Fantasy Akki (One Man Army)

[Urvashi794]

Update - 1

Sheharo ki bhidbahd se koso dur Himalayan ki unchi Pahadiyo me maujood ek Gufa me kuch Sadhu Sanyasi Log aaj ek vishesh pooja kar rhe the,

Wese to Inka daily routine hi tha Pooja path karna lekin aaj ki Pooja vishesh islie thi ki aaj "Dusshera" ka Tyohar tha, aur aaj ka din Sabhi jante hai ki
Andhere par Ujale ki jeet, Adharm par Dharm ki jeet ke roop me manaya jata hai,

Mukhya Sadhu ne Mahakali aur Parad Shivling ki Pooja Archana ke lie unke sammukh bethe hue mantrocharan jese hi shuru kia, usi waqt Mausam achanak Badalne Laga, Badalo ne aakar aasman ko Gher lia aur Tej Hawa ke sath Barish Girne lagi.

Par abtak Ye pooja ho kislie rahi hai uska pata nhi chala, Khair pooja karte hue Jab Do ghante se jyda Ka samay Beet gaya to Un mukhya Sadhu ne Sabse pehle Mata Mahakali ko Apne Lahu ki bheth chadai aur Paare se Bane (Parad Shivling) ka Dhudh se Abhishek kia,
Aur fir Sabhi Sadhuon ne Hawan kund me Ahuti di.

Jese hi Pooja samapt hui Mahakali ki Ankho se ek prakash punj nikal kar Hawan kund me samane laga, aur Thik isi Tarah se Ek prakash punj Shivling se bhi nikal kar Hawan Kund me Samane Laga, aur wha jakar Vo dono praksh punj Ekroop ho gaye

Aur fir bahut tej Gati se vo pRakash punj Hawan kund se nikal ke chal pada, Akash se hota hua vo aese dikhayi de rha tha jese ki koi Tara Tuta ho, Milo ki duri Second me Paar karta hua vo Shivling *Mathura* shehar ke Ek Private Hospital ke labour ward me soi Ek aurat ke Garbh me utar gaya.

Is dauran Sabhi hospital ke log Kisi Aghyat adrisya shakti ke adheen hokar Nind me ja chuke the,
Aur jese hi Vo Prakash punj Us soi Hui Maa ke Garbh me samaya unki ankhe khul gayi aur apne pet par Hath rakh ke vo dard se karah uthi....

Unki awaj sunkar Nurse bhagte hue aayi aur patient ki khrab halat dekhte hue usne doctor ko turant suchna di, Doctor ne aakar checkup karne ke baad Patient ko delivery Room me turant le jane ka order dia.....
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Story will continue in Next update, which will be post very soon
Apne comments me meri Galtiya jarur btaye...

 

[Sauravb]

Update - 1

Sheharo ki bhidbahd se koso dur Himalayan ki unchi Pahadiyo me maujood ek Gufa me kuch Sadhu Sanyasi Log aaj ek vishesh pooja kar rhe the,

Wese to Inka daily routine hi tha Pooja path karna lekin aaj ki Pooja vishesh islie thi ki aaj "Dusshera" ka Tyohar tha, aur aaj ka din Sabhi jante hai ki
Andhere par Ujale ki jeet, Adharm par Dharm ki jeet ke roop me manaya jata hai,

Mukhya Sadhu ne Mahakali aur Parad Shivling ki Pooja Archana ke lie unke sammukh bethe hue mantrocharan jese hi shuru kia, usi waqt Mausam achanak Badalne Laga, Badalo ne aakar aasman ko Gher lia aur Tej Hawa ke sath Barish Girne lagi.

Par abtak Ye pooja ho kislie rahi hai uska pata nhi chala, Khair pooja karte hue Jab Do ghante se jyda Ka samay Beet gaya to Un mukhya Sadhu ne Sabse pehle Mata Mahakali ko Apne Lahu ki bheth chadai aur Paare se Bane (Parad Shivling) ka Dhudh se Abhishek kia,
Aur fir Sabhi Sadhuon ne Hawan kund me Ahuti di.

Jese hi Pooja samapt hui Mahakali ki Ankho se ek prakash punj nikal kar Hawan kund me samane laga, aur Thik isi Tarah se Ek prakash punj Shivling se bhi nikal kar Hawan Kund me Samane Laga, aur wha jakar Vo dono praksh punj Ekroop ho gaye

Aur fir bahut tej Gati se vo pRakash punj Hawan kund se nikal ke chal pada, Akash se hota hua vo aese dikhayi de rha tha jese ki koi Tara Tuta ho, Milo ki duri Second me Paar karta hua vo Shivling *Mathura* shehar ke Ek Private Hospital ke labour ward me soi Ek aurat ke Garbh me utar gaya.

Is dauran Sabhi hospital ke log Kisi Aghyat adrisya shakti ke adheen hokar Nind me ja chuke the,
Aur jese hi Vo Prakash punj Us soi Hui Maa ke Garbh me samaya unki ankhe khul gayi aur apne pet par Hath rakh ke vo dard se karah uthi....

Unki awaj sunkar Nurse bhagte hue aayi aur patient ki khrab halat dekhte hue usne doctor ko turant suchna di, Doctor ne aakar checkup karne ke baad Patient ko delivery Room me turant le jane ka order dia.....
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Story will continue in Next update, which will be post very soon
Apne comments me meri Galtiya jarur btaye...

amazing start hero ki janm mata kali aur prabhi shiv ki ashirbad se hoga.

 

[Urvashi794]

amazing start hero ki janm mata kali aur prabhi shiv ki ashirbad se hoga.

Thanks ji
Aur haan aesa hi kuch hai Tabhi to One man Army ban payega

 

[Death Kiñg]

Update - 1

Sheharo ki bhidbahd se koso dur Himalayan ki unchi Pahadiyo me maujood ek Gufa me kuch Sadhu Sanyasi Log aaj ek vishesh pooja kar rhe the,

Wese to Inka daily routine hi tha Pooja path karna lekin aaj ki Pooja vishesh islie thi ki aaj "Dusshera" ka Tyohar tha, aur aaj ka din Sabhi jante hai ki
Andhere par Ujale ki jeet, Adharm par Dharm ki jeet ke roop me manaya jata hai,

Mukhya Sadhu ne Mahakali aur Parad Shivling ki Pooja Archana ke lie unke sammukh bethe hue mantrocharan jese hi shuru kia, usi waqt Mausam achanak Badalne Laga, Badalo ne aakar aasman ko Gher lia aur Tej Hawa ke sath Barish Girne lagi.

Par abtak Ye pooja ho kislie rahi hai uska pata nhi chala, Khair pooja karte hue Jab Do ghante se jyda Ka samay Beet gaya to Un mukhya Sadhu ne Sabse pehle Mata Mahakali ko Apne Lahu ki bheth chadai aur Paare se Bane (Parad Shivling) ka Dhudh se Abhishek kia,
Aur fir Sabhi Sadhuon ne Hawan kund me Ahuti di.

Jese hi Pooja samapt hui Mahakali ki Ankho se ek prakash punj nikal kar Hawan kund me samane laga, aur Thik isi Tarah se Ek prakash punj Shivling se bhi nikal kar Hawan Kund me Samane Laga, aur wha jakar Vo dono praksh punj Ekroop ho gaye

Aur fir bahut tej Gati se vo pRakash punj Hawan kund se nikal ke chal pada, Akash se hota hua vo aese dikhayi de rha tha jese ki koi Tara Tuta ho, Milo ki duri Second me Paar karta hua vo Shivling *Mathura* shehar ke Ek Private Hospital ke labour ward me soi Ek aurat ke Garbh me utar gaya.

Is dauran Sabhi hospital ke log Kisi Aghyat adrisya shakti ke adheen hokar Nind me ja chuke the,
Aur jese hi Vo Prakash punj Us soi Hui Maa ke Garbh me samaya unki ankhe khul gayi aur apne pet par Hath rakh ke vo dard se karah uthi....

Unki awaj sunkar Nurse bhagte hue aayi aur patient ki khrab halat dekhte hue usne doctor ko turant suchna di, Doctor ne aakar checkup karne ke baad Patient ko delivery Room me turant le jane ka order dia.....
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Story will continue in Next update, which will be post very soon
Apne comments me meri Galtiya jarur btaye...

First of all for new story.....

Pehle hi update mein ek baat pata chal gayi ki aapke lekhan mein spelling mistakes nahi hain. Aur yahi pehli cheez hai jo readers ko story ki taraf attract karti hai....

Ab ladka Maa Kaali aur Mahadev ke aashirwaad se janm lene waala hai to clear hai ki sahi mein one man army banega ye....

Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai...

Awesome Update & Waiting for Next....

 

[Urvashi794]

First of all for new story.....

Pehle hi update mein ek baat pata chal gayi ki aapke lekhan mein spelling mistakes nahi hain. Aur yahi pehli cheez hai jo readers ko story ki taraf attract karti hai....

Ab ladka Maa Kaali aur Mahadev ke aashirwaad se janm lene waala hai to clear hai ki sahi mein one man army banega ye....

Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai...

Awesome Update & Waiting for Next....

Thanks for Encouraging me
I Wish to be update soon as possible

 

[Werewolf]

Thanks Warewolf

It's Werewolf!

 

[Urvashi794]

It's Werewolf!

Hein wolf kaha dekh lia aapne isme

 

[Werewolf]

Wolf kaha dekh liya as in!?
Werewolf is just my username.

 

[tpk]

nice

Update - 1

Sheharo ki bhidbahd se koso dur Himalayan ki unchi Pahadiyo me maujood ek Gufa me kuch Sadhu Sanyasi Log aaj ek vishesh pooja kar rhe the,

Wese to Inka daily routine hi tha Pooja path karna lekin aaj ki Pooja vishesh islie thi ki aaj "Dusshera" ka Tyohar tha, aur aaj ka din Sabhi jante hai ki
Andhere par Ujale ki jeet, Adharm par Dharm ki jeet ke roop me manaya jata hai,

Mukhya Sadhu ne Mahakali aur Parad Shivling ki Pooja Archana ke lie unke sammukh bethe hue mantrocharan jese hi shuru kia, usi waqt Mausam achanak Badalne Laga, Badalo ne aakar aasman ko Gher lia aur Tej Hawa ke sath Barish Girne lagi.

Par abtak Ye pooja ho kislie rahi hai uska pata nhi chala, Khair pooja karte hue Jab Do ghante se jyda Ka samay Beet gaya to Un mukhya Sadhu ne Sabse pehle Mata Mahakali ko Apne Lahu ki bheth chadai aur Paare se Bane (Parad Shivling) ka Dhudh se Abhishek kia,
Aur fir Sabhi Sadhuon ne Hawan kund me Ahuti di.

Jese hi Pooja samapt hui Mahakali ki Ankho se ek prakash punj nikal kar Hawan kund me samane laga, aur Thik isi Tarah se Ek prakash punj Shivling se bhi nikal kar Hawan Kund me Samane Laga, aur wha jakar Vo dono praksh punj Ekroop ho gaye

Aur fir bahut tej Gati se vo pRakash punj Hawan kund se nikal ke chal pada, Akash se hota hua vo aese dikhayi de rha tha jese ki koi Tara Tuta ho, Milo ki duri Second me Paar karta hua vo Shivling *Mathura* shehar ke Ek Private Hospital ke labour ward me soi Ek aurat ke Garbh me utar gaya.

Is dauran Sabhi hospital ke log Kisi Aghyat adrisya shakti ke adheen hokar Nind me ja chuke the,
Aur jese hi Vo Prakash punj Us soi Hui Maa ke Garbh me samaya unki ankhe khul gayi aur apne pet par Hath rakh ke vo dard se karah uthi....

Unki awaj sunkar Nurse bhagte hue aayi aur patient ki khrab halat dekhte hue usne doctor ko turant suchna di, Doctor ne aakar checkup karne ke baad Patient ko delivery Room me turant le jane ka order dia.....
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Story will continue in Next update, which will be post very soon
Apne comments me meri Galtiya jarur btaye...

nice start

 

[Jaguaar]

for starting the new threaddd. Umeed hai story complete hogi aur regular updates aayengee