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Excellent and really exciting writing!Kahani shuru karne se pehle chand baatein kahna chahta hoo......is kahani mein likhe gaye har alfaaz sach hai Bas log jagah,aur naam puri tarike se kaalpanik hai........ kahani koi zyada lambi nahi hogi aap aaram se parh bhi sakenge aur boriyat bhi nahi hogi...kahani agar pasand na aaye toh wohi padhna chodh de aur apna keemati Waqt .........................bachaaye....?
[Apni iss kahnai ko likhte wakt mujhe khud 2 baar mutth marni padi......... ! ]
Aadhi raat ka gahra sannata door kahi thodi thodi dair mai kutton ke bhokne awaajein uss sannate ko cheer rahi thi aise mai sabhi log nend ki aagosh mai besudh so rahe they agar koi jaag raha tha to vo tha mai aaj mera chota sa accident ho gaya tha jammu se 7 km door jungle mai hamari gaadi khaayi mai gir gayi aur sab ghayal ho gaye jin mein mai bhi shamil tha
jab hosh aaya to maine khud ko hospital mai paya mere hath mai glucose ki bottle lagi hui thi aur sir per pattiya bandh chuki thi doctor k anusar 2 Ghante baad mujhe hosh aaya tha mujhe general ward mai shift kar rakha tha doctor ne kaha mujhe tab tak discharge nahi kiya ja sakta jab tak mai poori tarha theek na ho jaon isme Ek hafta bhi lag sakta hai aur mahina bhi Maine pent ki jeb tatool kar mobile nikala to dekha to pichle 1 ghante ke ander meri ammi mujhe 4 baar phone kar chuki hai sach kaha hai kisi ne maa to maa hoti hai na jane usse sab kuch kaise pata chal jata hai sach baat hai kuch baatein ek Umar k baad hi samjh aati hai tabhi phir se mera phone ring karne laga maine turant phone uttha liya aur dhire de phone ko apne chahre k pass le jakar ammi ko salaam kiya ..?
asalamu alaikum....... ammi jaan
Walekum assalam..... beta
Mere Salaam ka jawab unhone khamoshi se diya phir mujhse poucha kaise ho beta.......? Un ki awaaj mai thodi ghabrahat thi
maine kaha ammi mai bilkul theek hu aap bataye woh phir kahne lagi k mera dil ghabra raha hai kahin thumhe kuch hua to nahi hai un ki saanse teji se chal rahi thi ? Mai usko bechain nahi hone dena chahta tha iss liye maine jhuth bol diya k mai bilkul theek hu ...aap meri chinta mat karo kaam thoda jayda tha iss liye thoda busy tha
Phir sabhi chezon ko bhool kar maine usee baton ka silsila suru kiya phone per baaton ka lamba door tab tak chala jab tak ki phone ki bettry ka dam na nikala gaya ho.......? ammi se phone per baat karne k liye 24 ghante kam pad rahe they.... ji chah raha tha ki ammi bass sara time mere sath bethi rahe mujhse baatein karti rahe ....dil kar raha tha phone per baat karte-karte ammi k pass pahuch jaon magar aaj halaat aise they ki mai ek glass pani k liye bhi tarsh raha tha agar aaj ammi pass hoti to aise halat mai bister se uthne bhi nahi deti...ye soch kar hi meri ankhon mai aansoo aa gaye ...Sach kahu to mera mann yaha bilkul nahi lagta tha aaj mujhe yaha aaye 6 mahine ho gaye they mere pass koi aisa nahi tha jisse mai apne dil ki baat kar saku Per meri ammi jinko itni door rahkar bhi meri pal pal ki khabar rahti hai mere pass nishani k tour per unki ek shadi ki tasveer thi uss k alwala unn ki aur koi tasveer mere pass nahi thi jeb tatool kar maine usse bahar nikal liya aur dekhne laga meri roj ki aadat thi sone se pahle ammi ko dekhne ki aaj bhi unki tasveer dekh kar mai roj ki tarha poorane khyalon mai doobta chala gaya
Kahte hai kabhi kabhi ateet mai kho jana bhi achha hota hai poorani yaade taaja ho jati hai aur hum uss mai itna kho jaate hai ki hame pata bhi nahi chalta ki is bich ka time kab gujar gaya ............kudrat ki god mai basa mera chota sa gaon bahut khubsurat tha charo taraf hare bhare jungle , jheel aur koyle ki khaan iss gaon ki khasiyat thi Gaon me jaydater log gaon jayda bada nahi tha fir bhi sabhi khushaal they sabhi log ek doosre ki madad karne ko tayyer khade rahte...... Isi gaon k ander hamari bhi ek choti si duniya thi mere walid sahab ka naam Raheem khan hai or unki umar 48 saal hai.... meri ammi ka naam Farida begum tha apne naam ki tarha hi Khoobsurat aur izzatdaar khandaan ki aurat bahut nek bhali aur sareef parde wali khatun jinki 44 saal umar thi
Abbu thode sakht mizaaj ke they har wakt gusse mai rahte ammi ki koi kadar nahi karte kabhi kabhi woh ammi per hath bhi utha dete they per iske bawajood bhi meri ammi koi sikayat nahi karti kiyoki woh janti thi ki maan maryada izazat kiya hoti hai woh abbu k naaz nakhro ko chup chaap bardast kar leti ...Mai bachpan se hi dekhta tha kis tarha meri ammi rote hue abbu ki sakhtmizazi aur meri kamyabi ko laikar uperwale se duaa karti thi abbu padhe likhe they iss liye woh mujhe padhate they magar sabak yaad na hone per dhunayi bahut karte they ...ammi ki tarha mujhe bhi unse bahut darr lagta tha iss liye kayi dafa to yaad hua sabak bhi unke darr se bhool jata tha per meri ammi ne wahi cheez khel khel aur pyar si sikha di .... meri ammi gaav ki mahila thi is liye woh bass paanchvi jamaat tak padhi thi kuch saal pahle tak mai bistar per hi pesaab kar deta tha per meri pyari ammi jaan bina ufff kiye poora bistar dho deti thi jab mai school jaata to jeb kharch k liye kuch paise de deti thi raat ko sone se pahle ammi mujhe achhi achhi baatein sikhati woh kahti thi ...apne bado ki izzat karna ,mann laga kar padhna,chori nahi karna ,jhoot mat bolna wagera wagera.............! Ammi ki nashiton ko mai dhyaan se sunta aur un per amal karne ki baat karta ........Ek baar mera school mai jhagda ho gaya yeh baat abbu ko pata chali to usne mujhe zor se thappad maar diya mai rote rote ghar se nikal gaya aur ghar k piche bane store room mai anaaj ki bori k piche chipp gaya aur sara din wahi chipa raha magar raat hui to mujhe darr lagne laga to mai waha se nikal karr ghar mai aa gaya ....maine dekha ammi jo hamesha abbu se dabi awaaj mein baat karti hai vo mere khatir abbu se jhagad rahi hai mein darwaje k piche se sab dekh raha tha mujhe bhookh lag rahi thi to mai dabe paon rasio mai chala gaya per bartano ki aahat sun karr ammi turant aa gayi uski ankhon mai ansoo they mai uske pass chala gaya to usne mujhe apne aanchal mai chipa liya.... is tarha dhire dhire din guzarte chale gaye 12 jamaat mai maine school toop kiya to newspaper mai badi izzat ke sath mera naam chapa tha shaam ko ghar aaya to ammi ko newspaper dikahte hue kaha k ammi maine poore school mai top kiya hai newspaper mai abaa aur mera photo ek sath dekh ammi ne asmaan ki taraf hath utha karr kaha sukar hai allaha ka ....Suru se hi mere sapne bahut bade they main jindgi mai bahut khuch karna chahta tha magar usi raat ko jab mein so raha tha to maine sapne mai dekha k mai apne mulk k liye qurban ho gaya hu usi wakt se maine foji banne ki thaan li aur agle din apne dil ki baat bata maine ammi ko bata di ....per ammi ki dili tamanna thi ki mai school ke bajaye apne majhab ki taleem hasil karu per maine ammi ko samjhaya k ammi mai **** to padh chuka hu abb jamana badal gaya hai mujhe padhne likhne ki jarurat hai ammi ko meri baat theek lagi aur kahne lagi theek hai beta mai shaam ko thumhare abbu se baat karti hu..? Raat ko ammi ne khane ki table per abbu ko newspaper dikahte hue kaha "suno ji hamare bete ne school toop kiya hai uska sapna army mai bharti hone ka hai ...Itna sunna tha ki abba ke tever badal gaye aur gusse se kahne lage kiya karega foji ban kar 12 th pass kar li hai bass yahi bahut hai abb ek achhi ladki dekh uski shaadi kar denge abbu ki baat sun kar mujhe unper bahut gussa aaya ek baar ko to mann kiya k abhi ghar chodh k bhaag jaon ...?
Tabhi ammi boli, " suno ji agar asif ko army
mein jana pashand hai to aap usper apni marzi kiyo thop rahe ho ."
Abbu aur jayda gusse mai bole, " thumhe yeh sab itna asaan lagta hai kiraye ka Kamra , khane pine ka bill ,coaching ka kharcha uske baad army ka test in sab mein kam se kam 5 lakh rupeey lag jayege kaha se karenge itna kharcha itne paiso mai to iski dhoom dhaam se shaadi ho jayegi .....?
Iss baar ammi bhadak uthi aur boli .... kharche ki chinta tum mat karo mein apne gahne girvi rakh dungi Mera beta voh sab karega jo woh karna chahta hai
Per abbu kaha itni jaldi haar manne wale they woh ammi se kahne lage tum kuch dino k liye apne maayke chali jaon tumhari tabiyat theek ho jayegi itna sunte hi ammi ki ankhon mein ansoo aa gaye kiykoi nani ke ghar jane ka matalab tha ammi ko ghor beijjati kiyoki abbu ammi ko lene nahi jaate phir mama mami yaha tak ki adosh padosh k log ammi ko taane marne lagte phir kam se kam
5-6 mahine baad abbu ammi ko lene jaate sath me qasam lete k ammi ko unki har baat maani hogi iske baad hi unhe apne sath laate
iss baar ammi jayda nahi boli bass itna kaha apni tarha mai bete ki jindagi barbad nahi hone dungi aap rahne do mein dekhti hu kiya karna hai or haa mein mayke nahi ja rahi hu........ yahi mera ghar hai ....................
mein yahi rahungi apne bete k sath.............. Sab batein sun kar main waha se apne room mein chala aaya mujhe laga abb sab khtam ho gaya hai abba nahi manege iss liye mai apne bistar per lait gaya kisi tarha woh bhaari raat gujree aur subha hui abbu bina kuch bole nikal gaye jaise hi ammi ki najar mujh per padi usne mujhe pyar se dekha aur boli chal jaldi se tayyer ho jaon hame sahar jaana hai itna sunte hi mere to jaise pankh nikal gaye ho mai ammi se lipat gaya thodi dair baad hum dono auto le kar saher aa gaye pahli baar sahar ko dekh kar mera dil jhoom utha auto wale ko ammi ne sunar ki dukaan per chalne ko kaha to auto wala hame ek bahut badi jwellery ki dukaan per le gaya ammi ne apne gahno ki potli sunaar k samne rakh di sunaar ne gahno ko tola aur hame 4 lakh rupeey de diye iske baad khushi khushi hum coaching centre pahuch gaye .... mujhe admission milne mai koi dikkat nahi hui mere 12 jamaat k marks aur newspaper mai naam dekh kar coaching centre ka head bahut khush hua mere achhe marks aane ki wajha se meri kuch percent fees bhi kam ho gayi .......!
admission fees k sath hamne hostal ki fees bhi ek sath pay kar di unhone ammi ko yakeen dilate hue kaha bahan ji aap apne bete ki chinta na kare jaise iss ne apne school ka naam roshan kiya hai waise hi hamare coaching centre ka naam Roshan karega Abhi kuch din aur admission chal rahe they jis wajha se class nahi lag rahi hai jaise hi class lagni suru hogi hum aapko phone kar ke bata denge Iske baad hum khushi khushi ghar aa gaye kuch din baad class suru hui to mein ammi se vida laikar mai wapis coaching centre chala aaya aur poori lagan k sath padhayi mai jutt gaya ji tod mahnat karne laga har wakt padhai mai masgool rahne laga coaching ke sath hi maine shaam ko kuch bachho ko tusion dena bhi suru kar diya jisse kuch kharcha nikal aata aakhirkar maine foj mai bharti hone ka written exaam pass kar liya meri mahnat rang le hi aayi Gaon pahuch kar maine ammi ko yeh khuskhabri di to unke muh muh se to bol hi nahi fote bass dono hath duaa mai uthate hue boli Ya khuda tera lakh lakh sukar hai exaam pass karne k baad mujhe traning k liye phir se ghar chodna pada.... training poori hui aur woh din bhi aaya jiska mujhe besabri se intizaar tha khuda k fazlo karam se mai foji ban gaya agle din bina bataye meine gaon jaane ke liye buss pakdi har stop per buss rookti to dil ki dhadkan badh jati yeh soch kar ki ammi ko kiase lagega jab mai batounga ki mein foji ban gaya hu? Gaon k buss Stop per utar kar maine halwaai ki dukaan se mithai khareed kar ghar ki taraf chal pada ghar pahucha to dekha hamare ghar k samne logon ki bheed lagi thi...mujhe to kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha ki hamare ghar itni bheed kiyo lagi hai kahin kuch ho to nahi gaya hai meri ankhe ammi ko dhondhne lagi ghar ke bahar abbu aur unke kuch dost bethe batein kar rahe they meine sabko duaa salaam kiya phir bheed se raasta bana kar ghar main ghush gaya ammi rasoighar mein chaye bana rahi thi sir per halka dupatta chahra pasine se tar batar
Mujhe kuch bhi achha nahi lag raha tha maine preshaan hote hue kaha ammi sab theek to hai naa ammi ne kuch jawab nahi diya bass dhair sare cup mein chaye chaan kar tray me rakhi aur mujhse kaha ja bahar ja kar de aa tere abba kab se chaye k liye k kah rahe hai Ammi ko kuch jawaab diye bina mein tray utha kar bahar le gaya aur table per bicho bich trya rakh di abbu ne kuch dair meri taraf dekha phir newspaper niche rakha aur sabko chaye ka chup pakdane lage tabhi meri Najar newspaper per padi jisme meri army officer banne ki khabar chap chuki thi abb mujhse sara mamla samjh aa gaya abb samjha log yaha bina wajha ikhtha nahi hua balki mere swagat karne k aaye hue hai tabhi abbu k dost ne mere gale main phulon ki mala pahan di phir abbu se kahne lage bada honhar beta hai aapka raheem sahab isne na sirf aapka balki poore gaon ka naam roshan kiya hai itna sunte hi sabhi log taaliya peetne lage maine abbu ki taraf dekha per mujhe abhi bhi unke chahre per koi khushi k bhav najar nahi aa rahe they khair kuch dair baad sab apne apne ghar nikal gaye Kuch dino baad meri posting jammu kashmir ho gayi Jaane se ek din pahle ammi mere sirahne beth kar raat bhar mere sir per hath ferti rahi mujhe dekhti rahi usse pata tha k mere jane k baad kitne mahine tak woh mujhe dekh nahi paygi .... ... Agle din ammi mujhe buss stand tak chodhne aayi usne ek tabeez mere bajoo per bandhte hue boli *** tumhari pag pag per hifazat farmaye.....beta ye sun kar mai uske kandhe se lag kar sisak pada aur rote hue bola " mai kaise rahunga aapke bina ammi ? aapse door jane ko mann nahi kar raha hai ........ammi mere sir per hath pherte hue boli “pagle mere liye rahna kiya asaan hoga thumhare bina ... tum apna dhyan rakhan aur rona nahi warna mera yaha rahna muskil ho jayga aap bhi apna dhyaan rakhna bass kuch mahine ki baat hai mai jaldi wapis aaounga phir aapko bhi apne sath le jaounga mujh per bharosha rakhna itna kah kar Maine apna beg uthaya aur ek najar ammi ko dekha phir tezi se buss mai chadh gaya agar mai ek pal aur ammi k pass khda rahta to mera nikalna muskil ho jaata buss k darwaje par khade hokar hath hilakar maine ammi se vida li buss dhire dhire aage badhne lagi ansoon k bich dhundhli hoti meri ankhe ammi ko tab tak dekhti rahi jab tak voh meri ankhon se oojhal na ho gayi... Buss aaghe badhti ja rahi thi aur mere dil ammi se door hone ka ahsaas teji se gahrata ja raha tha mera mann kar raha tha abhi buss rukwa kar niche utar jaon aur wapis apne ghar chala jaon bahut rookne per bhi meri ankhon se ansoo dobara foot pade maine jaldi se khidki se bahar dekhne k bahane se ansoo ponchne ,aur jaise taise apne aap ko sambhala aur yaha chala aaya aur tab se Laikar aaj tak yahi nokri kar raha hu...............?
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idhar meri ammi ki duaon ka asar ye hua ki 10-12 dinon baad hi meri halat behtar hone lagi aur 2 hafte baad mujhe discharge kar diya aur mein duty karne laga kuch mahino baad maine chutti k liye apeel laga di per usko radd kar diya kiyoki achanak hi koi emergency aa gayi thi iss tarha poore 6 mahine tak search opretion per hi jangle jangle aur khatarnaak ilakon mai ghoomta raha ek din bhi chain se nahi beth paaya kiya karta duty to duty hai har haal mai nibhani padegi raat din kosis karta ki mujhe chutti mil jaye taaki gaon chala jaon apni ammi k pass aur ek din jaise meri duaa qabool kar ho gayi eid aane wali thi is liye hamare brigadier hosiyar singh ne kuch jawano ko 20 din ki chutti de di jis me main bhi samil tha
poore 6 mahine baad mai apne ghar ja raha tha khushi mein poori raat mai so nahi paya aur kalpana karne laga k mujhe dekhte hi ammi apne sinhe se laga legi haal chaal puchegi ammi se milne ki khushi me meri nend aur bhookh dono mar gayi agle din ki raat ko kareeb 10 baje mai ghar pahuch gaya ..aur darte darte darwaja khatkhaty
kon hai darwaje per ?” ander se ammi ne bhari awaaj mai poucha
“Ammi , .........mai hu aapka beta darwaja kholo .....?
ammi ne thoda time laga kar darwaja khola to dekh kar yakeen nahi hua ammi k pair mai chot lagi thi magar phir bhi woh jaise taise sahare ke sath khadi thi
“Ammi yeh kar liya aapne ?” maine aaghe badh kar unhe sahara diya aur sofe per bithaya
“bass beta kiya baton ? gusalkhana geela tha paon fisal gaya ”
“kiya chot jayda aayi hai?”
“pahle se behtar hai bass raham hua ki haddi nahi tooti ”
Doctor kiya kahta hai ?” maine poocha
“kahta hai araam karo
4-5 din lag jaynge theek hone per 2 din baad hi mai chalne firne lag gayi tabhi to tabhi to chalkar darwaja kholne chali aayi
“Abhi aapko itna nahi chalna chahiye ammi ...” mai bola
Meri baat ka jawaab deti isse pahle hi ammi ko achnak mere chahre per jakhamo k nishaan dikhayi pade to ammi mujhe per badhak uthi aur kahne lagi mujhe tum per yakeen nahi raha tumne jhuth kiyo bola ? kuch bataya kiyo nahi ? aree tumhe kuch ho jaata to mera kiya hota ...? mai ammi se bahut kuch kahna chahta tha per na to dimaag kaam karr raha tha aur na hi jabaan koi harkat kar rahi thi bas ankhon se ansoo gir rahe they ammi bolti ja rahi thi aur mein muh niche kiye kathghare mai khade muljim ki tarha bass 'haa' ....naa' mai jawaab diye ja raha tha ammi ki kiya ahmiyat hoti hai sayad yah baat mujhe aaj samjh aayi thi
Apne liye fikar aur pyar dekh kar mai apni ammi se lipat gaya aur fafak - fafak kar rone laga udhar ammi ki siskiyon ki awaaj bhi nikal rahi thi ammi mujhe chup karane lagi kiyoki woh janti thi meri ankhon mai paschtaap k aansoo they......
Tum bethon mai chaye bana deti hu.’’ ammi ne apna khisakta dupatta sambhalte hue uth kar jaane lagi to maine unka hath pakad kar sofe per bethe rahne ko kaha aur khud uth kar rasioghar me ja kar do chup chaye bana kar le aaya ..?
Chaye pite time bhi hamari baatein ho rahi thi mujhe joro ki bhookh lagi thi maine ammi se poucha
aaj khane mai kiya bana hai ammi ? Mai bola
Tu bata kiya bana hoga ?Ammi ne poucha
maine 2 min socha phir gahri saans chodte hue kaha mujhe nahi pata tum hi bata do.”
Mattton aur sath teri favourite kasmiri pulaav ? ammi ne kaha
Are ..... waah mutton sath mein biryani…phir to bahut badhiya…’’
‘‘haa thumhari manpasand jo hai …’’ ammi ne kaha
‘‘ha ..ha..ha woh to hai ammi ,’’ maine ithlate hue bola
Achha tum hath muh dho kar kamre mein chalo mai padh kar khana garam karti hu ...mujhe pata tha is baar ammi baat nahi manegi kiyoki woh wakt ki badi paband thi meri ammi... yehi wajha thi is bar maine unhe jane se nahi rooka ..... maine apne joote nikale aur hath muh dhone gusalkhne mai ghush gaya ...achhi tarha paak saaf hokar mai kamre mai chale gaya ..aur bistar per lait gaya ...mujhe saaf saaf dikh raha tha ammi ne khud ki tarha mere room ko bhi saaf suthra kar rakha hai ...jaise almari me Kapde saleke se rakhe they takiya k lihaaf sab dhule they bed ki chader per ek bhi silawat najar nahi aa raha thi ...mere jane ke baad bhi mera kamra pahle jaisa tha sab samaan apni jagha rakha tha mere kitaben bachpan ke khel khilone...
Lagbhag 20 mint baad ammi kamre mai aayi aur boli " beta khana tayyer hai le aaon ?'
Maine bed se uthte hue bola ha le aaon ammi bahut bhook lagi hai.....?
Mai aalti paalti maar bed per beth gaya tabhi ammi khana le aayi aur sath mai biryani ki ek badi si thaali mere samne la kar rakh di uss wakt light nahi thi to ammi pass mai beth kar pankhe se mujhe hawa karne lagi ...maine khane ki taraf dekha to 4 rotiya thi ,aur katora bhar matton ki tarkari ... Aur biryani
“beta Bismillah karo” ammi ne kaha
maine ek tukda muh rakh kar dhire dhire chabane laga Maine abhi ek tukda hi khaya tha k tabhi mujhe yaad aaya aur mai bola
'Ammi aap ne khana kha liye kiya ?
Ammi ne meri taraf muskura kar dekha aur kaha..... Mein to kab ki kha chuki hu beta ..?
Maine phir apna sir niche karke teji se khane laga thali me jab ek roti rah gayi to ammi uthte hue boli ek roti aur laati hu ..maine hath se mana karte hue kaha nahi nahi jara bhi nahi mere pet bhar chuka hai bas abb nahi
Ammi ne jidd ki achha aadhi roti hi le aati hu
Nahi ammi ...bhook hoti to le ....leta bass abb pani de do
Ammi ne ek glass pani mujhe diya aur mai chup chaap pine laga jabki ammi abhi bhi wahi beth karr pankha hilaati hui mujhe hawa kar rahi thi ...abhi maine pani khtam kiya tha k ammi phir boli beta tujhe meri kasam thodi biryani to le hi lo ....maine ammi se kaha ammi pet kaafi bhar chuka hai bina wajha aap ne kasam kiyo di ...khair kasam rakhne k liye thodi biryani le raha hu phir ek palte mai biryani le kar khane laga jaldi se biryani khtam karke mai glass mai pani le kar hath dhone bahar chala gaya ....hath dho kar jab wapis aaya to ander se pach..pach ki awaaj sunaayi de rahi thi maine darwaja ki aad se ander jhank kar dekha to ammi mere jhthe bartan mai bacha hua khana kha rahi thi ..woh iss tarha kha rahi thi mano pichle 2-3 dino se khana nahi khaya ho mai kisi aparadhi ki tarah usse dekh raha tha meri smajh mai nahi aa raha tha k me kiya karu...bas yeh manzar dekh meri ankhe jaroor bhar aayi thi Ammi 2 roti kha chuki thi tabhi woh khar khar khasne lagi phir pani pine lagi Unhone bharpet khana khaya phir jhute bartan rakhne rasioghar chali gayi aur mai ghar k pichwade cigrette pine nikal gaya cigarette khtam karke mein wapis kamre mai aa gaya thodi dair baad ammi kamre mai aa gayi aur mere pass beth gayi maine ammi ko majaak mai bola chota sa ghar hai hamara tum kiya sara din ise chamkane mai lagi rahti ho kiyo
“mere pass aur koi kaam hi kiya rahta hai iske siwa sara din ghar per akeli to hoti hu .”
ammi k kandhe per hath rakhte hue maine kaha koi baat nahi ,mai bhi samjhta hu aap itni mahnat apne ghar k liye hi to kar rahi hai
per ammi aap aas padosh mai koi saheli kiyo nahi bana leti ? Isse aapka mann laga rahega.”mai bola
Mujhe to apna ghar hi achha lagta hai beta ghar k chote mote kaam aur thumhari yaad mai din kab nikal jata hai pata hi nahi chalta Aur kisi k ghar jakar bekaar ki gappebaji karna mujhe achha nahi lagta ...ammi boli
" Ammi aap kitni samjhdaar ho agar tum mere sath nahi hoti to pata nahi mera kiya hota ?”maine bhavuk hote hue kaha to ammi ne mujhe bahon mai bhar liya hum dono ek doosre ki bahon mai simat gaye tabhi bahar se abbu ki awaaj sunai di Ammi
Mujhse alag hui or apna dupatta sambhalte hue room se nikal nikal gayi mai bhi unke piche piche abbu ke pass chala gaya abba palang per laite hue they mujhe dekhte hi unhone muh fair liya meri dobara unse kuch kahne ki himmat nahi hui aur mein waha se nikal aaya Agle din subha nasta pani karke mai ghar se nikal kar sunar ki dukaan per chala gaaya Maine sunaar se kaha bhai shahab mujhe apni ammi k gahne chahiye hai woh mujhe janta tha is liye jayda kuch poucha bass gahano ki potlee mere hath mai rakh di maine bhi dariyadili dikhate hue usse 1 lakh rupaye extra de kar gahane le liye ammi k liye meri taraf se ye pahla tohfa tha mai gahne ki potli le kar ghar chala gaya Ghar pahuch kar dekha to ammi bathroom mai naha dho rahi thi ....mai ne bahar se hi ammi ko awaaj lagayi
“Ammi! Ammi ! Jaldi bahar aaon"
Jaise hi ammi ne mujhe chilaate suna woh jaldi se kapde pahan kar bahar aayi
“kiya hua asif? tum itni jor se kiyo chilaa rahe ho ?”
“ohh ammi baat hi aise hai tu sunegi to khushi se jhoom uthegi”,ammi k kandho ko hilate hue maine bola
“are bata to sahi aakhir hua kiya ? Aaj bahut khush lag rahe ho tum” ammi ne poucha..?
“Ammi agar thumhe thumhari sabse pashandida cheez mil jaye to thumhe kaisa lagega ?
Abb Batoge ya mai jaon - ammi ne kaha
apna hath aage karo ammi ki ankhon mai dekhte hue mai bola
Ammi ne apna hath aage badha diya
Maine turant gahno ki potli unke hathon per rakh di ammi ne dekha to uski ankhon nam ho gayi phir boli asif kiya jarurat thi iski
Ammi mai janta hu k aapne meri kaamyaabi ki khatir apne sare gahne girvi bech diye per ammi ye tumhari nishani hai inhe kaise chodh sakte hai mein to sari duniya ki khushi apni aapko dunga woh bhi bina maange Ammi ke chahra khil gaya usne mujhe apne sinhe se laga liya .....Phie Mere samne hi ammi ne gahno ki potli kholi aur usme se kaan ki baali nikal kar pahan li aur mujhe dikahte hue boli
“Abb khush ? “ammi ne poucha
“Ha ammi bahut khush hu me ”mai bola
Iske baad ammi apne baal sukhane lagi aur mai apne kamre mai chala gaya kuch dair mobile dekha phir bahar aaya to dekha k ammi sabji kaat rahi hai ....? chodho bhi ammi mai kaat lunga waise bhi aapko saato din khatna padta hai jab tak me yaha hu mai kaam mai aapka hath bataounga aap araam se beth jaye
Beta ghar k kamo ko khatna nahi kahte yeh to aurat ka sobhagya hota hai
Achha chalo aaj aapko picture dikha lao. Raat ka khana bhi bahar kha lenge
Beta bekaar mai 400-500 rupay kharch ho jayega waise bhi mujhe filmein dekhne ka shok nahi hai aur rahi baat khane ki to woh to mai jhatpat bana lungi
Apni bholi bhali ammi ki baatein sun kar maine sir peet liya paiso ki koi kami nahi thi magar phir bhi ammi ek paayi fizul kharcha nahi karne deti ....khana kha kar mai kamre mai gaya phir mobile dekhte so gaya shaam ko ammi ne mujhe uthaya aur boli asif ye kon sa time hai sone ka chalo utho hath muh dhokar Jaldi bahar aa jaon ....ji ammi kah karr mai bathroom gaya aur jhatpat hath muh dho karr kitchen ki taraf badh gaya aur fridge se pani ki bottle nikal karr pani pine laga tabhi ammi boli asif aaj mai thumhare liye aaloo k paratha bana rahi hu aur jayda bahar ka khana mat khaya karo varna thumhara pet khraab ho jayga ammi ko pata tha k mujhe aloo k paratha bahut pashand hai mai muskurta hua bahar hall mai aa gaya aur mobile mai lag gaya Thodi dair baad ammi ek plate mai aloon k paratha le aayi apne fav aloo k paratha samne dekh karr mai khud ko rok nahi paya waise bhi mujhe bahoot tej bhook lagi thi
khana se farig hokar m
ai kamre mai chala gaya aur ammi kitchen mai bartan saaf karne chali gayi thodi dair baad ammi kamre mai aayi ammi mere sirahane beth kar pankhe ko tej hilate hue boli " asif mere ek kaam karoge kiya ...?
Haa bolo na ammi ..! Maine poucha
Beta Meri dili tamanna thi ki thumhari nokari lagte hi tizarat karne jaoungi kiya tum mujhe le chaloge ....... mere mann nahi the per phir socha ki ammi ne pahli baar koi khwahish jahir ki thi jisse mai har hal mai poora karna chahta tha
Mai bola .....kab chalna hai ammi
Kal chalenge aur din k din aa jaynge ...?
ammi ki khushi k liye maine hami bhar di thi or phone se dono k number laga diya 500 rupey de kar...kiyoki waha jane se pahle number lagana padta hai.... Ammi ko car ya buss mai safar karne per ultiya hoti hai iss liye maine motercycle se chalne ka plane banaya hamare gaon se woh jagha kam se kam35km door thi....Agle din aadha din to safar ki tayyeri mai kab nikal gaya hame pata hi nahi phir bhi hum raaste ki sari dikkato ko jhelte hue ham apni manjil tak pahuch gaye hamari motorcycle poori tarha se rook bhi nahi paayi k charo taraf anjaan logon ki bheed jama ho gayi woh chillane lage ‘‘are madam ji ... rookne k liye kamra chahiye ....bahut saste mai dila denge ...ac wala room..... kam keemat mai mai...... tabhi ek dusra aadmi aage aaya aur bola ‘‘behan ji.. hamare hotel mai kamra le lo...ekdam free ...aur woh bhi sari suvidhaon k sath ...... Hum jaldi se jaldi bike parking mai laga di aur sara samaan pack kar k waha se nikal aaye kiyoki yaha se aage ka rasta hame paidal hi taye karna tha tabhi ammi mujhse boli asif lagta hai uss aadmi ko koi galatfahmi ho gayi iss tarha free mai kamra kon deta hai ..? Main bola ammi koi galatfahmi nahi hui hai ye log sach much free kamra dete hai per iske piche inka maksad nihayat ganda hota hai or itna ganda hota hai ki me bata nahi sakta per ammi ne jaise mera man padh liya ho woh apne muh per hath rakhte hue boli ......tobaaaa tobaaa kitne beshram log hai Police kuch nahi karti in logo ka ....ammi ne swaliya najron se meri taraf dekh kar poucha to maine kaha Nahi ammi sub mile rahte hai kamine ...ye sun kar ammi khoon ka kadva ghunt pi kar rah gayi ammi ko yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki aise koi ghatna bhi yaha hoti hogi khair hamne turant waha se nikalne ki sochi Kiyoki abhi hame kam se kam 2 km tak paidal chalnna tha Raaste k dono taraf dukano ki lambi line lagi hui thi log yaha se mithai aur fal bech rahe they hamne bhi thodi mithali aur fal khreed liye raaste mai hame bhikhari bhi mil rahe they jo paise maang rahe they kuch paise hamne waha bhi khrch kar diye jaise jaise hum uss jagha k najddek aa rahe hai they logo ki bheed bhi jayda dekhno ko mil rahi thi sabbi ek dusre ko dhakka marte hue aage nikalana chah rahe they tabhi .....are bhai sahab kiya kar rahe ho dekh karr chalo na ammi ne ek aadmi ki niyat jaante hue aitraaz jataya aur kapde durust kiye mai usko dhone k liye aage badha to ammi ne mujhe rokte hue kaha aisf rahne do yaha koi bakheda khda mat karo " tabhi ek agent hamare pass aaya aur bola are madam aap log kaha line mai lag kar dhakke kha rahe ho aap chaho to piche k gate se aap ko 10 mint mai entry dila sakta hu per iske liye thoda khrcha karna padega Mujhe lambi line mai lagne k bajayi yeh tarika pashand aaya aur agent se foran poucha kitna lagega ...? Agent ne dhire se pass aa kar dhire se kaha 2500 de dena
Per ye to bahut jayda hai ..ammi boli
Are madam jaisa kaam waisa daam agar samjh mai aaye to theek hai nahi to dusra customer dekhta hu
maine ammi ko samjhya k ammi raat hone se pahle hame nikala bhi hai aur aise to hum bahut lait ho jayga baat ko samjho
Maine foran hami bhar di aur usse paise de diye agent ne hame apne piche aane ko kaha aur khud aage aaage chalne laga phir kiya tha uss ne hamne piche k darwaje se sirf 10 mint me ander pahucha diya Maine phone nikala aur selfi laine laga tabhi ek aadmi mere pass aaya aur mujhse kahne laga aye ladke andha hai kiya samne dewaar per saaf saaf likha hai ki yaha tasveer laina mana hai maine unse maanfi maangi aur phone pocket mai rakh liya ander logo ko bheed lagi thi ..............
asif beta ander chalo
ammi ne kaha
mujhe aise faaltu baaton per bharosa nahi hai ....maine kaha
Aisa nahi kahte beta kah kar ammi jabardasti mera hath pakad kar ander le gayi
Ander aakar dekha to koi paise..... to koi fal laiakr waha aaya hua tha itna to saaf tha iss Isse kaam se vo log achhe paise bana rahe they Na jane kaha se sok laga ammi ko yaha aane isse pahle bhi kaayi dafa ammi ne inko ghar per bhi bulwaya woh poora ghar ghoom kar kahte ki koi bhri shay hai ise door karne k liye 5000 rupaye lag jaynge bechari meri masoom ammi ne jo rupaye jod rakhe they woh nikaal kar de deti phir peer sahab ghar mai pani ka chidkaon karwate diwaro per kilein thokte aur na jane kiya kiya karte magar natiza kuch nahi nikalta mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha tha k log itne nasamjh kaise ho sakte hai.? Tabhi ek budha aadmi pass aaye Aur mai apni yadon se bahar aaya usne hum dono k sir per hath rakh kar kahne lage ya mere mola in per raham karna uske baad ek tabeej dete hue bole k isko ghar mai kisi mahfuz jagha rakh dena in sab k badle peer baba ne hamse 2000 rupeey le kar rukhshat kar diya...... Bahar nikal kar Maine ghadi mai time dekha to shaam k 5 baj rahe they jab hum subha aaye to mosam saaf tha per shaam hone k baad achank mosam bahut khraab hua pada tha ghane badal chaye hue hai din mai hi raat jaisa andhera ho gaya aur barish to kabhi bhi ho sakti thi hum jaldi se waha se nikal kar jaise taise parking tak pahuch gaye parking se bike nikal kar mai bahar le aaya aur aasmaan ki taraf dekhne laga aur maine ammi se kaha ki mosam to khraab ho chuka hai agar tum kaho to raat kisi hotel mai gujaar laite hai aur subha hote hi yaha se nikal jaynge magar ammi iske liye raazi nahi hui .. woh kahne lagi beta hotel ka kharcha lagega aur hum yaha ghumne thode hi aaye hai mai chup ho gaya aur aakhir wahi hua jo main nahi chahata tha sara samaan lete lete raat k 7 baj gaye is wakt sunsaan raaste per safar karna khatre se khali nahi tha per main kiya karta ammi iske liye tayyer nahi thi unki jidd k aage meri ek na chali aur hum waha se nikal pade
poore 6 mahine baad mai apne ghar ja raha tha khushi mein poori raat mai so nahi paya aur kalpana karne laga k mujhe dekhte hi ammi apne sinhe se laga legi haal chaal puchegi ammi se milne ki khushi me meri nend aur bhookh dono mar gayi agle din ki raat ko kareeb 10 baje mai ghar pahuch gaya ..aur darte darte darwaja khatkhaty
kon hai darwaje per ?” ander se ammi ne bhari awaaj mai poucha
“Ammi , .........mai hu aapka beta darwaja kholo .....?
ammi ne thoda time laga kar darwaja khola to dekh kar yakeen nahi hua ammi k pair mai chot lagi thi magar phir bhi woh jaise taise sahare ke sath khadi thi
“Ammi yeh kar liya aapne ?” maine aaghe badh kar unhe sahara diya aur sofe per bithaya
“bass beta kiya baton ? gusalkhana geela tha paon fisal gaya ”
“kiya chot jayda aayi hai?”
“pahle se behtar hai bass raham hua ki haddi nahi tooti ”
Doctor kiya kahta hai ?” maine poocha
“kahta hai araam karo
4-5 din lag jaynge theek hone per 2 din baad hi mai chalne firne lag gayi tabhi to tabhi to chalkar darwaja kholne chali aayi
“Abhi aapko itna nahi chalna chahiye ammi ...” mai bola
Meri baat ka jawaab deti isse pahle hi ammi ko achnak mere chahre per jakhamo k nishaan dikhayi pade to ammi mujhe per badhak uthi aur kahne lagi mujhe tum per yakeen nahi raha tumne jhuth kiyo bola ? kuch bataya kiyo nahi ? aree tumhe kuch ho jaata to mera kiya hota ...? mai ammi se bahut kuch kahna chahta tha per na to dimaag kaam karr raha tha aur na hi jabaan koi harkat kar rahi thi bas ankhon se ansoo gir rahe they ammi bolti ja rahi thi aur mein muh niche kiye kathghare mai khade muljim ki tarha bass 'haa' ....naa' mai jawaab diye ja raha tha ammi ki kiya ahmiyat hoti hai sayad yah baat mujhe aaj samjh aayi thi
Apne liye fikar aur pyar dekh kar mai apni ammi se lipat gaya aur fafak - fafak kar rone laga udhar ammi ki siskiyon ki awaaj bhi nikal rahi thi ammi mujhe chup karane lagi kiyoki woh janti thi meri ankhon mai paschtaap k aansoo they......
Tum bethon mai chaye bana deti hu.’’ ammi ne apna khisakta dupatta sambhalte hue uth kar jaane lagi to maine unka hath pakad kar sofe per bethe rahne ko kaha aur khud uth kar rasioghar me ja kar do chup chaye bana kar le aaya ..?
Chaye pite time bhi hamari baatein ho rahi thi mujhe joro ki bhookh lagi thi maine ammi se poucha
aaj khane mai kiya bana hai ammi ? Mai bola
Tu bata kiya bana hoga ?Ammi ne poucha
maine 2 min socha phir gahri saans chodte hue kaha mujhe nahi pata tum hi bata do.”
Mattton aur sath teri favourite kasmiri pulaav ? ammi ne kaha
Are ..... waah mutton sath mein biryani…phir to bahut badhiya…’’
‘‘haa thumhari manpasand jo hai …’’ ammi ne kaha
‘‘ha ..ha..ha woh to hai ammi ,’’ maine ithlate hue bola
Achha tum hath muh dho kar kamre mein chalo mai padh kar khana garam karti hu ...mujhe pata tha is baar ammi baat nahi manegi kiyoki woh wakt ki badi paband thi meri ammi... yehi wajha thi is bar maine unhe jane se nahi rooka ..... maine apne joote nikale aur hath muh dhone gusalkhne mai ghush gaya ...achhi tarha paak saaf hokar mai kamre mai chale gaya ..aur bistar per lait gaya ...mujhe saaf saaf dikh raha tha ammi ne khud ki tarha mere room ko bhi saaf suthra kar rakha hai ...jaise almari me Kapde saleke se rakhe they takiya k lihaaf sab dhule they bed ki chader per ek bhi silawat najar nahi aa raha thi ...mere jane ke baad bhi mera kamra pahle jaisa tha sab samaan apni jagha rakha tha mere kitaben bachpan ke khel khilone...
Lagbhag 20 mint baad ammi kamre mai aayi aur boli " beta khana tayyer hai le aaon ?'
Maine bed se uthte hue bola ha le aaon ammi bahut bhook lagi hai.....?
Mai aalti paalti maar bed per beth gaya tabhi ammi khana le aayi aur sath mai biryani ki ek badi si thaali mere samne la kar rakh di uss wakt light nahi thi to ammi pass mai beth kar pankhe se mujhe hawa karne lagi ...maine khane ki taraf dekha to 4 rotiya thi ,aur katora bhar matton ki tarkari ... Aur biryani
“beta Bismillah karo” ammi ne kaha
maine ek tukda muh rakh kar dhire dhire chabane laga Maine abhi ek tukda hi khaya tha k tabhi mujhe yaad aaya aur mai bola
'Ammi aap ne khana kha liye kiya ?
Ammi ne meri taraf muskura kar dekha aur kaha..... Mein to kab ki kha chuki hu beta ..?
Maine phir apna sir niche karke teji se khane laga thali me jab ek roti rah gayi to ammi uthte hue boli ek roti aur laati hu ..maine hath se mana karte hue kaha nahi nahi jara bhi nahi mere pet bhar chuka hai bas abb nahi
Ammi ne jidd ki achha aadhi roti hi le aati hu
Nahi ammi ...bhook hoti to le ....leta bass abb pani de do
Ammi ne ek glass pani mujhe diya aur mai chup chaap pine laga jabki ammi abhi bhi wahi beth karr pankha hilaati hui mujhe hawa kar rahi thi ...abhi maine pani khtam kiya tha k ammi phir boli beta tujhe meri kasam thodi biryani to le hi lo ....maine ammi se kaha ammi pet kaafi bhar chuka hai bina wajha aap ne kasam kiyo di ...khair kasam rakhne k liye thodi biryani le raha hu phir ek palte mai biryani le kar khane laga jaldi se biryani khtam karke mai glass mai pani le kar hath dhone bahar chala gaya ....hath dho kar jab wapis aaya to ander se pach..pach ki awaaj sunaayi de rahi thi maine darwaja ki aad se ander jhank kar dekha to ammi mere jhthe bartan mai bacha hua khana kha rahi thi ..woh iss tarha kha rahi thi mano pichle 2-3 dino se khana nahi khaya ho mai kisi aparadhi ki tarah usse dekh raha tha meri smajh mai nahi aa raha tha k me kiya karu...bas yeh manzar dekh meri ankhe jaroor bhar aayi thi Ammi 2 roti kha chuki thi tabhi woh khar khar khasne lagi phir pani pine lagi Unhone bharpet khana khaya phir jhute bartan rakhne rasioghar chali gayi aur mai ghar k pichwade cigrette pine nikal gaya cigarette khtam karke mein wapis kamre mai aa gaya thodi dair baad ammi kamre mai aa gayi aur mere pass beth gayi maine ammi ko majaak mai bola chota sa ghar hai hamara tum kiya sara din ise chamkane mai lagi rahti ho kiyo
“mere pass aur koi kaam hi kiya rahta hai iske siwa sara din ghar per akeli to hoti hu .”
ammi k kandhe per hath rakhte hue maine kaha koi baat nahi ,mai bhi samjhta hu aap itni mahnat apne ghar k liye hi to kar rahi hai
per ammi aap aas padosh mai koi saheli kiyo nahi bana leti ? Isse aapka mann laga rahega.”mai bola
Mujhe to apna ghar hi achha lagta hai beta ghar k chote mote kaam aur thumhari yaad mai din kab nikal jata hai pata hi nahi chalta Aur kisi k ghar jakar bekaar ki gappebaji karna mujhe achha nahi lagta ...ammi boli
" Ammi aap kitni samjhdaar ho agar tum mere sath nahi hoti to pata nahi mera kiya hota ?”maine bhavuk hote hue kaha to ammi ne mujhe bahon mai bhar liya hum dono ek doosre ki bahon mai simat gaye tabhi bahar se abbu ki awaaj sunai di Ammi
Mujhse alag hui or apna dupatta sambhalte hue room se nikal nikal gayi mai bhi unke piche piche abbu ke pass chala gaya abba palang per laite hue they mujhe dekhte hi unhone muh fair liya meri dobara unse kuch kahne ki himmat nahi hui aur mein waha se nikal aaya Agle din subha nasta pani karke mai ghar se nikal kar sunar ki dukaan per chala gaaya Maine sunaar se kaha bhai shahab mujhe apni ammi k gahne chahiye hai woh mujhe janta tha is liye jayda kuch poucha bass gahano ki potlee mere hath mai rakh di maine bhi dariyadili dikhate hue usse 1 lakh rupaye extra de kar gahane le liye ammi k liye meri taraf se ye pahla tohfa tha mai gahne ki potli le kar ghar chala gaya Ghar pahuch kar dekha to ammi bathroom mai naha dho rahi thi ....mai ne bahar se hi ammi ko awaaj lagayi
“Ammi! Ammi ! Jaldi bahar aaon"
Jaise hi ammi ne mujhe chilaate suna woh jaldi se kapde pahan kar bahar aayi
“kiya hua asif? tum itni jor se kiyo chilaa rahe ho ?”
“ohh ammi baat hi aise hai tu sunegi to khushi se jhoom uthegi”,ammi k kandho ko hilate hue maine bola
“are bata to sahi aakhir hua kiya ? Aaj bahut khush lag rahe ho tum” ammi ne poucha..?
“Ammi agar thumhe thumhari sabse pashandida cheez mil jaye to thumhe kaisa lagega ?
Abb Batoge ya mai jaon - ammi ne kaha
apna hath aage karo ammi ki ankhon mai dekhte hue mai bola
Ammi ne apna hath aage badha diya
Maine turant gahno ki potli unke hathon per rakh di ammi ne dekha to uski ankhon nam ho gayi phir boli asif kiya jarurat thi iski
Ammi mai janta hu k aapne meri kaamyaabi ki khatir apne sare gahne girvi bech diye per ammi ye tumhari nishani hai inhe kaise chodh sakte hai mein to sari duniya ki khushi apni aapko dunga woh bhi bina maange Ammi ke chahra khil gaya usne mujhe apne sinhe se laga liya .....Phie Mere samne hi ammi ne gahno ki potli kholi aur usme se kaan ki baali nikal kar pahan li aur mujhe dikahte hue boli
“Abb khush ? “ammi ne poucha
“Ha ammi bahut khush hu me ”mai bola
Iske baad ammi apne baal sukhane lagi aur mai apne kamre mai chala gaya kuch dair mobile dekha phir bahar aaya to dekha k ammi sabji kaat rahi hai ....? chodho bhi ammi mai kaat lunga waise bhi aapko saato din khatna padta hai jab tak me yaha hu mai kaam mai aapka hath bataounga aap araam se beth jaye
Beta ghar k kamo ko khatna nahi kahte yeh to aurat ka sobhagya hota hai
Achha chalo aaj aapko picture dikha lao. Raat ka khana bhi bahar kha lenge
Beta bekaar mai 400-500 rupay kharch ho jayega waise bhi mujhe filmein dekhne ka shok nahi hai aur rahi baat khane ki to woh to mai jhatpat bana lungi
Apni bholi bhali ammi ki baatein sun kar maine sir peet liya paiso ki koi kami nahi thi magar phir bhi ammi ek paayi fizul kharcha nahi karne deti ....khana kha kar mai kamre mai gaya phir mobile dekhte so gaya shaam ko ammi ne mujhe uthaya aur boli asif ye kon sa time hai sone ka chalo utho hath muh dhokar Jaldi bahar aa jaon ....ji ammi kah karr mai bathroom gaya aur jhatpat hath muh dho karr kitchen ki taraf badh gaya aur fridge se pani ki bottle nikal karr pani pine laga tabhi ammi boli asif aaj mai thumhare liye aaloo k paratha bana rahi hu aur jayda bahar ka khana mat khaya karo varna thumhara pet khraab ho jayga ammi ko pata tha k mujhe aloo k paratha bahut pashand hai mai muskurta hua bahar hall mai aa gaya aur mobile mai lag gaya Thodi dair baad ammi ek plate mai aloon k paratha le aayi apne fav aloo k paratha samne dekh karr mai khud ko rok nahi paya waise bhi mujhe bahoot tej bhook lagi thi
khana se farig hokar m
ai kamre mai chala gaya aur ammi kitchen mai bartan saaf karne chali gayi thodi dair baad ammi kamre mai aayi ammi mere sirahane beth kar pankhe ko tej hilate hue boli " asif mere ek kaam karoge kiya ...?
Haa bolo na ammi ..! Maine poucha
Beta Meri dili tamanna thi ki thumhari nokari lagte hi tizarat karne jaoungi kiya tum mujhe le chaloge ....... mere mann nahi the per phir socha ki ammi ne pahli baar koi khwahish jahir ki thi jisse mai har hal mai poora karna chahta tha
Mai bola .....kab chalna hai ammi
Kal chalenge aur din k din aa jaynge ...?
ammi ki khushi k liye maine hami bhar di thi or phone se dono k number laga diya 500 rupey de kar...kiyoki waha jane se pahle number lagana padta hai.... Ammi ko car ya buss mai safar karne per ultiya hoti hai iss liye maine motercycle se chalne ka plane banaya hamare gaon se woh jagha kam se kam35km door thi....Agle din aadha din to safar ki tayyeri mai kab nikal gaya hame pata hi nahi phir bhi hum raaste ki sari dikkato ko jhelte hue ham apni manjil tak pahuch gaye hamari motorcycle poori tarha se rook bhi nahi paayi k charo taraf anjaan logon ki bheed jama ho gayi woh chillane lage ‘‘are madam ji ... rookne k liye kamra chahiye ....bahut saste mai dila denge ...ac wala room..... kam keemat mai mai...... tabhi ek dusra aadmi aage aaya aur bola ‘‘behan ji.. hamare hotel mai kamra le lo...ekdam free ...aur woh bhi sari suvidhaon k sath ...... Hum jaldi se jaldi bike parking mai laga di aur sara samaan pack kar k waha se nikal aaye kiyoki yaha se aage ka rasta hame paidal hi taye karna tha tabhi ammi mujhse boli asif lagta hai uss aadmi ko koi galatfahmi ho gayi iss tarha free mai kamra kon deta hai ..? Main bola ammi koi galatfahmi nahi hui hai ye log sach much free kamra dete hai per iske piche inka maksad nihayat ganda hota hai or itna ganda hota hai ki me bata nahi sakta per ammi ne jaise mera man padh liya ho woh apne muh per hath rakhte hue boli ......tobaaaa tobaaa kitne beshram log hai Police kuch nahi karti in logo ka ....ammi ne swaliya najron se meri taraf dekh kar poucha to maine kaha Nahi ammi sub mile rahte hai kamine ...ye sun kar ammi khoon ka kadva ghunt pi kar rah gayi ammi ko yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki aise koi ghatna bhi yaha hoti hogi khair hamne turant waha se nikalne ki sochi Kiyoki abhi hame kam se kam 2 km tak paidal chalnna tha Raaste k dono taraf dukano ki lambi line lagi hui thi log yaha se mithai aur fal bech rahe they hamne bhi thodi mithali aur fal khreed liye raaste mai hame bhikhari bhi mil rahe they jo paise maang rahe they kuch paise hamne waha bhi khrch kar diye jaise jaise hum uss jagha k najddek aa rahe hai they logo ki bheed bhi jayda dekhno ko mil rahi thi sabbi ek dusre ko dhakka marte hue aage nikalana chah rahe they tabhi .....are bhai sahab kiya kar rahe ho dekh karr chalo na ammi ne ek aadmi ki niyat jaante hue aitraaz jataya aur kapde durust kiye mai usko dhone k liye aage badha to ammi ne mujhe rokte hue kaha aisf rahne do yaha koi bakheda khda mat karo " tabhi ek agent hamare pass aaya aur bola are madam aap log kaha line mai lag kar dhakke kha rahe ho aap chaho to piche k gate se aap ko 10 mint mai entry dila sakta hu per iske liye thoda khrcha karna padega Mujhe lambi line mai lagne k bajayi yeh tarika pashand aaya aur agent se foran poucha kitna lagega ...? Agent ne dhire se pass aa kar dhire se kaha 2500 de dena
Per ye to bahut jayda hai ..ammi boli
Are madam jaisa kaam waisa daam agar samjh mai aaye to theek hai nahi to dusra customer dekhta hu
maine ammi ko samjhya k ammi raat hone se pahle hame nikala bhi hai aur aise to hum bahut lait ho jayga baat ko samjho
Maine foran hami bhar di aur usse paise de diye agent ne hame apne piche aane ko kaha aur khud aage aaage chalne laga phir kiya tha uss ne hamne piche k darwaje se sirf 10 mint me ander pahucha diya Maine phone nikala aur selfi laine laga tabhi ek aadmi mere pass aaya aur mujhse kahne laga aye ladke andha hai kiya samne dewaar per saaf saaf likha hai ki yaha tasveer laina mana hai maine unse maanfi maangi aur phone pocket mai rakh liya ander logo ko bheed lagi thi ..............
asif beta ander chalo
ammi ne kaha
mujhe aise faaltu baaton per bharosa nahi hai ....maine kaha
Aisa nahi kahte beta kah kar ammi jabardasti mera hath pakad kar ander le gayi
Ander aakar dekha to koi paise..... to koi fal laiakr waha aaya hua tha itna to saaf tha iss Isse kaam se vo log achhe paise bana rahe they Na jane kaha se sok laga ammi ko yaha aane isse pahle bhi kaayi dafa ammi ne inko ghar per bhi bulwaya woh poora ghar ghoom kar kahte ki koi bhri shay hai ise door karne k liye 5000 rupaye lag jaynge bechari meri masoom ammi ne jo rupaye jod rakhe they woh nikaal kar de deti phir peer sahab ghar mai pani ka chidkaon karwate diwaro per kilein thokte aur na jane kiya kiya karte magar natiza kuch nahi nikalta mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha tha k log itne nasamjh kaise ho sakte hai.? Tabhi ek budha aadmi pass aaye Aur mai apni yadon se bahar aaya usne hum dono k sir per hath rakh kar kahne lage ya mere mola in per raham karna uske baad ek tabeej dete hue bole k isko ghar mai kisi mahfuz jagha rakh dena in sab k badle peer baba ne hamse 2000 rupeey le kar rukhshat kar diya...... Bahar nikal kar Maine ghadi mai time dekha to shaam k 5 baj rahe they jab hum subha aaye to mosam saaf tha per shaam hone k baad achank mosam bahut khraab hua pada tha ghane badal chaye hue hai din mai hi raat jaisa andhera ho gaya aur barish to kabhi bhi ho sakti thi hum jaldi se waha se nikal kar jaise taise parking tak pahuch gaye parking se bike nikal kar mai bahar le aaya aur aasmaan ki taraf dekhne laga aur maine ammi se kaha ki mosam to khraab ho chuka hai agar tum kaho to raat kisi hotel mai gujaar laite hai aur subha hote hi yaha se nikal jaynge magar ammi iske liye raazi nahi hui .. woh kahne lagi beta hotel ka kharcha lagega aur hum yaha ghumne thode hi aaye hai mai chup ho gaya aur aakhir wahi hua jo main nahi chahata tha sara samaan lete lete raat k 7 baj gaye is wakt sunsaan raaste per safar karna khatre se khali nahi tha per main kiya karta ammi iske liye tayyer nahi thi unki jidd k aage meri ek na chali aur hum waha se nikal pade
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