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Incest Akhir kyu? From hatred to love (Completed)

Kya hero ne jo bhi kiya wo sahi kiya? (Voting aap sabhi 2-3 update pdhne k baad karna)

  • Hn sahi kiya

    Votes: 353 67.0%
  • Nahi, apni behan k sath aisa nhi krna tha

    Votes: 60 11.4%
  • Rahul nirdosh hai

    Votes: 94 17.8%
  • Neha nirdosh hai

    Votes: 20 3.8%

  • Total voters
    527

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Bhai aap updates mein bhut mehnat karte ho... Ye baat aapki post ki lengths aur unke regular updates se pata chalti h...... And puri story padhne ke baad mujhe aisa laga ki aapke kuch updates overall storyline mein match nhi hote. For example Rahul and uski Ma'am vala episode or ye last vala update bhi kyunki jo aapne likha h utna to aapke readers ne imagine hi kar liya hota....

Ye isiliye kaha kyunki isse aapka hardwork fruitfully use nhi hua h....

Overall and baki ke sare updates bhut acche h...

Will wait for more
Bhaaya yadi aap ye kehna chaah rahe hai ki kahani me kuch cheeze aisi hai jinki avashyakta nahi hai toh aap galat hai. Actually, kahani me jitna jo bhi dikhaya gaya hai wo bilkul bhi fizul nahi hai, aur aage pata chalega ki ye sab chote chote scenes kya mehatv rakhte hai. Log padhte zaroor hai, imagine bhi karte hai par aksar choti details bhool jaate hai. Isliye mein bracket me hamesha uss update ko mention karta hu jisme wo detail dikhayi gayi hai, taaki aap sabhi apni memory me wo details wapas se refresh kar sake.
 
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Bhaaya yadi aap ye kehna chaah rahe hai ki kahani me kuch cheeze aisi hai jinki avashyakta nahi hai toh aap galat hai. Actually, kahani me jitna jo bhi dikhaya gaya hai wo bilkul bhi fizul nahi hai, aur aage pata chalega ki ye sab chote chote scenes kya mehatv rakhte hai. Log padhte zaroor hai, imagine bhi karte hai par aksar choti details bhool jaate hai. Isliye mein bracket me hamesha uss update ko mention karta hu jisme wo detail dikhayi gayi hai, taaki aap sabhi apni memory me wo details wapas se refresh kar sake.
Readers aab tak ki story padh ke hi comment kar sakte h...... Every word with purpose and meaning that's what make a story great.... So I sincerely hope ki aapka hardwork aage ke updates mein justify ho...
Best of luck
 

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Update - 65

Ab tak...


Kuch students group bana kar nikal rahe the, hassi mazaak karte hue. Rahul ko ye sab dekh apne college ke din yaad aa gaye. Jab wo shrishti aur richa aise hi saath me college ki chutti hone ke baad nikla karte the. Uske chehre par apne aap muskaan aa gayi aur richa ka chehra uske mann me aa gaya.

"Wo rahi miss", bagal me baithe rajneesh ne ungli dikhaate hue students ke aa rahe jhund ki or point kiya jiss se rahul ka dhyaan bhang hua aur usne ungli ke direction ka peecha karte hue dekha toh paaya ki...


Ab aage...

Jab rahul ne direction ka peecha kiya toh paaya ki ek khubsoorat chehra, lamba kad, rahul se bas thodi choti height me, aur patle slim figure ki ladki waha se aa rahi hai. Uss ladki ke saath aur bhi kayi ladkiya thi, par rahul ko keval ek hi nazar me pehchaan me aa gaya ki yahi khushi hai. Uske master ne bataya tha ki khushi behad khubsoorat hai, apni maa pe gayi hai. Ab kyuki khushi ki maa chinese thi toh khushi me bhi chinese jese thode boht features the. Uska doodh jesa gora rang, aur kaale kaale lambe baal.

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Khushi ke saath ek aur ladki thi jo bheed me alag hi chamak rahi thi par wo height me thodi choti thi, doodh bade, cute sa chehra, aur gulaabi gaal.

Khushi uss ladki ke saath car ki taraf hi badh rahi thi ki ek lambe baal waala ladka uski taraf peeche se badha.

"Khushi!!! Zara ruko na..." Uss ladke ne khushi ka rasta rokte hue kaha, "khushi! Bas ek chance..."

Khushi ne thoda frustrated look diya uss ladke ko, "Karan! Kya tum mera peecha nahi chorr sakte? Mene pehle bhi kaha hai, I don't like you, jao ab yaha se"

"Par khushi..." Karan apne pyaar ka izhaar ek baar firse karne waala tha ki iss se pehle khushi uske bagal se nikal gayi.

Wo jaldi jaldi lambe kadmo ke saath car ke paas aayi, aur bina koi samay gavae seedhe car me baith gayi.

Rahul ko thodi hairaani hui kyuki khushi ke saath waali ladki ne bhi bilkul aisa hi kiya aur wo bhi car me andar aake baith gayi.

"Hey bh@gw@@n! Ye karan!! Hamesha mera peecha karta rehta hai, koi aur kaam nahi hai kya iske paas?" Khushi abhi bhi gusse me thi par ekdum se wo chupp ho gayi jab usne car ki front seat par rahul ko baitha dekha, "tum kon ho?"

"Hi!! I'm rahul!" Rahul ne thoda pyaar se kaha kyuki khushi wese bhi khush nahi lag rahi thi.

Khushi : rahul??? Uncle Rajneesh!! Ye yaha kis liye hai?

Rajneesh : rahul aapke ek saathi ki tarah hai jisse aapke dad ne aapke liye rakha hai miss.

Khushi : saathi? Kisne kaha mujhe saathi chahiye? Mujhe toh ek protection ke liye shield chahiye thi. Aur isse dekh ke nahi lagta ye koi behtar protection de paega mujhe... hmph!

Khushi thodi duwidha me thi rahul ko dekhne ke baad. Kya pehna tha rahul? Ek simple white t shirt aur ek jeans wo bhi sandals ke saath? Yukk! Uski nazar me ye sabse bhaddi dressing sense thi. Aisa lag raha tha raaste chalte ladke ko pakad ke ye kapde pehna diye hai.

Rajneesh ne bhi apna paseena pocha. Rahul master ka sabse trusted student tha, aur khushi uski aisi insult kar rahi thi kahi ye sunn ke rahul bhadak na jae, par usne mann hi mann raahat ki saas lii jab rahul ne koi reaction nahi diya.

Idhar rahul thoda awkward feel kar raha tha. Khushi waqai ek raees pari ki tarah paali gayi hai lagta. Kherr rahul toh ghar se sirf important cheeze hi leke aaya tha, faaltu ka samaan nahi. Isliye wo sirf do jodi kapde hi laaya tha. Usne socha tha ki wo jab kamaega toh khareed lega. Par lagta hai khushi ko ye kuch khaas pasand nahi aaya.

Rajneesh : master ne khud kaha hai miss, rahul boht hi hoshiyaar aur kaabil hai. Wo smart aur strong hai. Aapko protect karna toh wo araam se kar sakta hai.

Khushi : ye??? Dad ne isse...!??

Khushi ke bagal me baithi ladki dheere dheere khil khila ke hassne lagi.

Khushi : what the? Ab tumhe kis baat par hassi aa rahi hai??

Preeti ne apni jeebh bahar nikaali aur sorry kaha, aur wo utsuk nazro se rahul ki or dekhne lagi.

Khushi : rajneesh uncle! Usko kahiye ki wo car se utre, mujhe koi aur chahiye.

Rajneesh : isme mein kuch nahi kar sakta miss. Aapke dad ne hi mister rahul ko bheja hai.

Idhar khushi bhauchakki sii saamne rahul ko dekh rahi thi. Usse vishwaash nahi ho raha tha ki uske dad ne aisa banda bheja hai. Yaha wo soch rahi thi ki koi prince ki tarah dikhne waala ladka aaega par rahul ne uski poori imagination pe paani fer diya. Rahul waqai boht smart tha par abhi jo kapde wo pehna tha usme shayad uski 20% handsomeness bhi nahi dikh paa rahi thi.

Khushi : accha thik hai! Tum! Tum jao aur wo ladke ko sabak sikha ke aao, jo mera peecha kar raha tha. Yadi ye kar liya toh mein raazi ho jaungi.

Rahul : wo banda??

Idhar rahul car se utra aur udhar karan apne pantaro ke saath gappe lada raha tha,

Karan : saala ye khushi har baar aisa karti hai, yadi koi aur ladki hoti toh kab ka meri baaho me aa gayi hoti.

Ladka 1 : karan bhai! Ye khushi koi aam ladki nahi hai, dekha na kese jaguar me baith ke aati hai, zaroor iske paas boht paisa hai.

Karan : haa! Mujhe thoda dheeraj rakhna hoga...

Karan kehte kehte rukk gaya jab usne dekha ki ek safed t shirt aur jeans pehne banda uski taraf aa raha hai, wo hairaan tha ki wo banda kitni teezi se uski taraf aa raha tha.

Rahul ne koi samay nahi gavaaya aur badi hi speed ke saath usne ek zordaar kick karan ki gaand me pel dii.

Jese hi karan muh ke bal zameen par gira, rahul palta aur wapas se car ki taraf aane laga.

"Kon madarchod hai be? Himmat kese hui?? Bachega nahi ...!!!" Karan ne jhunjlaate hue kaha, thodi dhool uske muh par bhi chhap gayi thi jab wo uth ke khada hua.

Ladka 1 (ungli se ishaara karte hue) : bhai wo banda tha.

Karan : toh tumlog yaha khade khade kya kar rahe ho madarchodo? Jao...aur peeto saale ko

Ladka 1 : par bhai! Wo already jaa chuka hai.

Karan : dhatt behanchod! Mene uska chehra dekh liya hai, bachega nahi saala. Kal mein uska wo haal karunga ki saala kabhi laat chalaane ke layak nahi reh paega.

Preeti : khushi! Mujhe pehle laga nahi tha, but ab lag raha hai ki ye rahul me kuch baat toh hai. Hehe! Usse karan se bhi koi darr nahi laga.

Preeti sach kahe toh ekdum stabdh thi wo scene dekhne ke baad. Kyuki karan koi aisa wesa ladka nahi tha. College me sabhi uss se darrte the. Isliye preeti ne jab ye dekha ki rahul ne ek laat me usse dher kar diya toh bechaari apna shock control nahi kar paayi.

Khushi : paagal hai woh! Hmph!

Khushi thoda impressed toh thi par uska dimaag abhi bhi rahul ko nikalwaane ke chakkar me tha. Wo rahul ke against hi thi.

Preeti : tum usse rakh kyu nahi leti khushi?

Khushi : preeti! Tum kiski side ho? Tumko ye rahul pasand aa gaya hai kya?

Preeti : dhatt!! Tere ko aa gaya hoga pasand

Khushi : jab tumhe wo pasand nahi hai toh kyu rakhwaana chaahti ho usse tum? Taaki mein apni beizzati karwa saku?

Preeti : arrey yaar! Zara soch! Wo karan jo marzi chaahe college me karta hai, koi bhi usse rokne ki koshish nahi karta, par fir achanak se ek himmatwala ladka aata hai aur uske butt pe laat jadd deta hai hehe! Ab ye romanchak hone waala hai. Kya tumhe dikhaayi nahi deta?

Khushi : what?? Tumko kya lagta hai kon hai karan? Ye rahul chote se sheher ka ladka hoga, karan iski watt laga dega.

Preeti : khushi tu kitni buddhu hai. Yadi tu rahul ko apne under rakh legi, toh bhala karan kese usse haath laga sakta hai?

Khushi : hmm! Tumhaari baat me dum hai. Thik hai. Mein usse rehne dungi.

Yaha rahul wapas car ki taraf aake car me jab baitha toh usne khushi ki or dekh ke pucha,
"Toh? Kesa tha? Mein pass hua ya nahi?"

Khushi : hmph! Mushqil se!

Rahul ne smile kiya aur wapas se apne sthaan par acche se viraajmaan ho gaya. Par khushi bilkul bhi khush nahi thi. Wo soch rahi thi ki rahul palat ke thank you kahega par yaha toh usne kuch kaha bhi nahi. Sach me! Khushi waqai khud ko pari samajhti thi.

Uske hisaab se rahul ko toh khush hona chahiye ki usse ek job mil gayi.

Khushi : heyy! Tum mujhe thank you kyu nahi keh rahe?

Rahul : huh? Thank you? Par kisliye?

Khushi (gusse me) : tum....

Preeti (hasste hue) : khushi keh rahi hai ki usne tumhe apna liya hai toh tum thank you kyu nahi keh rahe?

Khushi : preeti?? What the hell? Apna liya se tumhara kya matlab hai?

Preeti : I mean tumne accept kar liya hai.

Rahul : ohh!! Thanks!!

Kherr! Car chalte chalte khushi ke ghar se 2 ghar pehle hi rukk gayi aur preeti car se baahar utar gayi,

Preeti : well! Kal milte hai khushi! Aur...
Rahul boy!!! Hehe!!

Kehte hue wo fudakte hue chali gayi apne apartment me, uska ghar sirf 2 ghar chorr ke hi tha khushi ke ghar se. Idhar rahul aur khushi bhi khushi ke ghar me aa gaye.

Tab tak aaiye chalte hai rahul ke ghar ki taraf aur waha ka haal bhi dekh lete hai,

Ghar me nisha apne kamre me laiti hui thi aur baar baar apne betu ko yaad kar rahi thi.
Jaane se pehle rahul aur uske beech hui baatein usse yaad aa rahi thi.

Nisha : betu! Aaj tu chala jaega fir mera kya hoga? Tune zara bhi nahi socha mere baare me? Ki tere jaane ke baad mein kese rahungi?

Rahul (peeche se hug karte hue) : mom!! Ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Ek na ek din toh mujhe bahar jaana hi padega na? Kya aap nahi chaahti ki mein bada aadmi banu?

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Nisha : aisi kon sii maa hogi mere laal jo apne bacche ka hit nahi chaahegi? Mein toh chaahti hu ki tu duniya ka sabse kamyab vyakti bane.

Rahul : toh kya ghar me baithe baithe vyakti kamyab bann jaata hai mom?

Nisha : nahi! Par...

Rahul : idhar dekhiye mom!

Rahul ne nisha ke kandho par haath rakhkar usse paltaya aur uski aankho me dekhte hue kaha,

Rahul : mom! Mein bhi aapke bina nahi reh sakta. Par mein konsa hamesha hamesha ke liye thodi na jaa raha hu. Beech beech me aapse milne aata rahunga. Aur jab mein successful ho jaunga toh aap sabhi ko leke wahi par rakhunga aur hum sab saath me rahenge.

Nisha : mujhe tere upar poora bharosa hai betu par ye maa ka dil nahi maanta. Teri fiqar lagi rahegi mujhe, tu kya khaega, kaha rahega, ye sab baatein mujhe pareshan kar deti hai.

Rahul : mom! Aapki tension abhi dur kar deta hu, mere khaane aur rehne ka intezaam sab ho chuka hai. Mere ek dost ne karwa diya hai. Ab tob muskuraaiye.

Nisha : ........

Tabhi rahul nisha ki chin pakadkar uska muh upae karta hai aur pyaar se uske honth choom leta hai, badle me nisha bhi apni aankhein band kar leti hai aur apne betu ke hontho ko mehsus karne lagti hai, kya pata wapas se ye ehsaas usse kab mile?

Rahul (naughty way me) : mom! Aaj aap doodh nahi pilaogi?

Nisha : dhattt! Pagal kahi ka. Bahar sabhi log maujood hai.

Rahul : waah! Uss raat toh aapne sab logo ke maujood hone ke bawajood mere upar dhaawa bol diya tha aur aaj itni sharam? Haa?

Nisha (blush) : wo toh mein...mein...hattt pagal!

Rahul : hehe! Koi nahi aaega mom! Door toh andar se locked hai.

Nisha (mann me) : mujhe pata hai koi nahi aaega betu, kyuki anshu jo sabko baato me laga ke rakhi hai. Aaj waqai uski madad mere kaam me aa rahi hai.

Nisha : accha thik hai. Aa ja bed par.

Nisha rahul ko apni goad me lita ke apna blouse kholti hai aur upar kar ke dono doodh jese gore doodh rahul ke muh ke saamne kar deti hai, aaj ke baad dono ko kab he mauka mile kya pata?

Nisha : aaj mujhe tript kar de betu. Khoob pee inhe! Inka kachumad bana de. Nichod de inhe. Taaki teri gerr-haziri me ye mujhe pareshan na kare ....aahhh betu... Mein tere bina nahi reh paungi mere laal...aaaahhhhh.

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Rahul bhediye ki tarah doodho pe toot pada aur aaj toh wo unhe choos nahi raha tha balki khaa raha tha, jee haa! Wo daato se dabaata, haatho se nichodta aur poora doodh apne muh me bhar leta, kha kha ke nisha ke doodh bhaiyankar laal kar diye the rahul ne.

Nisha ne baat ko aur samay ki pabandi ko samajhte hue forun apni saree utaar dii aur apni panty khol ke taang fela ke choot kholkar baith gayi.

Nisha : betu!! Aaja! Mujhme sama jaa... Aaj tere badan ko mein poori tarah se mehsus karna chahti hu, teri khushboo ko apne andar bikherna chaahti hu...aaja mere laal

Rahul ne forun shirt utaari aur nisha ke upar chadh ke wo usse zordaar kisses karne lagaair doodh nichodne laga par iss se pehle ki wo aage badhta, darwaaze ki khat khat ne saara game chaupat kar diya.

Pata chala ki vanshu thi aur rahul ke saath akhiri din samay bitaana chaah rahi thi, badle me anshu ne nisha se maafi maangi ki wo vanshu ko zyada derr baato me nahi laga paayi.

Nisha aur rahul ke beech ka ye adhura milan dono ke liye atyant peeda dayak tha. Badle me Rahul ne nisha se waada kiya tha ki wo nisha ko ek boht bada surprise dega unke iss adhure milan ke liye.

Kherr! Inhi baato ko yaad kar nisha apni peeda toh na rok saki lekin apne betu ke liye wo kaamna zaroor karti ki usse jald se jald kamyaabi mile aur uska chehra wo jald se jald dekh sake. Apna dhyaan hataane ke liye nisha uth ke kitchen me chali gayi.

Upar neha apne kamre me laite hue ceiling ko dekh rahi thi aur ussi din ki baat usse bhi yaad aa rahi thi. Uske chalte uss din usne rahul ke jaane ke baad party bhi nahi kii kyuki wo poori tarah se hil jo chuki thi.

Baar baar wahi scene uski aankho ke saamne mandra raha tha,

Usne jab apni aankhein band kari toh ek baar firse wahi scene aa gaya,
Kese uske mom dad rahul se hug karne ke liye force kar rahe the, kese wo naa chaahte hue majbooran aage badhi, kese usne apne haath aage kiye, par achanak rahul ne uska kandha pakda, ek haath uske gulaabi gaal par rakha, aur aage badh ke rahul uske kaan ki taraf jhuka aur kaha,
"Abhi nahi gudiya! Ab kabhi nahi..."

Achanak neha ki aankhein ekdum se khul gayi, aur wapas se uski dhadkan tezz ho gayi. Yeh vakya rahul hamesha uss se kehta tha jab bhi neha apne mann ke virodh koi kaam karti thi. Uss din bhi neha bemann se rahul ko hug kar rahi thi aur rahul ne yahi vakya uske kaan me kaha tha. Neha isse bhulaane ki bharpoor koshish kar rahi thi par bhula nahi paa rahi thi. Uska dimaag yahi keh raha tha ki rahul ne ye sab usse chidhaane ke liye, aur usse tang karne ke liye kaha tha par uska dil kisi aur taraf ishara kar raha tha jisse wo jaan nahi paa rahi thi.

Kya matlab tha uss vakya ka? (Update 52 ki starting aap padh sakte hai, ye vakya kahani me pehle bhi istemaal hua hai par iss baar iska arth thoda alag tha)
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyawad!
 

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage
Tow paya ki ek pari se bhi khoobsurat ladki chali aa rahi h yahi na bhai aap kehna chah rehe h
Well very nice update great going
Thanks for lovely update
Fantastic update hai aur neha ka suspence bhI acha hai agle update ka basabri se intezar rahe ga
Superb update bro maza aa gaya

Waiting for the next update
Boht achi update thi
Nice update....bro
Toh usne paya ki aaj ka update khatam hua ab readers ko wait karna padega paglon ki tarah taki writer bhaisaab thodi meherbani Karen and new update jaldi se jaldi dal de. Taki hum bor naa hoon. Mast update tha bahut hi badhiya
Awesome update bro

Waiting for the next update
Bhai update bhot hy acha tha ab age ka intzar he

Waiting for next
Nice update Bhai
Very nice update.....
Agar Rahul mumbai mai 3 maah rukega, to Neha ko protection kaise milegi, lucky :hinthint: se?

Aur uski girlfriends ka kya hoga?:rondu:
Mast lajawab sandar update tha.. and Rahul Neha se kya kaha iska to pata hi nahi chala.. and dekhte hai Khushi ki kaise behave karti hai Rahul ke sath.. well SAB interesting chal Raha hai... Bass Mai itna kahunga thoda jaldi update dene ki koshish kijiye... and Keep it rocking...❤❤❣
Keep writing bro you doing well
Mast update bhai ab rahul ki jindagi me naya mor chala aya ab dekhte hai kya hota hai
Nice update.....
Awesome fabulous update
So finally pahuch hi gaya h
Keep posting
Oxm update bhai tu rahul ny apna kaam shro kr diya hy.... Ab tu ye bhi pka lag rha hy ky rahul ki zindagi me ek or larki a gyi hy... Ye neha ko rahul ny esa kiya kaha ho ga... Bas in suspense ki waja sy agly update ka intezar mushkil ho jata hy
Eagerly waiting
Superb updates
Saspensual update
Nice update
अच्छा अपडेट था लेकिन इसमे कुछ खास नहीं लगा i mean जैसे कि राहुल ने नेहा को क्या कहा और ना ही निशा राहुल का और अब तो 3 महीने बाद ही मिलना होगा राहुल का निशा और इन 3 महीनों में तो राहुल कि जिंदगी में एक और लड़की आ रही है वो भी नई उम्र कि so i think मुझे लगता है कुछ ना कुछ अलग होगा. See what हैपन ?
?nice अपडेट
Nice update
सही कहा आपने सर जी इस बारे में तो पूछना ही भूल गए थे अच्छा हुआ आपने याद दिला दिया लास्ट 2. 3 अपडेट से gif बहुत मिस करते आ रहे थे
अगला अपडेट अब किस दिन को आएगा सर जी ?
स्पेशली ansu के साथ ?
awsm update
Awesome update bhai Lekin Rahul ne Neha se kya kha
Bhai mai silent reader tha yahan par sirf..
lekin aapki writing skills ne mujhe majboor kar diya comment karne par..
bohot behtareen story hai bhai keep it up..
and want more update..
:writing::love2:
Waiting for next
Waiting for next update.....
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update... Waiting for New Ones!
Superb updates, wait for next.
Awesome fantastic update, rahul new journey is fascinating, waiting for next update
Update ka intizar h bhai......
Update ka intezar
Yaar
Dear writer kaha ho
Intejar hai agle update ka
Aur aap ne abhi bhi ye nahi bataya ki rahul ne kya kaha neha ke kaan me
Please open suspense aise chhote chhote suspence jyada samay tak acche nahi lagte plz sir.
Superb and excellent...
Aur aap ne abhi bhi ye nahi bataya ki rahul ne kya kaha neha ke kaan me...
Ab Rahul ki life me naya mod sane waka hai..
Update aaj aayga kya ?
Waiting for next update
Bhai update kub tak milega
Ok waiting for tomorrow's update...
#Lone_wolf
Bhai sahab aapne kahani me mujhe jara bhi bore nhi hone diya aur asha karta hu ki aage bhi aisa hi hoga.maine ye kahani kal se aaj tak padh dali itna interest aaya.
Waiting for next update
Bhai update kitne baje aayega. Ab wait karna mushkil ho raha hai
Bhai aap updates mein bhut mehnat karte ho... Ye baat aapki post ki lengths aur unke regular updates se pata chalti h...... And puri story padhne ke baad mujhe aisa laga ki aapke kuch updates overall storyline mein match nhi hote. For example Rahul and uski Ma'am vala episode or ye last vala update bhi kyunki jo aapne likha h utna to aapke readers ne imagine hi kar liya hota....

Ye isiliye kaha kyunki isse aapka hardwork fruitfully use nhi hua h....

Overall and baki ke sare updates bhut acche h...

Will wait for more
Update?????
Bhai bilkul mali review zarur dunga..
Aur keep it up bhai?
Werewolf bhai kitne baje tak update de rahe ho ?
Readers aab tak ki story padh ke hi comment kar sakte h...... Every word with purpose and meaning that's what make a story great.... So I sincerely hope ki aapka hardwork aage ke updates mein justify ho...
Best of luck
Update has been posted guys!
 
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