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Incest Akhir kyu? From hatred to love (Completed)

Kya hero ne jo bhi kiya wo sahi kiya? (Voting aap sabhi 2-3 update pdhne k baad karna)

  • Hn sahi kiya

    Votes: 353 67.0%
  • Nahi, apni behan k sath aisa nhi krna tha

    Votes: 60 11.4%
  • Rahul nirdosh hai

    Votes: 94 17.8%
  • Neha nirdosh hai

    Votes: 20 3.8%

  • Total voters
    527

Svin

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Lekin problems bahot hai
1. Vanshu ko bimari ke karan permission mile. Lekin anshu kya dalil degi
2. Mama shayad man jaye lekin wo pehle richa ki shadi ko accet karega kya taniya se pehle samaj to richa ko hi rahul ki wife manega
3. Kya rajesh neha ke liye rahul se nata tod dega ya fir se wahi purani bat se neha ko hurt karega
4. Kya master khushi ke liye rahul ko accept bhi kare. Per monica ke liye duhra rawya nahi apnayege. Uper se priti bhi hai. To master 3 ke liye kya sochenge.
4. Kya richa ke bhavish ki parishani uske maa bap samjker ker rahul mana na kar de
 

Nevil singh

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Update - 104

Ab tak...

Tanisha : mujhe koi aapatti nahi hai darling. Jab tak tum mere saath ho. Mujhe aur kuch nahi chaahiye.

Rahul : don't worry tanisha! You will always be mine... Tum meri ho. Aur jald hi meri patni banogi...

Tanisha : yes darling!!


Aur dono ek meethe chumban me doob jaate hai.

Ab aage...

Agle din hi rahul ne sabhi ko ekatr karke ek meeting rakhi. Meeting aage ke plan ko lekar thi. Rahul ne jab apna plan sabhi ko bataaya toh sabhi ye sunn ke chakit reh gaye, khaaskar nisha. Nisha apni bauhe sikode hue rahul ke plan ke baare me soche jaa rahi thi. Kya rahul ka plan sahi hai? Kya aisa karne se sab kuch sahi ho jaega? Kitni sambhaavna hai ye yojna safal hone ki? Uski samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha. Ek gehri saas lete hue nisha ne ant me saara rahul ke upar chorr diya. Yadi rahul ko jab bhi uski aavashyakta padegi nisha bejhijak apne betu ki madad ke liye aage aa jaegi.

Yojna jo bhi thi, wo sabhi ke bhavishya me rahul ke saath sambandh ko prabhaavit karne waali thi. Ab sab kuch samay par nirbhar tha.
Jaha samay le jae inn sabhi ko.

Iss waqt rahul khushi aur preeti ke saath unke kamre me maujood tha. Kaafi samay ho gaya saath me rehte hue par dono me akele me utne acche se baat nahi ho paayi thi. Rahul ne ye soch ke rakha tha ki wo khushi se end me baat karega. Ab chuki sabhi ke saath usne interact kar liya tha toh ab keval khushi aur preeti hi bachi hui thi aur rahul yaha aaj raat unke hi kamre me maujood tha unse baat karne ke liye.

Baaki sabhi apne apne kamro me the. Kisi ko nahi pata tha ki abhi khushi aur preeti ke saath rahul maujood hai siwae richa ke. Richa ab rahul ke saath uske kamre me hi soti thi pichle do dino se. Icchuk toh tanisha aur baaki sabhi bhi thi par shaadi ke sabse qareeb abhi richa thi toh richa ko hi ye mauka mila. Dinner already sabhi kar hi chuke the aur sone ke liye apne apne room me aa chuke the.

Rahul ek kursi par baithe hue khushi aur preeti ko dekh raha tha jo uske saamne bed par baithi hui thi. Preeti toh normal hi nazar aa rahi thi par khushi ke haav bhaav dekh ke lag raha tha ki wo kuch kehne ke liye hichkicha rahi hai,

"Toh kaho rahul? Kya baat karni hai? Ab finally humaari yaad aa hi gayi tumhe? Warna baaki ladkiyo se toh fursat hi nahi hai tumhe?" Preeti ne apni chuppi todte hue kaha.

Toh uske virodh me forun hi khushi ne uska haath pakad liya, "preeti!!! Aisa nahi kaho! Wo sab rahul ki lovers hai"

Khushi ki udaarta dekhte hi preeti apni aankho ko ghumaate hue apna haath churra leti hai, "oh! C'mon khushi! Tum jis se pyaar karti ho wo dusri ladkiyo ke saath mazze kar raha hai aur tumhe zara bhi aapatti nahi hai?"

Khushi : dekho preeti! Baaki log bhi toh ye jaante hue bhi rahul se jude hue hai na aur utna hi pyaar kar rahe hai? I know it hurts but... Mein sabhi ki tarah dheere dheere manage kar lungi. Mujhe samajh aa gaya hai. Mera rahul pe ekadhikar nahi hai aur na hi mein ya koi aur aisa kar sakta hai.

Kehte hue khushi ne nazre neeche jhuka lii. Shayad abhi bhi usme thodi boht iss baat ko lekar niraasha thi ki wo rahul par ekadhikar nahi jataa sakti. Dekha jae toh sabhi ladkiyo me ye halki niraasha zaroor hogi aur sabhi ki yahi kaamna bhi hogi ki wo rahul pe haq jataate hue usse keval sirf apna kar le. Sabse zyaada toh neha aur Taniya hi honge iss maamle me. Par ye namumkin tha, kam se kam iss janam me toh namumkin hi tha.

Ek gehri saas lete hue rahul ne dono ko firse dekha aur fir apna muh khola, "khushi! Tum se keval do hi sawaal hai mere"

Khushi : pucho rahul!

Rahul : kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?

Iss prashn par khushi forun hi apna sar haa me hilaane lagti hai, "of course! I love you rahul! I love you so much..." Aur uske baad hi wo sharmaate hue firse neeche dekhne lagti hai.

Beech beech me wo nazar utha ke rahul ko dekhti jaa rahi thi par jese hi rahul ne smile kiya khushi dubaara se sharmaate hue neeche dekhne lagi. Bechari ke gaal surkh laal pad rahe the.

Rahul : dusra sawaal khushi! Kya tumhare dad yaani ki mere master shaadi ke liye raazi hoenge ye sab jaante hue bhi ki meri itni chaahne waali hai...!?

Iss sawaal se khushi thodi duwidha me padd gayi. Uske dad...kya kahenge? Kya wo raazi hoenge? Usse iska jawaab bilkul nahi pata tha aur sahi kaha jae toh khushi ko khud ko iski sambhaavna 50 pratishat se bhi kam nazar aa rahi thi.

Preeti : soch kya rahi ho khushi? Tum aur mein milke uncle ko mana lenge. Mein poora zorr laga dungi apna... Haa bolo rahul ko.

Preeti ki baat sunn khushi rahul ko dekhti hai aur nichla honth daato se dabaate hue haa me sar hila deti hai.

Rahul (smile) : good... Aaj se tum meri ho

Rahul ne maano jese ghoshna kar dii aur uski ye baat sunte hi jese khushi ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi.

Aur agle pal hi rahul kursi se utha aur aage badhte hue usne khushi ki chin ko apne daaye haath se pakdte hue uthaaya, uski aankho me dekha aur uske honth apne hontho se churra liye.

Achanak hui iss harqat se khushi hakki bakki sii reh gayi. Uski aankhein fel gayi aur wo rahul ke chehre ko dekh rahi thi hairaan hote hue. rahul ke honth uske hontho se jude hue the.

Ye pehli baar tha jab rahul ne khudse usse kiss kiya. Dhadkane maano jese kisi train ke maafiq tezz ho gayi.

Par agle pal hi wo ehsaas jese gayab ho gaya. Rahul khushi ke honth chorrte hue peeche ho gaya. Khushi ko jese maano adhura adhura sa lagne laga. Ab uska mann kar raha tha ki kaash ye lamha aur lamba hota.

Bagal me baithi preeti abhi abhi jo hua usse aankhein faade dekh rahi thi. Uski samajh me nahi aaya ki pal bhar me ye kya ho gaya.

Idhar khushi apne gaalo ko haatho se chhipaate hue ekdum sharma gayi aur palat kar usne bedsheet utha ke apne sar ke upar daal lii...

Uski ye harqat dekh rahul ko hassi aa gayi. So cute.

"Ye bhale hi umr me meri gudiya ke baraabar hai par lagta hai bachpane me ye gudiya se aage hai. Abhi bhi alhadpann bhara hai isme. Well! I don't mind though. Jesi hai ye wesi hi acchi hai..." , Rahul ne muskuraate hue apne mann me socha.

Preeti khushi ko dekh apne haath khade kar deti hai, "aise chalega toh kese ho payega khushi? Like Seriously? Ek kiss me tumhaara ye haal hai?? Abhi tum..."

Preeti iss se pehle ki aage kuch bolti uske honth pehle hi rahul ke hontho ke qabze me aa gaye.

Khushi ne jese hi preeti ki awaaz achanak se band hoti hui suni toh wo uth ke baith gayi aur saamne ka nazaara dekh ekdum chaunk gayi. Ye preeti aur rahul ki dusri kiss thi. Pehli baar rahul ne preeti ko ekdum se kiss karke chup karwaya tha jab preeti panic ho gyi thi khushi ki kidnapping ke waqt.

Aur iss baar bhi rahul ne usse kehte hue beech me uske honth churra liye. Kuch seconds baad hi rahul preeti se dur ho gaya, "preeti! Rahi baat hamaare relationship ki... Toh I think we need some more time. Good night to both of you"

Aur itna kehte hue rahul waha se nikal gaya. Idhar preeti bhi ashcharya chakit sii bas aankhein chaudi kiye darwaaze ko ghoor rahi thi jaha se rahul abhi abhi gaya tha.

"Hehehe! Look at you now... Badi aayi mujhe bolne waali. Khud ki haalat dekho" Khushi ne hasste hue preeti ka mazaak udaate hue kaha.
Thodi derr pehle toh usse bhaashan de rahi thi preeti par ab kya hua? Tote udd gaye uske khud ke toh.

"Huh?? N..ni.. khushi...w..wo toh mein...aise hi...usne.. mein..mein ready nahi thi...na usne achaanak se...wo...isliye mein...aisa" preeti bhi ekdum haklaate hue khushi ko apni safaayi baya karne lagti hai toh ek baar fir khushi ki pyaari si kilkaari chooth jaati hai

"But it felt good", khushi apni ungli le jaake apne hontho par sparsh karaati hai jaha par kuch derr pehle rahul ke honth lage hue the. Maano jese wo rahul ke chorre hue chhaap ko dhund rahi ho apne hontho par.

Uski baat sunn ke preeti bhi sharmaate hue apne hontho par ungliyo se sparsh karne lagti hai, "yeah! You are right!"

Agla sawera hua, sabhi plan ke according gwalior yaani ke rahul ke ghar ke liye ravaana hone lage. Preeti aur khushi ko chorr kar. Unka waha abhi ke liye koi kaam nahi tha. Unka waha rehna samasya ko aur bhi bada deta.

Iss waqt sabhi AC coach me trainb me safar kar rahe the. Koi jaldi thi nahi aur nisha train hi prefer karti hai isliye sabhi ne train se jaane ka hi faisla liya.

Train me...

Nisha rahul ke saamne waali birth par baithi hui thi. Rahul uske saamne tha. Rahul ke bagal se neha uski goad me sarr rakh ke laiti hui thi. Aur baaki sabhi ladkiya apni apni birth par viraajmaan thi.

Nisha : betu! Kya ye sahi hai? Tune sab kuch soch liya hai na acche se? Kyuki mujhe toh boht hi jokhim dikhaayi de raha hai isme.

Rahul : jokhim toh hai mom! Boht hai! Sach kahu toh mujhe bhi poora confidence nahi hai.

Rahul ki baat sunn isss baar nisha waqai ghabra jaati hai,

Nisha : betuuu!??

Rahul : haa mom! Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai par mere hisaab se... Yahi best raasta hai.

Tabhi utne me neha uth ke baith jaati hai aur rahul ke gaalo par zorr se ek pappi de deti hai,

Neha : bhai!! Mujhe thoda darr lag raha hai?

Rahul : kiska? Logo ka?

Neha : logo me toh mein kisi se nahi darrti bhai. Darr iss baat ka hai... Ki... Mein tumse dur nahi hona chaahti bhai. Mujhe iss baat ka boht darr hai.

Kehte hue neha ek baar nisha par nazar daalti hai toh nisha muskuraate hue kehti hai, "tu apne sage bhai se pyaar karti hai na?"

Neha forun hi haa me sar hila deti hai.

Nisha ek gehri saas lete hue, "mujhe pata chal gaya tha. Aisa kese hue meri bacchi?"

"Mom! Ye abhi se thodi na hai. Sach kahu... toh... mujhe bhai se bachpan me hi pyaar ho gaya tha. Boht pehle... Mein tabhi bhai ko bata dena chaahti thi par darrti thi..."
Neha ne rahul ko chupke se dekhte hue kaha.

Neha ki baat se nisha toh hairaan hui hi par rahul bhi hairaan tha. Usse nahi pata tha uski gudiya uss se bachpan se hi pyaar karti hai.

Neha : yadi mene uss waqt hi bhai ko propose kar diya hota na toh aaj bhai ke saath itni saari ladkiya nahi hoti. Bhai sirf mera hota

Kehte hue neha rahul ki kamar me chutki lene lagti hai toh rahul dard hone ki acting karne lagta hai...

Rahul : ouch! Gudiya...lag rahi hai

Neha : hmph!!

Muh fulaate hue neha apni nazre ferr leti hai toh rahul usse peeche se pyaar dikhaate hue jakad leta hai, "arre mera gudiya! Naraaz ho gayi? Sorry baba! Par dekh! Tu aur mein...hum saath toh hai na... Ab muh mat fula"

Par neha toh jese aaj apne bhai ki taang kheechne ke poore mood me thi. Wo abhi bhi muh fulaaye hi baithi thi toh rahul usse ghuma ke uske honth ekdum se chum leta hai.

Iss baar neha hadbada jaati hai. Saamne uski maa nisha jo baithi thi...uske baad bhi rahul ne ye sab uske saath kar diya. Itni himmat?

Neha thodi chintit bhaav se nisha ko dekhi toh nisha muskuraa rahi thi.

Nisha : betu! Sabke saamne nahi! Filhaal nahi! Baaki... Mein tum dono ka poora saath dungi. Baccho ki hi khushi me toh akhir meri khushi hai... Sab kuch toh tumhaare liye hi kiya hai. Jab tum log hi khush nahi rahoge toh matlab hi kya... Pareshaan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tumhari maa tumhaare saath hai baccho.

Rahul (smile) : thank you mom! And... I understand...

Neha bhi nisha ki baat sunke ekdum se boht khush ho jaati hai aur nisha ke gale lag jaati hai.

Kuch hi ghanto ke safar ke baad train gwalior pohuch gayi. Sabhi train se utre aur rahul ke ghar ke liye prasthan kar diye.

Jab sabhi ghar pohche toh rajesh ghar par nahi tha, duty par tha aur naa hi unhone rajesh ko bataaya tha ki sabhi ghar laut rahe hai. Par nisha ke paas extra key thi aur usne ghar ka darwaaza khola aur sabhi ko andar aamantrit kiya.

Andar aate hi sabhi baari baari fresh huye, nahaye dhoye aur kapde badalne ke baad sabhi hall me ikhatta ho gaye.

Monica : such a nice home...

Rahul : aap pehli baar andar aayi ho na?

Monica : yesssss!

Rahul : ye ghar chota hai kaafi. Ab aapko aise gharo ki aadat nahi hogi.

Monica : no dear! Aise gharo ki tulna unn bade bunglow se nahi kii jaa sakti. Inn me alag hi baat rehti hai.

Rahul : aur kya hai wo baat?

Monica : apnapann, apno ke beech nikatata, pyaar, ekta... Jo mene apni life me kuch saalo tak mehsoos kiya, jab tak maa baap the... Haha

Kehte hue monica apne maa baap ko yaad karne lagti hai.
Rahul uthate hue uske bagal se aake baith jaata hai,
"Toh apne iss rahul ko mauka dijiye... Ki aapke liye firse wahi cheez recreate kar saku. Par thoda antar rahega. Mere mom dad aapke mom dad honge. Aap meri patni rahogi aur fir hehe... Aap maa banogi aur mein papa"

Uski baat sunte hi monica ke aasu chalak aate hai aur wo rahul ke gale lag jaati hai. Aas paas baithe baaki sabhi log ye dekh muskuraane lagte hai. Kam se kam ab sabme ekta aa gayi thi. Par aage kya hone waala tha?

Rahul : mom! Call laga dijiye...

Nisha : betu?? Ek baar fir soch le! Kya yahi tera final decision hai?

Rahul : yes mom! It's final! Aap chinta mat kariye! Yadi kuch hua bhi toh uske baad bhi, I believe ki ghar ki baat ghar me hi rahegi!

Nisha haa me sar hilaate hue kisi ko call lagaati hai, kuch derr baatein karne lagti hai fir call cut karke firse kisi ko lagaati hai aur firse cut karke ant me kisi ko firse call lagaati hai.

Nisha : kar diya betu!

Rahul : good! Bas ab intezaar karna hai.

Taniya : kya ye plan kaam karega? Chapdganju? Ek baar bas bolde na tu ki tujhe poora bharosa hai ye kaam karega toh mujhe utni tension nahi hoegi.

Rahul : iss baar mein bhi sure nahi hu taniya

Vanshu : chotii! Tu kal se itni chupp kyu hai? Kuch bol na! Kya tu madad nahi karegi?

Anshu : sach kahu toh dii! Bhai ki tarah mein bhi boht tension me hu. Mujhe bhi nahi pata hai, ki kya hoga. Aur mujhe boht darr lag raha hai.

Vanshu : shit!!

Richa : ummmm... Jo bhi hoga acche ke liye hoga didi... Aise sochte rahenge toh aur bhi tension hone lagegi. Kisi ne kuch bhi nahi khaaya hai jabse aae hai. Kyu na kuch bana ke kha liya jae.

Nisha : sahi kaha! Ab jo hoga so dekha jaega. Mein chali naashta banaane. Koi aaega kya meri madad karne? Meri hone waali bahuo me se?

Richa : mein aati hu maa ji...

Tanisha : maa jii! Chaliye. Mein bhi aati hu.

Monica : mujhe bhi khaana boht acche se aata hai banaana.

Nisha : toh aa jao fir teeno. Derr kis baat ki...

Aur nisha ke saath teeno kitchen me chali jaati hai.

Neha : bhai?? Everything will be fine right?

Rahul : hope so!!

Aur sabhi naashte ki prateeksha karne lagte hai par sabhi ke andar aane waale kal ko lekar chinta zaroor thi. Khaaskar ki neha anshu vanshu aur Taniya ko. Ab dekhna ye hai ki kon zyaada saubhagya-shaali niklega? Ya fir sabhi saubhagya-shaali rahenge?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyawad!
Mast update hai dost.
 

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I'm writing all the remaining updates and I'm planning on releasing all the updates in one go.
So you'll have to wait a little more and then I'll release all the updates and will end the story then and there only.
I think this is much better. Instead of giving one by one updates, I'll just write them within few days and will upload them all together.
After that I'll be free from my responsibilty of completing the story.
Thank you!
Wait a little more guys! And then you just have to read. Sit back. Have patience.
 

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I'm writing all the remaining updates and I'm planning on releasing all the updates in one go.
So you'll have to wait a little more and then I'll release all the updates and will end the story then and there only.
I think this is much better. Instead of giving one by one updates, I'll just write them within few days and will upload them all together.
After that I'll be free from my responsibilty of completing the story.
Thank you!
Wait a little more guys! And then you just have to read. Sit back. Have patience.
Okay... Mate... Update the final showdown soon....
 
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