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Bhai update accha tha par cchota tha
Bahut khubsurat update keep writing
wonderfull update bhaiya ji
Achhha to ye baat he...
Badiya bhai ...
Sali ek to hate karti he or yaha lucky se bachne k liye usse hi yaad kare...
Had he yaar ..
Ye pyar he ya nafrat....
Ab dekhte he ki flashback me kya he jo story ka main suspense he....
Intzaar rahega ..
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Dilchasp mod kahani ka .
Bhai bohot badiya update tha ab sayad pata chale ki akhir nafrat ki wajeh kya h
Nice update... bro
nice going bro
Lajwab update bhai
Bro
Week m chahy 1 update do but mega update do.
Ye Kia doctor ki trha 2 din m 1 puriii update Dy rhy ho.
By the way update was funtestic
Behtareen update
Nice updates
Mast update bhai to isbar lucky buri tarha fass gaya hai aur neha bhi bach gaya hai ab aage dekhte hai kiya hua tha jo neha itni hate karta hai rahul se
Update Bahot achha tha Werewolf Bhai aur Aapne yeh bhi Bahot achha kiya ke Neha ko yeh baat Pata chal gayi ke Rahul ne hi use bachaya hai, Monica ne to Rahul ke baare me Neha ke muh se galat baate sunkar uska coller hi pakad liya. Good Bahot achha laga update read kar ke. Dekhte hai agle update me wo kya reason hai ke Neha Rahul se Itni jyada Nafrat karti hai ya phir is Nafrat me bhi pyar chhupa hai.
Waiting for the next Update
Zabardast update
Scene toh pura sochke, elaborate karke likha hai bhai. Aisa lag raha tha jaise University exam likh rahe ho.. Elaborate the scene naam ka question hai aur ye uska answer but tha mast bahut shii elaborate kia tha try krna ki Neha ka flashback ek hi baar main finish hojaye and thoda bahut khushi ka scene bhi bich main aajaye
Nice update
Super se upper update tha bro... Keep it rocking..
Bht khoob bhai nice
BAhut acha bhai
Superb update bhai per ker buo maza aya ma do bar pari qk mujhe bhot maza aya per ker ma ab age ki update ka isliye intzar ge ke rahul aur neha ka raaz khule ge jis waja se stpry Ur bhi achi hogi jo perso pata chale ga kiya hota he bhai shukriya ak zaberdast update dena ka liya intzar rahe ga next ka
Nice update
Bhai jada intejer nahi karana update jaldi se dena
Awesome update bhai
Neha to hamesha se rahul se emotionally attached hain magar kyunki agar use rahul pasand na hota to use ignlre karti par wo hamesha rahul se nafrat karti ayi hain iska matlab hain wo uske bare me sonchti hain nake ignore karti hain.
Shayad iski wajah Rahul ka koi past ka kaam hoga ya koi galat fahmi jise rahul ne kabhi batane ki koshish nahi ki isisliye neha use doshi mante hue usse nafrat karti hain jis bhai se use pyaar tha wo nafrat ban gayi
Isme dono ki ghalti hain neha ka rahul ko na samjh pana aur usse nafrat karte hue use hurt karne ki koshish hamesha karna aur ya use ghar se nikalne ki koshish take wo use yaad na aye
Aur Rahul ka use sachayi na batana jaise use fark hi nahi padta apni behan ki nafrat se jiski wajah se wo hamesha ghalat faisle lete ayi hain.
Magar jab neha ko sach pata lagega (jo abhi hum readers ko bhi nahi pata :p ) use 2 emotions bohot zyada feel hoge
No 1 : guilt - apne bhai ke saath kiye gaye bartaav par aur use na samjh
pane ya uspar bharosa na karne ka
No 2 : gussa ya narazgi apne bhai par ke usne kabhi use sachayi nahi batayi
Uska guilt uske gusse ko kam kar dega magar mera manna hain ke apno ko sach na batana aur andhere me rakhna bhi utna hi ghalat hain jitna apno par vishwas na karna
Nice update
Finally
Most awaited update....
Meansvneha k matter clear hoga...
To Kya Kahani ka ant najdik aa gya hai???
Bahut achha update tha ye bhai. Mujhe lafa tha ki monica aaj use ye bhi bata degi ki rahul ne use sirf aaj hi nahi balki kayi baar bachaya he lucky se. Khair
Waiting 4 next update
Awesome update
Nice update
Jaldi update Dena yaar main bhi padna chata hu akhir hua Kya tha
Keep posting
Beautiful update
Thanks
superb updates, wait for flashback.
waiting new update
Bahut hi awesome update bro
Ab Shayad Rahul ke parti neha ki soch badal jaye
Waiting for the next update bro
लगता है अब एक एक करके नेहा के सामने वो सब हकीकतें खुलनी शुरू हो गयी हैं, लास्ट में मेन सस्पेन्स खुलेगा। फिर होश आएगा लेकिन तब राहुल लौटने से मना कर देगा। waiting. Plz increase the update speed, at least for lockdown period.
Awesome update.
dekhte h aage kya hoga........keep it up my friend
Very nice update bro
Bahut hi sandar tarike se scene likha hai.
Monika ka pyar or neha ka vishwas dono hi bahut achchi tarah dikhye hai
Good update bro keep it up
Lucky ka kaam ho gaya ab shayad woh saamne bhi na aaye kisi k
Hame bhi neha ke past k baare m jaan ne ki bahot ziada bekarari h akhir kia huwa tha jo woh rahil se itna hate kerti h
Intizar rehega aapke update ka dost
Thanks for lovely update
waiting new update
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Sach kaha ki Rahul bahut kuchh jhel raha h.
Ek behtareen update yaaraa.
Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar
Nice update bro
Nice and hot update...
Jabardast update.....!
Waiting for next......
Shaandar
Bro lovely update when will the new update come
Waiting for next update bhai
Waiting.......
Waiting for the next
waiting new update
Awesome update bro (☞^o^)☞
Amazing update.
Let's see what happened in next update.
Waiting for quickly next update.
Waiting....
Werewolf bhai kitne baje tak update de rahe ho?
Bro agla update kitne baje doge
पेज no.390.अपडेट 68.Verry nice update super तो आखिरकार नेहा बच ही गयी वो भी मोनिका की वज़ह से शुक्र है उपरवाले का लेकिन ये क्या था की नेहा ke मुँह से बचाने ke लिए भईया की ही आवाज kyu निकली मम्मी पापा बचालो ये भी तो कह सकती थी लेकिन नहीं सिर्फ "बचालो भईया " ही kyu निकला देखते है आगे क्या होता सर जी एक रिक्वेस्ट है वो ये की आप मोनिका की कोई भी फोटो नहीं दिखाई आपने प्लीज जरा इसका ध्यान रखना और हाँ आप इमेज बहुत कम लगा रहें हो. गलत बात
Update please
लेकिन सर आपने कहा है की अगले अपडेट mai हमको (यानि रीडर )को नेहा का फ्लैशबैक देकने को मिलेगा कही ऐसा तो नहीं कुछ रीडर की वजह से आप इतनी जल्दी नेहा का सस्पेंs khol रहें हो सायद मैने पड़ा था की कुछ रीडर ने कहा था नेहा का क्या राज है रो सायद आप इसलिए इतनी जल्दी khol रहें हो कहीं ऐसा तो नहीं की आप कहानी को जल्दी ख़त्म करने जा रहें हो अगर ऐसा है तो बता दीजिएगा
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Tanisha ne to bawal kara hi dena tha aaj.
Gazab ka shandar scene create kiya aapne jabardast.
Neha nikita ki baatcheet dilchasp rahi or neha chali aayi lucky ke sath.
Rahul ne kuchh to socha hi hoga ....
Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjaar
Waiting for update
Waiting bhai for ur lovely update kb aayega
Where is the schedule of three update in a week.
Waiting for next bro
Lone_wolf bhai
Aapne updates Tuesday Thursday Saturday ko post karne ka bola tha but Saturday wala nhi aaya abhi tak
Aur kahani adbhut hai.
Bhai update kaha hai
waiting for update
and kitni lady se shadi krawge
सुक्रिया सर जी मैं बस यही सुनना चाहता था की कहानी अभी ख़त्म नहीं हुई है और बहुत बाकि है सुक्रिया ???
Update has been posted guys!!Lone wolf bhai
love you sai taine
Enjoy!!