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Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Guru se baat hone ke baad jagir ki gaand fatt rahi thi kyuki
Osne jo.plan.kkya tha osko inzaam.uska beta dene geya tha
Wo jaldi jaldi apne bete ko phone krta hai lekin oske beta ka number switch off aa rhaa tha kyuki ranjeet abhi kisi ke bhi sahmne nhi ana chahta thaa isiliye osne apna jaal bichaa diya tha
Woh yeh sab chupker krna chahta tha lekin abhi
Jagir ke kaffi try krne ke bad bi ranjeet ka phone band hi tha
Jagir kaffi tension mein tha osne apne admi ko lekr ranjeet ko dhoond raha tha lekin woh nhi Mila
Woh kahi chuppker betha tha
Mere.ghr
Main so rhaa tha ek sunder c ladki ke supne dekh raha thaa
Woh ladki mere pass aker mere hott ko choos rahi thi
Main abhi uska pora response kr raha tha
Eder jab jeet mere kamre mein aya to dekh ki main apne hott gol.gol bna kr hawa.mein chummi kr raha hoon
Jeet .. bhossdi wala meri behn ko kiss kr raha hoga supne mein yeh soch kr osne
Pani ki baalti leker mere uper giraa di
Main....abeeee bachaaao bachaaao maar diyaa aaj se kiss nhi kronga pls.mujhe chodd do pls
Lekin jab mujhe hosh aya to jeet hass raha tha
Mujhe meri halat samjh mein ayi
Mujhe gussa to bhot aya lekin
Tabhi dimag ke aya ki mera lundd.ka baal hai yeh kabhi seedha nhi ho sskta
Bas yehi soch ker chodd diya
Jeet.. kyu be sale kis behn ko kiss kr rhaa tha chuttiye
Main... Bsdk ke kiss poori nhi hui thi tune apni kaali.gaand bich mein ghussa di..
Chall hatt kaale gaand wale jaanwar
Jeet.. teri gori gaand pe loha.pigla kr band krdoonga ager jda bola to
Main ab serious hokrr
Main...jeet meri baat sun.
Jeet . Bol
Main..free ho kya tum aaj
Jeet.. haa.kyu kya huya.
Main... Lund muh.mein.lela mera.kam.pe.lag jaa .hahahahahhaha
Jeet.. marega tu mere hi hatho se.mare ga
Chl uth aaj meri gf ane wali hai osko milna hai chl teyaar ho or daro.lete ana mere pass paise nhi hai
Main... kidney bech de bsdk main phone bhi le.longa or daro bhi
Sala garib kahi ka
Jeet.. chl abhi nakhre mat kr or.jldi se teyaar ho
.
Main utha or teyaar hone chla geya
After some time
.
Jeet .. chl be gaddi jldi.ghuma.hum.late.hai.
Main.. abe jana khaan hai itni jldi .
Jeet . Jungle mein jana hai
Aaj palvi osko sath leker aye gi tum bas door hi rehna warna palvi ko tum jaante ho sara.mood.khrb kr degi
.
Mai... Kyaaa sale.mai .nhi jane wale sali woh bot ganda bolti hai dil cheer deti hai uski baate.
Jeet.. pls bhai maan.ja na bhot time bad milne wlaa hoon.
Main chahta to mna kr deta lekin fir socha ki jeet mein bhi mera hii khoon aa mera lund ka baal hai ab eske liye to kuch bhi.
Hum chle.jungle mein abhi hum jungle ke bilkul ander the.
Tabhi hume palvi or ek aor ladki ati dikhai di
Jisko.main nhi jaanta tha lekin main abhi door hi rukk geya tha kyuki muje fir se bezzti nhi krwani thi palvi se lekin palvi ne mujhe dekh liya tha
Plvi ne mujhe apne pass bulane ka ishara.kiya.
Main chla geya
Jeet apni gf ko leker alag chla geya jungle mein mangle krne
Palvi.. kaise ho kabir.
Main.. haraaini se kyaaa yeh mere se baat kr rahi hai itne pyaar se isko.kya huya
Main.. thik hoon app batao.
Palvi.. tum soch rahe hoge ke main tumse ese baat kyu kr rahi hoon jbki.mai. Tumko har time gaali.deti thi lekin fir aaj ese baat kyu
.
Main ... Bas ehi soch raha hoon.
Palvi . Kabir yahan bot kuj glt ho rhaa hai jo main tumko nhi bta sakti lekin ek din jaror btao.
Main...kyaa galt.. mujhe.......
Main bas itna hi bol paya ki pishe se kisi ne mere sir per danda mara.main.behosh ho geya lekin jab
Hosh aya to meri jindgi hi palt gai thi..
Osne jo.plan.kkya tha osko inzaam.uska beta dene geya tha
Wo jaldi jaldi apne bete ko phone krta hai lekin oske beta ka number switch off aa rhaa tha kyuki ranjeet abhi kisi ke bhi sahmne nhi ana chahta thaa isiliye osne apna jaal bichaa diya tha
Woh yeh sab chupker krna chahta tha lekin abhi
Jagir ke kaffi try krne ke bad bi ranjeet ka phone band hi tha
Jagir kaffi tension mein tha osne apne admi ko lekr ranjeet ko dhoond raha tha lekin woh nhi Mila
Woh kahi chuppker betha tha
Mere.ghr
Main so rhaa tha ek sunder c ladki ke supne dekh raha thaa
Woh ladki mere pass aker mere hott ko choos rahi thi
Main abhi uska pora response kr raha tha
Eder jab jeet mere kamre mein aya to dekh ki main apne hott gol.gol bna kr hawa.mein chummi kr raha hoon
Jeet .. bhossdi wala meri behn ko kiss kr raha hoga supne mein yeh soch kr osne
Pani ki baalti leker mere uper giraa di
Main....abeeee bachaaao bachaaao maar diyaa aaj se kiss nhi kronga pls.mujhe chodd do pls
Lekin jab mujhe hosh aya to jeet hass raha tha
Mujhe meri halat samjh mein ayi
Mujhe gussa to bhot aya lekin
Tabhi dimag ke aya ki mera lundd.ka baal hai yeh kabhi seedha nhi ho sskta
Bas yehi soch ker chodd diya
Jeet.. kyu be sale kis behn ko kiss kr rhaa tha chuttiye
Main... Bsdk ke kiss poori nhi hui thi tune apni kaali.gaand bich mein ghussa di..
Chall hatt kaale gaand wale jaanwar
Jeet.. teri gori gaand pe loha.pigla kr band krdoonga ager jda bola to
Main ab serious hokrr
Main...jeet meri baat sun.
Jeet . Bol
Main..free ho kya tum aaj
Jeet.. haa.kyu kya huya.
Main... Lund muh.mein.lela mera.kam.pe.lag jaa .hahahahahhaha
Jeet.. marega tu mere hi hatho se.mare ga
Chl uth aaj meri gf ane wali hai osko milna hai chl teyaar ho or daro.lete ana mere pass paise nhi hai
Main... kidney bech de bsdk main phone bhi le.longa or daro bhi
Sala garib kahi ka
Jeet.. chl abhi nakhre mat kr or.jldi se teyaar ho
.
Main utha or teyaar hone chla geya
After some time
.
Jeet .. chl be gaddi jldi.ghuma.hum.late.hai.
Main.. abe jana khaan hai itni jldi .
Jeet . Jungle mein jana hai
Aaj palvi osko sath leker aye gi tum bas door hi rehna warna palvi ko tum jaante ho sara.mood.khrb kr degi
.
Mai... Kyaaa sale.mai .nhi jane wale sali woh bot ganda bolti hai dil cheer deti hai uski baate.
Jeet.. pls bhai maan.ja na bhot time bad milne wlaa hoon.
Main chahta to mna kr deta lekin fir socha ki jeet mein bhi mera hii khoon aa mera lund ka baal hai ab eske liye to kuch bhi.
Hum chle.jungle mein abhi hum jungle ke bilkul ander the.
Tabhi hume palvi or ek aor ladki ati dikhai di
Jisko.main nhi jaanta tha lekin main abhi door hi rukk geya tha kyuki muje fir se bezzti nhi krwani thi palvi se lekin palvi ne mujhe dekh liya tha
Plvi ne mujhe apne pass bulane ka ishara.kiya.
Main chla geya
Jeet apni gf ko leker alag chla geya jungle mein mangle krne
Palvi.. kaise ho kabir.
Main.. haraaini se kyaaa yeh mere se baat kr rahi hai itne pyaar se isko.kya huya
Main.. thik hoon app batao.
Palvi.. tum soch rahe hoge ke main tumse ese baat kyu kr rahi hoon jbki.mai. Tumko har time gaali.deti thi lekin fir aaj ese baat kyu
.
Main ... Bas ehi soch raha hoon.
Palvi . Kabir yahan bot kuj glt ho rhaa hai jo main tumko nhi bta sakti lekin ek din jaror btao.
Main...kyaa galt.. mujhe.......
Main bas itna hi bol paya ki pishe se kisi ne mere sir per danda mara.main.behosh ho geya lekin jab
Hosh aya to meri jindgi hi palt gai thi..
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lajwab awesome superbbbb speechless update..........
keep posting bhai........
waiting for next update.........
keep posting bhai........
waiting for next update.........
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