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Adultery Alaadin ~ Naam to suna hoga (Re - loaded)

Should I have to continue this story


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Sabhi91

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Nurjaha--age..62..dadi

Husana--age..39..ammi
Neha--age..24..badi bahan
Ramiza--age..23.. majhli bahan
Sana-age..18..chhoti bahan
Aaladin--age..20..hero


Neha--ammi tum kuch kahti kyo nahi ho us ali ko.....kal meri saheli Ramiza ko hi raste me pakad liya tha...vo to allah ka sukar hi ki mai time par vaha pahuch gayi nahi to uska bhi muh kaala kar deta...ye awaara

Bhai yaha smjh nhi aaya Ramiza to ali ki behan hai na. To phir neha ne saheli kyu boli?
 

Suryaa

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Nurjaha--age..62..dadi

Husana--age..39..ammi
Neha--age..24..badi bahan
Ramiza--age..23.. majhli bahan
Sana-age..18..chhoti bahan
Aaladin--age..20..hero


Neha--ammi tum kuch kahti kyo nahi ho us ali ko.....kal meri saheli Ramiza ko hi raste me pakad liya tha...vo to allah ka sukar hi ki mai time par vaha pahuch gayi nahi to uska bhi muh kaala kar deta...ye awaara

Bhai yaha smjh nhi aaya Ramiza to ali ki behan hai na. To phir neha ne saheli kyu boli?
Y koe aur hai
 

Suryaa

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Story- Alaadin ~Naam to suna hoga(Reloaded)
Update~1
Location: Mumbai Central Jail

Jailor- Sabhi kaideyo ko pahadi ki taraf bhejo aaj khudae ka kaam vaha karna hai

Constable- Ji sahaib abhi bhej te hai

Y kah kr Constable jailor k cabin se bahar nikale kr kaidiyo k cells ki taraf chal diya aur vaha ja kr bola

Constable- Ari tum sabhi meri baate dhyaan se suno.....aaj tum logo ko pahadi ki taraf jana hai.....aaj khudae vaho hoge.....ab jalde jalde chalo varna jailor sahaib bhout ghusa honge

Y sune kr sabhi kaide auzar lekr pahadi ki taraf chl diye aur phire pathar thodnai lage

Unhai uhi kaam karti huvi lag bhag 3-4 ghante ho chuke the......es garmi mai itna kaam kr sabhi thak gae the par vo khuch kah nahi sakte the kyuki vo yaha kaide the aur apne kiye ki saza kate rahi thi.....pr en kideyo pr us upar waali ko thodi daya aa gae aur usnai lunch break kr diya.....lunch break hote hi sabhi kaide ek ek kr lunch karne ki leyi jane lage pr ek ladka bina ruke lagatar pathar thodta raha jesi dekh kr constable ko thoda ajeb laga to usnai kaha

Constable- Ari o ladke lunch ho gaya ha thujhe ghante sunae nahi de kya

Par us ladke nai koe jawab nahi diya

Constable- oh hero mai thuje se baat kr raha hu...sunae nahi deta hai kya

Par vo ladka khamos raha aur bs pathar thodnai mai laga raha

Es bar constable ko ghusa aa gaya aur vo us ladke k pass ja kr jor se bola

Constable- Thujhe sunae nahi deta ....mai kb se thujhe awaaz laga raha hu.....bahra hai kya

Es baar vo ladka bola

Ladka- Nahi ....na to mai bahra hu aur na bhuka

Constable- Dekh y haikde apne pass rakh.....lunch ho gaya hai....ja kr khana kha le....varna saam tk es dhup mai bhuke pet teri haikde bhi en pathro ke tarah tute jae ge

Constable ki es bate ko ansuna kr te huvi vo ladka pathar thodta raha...jesi dekh kr us constable ko ghusa aa gaya aur vo bola

Constable- Ja mar mujhe kya

y kah kr vo constable vaha se chala gaya

aur vo ladka lagatar pathar thodta gaya...... phire dhire dhire saari kaide wapas kaam pr lag gae.....din dhal gaya aur raat ho gae
phire sabhi kaideyo k sath vo ladka wapas apne cells mai chla gaya....tabhi un mai se ek kaide us ladke k pass aakr bola

Kaide- Bhai aap ka koe warte hai

Ladka- Nahi....kyu

Kaide- To aapne subh khana kyu nahi khaya

Ladka- Kyuki mujhe bhuk nahi hai

Kaide- Bhuk to sb ko lagte hai chahi vo ensan ho ya janwar khana to sb khate hai

Ladka- Nahi sab nahi

Kaide- Mtlb?

Ladka- Murda log kabhi khana nahi khate

Kaide- pr aap to zinda ho....dekho saas bhi le rahi ho

Ladka(hse kr)- ha bs saas he le rahai hi

Y bate sune kr vo kaide us ladke ki aakho mai dekh nai laga

y dekh kr us ladke ko hirane hoe aur vo bola

Ladka- Kya dekh raha hai

Kaide- dard....jo aapke dil me hai

es bate pr vo ladka khamos raha tabhi vo kaide bola

Kaide- Bhai....mai nahi janta aap ko y dard kise mila....aur apne esi apne dil mai kyu daba kr rakha hai.....pr meri maa kahte
hai....ki dard batnai se kam hota hai....to aap mujhe bataeyi ki aakhir kya huva jes ki karn aap ki y halate ho gae

Ladka(angaro bhari aakho se)- Janta hu pr....mai nahi chahta ki y dard kam ho

Use ladke ki aakho ki angare dekh kr vo kaide dar jata hi aur kahata hai

Kaide- tke hai bhai...agar aap nahi chahte to mate bataeyi.....pr aap kam se kam khana to kha legeyi....mujhe apna doste samje legeyi

Y bate sune kr us ladke ki aakho mai dard utar aaya aur vo bola

Ladka- mai koe rishta nahi banana chahta kyuki ek baar pahle bhi mai sb khuch kho chuka hu.....ab dobara kise ko nahi khona
chahta hu

Us ladke ki aakho ke dard ko us kaide tk pahochani mai der nahi lagi....aur vo kaide bol pada

Kaide- Tke hai bhai agr aap koe naya rishta nahi banana chate to na banae kam se kam khana to kha legeyi......plzz es bar na mte kahana

Ladka- Tke hai...vesi tumhara kya naam hai

Kaide- Kabir singh.....pr es nachiz koghar wali pyaar se kabir kah kr bulate hai...bake meri doste to mujhe pyaar se kuta kamina
chutiya khuch bhi kah kr bula lete hai....vesi aapka kya naam hai

Ladka- Ali - Naam mai kya rakha hai

Y kah kr dono canteen mai chlai gae


Aaaj k liye itna he
Aapka doste Suryaa
 
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Suryaa

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Awesome update
Ye nahi sudrega
Keep posting

nice one viree


Thanks bhai


waiting for update bhai.

Kaha ho bhai?

Bhai isko continue kigye

Bhai ispar hi chalu karo koi pura wala read karna chaiyega oh read kare

Aap isko continue karna chathe hai ya naya likna chathai hai

Bhai aap update start karo hum log aapke saath hai

plz update

ok bhai waiting

Bhai Start karo.....reader khud aa jaenge.....

waiting for Update....

Nurjaha--age..62..dadi

Husana--age..39..ammi
Neha--age..24..badi bahan
Ramiza--age..23.. majhli bahan
Sana-age..18..chhoti bahan
Aaladin--age..20..hero


Neha--ammi tum kuch kahti kyo nahi ho us ali ko.....kal meri saheli Ramiza ko hi raste me pakad liya tha...vo to allah ka sukar hi ki mai time par vaha pahuch gayi nahi to uska bhi muh kaala kar deta...ye awaara

Bhai yaha smjh nhi aaya Ramiza to ali ki behan hai na. To phir neha ne saheli kyu boli?
Dosto Alaadin loute aaya hai ek nae andaj mai
and story reloaded ho gae hai and pahla update bhi de diya hai....so esi padhe aur enjoy kare
and ha comment krke apna feedback jarur de
Aapka doste suryaa
and thanks to all for being so supportive
 

Suryaa

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Bhai ispar hi chalu karo koi pura wala read karna chaiyega oh read kare
First update release ho chuka aap read kr sakte hai
and umeed karuga raja bhai ki aap padh kr review jarur degay
Thanks for your support and be along
your friend suryaa
 
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Suryaa

सुन, हमसे कायदे में रहोंगे, तो फायदे में रहोगे😎।
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Aap isko continue karna chathe hai ya naya likna chathai hai
First update release ho chuka aap read kr sakte hai
and umeed karuga raja bhai ki aap padh kr review jarur degay
Thanks for your support and be along
your friend suryaa
 
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Suryaa

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Bhai Start karo.....reader khud aa jaenge.....

waiting for Update....
First update release ho chuka aap read kr sakte hai
and umeed karuga Hayaan bhai ki aap padh kr review jarur degay
Thanks for your support and be along
your friend suryaa
 
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सुन, हमसे कायदे में रहोंगे, तो फायदे में रहोगे😎।
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Nurjaha--age..62..dadi

Husana--age..39..ammi
Neha--age..24..badi bahan
Ramiza--age..23.. majhli bahan
Sana-age..18..chhoti bahan
Aaladin--age..20..hero


Neha--ammi tum kuch kahti kyo nahi ho us ali ko.....kal meri saheli Ramiza ko hi raste me pakad liya tha...vo to allah ka sukar hi ki mai time par vaha pahuch gayi nahi to uska bhi muh kaala kar deta...ye awaara

Bhai yaha smjh nhi aaya Ramiza to ali ki behan hai na. To phir neha ne saheli kyu boli?
First update release ho chuka aap read kr sakte hai
and umeed karuga raja bhai ki aap padh kr review jarur degay
Thanks for your support and be along
your friend suryaa
 
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