thi.
madarse pahunch kar dekhti hai ki bachhe subhe ki dua ke liye ikathhe hue pde hain
dono maa beti bhi wahan pahunch aage ka kaam karti hain.
dusri or abdulla ammi aapi ke jaane ke baad apne gate ko lock karta hai or aangan me rakhe sofe per bethkar apna phone istemaal karne lag jata hai
kuch der baad doorbell bajti hai to abdulla thoda chonkta hai ki is samay kon ho sakta kuch der pahle hi to ammi aapi gyi hai. jab dobara doorbell bajti hai to abdulla uthta hai or gate ki taraf jaata hai. gate kholkar dekhta hai ki ak kachra beene wala uske samne khda tha or uski peeth per ganda sa thela tha jisme kuch saman bhar rkha tha. kachra wale ki halat bhut buri ho rakhi thi, maathe se lekar pure jism se tapakta pasina or mele kuchele kapde jo gandgi me ghum ghum kar ho gye thay.
gandi si shirt or lungi jisme bhut se ched thay daali hui thi.
rung roop ki baat kre to uske muh ke brabar agr kali ink rakh de to dono brabar kali dikhegi.
gaal pichke hue, behad kaale honth jo bidi or nasha karke behad gande dikh rhe thay.
samanye kad kaathi ka kachre wala wo insaan billu hi thaaaa.
jo pyas jyada lagne ki wajhe se idhar bhatakta hua aa gya tha.
abdulla uski har cheej ko notice karta hai or fir uske kaano me ak vinti bhari aawaz.... bhaai paani pila do.. bhut pyaas.. lgi... hai...
abdulla ko uski halat samjh aa jati or taras khakar usko andar lge ped ki chaav me aane ko kahta hai.
gate ke andar aakar bhikhari apni shirt ke 3 button khol deta hai jisse uske seene ke kaale gande lambe lambe baal dikhne lagte hain.
abdulla uske seene ke baal dekh hi rha tha ki uski naak me ak badbu si smell ghus gyi jo billu ke pasine or mele kuchele kapdo ki thi.
billu shirt ke button khol kar hawa khaane lagta hai or fir lungi me lgi mitti ko jhadne ke liye lungi ko fatkaarta hai jisse bhut si dhul mitti jhad jaati hai or is doran billu ka lund bhi lungi me jhatka marta hai jo abdulla ki najro me kaid ho jata hai.
abdulla lungi me chipe billu ki aachambhit karne wali cheej ko gor se dekhta hai or is soch per aakar thehar jata hai ki saamne wale insaan ke paas isse 3 guna bda lund hai jo motaai ke bhi 3 guna hoga.
abdulla ki najar brabar billu ki lungi me chipe lund per hi thi ki billu usko dobara paani ke liye bolta hai....lekin abdulla ko kuch sunaai nhi deta to billu uski najro ka picha karta hua apni lungi ki taraf dekhta hai to use smjh aata hai ki abdulla uske lund ki bnawat se heraan ho gya hai.
gadhi ka driver ak muslim ladka tha jiske daadhi or sar per topi rahti thi..
So much hot a story,bahut badhiya,bahot bahot kamuk writings,Update: 2
Azra ka ghar jis jaghe tha wahan aaspas muslim aabadi us gali ka aakhri ghar azra ka tha. azra ke ghar ke side me ak bda ground tha jisme log kuda daalkar jaate thay.
ghar ka gujara shi chal rha tha sub apni apni jindgi me kush thay. sirf ak insaan ko chodkar wo thi azra.
jo raat ke 2 bje bed per leti apni shohar ke sath bitaai hui raton ko yaad karke aansu baha rhi thi.
wo bechari apne man ko aansu ke jariye halka kar rhi thi.
kuch der ro kar azra apne dupatte se aansu saaf karti hai or so jaati hai.
subhe abdulla uthkar aangan me bane bathroom me nhane ghus jaata hai or nhakar kurta pajama daalta hai or baal wagerah set karke
breakfast ke liye kitchen ki taraf badh jata hai
jahan uski ammi or aapi pakiza breakfast ki tayyar kar rhi thi.
abdulla:- ammi nasta ban gya kyaaaa......
ammi koi jawab nhi deti to aapi pakiza......bhaiiii bus kuch der or lgegi or pakiza bahar aa jati hai.
abdulla ko samjh aa gya thaaa ki ammi ka mood khraab hua pda hai jiski wajhe usko bhi malum thi jo ammi ke akelepan ki wajhe se tha.
abdulla apni ammi ke pass jata hai or piche se usko jhappi daal leta hai
azra ammi chonk jaati lekin dusre hi pal usko abdulla ka muh jo ki azra ammi ke kandhe per tha dikhta hai or ahh beta tum.....
haan ammi kya hua hai meri pyari si ammi ko jo mood khraab hai aapka
ammi:- kuch nhiii beta tum betho bahar mai abhi nasta lekar aati hun....
abdulla bakhubi janta tha ki uski ammi akelepan ki shikar rahti hai use ak aesa sathi chahiye jisse wo apna man halka kar ske...
aaj azra ko apne shohar ki kmi khal rhi thi lekin is baat ka ahsaas wo apne bachho ko nhi karana chahati thi..
beharhaal azra ne table per nasta lgaaya or teeno milke nasta karne lge..
nasta karke azra apni beti paliza ke sath bete se ye kahkar madarse nikal gyi ki ghar ki dekhbhal rakhe or bahar naa jaaye. dono maa beti madarse ke liye gadhi se jaati thi jo madarse ke bachho ko madarsa pahunchati thi.
madarse pahunch kar dekhti hai ki bachhe subhe ki dua ke liye ikathhe hue pde hain
dono maa beti bhi wahan pahunch aage ka kaam karti hain.
dusri or abdulla ammi aapi ke jaane ke baad apne gate ko lock karta hai or aangan me rakhe sofe per bethkar apna phone istemaal karne lag jata hai
kuch der baad doorbell bajti hai to abdulla thoda chonkta hai ki is samay kon ho sakta kuch der pahle hi to ammi aapi gyi hai. jab dobara doorbell bajti hai to abdulla uthta hai or gate ki taraf jaata hai. gate kholkar dekhta hai ki ak kachra beene wala uske samne khda tha or uski peeth per ganda sa thela tha jisme kuch saman bhar rkha tha. kachra wale ki halat bhut buri ho rakhi thi, maathe se lekar pure jism se tapakta pasina or mele kuchele kapde jo gandgi me ghum ghum kar ho gye thay.
gandi si shirt or lungi jisme bhut se ched thay daali hui thi.
rung roop ki baat kre to uske muh ke brabar agr kali ink rakh de to dono brabar kali dikhegi.
gaal pichke hue, behad kaale honth jo bidi or nasha karke behad gande dikh rhe thay.
samanye kad kaathi ka kachre wala wo insaan billu hi thaaaa.
jo pyas jyada lagne ki wajhe se idhar bhatakta hua aa gya tha.
abdulla uski har cheej ko notice karta hai or fir uske kaano me ak vinti bhari aawaz.... bhaai paani pila do.. bhut pyaas.. lgi... hai...
abdulla ko uski halat samjh aa jati or taras khakar usko andar lge ped ki chaav me aane ko kahta hai.
gate ke andar aakar bhikhari apni shirt ke 3 button khol deta hai jisse uske seene ke kaale gande lambe lambe baal dikhne lagte hain.
abdulla uske seene ke baal dekh hi rha tha ki uski naak me ak badbu si smell ghus gyi jo billu ke pasine or mele kuchele kapdo ki thi.
billu shirt ke button khol kar hawa khaane lagta hai or fir lungi me lgi mitti ko jhadne ke liye lungi ko fatkaarta hai jisse bhut si dhul mitti jhad jaati hai or is doran billu ka lund bhi lungi me jhatka marta hai jo abdulla ki najro me kaid ho jata hai.
abdulla lungi me chipe billu ki aachambhit karne wali cheej ko gor se dekhta hai or is soch per aakar thehar jata hai ki saamne wale insaan ke paas isse 3 guna bda lund hai jo motaai ke bhi 3 guna hoga.
abdulla ki najar brabar billu ki lungi me chipe lund per hi thi ki billu usko dobara paani ke liye bolta hai....lekin abdulla ko kuch sunaai nhi deta to billu uski najro ka picha karta hua apni lungi ki taraf dekhta hai to use smjh aata hai ki abdulla uske lund ki bnawat se heraan ho gya hai.