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horshwa

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Iss site ke sabhi pathakon ko mera pranam. Iss site me mai naya hun, account aaj hi banaya hai, lekin kuch 2 mahine pahle hi iss site ke bare me pata chala.

Iss forum me post karne se pahle mai apne bare me thoda bata dena chahta hun, Mai angreji me kahani likhta raha hun, jise mai dusri jagah ek private group me share karta hun.

Maine kuch samay pahle hi hindi me kahani padhana shuru kiya hai, par mujhe jaisi kahaniyan pasand hain vaisi kahaniyan dusre site par nahi milin, kahaniyan jo lambi ho, plot ho, characters ko achche se build kiya gaya ho.
Ek hi page me kahani shuru, do teen para ke baad sex, sex bhi jo porn me hota hai, phir kahani khatm, mujhe aisi kahaniyon me koi ruchi nahi hai.

phir iss site ke bare me pata chala, (mujhe mere ek reader ne bataya jo ki meri angreji me likhi kahaniyan padhata hai)
yahan kuch naya dekhane ko mila, jaise ki bahut sari lambi kahaniyan, 100 se lekar 1000 post tak bhi hain.


Lekin jo chiz bilkul achchi nahi lagi, completely mood off karne wali wo hai, gifs aur image, shabdon se jyada to pictures lage hue hain thread me. Aur image bhi aise jo internet se randomly liye hon, aur situation me suit bhi nahi kar rahe, yahan tak ki lekhak ne likha hai laal sadi, aur picture daal di hari sadi me. ek post me ek actress ki picture dali, maine socha ki thik hai kahani ki nayika aisi dikhti hogi, lekin agle hi post me usi nayika ke liye dusri actress, ab kya hi kahen?


ho sakta hai jyadatar pathakon ko inse koi farq nahi padta hoga, kyunki aisi kahanhiyon ki views bahut jyada hain, lekin mai aisi stories ko first page ke bad hi quit kar deta hun.

Jo kahaniyan jyada achchi lagin, unme sex na ke barabar tha, aur kai baar to sex tha bhi to writer ka style pasand nahi aaya.

Inn sab ke baad kuch kahaniyan thin jo bahut pasand aayin.


Ye meri pahli hindi kahani hogi, to mai kah nahi sakta ki mai kaisa likh paunga.
Mai apne writing ke bare me kuch chizen pahle hi bata dena hun, taki aap apna samay vyarth na karen, agar aapko meri cheezen pasand naa aayen.

1. yahan koi pics, gifs nahi hogi.

2. kahani shuddha hindi me na hokar hinglish me hogi aur chracters ke hisab se badlegi.

3. kyunki ye forum hai aur yahan writer and readers enteract karte hain, aur readers plot ke liye suggestions bhi dete hain. mujhe ye pasand nahi aata. kahani ka plot mere dimag me pahle se hi hai. (phir bhi kisi ko kahani ke plot ko lekar kuch kahna hai, to wo post ke bajaye, personal message se bole)

4. kahani me sex hoga, lekin immidiately nahi, kai logo ko start ke posts bahut slow aur boring lagegi.


5. Mai khali samay par aur mood hone par hi likhta hun, busy hone par updates nahi de paunga, lekin maan ke chaliye ki updates slow hi aayenge. Mujhe khud ko incomplete stories pasand nahi hai, isliye mai padhane se pahle dekh leta hun ki kahani kitni lambi hai, kitne post hain, uske baad hi padhta hun, aap bhi bookmark kar digiye aur hafe do hafte me dekh ligiyega ki kuch post hua ya nahi, uske baad hi pahla post padhiye. Usually jaise story mai likhne ja raha hun, agar mood achcha raha aur samay mila to 6 months se lekar 1 saal me kahani ko khatm kar dunga ya phir bich me maja nahi aaya to kisi achche mod par lekar khatm maan liya jayega.

Iske aalawa bhi kuch chizen aur batana chahta hun, jo ki meri writing style ke bare me hai.

1. characters thode blurry honge, aapke paas bhi character ko apni fantasy me fit karne ki gunjaish hogi.

2. jahag yani ki location, shahar, gaon ka naam nahi hoga, reader meri soch se alag, apni imagination se apni dekhi location soch sakta hai.

3. kahani choronological nahi hogi.


Bas abhi ke liye itna hi hai kahne ko,


 

horshwa

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Dopahar ke 2 baj rahe the aur Sujata sofe me aaram se baith,saamne ke table par apne pair pasare TV dekh rahi thi. Din bhar ka kaam karne ke baad yahi ek matra wo samay hota tha jab use thoda aaram karne ka samay mil pata tha. Savere 6 baje se uthkar wo sabse pahle to ghar ke bahar jhadu lagati thi aur phir pine ka pani paas ke handpump se le ke aati thi, jiske liye use adhe kilometer dur jana hota tha. Nal ka pani baki sare kaam aa jata tha lekin pine aur khana banane ke kaam nahi aata.

Uske pati ke liye chai deti, phir unka nashta banati aur tifin pack karti thi. Jise lekar wo savere 9 baje tak ghar se nikal jate the aur shaam ke 7 baje tak wapas loutte the. 1 ghanta to unhe aane jane me hi lagta tha kyuki wo ek sarkaari aawas me rahte the aur unka office pahle issi town me tha lekin jab unka transfer ho gaya to unke baad do options the. Ya to apni family lekar nayi jagah jaye ya phir apne hi purane aawas se aana jana kare. Unhone aaja jana karna behtar samjha kyuki jis ghar me wo abhi rahte the wo achchi halat me tha aur bada bhi tha saath hi bahut hawadar tha. Itne saalo tak vaha rahne ke karan paas pados ke logo se achchi pahchan bhi ho gayi thi.

Sujata jaise taise kar ke apne pati ka kaam nibtati thi ki ghar ke dono bachche taiyyar hone lagte. Chhota beta Yash saatvi me padhta tha, wo savere se uth kar mohalle ke bachcho ke saath khelta rahta tha. Sujata apne pati ke jane ke baad, uske liye pani garam karti aur nahane ko bolti, "chal taiyyar ho jaldi, school jana hai", "aa raha hun mummy" bol bol kar wo khelta rahta jab tak wo chillati nahi thi aur wo apni mummy se daant nahi kha leta. Jab wo nahane jata to wo apni beti ko uthane jati.

Swati, ghar ki beti thi, aur apni mummy ke samne maharani jaise thhat se rahti thi. "9 baj ke 15 minute me uthana na 1 minute pahle na 1 minute baad", ye uska order rahta tha. Order hi deti thi apni mummy ko wo. Papa ke baad, ghar me uski hi chalti thi aur Sujata sochti "kaise karegi ye ladki, sasural walon ke samne to aisa nahin chalega", par sach to ye tha ki wo khud hi sar me chadha ke rakhti thi apni beti ko aur uski saari demand puri karti rahti, jo wo kar sakti thi.

Swati to kuch saal pahle tak, papa ke samne bhi daant deti thi, lekin phir badi ho gayi, Sujata ko laga ki achcha hai kam se kam riston ka lihaz karne lagi aur mard aur aurat ka farq bhi samajh aane laga hai. Lekin apne papa se bhale hi duri bana li ho lekin apni mummy ko itana paresaan kar deti thi ki kai bar uski aankhon me aansu bhi aa jate the. Lekin ek minute baad phir wo Swati ko vaise hi rajkumari jaise laad karne lagti.


Sujata ghar ka sara kaam hone ke bavjud har 1 2 minute me ghadi ki oor dekhti rahti ki 9 15 to nahi ho gaye. Wo busy rahti thi ghar ke kaam me, sabji paltna hai, bahar sabjiwala ya doodhwala aaya to dekhna hota hai, bartan dhone hai aur bhi chhote chhote kaam hote the jo iss chakkar me der ho jate the. 9 14 me wo haath me chai lekar uske bed ke kinare khadi rahti, ki thik 9 15 me uthaungi, ek baar 9 13 me utha di thi - "chalo 5 baar uthak-baithak karo, 2 minute pahle utha di", saja mili thi wo karne lagi to "kaan pakad ke", order mila, phir usne apni beti ke samne hi kaan pakad uthak baithak bhi kar dali.

Ab thi to wo uski maa hi aur sakhti se bhi nipat sakti thi apni beti se ki sachmuch me jor se chilla de lekin aisa karne se wo meethi ladai aur dost jaisa rishta bhi to khatm ho jata. isliye wo hamesha dikhavati gussa dikhati aur andar hi andar khush hoti apni beti ki aisi chedkani se.

Sujata ki nazar me Swati ek jimmedar ladki ho gayi thi. Swati ko 19 saal pure ho chuke the aur usne bhi ghar ki thodi jimmedari uthana shuru kar diya tha. Wo 6 mahine pahle tak college jati thi aur second year me BSC kar rahi thi. College wo apne papa ke hi saath jati thi unki gadi me baithkar kyuki wo uske papa ki office ke raste me hi tha, aate samay bus se aa jati thi. Phir wo sham ko bachcho ko tuition padhati thi aur tuition se 2 3 hazar rupay aa jate the ghar me.

Sujata apni beti ko paise kamata dekh bahut khush hoti thi, halaki uske papa ko lagta tha ki ab uski shadi kara deni chahiye. Chhote jagah me shadi jaldi ho bhi jati thi to unka sochna bhi Sujata ko galat nahi lagta tha lekin wo chahti thi ki Swati apni marji se jindagi jiye.

6 mahine pahle hi paas ke hi ek private school walon ne use chhote bachcho ko padhane ke liye bola, 12 hazar ki salary thi. Wo ghar me aake boli - "papa, aajkal deegree se bhi kuch hota to nahi hai, isliye mai padhai distance se karungi aur iss noukari ko join kar leti hun, aur compitition ke exams dete rahungi", uske papa ko jyada farq nahi padta tha, wo bole "jo sahi lage karo", man hi man unhe to shadi karane ki tension thi.

Sujata khush hui ki ab to uski rajkumari apne pairo par khadi ho gai. Jis din uski naukari lagi thi uss din uski aankhon se khushi ke do aansu bhi nikal aaye the kyuki usne jindagi me jo bhugta tha paise ki tangi ki vajah se wo nahi chahati thi ki uski beti ko kabhi wo din dekhna pade. Aur vo distance se graduation bhi kar le rahi hai to bhavishya me uski aur achchi naukari bhi lag sakti hai. Abhi akhiri 6 mahine se wo school hi jati hai, padhane ke liye.

Jab uski pahli salary mili use, to usne apne papa ke liye ek shirt aur pant 1-1 hazar ki aur apni mummy ke liye 5 hazar ki ek sadi lekar aayi aur apne chhote bhai ke liye ek cricket ka bat aur joote kharid kar layi thi. Sujata ki khushi ka koi thikana hi nahi tha aur wo use gale lagakar rone lagi. Wo khushi ke aansu the, uski beti ka pyar aur parivar ke prati jimmedari aur uski paripakvta ko dekhkar uski aankhon se jhalak aaye the.

"chup ho ja, saas-bahu dekh dekh ke tu bhi vaise hi dramebaaz hoti ja rahi hai", "chhod mujhe aur pahan ke dikha", usne apni mummy do dantate hue apne hi andaz me bola.

Pahle wo apni mummy ko bhi aap bolti thi phir jab se wo badi hui kuch salon se tu-tum hi bolne lagi. "tum mummy ho ya dost ho", wo puchti, Sujata ne "dost" bolna sahi samjha. "haan to dost to aap kahte hain kya, dost to barabar hota hai", phir to vo vaise hi baat karti thi ki jaise kisi dost se karte hain.

Sujata ne kabhi 2 hazar se jyada ki sadi nahi kharidi thi, wo bhi tab jab use kisi jaruri shadi me jana hota tha. "tere papa ke liye bhi thoda aur achcha le aati", usne apni beti se kaha.

Sujata ko lagta tha, kyuki uske papa bar bar uski shadi karane ki bat chhed dete the isliye Swati apne papa se thodi dur dur hi rahne lagi thi aur unhone bhi Swati ko lad pyar dena thoda kam kar diya tha. Khair, sabki apni samjh hoti hai, Mahila aur Purush ke sochne ke tarike me farq hota hai, Dil aur deemag wala farq. Samay aur gyan ke saath bhi sochane ka tarika badal jata hai. Sujata ko lagta tha ki uske papa bhi apni beti ka bhala hi chahenge. Sujata bas ye chahti thi ki ghar me sab khush rahen aur Swati wo kare jo uska man me ho.

Swati ko bistar se uthane ke baad, Sujata apne dono bachcho ke liye unka tifin taiyyar karti, phir jab wo chale jate to phir bartan saaf karti, ghar ka jhadu pocha karti, kapde dhoti aur dopahar ka khana banati jo wo khud khati aur uske bachche bhi aakar khate the agar unhe bhookh lagi hoti thi.

Jab tak Swati ki naukari nahi lagi thi, wo 4 5 ghante silai ka kaam bhi karti thi thode aur paise kamane ke liye. lekin ab wo shouk se, sirf time milane par ya phir sunday ko hi silai kar pati thi. Khair, ab use thoda chain tha, kyuki uski beti bhi kamane lagi thi.

Itne kaam karne ke baad wo naha kar aai aur chain se TV ka remote liye sofe me pith tikakar, table me pair failakar, saas bahu wale serial aur dance shows badal badal kar dekh rahi thi, tabhi uska phone baja.
 
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