Incest Akhir kyu? From hatred to love (Completed)

[kingkhankar]

Kal raat se hi shubh aarambh kar diya jae kya fir!? Haha!

All the best bhai.....

 

[Bilal jan]

Waiting for next story

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai is story ki pdf bana do

Mene abhi check kia yaar.
Pdf toh nahi hai iski.
Siraj bhai se bolna padega, wahi karte h ye kaam.

 

[Ajay]

Bani hui hai mitr shayad!
Aap completed hindi story list me jaake dekhiye waha meri story mil jaegi.
Ab pdf me h ya nahi
Ye mujhe confirm nahi hai.

Nahi hai bhai

 

[Ajay]

Mene abhi check kia yaar.
Pdf toh nahi hai iski.
Siraj bhai se bolna padega, wahi karte h ye kaam.

Ok bhai waiting and thanks

 

[parkas]

Werewolf bhai next story kab tak start kar rahe ho...

 

[kingkhankar]

Waiting for next story.

 

[Werewolf]

Werewolf bhai next story kab tak start kar rahe ho...

Bhai start to abhi kar du.
Par mein ek duwidha me hu.
Meri ye nahi samajh aa raha ki story third person perspective me rakhu ya first person.
Abhi mene jo updates likhe hai wo first person perspective me hai aur kahi kahi 3rd person bhi hai.
Yahi doubt hai mujhko. Ye pichli story poori 3rd person me thi. Meri samajh nahi aa raha ki story 3rd person me sahi jaegi ya 1st me.

 

[kingkhankar]

Bhai start to abhi kar du.
Par mein ek duwidha me hu.
Meri ye nahi samajh aa raha ki story third person perspective me rakhu ya first person.
Abhi mene jo updates likhe hai wo first person perspective me hai aur kahi kahi 3rd person bhi hai.
Yahi doubt hai mujhko. Ye pichli story poori 3rd person me thi. Meri samajh nahi aa raha ki story 3rd person me sahi jaegi ya 1st me.

First person perspective will surely give more feeling. But you are best to decide.

 

[jaatboy]

Bhai start to abhi kar du.
Par mein ek duwidha me hu.
Meri ye nahi samajh aa raha ki story third person perspective me rakhu ya first person.
Abhi mene jo updates likhe hai wo first person perspective me hai aur kahi kahi 3rd person bhi hai.
Yahi doubt hai mujhko. Ye pichli story poori 3rd person me thi. Meri samajh nahi aa raha ki story 3rd person me sahi jaegi ya 1st me.

bhai jisko sex padna h they don't care about person perspective
or jisko story padni h i think first person is best choice. third person me distant feeling aati h
first person me reader assume himself as lead character/hero.
Aapki story h best choice aapki hogi jyadatar to nice update/short update/waiting wale hi milenge.
kuch mere jaise silent reader bhi honge jo kabhi kabhi suggestion dene, kami nikalane aa jayenge. lekin kahani aapki h likhna aapko h to perspective bhi aapka hona chahiye.