Fantasy Alone beast

[mashish]

waiting

 

[Naik]

Jab main apni soch mein ghum tha to os time do log enter huye j

Ek ranjeet seth. Or dusra jise main kabhi jaan se jda ajeej tha lekin aaj ohi mera sab se bda dusman tha
Oske dekh kar ek baar to akho mein paani aa geya tha kyuki

Aaj bot time baad osko dekha tha pehle jaisa hi tha bas abb face par smile nhi thi

Mujhe dekh raha tha jaise mujhe maarne ko uska khoon ubaale mar raha hoo

Main bas usko hi dekh raha tha mujhe maloom tha ranjeet ki itni aukat nhi jo mujhe kaid kr sake lekin.

Main bas apne past mein betaye huye lambhe yaad kr raha tha jo mainu or esne bataye the

Hum dono bhut khush the lekin woh manhoos ghaddi jisme hum dono ek doosre ke dusman ban gaye
.or aaj kismat dekho mujhe marne wala bhi merw apna hi hai jo mere dil ke bhot krib hai.

Lekin abhi wakht kuch or hi hai

Main abhi apni hi soch mein ghum t
ha ki itne mein ranjeet bola..

Ranjeet... Kyu be sale dekha meri power aaj tujhe dikhaonga teri aukaat
Sale.usdin tune mujhe is ladki ke karan mara tha na aaj dekh isko nangi krke sab ke shamne chondoga

Jeet.. sale teri jubaan kheech longa aager.meri behn ke bare mein ek lafaz hi bola to

Ranjeet .hahaha sale.mout tere shmne hai fir bhi itni akad
Tujhe to bot tadfa tdfa kr maroonga itni asani moout nhi doonga sale

Jeet. .. hath to khool ssle ek baar fir btata hoon tujhe teri aukaat

Main ek paar jo ranjeet ke sath aya hai usko ajnabi likhonga

Main...ajnabi se kyu kiya tune esa tujhe maloom hain main sab kuch chord chuka hoon

: Ajnabi... Tum kaise bhool sskte hoo mujhe koi baat nhi tumhe sab yaad krwa donnga

Main... Akhir kyu yr hum sath mein kitne khush the bhut khush tha main tere sath fir tune esa kyu kiya

Ajnabi.. iske bhot se reason hain lekin main bataonga nhi tujhe akhir tadfa ta huya dekhna chahta hoon jaise main tdfa hoon pal.pal.

Main.. mujhe maar do tum apne hathoon se kam se kam khushi mujhe sakoon milega ki main apno ke hatho se mara hoon ..

Ajnabi... Nhi mere bhai nhi tujhe main nhi maroonga .

Ajnabi mere pass aker mere kaan mein

Ajnabi... Mujhe maloom hai tum yahan se bach kar nikl jaoga lekin yaad rakhna jab tum yahan se jaoge tum apna bhut kuch khoo chuke hoge

Take care .. apna khyaal rakhna or marna nhi tumhe sirf main maronga.

Ajnabi ranjeet se main jaa rhaan hoon yahan se tumhe jo krna hai kro

Ajnabi wohan se jate huye muskara raha tha jaise woh yahi krne aye tha..

Oske jaate hi main apne colge ke.dino ke bare mein sochne laga .. yeh sab kaise huya..

Tabhi ranjeet..
Ranjeet....hahhaaha aaj tum sab ko.maar kar bhut sskoon mile ga mujhe hahaha.

Jeet. .. tum mera lund mein muh lela tujhe sakoon mile ga itna khoon khraba krne ki kyaa jarort

Ranjeet... Apne admi se isko dusre room mein ejaa kr goli maar do sale ko.

Mainn... Ranjeet tumne palvi kyu pakd rakha hai yeh to teri trf thi....main bas ranjeet ka dhiyaan hatna chahta tha jeet se taki mujhe kuch time mile apne hath kholne ko.

Ranjeet..hahaha eh kabhhi meri traff nhi thi kabir yeh bas majboor thi
Maine jab dekha ki yeh tujhe pyar krti hai school time se tab hi esko majboor krke apni traf kr.liya thaa.

Main.... Majboor lekin kyu kaise majbori.

Ranjeet... Iski behn ko humne kidnap kr liya tha aaj tak woh hamare hi pass thi ..isiliye yeh hamari randi ban gai taki apni behn ka ptaa lgaa sake

Main... Kyaa lekin tum eske sath esa kyon kiya ..


Ranjeet... Kyuki yeh tumhe pyar krti thi.. main har osko.maar doonga jo tujhe pyaar kre ga kyuki tune mera pyaar cheena mujhse meri behn cheeni thi .

Main...kya matlb hai tumhara..

Ranjeet... Main hamesha se Manisha ko hi apna sab kuch maanta tha lekin os school ke kand ke bad Manisha mujhe nafrat krne legi or tujhe pyar.
Jaante ho kyaa aaj yeh sab yahan maregi kyuki yeh sab tumse pyaar krti hain..

Main.. tum pls enko jaane do.mujhe maar do inka koi kasoor nhi..
Asal mein mujhe rona aa raha tha kyuki meine insabki life khrb krdi thi khass kar palvi ki..
Kyuki palvi tu mujhe pyar kri thi or us pyaar ke badle use kyaa mila or kyaa bna diya..

Bas yeh sab soch kr main toot chuka tha main jor jor se ro raha tha

Ranjeet... Ro sale roo yeh palvi maderchod sali randi ne kitni baar kosish ki tujhe yahan se bhgaa de taki tum bach ssko isne humse chori apni behn ka pta lga liya or usko tujhe warn krne ke liye bhejj diya lekin ofsos

: Bas yehi glti.krdi usne maar diya usko
Ranjeet ke itne kehne ke bad hi palvi jor jor se rone lag gai sab ka yehi haal tha
Main bas roye jaa rahaa thaa tabhi ..

Ranjeet ne kuj esa kaha ki jise sun meri akh mein khoon uttar aya

Behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai

 

[Naina]

Jab main apni soch mein ghum tha to os time do log enter huye j

Ek ranjeet seth. Or dusra jise main kabhi jaan se jda ajeej tha lekin aaj ohi mera sab se bda dusman tha
Oske dekh kar ek baar to akho mein paani aa geya tha kyuki

Aaj bot time baad osko dekha tha pehle jaisa hi tha bas abb face par smile nhi thi

Mujhe dekh raha tha jaise mujhe maarne ko uska khoon ubaale mar raha hoo

Main bas usko hi dekh raha tha mujhe maloom tha ranjeet ki itni aukat nhi jo mujhe kaid kr sake lekin.

Main bas apne past mein betaye huye lambhe yaad kr raha tha jo mainu or esne bataye the

Hum dono bhut khush the lekin woh manhoos ghaddi jisme hum dono ek doosre ke dusman ban gaye
.or aaj kismat dekho mujhe marne wala bhi merw apna hi hai jo mere dil ke bhot krib hai.

Lekin abhi wakht kuch or hi hai

Main abhi apni hi soch mein ghum t
ha ki itne mein ranjeet bola..

Ranjeet... Kyu be sale dekha meri power aaj tujhe dikhaonga teri aukaat
Sale.usdin tune mujhe is ladki ke karan mara tha na aaj dekh isko nangi krke sab ke shamne chondoga

Jeet.. sale teri jubaan kheech longa aager.meri behn ke bare mein ek lafaz hi bola to

Ranjeet .hahaha sale.mout tere shmne hai fir bhi itni akad
Tujhe to bot tadfa tdfa kr maroonga itni asani moout nhi doonga sale

Jeet. .. hath to khool ssle ek baar fir btata hoon tujhe teri aukaat

Main ek paar jo ranjeet ke sath aya hai usko ajnabi likhonga

Main...ajnabi se kyu kiya tune esa tujhe maloom hain main sab kuch chord chuka hoon

: Ajnabi... Tum kaise bhool sskte hoo mujhe koi baat nhi tumhe sab yaad krwa donnga

Main... Akhir kyu yr hum sath mein kitne khush the bhut khush tha main tere sath fir tune esa kyu kiya

Ajnabi.. iske bhot se reason hain lekin main bataonga nhi tujhe akhir tadfa ta huya dekhna chahta hoon jaise main tdfa hoon pal.pal.

Main.. mujhe maar do tum apne hathoon se kam se kam khushi mujhe sakoon milega ki main apno ke hatho se mara hoon ..

Ajnabi... Nhi mere bhai nhi tujhe main nhi maroonga .

Ajnabi mere pass aker mere kaan mein

Ajnabi... Mujhe maloom hai tum yahan se bach kar nikl jaoga lekin yaad rakhna jab tum yahan se jaoge tum apna bhut kuch khoo chuke hoge

Take care .. apna khyaal rakhna or marna nhi tumhe sirf main maronga.

Ajnabi ranjeet se main jaa rhaan hoon yahan se tumhe jo krna hai kro

Ajnabi wohan se jate huye muskara raha tha jaise woh yahi krne aye tha..

Oske jaate hi main apne colge ke.dino ke bare mein sochne laga .. yeh sab kaise huya..

Tabhi ranjeet..
Ranjeet....hahhaaha aaj tum sab ko.maar kar bhut sskoon mile ga mujhe hahaha.

Jeet. .. tum mera lund mein muh lela tujhe sakoon mile ga itna khoon khraba krne ki kyaa jarort

Ranjeet... Apne admi se isko dusre room mein ejaa kr goli maar do sale ko.

Mainn... Ranjeet tumne palvi kyu pakd rakha hai yeh to teri trf thi....main bas ranjeet ka dhiyaan hatna chahta tha jeet se taki mujhe kuch time mile apne hath kholne ko.

Ranjeet..hahaha eh kabhhi meri traff nhi thi kabir yeh bas majboor thi
Maine jab dekha ki yeh tujhe pyar krti hai school time se tab hi esko majboor krke apni traf kr.liya thaa.

Main.... Majboor lekin kyu kaise majbori.

Ranjeet... Iski behn ko humne kidnap kr liya tha aaj tak woh hamare hi pass thi ..isiliye yeh hamari randi ban gai taki apni behn ka ptaa lgaa sake

Main... Kyaa lekin tum eske sath esa kyon kiya ..


Ranjeet... Kyuki yeh tumhe pyar krti thi.. main har osko.maar doonga jo tujhe pyaar kre ga kyuki tune mera pyaar cheena mujhse meri behn cheeni thi .

Main...kya matlb hai tumhara..

Ranjeet... Main hamesha se Manisha ko hi apna sab kuch maanta tha lekin os school ke kand ke bad Manisha mujhe nafrat krne legi or tujhe pyar.
Jaante ho kyaa aaj yeh sab yahan maregi kyuki yeh sab tumse pyaar krti hain..

Main.. tum pls enko jaane do.mujhe maar do inka koi kasoor nhi..
Asal mein mujhe rona aa raha tha kyuki meine insabki life khrb krdi thi khass kar palvi ki..
Kyuki palvi tu mujhe pyar kri thi or us pyaar ke badle use kyaa mila or kyaa bna diya..

Bas yeh sab soch kr main toot chuka tha main jor jor se ro raha tha

Ranjeet... Ro sale roo yeh palvi maderchod sali randi ne kitni baar kosish ki tujhe yahan se bhgaa de taki tum bach ssko isne humse chori apni behn ka pta lga liya or usko tujhe warn krne ke liye bhejj diya lekin ofsos

: Bas yehi glti.krdi usne maar diya usko
Ranjeet ke itne kehne ke bad hi palvi jor jor se rone lag gai sab ka yehi haal tha
Main bas roye jaa rahaa thaa tabhi ..

Ranjeet ne kuj esa kaha ki jise sun meri akh mein khoon uttar aya

Ek alag hi khatarnaak mod aaya hai kahani mein...
Btw Kaisa Nayak hai ye kahani ka..... baat baat par flashback mein, college ke dino mein chala jata hai, jab ki itni badi musibat saamne hai.... wo to sukar hai khud villain Matlab ranjeet ushe flashback mein jaane nahi de raha warna aise tensed situation mein flashback chala jata....
well ab ye ajnabee koun hai, jarur college friend hoga.. maybe best Friend.. lekin kuch kaarano ke chalte dusman ban baitha....
Sach mein usko chaahne walo ki life khatre mein hai, jald hi ushe kuch karna hoga warna kahi Der na ho jaaye..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Nevil singh]

Jab main apni soch mein ghum tha to os time do log enter huye j

Ek ranjeet seth. Or dusra jise main kabhi jaan se jda ajeej tha lekin aaj ohi mera sab se bda dusman tha
Oske dekh kar ek baar to akho mein paani aa geya tha kyuki

Aaj bot time baad osko dekha tha pehle jaisa hi tha bas abb face par smile nhi thi

Mujhe dekh raha tha jaise mujhe maarne ko uska khoon ubaale mar raha hoo

Main bas usko hi dekh raha tha mujhe maloom tha ranjeet ki itni aukat nhi jo mujhe kaid kr sake lekin.

Main bas apne past mein betaye huye lambhe yaad kr raha tha jo mainu or esne bataye the

Hum dono bhut khush the lekin woh manhoos ghaddi jisme hum dono ek doosre ke dusman ban gaye
.or aaj kismat dekho mujhe marne wala bhi merw apna hi hai jo mere dil ke bhot krib hai.

Lekin abhi wakht kuch or hi hai

Main abhi apni hi soch mein ghum t
ha ki itne mein ranjeet bola..

Ranjeet... Kyu be sale dekha meri power aaj tujhe dikhaonga teri aukaat
Sale.usdin tune mujhe is ladki ke karan mara tha na aaj dekh isko nangi krke sab ke shamne chondoga

Jeet.. sale teri jubaan kheech longa aager.meri behn ke bare mein ek lafaz hi bola to

Ranjeet .hahaha sale.mout tere shmne hai fir bhi itni akad
Tujhe to bot tadfa tdfa kr maroonga itni asani moout nhi doonga sale

Jeet. .. hath to khool ssle ek baar fir btata hoon tujhe teri aukaat

Main ek paar jo ranjeet ke sath aya hai usko ajnabi likhonga

Main...ajnabi se kyu kiya tune esa tujhe maloom hain main sab kuch chord chuka hoon

: Ajnabi... Tum kaise bhool sskte hoo mujhe koi baat nhi tumhe sab yaad krwa donnga

Main... Akhir kyu yr hum sath mein kitne khush the bhut khush tha main tere sath fir tune esa kyu kiya

Ajnabi.. iske bhot se reason hain lekin main bataonga nhi tujhe akhir tadfa ta huya dekhna chahta hoon jaise main tdfa hoon pal.pal.

Main.. mujhe maar do tum apne hathoon se kam se kam khushi mujhe sakoon milega ki main apno ke hatho se mara hoon ..

Ajnabi... Nhi mere bhai nhi tujhe main nhi maroonga .

Ajnabi mere pass aker mere kaan mein

Ajnabi... Mujhe maloom hai tum yahan se bach kar nikl jaoga lekin yaad rakhna jab tum yahan se jaoge tum apna bhut kuch khoo chuke hoge

Take care .. apna khyaal rakhna or marna nhi tumhe sirf main maronga.

Ajnabi ranjeet se main jaa rhaan hoon yahan se tumhe jo krna hai kro

Ajnabi wohan se jate huye muskara raha tha jaise woh yahi krne aye tha..

Oske jaate hi main apne colge ke.dino ke bare mein sochne laga .. yeh sab kaise huya..

Tabhi ranjeet..
Ranjeet....hahhaaha aaj tum sab ko.maar kar bhut sskoon mile ga mujhe hahaha.

Jeet. .. tum mera lund mein muh lela tujhe sakoon mile ga itna khoon khraba krne ki kyaa jarort

Ranjeet... Apne admi se isko dusre room mein ejaa kr goli maar do sale ko.

Mainn... Ranjeet tumne palvi kyu pakd rakha hai yeh to teri trf thi....main bas ranjeet ka dhiyaan hatna chahta tha jeet se taki mujhe kuch time mile apne hath kholne ko.

Ranjeet..hahaha eh kabhhi meri traff nhi thi kabir yeh bas majboor thi
Maine jab dekha ki yeh tujhe pyar krti hai school time se tab hi esko majboor krke apni traf kr.liya thaa.

Main.... Majboor lekin kyu kaise majbori.

Ranjeet... Iski behn ko humne kidnap kr liya tha aaj tak woh hamare hi pass thi ..isiliye yeh hamari randi ban gai taki apni behn ka ptaa lgaa sake

Main... Kyaa lekin tum eske sath esa kyon kiya ..


Ranjeet... Kyuki yeh tumhe pyar krti thi.. main har osko.maar doonga jo tujhe pyaar kre ga kyuki tune mera pyaar cheena mujhse meri behn cheeni thi .

Main...kya matlb hai tumhara..

Ranjeet... Main hamesha se Manisha ko hi apna sab kuch maanta tha lekin os school ke kand ke bad Manisha mujhe nafrat krne legi or tujhe pyar.
Jaante ho kyaa aaj yeh sab yahan maregi kyuki yeh sab tumse pyaar krti hain..

Main.. tum pls enko jaane do.mujhe maar do inka koi kasoor nhi..
Asal mein mujhe rona aa raha tha kyuki meine insabki life khrb krdi thi khass kar palvi ki..
Kyuki palvi tu mujhe pyar kri thi or us pyaar ke badle use kyaa mila or kyaa bna diya..

Bas yeh sab soch kr main toot chuka tha main jor jor se ro raha tha

Ranjeet... Ro sale roo yeh palvi maderchod sali randi ne kitni baar kosish ki tujhe yahan se bhgaa de taki tum bach ssko isne humse chori apni behn ka pta lga liya or usko tujhe warn krne ke liye bhejj diya lekin ofsos

: Bas yehi glti.krdi usne maar diya usko
Ranjeet ke itne kehne ke bad hi palvi jor jor se rone lag gai sab ka yehi haal tha
Main bas roye jaa rahaa thaa tabhi ..

Ranjeet ne kuj esa kaha ki jise sun meri akh mein khoon uttar aya

Khubsurat update dost

 

[andyking302]

: Hosh mein ane ke bad meine dekha ki ek traf mmujhe rassi se bandha huya tha

Mere sath mein palvi. Jeet.. priya . Manisha.

Yeh sab bhi kaid the .

Main harain tha ki palvi to enki traf thi yeh hamare sath kyon pakdi hai

Sath mein Manisha bhi thi osko bhi rassi se bandh rakha tha jo ki

Or bhi haraini ki baat thi ki ese kaise ho sakta hai
Kyuki abbi tak mujhe koi bhi dikhai nhi de raha tha
Hum ek.room.mein band the .

Main soch raha tha ki manisha to seth ki ladki hai isko hath lgna matlb mout ko hath lgna hai

Ajj ese bhi kaid kr liya hai kisi ne

Lagda hai yeh bande bahr ke honge yahan ke nhi jaror koi badi sazish ki gai hai

Itne main mujhe soch se bahr niklaa mere lund ne

Jeet ... Hayeee kitna.mazaa aa rahaa thaa meri gf abhi mera muh mein lene hi wali thi kisi ne.pishe se behhosh kr diya

Main... Abe bsdk jara ankh khol.kar dekh hum kahan hai

Jeet .. behncho aaj teri hi gaand maronga vase bhi kabhi sher ke ladke ki gaand nhi mari aaj teri maar kar dekh ta hoon.

Main... Lund lela mera muh mein tujhe gullocose ki kami hai

Jeet. .. sala hum hai kahan aor mujhe rassi se kyon bandh rakha hai..


Jeet.. ssle tune koi ladki to nhi chedd di jo hume yaahan kaid kr rakha hai

Main... Teri behn se ishq hai.mujhe abhi kisi oor mein interest nhi hai.

Jeet.. sala.hum hai kahan .

Main.. main bhi yehi soch rahan hoon .

Jeett. .. palvi manisha or priya bhi yahin hai
Inko kisne kaid kiya manisha seth ki ladki isko.kiski himmt hui be jo esko kaid kar raha hai
[10/08, 14:42] nature: Main... Abe yahi soch rahan chl tujhe or priya ko kaid krna to banta tha kyuki tum log mere sath rehte the lekin palvi aor Manisha ko kyuu

Jeet.. haa be sale tera to dimag chlne lga be ajaa ek baar aur lund lela mera superman jaisa takat war bhi ho jaye ga.

Main...chup ssale...

Main pareshaan tha lekin jeet nhi kyuki usko maloom tha main bacha longa
Manisha or priya behhosh thi abhi tak hosh mein nhi ayi thi

Itne mein plvi hosh mein aa gai

Palvi... main yahaan kaise mujhe baandh kyu rakhaa hai..

Jeet ... Yeh to tum batao akhir baat kya hai tum to seth ki khass ho

Palvi ... Bakwas band kro kabir pls mujhe bachaa lo.

Jeet. .. are waah aaj kabir dikh raha hai tujhe pehle kyu nhi dikha jab iski bezzti krti thi aaj kya huya mout sir par hai to kabir.

Palvi rote huye... Kabir pls mujhe glt mat samjhna mujhe bacha lo main marna nhi chahati .. abhi mujhe bot se kam krne hai..

Main .. kya kam karne hai mujhe bhi batao.

Palvi.. tumhe sab btaa dongi pls mujhe bcha lo

Main ... Ok abhi tum shant raho mujhe sochne do.. vase ek baat btao jb mere sir par kisi ne vaar kiya tha tb tumne dekha nhi kya kis ne vaar kiya tha..

Palvi... Nhi jab tum gire mujhe kuch ssmjh. Nhi aya or tab tak main bhi behosh ho chuki thi.

Itne main manisha or priya ko bhi hosh aa chuka tha
Unko bi kuch yaad nhi tha matlb

Saaf tha jis kisi ne bhi yeh kiya woh bot husyaar hai lekin ek baat samjh nhi aa rahi ab tak woh humse baat krne kyu nhi aya ...

Ose mallom ho chuka hoga ki.hum sab hosh mein aa chuke hai..
Iska.matlb

Woh yahan ka leader nhi hai leader koi or hai jiska intzaar ho raha hai

Itne..


Hahaahaha bilkul shi soch rahe ho kabir hamari traff ek admi ata huya dikhai diya

Jisne yeh baat kahi

Main usko dekh kr harain ho geya tha



kyuki....

शानदार update भाई,
Ye sali firse drama kregi Aur ye kon aagya hey jise dekhe intna choka hey kabir??

 

[andyking302]

Jab main apni soch mein ghum tha to os time do log enter huye j

Ek ranjeet seth. Or dusra jise main kabhi jaan se jda ajeej tha lekin aaj ohi mera sab se bda dusman tha
Oske dekh kar ek baar to akho mein paani aa geya tha kyuki

Aaj bot time baad osko dekha tha pehle jaisa hi tha bas abb face par smile nhi thi

Mujhe dekh raha tha jaise mujhe maarne ko uska khoon ubaale mar raha hoo

Main bas usko hi dekh raha tha mujhe maloom tha ranjeet ki itni aukat nhi jo mujhe kaid kr sake lekin.

Main bas apne past mein betaye huye lambhe yaad kr raha tha jo mainu or esne bataye the

Hum dono bhut khush the lekin woh manhoos ghaddi jisme hum dono ek doosre ke dusman ban gaye
.or aaj kismat dekho mujhe marne wala bhi merw apna hi hai jo mere dil ke bhot krib hai.

Lekin abhi wakht kuch or hi hai

Main abhi apni hi soch mein ghum t
ha ki itne mein ranjeet bola..

Ranjeet... Kyu be sale dekha meri power aaj tujhe dikhaonga teri aukaat
Sale.usdin tune mujhe is ladki ke karan mara tha na aaj dekh isko nangi krke sab ke shamne chondoga

Jeet.. sale teri jubaan kheech longa aager.meri behn ke bare mein ek lafaz hi bola to

Ranjeet .hahaha sale.mout tere shmne hai fir bhi itni akad
Tujhe to bot tadfa tdfa kr maroonga itni asani moout nhi doonga sale

Jeet. .. hath to khool ssle ek baar fir btata hoon tujhe teri aukaat

Main ek paar jo ranjeet ke sath aya hai usko ajnabi likhonga

Main...ajnabi se kyu kiya tune esa tujhe maloom hain main sab kuch chord chuka hoon

: Ajnabi... Tum kaise bhool sskte hoo mujhe koi baat nhi tumhe sab yaad krwa donnga

Main... Akhir kyu yr hum sath mein kitne khush the bhut khush tha main tere sath fir tune esa kyu kiya

Ajnabi.. iske bhot se reason hain lekin main bataonga nhi tujhe akhir tadfa ta huya dekhna chahta hoon jaise main tdfa hoon pal.pal.

Main.. mujhe maar do tum apne hathoon se kam se kam khushi mujhe sakoon milega ki main apno ke hatho se mara hoon ..

Ajnabi... Nhi mere bhai nhi tujhe main nhi maroonga .

Ajnabi mere pass aker mere kaan mein

Ajnabi... Mujhe maloom hai tum yahan se bach kar nikl jaoga lekin yaad rakhna jab tum yahan se jaoge tum apna bhut kuch khoo chuke hoge

Take care .. apna khyaal rakhna or marna nhi tumhe sirf main maronga.

Ajnabi ranjeet se main jaa rhaan hoon yahan se tumhe jo krna hai kro

Ajnabi wohan se jate huye muskara raha tha jaise woh yahi krne aye tha..

Oske jaate hi main apne colge ke.dino ke bare mein sochne laga .. yeh sab kaise huya..

Tabhi ranjeet..
Ranjeet....hahhaaha aaj tum sab ko.maar kar bhut sskoon mile ga mujhe hahaha.

Jeet. .. tum mera lund mein muh lela tujhe sakoon mile ga itna khoon khraba krne ki kyaa jarort

Ranjeet... Apne admi se isko dusre room mein ejaa kr goli maar do sale ko.

Mainn... Ranjeet tumne palvi kyu pakd rakha hai yeh to teri trf thi....main bas ranjeet ka dhiyaan hatna chahta tha jeet se taki mujhe kuch time mile apne hath kholne ko.

Ranjeet..hahaha eh kabhhi meri traff nhi thi kabir yeh bas majboor thi
Maine jab dekha ki yeh tujhe pyar krti hai school time se tab hi esko majboor krke apni traf kr.liya thaa.

Main.... Majboor lekin kyu kaise majbori.

Ranjeet... Iski behn ko humne kidnap kr liya tha aaj tak woh hamare hi pass thi ..isiliye yeh hamari randi ban gai taki apni behn ka ptaa lgaa sake

Main... Kyaa lekin tum eske sath esa kyon kiya ..


Ranjeet... Kyuki yeh tumhe pyar krti thi.. main har osko.maar doonga jo tujhe pyaar kre ga kyuki tune mera pyaar cheena mujhse meri behn cheeni thi .

Main...kya matlb hai tumhara..

Ranjeet... Main hamesha se Manisha ko hi apna sab kuch maanta tha lekin os school ke kand ke bad Manisha mujhe nafrat krne legi or tujhe pyar.
Jaante ho kyaa aaj yeh sab yahan maregi kyuki yeh sab tumse pyaar krti hain..

Main.. tum pls enko jaane do.mujhe maar do inka koi kasoor nhi..
Asal mein mujhe rona aa raha tha kyuki meine insabki life khrb krdi thi khass kar palvi ki..
Kyuki palvi tu mujhe pyar kri thi or us pyaar ke badle use kyaa mila or kyaa bna diya..

Bas yeh sab soch kr main toot chuka tha main jor jor se ro raha tha

Ranjeet... Ro sale roo yeh palvi maderchod sali randi ne kitni baar kosish ki tujhe yahan se bhgaa de taki tum bach ssko isne humse chori apni behn ka pta lga liya or usko tujhe warn krne ke liye bhejj diya lekin ofsos

: Bas yehi glti.krdi usne maar diya usko
Ranjeet ke itne kehne ke bad hi palvi jor jor se rone lag gai sab ka yehi haal tha
Main bas roye jaa rahaa thaa tabhi ..

Ranjeet ne kuj esa kaha ki jise sun meri akh mein khoon uttar aya

शानदार update भाई

 

[andyking302]

Jab main apni soch mein ghum tha to os time do log enter huye j

Ek ranjeet seth. Or dusra jise main kabhi jaan se jda ajeej tha lekin aaj ohi mera sab se bda dusman tha
Oske dekh kar ek baar to akho mein paani aa geya tha kyuki

Aaj bot time baad osko dekha tha pehle jaisa hi tha bas abb face par smile nhi thi

Mujhe dekh raha tha jaise mujhe maarne ko uska khoon ubaale mar raha hoo

Main bas usko hi dekh raha tha mujhe maloom tha ranjeet ki itni aukat nhi jo mujhe kaid kr sake lekin.

Main bas apne past mein betaye huye lambhe yaad kr raha tha jo mainu or esne bataye the

Hum dono bhut khush the lekin woh manhoos ghaddi jisme hum dono ek doosre ke dusman ban gaye
.or aaj kismat dekho mujhe marne wala bhi merw apna hi hai jo mere dil ke bhot krib hai.

Lekin abhi wakht kuch or hi hai

Main abhi apni hi soch mein ghum t
ha ki itne mein ranjeet bola..

Ranjeet... Kyu be sale dekha meri power aaj tujhe dikhaonga teri aukaat
Sale.usdin tune mujhe is ladki ke karan mara tha na aaj dekh isko nangi krke sab ke shamne chondoga

Jeet.. sale teri jubaan kheech longa aager.meri behn ke bare mein ek lafaz hi bola to

Ranjeet .hahaha sale.mout tere shmne hai fir bhi itni akad
Tujhe to bot tadfa tdfa kr maroonga itni asani moout nhi doonga sale

Jeet. .. hath to khool ssle ek baar fir btata hoon tujhe teri aukaat

Main ek paar jo ranjeet ke sath aya hai usko ajnabi likhonga

Main...ajnabi se kyu kiya tune esa tujhe maloom hain main sab kuch chord chuka hoon

: Ajnabi... Tum kaise bhool sskte hoo mujhe koi baat nhi tumhe sab yaad krwa donnga

Main... Akhir kyu yr hum sath mein kitne khush the bhut khush tha main tere sath fir tune esa kyu kiya

Ajnabi.. iske bhot se reason hain lekin main bataonga nhi tujhe akhir tadfa ta huya dekhna chahta hoon jaise main tdfa hoon pal.pal.

Main.. mujhe maar do tum apne hathoon se kam se kam khushi mujhe sakoon milega ki main apno ke hatho se mara hoon ..

Ajnabi... Nhi mere bhai nhi tujhe main nhi maroonga .

Ajnabi mere pass aker mere kaan mein

Ajnabi... Mujhe maloom hai tum yahan se bach kar nikl jaoga lekin yaad rakhna jab tum yahan se jaoge tum apna bhut kuch khoo chuke hoge

Take care .. apna khyaal rakhna or marna nhi tumhe sirf main maronga.

Ajnabi ranjeet se main jaa rhaan hoon yahan se tumhe jo krna hai kro

Ajnabi wohan se jate huye muskara raha tha jaise woh yahi krne aye tha..

Oske jaate hi main apne colge ke.dino ke bare mein sochne laga .. yeh sab kaise huya..

Tabhi ranjeet..
Ranjeet....hahhaaha aaj tum sab ko.maar kar bhut sskoon mile ga mujhe hahaha.

Jeet. .. tum mera lund mein muh lela tujhe sakoon mile ga itna khoon khraba krne ki kyaa jarort

Ranjeet... Apne admi se isko dusre room mein ejaa kr goli maar do sale ko.

Mainn... Ranjeet tumne palvi kyu pakd rakha hai yeh to teri trf thi....main bas ranjeet ka dhiyaan hatna chahta tha jeet se taki mujhe kuch time mile apne hath kholne ko.

Ranjeet..hahaha eh kabhhi meri traff nhi thi kabir yeh bas majboor thi
Maine jab dekha ki yeh tujhe pyar krti hai school time se tab hi esko majboor krke apni traf kr.liya thaa.

Main.... Majboor lekin kyu kaise majbori.

Ranjeet... Iski behn ko humne kidnap kr liya tha aaj tak woh hamare hi pass thi ..isiliye yeh hamari randi ban gai taki apni behn ka ptaa lgaa sake

Main... Kyaa lekin tum eske sath esa kyon kiya ..


Ranjeet... Kyuki yeh tumhe pyar krti thi.. main har osko.maar doonga jo tujhe pyaar kre ga kyuki tune mera pyaar cheena mujhse meri behn cheeni thi .

Main...kya matlb hai tumhara..

Ranjeet... Main hamesha se Manisha ko hi apna sab kuch maanta tha lekin os school ke kand ke bad Manisha mujhe nafrat krne legi or tujhe pyar.
Jaante ho kyaa aaj yeh sab yahan maregi kyuki yeh sab tumse pyaar krti hain..

Main.. tum pls enko jaane do.mujhe maar do inka koi kasoor nhi..
Asal mein mujhe rona aa raha tha kyuki meine insabki life khrb krdi thi khass kar palvi ki..
Kyuki palvi tu mujhe pyar kri thi or us pyaar ke badle use kyaa mila or kyaa bna diya..

Bas yeh sab soch kr main toot chuka tha main jor jor se ro raha tha

Ranjeet... Ro sale roo yeh palvi maderchod sali randi ne kitni baar kosish ki tujhe yahan se bhgaa de taki tum bach ssko isne humse chori apni behn ka pta lga liya or usko tujhe warn krne ke liye bhejj diya lekin ofsos

: Bas yehi glti.krdi usne maar diya usko
Ranjeet ke itne kehne ke bad hi palvi jor jor se rone lag gai sab ka yehi haal tha
Main bas roye jaa rahaa thaa tabhi ..

Ranjeet ne kuj esa kaha ki jise sun meri akh mein khoon uttar aya

जबरदस्त update bhai

 

[ragish7357]

Jab main apni soch mein ghum tha to os time do log enter huye j

Ek ranjeet seth. Or dusra jise main kabhi jaan se jda ajeej tha lekin aaj ohi mera sab se bda dusman tha
Oske dekh kar ek baar to akho mein paani aa geya tha kyuki

Aaj bot time baad osko dekha tha pehle jaisa hi tha bas abb face par smile nhi thi

Mujhe dekh raha tha jaise mujhe maarne ko uska khoon ubaale mar raha hoo

Main bas usko hi dekh raha tha mujhe maloom tha ranjeet ki itni aukat nhi jo mujhe kaid kr sake lekin.

Main bas apne past mein betaye huye lambhe yaad kr raha tha jo mainu or esne bataye the

Hum dono bhut khush the lekin woh manhoos ghaddi jisme hum dono ek doosre ke dusman ban gaye
.or aaj kismat dekho mujhe marne wala bhi merw apna hi hai jo mere dil ke bhot krib hai.

Lekin abhi wakht kuch or hi hai

Main abhi apni hi soch mein ghum t
ha ki itne mein ranjeet bola..

Ranjeet... Kyu be sale dekha meri power aaj tujhe dikhaonga teri aukaat
Sale.usdin tune mujhe is ladki ke karan mara tha na aaj dekh isko nangi krke sab ke shamne chondoga

Jeet.. sale teri jubaan kheech longa aager.meri behn ke bare mein ek lafaz hi bola to

Ranjeet .hahaha sale.mout tere shmne hai fir bhi itni akad
Tujhe to bot tadfa tdfa kr maroonga itni asani moout nhi doonga sale

Jeet. .. hath to khool ssle ek baar fir btata hoon tujhe teri aukaat

Main ek paar jo ranjeet ke sath aya hai usko ajnabi likhonga

Main...ajnabi se kyu kiya tune esa tujhe maloom hain main sab kuch chord chuka hoon

: Ajnabi... Tum kaise bhool sskte hoo mujhe koi baat nhi tumhe sab yaad krwa donnga

Main... Akhir kyu yr hum sath mein kitne khush the bhut khush tha main tere sath fir tune esa kyu kiya

Ajnabi.. iske bhot se reason hain lekin main bataonga nhi tujhe akhir tadfa ta huya dekhna chahta hoon jaise main tdfa hoon pal.pal.

Main.. mujhe maar do tum apne hathoon se kam se kam khushi mujhe sakoon milega ki main apno ke hatho se mara hoon ..

Ajnabi... Nhi mere bhai nhi tujhe main nhi maroonga .

Ajnabi mere pass aker mere kaan mein

Ajnabi... Mujhe maloom hai tum yahan se bach kar nikl jaoga lekin yaad rakhna jab tum yahan se jaoge tum apna bhut kuch khoo chuke hoge

Take care .. apna khyaal rakhna or marna nhi tumhe sirf main maronga.

Ajnabi ranjeet se main jaa rhaan hoon yahan se tumhe jo krna hai kro

Ajnabi wohan se jate huye muskara raha tha jaise woh yahi krne aye tha..

Oske jaate hi main apne colge ke.dino ke bare mein sochne laga .. yeh sab kaise huya..

Tabhi ranjeet..
Ranjeet....hahhaaha aaj tum sab ko.maar kar bhut sskoon mile ga mujhe hahaha.

Jeet. .. tum mera lund mein muh lela tujhe sakoon mile ga itna khoon khraba krne ki kyaa jarort

Ranjeet... Apne admi se isko dusre room mein ejaa kr goli maar do sale ko.

Mainn... Ranjeet tumne palvi kyu pakd rakha hai yeh to teri trf thi....main bas ranjeet ka dhiyaan hatna chahta tha jeet se taki mujhe kuch time mile apne hath kholne ko.

Ranjeet..hahaha eh kabhhi meri traff nhi thi kabir yeh bas majboor thi
Maine jab dekha ki yeh tujhe pyar krti hai school time se tab hi esko majboor krke apni traf kr.liya thaa.

Main.... Majboor lekin kyu kaise majbori.

Ranjeet... Iski behn ko humne kidnap kr liya tha aaj tak woh hamare hi pass thi ..isiliye yeh hamari randi ban gai taki apni behn ka ptaa lgaa sake

Main... Kyaa lekin tum eske sath esa kyon kiya ..


Ranjeet... Kyuki yeh tumhe pyar krti thi.. main har osko.maar doonga jo tujhe pyaar kre ga kyuki tune mera pyaar cheena mujhse meri behn cheeni thi .

Main...kya matlb hai tumhara..

Ranjeet... Main hamesha se Manisha ko hi apna sab kuch maanta tha lekin os school ke kand ke bad Manisha mujhe nafrat krne legi or tujhe pyar.
Jaante ho kyaa aaj yeh sab yahan maregi kyuki yeh sab tumse pyaar krti hain..

Main.. tum pls enko jaane do.mujhe maar do inka koi kasoor nhi..
Asal mein mujhe rona aa raha tha kyuki meine insabki life khrb krdi thi khass kar palvi ki..
Kyuki palvi tu mujhe pyar kri thi or us pyaar ke badle use kyaa mila or kyaa bna diya..

Bas yeh sab soch kr main toot chuka tha main jor jor se ro raha tha

Ranjeet... Ro sale roo yeh palvi maderchod sali randi ne kitni baar kosish ki tujhe yahan se bhgaa de taki tum bach ssko isne humse chori apni behn ka pta lga liya or usko tujhe warn krne ke liye bhejj diya lekin ofsos

: Bas yehi glti.krdi usne maar diya usko
Ranjeet ke itne kehne ke bad hi palvi jor jor se rone lag gai sab ka yehi haal tha
Main bas roye jaa rahaa thaa tabhi ..

Ranjeet ne kuj esa kaha ki jise sun meri akh mein khoon uttar aya

nice update bro

 

[mandy]

Ranjeet... Dekh kabir dekh kaise tera ant aa raha hai tum apne app ko bhut takatwar samjh te hoo na aaj dekh kaise teri priya ko nanga krke nacha taa hooon...

Jeet .... Bskd ke jaan se maar doonga tujhe ek baar hath khol tujhe batata hoon kon asli mard hai.

Ranjeet... Hahahaha sale tujhe to maaronga abhi maronga osne ek goli mari jeet.. or jeet mar geya

Ranjeet ne apne admi ko bola esko jao kutton ko fek ayo khane ke liye..

Ab mujhe gussa ana laga tha maine apni poori takat ke sath rassiyon ko todne ki kosish ki .
Ant mein mere hath khul gaye

Ranjeet ke admi ne mujhe dekh liya woh meri tarf bhagga apni gun liye or sidhi goli chla di

: Goli aker sidhe mere bajjo mein lgi

Main gusse mein tha mujhe bas ranjeet se bdla lena tha mujhe kuch nhi feel ho raha tha

Jab tak ranjeet ka admi mere goli mari tab tak main oske pass jaa phoucha or uski gardan tod di

Uske hath se gun pakad kar uske dusre admi ko maar diyan

Wohan karib 8 admi de meine sab ko goli maaar di ek bhi jinda nhi chora

Bas ek admi bacha tha jo jeet ki lash ko leker geya tha

Mere etna sab krne ke bad ranjeet shock.tha usko kuch samjh nhi aa rhaa tha kyuki eh sab kuch hi pal mein huya

Main ab ranjeet ki traff bda

Ranjeet ki akhoon mein dar saaf dikh raha thaa woh khaanp rahaa tha

Main usko marne se phle sab kuch janna chahata tha isiliye meine usko samjh kuch sach batone ko bola
Jo uske dar ke mare bol bhi diya.


Maim.... Kyu kiya yeh sab akhir kyu.

Ranjeet.. mujhe krde bhai age se esa kuch nhi kronga .

Main....maffi tujhe nhi.mile gi tune mera jaan se pyara dost maar diya jisko main apne bhai jaisa maanta tha

Ranjeet.. mujhe maaf krde pls bhai main sab kuch chorr donga ols mujhe maaf krde.

Main... Tune manisha ko kyu kaid kiya

Ranjeet... Bhai woh tumse pyar krne lagi hai hamare khilaff ho chli thi usko sab plan ke bare.mein pta chl geya tha isliye.liya isko marna jaorri tha.

Main.. tune bhot badi glti krdi ranjeet.
Akhir meine.kya.bigada tha tera

: Ranjeet..... hahahaahha abhi tujhe eh nhi batonga chahe mujhe maar hi kyu na do

Maine talwar uthai or ranjeet ka hath kaat diya


Main... Btaa akhir kyu tum hum sab ko marna chahate the.kyu
..

Ranjeet... Dard se rote huye achank hassne lga .
Jab mujhe uski hasi ka karn samjh aya to tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki..

Ek talwaar mere peat ke aar paar ho chuki thi .

Or mere muh se khoon nikl raha tha.

Jab meine pishe mud kar dekha to

Woh koi or nhi jeet tha...
Mera yaar jise.main apna bhai maanta tha usne mere peeth pishe talwaar khoob di thi.


Priya manisha palvi teeno meri tarf bhagi lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki main jameen par gir geya tha..
Tabhi jeet..bola..

 

[Jaguaar]

Ranjeet... Dekh kabir dekh kaise tera ant aa raha hai tum apne app ko bhut takatwar samjh te hoo na aaj dekh kaise teri priya ko nanga krke nacha taa hooon...

Jeet .... Bskd ke jaan se maar doonga tujhe ek baar hath khol tujhe batata hoon kon asli mard hai.

Ranjeet... Hahahaha sale tujhe to maaronga abhi maronga osne ek goli mari jeet.. or jeet mar geya

Ranjeet ne apne admi ko bola esko jao kutton ko fek ayo khane ke liye..

Ab mujhe gussa ana laga tha maine apni poori takat ke sath rassiyon ko todne ki kosish ki .
Ant mein mere hath khul gaye

Ranjeet ke admi ne mujhe dekh liya woh meri tarf bhagga apni gun liye or sidhi goli chla di

: Goli aker sidhe mere bajjo mein lgi

Main gusse mein tha mujhe bas ranjeet se bdla lena tha mujhe kuch nhi feel ho raha tha

Jab tak ranjeet ka admi mere goli mari tab tak main oske pass jaa phoucha or uski gardan tod di

Uske hath se gun pakad kar uske dusre admi ko maar diyan

Wohan karib 8 admi de meine sab ko goli maaar di ek bhi jinda nhi chora

Bas ek admi bacha tha jo jeet ki lash ko leker geya tha

Mere etna sab krne ke bad ranjeet shock.tha usko kuch samjh nhi aa rhaa tha kyuki eh sab kuch hi pal mein huya

Main ab ranjeet ki traff bda

Ranjeet ki akhoon mein dar saaf dikh raha thaa woh khaanp rahaa tha

Main usko marne se phle sab kuch janna chahata tha isiliye meine usko samjh kuch sach batone ko bola
Jo uske dar ke mare bol bhi diya.


Maim.... Kyu kiya yeh sab akhir kyu.

Ranjeet.. mujhe krde bhai age se esa kuch nhi kronga .

Main....maffi tujhe nhi.mile gi tune mera jaan se pyara dost maar diya jisko main apne bhai jaisa maanta tha

Ranjeet.. mujhe maaf krde pls bhai main sab kuch chorr donga ols mujhe maaf krde.

Main... Tune manisha ko kyu kaid kiya

Ranjeet... Bhai woh tumse pyar krne lagi hai hamare khilaff ho chli thi usko sab plan ke bare.mein pta chl geya tha isliye.liya isko marna jaorri tha.

Main.. tune bhot badi glti krdi ranjeet.
Akhir meine.kya.bigada tha tera

: Ranjeet..... hahahaahha abhi tujhe eh nhi batonga chahe mujhe maar hi kyu na do

Maine talwar uthai or ranjeet ka hath kaat diya


Main... Btaa akhir kyu tum hum sab ko marna chahate the.kyu
..

Ranjeet... Dard se rote huye achank hassne lga .
Jab mujhe uski hasi ka karn samjh aya to tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki..

Ek talwaar mere peat ke aar paar ho chuki thi .

Or mere muh se khoon nikl raha tha.

Jab meine pishe mud kar dekha to

Woh koi or nhi jeet tha...
Mera yaar jise.main apna bhai maanta tha usne mere peeth pishe talwaar khoob di thi.


Priya manisha palvi teeno meri tarf bhagi lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki main jameen par gir geya tha..
Tabhi jeet..bola..

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