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very niceAmmi (Shaila Khan) ki Secrets!
Hi all
pehli kahaani liknay jaa raha hu.
Restarting a story that was a hit on another website forum and left incomplete on this forum by the original writer who is my buddy.
This is not a CLEAN COPY PASTE!
There are CHANGES from the beginning, especially start one third is heavily altered.
Wajeh hai to align the continuity, kyunki original kahaani mein bohot idhar udhar add subtract hua....beech mein kahaani uthal puthal si thi....aagay jaakay kahaani bohot sahi tempo mein rahi..isliye main wapis jeevitt kar raha hoon is kahaani ko apne style mein
Kahaani slow hai, seduction bohot ziada hai
Character aur plot developement mein time lagega.
Jin readers ne kahaani parhi hui hai, plz yahan share/suggest/interfere na karay to kill any suspense for new readers
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waitingAmmi (Shaila Khan) ki Secrets!
Hi all
pehli kahaani liknay jaa raha hu.
Restarting a story that was a hit on another website forum and left incomplete on this forum by the original writer who is my buddy.
This is not a CLEAN COPY PASTE!
There are CHANGES from the beginning, especially start one third is heavily altered.
Wajeh hai to align the continuity, kyunki original kahaani mein bohot idhar udhar add subtract hua....beech mein kahaani uthal puthal si thi....aagay jaakay kahaani bohot sahi tempo mein rahi..isliye main wapis jeevitt kar raha hoon is kahaani ko apne style mein
Kahaani slow hai, seduction bohot ziada hai
Character aur plot developement mein time lagega.
Jin readers ne kahaani parhi hui hai, plz yahan share/suggest/interfere na karay to kill any suspense for new readers
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INDEX
Update 1
Thanks a lot for rewriting the story. Eagerly waiting for the first update.Ammi (Shaila Khan) ki Secrets!
Hi all
pehli kahaani liknay jaa raha hu.
Restarting a story that was a hit on another website forum and left incomplete on this forum by the original writer who is my buddy.
This is not a CLEAN COPY PASTE!
There are CHANGES from the beginning, especially start one third is heavily altered.
Wajeh hai to align the continuity, kyunki original kahaani mein bohot idhar udhar add subtract hua....beech mein kahaani uthal puthal si thi....aagay jaakay kahaani bohot sahi tempo mein rahi..isliye main wapis jeevitt kar raha hoon is kahaani ko apne style mein
Kahaani slow hai, seduction bohot ziada hai
Character aur plot developement mein time lagega.
Jin readers ne kahaani parhi hui hai, plz yahan share/suggest/interfere na karay to kill any suspense for new readers
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INDEX
Update 1