Fantasy ALADIN KA JINN? (LOOSER?)

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Aladin dheere aasman ki uchayiyo ko chune lagta hai....Aladin ke dar ki wajah sy pair kaap rhe the...Uske man main dar tha...
"Agar main gir gya toh main toh gya" ye soch sochkar uska bura haal tha...Usko aasman main thandi hawa lag rhi thi lekin dar ki wajah sy uska pasina nikal rha tha...Vhi dusri or YASMIN puri mastii main iss hawai sair ka aanand le rhi thi...Vo aladin ke chehre ko dekh rhi thi...Or aladin ki iss situation ko dekhke man hi man muskra rhi thi...Uska chehra uski muskrahat byan kar rha tha....
Yasmin(aladin ko dekhte hue)--- kya hua...Tum thik toh ho???
Aladin--- ggggg mmaainn thikkk hu...Uski jubaan bhi ladkhda rhi thi....
Yasmin-- mujhe nhi lag rha ki tum thik ho...Dekho tumko upar aasman main bhi kitna pasina aa rha hai....
Aladin--- nhi main thik hu...Vooo bssss mmuujhhhee uchayi sy dar lagta hai....
Yasmin(haste hue)---abhi sy dar lagne lga tumko toh...Kho toh vapas ghar chle???
Aladin--- nhi nhi itna bhi nhi lag rha...Vaise aapko dar nhi lag rha???
Yasmin --- nhi g..Main toh kbhi bhi kar leti hu hwai sair...Haa phli baar dar laga tha...Par ab ye mere liye baye haath ka khel hai....

Aladin uski baate sunkr chup ho jata hai...Or yasmin ko dekhne lagta hai...Yasmin ne red colour ka suit or black colour ki salwar phne hue thi...Jo uski khoobsurti ko or char-chand lga rhi thi...Aladin mano uski khubsurti main kho sa gya ho...Uske kaali aankhe,lambe kaale nagin ke jaise baal....Dekhne sy lag rha ho jaise aasman sy koi chand churakar usko aladin ke pass chhod gya ho....Aladin inhi baato main khoya hua...
Tbhi bhut joro sy hwa chlne lagti hai...Iss wajah sy kaleen bhi piche ki or hatne lagta hai....Isss achanak chli aandhi sy aladin chouk jata hai....
Aladin--- yyeeeee kyyyaa haaiiii...Abhiiii tttooohhh mooouussaamm saaahhiii thhhaaa....Aacchankk sssyyy yeeee aannddhhiii kkaahaa sy aaaggyii...???
Yasmin--- hoshhiyyyaar rrrhhnnaa...Yyee kkooii kkhhttraa haii....
Vo dono baat hi kar rhe the ki kisi ke bhut zoro sy hasne ki aawaz aati hai...Ye hasnee ki aawaz itni bhyanak thi ki aladin ki bhi hawa khrab ho gyi...Usne yasmin ka haath pakad liya....
Tbhi aasman main ek Aakriti(shape) si ubharkar aane lagti hai...Or thodi hi der main ek lamba,chhoda, ek kale rang ka jinn unke saamne hota hai....Uske sar par do sieng ki tarah dande the...Uski aankhe Lal surkh lohe ki tarah aag ugal rhi thi...Uski aawaz itni khofnaak thi aadmi khof ki wajah sy hi mar jaye...
Aladin ka bura haal tha...Uska dil zoro sy dhadak rha tha...Usne yasmin ka haath bhi bhut zoro sy pakad liya...Lekin yasmin aese hi khdi thi..Jaise kuch hua hi naa ho....
TBHI VO JINN TEZ GARAJTI AAWAZ MAIN BOLTA HAI---- AEEE Aadamzado tum kon ho??
Aladin(thodi himmat karte hue)--- MAIN ALADIN hu or ye Yasmin hai....tum hamse kya chahte ho...???
JINN--- MAIN "gira" pahadi ka pahredar hu...?? Yha koi bina meri izazat ke dakhil nhi ho sakta.....
Aladin--- hamara gira pahadi par phuchna bhut zaruri hai....
JINN--- MAIN KISI AJNABI KO ANDAR DAKHIL HONE KI IJAJAT nhi de sakta....
TBHI YASMIN USS JINN KE SAMNE aati hai....Or usko ek "Aanghuthi" dikhati hai....
Jisko dekhkar uss JINN KE CHERE PAR ek khoff sa ubhar jata hai....
JINN--- MUJHE MAAF KRE...maine tum logo ko pahchana nhi....aap dono andar jaa sakte hai...
Ye bolkar vo GAYAB HO JATA HAI...Aladin jaise pagal sa ho jata hai...Vo bass yasmin ko ghure jaa rha tha...Usne abhi bhi yasmin ka haath pakda hua tha.....
Yasmin(haste hue)--- ab bass kro..Mera haath todne ka irada hai...??
Aladin uski baat sunkar sharmindgi sy uska haath chhod deta hai...Vo abhi bhi yasmin ko dekhe jaa rha tha...
Yasmin--- kya hua..?? Tum thik toh ho...???
Aladin--- yee sab kya tha...Matlb vo jinn tumhare bolne par hi yha sy chla gya...Kya tha uss anghuthi main...?

Yasmin(haste hue)--- arre budhhu vo anghuti budhi amma ki thi...Unhone mujhe di toh...Or ye bhi bta diya tha ki...Ye gira pahadi ka pahredar ko dikhani pdegi....Toh isiliye maine usko dikha di...Or vo chla gyaYe baat karte Karte vo "gira pahadi" ke upar phuch jate hai....
Yasmeen kaleen ko niche pahadi par utarti hai....pahadi par phuchkar vo kaleen ko jadoo sy gayab kar deti hai...Aladin uss pahadi ko dekhkr soch rha tha Ki" main kis duniya main aa gya..Kitni pyari khushbu hai...Har taraf phool khile the...Yha par rang_birangi panchii ud rhe the....Aladin bss ye sab dekh hi rha tha...
Yasmin--- jldi kro aladin..Hmare pass jyada samai nhi hai...Humko suraj niklne sy phle ghar phuchna hai....Jaldi sy vo nishan dekho...Phr humko uss disha main hi aage badhna hai....
Aladin bhi chupchap niche sar ko jhukakr nishan dhundhne lagta hai....Yasmin bhi kbhi idhr toh kbhi udhar vo Disha ka nishan dhund rhi thi....Vo nishan ko dhundte dhunte kab aladin ke karib aa gyi...Usko khud bhi nhi pta chla.....Aladin bhi nishan dhundhe main puri tarah masroof tha....Tbhi aladin ko ek nishan dikhayi diya..Vo uss nishan ki tarf bhaga....Yasmin ne bhi vo nishan dekh liya...Vo bhi uss taraf dodti hui aayi...Dono ne ek dusre ko nhi dekha...Tbhi dono ki takkar hui bhut zoro ki....Jiska natiza ye nikla ki...Yasmin aladin ki baho main aa gyi...Aladin sy jaise hi vo takrayi uska pair ladkhdaya...Vo niche girne hi vali thi...Aladin ne usko thaam liya....Aladin ke haatho ne uski kamar ko pakda hua tha....Aladin ka dil zoro sy dhdkna shuru ho gya...Vo yasmin ki aankho main dekh rha tha...Yasmin bhi uski aankhoo main dekh rhi thi...Phr vo aladin ki baaho sy niklkr khdi ho jati hai...Aladin bhi piche hat jata hai...Vo abhi bhi yasmin ko dekh rha tha.
Badle main bss yasmin ke chahre par muskaan thi...
Yasmin-- maaf krna vo galtii syy..
Aladin---arre nhi isme aapki koi galti nhi hai...Maine hi dhyan nhi diya....
Dekho kya ye hi vo nishan hai..???
Yasmin uss nishan ke pass jati hai...Jo kuch aesa tha....or uspar kuch likha tha jisko yasmin bade dhyan sy pdhti hai....
Aladin-- kya likha hai ispar..???
yasmin-- ispr "Vadiye janjal" main Dakhil hone ki dua likhi hai...Iska matlb ye hai ki ye vhi nishan hai....
Ab chlo jaldi...Iss taraf chalte hai....
Vo dono kaleen par phir sy sawar ho jate hai...Or chal padte hai...Uss nishan ki taraf chal padte hai....Shaam ho chuki thi...Andhera hone main kuch hi waqt baqi tha....
Aladin ko ab iss hawai sair main maja aane lga tha....Usko dar mano kahi or udd gya ho...
Aladin Yasmin sy milkar khda tha...Jisse unke haath baar-baar ek dusre sy chuu rhe the...Aladin upar aasman sy niche jameen ka nazara le rha tha...Usko har taraf hariyali hi dikh rhi thi....Usko upar aasman main chalti hawa use sharir ko madhosh kar rhi thi...Usne kabhi sapne main bhi nhi socha tha..Ki vo kbhi aese aasman main ud sakta hai....Dheere dheere sham khtam ho jati hai...Or uski jagah madhosh karne vali raat le leti hai...Aasman main chand chamak rha tha....aladin or yasmin khamoshi sy apne safar ki or badhe jaa rhe the...
Aladin(thoda dukhi hokr)---- isse toh main akela aa jata...Kam sy kam bore hone sy toh bach jata...
Yasmin kuch bhi nhi bolti bss khdi rhti hai....
Aladin----- yarr aese thodi hota hai...Agar hum log kuch baat-cheet kre toh sayad safar jyada jaldi kat jaye.....
Yasmin---- acha kya baat cheet karni hai...Bolo???
Aladin----phle sachiii bolu toh mujhe tumse dar lag rha hai...
Yasmin thoda haskr muh bnate hue---- acha main koi bhoot, chudail wghaira hu??? Jo mujhse darte ho...
Aladin--- arree nhi nhi...Vo bsss bsss vo aap jadoo jo karti ho....Usse dar lagta hai...Kahi maine kuch galat kah diya toh tum pta nhi apne jadoo sy mujhko kb ulta latka do hawa main....
Aladin ki baate sunkar yasmin ke chehre par hasi aa jati hai....Vo hasti hui aese lag rhi thi jaise koi phool bkher rha ho....Uska safed chehra chand ki iss thandi roshni main chamak rha tha...Aasman main chalti tez thandi hawao ki wajah sy uske gaal bhi kisi seb(apple) ki tarah lal ho gye the....aladin bss aankhe phade uss hasti hui khoobsurti ko dekh rha tha....
Aladin ko apne or dekhta hua...Yasmin bhi dekh leti hai....
Tbhi yasmin (khaskr halke haste hue)---- fiqr mat kro...Tumko kuch nhi karne vali....Tumko jo bolna hai..Bol sakte ho.....
Aladin---- aap bhut khoobsurat ho....
Yasmin----shukriya....Par main itni bhi sundar nhi hu....
Aladin--- main kisiki jhuti tariff nhi karta...Jo bolna hota hai bol deta hu....
Yasmin--- acha g maska lga rhe ho....
Aladin---- nhi main kyu bhala maska lgane lga....
Tbhi ek jagah jakr kaleen ruk jaata hai.....

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Aladin dheere aasman ki uchayiyo ko chune lagta hai....Aladin ke dar ki wajah sy pair kaap rhe the...Uske man main dar tha...
"Agar main gir gya toh main toh gya" ye soch sochkar uska bura haal tha...Usko aasman main thandi hawa lag rhi thi lekin dar ki wajah sy uska pasina nikal rha tha...Vhi dusri or YASMIN puri mastii main iss hawai sair ka aanand le rhi thi...Vo aladin ke chehre ko dekh rhi thi...Or aladin ki iss situation ko dekhke man hi man muskra rhi thi...Uska chehra uski muskrahat byan kar rha tha....
Yasmin(aladin ko dekhte hue)--- kya hua...Tum thik toh ho???
Aladin--- ggggg mmaainn thikkk hu...Uski jubaan bhi ladkhda rhi thi....
Yasmin-- mujhe nhi lag rha ki tum thik ho...Dekho tumko upar aasman main bhi kitna pasina aa rha hai....
Aladin--- nhi main thik hu...Vooo bssss mmuujhhhee uchayi sy dar lagta hai....
Yasmin(haste hue)---abhi sy dar lagne lga tumko toh...Kho toh vapas ghar chle???
Aladin--- nhi nhi itna bhi nhi lag rha...Vaise aapko dar nhi lag rha???
Yasmin --- nhi g..Main toh kbhi bhi kar leti hu hwai sair...Haa phli baar dar laga tha...Par ab ye mere liye baye haath ka khel hai....

Aladin uski baate sunkr chup ho jata hai...Or yasmin ko dekhne lagta hai...Yasmin ne red colour ka suit or black colour ki salwar phne hue thi...Jo uski khoobsurti ko or char-chand lga rhi thi...Aladin mano uski khubsurti main kho sa gya ho...Uske kaali aankhe,lambe kaale nagin ke jaise baal....Dekhne sy lag rha ho jaise aasman sy koi chand churakar usko aladin ke pass chhod gya ho....Aladin inhi baato main khoya hua...
Tbhi bhut joro sy hwa chlne lagti hai...Iss wajah sy kaleen bhi piche ki or hatne lagta hai....Isss achanak chli aandhi sy aladin chouk jata hai....
Aladin--- yyeeeee kyyyaa haaiiii...Abhiiii tttooohhh mooouussaamm saaahhiii thhhaaa....Aacchankk sssyyy yeeee aannddhhiii kkaahaa sy aaaggyii...???
Yasmin--- hoshhiyyyaar rrrhhnnaa...Yyee kkooii kkhhttraa haii....
Vo dono baat hi kar rhe the ki kisi ke bhut zoro sy hasne ki aawaz aati hai...Ye hasnee ki aawaz itni bhyanak thi ki aladin ki bhi hawa khrab ho gyi...Usne yasmin ka haath pakad liya....
Tbhi aasman main ek Aakriti(shape) si ubharkar aane lagti hai...Or thodi hi der main ek lamba,chhoda, ek kale rang ka jinn unke saamne hota hai....Uske sar par do sieng ki tarah dande the...Uski aankhe Lal surkh lohe ki tarah aag ugal rhi thi...Uski aawaz itni khofnaak thi aadmi khof ki wajah sy hi mar jaye...
Aladin ka bura haal tha...Uska dil zoro sy dhadak rha tha...Usne yasmin ka haath bhi bhut zoro sy pakad liya...Lekin yasmin aese hi khdi thi..Jaise kuch hua hi naa ho....
TBHI VO JINN TEZ GARAJTI AAWAZ MAIN BOLTA HAI---- AEEE Aadamzado tum kon ho??
Aladin(thodi himmat karte hue)--- MAIN ALADIN hu or ye Yasmin hai....tum hamse kya chahte ho...???
JINN--- MAIN "gira" pahadi ka pahredar hu...?? Yha koi bina meri izazat ke dakhil nhi ho sakta.....
Aladin--- hamara gira pahadi par phuchna bhut zaruri hai....
JINN--- MAIN KISI AJNABI KO ANDAR DAKHIL HONE KI IJAJAT nhi de sakta....
TBHI YASMIN USS JINN KE SAMNE aati hai....Or usko ek "Aanghuthi" dikhati hai....
Jisko dekhkar uss JINN KE CHERE PAR ek khoff sa ubhar jata hai....
JINN--- MUJHE MAAF KRE...maine tum logo ko pahchana nhi....aap dono andar jaa sakte hai...
Ye bolkar vo GAYAB HO JATA HAI...Aladin jaise pagal sa ho jata hai...Vo bass yasmin ko ghure jaa rha tha...Usne abhi bhi yasmin ka haath pakda hua tha.....
Yasmin(haste hue)--- ab bass kro..Mera haath todne ka irada hai...??
Aladin uski baat sunkar sharmindgi sy uska haath chhod deta hai...Vo abhi bhi yasmin ko dekhe jaa rha tha...
Yasmin--- kya hua..?? Tum thik toh ho...???
Aladin--- yee sab kya tha...Matlb vo jinn tumhare bolne par hi yha sy chla gya...Kya tha uss anghuthi main...?

Yasmin(haste hue)--- arre budhhu vo anghuti budhi amma ki thi...Unhone mujhe di toh...Or ye bhi bta diya tha ki...Ye gira pahadi ka pahredar ko dikhani pdegi....Toh isiliye maine usko dikha di...Or vo chla gyaYe baat karte Karte vo "gira pahadi" ke upar phuch jate hai....
Yasmeen kaleen ko niche pahadi par utarti hai....pahadi par phuchkar vo kaleen ko jadoo sy gayab kar deti hai...Aladin uss pahadi ko dekhkr soch rha tha Ki" main kis duniya main aa gya..Kitni pyari khushbu hai...Har taraf phool khile the...Yha par rang_birangi panchii ud rhe the....Aladin bss ye sab dekh hi rha tha...
Yasmin--- jldi kro aladin..Hmare pass jyada samai nhi hai...Humko suraj niklne sy phle ghar phuchna hai....Jaldi sy vo nishan dekho...Phr humko uss disha main hi aage badhna hai....
Aladin bhi chupchap niche sar ko jhukakr nishan dhundhne lagta hai....Yasmin bhi kbhi idhr toh kbhi udhar vo Disha ka nishan dhund rhi thi....Vo nishan ko dhundte dhunte kab aladin ke karib aa gyi...Usko khud bhi nhi pta chla.....Aladin bhi nishan dhundhe main puri tarah masroof tha....Tbhi aladin ko ek nishan dikhayi diya..Vo uss nishan ki tarf bhaga....Yasmin ne bhi vo nishan dekh liya...Vo bhi uss taraf dodti hui aayi...Dono ne ek dusre ko nhi dekha...Tbhi dono ki takkar hui bhut zoro ki....Jiska natiza ye nikla ki...Yasmin aladin ki baho main aa gyi...Aladin sy jaise hi vo takrayi uska pair ladkhdaya...Vo niche girne hi vali thi...Aladin ne usko thaam liya....Aladin ke haatho ne uski kamar ko pakda hua tha....Aladin ka dil zoro sy dhdkna shuru ho gya...Vo yasmin ki aankho main dekh rha tha...Yasmin bhi uski aankhoo main dekh rhi thi...Phr vo aladin ki baaho sy niklkr khdi ho jati hai...Aladin bhi piche hat jata hai...Vo abhi bhi yasmin ko dekh rha tha.
Badle main bss yasmin ke chahre par muskaan thi...
Yasmin-- maaf krna vo galtii syy..
Aladin---arre nhi isme aapki koi galti nhi hai...Maine hi dhyan nhi diya....
Dekho kya ye hi vo nishan hai..???
Yasmin uss nishan ke pass jati hai...Jo kuch ➡➡➡ aesa tha....or uspar kuch likha tha jisko yasmin bade dhyan sy pdhti hai....
Aladin-- kya likha hai ispar..???
yasmin-- ispr "Vadiye janjal" main Dakhil hone ki dua likhi hai...Iska matlb ye hai ki ye vhi nishan hai....
Ab chlo jaldi...Iss taraf chalte hai....
Vo dono kaleen par phir sy sawar ho jate hai...Or chal padte hai...Uss nishan ki taraf chal padte hai....Shaam ho chuki thi...Andhera hone main kuch hi waqt baqi tha....
Aladin ko ab iss hawai sair main maja aane lga tha....Usko dar mano kahi or udd gya ho...
Aladin Yasmin sy milkar khda tha...Jisse unke haath baar-baar ek dusre sy chuu rhe the...Aladin upar aasman sy niche jameen ka nazara le rha tha...Usko har taraf hariyali hi dikh rhi thi....Usko upar aasman main chalti hawa use sharir ko madhosh kar rhi thi...Usne kabhi sapne main bhi nhi socha tha..Ki vo kbhi aese aasman main ud sakta hai....Dheere dheere sham khtam ho jati hai...Or uski jagah madhosh karne vali raat le leti hai...Aasman main chand chamak rha tha....aladin or yasmin khamoshi sy apne safar ki or badhe jaa rhe the...
Aladin(thoda dukhi hokr)---- isse toh main akela aa jata...Kam sy kam bore hone sy toh bach jata...
Yasmin kuch bhi nhi bolti bss khdi rhti hai....
Aladin----- yarr aese thodi hota hai...Agar hum log kuch baat-cheet kre toh sayad safar jyada jaldi kat jaye.....
Yasmin---- acha kya baat cheet karni hai...Bolo???
Aladin----phle sachiii bolu toh mujhe tumse dar lag rha hai...
Yasmin thoda haskr muh bnate hue---- acha main koi bhoot, chudail wghaira hu??? Jo mujhse darte ho...
Aladin--- arree nhi nhi...Vo bsss bsss vo aap jadoo jo karti ho....Usse dar lagta hai...Kahi maine kuch galat kah diya toh tum pta nhi apne jadoo sy mujhko kb ulta latka do hawa main....
Aladin ki baate sunkar yasmin ke chehre par hasi aa jati hai....Vo hasti hui aese lag rhi thi jaise koi phool bkher rha ho....Uska safed chehra chand ki iss thandi roshni main chamak rha tha...Aasman main chalti tez thandi hawao ki wajah sy uske gaal bhi kisi seb(apple) ki tarah lal ho gye the....aladin bss aankhe phade uss hasti hui khoobsurti ko dekh rha tha....
Aladin ko apne or dekhta hua...Yasmin bhi dekh leti hai....
Tbhi yasmin (khaskr halke haste hue)---- fiqr mat kro...Tumko kuch nhi karne vali....Tumko jo bolna hai..Bol sakte ho.....
Aladin---- aap bhut khoobsurat ho....
Yasmin----shukriya....Par main itni bhi sundar nhi hu....
Aladin--- main kisiki jhuti tariff nhi karta...Jo bolna hota hai bol deta hu....
Yasmin--- acha g maska lga rhe ho....
Aladin---- nhi main kyu bhala maska lgane lga....
Tbhi ek jagah jakr kaleen ruk jaata hai.....

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