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Drame hain .. haha
subha afternoon shaam raat ... sab guzar gaya
subha afternoon shaam raat ... sab guzar gaya
update pls
Bhai ab to thode der me afternoon ho Jaye ga
Are bhai ne update likh liya tha but galti se delete ho gya samjha kro.
Ab kl aayega update
Jab update ready ho jaata hai, mein forun hi usse post kar deta hu. Aisa nahi hai ki mein save karke rakha rehta hu aur post nahi karta. Yadi aapko mazaak udaane me khushi milti hai toh udaaiye. Par mein apni taraf se poori honesty rakhta hu. Mere paas koi updates pehle se likhe hue nahi rehta hai. Mein unhe freshly likhta hu, shabdo ka sahi chayan karna , sahi pics dhundna, sab karta hu. Ho sakta hai aap logo ke waha holi halki fulki manaayi jaati ho par hamaare yaha bade hi dhoom dhaam se manaayi jaati hai aur aise me story likhne ke liye samay naa ke barabar rehta hai. Draame zaroor lagenge aap sabhi ko kyuki koi dekhne waala nahi hai na yaha par. Par mein apne aap se atleast honest hu aur uss baat ke liye mujhe khushi hai. Update ek ghante ke andar aa jaega.Drame hain .. haha
subha afternoon shaam raat ... sab guzar gaya
Koi bat nhi Bhai but apne time diya tha morning ka isliye waise Maine is bar Holi kheli hi nhi h to pata nhi kaisi AP logo ki holiJab update ready ho jaata hai, mein forun hi usse post kar deta hu. Aisa nahi hai ki mein save karke rakha rehta hu aur post nahi karta. Yadi aapko mazaak udaane me khushi milti hai toh udaaiye. Par mein apni taraf se poori honesty rakhta hu. Mere paas koi updates pehle se likhe hue nahi rehta hai. Mein unhe freshly likhta hu, shabdo ka sahi chayan karna , sahi pics dhundna, sab karta hu. Ho sakta hai aap logo ke waha holi halki fulki manaayi jaati ho par hamaare yaha bade hi dhoom dhaam se manaayi jaati hai aur aise me story likhne ke liye samay naa ke barabar rehta hai. Draame zaroor lagenge aap sabhi ko kyuki koi dekhne waala nahi hai na yaha par. Par mein apne aap se atleast honest hu aur uss baat ke liye mujhe khushi hai. Update ek ghante ke andar aa jaega.
Eagerly waiting for the next update..Jab update ready ho jaata hai, mein forun hi usse post kar deta hu. Aisa nahi hai ki mein save karke rakha rehta hu aur post nahi karta. Yadi aapko mazaak udaane me khushi milti hai toh udaaiye. Par mein apni taraf se poori honesty rakhta hu. Mere paas koi updates pehle se likhe hue nahi rehta hai. Mein unhe freshly likhta hu, shabdo ka sahi chayan karna , sahi pics dhundna, sab karta hu. Ho sakta hai aap logo ke waha holi halki fulki manaayi jaati ho par hamaare yaha bade hi dhoom dhaam se manaayi jaati hai aur aise me story likhne ke liye samay naa ke barabar rehta hai. Draame zaroor lagenge aap sabhi ko kyuki koi dekhne waala nahi hai na yaha par. Par mein apne aap se atleast honest hu aur uss baat ke liye mujhe khushi hai. Update ek ghante ke andar aa jaega.
Nice update
Nice update bhai super mind blowing updates for naxt update
Fantastic updates
Awesome update
Fentastik bro
Wah bhai rahul to parion me ghira hua kamdev ban gya hai
Keep writing
Mast update bhai yaha to ek aur setting chalu hai... Chalo achha hua ki indono ko richa aur apne bare me pata ho gayi aur share karne ki raji bhi ho gayi richa ko abhi tak pata nahi o kaise react karta hai dekhte hai aage aur master kyu bola sahi ladke ko chuna unka plan kiya hai aur yaha anshu 1st step lene aye hai aur neha kiya plan bana rahi hai dekhte hai aage aur taniya kuch karta hai ki nahi dekhte hai aage
Mast update tha bro.. and master rahul ko kyo chune hai ye janna abb bahut interesting ho gaya hai.. mera to dimag bahut daud raha hai but asliyat to update aane ke baad hi pata chalega.. and master ki beti ki bhi role.. I think kuch special hi hoga.. aur uski nature kaisa hoga ye bhi janne ke liye intejar rahega.. Monica ke liye rahul ka concern bahut achha laga dekhte hai agle update me usse dost banata hai ya nahi.. and Monica ka dusman kaun hai ye bhi interesting hi hoga jannna.. vanshu ko tanisha ki baat samajh me sayad aa gaya hai.. Taniya kya soch rahi thi tv ke samne ye to pata hi nahi chala lekin neha ki soch to jarur kuchh dhamal karne wali hai. But wo har bar pakda jati hai dekhte hai iss baar wo rahul se uppar hoti hai ya niche hi rahti hai.. and last and final anshu kya plan bana rahi hai rahul ko pane ke liye.. itna sari to already uski hone wali hai but anshu kaha pichhe hatne wali hai bechari ko bhi rahul se jo pyar ho gaya hai.. but mai thoda confused hu ki main hero heroine ki misunderstanding/nufrat/rudeness/ignorance/ etc ke secession me hero ki life me 3-4 ladkiya aa gai hai phir main heroine ke liye jagah kaise adjust hoga.... Anyways rahul neha ki to abhi baat bhi nahi ho raha hai pyar to lakho dur hai.. keep it rocking
Awesome update bro anshu ka plan jaanne ka intezar rahega
Nice update waiting for next update
Ab anshu kya krne vali h. Jha tk lgta h vo Vanshu k baare m bta degi ya phr usse Nisha k baare m bhi pta chl gya h??
Shaandar,
Bhavnaon ka bahut khub mishran kiya hai.
Keep it up
Started reading this story since yesterday and completed till latest update today morning ...
One word ‘Awesome’ .....
One of the best stories I have read all time...
Waiting for upcoming further updates
Corona aane se pahle Khusi ko india le aana bhai......
bahot hi accha update hai dear
Zabardast update
Abb an Anshu ko kya chahiye
Super cool or behtreen update maza agaya Monica ka dar bhi nikal gaya or uski rahul ke roop me ek achha dost bhi mil gaya shayad ye dosti age chal kar dosti se bhi upar jaye tanisha ne bhi bahot achhe se samjhaya vanshu ko.ab ye neha kya naya plan bana rahi hai jisse woh rahul se behtar ban sake magar bachari ko nahin pata tanisha ke sath-2 vanshu or richa bhi rahul ki hi hai. Is baar bhi bilkul suspense rakh kar update khatam kiya hai kya plan hai anshika ka? Ye to next update me hi pata chalega
Intezar!
Waiting for next.
अप्डेट कब आएगा दोस्त ।
इंतेज़ार रहेगा ।
Shaandar update
Intjaar
Nice update
Shandaar Update
Ab ye Neha kya karne wali hai.....?
Anshu ka plan kya hai.....?
Master ki training mai kya hoga....?
Happy holi bhai aur next update ka besabri se intazar
Nice update
Nice and excellent update bhai...
yaha to ek aur setting chalu hai... Chalo achha hua ki indono ko richa aur apne bare me pata ho gayi aur share karne ki raji bhi ho gayi richa ko abhi tak pata nahi o kaise react karta hai..
dekhte hai aage aur master kyu bola sahi ladke ko chuna unka plan kiya hai..
aur yaha anshu 1st step lene aye hai aur neha kiya plan bana rahi hai dekhte hai aage aur taniya kuch karta hai ki nahi dekhte hai aage
Ok tuu Neha new plan bunana suru huwi hay Rahul kay khelaf Tanisha nay Vanshu koo sumjha sekha deya hay ab yea madam Anshu Nisha koo kya blackmail kurnay aai hay bohut khaternak kaam kurnay jaa rahi hay Rahul kay gusay kaa neshana bunay gee lugta hay let see
Or wasay kuch bhi huu Rahul Nisha koo kabhi nahi chur5ay gaa wurna uss ka kerdar hee khatam huu jay gaa woo apnay kahay keya wado say nahi mukr sukta
Fantastic mind blowing update brother keep posting
Waiting for the next update
Thank you
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
waiting
Waiting for next update
Bhai update ka intezar rahe ga bhut achi story h but update thoda late hota h
Timely update hi nahi aate hain is story pe to ... sabhi likh ke baithe hain waiting ..
Waiting for next
plz update bro
Update plz
Werewolf bhai aaj update aayega?
update pls
Bhai ab to thode der me afternoon ho Jaye ga
Are bhai ne update likh liya tha but galti se delete ho gya samjha kro.
Ab kl aayega update
Drame hain .. haha
subha afternoon shaam raat ... sab guzar gaya
Koi bat nhi Bhai but apne time diya tha morning ka isliye waise Maine is bar Holi kheli hi nhi h to pata nhi kaisi AP logo ki holi
Update has been posted!!!Eagerly waiting for the next update..