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[Baba__Bhai]

Congratulations for new threade.

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Bas regularly update dena.
Jaise ham pehle reader the or hame jab update time par nahin milta tha to achchha nahin lagta tha..
To main jab se writer bana sabse pehle maine isi baat par dhiyan diya.
Aap bhi rakhiyega.
Or baat rahi magic add karne ki agar karna ho to kuchh alag tareeke se present karna.

KEEP IT UP

BABA KI TARAF SE AAPKO HARDIK SHUBHKAMNAEN.

 

[Riya20]

Congratulations for new threade.

Disclaimer to bohot achchha diya aapne.
Bas regularly update dena.
Jaise ham pehle reader the or hame jab update time par nahin milta tha to achchha nahin lagta tha..
To main jab se writer bana sabse pehle maine isi baat par dhiyan diya.
Aap bhi rakhiyega.
Or baat rahi magic add karne ki agar karna ho to kuchh alag tareeke se present karna.

KEEP IT UP

BABA KI TARAF SE AAPKO HARDIK SHUBHKAMNAEN.

Thnx baba for such nc comment.
Mea puri kosis karungi ki roj or tym to tym update dene ki.
Or magic ko alag tarha se present karne ke bareme b jarur sochungi.
Apna sath banaye rakhiyega or guide jarur kijiyega taki mea behtar likh saku.
Once again tnqu for ur post

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Waiting for intro. & First Update....

 

[Abhi]

Congrats for new thread
Abhi pura intro bhi nhi hua.
Apna hero ka intjaar hai

 

[crazyrex]

bohot hi shandar shuruwat hai

 

[Subha]

Story ka concept kya.. family drama ya revenge type .. jaise ki past me hui ghanta ka badla liya jayega.. etc ..

Waise chahunga ki story MAGICAL ho
Baki aapki ichha

And congrats for this new story

 

[Subha]

UPDATE 1
INTRODUCTION

Dadaji - Rajveer singhania.
Age 70
Singhania grp of companies ke malik
Jo ki aaj ki date mea world ki top 5 companies mea se ek hea.
Bhale he age 70 he par aaj b jindagi jine ka jazbaa rakhte hea.
Bade he darya dil kisam ke admi hea yea.
Aise toa inke pass koi kami ni hea par fir b apne aap ko duniya ka sabse badkismat insan samajte hea.
Q ye aage pata chalega.

Dadi - Leelawati singhania
Age 55
Bhale he inki age 55 ho par aaj b 35 ki lagti hea.
Kafi maintain kar rakha he inhone apne aap ko
Apna jadatar samay pooja path or apne pati ke dekhbhal mea he gujarti hea ye.

Rajveer singhania bhale he aaj duniya ke sabse bade businessman mea se ek hea par sayad he koi inse jada badnaseeb hoga.

Ye apne patni ke lakshadvip ke island par rehte hea.
Yaha inka bohot he khubsurat ghar hea jisse mehel kehna he tk hoga

Ye palace ka naam he
Matru Chaya
Hea jo ki rajveer ne khud rakha tha.
Usne ye palace apne pure pariwar ke liye banwaya tha par uski badnasibi he ki iss pure palace me sirf wo or uski patni he rehti hea.

Harroj ki tarha aaj b rajveer garden me beth chai ki chuski lete huye akhbar par rahe the.
Tabi piche se unki biwi ki awaj aati hea..

Leelawati - Aab hamesa is akhbar me he q gusse rehte ho.
Muskil se kuch der ke liye ghar aate ho or usme b aap bas ya toa is akhbar me ya apne kaam me wyast rehte ho.
Hamare liye toa aapke pass samay he ni hea.

Itna bol lelawatiji ne muh fula liya tha.

Bhale he unki umar 55 ho par is waqt wo itni cute dikh rahi thi ki kisi ka b dil machal jay.
Rajveer b unke baate sun akhbar side mea rakhte huye apne patni ke taraf dekh tha he jo ki is waqt kafi gusse mea lagrahi thi.

Rajveer ko Leelawati ki is harkat par hasi aajati hea or haste huye kehte he.

Rajveer - Arey hamari home minister aise na rutha karo hamse.
Or ye aapki adaye
Haye haye aaj b katleaam machane ke liye kafi hea.

Rajveer ki muh se yeh baat sun Leelawati ke b chere par muskurahat aajati hea or wo rajveer ke baju mea bethte huye kehti hea.

Leelawati - Aap apni in chikni chupdi bati ko chodo or ye bato kya isbar aapka jana jaruri hea kya.
Hum yaha bohot akele ho jate hea.
Kash hamare bache b hamare sath hote.

Itna bol Leelawatiji ke aankho me aasu ki do bunde aajati he joki rajveer ke purane jakham b hare kar deti hea or usse b apne bacho ki yaad satane lagti hea.

Rajveer khud ko sambhal te huye Leelawati ko chup kara tha he or usse kehta hea.

Rajveer - Tum q tnsn lea ti ho mea jald apna kaam nipta kar aajaunga or dekhna bohot jald hamara pura pariwar b ek sath hoga.

Leelawati - Aap ye baate kitne saalo se keh rahe ho par aaj tak kar ni paye ho.
Kash usdin hamne rajesh ko tikiya hota toa aaj mera pariwar ek sath hota.
Par mea b kya karti bas ek pote ki chaa me ye sab kar beti.
Or apna he ghar ujad diya apne he hatho se.

Purani baato ko yaad kar rajveer or Leelawati in dono ke aankho me aasu or gum dono the par kar b kya sakte he honi ko kon taal sakta hea..

Or yaha rajasthan ke gaav raajgadh mea kohraam macha hua tha.
Har taraf rone ke awaje aarahi thi
Or jaha tak najar jati waha tak khun he khun tha or insabi ke bich khada tha ek admi jiske charo bazu gunde jaise dikhne wale log khade the jinke hatho me hathyar the jaise talwar khanjar,etc.
Joki khun se sane huye the.

Us admi ke pair pakad ek aurat ro rahi thi or daya ki bikh mangte huye kehrahi thi.

Aurat - Pls maaf kar dijiye malik maaf kar dijiye
Inko chod do pls bhagwan ke liye mere bache ki jaan bakshdo ye kabi b aapke khilaaf awaj ni uthayega fir kabi.

Us aurat ko laat maar wo aadmi jiska naam gajender he wo bola.

Gajender - Ye hamara gaav he or yaha hamare khilaaf he awaj uthayega ye chuja..
Nai nai aisa ni ho sakta.

Itna bol gajender ne us aurat ke bache ko goli mardi jisse uske admiyo ne pakad rakha tha.
Gaav ke dusre log b ye sab dekh ek baar fir khof me aagaye the.
Waise toa unke liye ye aam baat thi par aaj ek sath gaav ke 12 ladko ko maar diya tha gajender ne isliye logo me ek bar fir dar ne ghar kar liya or us aurat ki madat karne koi b aage ni aaya.

Yaha wo bichari apne ek lote bete ko apne ankho ke samne marta dekh sadhme mea ja chuki thi or pass pade dande ko uthakar gajendra ke taraf marne ko aapki par tabi gajender ka khass admi kalu bichme aagaya or us aurat se danda chin usse he us aurat ko marne lagga.

Aurat bas roye ja rahi thi or dard se kehrakar madat ki bhik mang rahi thi par gaav walo me se koi b aage nai aaya uski madat karne.

Kuch he der me wo aurat gadkari se hogai thi
Tab kalu ne usse marna choda or danda dur fek diya.

Tabi gajender gaavalo se bola.
Gajender - Aaj ke baad kabi b kisi ne baaghi banne ke kosis ki toa uski toa mout hogi par uski saja uske pariwar walo ko b milegi.

Itna bol wo hasne lagga.
Or gaav wale bas khof khate he reh gaye.

Or fir gajender or uske aadmi waha se chalegaye.
Or wo aurat jo adhmari se mari padi thi wo boli.

Aurat - Dekhna bohot jald tera or tera pariwar walo ko khatam karne ke liye uparwala kisina kisi ko jarur bhejega tab tu b apne bacho ki jindagi ki aise he bikh mange ga.
Par koi nai madat karega teri.

Tabi gaav ke kuch logo ne usse utha kar vedji ke pass lea gaye qki hospital toa gajender ka he tha toa waha iska ilaj hona asambhav hea.


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Nice start
Flashback ka part hoga lagta hai..
Story interesting hai
Ek sawal.. Raaj hi hero hai kya??

 

[Subha]

Waiting for next

 

[King]

 

[crazyrex]

yaar yea story continue karo na