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Raheman aur dhondu caouch ke baahar exit door par bidi fukte huwe idhar udhar ki baate kar rahe the unhe lag rahaa thaa ke shradha to abb nahi aane waali bas abb shradha ke raat me gahari nind me sone kaa hi we intajaar kar rahe the ji haa we bas shradhaa ko gahari nind me paakar sari jarasi upar kar mobile ki flash light on kar andar nangi mansal gori jaangh bhi dekhne mil jaaye unke liye bahot thaa lekin unh dononki takdir kuch aur hi chah rahi thi, kyoke dusri oor bholi shradha ko raheman ki jaate waqt kiye huwe taane par wo imotional hogayi aur apne godme soye bete shorya kaa sar sahelaate huwe wo man hi man boli, “garib huwe to kya huwaa we bhi to insaan hai, kya me itni giri huwi hu ke bas kuch baate unh bechaare garib logonse kar nahi sakti jinhme use bhi majaa aaraha thaa aur unhe bhi.” Aisaa sochte huwe wo shaurya ko lekar khadi huwii aur apni upari seat par soye akash ko jo sonekaa dhong kar rahaa tha use uthate huwe boli, “suniye ji, utho.”
Raadha ki baat sun akash sokar uthne kaa naatak kar sine ke bal lete huwe hi sar ghumakar apni gori biwi ko dekhte huwe bola, “kya huwaa jaan.”
Shradhaa shorya ko akash ki oor dono hathonse lejakar boli, “jaraa mere laal ko sambhalo me baahar ghumke aati hu.”
Shradha ki baat sun akash chaukanna hogaya usne andajaa lagaliya ke uski biwi unh low class logonke pass jaarahi hai kyoke wo agar ghumne jaati to shaurya ko leke jaati jaisaa wo kar nahi rahi thi, fir bhi use uske dimagme chal rahi baatonpar vishwaas nahi horahaa thaa wo dusri oor soch rahaa thaa ke, “wo ghumne hi to jarahi hogi, mai bhi naa kuchbhi sochta rahetaa hu.” Aisaa sochte sochte akash apni seat par uthkar baith gaya aur shourya ko apne dono hathonse godi me leliyaa, jaise hi akash ne baby ko apni god me liya shradha caouch se bahar gai, pataa nahi shradhaa ke dimag me chal kyaa rahaa thaa.
Dusri oor train ke exit door par amne saamne khade raheman aur dhondu aaj raat kaa plan kar rahe the ke tabhi dhondu jiss tarah khadaa thaa use samnese shradhaa unki oor aati dikhi jise dekh dhondu haklate huwe excited hokar bola, “abb babe abe yaar wo wo.”
Dhondu ki haklati jabanko sunte huwe wo dhondu ki najronko follow karte huwe bola, “abe kyaa huwaa, bhoot dekh liya kyaa?” Aur tabhi raheman ki najar shradhaa par giri aur wo bhi excited huwaa aur bola, “maa ki aankh mera nishana to lagata hai sahi jagah par jaake lagaa hai.”
Shradha ki har rithem me chalte huwe usske kaamuk aang jaise ke moti jaanghe, dudh se bhari chuchiya ek kamuk andaj me hil rahi thi, aur chalte waqt paayal ki cham cham bhi un dono low class kide yaane raheman aur dhondu ko hawas me paagal kar rahi thi, shradha unki oor jaise jaise unke najdik aarahi thi uske mogre ke ittar ki Khushbu bhi unn hawas ke pujariyonke pass aarahi thi jisko sungh kar we uttejit horahe the.
Shradhaa chalte chalte apni gaand ki faanke matkate huwe wo dono raheman aur dhondu ke pass pahunchi jo use shocked hoakar kaamuk andaj me dekh rahe the unhki najare jo uske kaamuk badan par thi unhe apne hathse chutki bajate huwe wo boli, “shocked hogaye naa tum log, tum logonko kyaa lagaa me nahi aaungi sahi kahaa naa?”
Tabhi raheman pahale hosh me aaya aur apne aap ko sambhalte huwe bola, “memsab hame to lagaa thaa ke ham garibonnkaa saath aapko bhaa nahi paayegaa, lekin yahaa aakar aapne hamari sochko badal diya hai.
Dusri oor akash sone ke dhong me sachmuchka apne baby ko bagalme sulhaakar khud sochukaa thaa.
Raat ke 1 baje.
Akash kisi aawajse jag gaya, wo aawaj kuch aysi thi, “puch muuuuuuuuuhhhhhhh muhh.” Jaise koi kuch chuss rahaa ho, lekin uss aawaj ko ignore kar akash waapis sogaya.
Subah ke 5 baje.
Train ke bhompu ke saath akash ki nind khuli aur jaise hi wo uth khadaa huwaa use kaamuk Sugandh uske naak me gayi aur usne apni najar niche apni biwi ki oor daudayi jo abhi bhi sorahi thi jise dekh ek palke liye wo shocked huwaa kyoke uski biwi kaa blanket sab cover kar rahaa thaa bas ek paav fold hokar bahar nangi jaangh ke saath akash ne wo dekhaa jiski wo kalpanaa bhi nahi kar saktaa kyoke uski biwi ki panty ghutno tak sarki huwi use dikhi aur jhatse usne saamne dhondu aur raheman ko soya dekhaa to use raahat mili aur usne apni biwi ko aawaj dekar uthayaa aur apne aap ko thik karne ko kahaa, akash ko lag rahaa thaa ke uski biwi raat me hasth maithuna kiye hogi aur panty upar lenaa bhul gayi hogi aisaa use lag rahaa thaa lekin yahaa manjra kuch alag thaa jo aap aage jaanoge.
Nind se jagate hi Shradha apne pati ko pataa nahi kyu apna huliya dikhaaye binaa makeup lekar fresh hone bathroom gayi aur pure 30 minute baad waapis cauch me aagayi, aur apne patike bagalme nichli seat par apne bete shaurya ko god me lekar wo baith gayi, aur majakiya andaj me usne shaurya ko saamne dhondu aur raheman jo kisi baat par dhimi aawaj me baate kar rahe the unhki oor ishara kar wo boli, “beta dekh dono chacha bahot bure hai, teri maa ko bahot pareshan kiya hai inhone.”
tabhi shradha ki baat par raheman apne kaan pakadkar sorry bolte huwe majakiya lahaje me shradha ke baby ko dekhte huwe bola, “beta teri maa itni mast hai ke unhe pareshan karne me majaa aata hai.” aisi hi majakiya baatonka sil silaa shuru huwa shradha aur unnn low class logonme.
dusri oor akash clueless thaa ke baate ho kis baat par rahi hai ye wo soch hi rahaa thaa ke Nagpur station aagayaa, aur shradha shaurya ko godi me uthaakar khadi huwi aur raheman aur dhondu ne unhe saamaan train se utarne me madad ki fir unh dononko alvidaa kar we waapis train me chadhte huwe dono akash aur shradhaa ko good bye kahaa. shradha train se utarte waqt kuch langda si rahi thi jispar usne pati ko ye bolaa ke uski edhi lachak gayi thi.
train se utarte hi tabhi shradha langadaate huwe apni purse lene shorya ko lekar jhuki to uska pallu usse sambhal naa sakaa to wo niche jaminpar to nahi par jo haath shorya ko kamar par pakde huwe thaa uspar wo jaa atakaa, par uskaa blaues jisme 34 size ki chuchiya ubharkar dikh rahi thi unhe wo chipaa naa saki jispar akash ki najare jaise hi giri wo shoked huwaa, kyoke bade gale waale nile v shape blaues se aladin ki gufaa khuli aur gore gullaabi aam nipple ke saath usse dikhe jinhe dekh wo shocked nahi huwaa balke binaa braa ke shradha ke chuchiyonpar laal laal nishan use dikhe jinhe dekh usse samajh aachukaa thaa ke train me kuchto uski biwke saath kand huwaa hai ye sochkar hi uski dark fantasy jaag uthi aur boli, "akash yaane wo raat me aayi aawaje tumhare biwi ke saath huwe kaand ki aawaje thi?, yaane dhondu aur raheman ne teri biwi kaa dudh piyaa?" ye sochkar wo ek palke liye ghussaa huwaa lekin niche waala papuu yaane uska lund khadaa kuch aur hi bol rahaa thaa, akash ko abb uss raat kyaa huwaa ye janane ki laalasa usme paidaa huwi, abb usse andaja lag chukaa thaa ke unh do nali ke kidonme aur shradha me kiss baat par majakiyaa baate horahi thi.
ravivar kaa din subah ke 6 baje.
jabse train se shradhaa aur akash utare the tabse unh dononme baate hi nahi horahi thi balke shradha to try kar rahi thi akash se baat karne ki lekin bas wo akele hi bolti rah jaati aur akash chup chaap thaa taxi se naye ghar tak pahochne tak, to shradha ko kuch samaj nahi aaraha thaa ke uska pyaar usse baate kyo nahi kar raha.
naye ghar me yaane sarkari makaan me aate hi shradha ne gharki kamaan sambhali aur uss gharme jo naukar kaam karte the unhe yahaa wahaa kaam par lagaayaa, pujaa paath huwaa tab jaakar shradhaa ne akash ke uske saath baate kyu nahi kar raha ye jaanane kaa faisla kiyaa.
(makaan bahot hi aalishan hai, do manjilaa 6 bedroom waala badaa sarakari makaan hai jo akash ki talati ki post ne usse diyaa, gharpar sarkari naukar bhi hai jaise ke paudhonko paani dene maali, aur security ke liye watchmen, aur bache sambhalne waali ek old lady bhi hai baakike asthayi naukar bhi the jo naye naye aaye sarkari officer yaane akash ke naye sarkari ghar ko saaf safayi karne aaye hai.)
dopahar ke 2 baje.
shradhaa nahaakar kaale laal nakashi waale patle gown me baahar aai jahaa akash bed par letaa thaa, bed ke saamne aainaa thaa uske saamne khade hokar apne gile baal sawarte huwe wo apne pati ki oor apne pati ki oor aayne se dekh boli, "jaan kyaa baat hai, kabse aap mujhse baat hi nahi kar rahe, me akele hi badadate jaarahi hu."
tabhi chuppi todte huwe akash saamne aayne ke saamne khadi apni biwi ko dekh bolaa, "tum rojki tarah mere saamne nahakar nangi aati thi, yaa towel me aati thi, aaj kya huwaa? aaj kyu nahi waise aai?"
akash ki baat par shradhaa ki bolti band huwi, kahati bhi kyaa uske naye yaarone jo vibhast nishan uske gore badanpar chore the kyaa wo dikhaayegi apne pati ko, iss kaaran wo atakte atakte huwe boli, "wo wo aaj aise hi, wo alerji," wo kuch bol paati uskaa pati yaane akash bed se khadaa huwaa aur shradha ke piche aagaya aur ek jhatkese apni patni ko pichese usne apni baahonme liyaa tab shradhaa ko uske gaddedaar gand ki faankonke bich uske pati kaa khadaa 8 inch lund mahesus horaha tha jise mahesus kar use samajh aachuka thaa ke uskaa pati kaam uttejit hai kisi baat se. ye wo soch hi rahi thi ke akash jo half safed nili pant aur safed baniyan me thaa usne shradha ke gaoun se ubharkar dikhte chuchiyonpar haath rakhaa aur jhatse shradha kaa gown saamne sinese se botton todte huwe gown aage se chuchiyaa puri dikh naa jaaye ustak faad diyaa jo ab ek kale braa me akash ko aayne se dikh rahi thi jinhpar abhi bhi laal laal daant se kaatne ke nishan the unhe dikhate huwe usne shradha jo kuch itne jaldi huwaa usse shock me thi usse puchaa, "raani saahebaa ye kyaa hai jaraa bataa sakti ho aap, abb ye mat bolnaa ke ye sab shourya ne kiya hai." aisaa bolte huwe usne braa ko bhi niche sarkaya, abto akash ke saamne puraa manjraa hi saaf thaa kyoke gore gulaabi nipple pure laal suje huwe the jo sirf daant se kaatne aur chabane se hi hote hai.
akash apni biwi ke ddudh dono haathonse jorse daabane lagaa lekin dudh ki sirf kuch bunde hi baahar nikli jisko dekh akash shradha jo sharm se laal uski najare jhuki huwi kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi balke uskaa pati jo uske pahalese dard kar rahe chuche dabaa raha tha usse uski dardbhari siskariya nikal rahi thi, "ahhhhhhh ooo jii ahhhhh."
itne jorse dabane ke bawjud kuch dudh ki bunde nipple se bahar aata dekh akash ne firse shradha ko taana maaraa, "saali randi, sab dudh unh dono ko pilayaa tune." aisaa bolkar usne shradha ko god me uthaya aur piche bed par fenka aur khud shradha par uparse let gaya aur fir apni biwi ke dudh jo ki pure khule the aage sinese fate gown se 34 size ke kaatnese laal laal ho chuke dudh dikhayi derahe the unhe dekh akash unhko dono hathonse masalne lagaa, apne muhme dayaa chucha lekar chuste huwe wo shradha se bolaa, "aise hi chusaa thaa naa unhh kidone aur," fir akash ne shradhake pahalese hi dukh rahe nipple ko daant se kaatate huwe bolaa, "aise hi kaata thaa naa unh donone?"
abb tak shradha ko samajh aachukaa thaa ke uskaa pati train me uske saath unh darindone kya kiyaa issi baat par uska pati kaam uttejit hai, agar dusra koi aadmi hotaa to usse turant uss train ke kaand par talak detaa lekin yahaa to ultaa thaa to issi kaa faaydaa uthaakar shradha ne apne pati ko gussa kiye binaa saduse karnaa hi sahi samjha, kyoke abb wo kya kahati ke kaise unh darindone usse fasayaa aur kya kuch nahi kiya uske saath.
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Update bahut time baad aaya per kehte hai na DER AAYE DURUST AAYE. Fabulous update. Keep continuing
Raheman aur dhondu caouch ke baahar exit door par bidi fukte huwe idhar udhar ki baate kar rahe the unhe lag rahaa thaa ke shradha to abb nahi aane waali bas abb shradha ke raat me gahari nind me sone kaa hi we intajaar kar rahe the ji haa we bas shradhaa ko gahari nind me paakar sari jarasi upar kar mobile ki flash light on kar andar nangi mansal gori jaangh bhi dekhne mil jaaye unke liye bahot thaa lekin unh dononki takdir kuch aur hi chah rahi thi, kyoke dusri oor bholi shradha ko raheman ki jaate waqt kiye huwe taane par wo imotional hogayi aur apne godme soye bete shorya kaa sar sahelaate huwe wo man hi man boli, “garib huwe to kya huwaa we bhi to insaan hai, kya me itni giri huwi hu ke bas kuch baate unh bechaare garib logonse kar nahi sakti jinhme use bhi majaa aaraha thaa aur unhe bhi.” Aisaa sochte huwe wo shaurya ko lekar khadi huwii aur apni upari seat par soye akash ko jo sonekaa dhong kar rahaa tha use uthate huwe boli, “suniye ji, utho.”
Raadha ki baat sun akash sokar uthne kaa naatak kar sine ke bal lete huwe hi sar ghumakar apni gori biwi ko dekhte huwe bola, “kya huwaa jaan.”
Shradhaa shorya ko akash ki oor dono hathonse lejakar boli, “jaraa mere laal ko sambhalo me baahar ghumke aati hu.”
Shradha ki baat sun akash chaukanna hogaya usne andajaa lagaliya ke uski biwi unh low class logonke pass jaarahi hai kyoke wo agar ghumne jaati to shaurya ko leke jaati jaisaa wo kar nahi rahi thi, fir bhi use uske dimagme chal rahi baatonpar vishwaas nahi horahaa thaa wo dusri oor soch rahaa thaa ke, “wo ghumne hi to jarahi hogi, mai bhi naa kuchbhi sochta rahetaa hu.” Aisaa sochte sochte akash apni seat par uthkar baith gaya aur shourya ko apne dono hathonse godi me leliyaa, jaise hi akash ne baby ko apni god me liya shradha caouch se bahar gai, pataa nahi shradhaa ke dimag me chal kyaa rahaa thaa.
Dusri oor train ke exit door par amne saamne khade raheman aur dhondu aaj raat kaa plan kar rahe the ke tabhi dhondu jiss tarah khadaa thaa use samnese shradhaa unki oor aati dikhi jise dekh dhondu haklate huwe excited hokar bola, “abb babe abe yaar wo wo.”
Dhondu ki haklati jabanko sunte huwe wo dhondu ki najronko follow karte huwe bola, “abe kyaa huwaa, bhoot dekh liya kyaa?” Aur tabhi raheman ki najar shradhaa par giri aur wo bhi excited huwaa aur bola, “maa ki aankh mera nishana to lagata hai sahi jagah par jaake lagaa hai.”
Shradha ki har rithem me chalte huwe usske kaamuk aang jaise ke moti jaanghe, dudh se bhari chuchiya ek kamuk andaj me hil rahi thi, aur chalte waqt paayal ki cham cham bhi un dono low class kide yaane raheman aur dhondu ko hawas me paagal kar rahi thi, shradha unki oor jaise jaise unke najdik aarahi thi uske mogre ke ittar ki Khushbu bhi unn hawas ke pujariyonke pass aarahi thi jisko sungh kar we uttejit horahe the.
Shradhaa chalte chalte apni gaand ki faanke matkate huwe wo dono raheman aur dhondu ke pass pahunchi jo use shocked hoakar kaamuk andaj me dekh rahe the unhki najare jo uske kaamuk badan par thi unhe apne hathse chutki bajate huwe wo boli, “shocked hogaye naa tum log, tum logonko kyaa lagaa me nahi aaungi sahi kahaa naa?”
Tabhi raheman pahale hosh me aaya aur apne aap ko sambhalte huwe bola, “memsab hame to lagaa thaa ke ham garibonnkaa saath aapko bhaa nahi paayegaa, lekin yahaa aakar aapne hamari sochko badal diya hai.
Dusri oor akash sone ke dhong me sachmuchka apne baby ko bagalme sulhaakar khud sochukaa thaa.
Raat ke 1 baje.
Akash kisi aawajse jag gaya, wo aawaj kuch aysi thi, “puch muuuuuuuuuhhhhhhh muhh.” Jaise koi kuch chuss rahaa ho, lekin uss aawaj ko ignore kar akash waapis sogaya.
Subah ke 5 baje.
Train ke bhompu ke saath akash ki nind khuli aur jaise hi wo uth khadaa huwaa use kaamuk Sugandh uske naak me gayi aur usne apni najar niche apni biwi ki oor daudayi jo abhi bhi sorahi thi jise dekh ek palke liye wo shocked huwaa kyoke uski biwi kaa blanket sab cover kar rahaa thaa bas ek paav fold hokar bahar nangi jaangh ke saath akash ne wo dekhaa jiski wo kalpanaa bhi nahi kar saktaa kyoke uski biwi ki panty ghutno tak sarki huwi use dikhi aur jhatse usne saamne dhondu aur raheman ko soya dekhaa to use raahat mili aur usne apni biwi ko aawaj dekar uthayaa aur apne aap ko thik karne ko kahaa, akash ko lag rahaa thaa ke uski biwi raat me hasth maithuna kiye hogi aur panty upar lenaa bhul gayi hogi aisaa use lag rahaa thaa lekin yahaa manjra kuch alag thaa jo aap aage jaanoge.
Nind se jagate hi Shradha apne pati ko pataa nahi kyu apna huliya dikhaaye binaa makeup lekar fresh hone bathroom gayi aur pure 30 minute baad waapis cauch me aagayi, aur apne patike bagalme nichli seat par apne bete shaurya ko god me lekar wo baith gayi, aur majakiya andaj me usne shaurya ko saamne dhondu aur raheman jo kisi baat par dhimi aawaj me baate kar rahe the unhki oor ishara kar wo boli, “beta dekh dono chacha bahot bure hai, teri maa ko bahot pareshan kiya hai inhone.”
tabhi shradha ki baat par raheman apne kaan pakadkar sorry bolte huwe majakiya lahaje me shradha ke baby ko dekhte huwe bola, “beta teri maa itni mast hai ke unhe pareshan karne me majaa aata hai.” aisi hi majakiya baatonka sil silaa shuru huwa shradha aur unnn low class logonme.
dusri oor akash clueless thaa ke baate ho kis baat par rahi hai ye wo soch hi rahaa thaa ke Nagpur station aagayaa, aur shradha shaurya ko godi me uthaakar khadi huwi aur raheman aur dhondu ne unhe saamaan train se utarne me madad ki fir unh dononko alvidaa kar we waapis train me chadhte huwe dono akash aur shradhaa ko good bye kahaa. shradha train se utarte waqt kuch langda si rahi thi jispar usne pati ko ye bolaa ke uski edhi lachak gayi thi.
train se utarte hi tabhi shradha langadaate huwe apni purse lene shorya ko lekar jhuki to uska pallu usse sambhal naa sakaa to wo niche jaminpar to nahi par jo haath shorya ko kamar par pakde huwe thaa uspar wo jaa atakaa, par uskaa blaues jisme 34 size ki chuchiya ubharkar dikh rahi thi unhe wo chipaa naa saki jispar akash ki najare jaise hi giri wo shoked huwaa, kyoke bade gale waale nile v shape blaues se aladin ki gufaa khuli aur gore gullaabi aam nipple ke saath usse dikhe jinhe dekh wo shocked nahi huwaa balke binaa braa ke shradha ke chuchiyonpar laal laal nishan use dikhe jinhe dekh usse samajh aachukaa thaa ke train me kuchto uski biwke saath kand huwaa hai ye sochkar hi uski dark fantasy jaag uthi aur boli, "akash yaane wo raat me aayi aawaje tumhare biwi ke saath huwe kaand ki aawaje thi?, yaane dhondu aur raheman ne teri biwi kaa dudh piyaa?" ye sochkar wo ek palke liye ghussaa huwaa lekin niche waala papuu yaane uska lund khadaa kuch aur hi bol rahaa thaa, akash ko abb uss raat kyaa huwaa ye janane ki laalasa usme paidaa huwi, abb usse andaja lag chukaa thaa ke unh do nali ke kidonme aur shradha me kiss baat par majakiyaa baate horahi thi.
ravivar kaa din subah ke 6 baje.
jabse train se shradhaa aur akash utare the tabse unh dononme baate hi nahi horahi thi balke shradha to try kar rahi thi akash se baat karne ki lekin bas wo akele hi bolti rah jaati aur akash chup chaap thaa taxi se naye ghar tak pahochne tak, to shradha ko kuch samaj nahi aaraha thaa ke uska pyaar usse baate kyo nahi kar raha.
naye ghar me yaane sarkari makaan me aate hi shradha ne gharki kamaan sambhali aur uss gharme jo naukar kaam karte the unhe yahaa wahaa kaam par lagaayaa, pujaa paath huwaa tab jaakar shradhaa ne akash ke uske saath baate kyu nahi kar raha ye jaanane kaa faisla kiyaa.
(makaan bahot hi aalishan hai, do manjilaa 6 bedroom waala badaa sarakari makaan hai jo akash ki talati ki post ne usse diyaa, gharpar sarkari naukar bhi hai jaise ke paudhonko paani dene maali, aur security ke liye watchmen, aur bache sambhalne waali ek old lady bhi hai baakike asthayi naukar bhi the jo naye naye aaye sarkari officer yaane akash ke naye sarkari ghar ko saaf safayi karne aaye hai.)
dopahar ke 2 baje.
shradhaa nahaakar kaale laal nakashi waale patle gown me baahar aai jahaa akash bed par letaa thaa, bed ke saamne aainaa thaa uske saamne khade hokar apne gile baal sawarte huwe wo apne pati ki oor apne pati ki oor aayne se dekh boli, "jaan kyaa baat hai, kabse aap mujhse baat hi nahi kar rahe, me akele hi badadate jaarahi hu."
tabhi chuppi todte huwe akash saamne aayne ke saamne khadi apni biwi ko dekh bolaa, "tum rojki tarah mere saamne nahakar nangi aati thi, yaa towel me aati thi, aaj kya huwaa? aaj kyu nahi waise aai?"
akash ki baat par shradhaa ki bolti band huwi, kahati bhi kyaa uske naye yaarone jo vibhast nishan uske gore badanpar chore the kyaa wo dikhaayegi apne pati ko, iss kaaran wo atakte atakte huwe boli, "wo wo aaj aise hi, wo alerji," wo kuch bol paati uskaa pati yaane akash bed se khadaa huwaa aur shradha ke piche aagaya aur ek jhatkese apni patni ko pichese usne apni baahonme liyaa tab shradhaa ko uske gaddedaar gand ki faankonke bich uske pati kaa khadaa 8 inch lund mahesus horaha tha jise mahesus kar use samajh aachuka thaa ke uskaa pati kaam uttejit hai kisi baat se. ye wo soch hi rahi thi ke akash jo half safed nili pant aur safed baniyan me thaa usne shradha ke gaoun se ubharkar dikhte chuchiyonpar haath rakhaa aur jhatse shradha kaa gown saamne sinese se botton todte huwe gown aage se chuchiyaa puri dikh naa jaaye ustak faad diyaa jo ab ek kale braa me akash ko aayne se dikh rahi thi jinhpar abhi bhi laal laal daant se kaatne ke nishan the unhe dikhate huwe usne shradha jo kuch itne jaldi huwaa usse shock me thi usse puchaa, "raani saahebaa ye kyaa hai jaraa bataa sakti ho aap, abb ye mat bolnaa ke ye sab shourya ne kiya hai." aisaa bolte huwe usne braa ko bhi niche sarkaya, abto akash ke saamne puraa manjraa hi saaf thaa kyoke gore gulaabi nipple pure laal suje huwe the jo sirf daant se kaatne aur chabane se hi hote hai.
akash apni biwi ke ddudh dono haathonse jorse daabane lagaa lekin dudh ki sirf kuch bunde hi baahar nikli jisko dekh akash shradha jo sharm se laal uski najare jhuki huwi kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi balke uskaa pati jo uske pahalese dard kar rahe chuche dabaa raha tha usse uski dardbhari siskariya nikal rahi thi, "ahhhhhhh ooo jii ahhhhh."
itne jorse dabane ke bawjud kuch dudh ki bunde nipple se bahar aata dekh akash ne firse shradha ko taana maaraa, "saali randi, sab dudh unh dono ko pilayaa tune." aisaa bolkar usne shradha ko god me uthaya aur piche bed par fenka aur khud shradha par uparse let gaya aur fir apni biwi ke dudh jo ki pure khule the aage sinese fate bloues se 34 size ke kaatnese laal laal ho chuke dudh dikhayi derahe the unhe dekh akash unhko dono hathonse masalne lagaa, apne muhme dayaa chucha lekar chuste huwe wo shradha se bolaa, "aise hi chusaa thaa naa unhh kidone aur," fir akash ne shradhake pahalese hi dukh rahe nipple ko daant se kaatate huwe bolaa, "aise hi kaata thaa naa unh donone?"
abb tak shradha ko samajh aachukaa thaa ke uskaa pati train me uske saath unh darindone kya kiyaa issi baat par uska pati kaam uttejit hai, agar dusra koi aadmi hotaa to usse turant uss train ke kaand par talak detaa lekin yahaa to ultaa thaa to issi kaa faaydaa uthaakar shradha ne apne pati ko gussa kiye binaa saduse karnaa hi sahi samjha, kyoke abb wo kya kahati ke kaise unh darindone usse fasayaa aur kya kuch nahi kiya uske saath.
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Raheman aur dhondu caouch ke baahar exit door par bidi fukte huwe idhar udhar ki baate kar rahe the unhe lag rahaa thaa ke shradha to abb nahi aane waali bas abb shradha ke raat me gahari nind me sone kaa hi we intajaar kar rahe the ji haa we bas shradhaa ko gahari nind me paakar sari jarasi upar kar mobile ki flash light on kar andar nangi mansal gori jaangh bhi dekhne mil jaaye unke liye bahot thaa lekin unh dononki takdir kuch aur hi chah rahi thi, kyoke dusri oor bholi shradha ko raheman ki jaate waqt kiye huwe taane par wo imotional hogayi aur apne godme soye bete shorya kaa sar sahelaate huwe wo man hi man boli, “garib huwe to kya huwaa we bhi to insaan hai, kya me itni giri huwi hu ke bas kuch baate unh bechaare garib logonse kar nahi sakti jinhme use bhi majaa aaraha thaa aur unhe bhi.” Aisaa sochte huwe wo shaurya ko lekar khadi huwii aur apni upari seat par soye akash ko jo sonekaa dhong kar rahaa tha use uthate huwe boli, “suniye ji, utho.”
Raadha ki baat sun akash sokar uthne kaa naatak kar sine ke bal lete huwe hi sar ghumakar apni gori biwi ko dekhte huwe bola, “kya huwaa jaan.”
Shradhaa shorya ko akash ki oor dono hathonse lejakar boli, “jaraa mere laal ko sambhalo me baahar ghumke aati hu.”
Shradha ki baat sun akash chaukanna hogaya usne andajaa lagaliya ke uski biwi unh low class logonke pass jaarahi hai kyoke wo agar ghumne jaati to shaurya ko leke jaati jaisaa wo kar nahi rahi thi, fir bhi use uske dimagme chal rahi baatonpar vishwaas nahi horahaa thaa wo dusri oor soch rahaa thaa ke, “wo ghumne hi to jarahi hogi, mai bhi naa kuchbhi sochta rahetaa hu.” Aisaa sochte sochte akash apni seat par uthkar baith gaya aur shourya ko apne dono hathonse godi me leliyaa, jaise hi akash ne baby ko apni god me liya shradha caouch se bahar gai, pataa nahi shradhaa ke dimag me chal kyaa rahaa thaa.
Dusri oor train ke exit door par amne saamne khade raheman aur dhondu aaj raat kaa plan kar rahe the ke tabhi dhondu jiss tarah khadaa thaa use samnese shradhaa unki oor aati dikhi jise dekh dhondu haklate huwe excited hokar bola, “abb babe abe yaar wo wo.”
Dhondu ki haklati jabanko sunte huwe wo dhondu ki najronko follow karte huwe bola, “abe kyaa huwaa, bhoot dekh liya kyaa?” Aur tabhi raheman ki najar shradhaa par giri aur wo bhi excited huwaa aur bola, “maa ki aankh mera nishana to lagata hai sahi jagah par jaake lagaa hai.”
Shradha ki har rithem me chalte huwe usske kaamuk aang jaise ke moti jaanghe, dudh se bhari chuchiya ek kamuk andaj me hil rahi thi, aur chalte waqt paayal ki cham cham bhi un dono low class kide yaane raheman aur dhondu ko hawas me paagal kar rahi thi, shradha unki oor jaise jaise unke najdik aarahi thi uske mogre ke ittar ki Khushbu bhi unn hawas ke pujariyonke pass aarahi thi jisko sungh kar we uttejit horahe the.
Shradhaa chalte chalte apni gaand ki faanke matkate huwe wo dono raheman aur dhondu ke pass pahunchi jo use shocked hoakar kaamuk andaj me dekh rahe the unhki najare jo uske kaamuk badan par thi unhe apne hathse chutki bajate huwe wo boli, “shocked hogaye naa tum log, tum logonko kyaa lagaa me nahi aaungi sahi kahaa naa?”
Tabhi raheman pahale hosh me aaya aur apne aap ko sambhalte huwe bola, “memsab hame to lagaa thaa ke ham garibonnkaa saath aapko bhaa nahi paayegaa, lekin yahaa aakar aapne hamari sochko badal diya hai.
Dusri oor akash sone ke dhong me sachmuchka apne baby ko bagalme sulhaakar khud sochukaa thaa.
Raat ke 1 baje.
Akash kisi aawajse jag gaya, wo aawaj kuch aysi thi, “puch muuuuuuuuuhhhhhhh muhh.” Jaise koi kuch chuss rahaa ho, lekin uss aawaj ko ignore kar akash waapis sogaya.
Subah ke 5 baje.
Train ke bhompu ke saath akash ki nind khuli aur jaise hi wo uth khadaa huwaa use kaamuk Sugandh uske naak me gayi aur usne apni najar niche apni biwi ki oor daudayi jo abhi bhi sorahi thi jise dekh ek palke liye wo shocked huwaa kyoke uski biwi kaa blanket sab cover kar rahaa thaa bas ek paav fold hokar bahar nangi jaangh ke saath akash ne wo dekhaa jiski wo kalpanaa bhi nahi kar saktaa kyoke uski biwi ki panty ghutno tak sarki huwi use dikhi aur jhatse usne saamne dhondu aur raheman ko soya dekhaa to use raahat mili aur usne apni biwi ko aawaj dekar uthayaa aur apne aap ko thik karne ko kahaa, akash ko lag rahaa thaa ke uski biwi raat me hasth maithuna kiye hogi aur panty upar lenaa bhul gayi hogi aisaa use lag rahaa thaa lekin yahaa manjra kuch alag thaa jo aap aage jaanoge.
Nind se jagate hi Shradha apne pati ko pataa nahi kyu apna huliya dikhaaye binaa makeup lekar fresh hone bathroom gayi aur pure 30 minute baad waapis cauch me aagayi, aur apne patike bagalme nichli seat par apne bete shaurya ko god me lekar wo baith gayi, aur majakiya andaj me usne shaurya ko saamne dhondu aur raheman jo kisi baat par dhimi aawaj me baate kar rahe the unhki oor ishara kar wo boli, “beta dekh dono chacha bahot bure hai, teri maa ko bahot pareshan kiya hai inhone.”
tabhi shradha ki baat par raheman apne kaan pakadkar sorry bolte huwe majakiya lahaje me shradha ke baby ko dekhte huwe bola, “beta teri maa itni mast hai ke unhe pareshan karne me majaa aata hai.” aisi hi majakiya baatonka sil silaa shuru huwa shradha aur unnn low class logonme.
dusri oor akash clueless thaa ke baate ho kis baat par rahi hai ye wo soch hi rahaa thaa ke Nagpur station aagayaa, aur shradha shaurya ko godi me uthaakar khadi huwi aur raheman aur dhondu ne unhe saamaan train se utarne me madad ki fir unh dononko alvidaa kar we waapis train me chadhte huwe dono akash aur shradhaa ko good bye kahaa. shradha train se utarte waqt kuch langda si rahi thi jispar usne pati ko ye bolaa ke uski edhi lachak gayi thi.
train se utarte hi tabhi shradha langadaate huwe apni purse lene shorya ko lekar jhuki to uska pallu usse sambhal naa sakaa to wo niche jaminpar to nahi par jo haath shorya ko kamar par pakde huwe thaa uspar wo jaa atakaa, par uskaa blaues jisme 34 size ki chuchiya ubharkar dikh rahi thi unhe wo chipaa naa saki jispar akash ki najare jaise hi giri wo shoked huwaa, kyoke bade gale waale nile v shape blaues se aladin ki gufaa khuli aur gore gullaabi aam nipple ke saath usse dikhe jinhe dekh wo shocked nahi huwaa balke binaa braa ke shradha ke chuchiyonpar laal laal nishan use dikhe jinhe dekh usse samajh aachukaa thaa ke train me kuchto uski biwke saath kand huwaa hai ye sochkar hi uski dark fantasy jaag uthi aur boli, "akash yaane wo raat me aayi aawaje tumhare biwi ke saath huwe kaand ki aawaje thi?, yaane dhondu aur raheman ne teri biwi kaa dudh piyaa?" ye sochkar wo ek palke liye ghussaa huwaa lekin niche waala papuu yaane uska lund khadaa kuch aur hi bol rahaa thaa, akash ko abb uss raat kyaa huwaa ye janane ki laalasa usme paidaa huwi, abb usse andaja lag chukaa thaa ke unh do nali ke kidonme aur shradha me kiss baat par majakiyaa baate horahi thi.
ravivar kaa din subah ke 6 baje.
jabse train se shradhaa aur akash utare the tabse unh dononme baate hi nahi horahi thi balke shradha to try kar rahi thi akash se baat karne ki lekin bas wo akele hi bolti rah jaati aur akash chup chaap thaa taxi se naye ghar tak pahochne tak, to shradha ko kuch samaj nahi aaraha thaa ke uska pyaar usse baate kyo nahi kar raha.
naye ghar me yaane sarkari makaan me aate hi shradha ne gharki kamaan sambhali aur uss gharme jo naukar kaam karte the unhe yahaa wahaa kaam par lagaayaa, pujaa paath huwaa tab jaakar shradhaa ne akash ke uske saath baate kyu nahi kar raha ye jaanane kaa faisla kiyaa.
(makaan bahot hi aalishan hai, do manjilaa 6 bedroom waala badaa sarakari makaan hai jo akash ki talati ki post ne usse diyaa, gharpar sarkari naukar bhi hai jaise ke paudhonko paani dene maali, aur security ke liye watchmen, aur bache sambhalne waali ek old lady bhi hai baakike asthayi naukar bhi the jo naye naye aaye sarkari officer yaane akash ke naye sarkari ghar ko saaf safayi karne aaye hai.)
dopahar ke 2 baje.
shradhaa nahaakar kaale laal nakashi waale patle gown me baahar aai jahaa akash bed par letaa thaa, bed ke saamne aainaa thaa uske saamne khade hokar apne gile baal sawarte huwe wo apne pati ki oor apne pati ki oor aayne se dekh boli, "jaan kyaa baat hai, kabse aap mujhse baat hi nahi kar rahe, me akele hi badadate jaarahi hu."
tabhi chuppi todte huwe akash saamne aayne ke saamne khadi apni biwi ko dekh bolaa, "tum rojki tarah mere saamne nahakar nangi aati thi, yaa towel me aati thi, aaj kya huwaa? aaj kyu nahi waise aai?"
akash ki baat par shradhaa ki bolti band huwi, kahati bhi kyaa uske naye yaarone jo vibhast nishan uske gore badanpar chore the kyaa wo dikhaayegi apne pati ko, iss kaaran wo atakte atakte huwe boli, "wo wo aaj aise hi, wo alerji," wo kuch bol paati uskaa pati yaane akash bed se khadaa huwaa aur shradha ke piche aagaya aur ek jhatkese apni patni ko pichese usne apni baahonme liyaa tab shradhaa ko uske gaddedaar gand ki faankonke bich uske pati kaa khadaa 8 inch lund mahesus horaha tha jise mahesus kar use samajh aachuka thaa ke uskaa pati kaam uttejit hai kisi baat se. ye wo soch hi rahi thi ke akash jo half safed nili pant aur safed baniyan me thaa usne shradha ke gaoun se ubharkar dikhte chuchiyonpar haath rakhaa aur jhatse shradha kaa gown saamne sinese se botton todte huwe gown aage se chuchiyaa puri dikh naa jaaye ustak faad diyaa jo ab ek kale braa me akash ko aayne se dikh rahi thi jinhpar abhi bhi laal laal daant se kaatne ke nishan the unhe dikhate huwe usne shradha jo kuch itne jaldi huwaa usse shock me thi usse puchaa, "raani saahebaa ye kyaa hai jaraa bataa sakti ho aap, abb ye mat bolnaa ke ye sab shourya ne kiya hai." aisaa bolte huwe usne braa ko bhi niche sarkaya, abto akash ke saamne puraa manjraa hi saaf thaa kyoke gore gulaabi nipple pure laal suje huwe the jo sirf daant se kaatne aur chabane se hi hote hai.
akash apni biwi ke ddudh dono haathonse jorse daabane lagaa lekin dudh ki sirf kuch bunde hi baahar nikli jisko dekh akash shradha jo sharm se laal uski najare jhuki huwi kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi balke uskaa pati jo uske pahalese dard kar rahe chuche dabaa raha tha usse uski dardbhari siskariya nikal rahi thi, "ahhhhhhh ooo jii ahhhhh."
itne jorse dabane ke bawjud kuch dudh ki bunde nipple se bahar aata dekh akash ne firse shradha ko taana maaraa, "saali randi, sab dudh unh dono ko pilayaa tune." aisaa bolkar usne shradha ko god me uthaya aur piche bed par fenka aur khud shradha par uparse let gaya aur fir apni biwi ke dudh jo ki pure khule the aage sinese fate bloues se 34 size ke kaatnese laal laal ho chuke dudh dikhayi derahe the unhe dekh akash unhko dono hathonse masalne lagaa, apne muhme dayaa chucha lekar chuste huwe wo shradha se bolaa, "aise hi chusaa thaa naa unhh kidone aur," fir akash ne shradhake pahalese hi dukh rahe nipple ko daant se kaatate huwe bolaa, "aise hi kaata thaa naa unh donone?"
abb tak shradha ko samajh aachukaa thaa ke uskaa pati train me uske saath unh darindone kya kiyaa issi baat par uska pati kaam uttejit hai, agar dusra koi aadmi hotaa to usse turant uss train ke kaand par talak detaa lekin yahaa to ultaa thaa to issi kaa faaydaa uthaakar shradha ne apne pati ko gussa kiye binaa saduse karnaa hi sahi samjha, kyoke abb wo kya kahati ke kaise unh darindone usse fasayaa aur kya kuch nahi kiya uske saath.
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