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यह कहानी निःसंदेह रोमांचक और अत्यंत कामुक है। इस आकर्षक कहानी को लिखने के लिए आपका बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद।
Excellent and really exciting writing!Kahani shuru karne se pehle chand baatein kahna chahta hoo......is kahani mein likhe gaye har alfaaz sach hai Bas log jagah,aur naam puri tarike se kaalpanik hai........ kahani koi zyada lambi nahi hogi aap aaram se parh bhi sakenge aur boriyat bhi nahi hogi...kahani agar pasand na aaye toh wohi padhna chodh de aur apna keemati Waqt .........................bachaaye....?
[Apni iss kahnai ko likhte wakt mujhe khud 2 baar mutth marni padi......... ! ]
Aadhi raat ka gahra sannata door kahi thodi thodi dair mai kutton ke bhokne awaajein uss sannate ko cheer rahi thi aise mai sabhi log nend ki aagosh mai besudh so rahe they agar koi jaag raha tha to vo tha mai aaj mera chota sa accident ho gaya tha jammu se 7 km door jungle mai hamari gaadi khaayi mai gir gayi aur sab ghayal ho gaye jin mein mai bhi shamil tha
jab hosh aaya to maine khud ko hospital mai paya mere hath mai glucose ki bottle lagi hui thi aur sir per pattiya bandh chuki thi doctor k anusar 2 Ghante baad mujhe hosh aaya tha mujhe general ward mai shift kar rakha tha doctor ne kaha mujhe tab tak discharge nahi kiya ja sakta jab tak mai poori tarha theek na ho jaon isme Ek hafta bhi lag sakta hai aur mahina bhi Maine pent ki jeb tatool kar mobile nikala to dekha to pichle 1 ghante ke ander meri ammi mujhe 4 baar phone kar chuki hai sach kaha hai kisi ne maa to maa hoti hai na jane usse sab kuch kaise pata chal jata hai sach baat hai kuch baatein ek Umar k baad hi samjh aati hai tabhi phir se mera phone ring karne laga maine turant phone uttha liya aur dhire de phone ko apne chahre k pass le jakar ammi ko salaam kiya ..?
asalamu alaikum....... ammi jaan
Walekum assalam..... beta
Mere Salaam ka jawab unhone khamoshi se diya phir mujhse poucha kaise ho beta.......? Un ki awaaj mai thodi ghabrahat thi
maine kaha ammi mai bilkul theek hu aap bataye woh phir kahne lagi k mera dil ghabra raha hai kahin thumhe kuch hua to nahi hai un ki saanse teji se chal rahi thi ? Mai usko bechain nahi hone dena chahta tha iss liye maine jhuth bol diya k mai bilkul theek hu ...aap meri chinta mat karo kaam thoda jayda tha iss liye thoda busy tha
Phir sabhi chezon ko bhool kar maine usee baton ka silsila suru kiya phone per baaton ka lamba door tab tak chala jab tak ki phone ki bettry ka dam na nikala gaya ho.......? ammi se phone per baat karne k liye 24 ghante kam pad rahe they.... ji chah raha tha ki ammi bass sara time mere sath bethi rahe mujhse baatein karti rahe ....dil kar raha tha phone per baat karte-karte ammi k pass pahuch jaon magar aaj halaat aise they ki mai ek glass pani k liye bhi tarsh raha tha agar aaj ammi pass hoti to aise halat mai bister se uthne bhi nahi deti...ye soch kar hi meri ankhon mai aansoo aa gaye ...Sach kahu to mera mann yaha bilkul nahi lagta tha aaj mujhe yaha aaye 6 mahine ho gaye they mere pass koi aisa nahi tha jisse mai apne dil ki baat kar saku Per meri ammi jinko itni door rahkar bhi meri pal pal ki khabar rahti hai mere pass nishani k tour per unki ek shadi ki tasveer thi uss k alwala unn ki aur koi tasveer mere pass nahi thi jeb tatool kar maine usse bahar nikal liya aur dekhne laga meri roj ki aadat thi sone se pahle ammi ko dekhne ki aaj bhi unki tasveer dekh kar mai roj ki tarha poorane khyalon mai doobta chala gaya
Kahte hai kabhi kabhi ateet mai kho jana bhi achha hota hai poorani yaade taaja ho jati hai aur hum uss mai itna kho jaate hai ki hame pata bhi nahi chalta ki is bich ka time kab gujar gaya ............kudrat ki god mai basa mera chota sa gaon bahut khubsurat tha charo taraf hare bhare jungle , jheel aur koyle ki khaan iss gaon ki khasiyat thi Gaon me jaydater log gaon jayda bada nahi tha fir bhi sabhi khushaal they sabhi log ek doosre ki madad karne ko tayyer khade rahte...... Isi gaon k ander hamari bhi ek choti si duniya thi mere walid sahab ka naam Raheem khan hai or unki umar 48 saal hai.... meri ammi ka naam Farida begum tha apne naam ki tarha hi Khoobsurat aur izzatdaar khandaan ki aurat bahut nek bhali aur sareef parde wali khatun jinki 44 saal umar thi
Abbu thode sakht mizaaj ke they har wakt gusse mai rahte ammi ki koi kadar nahi karte kabhi kabhi woh ammi per hath bhi utha dete they per iske bawajood bhi meri ammi koi sikayat nahi karti kiyoki woh janti thi ki maan maryada izazat kiya hoti hai woh abbu k naaz nakhro ko chup chaap bardast kar leti ...Mai bachpan se hi dekhta tha kis tarha meri ammi rote hue abbu ki sakhtmizazi aur meri kamyabi ko laikar uperwale se duaa karti thi abbu padhe likhe they iss liye woh mujhe padhate they magar sabak yaad na hone per dhunayi bahut karte they ...ammi ki tarha mujhe bhi unse bahut darr lagta tha iss liye kayi dafa to yaad hua sabak bhi unke darr se bhool jata tha per meri ammi ne wahi cheez khel khel aur pyar si sikha di .... meri ammi gaav ki mahila thi is liye woh bass paanchvi jamaat tak padhi thi kuch saal pahle tak mai bistar per hi pesaab kar deta tha per meri pyari ammi jaan bina ufff kiye poora bistar dho deti thi jab mai school jaata to jeb kharch k liye kuch paise de deti thi raat ko sone se pahle ammi mujhe achhi achhi baatein sikhati woh kahti thi ...apne bado ki izzat karna ,mann laga kar padhna,chori nahi karna ,jhoot mat bolna wagera wagera.............! Ammi ki nashiton ko mai dhyaan se sunta aur un per amal karne ki baat karta ........Ek baar mera school mai jhagda ho gaya yeh baat abbu ko pata chali to usne mujhe zor se thappad maar diya mai rote rote ghar se nikal gaya aur ghar k piche bane store room mai anaaj ki bori k piche chipp gaya aur sara din wahi chipa raha magar raat hui to mujhe darr lagne laga to mai waha se nikal karr ghar mai aa gaya ....maine dekha ammi jo hamesha abbu se dabi awaaj mein baat karti hai vo mere khatir abbu se jhagad rahi hai mein darwaje k piche se sab dekh raha tha mujhe bhookh lag rahi thi to mai dabe paon rasio mai chala gaya per bartano ki aahat sun karr ammi turant aa gayi uski ankhon mai ansoo they mai uske pass chala gaya to usne mujhe apne aanchal mai chipa liya.... is tarha dhire dhire din guzarte chale gaye 12 jamaat mai maine school toop kiya to newspaper mai badi izzat ke sath mera naam chapa tha shaam ko ghar aaya to ammi ko newspaper dikahte hue kaha k ammi maine poore school mai top kiya hai newspaper mai abaa aur mera photo ek sath dekh ammi ne asmaan ki taraf hath utha karr kaha sukar hai allaha ka ....Suru se hi mere sapne bahut bade they main jindgi mai bahut khuch karna chahta tha magar usi raat ko jab mein so raha tha to maine sapne mai dekha k mai apne mulk k liye qurban ho gaya hu usi wakt se maine foji banne ki thaan li aur agle din apne dil ki baat bata maine ammi ko bata di ....per ammi ki dili tamanna thi ki mai school ke bajaye apne majhab ki taleem hasil karu per maine ammi ko samjhaya k ammi mai **** to padh chuka hu abb jamana badal gaya hai mujhe padhne likhne ki jarurat hai ammi ko meri baat theek lagi aur kahne lagi theek hai beta mai shaam ko thumhare abbu se baat karti hu..? Raat ko ammi ne khane ki table per abbu ko newspaper dikahte hue kaha "suno ji hamare bete ne school toop kiya hai uska sapna army mai bharti hone ka hai ...Itna sunna tha ki abba ke tever badal gaye aur gusse se kahne lage kiya karega foji ban kar 12 th pass kar li hai bass yahi bahut hai abb ek achhi ladki dekh uski shaadi kar denge abbu ki baat sun kar mujhe unper bahut gussa aaya ek baar ko to mann kiya k abhi ghar chodh k bhaag jaon ...?
Tabhi ammi boli, " suno ji agar asif ko army
mein jana pashand hai to aap usper apni marzi kiyo thop rahe ho ."
Abbu aur jayda gusse mai bole, " thumhe yeh sab itna asaan lagta hai kiraye ka Kamra , khane pine ka bill ,coaching ka kharcha uske baad army ka test in sab mein kam se kam 5 lakh rupeey lag jayege kaha se karenge itna kharcha itne paiso mai to iski dhoom dhaam se shaadi ho jayegi .....?
Iss baar ammi bhadak uthi aur boli .... kharche ki chinta tum mat karo mein apne gahne girvi rakh dungi Mera beta voh sab karega jo woh karna chahta hai
Per abbu kaha itni jaldi haar manne wale they woh ammi se kahne lage tum kuch dino k liye apne maayke chali jaon tumhari tabiyat theek ho jayegi itna sunte hi ammi ki ankhon mein ansoo aa gaye kiykoi nani ke ghar jane ka matalab tha ammi ko ghor beijjati kiyoki abbu ammi ko lene nahi jaate phir mama mami yaha tak ki adosh padosh k log ammi ko taane marne lagte phir kam se kam
5-6 mahine baad abbu ammi ko lene jaate sath me qasam lete k ammi ko unki har baat maani hogi iske baad hi unhe apne sath laate
iss baar ammi jayda nahi boli bass itna kaha apni tarha mai bete ki jindagi barbad nahi hone dungi aap rahne do mein dekhti hu kiya karna hai or haa mein mayke nahi ja rahi hu........ yahi mera ghar hai ....................
mein yahi rahungi apne bete k sath.............. Sab batein sun kar main waha se apne room mein chala aaya mujhe laga abb sab khtam ho gaya hai abba nahi manege iss liye mai apne bistar per lait gaya kisi tarha woh bhaari raat gujree aur subha hui abbu bina kuch bole nikal gaye jaise hi ammi ki najar mujh per padi usne mujhe pyar se dekha aur boli chal jaldi se tayyer ho jaon hame sahar jaana hai itna sunte hi mere to jaise pankh nikal gaye ho mai ammi se lipat gaya thodi dair baad hum dono auto le kar saher aa gaye pahli baar sahar ko dekh kar mera dil jhoom utha auto wale ko ammi ne sunar ki dukaan per chalne ko kaha to auto wala hame ek bahut badi jwellery ki dukaan per le gaya ammi ne apne gahno ki potli sunaar k samne rakh di sunaar ne gahno ko tola aur hame 4 lakh rupeey de diye iske baad khushi khushi hum coaching centre pahuch gaye .... mujhe admission milne mai koi dikkat nahi hui mere 12 jamaat k marks aur newspaper mai naam dekh kar coaching centre ka head bahut khush hua mere achhe marks aane ki wajha se meri kuch percent fees bhi kam ho gayi .......!
admission fees k sath hamne hostal ki fees bhi ek sath pay kar di unhone ammi ko yakeen dilate hue kaha bahan ji aap apne bete ki chinta na kare jaise iss ne apne school ka naam roshan kiya hai waise hi hamare coaching centre ka naam Roshan karega Abhi kuch din aur admission chal rahe they jis wajha se class nahi lag rahi hai jaise hi class lagni suru hogi hum aapko phone kar ke bata denge Iske baad hum khushi khushi ghar aa gaye kuch din baad class suru hui to mein ammi se vida laikar mai wapis coaching centre chala aaya aur poori lagan k sath padhayi mai jutt gaya ji tod mahnat karne laga har wakt padhai mai masgool rahne laga coaching ke sath hi maine shaam ko kuch bachho ko tusion dena bhi suru kar diya jisse kuch kharcha nikal aata aakhirkar maine foj mai bharti hone ka written exaam pass kar liya meri mahnat rang le hi aayi Gaon pahuch kar maine ammi ko yeh khuskhabri di to unke muh muh se to bol hi nahi fote bass dono hath duaa mai uthate hue boli Ya khuda tera lakh lakh sukar hai exaam pass karne k baad mujhe traning k liye phir se ghar chodna pada.... training poori hui aur woh din bhi aaya jiska mujhe besabri se intizaar tha khuda k fazlo karam se mai foji ban gaya agle din bina bataye meine gaon jaane ke liye buss pakdi har stop per buss rookti to dil ki dhadkan badh jati yeh soch kar ki ammi ko kiase lagega jab mai batounga ki mein foji ban gaya hu? Gaon k buss Stop per utar kar maine halwaai ki dukaan se mithai khareed kar ghar ki taraf chal pada ghar pahucha to dekha hamare ghar k samne logon ki bheed lagi thi...mujhe to kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha ki hamare ghar itni bheed kiyo lagi hai kahin kuch ho to nahi gaya hai meri ankhe ammi ko dhondhne lagi ghar ke bahar abbu aur unke kuch dost bethe batein kar rahe they meine sabko duaa salaam kiya phir bheed se raasta bana kar ghar main ghush gaya ammi rasoighar mein chaye bana rahi thi sir per halka dupatta chahra pasine se tar batar
Mujhe kuch bhi achha nahi lag raha tha maine preshaan hote hue kaha ammi sab theek to hai naa ammi ne kuch jawab nahi diya bass dhair sare cup mein chaye chaan kar tray me rakhi aur mujhse kaha ja bahar ja kar de aa tere abba kab se chaye k liye k kah rahe hai Ammi ko kuch jawaab diye bina mein tray utha kar bahar le gaya aur table per bicho bich trya rakh di abbu ne kuch dair meri taraf dekha phir newspaper niche rakha aur sabko chaye ka chup pakdane lage tabhi meri Najar newspaper per padi jisme meri army officer banne ki khabar chap chuki thi abb mujhse sara mamla samjh aa gaya abb samjha log yaha bina wajha ikhtha nahi hua balki mere swagat karne k aaye hue hai tabhi abbu k dost ne mere gale main phulon ki mala pahan di phir abbu se kahne lage bada honhar beta hai aapka raheem sahab isne na sirf aapka balki poore gaon ka naam roshan kiya hai itna sunte hi sabhi log taaliya peetne lage maine abbu ki taraf dekha per mujhe abhi bhi unke chahre per koi khushi k bhav najar nahi aa rahe they khair kuch dair baad sab apne apne ghar nikal gaye Kuch dino baad meri posting jammu kashmir ho gayi Jaane se ek din pahle ammi mere sirahne beth kar raat bhar mere sir per hath ferti rahi mujhe dekhti rahi usse pata tha k mere jane k baad kitne mahine tak woh mujhe dekh nahi paygi .... ... Agle din ammi mujhe buss stand tak chodhne aayi usne ek tabeez mere bajoo per bandhte hue boli *** tumhari pag pag per hifazat farmaye.....beta ye sun kar mai uske kandhe se lag kar sisak pada aur rote hue bola " mai kaise rahunga aapke bina ammi ? aapse door jane ko mann nahi kar raha hai ........ammi mere sir per hath pherte hue boli “pagle mere liye rahna kiya asaan hoga thumhare bina ... tum apna dhyan rakhan aur rona nahi warna mera yaha rahna muskil ho jayga aap bhi apna dhyaan rakhna bass kuch mahine ki baat hai mai jaldi wapis aaounga phir aapko bhi apne sath le jaounga mujh per bharosha rakhna itna kah kar Maine apna beg uthaya aur ek najar ammi ko dekha phir tezi se buss mai chadh gaya agar mai ek pal aur ammi k pass khda rahta to mera nikalna muskil ho jaata buss k darwaje par khade hokar hath hilakar maine ammi se vida li buss dhire dhire aage badhne lagi ansoon k bich dhundhli hoti meri ankhe ammi ko tab tak dekhti rahi jab tak voh meri ankhon se oojhal na ho gayi... Buss aaghe badhti ja rahi thi aur mere dil ammi se door hone ka ahsaas teji se gahrata ja raha tha mera mann kar raha tha abhi buss rukwa kar niche utar jaon aur wapis apne ghar chala jaon bahut rookne per bhi meri ankhon se ansoo dobara foot pade maine jaldi se khidki se bahar dekhne k bahane se ansoo ponchne ,aur jaise taise apne aap ko sambhala aur yaha chala aaya aur tab se Laikar aaj tak yahi nokri kar raha hu...............?
Bahut achhi story hai ...यह कहानी निःसंदेह रोमांचक और अत्यंत कामुक है। इस आकर्षक कहानी को लिखने के लिए आपका बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद।