Iss site ke sabhi pathakon ko mera pranam. Iss site me mai naya hun, account aaj hi banaya hai, lekin kuch 2 mahine pahle hi iss site ke bare me pata chala.
Iss forum me post karne se pahle mai apne bare me thoda bata dena chahta hun, Mai angreji me kahani likhta raha hun, jise mai dusri jagah ek private group me share karta hun.
Maine kuch samay pahle hi hindi me kahani padhana shuru kiya hai, par mujhe jaisi kahaniyan pasand hain vaisi kahaniyan dusre site par nahi milin, kahaniyan jo lambi ho, plot ho, characters ko achche se build kiya gaya ho.
Ek hi page me kahani shuru, do teen para ke baad sex, sex bhi jo porn me hota hai, phir kahani khatm, mujhe aisi kahaniyon me koi ruchi nahi hai.
phir iss site ke bare me pata chala, (mujhe mere ek reader ne bataya jo ki meri angreji me likhi kahaniyan padhata hai)
yahan kuch naya dekhane ko mila, jaise ki bahut sari lambi kahaniyan, 100 se lekar 1000 post tak bhi hain.
Lekin jo chiz bilkul achchi nahi lagi, completely mood off karne wali wo hai, gifs aur image, shabdon se jyada to pictures lage hue hain thread me. Aur image bhi aise jo internet se randomly liye hon, aur situation me suit bhi nahi kar rahe, yahan tak ki lekhak ne likha hai laal sadi, aur picture daal di hari sadi me. ek post me ek actress ki picture dali, maine socha ki thik hai kahani ki nayika aisi dikhti hogi, lekin agle hi post me usi nayika ke liye dusri actress, ab kya hi kahen?
ho sakta hai jyadatar pathakon ko inse koi farq nahi padta hoga, kyunki aisi kahanhiyon ki views bahut jyada hain, lekin mai aisi stories ko first page ke bad hi quit kar deta hun.
Jo kahaniyan jyada achchi lagin, unme sex na ke barabar tha, aur kai baar to sex tha bhi to writer ka style pasand nahi aaya.
Inn sab ke baad kuch kahaniyan thin jo bahut pasand aayin.
Ye meri pahli hindi kahani hogi, to mai kah nahi sakta ki mai kaisa likh paunga.
Mai apne writing ke bare me kuch chizen pahle hi bata dena hun, taki aap apna samay vyarth na karen, agar aapko meri cheezen pasand naa aayen.
1. yahan koi pics, gifs nahi hogi.
2. kahani shuddha hindi me na hokar hinglish me hogi aur chracters ke hisab se badlegi.
3. kyunki ye forum hai aur yahan writer and readers enteract karte hain, aur readers plot ke liye suggestions bhi dete hain. mujhe ye pasand nahi aata. kahani ka plot mere dimag me pahle se hi hai. (phir bhi kisi ko kahani ke plot ko lekar kuch kahna hai, to wo post ke bajaye, personal message se bole)
4. kahani me sex hoga, lekin immidiately nahi, kai logo ko start ke posts bahut slow aur boring lagegi.
5. Mai khali samay par aur mood hone par hi likhta hun, busy hone par updates nahi de paunga, lekin maan ke chaliye ki updates slow hi aayenge. Mujhe khud ko incomplete stories pasand nahi hai, isliye mai padhane se pahle dekh leta hun ki kahani kitni lambi hai, kitne post hain, uske baad hi padhta hun, aap bhi bookmark kar digiye aur hafe do hafte me dekh ligiyega ki kuch post hua ya nahi, uske baad hi pahla post padhiye. Usually jaise story mai likhne ja raha hun, agar mood achcha raha aur samay mila to 6 months se lekar 1 saal me kahani ko khatm kar dunga ya phir bich me maja nahi aaya to kisi achche mod par lekar khatm maan liya jayega.
Iske aalawa bhi kuch chizen aur batana chahta hun, jo ki meri writing style ke bare me hai.
1. characters thode blurry honge, aapke paas bhi character ko apni fantasy me fit karne ki gunjaish hogi.
2. jahag yani ki location, shahar, gaon ka naam nahi hoga, reader meri soch se alag, apni imagination se apni dekhi location soch sakta hai.
3. kahani choronological nahi hogi.
Bas abhi ke liye itna hi hai kahne ko,
Iss forum me post karne se pahle mai apne bare me thoda bata dena chahta hun, Mai angreji me kahani likhta raha hun, jise mai dusri jagah ek private group me share karta hun.
Maine kuch samay pahle hi hindi me kahani padhana shuru kiya hai, par mujhe jaisi kahaniyan pasand hain vaisi kahaniyan dusre site par nahi milin, kahaniyan jo lambi ho, plot ho, characters ko achche se build kiya gaya ho.
Ek hi page me kahani shuru, do teen para ke baad sex, sex bhi jo porn me hota hai, phir kahani khatm, mujhe aisi kahaniyon me koi ruchi nahi hai.
phir iss site ke bare me pata chala, (mujhe mere ek reader ne bataya jo ki meri angreji me likhi kahaniyan padhata hai)
yahan kuch naya dekhane ko mila, jaise ki bahut sari lambi kahaniyan, 100 se lekar 1000 post tak bhi hain.
Lekin jo chiz bilkul achchi nahi lagi, completely mood off karne wali wo hai, gifs aur image, shabdon se jyada to pictures lage hue hain thread me. Aur image bhi aise jo internet se randomly liye hon, aur situation me suit bhi nahi kar rahe, yahan tak ki lekhak ne likha hai laal sadi, aur picture daal di hari sadi me. ek post me ek actress ki picture dali, maine socha ki thik hai kahani ki nayika aisi dikhti hogi, lekin agle hi post me usi nayika ke liye dusri actress, ab kya hi kahen?
ho sakta hai jyadatar pathakon ko inse koi farq nahi padta hoga, kyunki aisi kahanhiyon ki views bahut jyada hain, lekin mai aisi stories ko first page ke bad hi quit kar deta hun.
Jo kahaniyan jyada achchi lagin, unme sex na ke barabar tha, aur kai baar to sex tha bhi to writer ka style pasand nahi aaya.
Inn sab ke baad kuch kahaniyan thin jo bahut pasand aayin.
Ye meri pahli hindi kahani hogi, to mai kah nahi sakta ki mai kaisa likh paunga.
Mai apne writing ke bare me kuch chizen pahle hi bata dena hun, taki aap apna samay vyarth na karen, agar aapko meri cheezen pasand naa aayen.
1. yahan koi pics, gifs nahi hogi.
2. kahani shuddha hindi me na hokar hinglish me hogi aur chracters ke hisab se badlegi.
3. kyunki ye forum hai aur yahan writer and readers enteract karte hain, aur readers plot ke liye suggestions bhi dete hain. mujhe ye pasand nahi aata. kahani ka plot mere dimag me pahle se hi hai. (phir bhi kisi ko kahani ke plot ko lekar kuch kahna hai, to wo post ke bajaye, personal message se bole)
4. kahani me sex hoga, lekin immidiately nahi, kai logo ko start ke posts bahut slow aur boring lagegi.
5. Mai khali samay par aur mood hone par hi likhta hun, busy hone par updates nahi de paunga, lekin maan ke chaliye ki updates slow hi aayenge. Mujhe khud ko incomplete stories pasand nahi hai, isliye mai padhane se pahle dekh leta hun ki kahani kitni lambi hai, kitne post hain, uske baad hi padhta hun, aap bhi bookmark kar digiye aur hafe do hafte me dekh ligiyega ki kuch post hua ya nahi, uske baad hi pahla post padhiye. Usually jaise story mai likhne ja raha hun, agar mood achcha raha aur samay mila to 6 months se lekar 1 saal me kahani ko khatm kar dunga ya phir bich me maja nahi aaya to kisi achche mod par lekar khatm maan liya jayega.
Iske aalawa bhi kuch chizen aur batana chahta hun, jo ki meri writing style ke bare me hai.
1. characters thode blurry honge, aapke paas bhi character ko apni fantasy me fit karne ki gunjaish hogi.
2. jahag yani ki location, shahar, gaon ka naam nahi hoga, reader meri soch se alag, apni imagination se apni dekhi location soch sakta hai.
3. kahani choronological nahi hogi.
Bas abhi ke liye itna hi hai kahne ko,