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Kuchnahi24

त्वयि मे'नन्या विश्वरूपा
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Thank you sooo much Kuchnahi24

Ab ek bat se saara such jaan jayga to kahani me maja kaisa socho jara aap kahani me jab suspense khul jaay saare to bachega kya just thinking
सब क्वेश्चन मार्क है डार्लिंग अपने मन मैं उठ रहे सवाल है।

सत्य वचन कहानी मे मज़ा तो धीरे धीरे जब राज़ खुलते जाएँगे और उसी की वजह से अब अभय के विचार भी बदलने लगेंगे ।
अब तो इंतज़ार रहेगा अगले अपडेट का 👍🏻
बाक़ी स्टोरी सीरियस वे मे आगे बढ़ती हुई बड़ी अच्छी लग रही है भाई ।
 
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"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
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"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
6,827
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Idhar satya babu abhay ko jo in 10 salon me hua ha wo bata rahe han sath me ye bhi ki sandhya ka kya hal hua tha uske jane ke bad lekin abhay ke man me abhi bhi nafrat ha apni maa ke prati lekin ab uske man me shak ka kida aa gaya ha ki kya sach me uski maa vaisi thi jaisa wo samajh raha ha ya fir sachhai kuchh or ha lagta ha ab abhay sachhai ka pata lagaye jisse abhay ir sandhya ke bich ki duria kam ho sake
Bilkul bhai yahe soch ke update ready ker rha tha mai
 

DEVIL MAXIMUM

"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
6,827
30,108
204
Idhar syra ke sath bhi yahi hal ha abhay ka sayra ne abhay ko sachhai batane ki koshish ki lekin abhay bina sune hi nikal gaya
Mujhe eeasa karna jaroori laga kahani ke leye agar abhi se sara suspense poore ter khul jayga to maja kaise aayga story me
Waise bhi Abhay me taqat jaroor hai lekin sath he ek eeasa baccha bhi hai jise Maa ka pyar nahi mila lekin Nafrat dil me beintehaa hai uske baki aap bhi samj skte ho bat ko
 

DEVIL MAXIMUM

"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
6,827
30,108
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Idhar ye haweli ki mysterious lady na jane kon ha jo sandhya se bahut nafrat karti ha or uska sab kuchh barbad karna chhahti ha or wo jis admi se se bat kar rahi ha isne hi kamran ko tapkaya ha lekin ye lady kiai begunah ko saja nahi dena chhahti matlab ise sirf sandya se badla chhahiye kher lekin ise sandya se itni nafrat kyon ha dekhte han or ye lady lalita or malti me se hi koi lagti ha kyonki haweli me in donon ke siwa or kon lady ha kher dekhte han kin ha ye
Jaroor pata chlega bhai us leady ka bhi sath he kon se nafrat leke baithe hai dil me apne wo leady ye bhi pata chlega
Koshish karoga jaldi pata chle is bare me sbko
 

DEVIL MAXIMUM

"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
6,827
30,108
204
Ab is admi ka bhi boss ha jo iske uper betha ha jo ki sab karwa raha ha ye bhi us khandhar ke raj ka pata karne me tula ha lekin abhi tak kisi ke hath kuchh nahi laga
Bhai kahani me thoda twist hona jaroori hai her bar kahani me family ka he villain paya gaya hai ab jaroori to nahi kahani me villain Ghar ka he ho ghar ke bhara bhi ho skta hai na
 

DEVIL MAXIMUM

"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
6,827
30,108
204
Ab idhar king or shalini ji ko in sabka pata pad gaya ha lagta ha king thakur sahab ko achhi tarah janta tha isliye ye sab kar raha ha isliye abhay ko power di ha front me to abhay ha lekin pichhe se kaman king sambhale hue ha or jo king ne us property ke kagaj ki bat ki shalini ji se jiska pata khud sandya ko nahi ha ki uske pas kitni property ha lagat ha usi ke liye ye ladaiyan ho rahi ha ir us property ka iklota waris ha abhay isliye chandni abhi tak un kagajon ko chhupaye hue ha kyonki use bhi pata ha ki ye raj bahar aa gaya to bawal ho jana ha
Maine latest update me ye scene dala hai ise read kerke kuch logo ko lagta hai ki Hero chutiya hai jabki baki ke characters kam ker Rhee hai
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Bhai kya her kahani me Hero he sab kuch krte rehta hai Manta ho mai lekin ek he cheej read kerke bor nahi hote log kya kehna hai aapka is bare me
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dev61901 bhai kisi kahani me sirf Hero he sab kuch kre or baki ke dost , bhen bus dekhte rhe eeasa jaroori to nahi agar story me apko sabhi character ka role behter dekhne ko mile to aapke hisaab se kaise lgega aapko
 

DEVIL MAXIMUM

"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
6,827
30,108
204
Kher ek bat ha khandhar me ausa kya ha jo in sabko 10 salon me bhi dhundne se nahi mila khajana bhi nahi ha lagat ha udhar jo koi bhi raj ha wo sirf abhay ka wait kar raha ha kyonki lagta ha abhay hi uski chhabi ha isliye abhi tak kisi ko nahi mila kyonki sab uske pichhe pade han jaise wo chij milte hi duniya jit lenge
Mai bhi dund raha ho bhai aapko kya lagta hai kya ho skta hai us Khander me eeasa batana jroor lekin personal message kya pata kam ki cheej mil jaay to story me use ker looga usko😉😉
 

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"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
6,827
30,108
204
Idhar last me raman ko urmila ke sath dekh liya ha in charon ne dekhte han ki ab abhay ke man me wo shanka dur hoti ha ya nahi ki us din bagichhe me uski maa nahi ye urmila thi kya pata raj bata de ye bat ab abhay ko jo abhay ko sab wapas sochne per majbur kar de
Raman se shuruvat Kari hai Raaz kholne ki shuruaat smjo ise aap Bhai
Ha agar kuch idea ho isko leke to personal me batana
 
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