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Hello Friends mera naam abhishek hai maine yeah kahani suru kiya tha xforum par kuch personal reason jiski wajih se mai likh nhi paya
ab sab kuch thik hai yeah kahani mai phir se suru kar raha hun mujhe support karte rahiye.
Is baar pahile se ache se likhunga apko acha lagega apka abhishek



Toh Dosto Char update post kar diye hai batana kaisa laga
 
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UPDATE 1(INTRODUCTION)

Saxena Mansion Mai Subah ke 5 baje hai ek ladki apne bade bhai ke sath exercise kar rahi hai
dono bhai behen bahut mehnati,serious,attitude wale hai apne papa ka
empire Saxena Group Of Industries sambhalte hai,woh ladki Varsha Saxena
and uska bada bhai Ajay Saxena hai.

Dusri taraf Kitchen mai ek ladki kaam kar rahi hai sabke liye
breakfast bana rahi hai aur apni choti beti ko school chorne ki
taiyari mai lagi hai woh ladki Ajay Saxena ki wife Pallavi Saxena aur
Unki Beti Shriya Saxena hai,

Ek Ladki Subah-Subah apne kamre mai music system mai tez awaaz mai
mai Dance kar rahi hai,yeah ladki matlabi,ghamandi,logon ko apne pairon
ke niche rakhna pasand karti hai yeah ladki varsha saxena and Ajay saxena
ki choti behen Nidhi Saxena hai.

Ek bahut kator,gussewala admi apne room mai bane office mai computer
par kuch khatar patar kar raha tha ghar mai sab inse darte hai inka baat
koi nhi kathta inko business ke ilava kuch padi nhi rehti sirf paisa kamane
ki zidd rehti hai yeah insaan Nidhi,Ajay,Varsha ke father Mithesh Saxena hai.

Ek aurat jo ghar main bane shiv aur parvati ji ke mandir mai puja kar rahi hai
woh bhi apne husband se darti hai
Inka Naam Reema Saxena hai jo Mithesh saxena ki wife hai
Aur Varsha,Nidhi,Ajay ki mom hai.

Ek Budha Admi Sofe Par Baithe Chai ka chuski ke sath paper pad rahe hai
Inka naam Raghuveer Saxena jo Mithesh Saxena Ke Father and
Nidhi,Varsha,Ajay ke Dadaji hai.
hai yeah bichare bhi apne bete se darte hai isliye kuch nhi bolte.
 
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Ab Aage....

Ab aage

Sab dinning table par baithe the sab ek dum santh jaise is ghar mai koi matam ho koi baat nhi kar raha tha ek dusre se. Khana khate khate mitesh apni beti se bolte hai Mithesh:waah beti is baar bahut acha kaam kiya tumne us mittal se project chin kar hamara naam roshan kar diya.

Varsha:Thank You Dad.

Wahi mitesh apne bete se puchte hai

Mithesh:Ajay who bridge ke project ka kya hua who tender tum dekh rahe the wada kiya tha who tender hamara hoga toh kya hua who tender ke bare mai kal hi mai tumse baat karna chahta tha par kar nhi paya.Toh bolo kya hua.

Ajay chup tha kuch bol nhi pa raha tha kya bole who soch raha tha

Mithesh ajay ko chp rehta dekhkar bolte hai

Mithesh:Ajay kya hua chup kyu ho who tender hume hi mila hai na ki nhi.is baar gusse mai ajay se bole.

Ajay:Dad is baar tender hume nhi mila who agarwal ne humse jyada paise lagaye the.

Mithesh:tum bhi laga dete jyada paise hume tender mil jata gusee mai mithesh phir se bola.

Ajay:Dad isse humare profit kafi nuksan hota isliye

Mithesh bich mai baat kate hue

Mithesh: isliye tumne profit margin kam rakha Nuksan hota toh ho jane dete kya farak padta isse hume tender toh mil jata yeah tumne teesri baar aisa kiya hai tum mere company ke naam ko dubane ke liye paida hue ho useless fellow us agarwal ke samne mera naak kat di.

Ajay:Sorry Dad agli baar se aisa nhi hoga

Mithesh gusse mai:Kya nhi hoga yeah tessri baar kiya hai aisa aur tumhari behen jo tumse choti hai par business mai tumse aage hai lagatar 6 baar sare tender ko hasil kiye hai aur hamara naam roshan kiye hai aur ek tum ho jo muft ki roti kha rahe ho.Aise hi chalta raha ek din tum bhi mere Pitaji ki tarah ban jaoge jo jindagi bar muft ki roti khate reh.Ab mujhe tumse koi umeed nhi bachi.

Yeah bolte hue mithesh apn officce ke liye nikal jata hai

Varsha bhi nikal jati hai apni gadi se.

Ajay jiski ankh mai anshu the Woh adha khana chorkar chala jata hai

Pallavi piche se thokte hue:Khana toh pura kha lijiye aise adha khana chorkar nhi jate.

Ajay apni patni ki taraf muskurakar bolta hai

Ajay:Mujhe bhuk nhi hai tum tension mat lo tum khana kha lena mai phone karunga tum janti ho na mujhe pata chal jayega tumne khaya ki nhi mukura kar chala gya apni gadi se
Pallavi apni pati ke ankhon mai anshu dekh liye the use bahut bura lag raha tha par kuch bol nhi payi apne ankhon mai anshu liye kitchen mai kaam karne chali jati hai.

Yeah sab ek aurat ankhon mai anshu liye sab dekh rahi thi aur uparwale se mannat mang rahi thi

Aurat:Is ghar ke dukh kabhi khatam kyun hi hote kab jayega is ghar se dukh.

Aurat ki bate sun ek admi kehta hai

Admi:Bahut jaldi jayenge beta uski pooja karti uspar bharosa rakh woh jarur sab kuch thik karega.



Woh Aurat Koi aur nhi Mithesh saxena ki dharam patni Reema Sasena thi
Woh Admi Raghuveer(Mithessh ke pitaji)………
 
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Ab AAge....

Udhar Office mai Varsha kaam kar rahi thi tabhi woh apni secretary neha ko awwaz lagati hai
Varsha Gusse mai:Nehaaa...

Neha:Yes mam.

Varsha:Kal tumhe jo tender ka filee tha use rakhne ko kaha tha woh kahan hai Neha?Maine subah main aun use pahile file mere cabin mai honi chahiye aise maine clear instruction diye the.

Neha:Sorry Mam Mai abhi lati hun Mam bhul gayi thi.

Varsha Gusse mai:Tumhara Dhyan kidhar hai,Kitne time se tum mere sath kaam kar rahi ho
Neha:Kafi time ho gya mujhe yaad nhi hai mam.

Varsha:3 saal se tum meri secretary ho,tumhe ache se pata hai jo kaam maine bola hai woh na ho toh mujhe kitni gusa ata hai.
Maine clear instruction di thi file ke bare mai phir bhi tumne aisa kiya

Neha:Sorry Mam abhi se aisa nhi hoga dhyan rakhungi.

Varsha Gusse Main:What sorry,dhyan kahan rehta hai tumhara,agli baar se aisa huaa tumhe company se dismiss kar dungi.
Jao woh tender wali file lekar aao.

Neha ke ankh mai anshu aa gye the :Yes mam abhi lati hun.

Neha woh file lekar ati hai

Neha:Yeah Lijjiye Tender wali file jo apne mangi thi.

Varsha:Thik hai tum jao,aur meri baton ko yaad rakhna akhri warning hai

Neha:Yes Mam dhyan rakhungi.

Neha Yeah Bolkar apni cabin mai chali gyi

Thodi der mai Ajay Varsha ke cabin mai ata hai

Ajay:Varsha dad ne hume naye product ke launch ke liye meeting rakhi hume chalna hoga meeting attend karne

Varsha:Aap Jao mai ati hun

Ajay piche muda use kuch yaad aya

Ajay:Varsham By the way congrats tumne mittal se woh tender hasil kiya.

Varsha attitude mai:Thanks,Chale meeting mai daier ho rahi hai.

Ajay:Haan chalo

Jab tak yeah log meeting pahuchte hai tab tak dekhte hai ghar mai kya ho raha hai

Saxena mansion

Nidhi Nashe mai ghar aa rahi thi pallavi aur reema udhar dining table par baithi thi.

Pallavi:Kal raat se tum bahar ho na koi call na koi khabar,hum sab ko tumhari chinta hoti hai,darr laga rehta kahi koi hadsa na ho jaye.

Nidhi Gusse Mai:Ghar ke naukro ko meri chinta karne ki koi jarurat nhi hai,ja ke apna sansar sambhale meri fikar na kare,Mai itni mature ho chuki hun kya karna ya nhi mujhe malum hai,samjhane ki jarurat nhi.

Nidhi ki baat sunkar pallavi ke ankh mai anshu aa gye hai.

Reema Nidhi ki baat sunkar gusse mai bolti hai:Ek toh tum late aa rahi ho aur apni bhabhi se badtameezi se baat kar rahi ho yehi sanskaar diye hai tumhe.

Nidhi jor se hansne lagti hai gusse mai bolti hai:Sanskaar ki baat deho kaun kar raha hai,jo apne ghar ko sambhal nhi payi mujhe sikha rahi hai sanskarr ki baat jao pahile apna ghar smabhalo phir mujhe bolna.

Nidhi ki aisi baat sunkar reema ke bhi ankh mai anshu aa gye the reema gusse mai hath uthane jati hai

Nidhi phir gusse mai ati hai:Mrs Reema aisi galti kabhi mat karna,woh hak aap kho chuki hai samjhi agli baar mai dekhungi nhi aap kaun ho samjhi.

Yeah bolkar lakhdate hue woh jane lagti hai jate jate piche mudkar bolti hai

Nidhi:Mera baat yaad rakhna.

Reema apni beti nidhi ki baat sunkar niche baith jati hai rone lagti hai,pallavi unke kandhe par hath rakhte hue

Reema: Dekh rahi ho kaisi baat kar rahi hai apni maa se,humne kya galti ki thi humne sirf iska bhala hi chaha tha yehi galti ki thi humne,tumhe toh pata hai na pallavi agar woh kadam hum nhi uthate nidhi ki zindagi kharab ho sakti thi.

Pallavi:Sab thik ho jayega maazi dekhna ek din use apni galti ka ehsaas zarur hoga.

Reema rote hue:Pata nhi kab woh din ayega,Mai toh apne bacho ka muh dekh kar jee rahi hun agar mere bache aisa karenge toh mai mar jaungi..

Pallavi:Roye nhi unpar bharosa hai mujhe wahi sak thik karenge.

Reema:Ab toh unhi ka sahara reh gya hai............
 
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Ab Aage..

Mithesh Apne naye project ke bare mai meeting rakhi thi

Mithesh:Aap logo ko pata hi hai humara business construction ke ilava products ka bhi business usi silsile mai maine tum logon ko bulaya hai,hum log ek naye product launch karne wale hai,yeah raha iska presentation.
Mithesh presentation dikhane lagta hai

Mithesh:So,yeah raha humara naya presentation,kaisa laga yeah products ka presentation?
sabse pahile varsha bolti hai

Varsha:Product ka presentation bahut badiya hai market mai khub naam karegi.

Employee :Yeah product market mai dhoom machayegi sir.
Aise kar karke sabhi employee ne khub tarif ki baad mai Ajay ki bari ayi
Ajay apni rai deta use pahile mithesh ajay ko rokhte hue bolte hai

Mithesh:Jo muft ki rotiyan todte hai use yahan koi kaam nhi hai,apna muh band hi rakhe toh acha hai aur compani ko aise logon ki jarurat nhi hai.
Varsha is baat se bura lagta hai

Varsha: dad,unhe kuch bolne dijiye bhaiya bhi is company ke hissa hai.

Mithesh:Kai ka hissa,jisne lagatar mera naam duboya hai,ek tender hasil nhi kar paya use kya hi umeed rakhe hamare company ko aage badayega,bas mera naam duboyega,abhi bhi tameez bachi hai tum yeah meeting chorkar ja sakte ho.

Is baat se Varsha ko bahut bura laga use pata hai Ajay kitni mehnat ki thi is company ko aage badhane mai
Lekin aj use sabke samne beijaat kiya ja raha tha Varsha bhi apne pita ke samne kuch bol nhi payi ankh mai anshu aa gye.

Ajay bina ek sabd bole ankhon mai anshu liye waha se chala jata hai apne cabin mai.Varsha rokne ki koshish karti hai
Mithesh Varsha ko rok deta hai

Mithesh:Jane do use waise bhi uska koi kaam nhi hai yahan.
Varsha chup ho jati hai.
Meeting khatam hone ke baad sablog apna kaam karne lagte hai mithesh varsha ko rokte hue bolta hai

Mithesh: Varsha mujhe tumse kuch kaam hai,

Varsha: Yes dad,boliye kya kaam hai?

Mithesh: Beta,tumne shaadi ke bare mai kya socha hai?

Varsha: Dad,Apko toh pat hai mai shaadi nhi karna chahti,mera pura concentrate business mai hai
mujhe apke aur bhaiya ki tarah is company ko aage badhana hai aap logo ka naam roshan karna hai

Mithesh ajay ki baat sunkar gusse toh hua lekin apni baat sambhalte hue bola

Mithesh:Varsha har inssan ko apne zindagi mai shaadi karni padti hai,mujhe malum hai tumhara pura dhyan business mai hai
Mujhe is par bahut garv hai beta,tum aise ladka dhundo jo humare sath rahe jo keemat chahiye woh milegi,jidhar chahe udhar ja sakta hai,raja ki tarah rahega,Duniya walon ke liye tumahra pati rahega ghar mai hum sab ka ghulam.

Varsha mithesh ki baat sunkar shock ho gyi aur apne pita se bolti hai

Varsha:Par dad?

Mithesh:Par Var kuch nhi,ise ek fayda hoga tumhare sare commentators ka muh band ho jayega,jo tumhara piche pade hai shaadi kar lo woh bhi chup ho jayenge,aur tum apne kaam par dhyan de sakti ho.

Varsha:Jaise apko thik lage.

Mithesh:Aise kisi ko janti ho tum,tumhare nazar mai hai koi?

Varsha ko kuch yaad aa jata hai

Varsha:Haan mai ek ladke ko janti hun jaise apko chahiye waise hi paiso ke piche pagal jo bolenge wahi karega.

Mithesh:Thik hai kal use hume milne ke liye bolna hum use milenge sab kuch samjh denge

Varsha:Thik hai dad.

Varsha apni pita se baat karke cabin mai ati woh ajay ko dekhne jati hai woh piche se dekhti hai ajay apne cabin mai fut futkar ro raha tha Varsh ki himmat nhi hui uske paas jane ki.

Varsha waha se apna cabin mai aa jati hai apne ankhon mai anshu liye kaam karne lagti hai.



Yeah Maine chota sa update diya hai maine agla update thoda bada hoga.
 
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