My suggestion..by all means take opinions of readers..but would suggest ki tumne jaisa story socha hain, waise hi likho. Agar koi suggestion accha lagta gain to use story nein add karo. Jab tumne story start kiya tga..to story ke baare mein kuch to socha hoga..plot, situations, etc..go with that. Rest upto you. Agar sab readers ki sunoge to story will go haywire..Dosto please apne comment de ki aage kahani me kaya hona chaiye kaya Ayan ko Salma ko apne paar rakhna chaiye ya fir Salma ko talak de kar fir se Faisal ke paas bhej dena chaiye please reply and commet .
anokha