Dear writer,
The story is good but how come suddenly kalpana got breast milk. It's a bit illogical. I think you can do better.
And what about some new ideas, I think you can give the ideas a real meaning through your story telling, so just wanna pushing some dirty ideas to you, to influence your dark side because the story need some more explicit contents, so here are they:
Like tribal festival or breastfeeding campaign where breastfeeding exhibitionism will be portrayed more.
Or more explicit content like: woman forced to sell their milk or fucked while breastfeeding their child or child birth during sex or in public while having anal or Motherly affection in a more taboo way. Etc.
Reply if either you think I helpful or you think I am a lunatic. Others hit a like or reply if you like the ideas or agree with me.
Thank you,
titsucker
