Incest Anokha badla (Love me till the end)

[Vipul]

Haa apne sahi kaha but meri majburi hai bhai. Mai avi thik nhi hu isilye nhi de paya. Pahle ki baat ki jaye toh avi election ka samay tha aur hai v. Mera khud ka pariwar isme shamil hai toh mujhe toh karna hi hoga isme participate. Rahi baat regular update dene ki toh maine 5 din ka samay manga hai, uske baad mai update dene ki koshish karunga.

Main saaf saaf savi reader's se kah de raha yeh maine kisi ke kahne par story start nhi ki hai. Main self satisfaction ke liye likh raha hu. Yahi wajah hai ki mere updates late aate hai. Yadi mai chahu toh avi post kar sakta hu maine aadhi story likh rakhi but mere hisab se average hai. Isiliye mai post nhi kar raha hu.
yeh story, nahi maine famous hone ke liye hai, nahi comments pane ke liye. Jab v main kahta hu comments karne ke liye toh sirf aur sirf story kaisi jaa rahi hai uske baare me jaanne ke lliye

Yaadi aap reader's ko meri baat acchi na lagi ho toh sorry. But yahi sach hai.

And aap yadi majburi samjh rahe hai toh thik hai nhi toh bhagwan hi samjhye.

Aapki marji. Mera kaam tha aapko sahi answer de ke satisfy karna. Yadi hue toh thik warna aap meri story na padho. Jab complete ho jaye toh ek saath padh lena yeh v ek solution hai. Baad baki aapki marji. Yadi mai aapke ummido pe khada nhi utar paya toh meri majburi hai. Sorry once again kisi ko buri lag rahi hai toh.

mai savi reader's ko bata de raha hu mere content tabhi upload hote hai jab mai satisfy hota hu content se nhi toh me delete maar ke fir se likhta hu. Maine v forum par story padhi hai bahut se writer flow me likhte hai without soche samjhe.
Joh ek dam soch samjh ke likhte hai unki story dekho ek dam jabardast hai. Jiase AP bhai ki waah life ho toh aisi part 1 part 2 padh lo kisi ne v bol diya ki story acchi na ho toh bolna. Kyuki woh soch samjh ke likhte aisi hi flow flow me na likh dete. Mai v waise hi flow flow me likh du jaise aur writer likhte hai na toh aab tak 500 page pura diye hote. Usse kuch nhi hoga bass views badhenge but story kharab ho jayegi. Aur mai aisa nhi chahta . Mai apni story ko leke thoda jayda sochta hu likhne time. Story acchi jaye content accha ho bass ispe dhyan rahta hai. Baad baki aapki marji.

Have a nice day all. And again sorry to all readers yadi above likhe content se kisi ka dil dukhe toh.

Ha bhai apane sahi kaha VJ4u bhai aur jay bhai aur AP bhai kafi soch samaj ke likhte waise ap bhi jitana chahiye utana time le lo bhai

 

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. Update-35


In rajamhal( at night):-

Rajmahal ke andar 1 ladki aur aurat1 ek tute phute dhanche ke saath sorry sorry ladke ke sath enter hoti hai. Wahi hall me baithi ek aurat2 tv dekh rahi thi jab uski nazar gate ki traf jaati hai toh turant bhagte hue uss ladke ke saath lipat jati hai kahti hai.

Aurat2 - mere bete ko kya hua batao.

Abb aage:-

Idhar karn ne T1 ko phone kiya.

T1- haa bolo.

Mai- bhai sab kal tak aa jao wapas delhi. Sab team member ko bula lo.

T1- thik hai.

Mai- aap ek new location delhi me taiyar karao kal sham tak acchi honi chahiye.

T1- hamare pass apni jagah hai na fir yeh new location kyu. Aur hamare saare paise v tumne new deal me laga diye. Yadi iske baad koi v bada deal aya toh ham kaise manage karenge.

Mai- aap paiso ki chinta maat karo. Mujhe paiso se jayda pyari meri team hai. Mere pass bahut paise hai aap in kagaj ke tukdo ki chinta chodo jo kaha hai karo. Kal shaam tak sab aa jane chahiye.

T1- okk

Phone cut aur sabb so rahe the kahi koi awaj nhi pura sanata shyad yeh tufaan aane se pahle ki shanti thi ya sahi me kuch nhi hone wala tha. Joh v ho woh dekha jayega.
New character Intro:- ( inka intro pahle v de chuka tha but aurat ka nhi diya tha. Yani chachi ke bhabhi ka.)

Nirmala:- chachi ki bhabhi. Ek dam chuddakad aurat. Dimag se ek dam chalak aur nagin hai. Rajmahal me apne devar aur bete ke sath sirf paise ke liye rahti hai.

Satish- Nirmala ka devar. Ek number ka tarkhi aur ayyash. Sirf paise daru juwa aur ladki dikhti hai. Isi karan se shadi ke kuch hi mahino me iski patni isse talak deke dusre se shaadi kar li iske samne. Bass isilye ise aurat jaat se nafrat hai. Paise ke liye kuch v kar sakta hai.

Raghu:- Nirmala ka beta. Pura apne chacha ke nakshe kadam par chal raha hai. Bass juwa nhi khelta.

Idhar haweli me:-

Aurat1- karn ki chachi thi aur

Aurat 2- Nirmala thi.
Ladka- Raghu tha aur
Ladki- aahana.

Chachi:- mere bete ko kya hua hai.

Nirmala:- pata nhi kaun kalmuha tha jisne mara aur hame dhamki v de di.

Chachi- aapne mujhe phone kyu nhi kiya. Mai batati ki mere bete ko maarne ka anjam kya hota hai.

Nirmala- upar se munimji aaye toh usne uss ladke ko kuch kaha v nhi.

Tabhi chacha v aa gye. Aur Raghu ko dekh ke pareshan ho gye kya hua hai. Bechare wo pahle se hi apni beti ko leke pareshan aur yaha nya bakhera.

Chachi- aap pahle munimji ko phone karke uss ladke ka pata kijiye aur use sabak sikhaye. Use v pata chalna chahiye ki mere bete ko hath lagane kya anjam hota hai.

Chacha- tum yahi chahti ho toh mai kar deta hu magar dekho Raghu behosh ho gaya aur tum yeh baate le ke baithi ho. Tum joh bol rahi woh baad me v ho sakta hai pahle Raghu ko dekho.

Chacha ko pahle hi pata tha Raghu aur Satish ulti sidhi harkate karte hai aur isi chakkar me maar khaya hoga. Chacha ne aahana se sari baat ko hi puchna behatar samjha.

ChaCha- gudiya( aahana ko sab pyar se gudiya bulate hai) kya tum v thi Raghu ke saath.

Aahana- ji mai v gyi thi.

ChaCha- waha kya hua tha sach sach batana koi jhut nhi.

Aahana ne saari baat batayi ki yeh sab ladki chedd rahe the aur hotel wale ko mara v. Isi bich ek ladke ne aa ke mara inhe. Aur joh v hua saab bata diya kaise mantri aur uske bete ko halat kharab kar di. Yeh sunn ke ek baar toh darr gye chacha ki kahi aahana yeh sabb dekh ke daar na gyi ho aur itna bura haal uss mantri ka kiya yadi uske hathe raghu chad jata toh uski laash hi aati ghar. Aahana ko normal dekh ke unhe thoda ajib laga aahana ne koi reaction nhi diya.

Chacha- Munim ji kyu aaye the waha tum logo ne bulaya tha.

Aahana- nhi hmane nhi bulaya tha jaha tak mai samjhi shayad usi ladke ne bulaya aur yeh v ki jab hame woh ladka rok ke rakha hua tha. Aise situation me hame dekh ke v baba ne uss ladke ko kuch nhi kaha.

(Mann me Chacha v soch me padd gye ko aisa kaun tha jiski liye munimji be in teeno ko ignore kiya aur uski baat suni. Kahi kuch gadbad toh nhi. Nhi aisa nhi ho sakta kyunki munimji aaj tak kuch bura nhi chaha. Sayad rajtilak aane wala hai isiliye koi sajish ho. Hmm ho sakta hai mujhe baat karni hogi munimji se. )

Gudiya aur kuch suna tumne waha.

Aahana- hmmm ek ajib baat thi papa baba na baar use chote baba naam le ke pukar rahe the. Yeh maine v suna hai lekin yaad nhi aa raha hai.
Yeh naam sunke chacha ke dimaag ka fuse udd gya. chacha mann me( joh mai samjh rahe yadi woh sahi hai toh uski jagaha mai v rahta toh usko kuch nhi kahte bass mujhe confirm karna hoga wahi hai ya dusra. Lekin yeh chakkar kuch samjh nhi aaya . Pura ghutham ghuti hai. Yadi yeh sab ho raha hai toh pita ji ko jarur pata hoga, aayenge toh unse iss baare me baat karunga. )

Aahana - kya hua papa aap na usko chodna matt dekho bhai ki kaisa halat kar di aur mujhe data v( ek dam masum bacche ki trah baat kar rhi thi).

Chacha-( mann me- beta uska hakk hai tumhe datna uske liye mai kya kar sakta hu). Mai usko v datunga.
Aahana- nhi aap na usko pitayi karna nhi toh aapko joh mai sweets deti hu chura ke woh band.

ChaCha- accha baba mai pakka uski pitayi karunga. But mere sweets nhi band karegi na meri gudiya aur saath me na kal mai tumhe shopping le ke jaunga.

Aahana- mere acche papa.( Kiss karte hue gaal pe).

ChaCha- aab jao mera baccha thak gaya hai so jao.

Aahana basically behave baccho jaisi karti hai. Bhale hi woh badi ho gyi hai but woh dil se hai bacchi use yeh aaj ki duniya dari ki koi samjh nhi. Ekloti santan hone ki wajah se aur saath me karn aur uska pura pariwar ke marne ki khabar sunke pure rajmahal par jaise bahut bada aaghat hua. Isi daar ki wajah se aahana ko sabchiz se durr rakha gaya. Yadi woh rajmahal se bahar v nikle toh uske saath bodyguard hamesa hota hai nhi toh ghar ka koi member. Jab karn ne aahana ko data toh uss samay pata nhi kyu aahana ko bura nhi laga. Isiliye waha joh v hua woh dekh ke aahana ka kuch na react karna samjh se pare hai.
Idhar chachi bechari alaga pareshan kabka doctor ko phone kiya tha aab tak nhi aaya tha.

Chacha- doctor ko kya hua abb tak nhi aya.

Chachi- aa rahe hai thoda time lagega. Aapne uss ladke ke baare me pata kiya jisne mara mere bete ko.

Chacha- accha hua isse mara.

Chachi- aap yeh kya kah rahe hai.

Chacha- Nirmala bhabhi se pucho kya kiya issne.

Nirmala- mera beta aisi koi harkat nhi kar sakta.

Chacha- mujhe saab pata hai aapka beta kya kar sakta. Yaadi aap chahti ho ki raghu sahi salamat rahe toh Satish se durr rakho aap isse. Woh khud ek number ka juwadi hai aur isse v bigar diya hai.

Nirmala- mera beta aisa kuch nhi karta aur uska chacha hai toh milne toh jayega na.

Chacha- aap mujhe toh maat hi padhao pichle mahine maine aur iss mahine mila ke 5 baar 5 baar police station ke chaakar kaat chuka iski wajah se. Joh police officer mere samne salute marte the wahi mujhe hidayat de rahe the. Ek baar toh isne rape tak karne ki koshish ki maine sambhal liya tha. Maine socha yeh sudhar jayega lekin nhi yeh nhi sudhrega. Bhabhi aaj ke baad yadi yeh kuch ulti sidhi harkat karega toh pure rajmahal se koi v isse bachane nhi jayega kyuki maine isse bahut mauka diya sudharne ka. Aaj last warning hai iske baad yadi isne koi galti ki toh mai khud police officer ko bol dunga pichli jitni F.I.R hai iske khilaff sab register karke open kar de. Fir sarta rahega jail me aur tum( chachi) iski trafdari mat karna samjhi.

Aaj aise baat karte dekh ke chachi v daar kyunki chacha ka gussa bahut khatranak hai.

Fir doctor ne pahuch ke bechare raghu ki fatichar wali halat ko thoda bahut thik kiya aur dawayi diya aur kaha kal isse clinic pe check up kara le. Nirmala bechari kuch na bol saki kyuki woh janti thi uska beta kya hai aur kitna pani me hai. Aur Satish toh hamari Nirmala madam ka kayi baar rass chakh chuka hai toh Nirmala ji uske rag rah se wakhif hai. Isiliye avi sant rahna hi sahi tha.

Chachi toh alag hi sadme me thi ki unka beta( ek trah se woh Raghu ko apna beta hi manti thi) yeh sab itni ghinoni harkat kar sakta hai. Kuch samjh nhi aa raha tha. Woh iss baare me chacha se baat karna hi behtar samjhti hai.


Aaj ke liye intna hi.......
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[Shanu]

nice update bhai

 

[odin chacha]

. Update-35


In rajamhal( at night):-

Rajmahal ke andar 1 ladki aur aurat1 ek tute phute dhanche ke saath sorry sorry ladke ke sath enter hoti hai. Wahi hall me baithi ek aurat2 tv dekh rahi thi jab uski nazar gate ki traf jaati hai toh turant bhagte hue uss ladke ke saath lipat jati hai kahti hai.

Aurat2 - mere bete ko kya hua batao.

Abb aage:-

Idhar karn ne T1 ko phone kiya.

T1- haa bolo.

Mai- bhai sab kal tak aa jao wapas delhi. Sab team member ko bula lo.

T1- thik hai.

Mai- aap ek new location delhi me taiyar karao kal sham tak acchi honi chahiye.

T1- hamare pass apni jagah hai na fir yeh new location kyu. Aur hamare saare paise v tumne new deal me laga diye. Yadi iske baad koi v bada deal aya toh ham kaise manage karenge.

Mai- aap paiso ki chinta maat karo. Mujhe paiso se jayda pyari meri team hai. Mere pass bahut paise hai aap in kagaj ke tukdo ki chinta chodo jo kaha hai karo. Kal shaam tak sab aa jane chahiye.

T1- okk

Phone cut aur sabb so rahe the kahi koi awaj nhi pura sanata shyad yeh tufaan aane se pahle ki shanti thi ya sahi me kuch nhi hone wala tha. Joh v ho woh dekha jayega.
New character Intro:- ( inka intro pahle v de chuka tha but aurat ka nhi diya tha. Yani chachi ke bhabhi ka.)

Nirmala:- chachi ki bhabhi. Ek dam chuddakad aurat. Dimag se ek dam chalak aur nagin hai. Rajmahal me apne devar aur bete ke sath sirf paise ke liye rahti hai.

Satish- Nirmala ka devar. Ek number ka tarkhi aur ayyash. Sirf paise daru juwa aur ladki dikhti hai. Isi karan se shadi ke kuch hi mahino me iski patni isse talak deke dusre se shaadi kar li iske samne. Bass isilye ise aurat jaat se nafrat hai. Paise ke liye kuch v kar sakta hai.

Raghu:- Nirmala ka beta. Pura apne chacha ke nakshe kadam par chal raha hai. Bass juwa nhi khelta.

Idhar haweli me:-

Aurat1- karn ki chachi thi aur

Aurat 2- Nirmala thi.
Ladka- Raghu tha aur
Ladki- aahana.

Chachi:- mere bete ko kya hua hai.

Nirmala:- pata nhi kaun kalmuha tha jisne mara aur hame dhamki v de di.

Chachi- aapne mujhe phone kyu nhi kiya. Mai batati ki mere bete ko maarne ka anjam kya hota hai.

Nirmala- upar se munimji aaye toh usne uss ladke ko kuch kaha v nhi.

Tabhi chacha v aa gye. Aur Raghu ko dekh ke pareshan ho gye kya hua hai. Bechare wo pahle se hi apni beti ko leke pareshan aur yaha nya bakhera.

Chachi- aap pahle munimji ko phone karke uss ladke ka pata kijiye aur use sabak sikhaye. Use v pata chalna chahiye ki mere bete ko hath lagane kya anjam hota hai.

Chacha- tum yahi chahti ho toh mai kar deta hu magar dekho Raghu behosh ho gaya aur tum yeh baate le ke baithi ho. Tum joh bol rahi woh baad me v ho sakta hai pahle Raghu ko dekho.

Chacha ko pahle hi pata tha Raghu aur Satish ulti sidhi harkate karte hai aur isi chakkar me maar khaya hoga. Chacha ne aahana se sari baat ko hi puchna behatar samjha.

ChaCha- gudiya( aahana ko sab pyar se gudiya bulate hai) kya tum v thi Raghu ke saath.

Aahana- ji mai v gyi thi.

ChaCha- waha kya hua tha sach sach batana koi jhut nhi.

Aahana ne saari baat batayi ki yeh sab ladki chedd rahe the aur hotel wale ko mara v. Isi bich ek ladke ne aa ke mara inhe. Aur joh v hua saab bata diya kaise mantri aur uske bete ko halat kharab kar di. Yeh sunn ke ek baar toh darr gye chacha ki kahi aahana yeh sabb dekh ke daar na gyi ho aur itna bura haal uss mantri ka kiya yadi uske hathe raghu chad jata toh uski laash hi aati ghar. Aahana ko normal dekh ke unhe thoda ajib laga aahana ne koi reaction nhi diya.

Chacha- Munim ji kyu aaye the waha tum logo ne bulaya tha.

Aahana- nhi hmane nhi bulaya tha jaha tak mai samjhi shayad usi ladke ne bulaya aur yeh v ki jab hame woh ladka rok ke rakha hua tha. Aise situation me hame dekh ke v baba ne uss ladke ko kuch nhi kaha.

(Mann me Chacha v soch me padd gye ko aisa kaun tha jiski liye munimji be in teeno ko ignore kiya aur uski baat suni. Kahi kuch gadbad toh nhi. Nhi aisa nhi ho sakta kyunki munimji aaj tak kuch bura nhi chaha. Sayad rajtilak aane wala hai isiliye koi sajish ho. Hmm ho sakta hai mujhe baat karni hogi munimji se. )

Gudiya aur kuch suna tumne waha.

Aahana- hmmm ek ajib baat thi papa baba na baar use chote baba naam le ke pukar rahe the. Yeh maine v suna hai lekin yaad nhi aa raha hai.
Yeh naam sunke chacha ke dimaag ka fuse udd gya. chacha mann me( joh mai samjh rahe yadi woh sahi hai toh uski jagaha mai v rahta toh usko kuch nhi kahte bass mujhe confirm karna hoga wahi hai ya dusra. Lekin yeh chakkar kuch samjh nhi aaya . Pura ghutham ghuti hai. Yadi yeh sab ho raha hai toh pita ji ko jarur pata hoga, aayenge toh unse iss baare me baat karunga. )

Aahana - kya hua papa aap na usko chodna matt dekho bhai ki kaisa halat kar di aur mujhe data v( ek dam masum bacche ki trah baat kar rhi thi).

Chacha-( mann me- beta uska hakk hai tumhe datna uske liye mai kya kar sakta hu). Mai usko v datunga.
Aahana- nhi aap na usko pitayi karna nhi toh aapko joh mai sweets deti hu chura ke woh band.

ChaCha- accha baba mai pakka uski pitayi karunga. But mere sweets nhi band karegi na meri gudiya aur saath me na kal mai tumhe shopping le ke jaunga.

Aahana- mere acche papa.( Kiss karte hue gaal pe).

ChaCha- aab jao mera baccha thak gaya hai so jao.

Aahana basically behave baccho jaisi karti hai. Bhale hi woh badi ho gyi hai but woh dil se hai bacchi use yeh aaj ki duniya dari ki koi samjh nhi. Ekloti santan hone ki wajah se aur saath me karn aur uska pura pariwar ke marne ki khabar sunke pure rajmahal par jaise bahut bada aaghat hua. Isi daar ki wajah se aahana ko sabchiz se durr rakha gaya. Yadi woh rajmahal se bahar v nikle toh uske saath bodyguard hamesa hota hai nhi toh ghar ka koi member. Jab karn ne aahana ko data toh uss samay pata nhi kyu aahana ko bura nhi laga. Isiliye waha joh v hua woh dekh ke aahana ka kuch na react karna samjh se pare hai.
Idhar chachi bechari alaga pareshan kabka doctor ko phone kiya tha aab tak nhi aaya tha.

Chacha- doctor ko kya hua abb tak nhi aya.

Chachi- aa rahe hai thoda time lagega. Aapne uss ladke ke baare me pata kiya jisne mara mere bete ko.

Chacha- accha hua isse mara.

Chachi- aap yeh kya kah rahe hai.

Chacha- Nirmala bhabhi se pucho kya kiya issne.

Nirmala- mera beta aisi koi harkat nhi kar sakta.

Chacha- mujhe saab pata hai aapka beta kya kar sakta. Yaadi aap chahti ho ki raghu sahi salamat rahe toh Satish se durr rakho aap isse. Woh khud ek number ka juwadi hai aur isse v bigar diya hai.

Nirmala- mera beta aisa kuch nhi karta aur uska chacha hai toh milne toh jayega na.

Chacha- aap mujhe toh maat hi padhao pichle mahine maine aur iss mahine mila ke 5 baar 5 baar police station ke chaakar kaat chuka iski wajah se. Joh police officer mere samne salute marte the wahi mujhe hidayat de rahe the. Ek baar toh isne rape tak karne ki koshish ki maine sambhal liya tha. Maine socha yeh sudhar jayega lekin nhi yeh nhi sudhrega. Bhabhi aaj ke baad yadi yeh kuch ulti sidhi harkat karega toh pure rajmahal se koi v isse bachane nhi jayega kyuki maine isse bahut mauka diya sudharne ka. Aaj last warning hai iske baad yadi isne koi galti ki toh mai khud police officer ko bol dunga pichli jitni F.I.R hai iske khilaff sab register karke open kar de. Fir sarta rahega jail me aur tum( chachi) iski trafdari mat karna samjhi.

Aaj aise baat karte dekh ke chachi v daar kyunki chacha ka gussa bahut khatranak hai.

Fir doctor ne pahuch ke bechare raghu ki fatichar wali halat ko thoda bahut thik kiya aur dawayi diya aur kaha kal isse clinic pe check up kara le. Nirmala bechari kuch na bol saki kyuki woh janti thi uska beta kya hai aur kitna pani me hai. Aur Satish toh hamari Nirmala madam ka kayi baar rass chakh chuka hai toh Nirmala ji uske rag rah se wakhif hai. Isiliye avi sant rahna hi sahi tha.

Chachi toh alag hi sadme me thi ki unka beta( ek trah se woh Raghu ko apna beta hi manti thi) yeh sab itni ghinoni harkat kar sakta hai. Kuch samjh nhi aa raha tha. Woh iss baare me chacha se baat karna hi behtar samjhti hai.


Aaj ke liye intna hi.......
Enjoy the Update and give ur reviews.

Superb update thaa lagta hai chachaji bhale manus lagte hein aur aahana bahut hi cute hai aur chachi ji bohut bholi hein jo iss raghu ko apne bete jaisa man kar pal rahi hein magar nirmala ki tarah uska beta raghu bahut kamina hai lagta hai ye hamare satish ke nirmala ke ras chakne ke fal hein joh yahan rajmahal mein kundli mar kar baithe hue hein.....

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

. Update-35


In rajamhal( at night):-

Rajmahal ke andar 1 ladki aur aurat1 ek tute phute dhanche ke saath sorry sorry ladke ke sath enter hoti hai. Wahi hall me baithi ek aurat2 tv dekh rahi thi jab uski nazar gate ki traf jaati hai toh turant bhagte hue uss ladke ke saath lipat jati hai kahti hai.

Aurat2 - mere bete ko kya hua batao.

Abb aage:-

Idhar karn ne T1 ko phone kiya.

T1- haa bolo.

Mai- bhai sab kal tak aa jao wapas delhi. Sab team member ko bula lo.

T1- thik hai.

Mai- aap ek new location delhi me taiyar karao kal sham tak acchi honi chahiye.

T1- hamare pass apni jagah hai na fir yeh new location kyu. Aur hamare saare paise v tumne new deal me laga diye. Yadi iske baad koi v bada deal aya toh ham kaise manage karenge.

Mai- aap paiso ki chinta maat karo. Mujhe paiso se jayda pyari meri team hai. Mere pass bahut paise hai aap in kagaj ke tukdo ki chinta chodo jo kaha hai karo. Kal shaam tak sab aa jane chahiye.

T1- okk

Phone cut aur sabb so rahe the kahi koi awaj nhi pura sanata shyad yeh tufaan aane se pahle ki shanti thi ya sahi me kuch nhi hone wala tha. Joh v ho woh dekha jayega.
New character Intro:- ( inka intro pahle v de chuka tha but aurat ka nhi diya tha. Yani chachi ke bhabhi ka.)

Nirmala:- chachi ki bhabhi. Ek dam chuddakad aurat. Dimag se ek dam chalak aur nagin hai. Rajmahal me apne devar aur bete ke sath sirf paise ke liye rahti hai.

Satish- Nirmala ka devar. Ek number ka tarkhi aur ayyash. Sirf paise daru juwa aur ladki dikhti hai. Isi karan se shadi ke kuch hi mahino me iski patni isse talak deke dusre se shaadi kar li iske samne. Bass isilye ise aurat jaat se nafrat hai. Paise ke liye kuch v kar sakta hai.

Raghu:- Nirmala ka beta. Pura apne chacha ke nakshe kadam par chal raha hai. Bass juwa nhi khelta.

Idhar haweli me:-

Aurat1- karn ki chachi thi aur

Aurat 2- Nirmala thi.
Ladka- Raghu tha aur
Ladki- aahana.

Chachi:- mere bete ko kya hua hai.

Nirmala:- pata nhi kaun kalmuha tha jisne mara aur hame dhamki v de di.

Chachi- aapne mujhe phone kyu nhi kiya. Mai batati ki mere bete ko maarne ka anjam kya hota hai.

Nirmala- upar se munimji aaye toh usne uss ladke ko kuch kaha v nhi.

Tabhi chacha v aa gye. Aur Raghu ko dekh ke pareshan ho gye kya hua hai. Bechare wo pahle se hi apni beti ko leke pareshan aur yaha nya bakhera.

Chachi- aap pahle munimji ko phone karke uss ladke ka pata kijiye aur use sabak sikhaye. Use v pata chalna chahiye ki mere bete ko hath lagane kya anjam hota hai.

Chacha- tum yahi chahti ho toh mai kar deta hu magar dekho Raghu behosh ho gaya aur tum yeh baate le ke baithi ho. Tum joh bol rahi woh baad me v ho sakta hai pahle Raghu ko dekho.

Chacha ko pahle hi pata tha Raghu aur Satish ulti sidhi harkate karte hai aur isi chakkar me maar khaya hoga. Chacha ne aahana se sari baat ko hi puchna behatar samjha.

ChaCha- gudiya( aahana ko sab pyar se gudiya bulate hai) kya tum v thi Raghu ke saath.

Aahana- ji mai v gyi thi.

ChaCha- waha kya hua tha sach sach batana koi jhut nhi.

Aahana ne saari baat batayi ki yeh sab ladki chedd rahe the aur hotel wale ko mara v. Isi bich ek ladke ne aa ke mara inhe. Aur joh v hua saab bata diya kaise mantri aur uske bete ko halat kharab kar di. Yeh sunn ke ek baar toh darr gye chacha ki kahi aahana yeh sabb dekh ke daar na gyi ho aur itna bura haal uss mantri ka kiya yadi uske hathe raghu chad jata toh uski laash hi aati ghar. Aahana ko normal dekh ke unhe thoda ajib laga aahana ne koi reaction nhi diya.

Chacha- Munim ji kyu aaye the waha tum logo ne bulaya tha.

Aahana- nhi hmane nhi bulaya tha jaha tak mai samjhi shayad usi ladke ne bulaya aur yeh v ki jab hame woh ladka rok ke rakha hua tha. Aise situation me hame dekh ke v baba ne uss ladke ko kuch nhi kaha.

(Mann me Chacha v soch me padd gye ko aisa kaun tha jiski liye munimji be in teeno ko ignore kiya aur uski baat suni. Kahi kuch gadbad toh nhi. Nhi aisa nhi ho sakta kyunki munimji aaj tak kuch bura nhi chaha. Sayad rajtilak aane wala hai isiliye koi sajish ho. Hmm ho sakta hai mujhe baat karni hogi munimji se. )

Gudiya aur kuch suna tumne waha.

Aahana- hmmm ek ajib baat thi papa baba na baar use chote baba naam le ke pukar rahe the. Yeh maine v suna hai lekin yaad nhi aa raha hai.
Yeh naam sunke chacha ke dimaag ka fuse udd gya. chacha mann me( joh mai samjh rahe yadi woh sahi hai toh uski jagaha mai v rahta toh usko kuch nhi kahte bass mujhe confirm karna hoga wahi hai ya dusra. Lekin yeh chakkar kuch samjh nhi aaya . Pura ghutham ghuti hai. Yadi yeh sab ho raha hai toh pita ji ko jarur pata hoga, aayenge toh unse iss baare me baat karunga. )

Aahana - kya hua papa aap na usko chodna matt dekho bhai ki kaisa halat kar di aur mujhe data v( ek dam masum bacche ki trah baat kar rhi thi).

Chacha-( mann me- beta uska hakk hai tumhe datna uske liye mai kya kar sakta hu). Mai usko v datunga.
Aahana- nhi aap na usko pitayi karna nhi toh aapko joh mai sweets deti hu chura ke woh band.

ChaCha- accha baba mai pakka uski pitayi karunga. But mere sweets nhi band karegi na meri gudiya aur saath me na kal mai tumhe shopping le ke jaunga.

Aahana- mere acche papa.( Kiss karte hue gaal pe).

ChaCha- aab jao mera baccha thak gaya hai so jao.

Aahana basically behave baccho jaisi karti hai. Bhale hi woh badi ho gyi hai but woh dil se hai bacchi use yeh aaj ki duniya dari ki koi samjh nhi. Ekloti santan hone ki wajah se aur saath me karn aur uska pura pariwar ke marne ki khabar sunke pure rajmahal par jaise bahut bada aaghat hua. Isi daar ki wajah se aahana ko sabchiz se durr rakha gaya. Yadi woh rajmahal se bahar v nikle toh uske saath bodyguard hamesa hota hai nhi toh ghar ka koi member. Jab karn ne aahana ko data toh uss samay pata nhi kyu aahana ko bura nhi laga. Isiliye waha joh v hua woh dekh ke aahana ka kuch na react karna samjh se pare hai.
Idhar chachi bechari alaga pareshan kabka doctor ko phone kiya tha aab tak nhi aaya tha.

Chacha- doctor ko kya hua abb tak nhi aya.

Chachi- aa rahe hai thoda time lagega. Aapne uss ladke ke baare me pata kiya jisne mara mere bete ko.

Chacha- accha hua isse mara.

Chachi- aap yeh kya kah rahe hai.

Chacha- Nirmala bhabhi se pucho kya kiya issne.

Nirmala- mera beta aisi koi harkat nhi kar sakta.

Chacha- mujhe saab pata hai aapka beta kya kar sakta. Yaadi aap chahti ho ki raghu sahi salamat rahe toh Satish se durr rakho aap isse. Woh khud ek number ka juwadi hai aur isse v bigar diya hai.

Nirmala- mera beta aisa kuch nhi karta aur uska chacha hai toh milne toh jayega na.

Chacha- aap mujhe toh maat hi padhao pichle mahine maine aur iss mahine mila ke 5 baar 5 baar police station ke chaakar kaat chuka iski wajah se. Joh police officer mere samne salute marte the wahi mujhe hidayat de rahe the. Ek baar toh isne rape tak karne ki koshish ki maine sambhal liya tha. Maine socha yeh sudhar jayega lekin nhi yeh nhi sudhrega. Bhabhi aaj ke baad yadi yeh kuch ulti sidhi harkat karega toh pure rajmahal se koi v isse bachane nhi jayega kyuki maine isse bahut mauka diya sudharne ka. Aaj last warning hai iske baad yadi isne koi galti ki toh mai khud police officer ko bol dunga pichli jitni F.I.R hai iske khilaff sab register karke open kar de. Fir sarta rahega jail me aur tum( chachi) iski trafdari mat karna samjhi.

Aaj aise baat karte dekh ke chachi v daar kyunki chacha ka gussa bahut khatranak hai.

Fir doctor ne pahuch ke bechare raghu ki fatichar wali halat ko thoda bahut thik kiya aur dawayi diya aur kaha kal isse clinic pe check up kara le. Nirmala bechari kuch na bol saki kyuki woh janti thi uska beta kya hai aur kitna pani me hai. Aur Satish toh hamari Nirmala madam ka kayi baar rass chakh chuka hai toh Nirmala ji uske rag rah se wakhif hai. Isiliye avi sant rahna hi sahi tha.

Chachi toh alag hi sadme me thi ki unka beta( ek trah se woh Raghu ko apna beta hi manti thi) yeh sab itni ghinoni harkat kar sakta hai. Kuch samjh nhi aa raha tha. Woh iss baare me chacha se baat karna hi behtar samjhti hai.


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Nice update bhai...
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[Raj]

Haa apne sahi kaha but meri majburi hai bhai. Mai avi thik nhi hu isilye nhi de paya. Pahle ki baat ki jaye toh avi election ka samay tha aur hai v. Mera khud ka pariwar isme shamil hai toh mujhe toh karna hi hoga isme participate. Rahi baat regular update dene ki toh maine 5 din ka samay manga hai, uske baad mai update dene ki koshish karunga.

Main saaf saaf savi reader's se kah de raha yeh maine kisi ke kahne par story start nhi ki hai. Main self satisfaction ke liye likh raha hu. Yahi wajah hai ki mere updates late aate hai. Yadi mai chahu toh avi post kar sakta hu maine aadhi story likh rakhi but mere hisab se average hai. Isiliye mai post nhi kar raha hu.
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And aap yadi majburi samjh rahe hai toh thik hai nhi toh bhagwan hi samjhye.

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