Naik
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Aap theek bo jao pehle bhai
Update ki baat nahi h pehle sahet zaroori h
Update ki baat nahi h pehle sahet zaroori h
bhai aaj start hi kiya hai likhna toh kuch update likh lu aur mere paasss pahle se v kuch hai unn sabko ek jagah karke kal se update dena chaalu karunga.Waiting for next update ka![]()
bhai bura nhi laga accha hi laga ki aap acche se story padh rahe ho samjh rahe ho. Bhai bass comedy ke liye thoda chipkka diya. Just jokingLekin hathi ka dant g**d me ghus jaye
To kya honga fir
Ek toh pahle hi Divya ko pata hai Karn ki life me bohot si aurat aur ladkiyo se sambndh hoge
Use ye jitna dabaye gi utana ye ubal mar raha hai
Kali takato ke asar se to usaka gussa aur vasna badh rahi hai
Karn ne pahale bhi use bola tha mere sath na aaye ...
Usake jivan me Divya se bhi kai jyada pyaar karne waliya hai
Aagr pyaar se nahi rahi toh lene ke dene na pad jaye bhaiya....
Agar Karn ne gand pe lat mar ke dusri ke pas chla gaya toh
Pahle hi usake ma ne samjhaya hai usaka Karn pe ekadhikar nahi hai ek galat ladki usko Karn se dur kar sakti hai
aagar pyar se samjhayegi use sahi se samajh ke thik Disha dikhayegi to fayde me rahegi par mujhe Divya kahi se bhi utni samzdar nahi lagti sundar hona hi sab kuchh nahi hota
Udhar pyaaybar vale Arjun bhai ko dekho yaar Ritu, Preeti ki kya understanding hai jitana pyaar karti hai utani hi chhut bhi di hai ek bar galati na hone par Arjun bhai pe Ritu ne hat uthaya tha to kitana bawal utha diya tha khud Ritu ne
Idhar aapna hero to bina vaje hi pite ja raha hai
Agar Hero ki izzat hi nahi dikhao ge to story fiki nahi pad jayengi kya???
Agar Karn ne gand pe lat di toh
kidhar jayegi aapni chut le ke
Pati izzat kare thdi to
haa bhai jaise inn bhai ne apni problem rakhi aap sabb v kuch puchna aur kyaa kyaa nhi bataya jaldi kal tak aap bata do mai ajj likhna start kiya hai 2 -3 updates ke baad se kuch kuch chizo par se parda uthega aur kuch nayi chize aayengi. Toh joh v confusion ya jannna hai sab batao main v choti choti chize ho sakta hai skip ho gyi ho mind se toh add kar du.Wo jo hero ne apni muhboli di ko dhundne ka bola tha uska kyaa hua.... Uska beta/beti wala kissa bhi hero bhool gya shayad....
bhai iss story ke bhaut parts hai basically samjho avi tak joh maine socha hai. But yeh joh pahla part hai yeh full off suspence hai aur aage wale jitne parts hai woh answers. Yaa aise samjho yeh part hai story ka base ISIiye itne suspence hai.Abhi to yaar tumne pehle kaand ka khulasa kiya nahi, ki hua kya tha, upar se nye kaand ka hint de diya ki fir se hero k sath kuch bura hone wala h.... At least pehle kisi ek do ko to wapas hero k favour me aa jaane dete ....
bhai 2 updates baad divyaa ka scene aane wala hai waha se yeh sab clear ho jayega.Bhai ye gurumaa ka scene samajh nahi aya akhir hua kya hai
BTW nice update bro....
Waiting........
Thik hai bro ... Bahut entejar kiya hai bhaibhai aaj start hi kiya hai likhna toh kuch update likh lu aur mere paasss pahle se v kuch hai unn sabko ek jagah karke kal se update dena chaalu karunga.
धन्यवाद भाईजी समझने के लियेbhai bura nhi laga accha hi laga ki aap acche se story padh rahe ho samjh rahe ho. Bhai bass comedy ke liye thoda chipkka diya. Just joking
avi bahut kuch aana baaki hai brrooo.. padho fir batana. Bhai main new writer hiu tum Enigma bhai se compare karoge toh ho gyi fir... meri waat hi lagegi but fir v yaar pyaar 100 baar is on another level of story usme bahut kuch hai. Mai jab kuch story puri kar lunga tab sayad iss level ka likh pau, yeh nhi kah raha likh hi lunga. Bhai pyaar 100 baar me kitne masst seducing aur sex scene hai but mere seek scene nhi likha jata .
Fir v main try karunga uss level tak ka likhne ka.