Incest Akela ho gaya hoon(manhus)

[Ashish Vidyarthi]

Ye story pehle hi copy ki hui h
Or is stage ke baad usme bhi koi update ni tha

Ab syd aage na badhe story

 

[tpk]

Waiting

 

[muhammadfaridkhan]

Pata Nhi Aa Rahi Hai

 

[Adiyal]

Ye story pehle hi copy ki hui h
Or is stage ke baad usme bhi koi update ni tha

Ab syd aage na badhe story

Tujhe agar isse comment karne ho to proof ke saath kiya kar
Yahan koi link ya real story kaa naam bta phir ye comment kar
Warna writer ko demoralise mat kar
Tum jaso ke bahut se comment pade h maine
Agli baar kisi story ko copy bolne se pehle proof de dena suka

 

[ellysperry]

Tujhe agar isse comment karne ho to proof ke saath kiya kar
Yahan koi link ya real story kaa naam bta phir ye comment kar
Warna writer ko demoralise mat kar
Tum jaso ke bahut se comment pade h maine
Agli baar kisi story ko copy bolne se pehle proof de dena suka

Bhai tu jaake

Bheed me akela (abhay)​

is story ko pura padhna phir pta chalega tere ko ki story kaha li gayi hai

 

[Adiyal]

Bhai tu jaake

Bheed me akela (abhay)​

is story ko pura padhna phir pta chalega tere ko ki story kaha li gayi hai

Vo pta h but ye story usse kuch alag h aur
Ye banda update bhi de raha h haan tode din jayada leta h ek update dene me but usko bhi to kuch aur kaam hote h sirf ue story hi to nhi likhta hoga

 

[Ashish Vidyarthi]

Tujhe agar isse comment karne ho to proof ke saath kiya kar
Yahan koi link ya real story kaa naam bta phir ye comment kar
Warna writer ko demoralise mat kar
Tum jaso ke bahut se comment pade h maine
Agli baar kisi story ko copy bolne se pehle proof de dena suka

Tujhe agar isse comment karne ho to proof ke saath kiya kar
Yahan koi link ya real story kaa naam bta phir ye comment kar
Warna writer ko demoralise mat kar
Tum jaso ke bahut se comment pade h maine
Agli baar kisi story ko copy bolne se pehle proof de dena suka

dekh ellysperry bhai ne daali h link
Tu pehli baar aaya hoga
Ja pdh kr aa
Fr baat krna

Nausikhiyon jaise baat mt kr

 

[ellysperry]

Vo pta h but ye story usse kuch alag h aur
Ye banda update bhi de raha h haan tode din jayada leta h ek update dene me but usko bhi to kuch aur kaam hote h sirf ue story hi to nhi likhta hoga

Koi baat nhi jab writter ka Dil karega tab update dega , jab tak update nhi aata hai tab tak dusri story padh lo yrr bhai log

 

[Adiyal]

dekh ellysperry bhai ne daali h link
Tu pehli baar aaya hoga
Ja pdh kr aa
Fr baat krna

Nausikhiyon jaise baat mt kr

Lagta h tune story sahi se padhi nhi h
Story kitni alag h ye bhi dekh
Us bande ne mahant hi h
Agar uski tareef nhi kar sakte to burai to mat karo
Pta h aade writer tere jaiso ke comment se story aadi chhod dete h
Tujhe story itni ji buri lag rahi h to dusri pad le lekin nhi

 

[Ashish Vidyarthi]

Lagta h tune story sahi se padhi nhi h
Story kitni alag h ye bhi dekh
Us bande ne mahant hi h
Agar uski tareef nhi kar sakte to burai to mat karo
Pta h aade writer tere jaiso ke comment se story aadi chhod dete h
Tujhe story itni ji buri lag rahi h to dusri pad le lekin nhi

Tere jaise hi comment krke chammach bnte honge
Or tu dono story pdhle
Bohot minute difference h
Dono me
Wo bhi story crop ki gyi h kafi
Or thoda sa change use h abhay ko new family di h isme bs

Smjha
Ja pdh
Pdh kr comment krna