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Nice start...
Story to achi lag rahi h aur start bi 2050 m..
Is time hero alien ki mother ship pr power source ko dhund rahe h Jo shayad mil bi gaya h....
Waise background story jyada pata Ni chali h aur direct war zone m utare h jisse already kafi population khathm ho chuki h Earth ki...
Well let's see..
All d best. Keep going...
Story to achi lag rahi h aur start bi 2050 m..
Is time hero alien ki mother ship pr power source ko dhund rahe h Jo shayad mil bi gaya h....
Waise background story jyada pata Ni chali h aur direct war zone m utare h jisse already kafi population khathm ho chuki h Earth ki...
Well let's see..
All d best. Keep going...
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Hero major akash hay asli kahni 2019 se suru Hoga Time reverse Tpye them hay game containt jese status dalne Ka socha hay
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Next update me doubt clear hojayega.
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Acha chalo next ka intzar rahegaHero major akash hay asli kahni 2019 se suru Hoga Time reverse Tpye them hay game containt jese status dalne Ka socha hay
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Next update me doubt clear hojayega.
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Update 2
Pichle update me app ne padha major akash ek special mission per aliens ke ship me apna ves badal Kar unki power source destroy Karne keliye Gaye the.
Unka ek dost Captain S ko kiss trah power source ka location mill jata hay aur wo 2 din ke bad uspar attack Karne ki plan banate hay.
Abb age
Meeting for attack plan
Akash : dusre Captain se jese app tino ko pata hay Captain S ne power source ka location pata kr liya hay.
Captain 1 : han sir hum ne ye vi pata Kiya hay ki waha ke security 4 sift me kam Karti hay.
Captain 2 : jab 3rd sift ke guards apni jagah badlte hay to wo sab se lambe time lete hay ku ki uss wakt commander DRAKO kudh squad ki inspection karte hay.
Captain S : 18:00 in space time, per 3rd squad apni sift change karte hay hame total 15min milenge surprise attack ke liye.
Akash : to thik hay hum iss waqt hi attack karenge sare Captains Apne Apne soldier ko stand by mode pe rekh dijiye hum next day 18:00 pe power source pe attack karenge.
(Note akash ko milake ye total 16 log the 4 commanding officers 12 soldiers)
(Space time earth ke time se bohat fark hay space me time earth ke time se slow flow hota hay ex: hum sun se jitna dur hote jayenge hamara time earth ke time se utna slow hota Jayega)
(Time har jagah same flow hota hay lekin hame alag mehsus hota hay
TIME NEVER STOPS FOR ANYONE)
17:55 sab log operation ke liye ready the jese hi time 18:00 Hoga jab guard sift change Kar rahe honge hum apni chupi hue jagah se uss location per attack kar denge.
Ham jub apni chupi hue jagah se ader ke aur gay to hame waha ek vi soldier Nahi Mila ye Dekh ke mujhe Kuch Kuch doubts hone lage.
Captain 1 : sir mujhe Kuch gadbad lag rahi hay hame Ander ate hue ek vi guards najar Nahi aye.
Captain 2 : Lagta ajj aliens ke Kuch problem hogaya hay iss liye sayad guards kum hay.
Akash : ase Nahi hoskata agar problem Hoga to vi wo apni sabse important Jaga ko ese hi Bina guards ke Nahi chod ke jayenge.
Captain S : sir wase vi hame guards se kya Karna hame jald se jald power source tabh Karke yaha se Nikal Jana chaye. Ye to Acha hua ki guards Nahi hay yah par.
Fir Captain 2 aur S milke jaldi mission complete Karke yaha Nikal ne ke liye bolte hay
Akash : Kuch kahna chata tha par mission complete Karne keliye usne aur jayda Kuch socha Nahi aur age badhne lage.
Hum power source ke pass pahuch ne par Captain 2 aur S ke sath aye soldier power source per nuckclear bomb lagane lage aur Captain 1 ke soldiers protective shield hatane lage taki jayada se jayda damage Kar sake unke power source ko.
Akash: apni soldier ke sath wo apni pur guards pe tha ku ki use ye situation Kuch ajib lag Raha tha itne salo ka battle experience use chila chila Kar kah rahe ta ajj to Teri gand fatne Bali hay.
Captain 1: sir hamne code decode kardiya hay force field 1 min me disable ho jayega.
Tabhi uss room me ek sath 50 gurads Ander ate hay.
Ye Dekh ke akash sochta hay lagi re lagi ajj to ye gand fad denge.
Akash : sab log cover lelo aur open fire Karo samne darko ko Dekh ke sochta hay ye squad inspection chod ke yaha kya kr Raha hay.
Tabhi dusre aur se.
(Aliens ka language hamare language se alag hay wo universal translator use karte hay jiss se hum unki bat samajh sake)
Alien leader : Tum sab cuho ki itni himat mere DARKO ke ship me gus Gaye.
Akash : himat to Tumne hamre Dekhi kaha hay himat wo thi jab ham tumhare queen ki Lene ki socha tha wo vi tumhare ghrah per.
Darko : Abe sale kute ki aulad apna jaban hilana band kr Nahi to Teri jaban kich Lunga.
Akash sochne Lagta kese vi Karke ye 1 min darko ko roko na hay taki force field disable hojaye
Akash : abe 50 admi Apne sath lake kya mardangi dikhata hay himat hay to mujh se akle me mukabila kr tere gand fad ke rakh dunga.
Drako Apne admio ko issra karta hay aur khud akele age bad jata akash se vidne.
Akash to kab se ise moke ka talash me tha akash ke najre bohat tej hochuki body Pura foulad ka DNA integration se.
Akash suddenly drako ke uper jump Kar ke ek rakh ke seta hay Uske muh per drako 2,3 kadam piche hat jata hay par use jayda koi chot Nahi lagi thi
Ye Dekh ke akash chok jata hay Uske attak se ek kharoch tak Nahi aya tha drako ko fir drako apna ek pair utha ke akash ko ek lat Marta hay jise wo durjake piche ek diwar pe takrata hay isse akash ko kafi chot lagti hay
Akash us jagah se khada hoke Apne app ko saval Kar drako ke face pe apni kick ki barsat Kar deta hay ek kick pe dusre kick first kick se jayada takatwar dusra kick pichle kick ke force use Karke dusre kick yese pure 12 kick Marne ke bad wo ruk jata hay.
Drako ko sirf choti Moti chot aye thi use se Apne mu se khon thoke ke bad wo akash ko ek jor dar punch Marta hay jiss se akash block Karne ki kosish karta hay par na kamyab hojata hay.
Akash ab apni jeb se ek siram Nikal ke pijata hay ye siram DNA ko jagane ke liye use hota hay fir wo pahle se jayada takatwar hojata hay
Iss bar akash drako per direct hamla Nahi karta Uske attack ke intejar Karne laga jab drako ne running smash(dod Kar apni body se dusre ko take marna) use Kiya tab akash toda piche hat ke Apne sari takt apne right hand me lakar ek upper jab laga Diya, drako Ka momentum se jatka bohat jor se laga drako ko aur ek filp ke sath wo piche ja gira.
Ab tak force field disable hocuki thi
Akash : sorry dost tumhara time khatm hua fir milenge in next life ye khete hua akash ne bomb Ka switch on kr Diya fir kkkkkaaaaabbbbooommmmm............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Esa Kuch Nahi hua bomb phata hi Nahi
Piche se lessor gun firing ki abaj aye jab akash piche muda to piche Ka najara Dekh ke wo hairan hogaya.
Piche Captain 2 aur S ke soldier ne Captain 1 aur uski soldier aur akash ki soldiers ko lesser gun se upar phocha chuke the.
Captain S : tujhe kya laga hum yaha par tere sath sahid hone aye hay Nahi Mr akash tum ek dum galat ho.
Akash : ese ku kya ye sirf mere sath Nahi pure manab jati ke sath dhoka hay aur Captain 2 tum vi iss plan me samil ho!!!!
Captain 2 : Tsk tsk sir app kitne vole hay kisko apni Jan payri Nahi Hoti hay aur fir insan to wese vi har Raha hay me agar aliens ki thodi madad Kar Diya to meri jindegi sabar Jayega.
Captain S : Dhoka hahahaha ye sabd tumhre mu se shoba Nahi deta major akash Mera DNA score tum se adhik tha fir vi un salo budho ne tumhe major Bana Diya me usi din soch liya tum sab per varosa Karna hi bekar hay.
Akash : dkhoke baj kamine me tujhe jinda Nahi chodunga ye khete hue Captain S ke aur vagne laga.
Captain S : lesser gun se akash ke dono pair per fir ker deta hay itni vi kya jaldi hay Marne ki thoda sabra Karo tumhe vi baki sab members ke pass vej dunga fir Teri masuka ke sath me ayse karunga.
Akash ye sunke bohat guse me ajata hay aur vag Kar Captain S ki gala pad leta hay
Akash : me tujhe Uske liye jinda Nahi chodunga kamine.
Tabhi piche se ek power beem ake akash ke Hart ko Lagta hay aur wo age Jake girta hay.
Captain S : sukriya drako meri Jan bacha ne ke liye.
Drako : isme konsi badi bat hey Tumne to hamra itna bar madad Kiya hay warna purtvi per attack itni jaldi khatm Nahi hota.
Akash ye sun ke chok jata hay iss se ye pata Chalta hay ki ye pahli bar Nahi hay jab Captain S ne pure manab jati ko dhoka Diya hay par ab wo Kuch Kar Nahi shakta wo kud mot ke mu me tha.
Captain S : Sahi suna Tumne akash wo me hi tha Jo hamare sare mission ke detail aliens ko deta Raha marte marte ye vi Jan le wo me hi tha jisne Dr. Arjun ko mara tha warna wo DNA Ka second evolution me successful hojata hahahaha
Ye Dr. arjun ek scientists tha jisne ek bar akash ki aur uski gf ki Jan bachaya tha.
Captain S : kese lagraha hay apni sari umid kho Kar ab Tu vi bohat jald upar wale ke pass pohach Jayega itna keh ker wo apna lesser gun akash ke aur tan deta hay.
Akash : ek kamina smile de Kar sale mujhe ajj pata chale Tujhe ku Nahi major banya gya ku ki tere Iman me hi khot hay me to marunga hi sath me tum sab ko lejunga.
Ise pahle koi Kuch Kar pata akash power source ke aur kud jata hay akash lete lete kafi samay se apni sari power ektha Kar Raha tha taki wo power source me self destroy ho sake.
Akash jab power source me gira to uski sari skin rapid speed me galne lagi tabi akash apni energy compress Karke power source me hi self destroy hojata hay.
Usse esa dhamaka hota hay ki sari ki sari mother ship tabah hojata hay.......
Pichle update me app ne padha major akash ek special mission per aliens ke ship me apna ves badal Kar unki power source destroy Karne keliye Gaye the.
Unka ek dost Captain S ko kiss trah power source ka location mill jata hay aur wo 2 din ke bad uspar attack Karne ki plan banate hay.
Abb age
Meeting for attack plan
Akash : dusre Captain se jese app tino ko pata hay Captain S ne power source ka location pata kr liya hay.
Captain 1 : han sir hum ne ye vi pata Kiya hay ki waha ke security 4 sift me kam Karti hay.
Captain 2 : jab 3rd sift ke guards apni jagah badlte hay to wo sab se lambe time lete hay ku ki uss wakt commander DRAKO kudh squad ki inspection karte hay.
Captain S : 18:00 in space time, per 3rd squad apni sift change karte hay hame total 15min milenge surprise attack ke liye.
Akash : to thik hay hum iss waqt hi attack karenge sare Captains Apne Apne soldier ko stand by mode pe rekh dijiye hum next day 18:00 pe power source pe attack karenge.
(Note akash ko milake ye total 16 log the 4 commanding officers 12 soldiers)
(Space time earth ke time se bohat fark hay space me time earth ke time se slow flow hota hay ex: hum sun se jitna dur hote jayenge hamara time earth ke time se utna slow hota Jayega)
(Time har jagah same flow hota hay lekin hame alag mehsus hota hay
TIME NEVER STOPS FOR ANYONE)
17:55 sab log operation ke liye ready the jese hi time 18:00 Hoga jab guard sift change Kar rahe honge hum apni chupi hue jagah se uss location per attack kar denge.
Ham jub apni chupi hue jagah se ader ke aur gay to hame waha ek vi soldier Nahi Mila ye Dekh ke mujhe Kuch Kuch doubts hone lage.
Captain 1 : sir mujhe Kuch gadbad lag rahi hay hame Ander ate hue ek vi guards najar Nahi aye.
Captain 2 : Lagta ajj aliens ke Kuch problem hogaya hay iss liye sayad guards kum hay.
Akash : ase Nahi hoskata agar problem Hoga to vi wo apni sabse important Jaga ko ese hi Bina guards ke Nahi chod ke jayenge.
Captain S : sir wase vi hame guards se kya Karna hame jald se jald power source tabh Karke yaha se Nikal Jana chaye. Ye to Acha hua ki guards Nahi hay yah par.
Fir Captain 2 aur S milke jaldi mission complete Karke yaha Nikal ne ke liye bolte hay
Akash : Kuch kahna chata tha par mission complete Karne keliye usne aur jayda Kuch socha Nahi aur age badhne lage.
Hum power source ke pass pahuch ne par Captain 2 aur S ke sath aye soldier power source per nuckclear bomb lagane lage aur Captain 1 ke soldiers protective shield hatane lage taki jayada se jayda damage Kar sake unke power source ko.
Akash: apni soldier ke sath wo apni pur guards pe tha ku ki use ye situation Kuch ajib lag Raha tha itne salo ka battle experience use chila chila Kar kah rahe ta ajj to Teri gand fatne Bali hay.
Captain 1: sir hamne code decode kardiya hay force field 1 min me disable ho jayega.
Tabhi uss room me ek sath 50 gurads Ander ate hay.
Ye Dekh ke akash sochta hay lagi re lagi ajj to ye gand fad denge.
Akash : sab log cover lelo aur open fire Karo samne darko ko Dekh ke sochta hay ye squad inspection chod ke yaha kya kr Raha hay.
Tabhi dusre aur se.
(Aliens ka language hamare language se alag hay wo universal translator use karte hay jiss se hum unki bat samajh sake)
Alien leader : Tum sab cuho ki itni himat mere DARKO ke ship me gus Gaye.
Akash : himat to Tumne hamre Dekhi kaha hay himat wo thi jab ham tumhare queen ki Lene ki socha tha wo vi tumhare ghrah per.
Darko : Abe sale kute ki aulad apna jaban hilana band kr Nahi to Teri jaban kich Lunga.
Akash sochne Lagta kese vi Karke ye 1 min darko ko roko na hay taki force field disable hojaye
Akash : abe 50 admi Apne sath lake kya mardangi dikhata hay himat hay to mujh se akle me mukabila kr tere gand fad ke rakh dunga.
Drako Apne admio ko issra karta hay aur khud akele age bad jata akash se vidne.
Akash to kab se ise moke ka talash me tha akash ke najre bohat tej hochuki body Pura foulad ka DNA integration se.
Akash suddenly drako ke uper jump Kar ke ek rakh ke seta hay Uske muh per drako 2,3 kadam piche hat jata hay par use jayda koi chot Nahi lagi thi
Ye Dekh ke akash chok jata hay Uske attak se ek kharoch tak Nahi aya tha drako ko fir drako apna ek pair utha ke akash ko ek lat Marta hay jise wo durjake piche ek diwar pe takrata hay isse akash ko kafi chot lagti hay
Akash us jagah se khada hoke Apne app ko saval Kar drako ke face pe apni kick ki barsat Kar deta hay ek kick pe dusre kick first kick se jayada takatwar dusra kick pichle kick ke force use Karke dusre kick yese pure 12 kick Marne ke bad wo ruk jata hay.
Drako ko sirf choti Moti chot aye thi use se Apne mu se khon thoke ke bad wo akash ko ek jor dar punch Marta hay jiss se akash block Karne ki kosish karta hay par na kamyab hojata hay.
Akash ab apni jeb se ek siram Nikal ke pijata hay ye siram DNA ko jagane ke liye use hota hay fir wo pahle se jayada takatwar hojata hay
Iss bar akash drako per direct hamla Nahi karta Uske attack ke intejar Karne laga jab drako ne running smash(dod Kar apni body se dusre ko take marna) use Kiya tab akash toda piche hat ke Apne sari takt apne right hand me lakar ek upper jab laga Diya, drako Ka momentum se jatka bohat jor se laga drako ko aur ek filp ke sath wo piche ja gira.
Ab tak force field disable hocuki thi
Akash : sorry dost tumhara time khatm hua fir milenge in next life ye khete hua akash ne bomb Ka switch on kr Diya fir kkkkkaaaaabbbbooommmmm............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Esa Kuch Nahi hua bomb phata hi Nahi
Piche se lessor gun firing ki abaj aye jab akash piche muda to piche Ka najara Dekh ke wo hairan hogaya.
Piche Captain 2 aur S ke soldier ne Captain 1 aur uski soldier aur akash ki soldiers ko lesser gun se upar phocha chuke the.
Captain S : tujhe kya laga hum yaha par tere sath sahid hone aye hay Nahi Mr akash tum ek dum galat ho.
Akash : ese ku kya ye sirf mere sath Nahi pure manab jati ke sath dhoka hay aur Captain 2 tum vi iss plan me samil ho!!!!
Captain 2 : Tsk tsk sir app kitne vole hay kisko apni Jan payri Nahi Hoti hay aur fir insan to wese vi har Raha hay me agar aliens ki thodi madad Kar Diya to meri jindegi sabar Jayega.
Captain S : Dhoka hahahaha ye sabd tumhre mu se shoba Nahi deta major akash Mera DNA score tum se adhik tha fir vi un salo budho ne tumhe major Bana Diya me usi din soch liya tum sab per varosa Karna hi bekar hay.
Akash : dkhoke baj kamine me tujhe jinda Nahi chodunga ye khete hue Captain S ke aur vagne laga.
Captain S : lesser gun se akash ke dono pair per fir ker deta hay itni vi kya jaldi hay Marne ki thoda sabra Karo tumhe vi baki sab members ke pass vej dunga fir Teri masuka ke sath me ayse karunga.
Akash ye sunke bohat guse me ajata hay aur vag Kar Captain S ki gala pad leta hay
Akash : me tujhe Uske liye jinda Nahi chodunga kamine.
Tabhi piche se ek power beem ake akash ke Hart ko Lagta hay aur wo age Jake girta hay.
Captain S : sukriya drako meri Jan bacha ne ke liye.
Drako : isme konsi badi bat hey Tumne to hamra itna bar madad Kiya hay warna purtvi per attack itni jaldi khatm Nahi hota.
Akash ye sun ke chok jata hay iss se ye pata Chalta hay ki ye pahli bar Nahi hay jab Captain S ne pure manab jati ko dhoka Diya hay par ab wo Kuch Kar Nahi shakta wo kud mot ke mu me tha.
Captain S : Sahi suna Tumne akash wo me hi tha Jo hamare sare mission ke detail aliens ko deta Raha marte marte ye vi Jan le wo me hi tha jisne Dr. Arjun ko mara tha warna wo DNA Ka second evolution me successful hojata hahahaha
Ye Dr. arjun ek scientists tha jisne ek bar akash ki aur uski gf ki Jan bachaya tha.
Captain S : kese lagraha hay apni sari umid kho Kar ab Tu vi bohat jald upar wale ke pass pohach Jayega itna keh ker wo apna lesser gun akash ke aur tan deta hay.
Akash : ek kamina smile de Kar sale mujhe ajj pata chale Tujhe ku Nahi major banya gya ku ki tere Iman me hi khot hay me to marunga hi sath me tum sab ko lejunga.
Ise pahle koi Kuch Kar pata akash power source ke aur kud jata hay akash lete lete kafi samay se apni sari power ektha Kar Raha tha taki wo power source me self destroy ho sake.
Akash jab power source me gira to uski sari skin rapid speed me galne lagi tabi akash apni energy compress Karke power source me hi self destroy hojata hay.
Usse esa dhamaka hota hay ki sari ki sari mother ship tabah hojata hay.......
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