''कहीं की ईंट कहीं की रोड़ा, भानमती ने कुनबा जोड़ा"UPDATE 12
business man varun sharma family
varun Sharma
varun wife.. Priyanka
badi beti.. Varsha
Varsha husband sudheer
chhoti beti.. Pooja
pooja husband.. Vinay
bada beta..sohan
sohan wife..archana
Chhota beta.. Mohan
Varun Sharma ki family bandhi padi thi
Varun bhi bandha pada tha
kutte ki position mein
aman ka man kar raha tha
ki woh Varun ke saamne ki uske beto ko maar de
lekin Rajesh ke beto ko usne maar diya tha
aur marne ke baad bhi Rajesh ke bete use dikhne lage the
usi haalat mein gala kata hua
aur woh ek hi sawal karte the
ki tumne humein kyu maara
isi liye aman ne Varun ke beto ko nahi maara
Varun ke munh pe tape laga hua tha
Varun sharma bahut bada business man
high class log
Varun ki wife
Priyanka
Varun ki badi beti
Varsha
Varun ki chhoti beti
Pooja
Varun ki badi bahu
archana
aman ne ek video dikhaya
jismein woh Rajesh ke beto ko ka gala kaat chuka tha
yeh dekhte hi
Priyanka varsha Pooja aur archana chaaro buri tarah se ghabra gayi
aur rone lagi
Aman
ab baat dhyan se suno
main tumse sawal puchhunga
koi rona dhona nahi karna hai tumhein
bas sawal ka jawab dena hai
agar Rona dhona karogi
toh Priyanka pehle tumhare beto ko maarunga
phir tumhare damad ko maarunga
aur phir tum sabki boor mein yeh chaaku ghusa dunga
samajh gayi ki nahi
Aman
madarchod bol nahi Rahi ho
tumhari maa ki choot
yeh bolke aman ne chaaku maarne ke liye apna hath uthaya
sab ro padi
Aman
main bhi na
tum sabka munh band hai
bologi kaise
aur Aman ne sabke munh se tape hata diya
Aman
Priyanka jab tumhari shaadi hui thi
tab tum virgin thi ya phir shaadi se pehle chud chuki thi
yeh sunke priyanaka buri tarah se jhenp gayi
abhi tak aman ne sex drive waala drug nahi diya tha unhein
aur na hum waala drug diya tha
Aman ne chaaku priyanka ke gaal se sata diya
Priyanka ro padi
Priyanka
virgin thi main
aman
shaadi ke baad kisi aur mard ke sath sex kiya
Priyanka ko bahut lajja mehsus ho Rahi thi
uski beti bahu aur pati ke saamne
aisi baatein koi puchh raha tha
Aman
theek hai phir tere bete ka sar kaatke laata hoon
Priyanka rote hue
nahi nahi please
Aman
ek baar mein jawab diya kar
samajh gayi
warna randi Teri beti ki choot mein chaaku ghusa dunga
Priyanka
nahi kiya
aman
raand jhuth bolti hai
Teri maa ko chodu
aur Aman ne ek bada sa chaaku liya
aur pooja ki taango ko failake
Priyanka cheekhte
please ruk jaao
ab jhuth nahi bolungi
aman ruk gaya
Aman
theek hai bata ab
Priyanka
kayi mardo ke sath kiya hai
Aman
kyun
Priyanka
woh mujhe achche lagte the
aman
Varun ko pata hai
Priyanka najrein neeche karke
haan
Aman
waah dalle waah
biwi ki hi dalali karne lage tum toh
main
Varsha virgin thi shaadi se pehle
Varsha rote hue
nahi thi
Aman
kyun nahi thi
yeh sunke Varsha aman ko ajeeb najro se dekhne lagi
Aman cheekhte hue
bata
randi jo tu soch Rahi hai
wohi hoon
purano soch ka jaahil aur ganwar mard
Varsha ki aankhon mein aansu aagaye
Varsha
mere pehle bhi kayi bf the
Aman
achcha
suhagraat mein pati ne kuchh nahi bola
Varsha
unhone mujhse puchha tha
maine unhein jhuth bol diya
ki ek ladke ne mere sath nashe mein mera fayda uthaya
Aman
sach kyun nahi bataya
Varsha
ladke kitna bhi munh maar le
ladki unhein virgin hi chahiye
Aman
baat toh sahi hai
lekin woh mard kya kare
jiski maa ne bachpan se use seekhaya ho
ki kisi ki ghar ki izzat ke sath nahi khelna
woh khud virgin ho
lekin use ladki chhinal mil jaaye
Varsha kuchh nahi boli
Aman
re raand jawab toh de de
Varsha
mujhe nahi pata
Aman
shaadi ke baad kisi aur ke sath sex kiya
Varsha
nahi
Aman
kyu
Varsha
bas aise hi
mere pati bahut achche hain
yeh sunke aman rone laga
raand Aarushi ne mere sath kitna bada dhokha kiya tha
madarchod jab use badla hi Lena tha
toh mere se shaadi kyun ki
Aman ne Pooja ki taraf dekha
aman
tum thi Virgin
shaadi se pehle
Pooja darte hue
nahi
Aman
kyun nahi thi
Pooja
mere bf ne mujhe cheat kiya
isi liye maine use chhod diya
Aman
achcha
lekin bf ke sath sex kyun kiya
Pooja
kyunki main use pyar karti thi
Aman
toh phir shaadi kyun nahi ki
pooja
bola toh usne mujhe cheat kiya tha
Aman
pati ne pehli baar mein kuchh bola nahi
Pooja
woh bhi pehle relation mein tha
Aman
achcha
shaadi ke baad kisi aur ke sath sex kiya
yeh sunke Pooja chup ho gayi
Aman
theek hai
aur phir Aman ne Pooja ke pet pe chaaku ki nok rakh di
Pooja ro padi
haan kiya
Aman
kyu
Pooja rote hue
mujhe apne pati ke sath woh feeling nahi aati thi
Aman
theek hai rona band karo
ismein rone ki kya baat hai
Aman
haan archana tum batao
virgin thi
Archana
hmm thi
Aman
kya baat kar Rahi ho
aur tumhara pati
archana
mujhe nahi pata
Aman
shaadi ke baad kisi aur ke sath sex kiya
Archana
nahi
Aman
kyun nahi kiya
Varsha
main koi randi nahi hoon
jo dus jagah munh maarti rehti
Aman
yeh baat yeh hui na baat
Varsha rote hue
please mujhe chhod dijiye
mera kya kasoor
Aman
dear tumhare pati ne meri wife ko choda tha
badla toh mujhe Lena hai na
yeh sunke Varsha shocked ho gayi
aur phir Aman ne un paancho ko hum waala drugs de diya
woh unhein sex drive waala drug is liye nahi de sakta tha
kyunki uske baad woh sex karne ke liye har samay tadapti rehti
jiske sath chahti sex Karti
hum waale drug se woh sirf aman se chudne ke liye tadapti rehti
aur apni life waise hi jeeti jaise woh jee rahi thi
lekin sex sirf aman ke sath karti
Aman
Varun sharma
aaj teri biwi Teri betiya aur teri bahu
meri rakhel banengi
Varun Sharma cheekhne laga
Varun sharma ka denial toh kabka khatam ho chuka tha
anger bhi khatam ho chuka tha
ab bargaining
Aman ne Varun sharma ke munh se tape hata diya
Varun
please yeh sab mat karo
tum jo maangoge main dunga
please Aisa mat karo
main tumse bheekh maangta hoon
main
hawas ki bhi keemat chukani padti hai
Varun
maine toh aaj tak kabhi kisi ladki ke sath zabardasti nahi ki
main
paiso ke dum pe unhein apni randi toh banaya hi.hai
Varun
woh sab apni marzi se
main
chup reh madarchod
biwi hote hue bhi agar koi sex kare dusri aurto ke sath
woh bhi utna hi bada paapi hai
jitni badi paapi badchalan biwi hoti hai
aur main toh apna badla le Raha hoon
mujhe usse kya matlab
tabhi Varun ki najar uski biwi uski dono beti aur bete ki biwi pe padi
Varun gidgidate hue
ruk jaao yeh tum sab kya kar rahi ho
please ruk jaao
main
abe dalle Teri maa ko choot
Aman un chaaro ke paas chala gaya
Priyanka Archana varsha Pooja sab usse chipak gayi thi
bilkul madarzaat nangi
Priyanka aman ke peechhe se chipki hui thi
uske bade bade boobs aman ki peeth mein dhanse hue the
varsha Pooja aur archana teeno aage se chipki hui thi aman ke sharir se
Aman
chaaro ek line mein khadi ho jaao
chaaro ek line mein khadi ho gayi
Aman pehle priyanaka ke paas gaya
aur use kiss karne laga
kiss karte samay aman Priyanka ke boobs jitni zor se ho sakta tha
utni zor se masalne laga
Priyanka ki aankhon mein aansu aagaye
Priyanka ne kiss Tod diya a
aur rone lagi
Priyanka rote hue
oh master please don't punish me
I beg of you
Aman
theek hai Jaa yahan se
main nahi chod raha tujhe
yeh sunte priyanaka aman ke pairo mein gid gayi aur rote hue boli
nahi master aapko Jo achcha Lage kijiye
main uff tak nahi karungi
Aman
ok my big boobs slut
yeh bolke Aman ne Priyanka ko khada kiya
aur phirse Priyanka ke boobs dabane laga zor zor se
Priyanka roti rahi
Aman uske safed boobs ko laal karne mein laga hua tha
sath mein use kiss bhi kar raha tha
dono ki jubaan ek dusre ke sath khel rahi thi
Aman ne Priyanka ke nipples pakde
aur unhein kheenchne laga
Priyanka ne kiss karna band kiya
aur cheekh padi
Priyanka
master dard ho raha hai please
Aman ne uske dard pe dhyan nahi Diya apna kaam karta raha
Varsha Pooja aur archana
teeno ek hath se apne boob masal rahi thi
aur ek hath se apni choot sehlane rahi thi
kuchh der baad Aman ne Priyanka ke boobs ko chusna shuru kiya
unpe daant kaatne laga
daanto mein fansake nipples ko kheenchne laga
Priyanka ko dard bhi ho raha tha
maza bhi aaraha tha
Priyanka rote hue
oh master bas aise hi chusiye inhein
yeh aapki hi Hain
kaat lijiye inhein khaa jaaiye inhein
kuchh der baad Aman ne Priyanka ko chhod diya
aur phir uski choot mein teen ungli ek sath daal diya
Priyanka cheekh padi
Aman uski choot mein ungli zor zor se andar bahar karne laga
Priyanka aahein bharne lagi
aman ungli pelta raha uski choot mein
kuchh der baad Priyanka ki choot ne paani chhod diya
Priyanka buri tarah se akad gayi
aur jhatke khaate hue jhadne lagi
Aman ne varsha ki taraf dekha
ab Teri baari hai raand
varsha
yes master
please master
I want you to punish me
I want you to fuck me so hard that i scream like a whore and cry like a bitch
Aman
ok
aur phir Aman ne Varsha ko kiss karne laga
aur uske boobs ko badi berehemi se jaanwaro ki tarah masalne laga
varsha rone lagi
aman ko koi matlab nahi tha
Varsha ke rone se
woh apna kaam karta raha
use kiss karta raha
Varsha roti rahi
aman ki jubaan chusti rahi
uske hontho ko chusti rahi
Aman Bhi Varsha ke boobs ko masalta raha
unhein dabata raha
nipples ko pakadke kheenchta raha
nipples ko masalta raha
tabhi Pooja ne Aman ke peechhe aagayi
aur usse chipak gayi
Pooja
oh master please mere sath bhi kijiye na
mujhse ab nahi saha jaata
Aman ne Pooja pe dhyan nahi Diya
aur varsha ke boobs ke sath khelta raha
phir woh unhein chusne laga
kisi wehshi jaanwar ki tarah woh unhein chus raha tha
Varsha zor zor se aahein bhar rahi thi
Varsha
aah master aaah
aaj tak mujhe aisa maza nahi aaya
Varsha ki aankhon mein aansu aagaye
kyunki woh buri tarah se uttejit ho gayi thi
kuchh der baad Aman uski choot mein ungli ghusake andar bahar karne laga
woh cheekhne lagi
aman itni zor se uski choot mein ungli ghusa raha tha
woh rote hue jhadne lagi
uska peshaab bhi nikal gaya
Aman ne Pooja ko pakda
aur use ghutno ke bal bitha diya
Aman
lund chus madarchod
randi aaj tera saara chhinal pana nikaalunga
Pooja ghutno ke bal baith gayi
aur Aman ki pant kholke uske lund ko bahar nikaal li
Pooja
oh master
this is so Big
Aman ne gusse mein Pooja ko dekha
Aman archana se
ruk tu thodi der
iska ilaaj karta hoon main
aur phir Aman ne Pooja ke sar ko pakad liya
Pooja ne kisi randi ki tarah apna munh khol diya
Aman ne lund Pooja ke gale tak ghusa diya
pooja ki aankhon mein aansu aagaye
aur Aman bina ruke Pooja ke munh ko chodne laga
Pooja ki aankhein bahar ko aagayi
woh tadapne lagi
aankhon se aansu behne lage
aur Aman jaanwaro ki tarah Pooja ke munh ko chodta raha
bina ruke badi berehemi se
kuchh der baad Pooja behosh hone lagi
Aman ne lund nikaala
Pooja rone lagi
khaansne lagi
Aman
munh khol chhinal
Pooja ne phirse munh khol diya
Pooja rote hue
master
Aman ne phirse Pooja ke munh mein lund pel diya
KUCHH DER tak waise hi lund ko uske gale tak rehne Diya
Aur phir bahar nikaala
Pooja ke munh ko badi berehemi se chodne laga
Pooja chhatpatati rahi
lekin aman ne koi rehem nahi kiya
kuchh der baad Pooja ko ulti hone lagi
Aman ne lund bahar nikaal Pooja ke munh se
main
Priyanka main jab tak Teri Bahu ke sath khelta hoon tab tak tu meri gaand ke chhed ko chaat
aur Priyanka lag gayi Aman ki gaand ke chhed ko chaatne mein
Aman Archana ko kiss karne laga
aur uske boobs masalne laga
lekin archana ke boobs woh zor zor se nahi daba Raha tha
aaram aaram se daba Raha
kuchh der baad Aman ne archana ke boobs pe dhaba bol diya
aur unhein chusne laga
archana aahein bharti rahi
Aman uske boobs chusta raha
uske nipples ko sehlata raha
kuchh der baad Aman ne archana ko chhod diya
main
Priyanka ab lund chus
Priyanka lag gayi lund chusne mein
chusne se hi pata chal raha tha
ki woh kitni badi raand hai
kuchh der baad Priyanka ko seedha lita diya Aman ne
aur uski choot pe lund set Kiya
Aman Pooja se
woh dildo pehen le
aur jaake apne baap ki gaand maar
aur bina ruke
yeh sunte hi Varun chhatpatane laga
idhar Aman ne ek hi baar mein Priyanka ki choot mein lund ghusa diya
Priyanka ki choot ke 12 baj gaye
aur udhar Pooja ne apne baap ki gaand dildo ghusa diya
Aman zor zor se Priyanka ko chodne laga
Priyanka
aah master please
thoda dheere kariye dard ho raha hai
aman
toh dard seh na
yeh bolke Aman dhakke maarta raha
aur Priyanka cheekhti rahi
kuchh der baad Aman ne Priyanka ko ghodi bana diya
aur phir se chodne laga
Priyanka phirse cheekhne lagi
aahein bharne lagi
aur phir uska paani nikal gaya
lekin Aman Priyanka ko chodta raha
bina ruke
yeh sab Varun dekh raha tha
udhar Varun ki thukai ho rahi thi
aur idhar uski wife ki
kuchh der baad Priyanka ka phirse paani nikal gaya
Aman ne uski choot se lund nikaala
aur phir Varsha ki taraf dekha
Varsha apne maalik ka lund chusne lagi
phir Aman ne Varsha ko lita diya
phir uski choot pe lund set Kiya
aur poori taaqat se dhakka maara
Varsha ki bhayankar cheekh nikli
aur woh rone lagi
Aman bina deri kiye
Varsha ko chodne laga
Varsha roti rahi
aur Aman use berehmi se chodta raha
kuchh der baad Varsha ka dard kam hua
aur woh maza lene lagi
Aman zor zor se Varsha ko chodta raha
Varsha ka paani nikal gaya
aur phir Aman ne Varsha ko ghodi banaya
aur phirse chodne laga
Varsha ke pair kaanp rahe the
kyunki aman bina ruke bas use chode Jaa Raha tha
uski choot ka bhosda ban gaya tha
kuchh der baad Varsha phirse jhadne lagi
Aman ne Varsha ki choot se lund nikaala
aur phir Pooja ko dekha.
ab yahan aaja
aur tu Varsha jaake apne baap ki gaand maar
uske munh se tape hata de
Varsha bechari gidte padte strap on pehen lo
aur phir jaake apne baap ki gaand maarne lagi
Varun rone laga
Pooja Aman ke paas aagayi
Aman ne Pooja ko lita diya
aur phir uski kamar pakadke
ek zordaar dhakka maara
Pooja cheekh padi
woh chhatpatane lagi
woh aman se chhutne ki koshish karne lagi
Aman ne phirse dhakka maara
Pooja ro padi
aur Aman ne Pooja pe ek jara bhi rehem nahi kiya
woh use badi bedardi aur berehmi se chodne laga
Pooja roti rahi
kuchh der baad Pooja ko bhi maza aane laga
lekin itne zordaar dhakko se use dard bhi ho raha tha
aur phir uska paani nikal gaya
phir Aman ne use ghodi banaya
Aman
Priyanka apni beti ke hath kaske pakad
yeh sunke Pooja ghabra gayi
Priyanka ne Pooja ke hath pakad liye
Aman ne lund ko gaand ke chhed se laga diya
Pooja rote hue
master please wahan nahi
wahan nahi
aapka bahut bada hai
wahan nahi jaayega Master
please wahan nahi jaa paayega aapka
Aman
abhi pata chal jaayega
Aman ne zordaar dhakka maara
Pooja ki cheekh nikal gayi
woh kati hui murgi ki tarah tadapne lagi
abhi toh topa hi andar gaya
Aman ne phirse dhakka maara
lekin usse jyada andar gaya hi nahi
Aman poori taaqat se phirse dhakka maara
is baar lund aur andar gaya
Pooja ro padi
aur aage ko jaane lagi
lekin aman ne uski kamar ko mazbooti se pakad rakhkha tha
Aman utne hi lund se Pooja ki gaand maarne laga
Pooja roti rahi
aur phir se aman ne dhakka maara
is baar lund Pooja ki gaand ko cheerta hua
poora andar ghus gaya
Pooja bed pe ludak gayi
aur tadapne lagi
Aman bina ruke Pooja ki gaand maarne laga
Pooja roti rahi Aman gaand maarta raha
kuchh der baad Pooja ko bhi bmaza aane laga
lekin dard toh use ho hi Raha tha
Aman bina ruke badi berehmi se Pooja ki gaand maarta raha
aur phir Pooja ki gaand mein jhadne laga
Pooja bhi jhad ne lagi
Aman ne Pooja ki gaand se lund nikaala
phir bathroom mein gaya
apne lund ko saaf kiya
wapas toh dekha archana
bed pe.leti hai
Aman ne Varsha ko rukne ko bola
Varsha ne apne baap ki gaand maarni band kar di
Aman
Archana lund chuske tayyar karo
Archana ne aman ka lund chusna shuru kiya
woh dheere dheere bade aaram se aman ka.lund chusti rahi
aman uske sar ko sehlata raha
kuchh der baad archana lund ko muthiyane lagi
aur balls ko chusne lagi
Aman Archana ko dekhta raha
main archana ko bhi apni randi banake chodna chahta tha
lekin kya karu dil nahi maan raha tha
loyal thi na woh
shayad isi liye mujhe uspe rehem aagaya tha
Aman ne archana ko seedha lita diya
aur phir uski choot pe lund rakhke
dhakka maara
Archana cheekh padi
aman archana ko kiss karne laga
aur phir se dhakka maara
Archana ro padi
aman ruka
aur phir se dhakka maara
dheere dheere poora lund andar jaa chuka tha
Aman dheere dheere Archana ko chodne laga
archana ko ab bhi dard ho raha tha
Aman aaram aaram se archana ko chodta raha
kuchh der jab Archana jhad gayi
toh Aman ne apni speed badhayi
aur use zor zor se chodne laga
Archana bhi Aman ka sath deti Rahi
kuchh der baad Archana ka paani nikal gaya
phir Aman ne Archana ko ghodi banaya
aur use phir se chodne laga
archana
oh master AAP kitna achcha chodte Hain
bas aise hi chodiye master
apni Archana ko
oh yeah master
bas aise hi
Aman bina kuchh bole dhakke maarta Raha
kuchh der baad Archana phir se jhadne lagi
Aman ne Archana ko seedha kiya
aur use phir se chodne laga
aur aakhir mein dono jhad gaye
Aman ne archana ki choot apne paani se bhar diya
kuchh der baad Aman varun ke paas gaya
varun ab bhi ro Raha tha
Aman
sun be dalle
agar tune suicide kiya
ya phir apni kisi bhi aurat ko maara
toh yeh Teri gaand marayi ka video
viral kar dunga
aur teri family marayi ka bhi video
samjha
madarchod
yeh bolke Aman wapas apne room mein aagaya
jahan Aarushi ne dekha
ki Aman nanga hai
aur uske lund pe safed paani laga hua hai
Aarushi darte hue room se jaane lagi
Aman
kahan Jaa Rahi hai
lund chuske saaf kar
aarushi ne wohi Kiya jo use aman ne bola
aur phir Aman Aarushi ke munh ko tab tak chodta raha jab tak aman ne Aarushi ke munh mein apna cum nahi bhar diya
Aarushi rone lagi
phir Aman ne Varun ki video bhi sushmita ko bhej di
wohin sushmita aur Ridhima dono ek sath baithi baatein kar Rahi thi
Ridhima
didi ab kya hoga aman Aisa kuchh karega
maine sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha
Sushmita
aman ek criminal ban chuka hai
woh rapist murderer sab ban chuka hai
humein police ko khabar karni hogi
tabhi Sushmita ke phone PE notification aaya
usmein Varun sharma ka video tha
jaise hi Ridhima ne dekha
Ridhima buri tarah se ghabra gayi
Ridhima
didi chief minister
home minister
commisioner
aur ab business man
aman ko ab kisi baat ki parwaah nahi hai
main toh kehti hoon usse sorry bol dijiye
kya ho jaayega
Sushmita
main nahi bolungi us kutte se sorry
meri life meri body meri Marzi
use itna sentimental hone ki kya jarurat thi
apne kaam se kaam nahi rakh sakta
Ridhima rote hue
kahin woh humare sath bhi
Sushmita bhi ghabra gayi
uski aankhon mein aansu aagaye
Sushmita
main yeh video cbi ko dene Jaa Rahi hoon
yeh bolke sushmita khadi hui aur apne room ka gate kholi
saamne aman khada tha
Aman
kahan Jaa Rahi hai randi
cbi ke paas Jaa
maine kab mana kiya hai
lekin phir dekhiyo main kya karunga
Teri saari chudai ka video viral kar dunga
randi se bhi badtar samjhenge tujhe log
komal cheekhte hue
bhaiya
yeh kya tareeka hai baat karne ka
aapko sharam nahi aati
I fucking hate you
aman bina kuchh bole apne room mein aagaya
aur phir ek hafta beet gaya
cm aur hm ne apne pad se istifa de diya tha
commissioner ne bhi yahi Kiya tha
teeno badla le sakte the
lekin phir kya hota
video viral ho jaati
izzat sabko pyari hoti hai
aur aaj woh din tha
jab Salman ke aadmiyo ko kidnap kar liya
unke ghar se raat ko uthwa liya
aur apne farmhouse pe le gaya unhein
back to present
main komal ki taraf dekh raha tha
use samajh nahi aaraha tha woh kya bole
main paagal ho chuka tha
mera dimaag kaam karna band kar chuka tha
Aman ne komal ko khol diya
komal mujhse se lipat gayi
Komal
bhaiya apni gun dijiye na
Aman
nahi gudiya main nahi chahta ki tumhare hath gande ho
Komal
bhaiya mujhe bas is harinder ka hisaab karna hai
please mujhe de dijiye
main komal ko gun de diya
komal harinder ke paas gayi
Sunita rone lagi
beti please mere liye inhein maaf kar do
please beti
harinder
tumhara Bhai paagal ho chuka hai
use ilaaj ki jarurat hai
komal ne rote hue mujhe dekha
aur main bhaaga komal ki taraf
usse pehle hi komal ne apni kanpatti pe gun lagaya
aur trigger daba di
main cheekh pada
and now the World
shall know pain...
वो तो लेखक महोदय पहले ही बोल चुके है कि कहानी पसंद आये तो पढ़ें वरना अनदेखा करें कोई सुझाव ना दें कोई सवाल ना करें कोई निगेटिव कॉमेंट ना दें वरना ये कोई कहानी है।
क्या प्रजेंट है क्या फ्लैशबैक है ? हीरो का बदला भी आतंकियों जैसा है कसूरवार को और बेकसूर को भी दूसरे के किये कर्म की सजा।
और फिर कहाँ तो हीरो को भोलूराम बताया गया और बदला लेने को शक्तियाँ भी आ गई कैसे ये कोई नहीं जानता।
ये hum कौन है नहीं पता, hum ड्रग्स कैसे बना ना तो हीरो डॉक्टर था और ना उसका दोस्त सलमान।
बदला लेना था तो अपनी दीदियों से और उनके साथ चुदाई करने वालों से लेता उनके परिवार से क्यूं और वैसे भी चोदने वालों का भी कोई कसूर नहीं है रण्डिया तो सुस्मिता और रिदिमा ही थी अपराधी तो वो थी हीरो की जिन्होंने अपने खुद के भाई की भावनाओं को अहमियत नहीं दी बार बार हर्ट किया।
बदला तो बस बहाना है हीरो खुद सेक्स एडिक्ट है क्यूंकि हीरो के पास ऐसी पॉवर आ रखी है जिससे वो गायब होकर कहीं भी पहुच सकता है और वो खुद सेक्स की आग में जलता रहता है जिसे शान्त करने को बदले रूप दे दिया है।
माफी चाहता हूँ लेखक महोदय कहानी की रूप रेखा अच्छी है इसलिये 12 अपडेट पढ़ने के बाद बिना कहे रह नही पाया।
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