Incest Ansh ek 🔥 Aag........

[Lucky@khan]

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Meri ek New story Bhairav ek Aag sayad aap logo ne read kiya ho.....

Bhairav ek Aag story mai kuch religion ka mamla saamne aa rahe thye jo Xforum ke rules ke khilaaf thye es liye maine khud us story mai changes kiya hai or yakin maaniye changes ke baad story or mazedar hogi or mujhe puri ummed hai aap logo ka pyar or saath mujhe milta rahega.........

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Hm readers nai pichi baar dekha ek trf Ansh or Rudaali ek dusre se bhid gye thye or Dusri trf subhash ko kabar lag gyi thi ki sp vishwash ka kisi nai hattya kar diya hai jise dekhne ke liye wo Ansh ke saath chale jaate hai or wahi par sandhya bhi thi jo kisi se baate kar rahi thi wo bhi Rudaali ke baare mai.


AAb Aage........
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Ansh : ( man mai ) ye madam kis Rudaali ki baat kar rahi thyi

Lawdasur : Pata nhi yaar par uski baato se mujhe lagta hai ye usi Rudaali ki baat kar rahi hai

Ansh : ( man mai ) par ye baat kisse kar rahi thi or gyi kaha

Luwdasur : mujhe lagta hai jisse bhi baat kar rahi thi usi ke pass gyi hai

Ansh : ( man mai ) Hmm hme inka picha karna chahiye

Lawdasur : picha.... Par kiyu.....?

Ansh : Dekha to jaaye ye usi Rudaali ke liye gyi hai yaa kisi or Rudaali ke liye agr waha mujhe Rudaali mil gyi to use maza charkha dunga pichli baar to bach ke bhaag gyi thyi par ab nhi bach sakegi

Lawdasur : pagal mat bano Ansh Tumhe kya lagta hai tum Rudaali se Takra sakte ho wo bhi bina Taaz ki power ke bager sayad tumne Rudaali ko halke mai le liya hai ansh

Ansh : ( man mai) Umm....?

Lawdasur : jis hisaab se wo tumse lad rahi thi mujhe nahi lagta hai wo tum se seriously lad rahi thi phir bhi wo tumpar bhari pad rahi thi or wo tumko hara bhi sakti thi par pata nhi aesa kya hua jo wo ek dum se ladna chhod kar waha se chali gyi

Ansh : pata nhi yaar wo kiyu bhaag gyi par tumhari ek baat shi lgti hai us time mujhe bhi lag raha tha ki mai usse ab or nahi lad paunga

Ansh : phir bhi hme chalna chahiye ye pata karne ke liye ki madam jis Rudaali ka naam le rahi thi ye wahi hai yaa nhi

Ansh : tumne ek baat notice nhi ki Rudaali to Hmse Taaz lene aayi hai to ye madam ko Uski kabar kese hai khi kuch to hai yaar hme pata lagana hoga

Lawdasur : Wo to tum thik kaha rahe ho Ansh par tum yaha se jaaoge kese

Ansh : (man mai) kese kya yaar apni bike se madam ka picha karte hai naa

Lawdasur : or tumhare dada ji

Ansh : Dada ji....? Mtlb Oh yaar ye to maine socha hi nhi dada ji se kya bol kar jau....?

Ansh abhi ye hi soch raha tha ki wo kese apne dada se koi saa bahana kar ke waha se nikal jaaye tabhi uske dada nai usko awaaj diya

Subhash : Ansh

Ansh : ji dada

Ansh apne dada ke pass aata hai or Subhash ji usse Kahate hai......

Subhash : beta tum ghr chale jaao mai Sayam ke saath uske ghr jaunga thoda uske ghr par ruk ke hi ghr aaunga beta agr jarurat padi to mai Ranjeet yaa Aanand ko bula lunga wo log mujhe ghr chhod denge tum ab jao

Ye baat sunke Ansh ander hi ander khus ho jata hai or apne dada ko H bol kar waha se apni bike lekar sandhya ki Gaadi ka picha karne lag jata hai single road hone ki wajh se Sandhiya ki Gaadi Dikh jaati hai or kuch hi der baad sandhya ki Gaadi ek hospital ke bahar rukti hai or fat se Sandhiya Gaadi se nikal kar hospital ke ander jaane ke liye teji ke saath badhti hai jise dekh kar ansh Lawdasur se bolta hai

Ansh : ( man mai) ye yaha hospital mai kiyu aayi hai.....?

Lawdasur : pata nhi ab ander jaa kar pata chalega

Ansh : ( man mai) hmm chalo tab

Sandhiya icu ke room mai aajati hai or uske piche piche Ansh icu ke gate ke bahar rukjata hai or gate thoda khula rakta hai

Icu ke ander ek police waala betha hua tha or jese hi wo Sandhiya ko ander aate huye dekhta hai to fat se apni jagh se khada hote huye Sandhiya ko salute maarta hai or ye wahi insaan hai jisnai Sandhiya ko phone kar ke Bata raha tha

Sandhiya apne saamne ek ventilator par lete ek aadmi ke pass jaate huye kahti hai........



Sandhiya : Bolo sanjay Kon hai wo log jisnai pahadi ke pass bite 2 raato mai Sabhi police waalo ko maara hai kitne log thye, kya unmai se kisi ko tum pahchante ho yaa unka Huliya bata sakte ho to mai sketch expert ko bula lu

Sanjay : Mam wo..... Wo.. Cc.... Chaku.....Tal.....talwaar Gayyyyyyb maaaaar..... Maaarrrr

Sandhiya : h chaku chaku kya sanjay bolo aage bolo

Sanjay thoda hichkicha kar dol raha tha or uski awaaj bhi uske gale se thodi si dhimi nikal rahi thi jiske karan Sandhiya ko kuch kuch samjh mai aarha tha to kuch kuch samjh mai nhi aarha tha

Sanjay : C.... C.... Chaku, Talwaar, Gayab

Sandhiya : Aage kya sanjay kya chaku, talwaar, gayab bolo sanjay

Sandhiya ke ek saath itne sawaalo ki jhadi laddta hua dekh kar waha khada wo police waala bol padta hai....

Policewala : madam ji thoda araam se puchiye doctor nai bola hai eski halat abhi najuk hai to hme esse kam baat chit karna hai maine esse pucha to bas ye itna hi bola Rudaali, talwaar, chaku, gayab

Ansh : ( man mai) Rudaali.......?

Icu ka darwaja thoda khula rahne ki wajh se ander ki baat bahar khade Ansh sun paa raha tha

Sandhiya ko bhi lagne laga ki sayad usnai kuch jayada hi jaldbaaji mai itne sawal puch diye wo apne aapko thoda shant karte huye sanjay se bade hi aram se puchti hai

Sandhiya : tum aram se batao or saaf bolne ki koshish karo taaki mujhe tumhari baat samjh mai aaye

Sanjay : m.... Mam in sab ke piche shirf e...... ek.... ek ladki hai Or uske pass chaku, talwaar or G... G.... gayab hone ki shaktiya hai

Sanjay ki saanse ukhadi ukhadi si lag rahi thyi use bolne mai taklif ho rahi thi jiske karan Sandhiya ko phir se sanjay ki aadhi baat samjh mai aarhi thi or aadhi nhi

Sandhiya : mai kuch samjhi nhi sanjay kiya tum mujhe suru se bata sakte ho

Sanjay ki saanse ab kuch jayada hi ukhadne lagi thyi or ab uski saanse ful bhi rahi thi use bolne mai taklif bhi ho raha tha wo jab bolta to uske gale mai dard hone lagta hai magr fir bhi wo apne dard ki pida ko bardash karte huye Sandhiya ko bataye jaa raha tha or thodi hi der mai wo Sandhiya ko suru se saari baate bata deta hai Kese Raaju apne dosto ke saath pahad waale jgh par gya tha to use waha par ek ladki milti hai jo uska Haath kaat deti hai or jab uski team raju ke do saathi or apni team ke saath wo pahad waali jagh gye to waha kya kya hua or kese usne dar ke maare Rudaali ki madat ki Ansh ka pata lagane mai or usne hi S.P vishwash se pata lagane ke liya bhi Rudaali ko bataya or kese Rudaali nai Inspector balveer ke saath saath uske pure team ko bhi khatam kiya or last mai kese usnai sanjay ko bhi chalti huyi trak ke aage phek diya suru se last tak aap biti Sandhiya ko sab kuch bata deta hai

Sandhiya sanjay ki baate snukar ek dum shaant khadi thyi or use dekh kar aesa lag raha tha jese uska dimaag kaam karna band ho gya ho wo bs ek taktaki nazar kar ke sanjay ko dekhe jaa rahi thyi or idhar icu ke bahar gate par sanjay ki baate sunkar Ansh ke sharir mai ek current saa mahsusu hota hai

Sandhiya : Sanjay lagta hai tumhe abhi araam ki jarurat hai tum kya bol rahe ho tumko kuch samjh mai aa raha bhi hai yaa nhi bhala koi Gayab kese ho sakta hai or koi kisi ka Roop kese badal sakta hai, koi baat nhi tum abhi araam karo jab tumko lagne lagega ki tum ab thik ho to apna bayaan dedena ok

Sanjay : nhi mam mai s... Sach bol. Raha hu wo sab ko m... Maar degi k.... Kisi ko n.... Nhi chhodegi sab ko m.... M.... Maar........

Itna bolte huye sanjay ki dono aankho ki putliya uper ki trf ho jaati hai or wo mar jaata hai jise dekh kar Sandhiya ghabraate huye sanjay ka dono side khande ko pakad kar hilaate huye kahati hai.......

Sandhiya : sanjay...... Sanjay..... O god Doctor ko bulaao

Inspector : ji mam

Itna bol kar wo inspector icu ke bahar jaane lag jaata hai apni tarf inspector ko aate dekh kar ansh waha se nikal kar hospital ke bahar aajata hai or apni bike start kar ke nikal jaata hai Kuch der baad Ansh apni bike ek park ke pass rukta hai or bike se utar kar wo park mai chala jata hai tabhi Lawdasur kahta hai

Lawdasur : kya hua tum yaha kiyu ruk gye......????

Ansh : ( man mai) Tumne hospital mai us aadmi ki baat suni wo kya kah raha tha Rudaali nai bahot police waalo ko mara hai, or shirf Mujhse Taaz lene ke liye, or Mujhe dhundte huye wo Sp vishwash uncle ke paas bhi gyi or waha par unke saath saath sabhi ko maar diya

Ansh chillate huye kahta hai........

Ansh : Yaaaahhhhhh......... Ye kya ho raha hai Ek Ladki ek Taaz ke liye itne saare logo ko kese maar sakti hai wo bhi shirf ek Taaz ke liye

Lawdasur : Wo Taaz koi aam yaa sadharn Taaz nhi hai Ansh es Taaz ke liye naa jaane kitne saare log maare gye or naa jaane or kitne maare jayenge

Ansh : ( man mai) matlb mai kuch samjha nhi....?

Lawdasur : batata hu mai tumko.....

Lawdasur Ansh ko batata hai jab wo apne Raajy Lawdasur raajy ka raaja tha tab uske raajy mai bahot Vikas ho raha tha uska raajy modern technique karne mai aage tha jiski wajh se waha ke aap pas raajyo ko uske raajy se jaln hone lagti thyi or esi jaln ke chalte wo hamesa Lawdasur raajy par hamla kar ke uske raajy ko kabja karne ki koshish karte rahte thye magr Lawdasur ke suj-buj or hamla karne ka tarika se wo hamesa maat khaa jaate thye

wo khate hai naa Agr leader budhimaan ho to wo hajaro ki bhid kuch hi Minto mai jama kar sakta hai or kuch hi mintu mai hajaro ki bhid hata-bata sakta hai

aesa hi kuch tha Lawdasur wo hamesa apne raajy ko ek acha raajy banana chahta tha usne kabhi bhi kisi dusre raajy par hamla nhi kiya wo shirf apne raajy mai hi khus tha, magr uski ye khusi jayada dino tak nhi chali ek din waha ke aap pass ke sabhi raajiyo nai milkar uske raajy par ek saath hamla kardiya saamne waale ki sainaye uske sainao ke mukable karib 40 Gunna jayada thi or unmai se kuch raajyo ke raajao ke pass apni-apni powers thi jis wajh se use wah jag haarna padta hai or uska raajy kabza ho jaata hai badi muskil se wo apne aap ko bachte-bachate huye jungle ki trf bhaag jaata hai use maalum tha ki uske piche es jungle mai koi nahi aayega kiyu ke ye jungle ek sharapit jungle thi

Lawdasur apne aap ko to bacha kar jungle mai aajata hai or jab wo jungle ke bicho bich aata hai to use ahshas hota hai ki usnai bahot badi galti kar di hai yaha aakar Lawdasur abhi wapas jungle se bahar nikalne ke liye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi use koi halchal sunai dene lagti hai wo apne charo tarf dekhne ki khoshish karta hai magr waha jayada kohra hone ki wajh se use kuch saaf-saaf nhi dikhai de rahi thi halchal badhne lag jaati hai Aesa lag raha tha koi chiz hawa mai ud raha ho jise sunkar Lawdasur ghabrajata hai or apni talwaar ko apni mutthi mai kas leta hai

Lawdasur ke ander dar sama chuka tha use itna to abhas ho chuka tha ki yaha kuch to hai jo uski hi trf bahd raha hai Lawdasur talwaar ko or bhi jayada kas kar pakde huye apne charo tarh dekhe jaa raha tha ki tbhi koi hawa mai udta hua uske saamne aata hai or uske sine par apne dono laato se maarta hai jiske wajh se Lawdasur piche ke bal jaa girta hai

Lawdasur apne aap ko sambhalte huye khada hota hai tabhi use ek baar or jor daar dhakka lagta hai or wo phir niche gir jaata hai

Lawdasur zamin par gira pada hua tha wo lete lete hi apne saamne dekhne ki koshish karta hai magr kohra hone ki wajh se use saaf kuch dikhayi nhi deta phir bhi use thoda bahot kuch kuch dikhayi de raha tha uski trf koi aarha tha or wo jese jese uski trf aata jaa raha tha wese wese hi wo dikhayi bhi dene lagta hai karib 10 kadam ki duri par wo aakar khada ho gya or kahne laga

??? : Tumne yaha aakar Galti ki yaha bahot se log Taaz lene ke liye aaye magr koi wapas zinda nahi jaa paya, jo bhi Taaz lene ke liye aaya maine usse uski jaan leli aur ab tumhari bhi jaan mai lunga



illidan Taaz ka pahredaar.........


use dekhte hi Lawdasur ke rongate khade ho jaate hai or honge bhi kiyu nahi uske saamne ko shaks khada tha wo koi sadharan nahi tha uska kad kaafi bada tha karib-karib Lawdasur ke kad se dhed guna bada uski laal laal aankhe thi uski bhujaaye kaafi majbut or kasi huyi thi or uske pith ke piche do bade-bade par (wing) thye uske sir par do bade-bade Singh ( horn) lage thye or use dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki wo kitna shaktishaali hai wo apne right hand mai apni talwaar ko ghumaate huye kahata hai

Illiadn : Yaha jo bhi aaya wo apni jaan gawa betha yaha jo bhi Taaz lene ke liye aaya maine uske sharir ke tukde-tukde kar diye ab tumhari baari hai Hwewweww

Ye bol kar wo Lawdasur par waar karta hai or Lawdasur apni talwaar se uska waar rok deta hai or kahata hai



Lawdasur : nahi mai yaha wo sharapit Taaz lene ke maksad se nahi aaya hu mai to bas.........

Lawdasur nai itna hi kaha ta ki use apne pet par ek laat padne ka ahsha hota hai or wo dur jaa girta hai

Illiadn : Tum chahe koi bhi bahana karlo tum maroge hi mai Taaz ka pahredaar hu or mere rahte huye koi bhi Taaz nahi le sakta hai

Lawdasur apni jagh se khada hota hai or wo badi hi gusse mai kahta hai.....

Lawdasur : To tumhare marne ke baad to

Illiadn :... .???

Dono mai Ghamasan suru ho jaati hai



Kaafi der tak dono ek dusre se tadte rahte hai mage Lawdasur par Illiadn hawi ho raha tha or kaafi had tak Lawdasur ko chhote lagi thyi or esi bich Lawdasur nai bhi Illiadn ke sine par ek waar kar diya tha jiske chalte illidan hawa mai udte huye kahta hai

Illiadn : Hmm acha ladlete ho acha talwaarbaaj ho magr itna acha talwaarbaaj hone ka kiya fayda wese bhi tum marne waale hi ho

kaafi der tak ladai karne se Lawdasur thak chuka tha ab uska saath uska sharir nahi de paa raha tha uski talwaar ab use bhari bhari saa mahsus hone lagti hai jiske wajh se uske muthiyo se uski talwaar chhut kar niche gir jaati hai thakan ke wajh se wo apna kawach bhi nikal fekta hai ab to nihatta ho chuka tha wo itna thak gya tha ki use apne pairo par bhi khada hone mai dikkat ho rahi thi or uska ek left pair bhi khayal ho chuka tha or ye sab hote huye dekh kar Illiadn hasta hai or bolta hai.........

Illiadn : Hahaha tum to thak gye lekin phir bhi tum auro se kaafi der tak tike rahe mere saamne kaafi himmat hai tumhare ander lekin itna himmat ka kiya fayda jab tumko mere haatho hi marna hai Hahahaha

Itna bol kar wo tezi ke saath hawa mai udta huwa Lawdasur ke pass aata hai or apni talwaar Lawdasur ka gala kaatne ke liye badhata hai abhi uski talwaar Lawdasur ke gale se thodi hi duri par thi ki achanak pata nahi kaha se Lawdasur ke sharir mai furti aajati hai or wo side hattaye huye apni kamr mai lage Chaaku ko nikalta hai or Illiadn ke pith par kud jaata hai pith par aate hi Lawdasur chaaku ko uske pith mai ghusa deta hai jisse illidan hakka bakka rah jaata hai use samjh mai hi nahi aata hai ki ye sab itni jaldi kese ho gya

Lawdasur thaka jarur tha par uski himmat tuti nahi thyi or wo ye bhi jaan gya tha ki jab tak illidan udta rahega tab tak wo usse kabi bhi jit nahi paayega es liye usnai ek saryant racha usnai apni talwaar or kawach es liye pek diya taaki wo jab illidan ke pith par jaaye to uski raftaar tez ho raftaar tez hone ke liye hi usnai apne sharir se wajan kam kiya tha

Apni pith par Chaaku lagte hi illidan uper ki trf uddane lag jaata hai wo assmaan mai uper jaa kar Hawe mai gota lagane chahta hai taaki gota lagane se uski pith par se Lawdasur gir jaaye magr uska ye plan fel ho jaata hai jab Lawdasur uski ek left par ( wing) ko apne left haath se pakad kar Illiadn ki pith se chaaku nikal kar uske right par (wing) ko chaaku se phad deta hai par (wing) patte hi illidan apna udne ka control kho bhethta hai or wo Lawdasur ke saath sidha zamin par jaa girta hai dono ek dusre se karib 10,15 kadam ki duri par pade huye thye thodi der baad illidan apni jagh se uthta hai uske pith ke piche hi Lawdasur pada hua tha illidan apna right par ( wing) kholne ki koshish karta mai magr wo puri tarah se khol nhi pata jise dekh kar illidan ko samjh mai aajata hai ki wo ab ud nhi sakta uka right par (wing) ab kharab ho chuka hai illidan gusse mai apni dono muthiya bichte huye mudta hai or Lawdasur ke pass aate huye apne dono haatho se uska gala pakad kar use hawa mai utha leta hai

illidan : Maine tujhe kamjor samjh kar galti kar diya magr ab nhi ab tu marega mere haatho

Lawdasur ka gala ghutta chala jaata hai illidan uske gale par barabar dabaw banaye jaa raha tha jis karan Lawdasur ki aankhe uper ko uthne lag jaati hai phir bhi Lawdasur apni himmat ek jut karte huye apne dono haath uthata hai or ek jhatke ke saath wo illidan ke sir ke dono Singh (horn) ko pakad leta hai or apni puri taakat ke saath dono Singh ( horn) ko dono side se ghichne lag jaata hai

Apne Singh ( horn) par dabaw pate hi illidan Lawdasur ka gala or bhi jor se dabane lag jaata hai jise dekh kar Lawdasur apne dono pair illidan ke sine par rakh kar apni puri jaan lagate huye uske dono Singh ( horn) ko do side se chir deta hai Singh ( horn) do side se chira jaane ke karan illidan ka sir do tukkdo mai fat jaata hai or wo wahi gir kar mar jaata hai or use marta huwa dekha kar Lawdasur chillate huye bolta hai......

Lawdasur : Mai........ mai Lawdasur hu Lawdasurrrrrrrr yaaaaahhhhhhhhhh

Lawdasur bahot lahun-luhan ho chuka tha or uska ek pair bhi ache se kaam nahi kar raha tha jiski wajh se use khada hone mai bhi dikkat ho rahi thi Tabhi waha ka mousam thoda saaf hone lagta hai jiski wajh se Lawdasur dekhta hai ki uske saamne hi thodi dur par ek pahad tha jo ki ek minaar ki trh bana hua tha or us minaar ko dekh kar Lawdasur ko samjhte der nahi lagi ki ye wahi minaar hai jo usne sunna tha ki jungle mai shirf ek hi aesa minaar hai jiske uper wo sharaapit Taaz rakha hua hai or us Taaz ki raksha karne ke liye illadan naam ka koi ek Janwar yaa rachach waha rahta hai ye hi sochte huye pata nhi Lawdasur ko kiya sujhta hai ki wo pahle illidan ki talwaar uthata hai or langdate-langdate minaar ki trf jaane lagta hai kuch hi samay mai wo langdate-landate minaar ki upri chhoti par pahuch jaata hai ab uske saamne ek barf ( ice) ki pardashi diwaar thi jo karid 8 feet uchi thi



or us barf ki diwaar ke bicho-bich mai wah Taaz raha huwa tha Taaz dekhne mai badi hi adbhut lag raha tha or us Taaz ke bich mai ek bule color ka Diamond laga hua tha Lawdasur us Taaz ko ek pal ke liye dekhta hai or apni talwaar ko apni muthiya mai pakadte huye diwaar par marne lagta hai kaafi der se wo dewaar par talwaar se war karta rahta hai magr wo diwaar tut nahi rahi thi bas kuch Chhote-Chhote tukde us barf ki diwaar se tut ke niche gir rahe thye ab Lawdasur thak chuka tha magr diwaar tutne ka naam hi nhi le raha tha Achank se Lawdasur ke dimaag mai ek baat ghumne lagti hai jab wo illidan se lad raha tha tab illidan talwaar ko kayi parkaar se badal le raha tha kabhi use do bhaago mai kar deta tha to kabhi use bhala bana deta tha to kabhi kuch or ab illidan ki talwaar uske haatho mai thi matlb ab wo bhi chahe to uski talwaar ko kisi bhi hattiyar mai badal sakta hai ye hi soch kar Lawdasur 4,5 kadam piche hatte huye talwaar ki taraf dekhte hai or apne man hi man mai sochta hai ki talwaar ek hathode mai badal jaaye abhi Lawdasur nai itna hi socha tha ki talwaar ek bhari-bharkam hathode mai badal chuka tha

Talwaar hathode mai badalta dekh kar Lawdasur use majbuti ke saath pakadta hai or badi hi tezi ke saath barf ki diwaar par maara hai jisse diwaar ek hi baar mai gir jaati hai or Taaz uske saamne zamin par padi hui hoti hai Lawdasur Taaz ke pass jaata hai or apni talwaar ko zamin mai gadte huye Taaz uthate huye bolta hai........

Lawdasur : Bura ka ant burai se hi shi

Ye bol kar Lawdasur wo Taaz apne sir par pahen leta hai Taaz pahnte hi uske sharir mai ek bijli jese dudne lagti hai or uska sarir kayi jagh se fatne lagta hai or wo zamin par gir padta hai thodi der tak Lawdasur jamin par gira pada hua tha uske baad wo apne ghutno de bal uth kar betha hai or apne dono haatho ki trf dekhta hai to pata hai uske thaaho ke saare jakham gayab thye or haatho ke saath saath uske saare sharir ke bhi jakham gayab ho chuke thye yaha tak ki uska wo pair bhi ab thik-thak nazar arha tha ho jo abhi thodi samay pahle illidan se ladne mai kharab ho gya tha

Lawdasur ko apni body mai ek alg hi trh ki power mahsus hone lagti hai usse pata chal gya tha ki ab wo koi sadharan Lawdasur nahi raha ab uske pass do chize hai phli ek illidan ki wo talwaar jisse wo koi bhi hattiyaar bana sakta hai or dusri ye Taaz Lawdasur ko ab itna hi anumaan lagna baaki tha or jab use ye anumaan lag chuka tha to ab usnai apne raajy ke aas pass raajiyo mai kahar dhana suru kar diya koi bhi raajy uske saamne tik nhi paate thye kisi bhi raajy ki raajao ki powers uske Taaz ki power ke saamne nahi chal paati thi or sabhi raajyo ko haarna padta tha sabhi raajyo ko hara kar Lawdasur nai shirf ek hi raajy banaya jiska naam "kingdom of Lawdasur" rakha gya or esi bich Lawdasur nai kayi taantariko se Teleportsion, fire power ka gyaan pratap kar chuka tha kahi naa khi use Ye lagta tha thi agr kabhi wo Taaz yaa talwaar ke bina rahega to uske pass khud ki koi power hone chahiye or Lawdasur ka ye sochna ek din kaam kar gya jab Ajgar or najumi nai uski talwaar or Taaz usse chin liya tha tab shirf uske pass shirf uski hi teleportsion or fire power thyi jiski madat se wo waha se bhaag nikalta tha

Ansh : Hmm yaar tumne to bahot kasht uthaye hai magr mujhe ek baat ye samjh mai nahi aayi wo taaz sharapit kese hai kya sharap hai us taaz ko tumne to ye nahi bataya mujhe.....?

Lawdasur : Taaz koi sharapit nahi hai

Ansh : Umm..... Par tumne abhi mujhe bataya ki tumhare lok mai sharapit jungle mai wo sharapit taaz thi jo tumne use leliya hai......?

Lawdasur : wo sharapit taaz nahi hai balki taaz dharan karne waala sharapit ho jaata hai

Ansh : kyaaaaaa Abe mujhe sharapit taaz pehna diya ab mai sharapit ho gya yaar ab mai kya karu kis ke pass jaau

Lawdasur : Ansh....... Ansh

Ansh : Abe kya Ansh ansh meri gaand maar di sharapit taaz pahna kar

Lawdasur : Ansh meri baat to suno puri

Ansh : ab kiya sunna hai ab mai sharapit ho gya yaar ab meri gaand mara jaayegi ab mai kaha jaau Kiske pass dada ji ko bataa du kya, nahi nahi h ankit ko bata deta hu wo sayad meri kuch madat kar de lekin bc wo mazak samjhega koi yakin nahi karega mera ab mai kya karu batao ab mai kya karu

Ansh : tum chup kiyu ho kuch batate kiyu nhi ho es sharap se kese mai chutkara paau

Lawdasur : tum pahale apna muh to band karoge tab naa mai kuch bolu

Ansh : umm........ oh ok ab bolo

Lawdasur : taaz sharapit nahi hai balki wo ek Kaali duniya ka aane ka Marg hai use hm Kaali duniya ka darwaja bhi kah sakte hai

Ansh : darwaja.....?

Lawdasur : H darwaja jab maine taaz dharan kiya tha tab mujhe taaz ki shaktiya Bahot achi lagne lagi thyi ek adbhut shaktiy Jiski powers ki koi had nahi Aesa maano jese tum khud ek shaktisaali ho khud shaktimaan ho

Ansh : kya kaha shaktimaan Wo jo Bachchan mai tv par Durdarshan channel par aata tha

Lawdasur : yaaaah mai yaha real apni kahani bata raha hu or tum tv ki baat kar rahe ho Tum yaar meri baat to suno phle

Ansh : oh

Lawdasur : taaz ki power ka koi ant nahi hai or naa hi uski koi Hadd hai taaz kitna shaktisaali tha or usmai kon kon se powers thye ye pata lagane ke liye maine kuch jaadugaro or taantariko se pata lagaya to pata chala wo Kaali duniya ka ek aane ka Marg hai jisse hamare lok ke bahar ki kaali shaktiya aa sakti hai or hamare lok ko samapt kar sakti hai

Lawdasur : ye baat jab mujhe pata chali tb se hi mai wo kaali shaktiyo ke aane ka Marg ka darwaja bhundhne ki koshish karne laga lekin hamre sabhi jadugar or tantrik ye kabhi pata nhi laga paaye ki wo darwaja kha hai or kese khulega maine bahot saalo se es baat ko jaanne ki khoshish karta rha par mujhe kuch nhi pata chala jo jab pata chala tab Taaz mere haatho se jaa chuka tha

Ansh : kya pata chala kaha hai wo darwaja......?

Lawdasur : wo darwaja kahi or nhi balki wo khud Taaz hi darwaja hai

Ansh : Kya kaha Taaz hi wo kaali shaktiyo ke aane ka darwaja hai

Lawdasur : H Ansh wo khud ek darwaja hai or ye baat mujhe tab pata chala tab ajgar nai Taaz ko tudne ki khoshish ki

Ansh : Lekin wo ajgar un kaali shaktiyo ko kiyu bulana chahta hai

Lawdasur : Pata nhi lekin

Ansh : dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai ok ab chalo ghr chalte hain

Jese hi Ansh park se nikalne waala hota hai tabhi Lawdasur use ruk deta hai

Lawdasur : Ansh ruko

Ansh : kya hua ab.......?

Lawdasur : hummmm..... Haaaaaa.... Ye khushbu

Ansh : khushbu.......? Kesi khushbu

Lawdasur : Udhar se aarhi hai tumhari left se

Ansh apne left side ki trf dekhta hai to usse thodi hi duri par ek ped dikhai deta hai or us ped ke piche se kisi trh ka dhuwa aate huye dikhayi deta hai jise dekh kar Ansh jab waha ped ke pass jata hai to dekhta hai waha teen aadmi bethye huye thye jinke haatho mai chilam tha jo usse hi wo log dhuwa nikal kar bahar hawa mai chhod rahe thye jise dekh kar Lawdasur khus hote huye bolta hai

Lawdasur : are waah Tutima

Ansh : ( man mai) Tutima......?

Lawdasur : h Tutima mera pasindida

Ansh : (man mai) pasindida..... Abe yaar ye ganja hai

Lawdasur : H wo tumhare lok mai bula jaata hoga par mere log mai ese Tutima bolte hai jaya inse maango

Ansh : ( man mai) kya kaha maangu par kiyu......?

Lawdasur : pine ke liye

Ansh : (man mai) kya pine ke liye tumhara dimaag to thik hai naa

Lawdasur : Tum ek baar pi kar dekho to tumhe maza aayega Ansh

Ansh : ( man mai) nhi nhi mai nhi pine wala samjhe tum

Abhi Ansh Lawdasur se baate hi kar raha tha ki tabhi waha ganja pine waalo mai se ek aadmi bolta hai

Aadmi : kya hua bacche pina hai kya aa pi le bhai tu bhi

Ansh : are nhi thank you mai nhi pita

Lawdasur : pile Ansh zindgi ka maza hai

Ansh : (man mai) nhi to nhi

Tabhi dusra aadmi chilam ko Ansh ki trf badhate huye bolta hai

Aadmi : soch kya raha hai bacche aaja or ek do kash maar le tujhe teri saari thakan or saare tension dur ho jaayenge

Ansh : (man mai) tension dur ho jaayenge bhala ese pine se kese tension dur ho jaayenge

Lawdasur : phle pi to le saare tension dur ho jaayega

Ansh : ( man mai) tum apna muh band kro jara tum to khud ek tension ho

Ye bol kar Ansh chilam pakadta hai or ek kast leta jese hi wo chilam ki phli kast leta hai use joro se khasi aajati hai jisse wo khasne lagta hai or use khasta hua dekh kar wo teeno aadmi haste huye bolte hai

Admi : koi baat nhi phli baar hota hai tum bubaara kast maaro lekin dhayan rahe dhuwa gale tak naa jaaye

Ansh badi hi shawdhaani ke saath kast maarta hai usnai 4,5 kast maara hi tha ki wo apni duniya mai kho jaata hai use har chiz achi lagne lagti hai apne haatho mai pakdi huyi chilam chilam mai jalti huyi gaanje ki khushbu yaha tak ki uska sharir bhi halka-halka saa mahsus lagne lagta hai ye hi sab ki anubhuti karte huye Ansh bad-badaate huye kahata hai

Ansh : are waah kya kamal ki chiz hai yaar ye to maza hi aagya dost agr aap ki izzat ho to 1,2 baar or pilu please

Aadmi : ab tumne hame dost dola to maarle

Ansh 1,2 kast or maarne ke baad chilam unko de deta hai or apne jeb se unko 100 rupay nikal kar deta hai wo teeno aadmi dikhne mai koi majdur hi lag rahe thye

Aadmi : are ye kya dost bhi bolta hai or paise bhi deta hai kya yaar

Ansh : are nahi ye aap log apne paise se laaye honge to ye uske liye aap phir se apne liye kharid lena please rakh lo

US aadmi nai Ansh se 100 ka note lete huye use ek gaanje ki pudiya or ek chilam thama deta hai or bolta hai

Aadmi : chal teri baat maan li ab tu ye rakh le mana mat karna

Ansh : ok Thanx

Thoda der Ansh wahi betha hai or jese hi use kuch halka saa gaanja ka asar kam hote huye mahsus hota hai to wo apne ghr ki trf nikal jata hai

Dusri trf..........

Sandhiya ko suchna milti hai ki jo Buddha sp office aaya tha use kisi park mai dehosi mai paaya gya hai or ab use hospital mai rakha gya hai jisse milne ke liye Sandhiya waha chali jaati hai

Sandhiya : Aap jara batane ka kast karenge aap aaj subh sp office kiyu gye thye

Buddha : Kya kaha aap nai mai bhala sp office kiyu jaaunga mai to subha park mai gya tha daily hi jaata hu par pata nhi aaj waha kiyu behosh ho gya acha khasa mai park mai tahal raha tha jab wo ladki mere pass aayi

Sandhiya : ladki kon ladki........

Buddha : pata nhi kon ladki thi maine kabhi use park mai nhi dekha tha wo mere pass aayi

Buddha aadmi nai Sandhiya ko waha ki haalat bata diya jo kuch uske saath bita tha

Sandhiya apne pass waale hawldaar se khati hai......

Sandhiya : thik hai inka bayan lelo or inke pahchan waalo ko suchit kardo

Hawldaar : ji madam

Sandhiya : ( man mai) phir se ek ladki aakhir ye ladki hai kon or ye chahti kya hai kya hai iska maksad



Ansh ka Ghar..........


Saam ko sabhi dinar kar rahe thye ek saath beth kar or subhash ji bhi aagye thye or unhone bataya ki Sp vishwash ka kal subh body postmortem ho kar aayegi or kal hi Saara kirya karm ho jayega

Dihre - dhire sab apna apna dinar nipta kar apne apne room mai chale jaate hai shayama apne room ka darwaja jese hi band karti hai wese hi Ansh ke darwaje ke niche se Dhuwa bahar nikalne lagta hai.

Ab aage.......
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Sandhiya Ye jaan payegi Wo ladki Rudaali kon hai or uska maksad kiya hai, ab Ansh kya karne waala hai ye jaanne ke liye bane rahe hamare saath or likes, comments, reviews karna naa bhule

 

[Lucky@khan]

intezaar rahega Lucky@khan bhai.....

tomorrow aigawa

Update 19 post sorry guys kal raat aankh lag gyi thi

 

[king1969]

Bahut badiya update

 

[Savi Malhotra]

Superb class update bro,


Keep Posting ( Khan g )

 

[Bhupinder Singh]

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Hm readers nai pichi baar dekha ek trf Ansh or Rudaali ek dusre se bhid gye thye or Dusri trf subhash ko kabar lag gyi thi ki sp vishwash ka kisi nai hattya kar diya hai jise dekhne ke liye wo Ansh ke saath chale jaate hai or wahi par sandhya bhi thi jo kisi se baate kar rahi thi wo bhi Rudaali ke baare mai.


AAb Aage........
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Ansh : ( man mai ) ye madam kis Rudaali ki baat kar rahi thyi

Lawdasur : Pata nhi yaar par uski baato se mujhe lagta hai ye usi Rudaali ki baat kar rahi hai

Ansh : ( man mai ) par ye baat kisse kar rahi thi or gyi kaha

Luwdasur : mujhe lagta hai jisse bhi baat kar rahi thi usi ke pass gyi hai

Ansh : ( man mai ) Hmm hme inka picha karna chahiye

Lawdasur : picha.... Par kiyu.....?

Ansh : Dekha to jaaye ye usi Rudaali ke liye gyi hai yaa kisi or Rudaali ke liye agr waha mujhe Rudaali mil gyi to use maza charkha dunga pichli baar to bach ke bhaag gyi thyi par ab nhi bach sakegi

Lawdasur : pagal mat bano Ansh Tumhe kya lagta hai tum Rudaali se Takra sakte ho wo bhi bina Taaz ki power ke bager sayad tumne Rudaali ko halke mai le liya hai ansh

Ansh : ( man mai) Umm....?

Lawdasur : jis hisaab se wo tumse lad rahi thi mujhe nahi lagta hai wo tum se seriously lad rahi thi phir bhi wo tumpar bhari pad rahi thi or wo tumko hara bhi sakti thi par pata nhi aesa kya hua jo wo ek dum se ladna chhod kar waha se chali gyi

Ansh : pata nhi yaar wo kiyu bhaag gyi par tumhari ek baat shi lgti hai us time mujhe bhi lag raha tha ki mai usse ab or nahi lad paunga

Ansh : phir bhi hme chalna chahiye ye pata karne ke liye ki madam jis Rudaali ka naam le rahi thi ye wahi hai yaa nhi

Ansh : tumne ek baat notice nhi ki Rudaali to Hmse Taaz lene aayi hai to ye madam ko Uski kabar kese hai khi kuch to hai yaar hme pata lagana hoga

Lawdasur : Wo to tum thik kaha rahe ho Ansh par tum yaha se jaaoge kese

Ansh : (man mai) kese kya yaar apni bike se madam ka picha karte hai naa

Lawdasur : or tumhare dada ji

Ansh : Dada ji....? Mtlb Oh yaar ye to maine socha hi nhi dada ji se kya bol kar jau....?

Ansh abhi ye hi soch raha tha ki wo kese apne dada se koi saa bahana kar ke waha se nikal jaaye tabhi uske dada nai usko awaaj diya

Subhash : Ansh

Ansh : ji dada

Ansh apne dada ke pass aata hai or Subhash ji usse Kahate hai......

Subhash : beta tum ghr chale jaao mai Sayam ke saath uske ghr jaunga thoda uske ghr par ruk ke hi ghr aaunga beta agr jarurat padi to mai Ranjeet yaa Aanand ko bula lunga wo log mujhe ghr chhod denge tum ab jao

Ye baat sunke Ansh ander hi ander khus ho jata hai or apne dada ko H bol kar waha se apni bike lekar sandhya ki Gaadi ka picha karne lag jata hai single road hone ki wajh se Sandhiya ki Gaadi Dikh jaati hai or kuch hi der baad sandhya ki Gaadi ek hospital ke bahar rukti hai or fat se Sandhiya Gaadi se nikal kar hospital ke ander jaane ke liye teji ke saath badhti hai jise dekh kar ansh Lawdasur se bolta hai

Ansh : ( man mai) ye yaha hospital mai kiyu aayi hai.....?

Lawdasur : pata nhi ab ander jaa kar pata chalega

Ansh : ( man mai) hmm chalo tab

Sandhiya icu ke room mai aajati hai or uske piche piche Ansh icu ke gate ke bahar rukjata hai or gate thoda khula rakta hai

Icu ke ander ek police waala betha hua tha or jese hi wo Sandhiya ko ander aate huye dekhta hai to fat se apni jagh se khada hote huye Sandhiya ko salute maarta hai or ye wahi insaan hai jisnai Sandhiya ko phone kar ke Bata raha tha

Sandhiya apne saamne ek ventilator par lete ek aadmi ke pass jaate huye kahti hai........



Sandhiya : Bolo sanjay Kon hai wo log jisnai pahadi ke pass bite 2 raato mai Sabhi police waalo ko maara hai kitne log thye, kya unmai se kisi ko tum pahchante ho yaa unka Huliya bata sakte ho to mai sketch expert ko bula lu

Sanjay : Mam wo..... Wo.. Cc.... Chaku.....Tal.....talwaar Gayyyyyyb maaaaar..... Maaarrrr

Sandhiya : h chaku chaku kya sanjay bolo aage bolo

Sanjay thoda hichkicha kar dol raha tha or uski awaaj bhi uske gale se thodi si dhimi nikal rahi thi jiske karan Sandhiya ko kuch kuch samjh mai aarha tha to kuch kuch samjh mai nhi aarha tha

Sanjay : C.... C.... Chaku, Talwaar, Gayab

Sandhiya : Aage kya sanjay kya chaku, talwaar, gayab bolo sanjay

Sandhiya ke ek saath itne sawaalo ki jhadi laddta hua dekh kar waha khada wo police waala bol padta hai....

Policewala : madam ji thoda araam se puchiye doctor nai bola hai eski halat abhi najuk hai to hme esse kam baat chit karna hai maine esse pucha to bas ye itna hi bola Rudaali, talwaar, chaku, gayab

Ansh : ( man mai) Rudaali.......?

Icu ka darwaja thoda khula rahne ki wajh se ander ki baat bahar khade Ansh sun paa raha tha

Sandhiya ko bhi lagne laga ki sayad usnai kuch jayada hi jaldbaaji mai itne sawal puch diye wo apne aapko thoda shant karte huye sanjay se bade hi aram se puchti hai

Sandhiya : tum aram se batao or saaf bolne ki koshish karo taaki mujhe tumhari baat samjh mai aaye

Sanjay : m.... Mam in sab ke piche shirf e...... ek.... ek ladki hai Or uske pass chaku, talwaar or G... G.... gayab hone ki shaktiya hai

Sanjay ki saanse ukhadi ukhadi si lag rahi thyi use bolne mai taklif ho rahi thi jiske karan Sandhiya ko phir se sanjay ki aadhi baat samjh mai aarhi thi or aadhi nhi

Sandhiya : mai kuch samjhi nhi sanjay kiya tum mujhe suru se bata sakte ho

Sanjay ki saanse ab kuch jayada hi ukhadne lagi thyi or ab uski saanse ful bhi rahi thi use bolne mai taklif bhi ho raha tha wo jab bolta to uske gale mai dard hone lagta hai magr fir bhi wo apne dard ki pida ko bardash karte huye Sandhiya ko bataye jaa raha tha or thodi hi der mai wo Sandhiya ko suru se saari baate bata deta hai Kese Raaju apne dosto ke saath pahad waale jgh par gya tha to use waha par ek ladki milti hai jo uska Haath kaat deti hai or jab uski team raju ke do saathi or apni team ke saath wo pahad waali jagh gye to waha kya kya hua or kese usne dar ke maare Rudaali ki madat ki Ansh ka pata lagane mai or usne hi S.P vishwash se pata lagane ke liya bhi Rudaali ko bataya or kese Rudaali nai Inspector balveer ke saath saath uske pure team ko bhi khatam kiya or last mai kese usnai sanjay ko bhi chalti huyi trak ke aage phek diya suru se last tak aap biti Sandhiya ko sab kuch bata deta hai

Sandhiya sanjay ki baate snukar ek dum shaant khadi thyi or use dekh kar aesa lag raha tha jese uska dimaag kaam karna band ho gya ho wo bs ek taktaki nazar kar ke sanjay ko dekhe jaa rahi thyi or idhar icu ke bahar gate par sanjay ki baate sunkar Ansh ke sharir mai ek current saa mahsusu hota hai

Sandhiya : Sanjay lagta hai tumhe abhi araam ki jarurat hai tum kya bol rahe ho tumko kuch samjh mai aa raha bhi hai yaa nhi bhala koi Gayab kese ho sakta hai or koi kisi ka Roop kese badal sakta hai, koi baat nhi tum abhi araam karo jab tumko lagne lagega ki tum ab thik ho to apna bayaan dedena ok

Sanjay : nhi mam mai s... Sach bol. Raha hu wo sab ko m... Maar degi k.... Kisi ko n.... Nhi chhodegi sab ko m.... M.... Maar........

Itna bolte huye sanjay ki dono aankho ki putliya uper ki trf ho jaati hai or wo mar jaata hai jise dekh kar Sandhiya ghabraate huye sanjay ka dono side khande ko pakad kar hilaate huye kahati hai.......

Sandhiya : sanjay...... Sanjay..... O god Doctor ko bulaao

Inspector : ji mam

Itna bol kar wo inspector icu ke bahar jaane lag jaata hai apni tarf inspector ko aate dekh kar ansh waha se nikal kar hospital ke bahar aajata hai or apni bike start kar ke nikal jaata hai Kuch der baad Ansh apni bike ek park ke pass rukta hai or bike se utar kar wo park mai chala jata hai tabhi Lawdasur kahta hai

Lawdasur : kya hua tum yaha kiyu ruk gye......????

Ansh : ( man mai) Tumne hospital mai us aadmi ki baat suni wo kya kah raha tha Rudaali nai bahot police waalo ko mara hai, or shirf Mujhse Taaz lene ke liye, or Mujhe dhundte huye wo Sp vishwash uncle ke paas bhi gyi or waha par unke saath saath sabhi ko maar diya

Ansh chillate huye kahta hai........

Ansh : Yaaaahhhhhh......... Ye kya ho raha hai Ek Ladki ek Taaz ke liye itne saare logo ko kese maar sakti hai wo bhi shirf ek Taaz ke liye

Lawdasur : Wo Taaz koi aam yaa sadharn Taaz nhi hai Ansh es Taaz ke liye naa jaane kitne saare log maare gye or naa jaane or kitne maare jayenge

Ansh : ( man mai) matlb mai kuch samjha nhi....?

Lawdasur : batata hu mai tumko.....

Lawdasur Ansh ko batata hai jab wo apne Raajy Lawdasur raajy ka raaja tha tab uske raajy mai bahot Vikas ho raha tha uska raajy modern technique karne mai aage tha jiski wajh se waha ke aap pas raajyo ko uske raajy se jaln hone lagti thyi or esi jaln ke chalte wo hamesa Lawdasur raajy par hamla kar ke uske raajy ko kabja karne ki koshish karte rahte thye magr Lawdasur ke suj-buj or hamla karne ka tarika se wo hamesa maat khaa jaate thye

wo khate hai naa Agr leader budhimaan ho to wo hajaro ki bhid kuch hi Minto mai jama kar sakta hai or kuch hi mintu mai hajaro ki bhid hata-bata sakta hai

aesa hi kuch tha Lawdasur wo hamesa apne raajy ko ek acha raajy banana chahta tha usne kabhi bhi kisi dusre raajy par hamla nhi kiya wo shirf apne raajy mai hi khus tha, magr uski ye khusi jayada dino tak nhi chali ek din waha ke aap pass ke sabhi raajiyo nai milkar uske raajy par ek saath hamla kardiya saamne waale ki sainaye uske sainao ke mukable karib 40 Gunna jayada thi or unmai se kuch raajyo ke raajao ke pass apni-apni powers thi jis wajh se use wah jag haarna padta hai or uska raajy kabza ho jaata hai badi muskil se wo apne aap ko bachte-bachate huye jungle ki trf bhaag jaata hai use maalum tha ki uske piche es jungle mai koi nahi aayega kiyu ke ye jungle ek sharapit jungle thi

Lawdasur apne aap ko to bacha kar jungle mai aajata hai or jab wo jungle ke bicho bich aata hai to use ahshas hota hai ki usnai bahot badi galti kar di hai yaha aakar Lawdasur abhi wapas jungle se bahar nikalne ke liye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi use koi halchal sunai dene lagti hai wo apne charo tarf dekhne ki khoshish karta hai magr waha jayada kohra hone ki wajh se use kuch saaf-saaf nhi dikhai de rahi thi halchal badhne lag jaati hai Aesa lag raha tha koi chiz hawa mai ud raha ho jise sunkar Lawdasur ghabrajata hai or apni talwaar ko apni mutthi mai kas leta hai

Lawdasur ke ander dar sama chuka tha use itna to abhas ho chuka tha ki yaha kuch to hai jo uski hi trf bahd raha hai Lawdasur talwaar ko or bhi jayada kas kar pakde huye apne charo tarh dekhe jaa raha tha ki tbhi koi hawa mai udta hua uske saamne aata hai or uske sine par apne dono laato se maarta hai jiske wajh se Lawdasur piche ke bal jaa girta hai

Lawdasur apne aap ko sambhalte huye khada hota hai tabhi use ek baar or jor daar dhakka lagta hai or wo phir niche gir jaata hai

Lawdasur zamin par gira pada hua tha wo lete lete hi apne saamne dekhne ki koshish karta hai magr kohra hone ki wajh se use saaf kuch dikhayi nhi deta phir bhi use thoda bahot kuch kuch dikhayi de raha tha uski trf koi aarha tha or wo jese jese uski trf aata jaa raha tha wese wese hi wo dikhayi bhi dene lagta hai karib 10 kadam ki duri par wo aakar khada ho gya or kahne laga

??? : Tumne yaha aakar Galti ki yaha bahot se log Taaz lene ke liye aaye magr koi wapas zinda nahi jaa paya, jo bhi Taaz lene ke liye aaya maine usse uski jaan leli aur ab tumhari bhi jaan mai lunga



illidan Taaz ka pahredaar.........


use dekhte hi Lawdasur ke rongate khade ho jaate hai or honge bhi kiyu nahi uske saamne ko shaks khada tha wo koi sadharan nahi tha uska kad kaafi bada tha karib-karib Lawdasur ke kad se dhed guna bada uski laal laal aankhe thi uski bhujaaye kaafi majbut or kasi huyi thi or uske pith ke piche do bade-bade par (wing) thye uske sir par do bade-bade Singh ( horn) lage thye or use dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki wo kitna shaktishaali hai wo apne right hand mai apni talwaar ko ghumaate huye kahata hai

Illiadn : Yaha jo bhi aaya wo apni jaan gawa betha yaha jo bhi Taaz lene ke liye aaya maine uske sharir ke tukde-tukde kar diye ab tumhari baari hai Hwewweww

Ye bol kar wo Lawdasur par waar karta hai or Lawdasur apni talwaar se uska waar rok deta hai or kahata hai



Lawdasur : nahi mai yaha wo sharapit Taaz lene ke maksad se nahi aaya hu mai to bas.........

Lawdasur nai itna hi kaha ta ki use apne pet par ek laat padne ka ahsha hota hai or wo dur jaa girta hai

Illiadn : Tum chahe koi bhi bahana karlo tum maroge hi mai Taaz ka pahredaar hu or mere rahte huye koi bhi Taaz nahi le sakta hai

Lawdasur apni jagh se khada hota hai or wo badi hi gusse mai kahta hai.....

Lawdasur : To tumhare marne ke baad to

Illiadn :... .???

Dono mai Ghamasan suru ho jaati hai



Kaafi der tak dono ek dusre se tadte rahte hai mage Lawdasur par Illiadn hawi ho raha tha or kaafi had tak Lawdasur ko chhote lagi thyi or esi bich Lawdasur nai bhi Illiadn ke sine par ek waar kar diya tha jiske chalte illidan hawa mai udte huye kahta hai

Illiadn : Hmm acha ladlete ho acha talwaarbaaj ho magr itna acha talwaarbaaj hone ka kiya fayda wese bhi tum marne waale hi ho

kaafi der tak ladai karne se Lawdasur thak chuka tha ab uska saath uska sharir nahi de paa raha tha uski talwaar ab use bhari bhari saa mahsus hone lagti hai jiske wajh se uske muthiyo se uski talwaar chhut kar niche gir jaati hai thakan ke wajh se wo apna kawach bhi nikal fekta hai ab to nihatta ho chuka tha wo itna thak gya tha ki use apne pairo par bhi khada hone mai dikkat ho rahi thi or uska ek left pair bhi khayal ho chuka tha or ye sab hote huye dekh kar Illiadn hasta hai or bolta hai.........

Illiadn : Hahaha tum to thak gye lekin phir bhi tum auro se kaafi der tak tike rahe mere saamne kaafi himmat hai tumhare ander lekin itna himmat ka kiya fayda jab tumko mere haatho hi marna hai Hahahaha

Itna bol kar wo tezi ke saath hawa mai udta huwa Lawdasur ke pass aata hai or apni talwaar Lawdasur ka gala kaatne ke liye badhata hai abhi uski talwaar Lawdasur ke gale se thodi hi duri par thi ki achanak pata nahi kaha se Lawdasur ke sharir mai furti aajati hai or wo side hattaye huye apni kamr mai lage Chaaku ko nikalta hai or Illiadn ke pith par kud jaata hai pith par aate hi Lawdasur chaaku ko uske pith mai ghusa deta hai jisse illidan hakka bakka rah jaata hai use samjh mai hi nahi aata hai ki ye sab itni jaldi kese ho gya

Lawdasur thaka jarur tha par uski himmat tuti nahi thyi or wo ye bhi jaan gya tha ki jab tak illidan udta rahega tab tak wo usse kabi bhi jit nahi paayega es liye usnai ek saryant racha usnai apni talwaar or kawach es liye pek diya taaki wo jab illidan ke pith par jaaye to uski raftaar tez ho raftaar tez hone ke liye hi usnai apne sharir se wajan kam kiya tha

Apni pith par Chaaku lagte hi illidan uper ki trf uddane lag jaata hai wo assmaan mai uper jaa kar Hawe mai gota lagane chahta hai taaki gota lagane se uski pith par se Lawdasur gir jaaye magr uska ye plan fel ho jaata hai jab Lawdasur uski ek left par ( wing) ko apne left haath se pakad kar Illiadn ki pith se chaaku nikal kar uske right par (wing) ko chaaku se phad deta hai par (wing) patte hi illidan apna udne ka control kho bhethta hai or wo Lawdasur ke saath sidha zamin par jaa girta hai dono ek dusre se karib 10,15 kadam ki duri par pade huye thye thodi der baad illidan apni jagh se uthta hai uske pith ke piche hi Lawdasur pada hua tha illidan apna right par ( wing) kholne ki koshish karta mai magr wo puri tarah se khol nhi pata jise dekh kar illidan ko samjh mai aajata hai ki wo ab ud nhi sakta uka right par (wing) ab kharab ho chuka hai illidan gusse mai apni dono muthiya bichte huye mudta hai or Lawdasur ke pass aate huye apne dono haatho se uska gala pakad kar use hawa mai utha leta hai

illidan : Maine tujhe kamjor samjh kar galti kar diya magr ab nhi ab tu marega mere haatho

Lawdasur ka gala ghutta chala jaata hai illidan uske gale par barabar dabaw banaye jaa raha tha jis karan Lawdasur ki aankhe uper ko uthne lag jaati hai phir bhi Lawdasur apni himmat ek jut karte huye apne dono haath uthata hai or ek jhatke ke saath wo illidan ke sir ke dono Singh (horn) ko pakad leta hai or apni puri taakat ke saath dono Singh ( horn) ko dono side se ghichne lag jaata hai

Apne Singh ( horn) par dabaw pate hi illidan Lawdasur ka gala or bhi jor se dabane lag jaata hai jise dekh kar Lawdasur apne dono pair illidan ke sine par rakh kar apni puri jaan lagate huye uske dono Singh ( horn) ko do side se chir deta hai Singh ( horn) do side se chira jaane ke karan illidan ka sir do tukkdo mai fat jaata hai or wo wahi gir kar mar jaata hai or use marta huwa dekha kar Lawdasur chillate huye bolta hai......

Lawdasur : Mai........ mai Lawdasur hu Lawdasurrrrrrrr yaaaaahhhhhhhhhh

Lawdasur bahot lahun-luhan ho chuka tha or uska ek pair bhi ache se kaam nahi kar raha tha jiski wajh se use khada hone mai bhi dikkat ho rahi thi Tabhi waha ka mousam thoda saaf hone lagta hai jiski wajh se Lawdasur dekhta hai ki uske saamne hi thodi dur par ek pahad tha jo ki ek minaar ki trh bana hua tha or us minaar ko dekh kar Lawdasur ko samjhte der nahi lagi ki ye wahi minaar hai jo usne sunna tha ki jungle mai shirf ek hi aesa minaar hai jiske uper wo sharaapit Taaz rakha hua hai or us Taaz ki raksha karne ke liye illadan naam ka koi ek Janwar yaa rachach waha rahta hai ye hi sochte huye pata nhi Lawdasur ko kiya sujhta hai ki wo pahle illidan ki talwaar uthata hai or langdate-langdate minaar ki trf jaane lagta hai kuch hi samay mai wo langdate-landate minaar ki upri chhoti par pahuch jaata hai ab uske saamne ek barf ( ice) ki pardashi diwaar thi jo karid 8 feet uchi thi



or us barf ki diwaar ke bicho-bich mai wah Taaz raha huwa tha Taaz dekhne mai badi hi adbhut lag raha tha or us Taaz ke bich mai ek bule color ka Diamond laga hua tha Lawdasur us Taaz ko ek pal ke liye dekhta hai or apni talwaar ko apni muthiya mai pakadte huye diwaar par marne lagta hai kaafi der se wo dewaar par talwaar se war karta rahta hai magr wo diwaar tut nahi rahi thi bas kuch Chhote-Chhote tukde us barf ki diwaar se tut ke niche gir rahe thye ab Lawdasur thak chuka tha magr diwaar tutne ka naam hi nhi le raha tha Achank se Lawdasur ke dimaag mai ek baat ghumne lagti hai jab wo illidan se lad raha tha tab illidan talwaar ko kayi parkaar se badal le raha tha kabhi use do bhaago mai kar deta tha to kabhi use bhala bana deta tha to kabhi kuch or ab illidan ki talwaar uske haatho mai thi matlb ab wo bhi chahe to uski talwaar ko kisi bhi hattiyar mai badal sakta hai ye hi soch kar Lawdasur 4,5 kadam piche hatte huye talwaar ki taraf dekhte hai or apne man hi man mai sochta hai ki talwaar ek hathode mai badal jaaye abhi Lawdasur nai itna hi socha tha ki talwaar ek bhari-bharkam hathode mai badal chuka tha

Talwaar hathode mai badalta dekh kar Lawdasur use majbuti ke saath pakadta hai or badi hi tezi ke saath barf ki diwaar par maara hai jisse diwaar ek hi baar mai gir jaati hai or Taaz uske saamne zamin par padi hui hoti hai Lawdasur Taaz ke pass jaata hai or apni talwaar ko zamin mai gadte huye Taaz uthate huye bolta hai........

Lawdasur : Bura ka ant burai se hi shi

Ye bol kar Lawdasur wo Taaz apne sir par pahen leta hai Taaz pahnte hi uske sharir mai ek bijli jese dudne lagti hai or uska sarir kayi jagh se fatne lagta hai or wo zamin par gir padta hai thodi der tak Lawdasur jamin par gira pada hua tha uske baad wo apne ghutno de bal uth kar betha hai or apne dono haatho ki trf dekhta hai to pata hai uske thaaho ke saare jakham gayab thye or haatho ke saath saath uske saare sharir ke bhi jakham gayab ho chuke thye yaha tak ki uska wo pair bhi ab thik-thak nazar arha tha ho jo abhi thodi samay pahle illidan se ladne mai kharab ho gya tha

Lawdasur ko apni body mai ek alg hi trh ki power mahsus hone lagti hai usse pata chal gya tha ki ab wo koi sadharan Lawdasur nahi raha ab uske pass do chize hai phli ek illidan ki wo talwaar jisse wo koi bhi hattiyaar bana sakta hai or dusri ye Taaz Lawdasur ko ab itna hi anumaan lagna baaki tha or jab use ye anumaan lag chuka tha to ab usnai apne raajy ke aas pass raajiyo mai kahar dhana suru kar diya koi bhi raajy uske saamne tik nhi paate thye kisi bhi raajy ki raajao ki powers uske Taaz ki power ke saamne nahi chal paati thi or sabhi raajyo ko haarna padta tha sabhi raajyo ko hara kar Lawdasur nai shirf ek hi raajy banaya jiska naam "kingdom of Lawdasur" rakha gya or esi bich Lawdasur nai kayi taantariko se Teleportsion, fire power ka gyaan pratap kar chuka tha kahi naa khi use Ye lagta tha thi agr kabhi wo Taaz yaa talwaar ke bina rahega to uske pass khud ki koi power hone chahiye or Lawdasur ka ye sochna ek din kaam kar gya jab Ajgar or najumi nai uski talwaar or Taaz usse chin liya tha tab shirf uske pass shirf uski hi teleportsion or fire power thyi jiski madat se wo waha se bhaag nikalta tha

Ansh : Hmm yaar tumne to bahot kasht uthaye hai magr mujhe ek baat ye samjh mai nahi aayi wo taaz sharapit kese hai kya sharap hai us taaz ko tumne to ye nahi bataya mujhe.....?

Lawdasur : Taaz koi sharapit nahi hai

Ansh : Umm..... Par tumne abhi mujhe bataya ki tumhare lok mai sharapit jungle mai wo sharapit taaz thi jo tumne use leliya hai......?

Lawdasur : wo sharapit taaz nahi hai balki taaz dharan karne waala sharapit ho jaata hai

Ansh : kyaaaaaa Abe mujhe sharapit taaz pehna diya ab mai sharapit ho gya yaar ab mai kya karu kis ke pass jaau

Lawdasur : Ansh....... Ansh

Ansh : Abe kya Ansh ansh meri gaand maar di sharapit taaz pahna kar

Lawdasur : Ansh meri baat to suno puri

Ansh : ab kiya sunna hai ab mai sharapit ho gya yaar ab meri gaand mara jaayegi ab mai kaha jaau Kiske pass dada ji ko bataa du kya, nahi nahi h ankit ko bata deta hu wo sayad meri kuch madat kar de lekin bc wo mazak samjhega koi yakin nahi karega mera ab mai kya karu batao ab mai kya karu

Ansh : tum chup kiyu ho kuch batate kiyu nhi ho es sharap se kese mai chutkara paau

Lawdasur : tum pahale apna muh to band karoge tab naa mai kuch bolu

Ansh : umm........ oh ok ab bolo

Lawdasur : taaz sharapit nahi hai balki wo ek Kaali duniya ka aane ka Marg hai use hm Kaali duniya ka darwaja bhi kah sakte hai

Ansh : darwaja.....?

Lawdasur : H darwaja jab maine taaz dharan kiya tha tab mujhe taaz ki shaktiya Bahot achi lagne lagi thyi ek adbhut shaktiy Jiski powers ki koi had nahi Aesa maano jese tum khud ek shaktisaali ho khud shaktimaan ho

Ansh : kya kaha shaktimaan Wo jo Bachchan mai tv par Durdarshan channel par aata tha

Lawdasur : yaaaah mai yaha real apni kahani bata raha hu or tum tv ki baat kar rahe ho Tum yaar meri baat to suno phle

Ansh : oh

Lawdasur : taaz ki power ka koi ant nahi hai or naa hi uski koi Hadd hai taaz kitna shaktisaali tha or usmai kon kon se powers thye ye pata lagane ke liye maine kuch jaadugaro or taantariko se pata lagaya to pata chala wo Kaali duniya ka ek aane ka Marg hai jisse hamare lok ke bahar ki kaali shaktiya aa sakti hai or hamare lok ko samapt kar sakti hai

Lawdasur : ye baat jab mujhe pata chali tb se hi mai wo kaali shaktiyo ke aane ka Marg ka darwaja bhundhne ki koshish karne laga lekin hamre sabhi jadugar or tantrik ye kabhi pata nhi laga paaye ki wo darwaja kha hai or kese khulega maine bahot saalo se es baat ko jaanne ki khoshish karta rha par mujhe kuch nhi pata chala jo jab pata chala tab Taaz mere haatho se jaa chuka tha

Ansh : kya pata chala kaha hai wo darwaja......?

Lawdasur : wo darwaja kahi or nhi balki wo khud Taaz hi darwaja hai

Ansh : Kya kaha Taaz hi wo kaali shaktiyo ke aane ka darwaja hai

Lawdasur : H Ansh wo khud ek darwaja hai or ye baat mujhe tab pata chala tab ajgar nai Taaz ko tudne ki khoshish ki

Ansh : Lekin wo ajgar un kaali shaktiyo ko kiyu bulana chahta hai

Lawdasur : Pata nhi lekin

Ansh : dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai ok ab chalo ghr chalte hain

Jese hi Ansh park se nikalne waala hota hai tabhi Lawdasur use ruk deta hai

Lawdasur : Ansh ruko

Ansh : kya hua ab.......?

Lawdasur : hummmm..... Haaaaaa.... Ye khushbu

Ansh : khushbu.......? Kesi khushbu

Lawdasur : Udhar se aarhi hai tumhari left se

Ansh apne left side ki trf dekhta hai to usse thodi hi duri par ek ped dikhai deta hai or us ped ke piche se kisi trh ka dhuwa aate huye dikhayi deta hai jise dekh kar Ansh jab waha ped ke pass jata hai to dekhta hai waha teen aadmi bethye huye thye jinke haatho mai chilam tha jo usse hi wo log dhuwa nikal kar bahar hawa mai chhod rahe thye jise dekh kar Lawdasur khus hote huye bolta hai

Lawdasur : are waah Tutima

Ansh : ( man mai) Tutima......?

Lawdasur : h Tutima mera pasindida

Ansh : (man mai) pasindida..... Abe yaar ye ganja hai

Lawdasur : H wo tumhare lok mai bula jaata hoga par mere log mai ese Tutima bolte hai jaya inse maango

Ansh : ( man mai) kya kaha maangu par kiyu......?

Lawdasur : pine ke liye

Ansh : (man mai) kya pine ke liye tumhara dimaag to thik hai naa

Lawdasur : Tum ek baar pi kar dekho to tumhe maza aayega Ansh

Ansh : ( man mai) nhi nhi mai nhi pine wala samjhe tum

Abhi Ansh Lawdasur se baate hi kar raha tha ki tabhi waha ganja pine waalo mai se ek aadmi bolta hai

Aadmi : kya hua bacche pina hai kya aa pi le bhai tu bhi

Ansh : are nhi thank you mai nhi pita

Lawdasur : pile Ansh zindgi ka maza hai

Ansh : (man mai) nhi to nhi

Tabhi dusra aadmi chilam ko Ansh ki trf badhate huye bolta hai

Aadmi : soch kya raha hai bacche aaja or ek do kash maar le tujhe teri saari thakan or saare tension dur ho jaayenge

Ansh : (man mai) tension dur ho jaayenge bhala ese pine se kese tension dur ho jaayenge

Lawdasur : phle pi to le saare tension dur ho jaayega

Ansh : ( man mai) tum apna muh band kro jara tum to khud ek tension ho

Ye bol kar Ansh chilam pakadta hai or ek kast leta jese hi wo chilam ki phli kast leta hai use joro se khasi aajati hai jisse wo khasne lagta hai or use khasta hua dekh kar wo teeno aadmi haste huye bolte hai

Admi : koi baat nhi phli baar hota hai tum bubaara kast maaro lekin dhayan rahe dhuwa gale tak naa jaaye

Ansh badi hi shawdhaani ke saath kast maarta hai usnai 4,5 kast maara hi tha ki wo apni duniya mai kho jaata hai use har chiz achi lagne lagti hai apne haatho mai pakdi huyi chilam chilam mai jalti huyi gaanje ki khushbu yaha tak ki uska sharir bhi halka-halka saa mahsus lagne lagta hai ye hi sab ki anubhuti karte huye Ansh bad-badaate huye kahata hai

Ansh : are waah kya kamal ki chiz hai yaar ye to maza hi aagya dost agr aap ki izzat ho to 1,2 baar or pilu please

Aadmi : ab tumne hame dost dola to maarle

Ansh 1,2 kast or maarne ke baad chilam unko de deta hai or apne jeb se unko 100 rupay nikal kar deta hai wo teeno aadmi dikhne mai koi majdur hi lag rahe thye

Aadmi : are ye kya dost bhi bolta hai or paise bhi deta hai kya yaar

Ansh : are nahi ye aap log apne paise se laaye honge to ye uske liye aap phir se apne liye kharid lena please rakh lo

US aadmi nai Ansh se 100 ka note lete huye use ek gaanje ki pudiya or ek chilam thama deta hai or bolta hai

Aadmi : chal teri baat maan li ab tu ye rakh le mana mat karna

Ansh : ok Thanx

Thoda der Ansh wahi betha hai or jese hi use kuch halka saa gaanja ka asar kam hote huye mahsus hota hai to wo apne ghr ki trf nikal jata hai

Dusri trf..........

Sandhiya ko suchna milti hai ki jo Buddha sp office aaya tha use kisi park mai dehosi mai paaya gya hai or ab use hospital mai rakha gya hai jisse milne ke liye Sandhiya waha chali jaati hai

Sandhiya : Aap jara batane ka kast karenge aap aaj subh sp office kiyu gye thye

Buddha : Kya kaha aap nai mai bhala sp office kiyu jaaunga mai to subha park mai gya tha daily hi jaata hu par pata nhi aaj waha kiyu behosh ho gya acha khasa mai park mai tahal raha tha jab wo ladki mere pass aayi

Sandhiya : ladki kon ladki........

Buddha : pata nhi kon ladki thi maine kabhi use park mai nhi dekha tha wo mere pass aayi

Buddha aadmi nai Sandhiya ko waha ki haalat bata diya jo kuch uske saath bita tha

Sandhiya apne pass waale hawldaar se khati hai......

Sandhiya : thik hai inka bayan lelo or inke pahchan waalo ko suchit kardo

Hawldaar : ji madam

Sandhiya : ( man mai) phir se ek ladki aakhir ye ladki hai kon or ye chahti kya hai kya hai iska maksad



Ansh ka Ghar..........


Saam ko sabhi dinar kar rahe thye ek saath beth kar or subhash ji bhi aagye thye or unhone bataya ki Sp vishwash ka kal subh body postmortem ho kar aayegi or kal hi Saara kirya karm ho jayega

Dihre - dhire sab apna apna dinar nipta kar apne apne room mai chale jaate hai shayama apne room ka darwaja jese hi band karti hai wese hi Ansh ke darwaje ke niche se Dhuwa bahar nikalne lagta hai.

Ab aage.......
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Sandhiya Ye jaan payegi Wo ladki Rudaali kon hai or uska maksad kiya hai, ab Ansh kya karne waala hai ye jaanne ke liye bane rahe hamare saath or likes, comments, reviews karna naa bhule

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Hm readers nai pichi baar dekha ek trf Ansh or Rudaali ek dusre se bhid gye thye or Dusri trf subhash ko kabar lag gyi thi ki sp vishwash ka kisi nai hattya kar diya hai jise dekhne ke liye wo Ansh ke saath chale jaate hai or wahi par sandhya bhi thi jo kisi se baate kar rahi thi wo bhi Rudaali ke baare mai.


AAb Aage........
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Ansh : ( man mai ) ye madam kis Rudaali ki baat kar rahi thyi

Lawdasur : Pata nhi yaar par uski baato se mujhe lagta hai ye usi Rudaali ki baat kar rahi hai

Ansh : ( man mai ) par ye baat kisse kar rahi thi or gyi kaha

Luwdasur : mujhe lagta hai jisse bhi baat kar rahi thi usi ke pass gyi hai

Ansh : ( man mai ) Hmm hme inka picha karna chahiye

Lawdasur : picha.... Par kiyu.....?

Ansh : Dekha to jaaye ye usi Rudaali ke liye gyi hai yaa kisi or Rudaali ke liye agr waha mujhe Rudaali mil gyi to use maza charkha dunga pichli baar to bach ke bhaag gyi thyi par ab nhi bach sakegi

Lawdasur : pagal mat bano Ansh Tumhe kya lagta hai tum Rudaali se Takra sakte ho wo bhi bina Taaz ki power ke bager sayad tumne Rudaali ko halke mai le liya hai ansh

Ansh : ( man mai) Umm....?

Lawdasur : jis hisaab se wo tumse lad rahi thi mujhe nahi lagta hai wo tum se seriously lad rahi thi phir bhi wo tumpar bhari pad rahi thi or wo tumko hara bhi sakti thi par pata nhi aesa kya hua jo wo ek dum se ladna chhod kar waha se chali gyi

Ansh : pata nhi yaar wo kiyu bhaag gyi par tumhari ek baat shi lgti hai us time mujhe bhi lag raha tha ki mai usse ab or nahi lad paunga

Ansh : phir bhi hme chalna chahiye ye pata karne ke liye ki madam jis Rudaali ka naam le rahi thi ye wahi hai yaa nhi

Ansh : tumne ek baat notice nhi ki Rudaali to Hmse Taaz lene aayi hai to ye madam ko Uski kabar kese hai khi kuch to hai yaar hme pata lagana hoga

Lawdasur : Wo to tum thik kaha rahe ho Ansh par tum yaha se jaaoge kese

Ansh : (man mai) kese kya yaar apni bike se madam ka picha karte hai naa

Lawdasur : or tumhare dada ji

Ansh : Dada ji....? Mtlb Oh yaar ye to maine socha hi nhi dada ji se kya bol kar jau....?

Ansh abhi ye hi soch raha tha ki wo kese apne dada se koi saa bahana kar ke waha se nikal jaaye tabhi uske dada nai usko awaaj diya

Subhash : Ansh

Ansh : ji dada

Ansh apne dada ke pass aata hai or Subhash ji usse Kahate hai......

Subhash : beta tum ghr chale jaao mai Sayam ke saath uske ghr jaunga thoda uske ghr par ruk ke hi ghr aaunga beta agr jarurat padi to mai Ranjeet yaa Aanand ko bula lunga wo log mujhe ghr chhod denge tum ab jao

Ye baat sunke Ansh ander hi ander khus ho jata hai or apne dada ko H bol kar waha se apni bike lekar sandhya ki Gaadi ka picha karne lag jata hai single road hone ki wajh se Sandhiya ki Gaadi Dikh jaati hai or kuch hi der baad sandhya ki Gaadi ek hospital ke bahar rukti hai or fat se Sandhiya Gaadi se nikal kar hospital ke ander jaane ke liye teji ke saath badhti hai jise dekh kar ansh Lawdasur se bolta hai

Ansh : ( man mai) ye yaha hospital mai kiyu aayi hai.....?

Lawdasur : pata nhi ab ander jaa kar pata chalega

Ansh : ( man mai) hmm chalo tab

Sandhiya icu ke room mai aajati hai or uske piche piche Ansh icu ke gate ke bahar rukjata hai or gate thoda khula rakta hai

Icu ke ander ek police waala betha hua tha or jese hi wo Sandhiya ko ander aate huye dekhta hai to fat se apni jagh se khada hote huye Sandhiya ko salute maarta hai or ye wahi insaan hai jisnai Sandhiya ko phone kar ke Bata raha tha

Sandhiya apne saamne ek ventilator par lete ek aadmi ke pass jaate huye kahti hai........



Sandhiya : Bolo sanjay Kon hai wo log jisnai pahadi ke pass bite 2 raato mai Sabhi police waalo ko maara hai kitne log thye, kya unmai se kisi ko tum pahchante ho yaa unka Huliya bata sakte ho to mai sketch expert ko bula lu

Sanjay : Mam wo..... Wo.. Cc.... Chaku.....Tal.....talwaar Gayyyyyyb maaaaar..... Maaarrrr

Sandhiya : h chaku chaku kya sanjay bolo aage bolo

Sanjay thoda hichkicha kar dol raha tha or uski awaaj bhi uske gale se thodi si dhimi nikal rahi thi jiske karan Sandhiya ko kuch kuch samjh mai aarha tha to kuch kuch samjh mai nhi aarha tha

Sanjay : C.... C.... Chaku, Talwaar, Gayab

Sandhiya : Aage kya sanjay kya chaku, talwaar, gayab bolo sanjay

Sandhiya ke ek saath itne sawaalo ki jhadi laddta hua dekh kar waha khada wo police waala bol padta hai....

Policewala : madam ji thoda araam se puchiye doctor nai bola hai eski halat abhi najuk hai to hme esse kam baat chit karna hai maine esse pucha to bas ye itna hi bola Rudaali, talwaar, chaku, gayab

Ansh : ( man mai) Rudaali.......?

Icu ka darwaja thoda khula rahne ki wajh se ander ki baat bahar khade Ansh sun paa raha tha

Sandhiya ko bhi lagne laga ki sayad usnai kuch jayada hi jaldbaaji mai itne sawal puch diye wo apne aapko thoda shant karte huye sanjay se bade hi aram se puchti hai

Sandhiya : tum aram se batao or saaf bolne ki koshish karo taaki mujhe tumhari baat samjh mai aaye

Sanjay : m.... Mam in sab ke piche shirf e...... ek.... ek ladki hai Or uske pass chaku, talwaar or G... G.... gayab hone ki shaktiya hai

Sanjay ki saanse ukhadi ukhadi si lag rahi thyi use bolne mai taklif ho rahi thi jiske karan Sandhiya ko phir se sanjay ki aadhi baat samjh mai aarhi thi or aadhi nhi

Sandhiya : mai kuch samjhi nhi sanjay kiya tum mujhe suru se bata sakte ho

Sanjay ki saanse ab kuch jayada hi ukhadne lagi thyi or ab uski saanse ful bhi rahi thi use bolne mai taklif bhi ho raha tha wo jab bolta to uske gale mai dard hone lagta hai magr fir bhi wo apne dard ki pida ko bardash karte huye Sandhiya ko bataye jaa raha tha or thodi hi der mai wo Sandhiya ko suru se saari baate bata deta hai Kese Raaju apne dosto ke saath pahad waale jgh par gya tha to use waha par ek ladki milti hai jo uska Haath kaat deti hai or jab uski team raju ke do saathi or apni team ke saath wo pahad waali jagh gye to waha kya kya hua or kese usne dar ke maare Rudaali ki madat ki Ansh ka pata lagane mai or usne hi S.P vishwash se pata lagane ke liya bhi Rudaali ko bataya or kese Rudaali nai Inspector balveer ke saath saath uske pure team ko bhi khatam kiya or last mai kese usnai sanjay ko bhi chalti huyi trak ke aage phek diya suru se last tak aap biti Sandhiya ko sab kuch bata deta hai

Sandhiya sanjay ki baate snukar ek dum shaant khadi thyi or use dekh kar aesa lag raha tha jese uska dimaag kaam karna band ho gya ho wo bs ek taktaki nazar kar ke sanjay ko dekhe jaa rahi thyi or idhar icu ke bahar gate par sanjay ki baate sunkar Ansh ke sharir mai ek current saa mahsusu hota hai

Sandhiya : Sanjay lagta hai tumhe abhi araam ki jarurat hai tum kya bol rahe ho tumko kuch samjh mai aa raha bhi hai yaa nhi bhala koi Gayab kese ho sakta hai or koi kisi ka Roop kese badal sakta hai, koi baat nhi tum abhi araam karo jab tumko lagne lagega ki tum ab thik ho to apna bayaan dedena ok

Sanjay : nhi mam mai s... Sach bol. Raha hu wo sab ko m... Maar degi k.... Kisi ko n.... Nhi chhodegi sab ko m.... M.... Maar........

Itna bolte huye sanjay ki dono aankho ki putliya uper ki trf ho jaati hai or wo mar jaata hai jise dekh kar Sandhiya ghabraate huye sanjay ka dono side khande ko pakad kar hilaate huye kahati hai.......

Sandhiya : sanjay...... Sanjay..... O god Doctor ko bulaao

Inspector : ji mam

Itna bol kar wo inspector icu ke bahar jaane lag jaata hai apni tarf inspector ko aate dekh kar ansh waha se nikal kar hospital ke bahar aajata hai or apni bike start kar ke nikal jaata hai Kuch der baad Ansh apni bike ek park ke pass rukta hai or bike se utar kar wo park mai chala jata hai tabhi Lawdasur kahta hai

Lawdasur : kya hua tum yaha kiyu ruk gye......????

Ansh : ( man mai) Tumne hospital mai us aadmi ki baat suni wo kya kah raha tha Rudaali nai bahot police waalo ko mara hai, or shirf Mujhse Taaz lene ke liye, or Mujhe dhundte huye wo Sp vishwash uncle ke paas bhi gyi or waha par unke saath saath sabhi ko maar diya

Ansh chillate huye kahta hai........

Ansh : Yaaaahhhhhh......... Ye kya ho raha hai Ek Ladki ek Taaz ke liye itne saare logo ko kese maar sakti hai wo bhi shirf ek Taaz ke liye

Lawdasur : Wo Taaz koi aam yaa sadharn Taaz nhi hai Ansh es Taaz ke liye naa jaane kitne saare log maare gye or naa jaane or kitne maare jayenge

Ansh : ( man mai) matlb mai kuch samjha nhi....?

Lawdasur : batata hu mai tumko.....

Lawdasur Ansh ko batata hai jab wo apne Raajy Lawdasur raajy ka raaja tha tab uske raajy mai bahot Vikas ho raha tha uska raajy modern technique karne mai aage tha jiski wajh se waha ke aap pas raajyo ko uske raajy se jaln hone lagti thyi or esi jaln ke chalte wo hamesa Lawdasur raajy par hamla kar ke uske raajy ko kabja karne ki koshish karte rahte thye magr Lawdasur ke suj-buj or hamla karne ka tarika se wo hamesa maat khaa jaate thye

wo khate hai naa Agr leader budhimaan ho to wo hajaro ki bhid kuch hi Minto mai jama kar sakta hai or kuch hi mintu mai hajaro ki bhid hata-bata sakta hai

aesa hi kuch tha Lawdasur wo hamesa apne raajy ko ek acha raajy banana chahta tha usne kabhi bhi kisi dusre raajy par hamla nhi kiya wo shirf apne raajy mai hi khus tha, magr uski ye khusi jayada dino tak nhi chali ek din waha ke aap pass ke sabhi raajiyo nai milkar uske raajy par ek saath hamla kardiya saamne waale ki sainaye uske sainao ke mukable karib 40 Gunna jayada thi or unmai se kuch raajyo ke raajao ke pass apni-apni powers thi jis wajh se use wah jag haarna padta hai or uska raajy kabza ho jaata hai badi muskil se wo apne aap ko bachte-bachate huye jungle ki trf bhaag jaata hai use maalum tha ki uske piche es jungle mai koi nahi aayega kiyu ke ye jungle ek sharapit jungle thi

Lawdasur apne aap ko to bacha kar jungle mai aajata hai or jab wo jungle ke bicho bich aata hai to use ahshas hota hai ki usnai bahot badi galti kar di hai yaha aakar Lawdasur abhi wapas jungle se bahar nikalne ke liye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi use koi halchal sunai dene lagti hai wo apne charo tarf dekhne ki khoshish karta hai magr waha jayada kohra hone ki wajh se use kuch saaf-saaf nhi dikhai de rahi thi halchal badhne lag jaati hai Aesa lag raha tha koi chiz hawa mai ud raha ho jise sunkar Lawdasur ghabrajata hai or apni talwaar ko apni mutthi mai kas leta hai

Lawdasur ke ander dar sama chuka tha use itna to abhas ho chuka tha ki yaha kuch to hai jo uski hi trf bahd raha hai Lawdasur talwaar ko or bhi jayada kas kar pakde huye apne charo tarh dekhe jaa raha tha ki tbhi koi hawa mai udta hua uske saamne aata hai or uske sine par apne dono laato se maarta hai jiske wajh se Lawdasur piche ke bal jaa girta hai

Lawdasur apne aap ko sambhalte huye khada hota hai tabhi use ek baar or jor daar dhakka lagta hai or wo phir niche gir jaata hai

Lawdasur zamin par gira pada hua tha wo lete lete hi apne saamne dekhne ki koshish karta hai magr kohra hone ki wajh se use saaf kuch dikhayi nhi deta phir bhi use thoda bahot kuch kuch dikhayi de raha tha uski trf koi aarha tha or wo jese jese uski trf aata jaa raha tha wese wese hi wo dikhayi bhi dene lagta hai karib 10 kadam ki duri par wo aakar khada ho gya or kahne laga

??? : Tumne yaha aakar Galti ki yaha bahot se log Taaz lene ke liye aaye magr koi wapas zinda nahi jaa paya, jo bhi Taaz lene ke liye aaya maine usse uski jaan leli aur ab tumhari bhi jaan mai lunga



illidan Taaz ka pahredaar.........


use dekhte hi Lawdasur ke rongate khade ho jaate hai or honge bhi kiyu nahi uske saamne ko shaks khada tha wo koi sadharan nahi tha uska kad kaafi bada tha karib-karib Lawdasur ke kad se dhed guna bada uski laal laal aankhe thi uski bhujaaye kaafi majbut or kasi huyi thi or uske pith ke piche do bade-bade par (wing) thye uske sir par do bade-bade Singh ( horn) lage thye or use dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki wo kitna shaktishaali hai wo apne right hand mai apni talwaar ko ghumaate huye kahata hai

Illiadn : Yaha jo bhi aaya wo apni jaan gawa betha yaha jo bhi Taaz lene ke liye aaya maine uske sharir ke tukde-tukde kar diye ab tumhari baari hai Hwewweww

Ye bol kar wo Lawdasur par waar karta hai or Lawdasur apni talwaar se uska waar rok deta hai or kahata hai



Lawdasur : nahi mai yaha wo sharapit Taaz lene ke maksad se nahi aaya hu mai to bas.........

Lawdasur nai itna hi kaha ta ki use apne pet par ek laat padne ka ahsha hota hai or wo dur jaa girta hai

Illiadn : Tum chahe koi bhi bahana karlo tum maroge hi mai Taaz ka pahredaar hu or mere rahte huye koi bhi Taaz nahi le sakta hai

Lawdasur apni jagh se khada hota hai or wo badi hi gusse mai kahta hai.....

Lawdasur : To tumhare marne ke baad to

Illiadn :... .???

Dono mai Ghamasan suru ho jaati hai



Kaafi der tak dono ek dusre se tadte rahte hai mage Lawdasur par Illiadn hawi ho raha tha or kaafi had tak Lawdasur ko chhote lagi thyi or esi bich Lawdasur nai bhi Illiadn ke sine par ek waar kar diya tha jiske chalte illidan hawa mai udte huye kahta hai

Illiadn : Hmm acha ladlete ho acha talwaarbaaj ho magr itna acha talwaarbaaj hone ka kiya fayda wese bhi tum marne waale hi ho

kaafi der tak ladai karne se Lawdasur thak chuka tha ab uska saath uska sharir nahi de paa raha tha uski talwaar ab use bhari bhari saa mahsus hone lagti hai jiske wajh se uske muthiyo se uski talwaar chhut kar niche gir jaati hai thakan ke wajh se wo apna kawach bhi nikal fekta hai ab to nihatta ho chuka tha wo itna thak gya tha ki use apne pairo par bhi khada hone mai dikkat ho rahi thi or uska ek left pair bhi khayal ho chuka tha or ye sab hote huye dekh kar Illiadn hasta hai or bolta hai.........

Illiadn : Hahaha tum to thak gye lekin phir bhi tum auro se kaafi der tak tike rahe mere saamne kaafi himmat hai tumhare ander lekin itna himmat ka kiya fayda jab tumko mere haatho hi marna hai Hahahaha

Itna bol kar wo tezi ke saath hawa mai udta huwa Lawdasur ke pass aata hai or apni talwaar Lawdasur ka gala kaatne ke liye badhata hai abhi uski talwaar Lawdasur ke gale se thodi hi duri par thi ki achanak pata nahi kaha se Lawdasur ke sharir mai furti aajati hai or wo side hattaye huye apni kamr mai lage Chaaku ko nikalta hai or Illiadn ke pith par kud jaata hai pith par aate hi Lawdasur chaaku ko uske pith mai ghusa deta hai jisse illidan hakka bakka rah jaata hai use samjh mai hi nahi aata hai ki ye sab itni jaldi kese ho gya

Lawdasur thaka jarur tha par uski himmat tuti nahi thyi or wo ye bhi jaan gya tha ki jab tak illidan udta rahega tab tak wo usse kabi bhi jit nahi paayega es liye usnai ek saryant racha usnai apni talwaar or kawach es liye pek diya taaki wo jab illidan ke pith par jaaye to uski raftaar tez ho raftaar tez hone ke liye hi usnai apne sharir se wajan kam kiya tha

Apni pith par Chaaku lagte hi illidan uper ki trf uddane lag jaata hai wo assmaan mai uper jaa kar Hawe mai gota lagane chahta hai taaki gota lagane se uski pith par se Lawdasur gir jaaye magr uska ye plan fel ho jaata hai jab Lawdasur uski ek left par ( wing) ko apne left haath se pakad kar Illiadn ki pith se chaaku nikal kar uske right par (wing) ko chaaku se phad deta hai par (wing) patte hi illidan apna udne ka control kho bhethta hai or wo Lawdasur ke saath sidha zamin par jaa girta hai dono ek dusre se karib 10,15 kadam ki duri par pade huye thye thodi der baad illidan apni jagh se uthta hai uske pith ke piche hi Lawdasur pada hua tha illidan apna right par ( wing) kholne ki koshish karta mai magr wo puri tarah se khol nhi pata jise dekh kar illidan ko samjh mai aajata hai ki wo ab ud nhi sakta uka right par (wing) ab kharab ho chuka hai illidan gusse mai apni dono muthiya bichte huye mudta hai or Lawdasur ke pass aate huye apne dono haatho se uska gala pakad kar use hawa mai utha leta hai

illidan : Maine tujhe kamjor samjh kar galti kar diya magr ab nhi ab tu marega mere haatho

Lawdasur ka gala ghutta chala jaata hai illidan uske gale par barabar dabaw banaye jaa raha tha jis karan Lawdasur ki aankhe uper ko uthne lag jaati hai phir bhi Lawdasur apni himmat ek jut karte huye apne dono haath uthata hai or ek jhatke ke saath wo illidan ke sir ke dono Singh (horn) ko pakad leta hai or apni puri taakat ke saath dono Singh ( horn) ko dono side se ghichne lag jaata hai

Apne Singh ( horn) par dabaw pate hi illidan Lawdasur ka gala or bhi jor se dabane lag jaata hai jise dekh kar Lawdasur apne dono pair illidan ke sine par rakh kar apni puri jaan lagate huye uske dono Singh ( horn) ko do side se chir deta hai Singh ( horn) do side se chira jaane ke karan illidan ka sir do tukkdo mai fat jaata hai or wo wahi gir kar mar jaata hai or use marta huwa dekha kar Lawdasur chillate huye bolta hai......

Lawdasur : Mai........ mai Lawdasur hu Lawdasurrrrrrrr yaaaaahhhhhhhhhh

Lawdasur bahot lahun-luhan ho chuka tha or uska ek pair bhi ache se kaam nahi kar raha tha jiski wajh se use khada hone mai bhi dikkat ho rahi thi Tabhi waha ka mousam thoda saaf hone lagta hai jiski wajh se Lawdasur dekhta hai ki uske saamne hi thodi dur par ek pahad tha jo ki ek minaar ki trh bana hua tha or us minaar ko dekh kar Lawdasur ko samjhte der nahi lagi ki ye wahi minaar hai jo usne sunna tha ki jungle mai shirf ek hi aesa minaar hai jiske uper wo sharaapit Taaz rakha hua hai or us Taaz ki raksha karne ke liye illadan naam ka koi ek Janwar yaa rachach waha rahta hai ye hi sochte huye pata nhi Lawdasur ko kiya sujhta hai ki wo pahle illidan ki talwaar uthata hai or langdate-langdate minaar ki trf jaane lagta hai kuch hi samay mai wo langdate-landate minaar ki upri chhoti par pahuch jaata hai ab uske saamne ek barf ( ice) ki pardashi diwaar thi jo karid 8 feet uchi thi



or us barf ki diwaar ke bicho-bich mai wah Taaz raha huwa tha Taaz dekhne mai badi hi adbhut lag raha tha or us Taaz ke bich mai ek bule color ka Diamond laga hua tha Lawdasur us Taaz ko ek pal ke liye dekhta hai or apni talwaar ko apni muthiya mai pakadte huye diwaar par marne lagta hai kaafi der se wo dewaar par talwaar se war karta rahta hai magr wo diwaar tut nahi rahi thi bas kuch Chhote-Chhote tukde us barf ki diwaar se tut ke niche gir rahe thye ab Lawdasur thak chuka tha magr diwaar tutne ka naam hi nhi le raha tha Achank se Lawdasur ke dimaag mai ek baat ghumne lagti hai jab wo illidan se lad raha tha tab illidan talwaar ko kayi parkaar se badal le raha tha kabhi use do bhaago mai kar deta tha to kabhi use bhala bana deta tha to kabhi kuch or ab illidan ki talwaar uske haatho mai thi matlb ab wo bhi chahe to uski talwaar ko kisi bhi hattiyar mai badal sakta hai ye hi soch kar Lawdasur 4,5 kadam piche hatte huye talwaar ki taraf dekhte hai or apne man hi man mai sochta hai ki talwaar ek hathode mai badal jaaye abhi Lawdasur nai itna hi socha tha ki talwaar ek bhari-bharkam hathode mai badal chuka tha

Talwaar hathode mai badalta dekh kar Lawdasur use majbuti ke saath pakadta hai or badi hi tezi ke saath barf ki diwaar par maara hai jisse diwaar ek hi baar mai gir jaati hai or Taaz uske saamne zamin par padi hui hoti hai Lawdasur Taaz ke pass jaata hai or apni talwaar ko zamin mai gadte huye Taaz uthate huye bolta hai........

Lawdasur : Bura ka ant burai se hi shi

Ye bol kar Lawdasur wo Taaz apne sir par pahen leta hai Taaz pahnte hi uske sharir mai ek bijli jese dudne lagti hai or uska sarir kayi jagh se fatne lagta hai or wo zamin par gir padta hai thodi der tak Lawdasur jamin par gira pada hua tha uske baad wo apne ghutno de bal uth kar betha hai or apne dono haatho ki trf dekhta hai to pata hai uske thaaho ke saare jakham gayab thye or haatho ke saath saath uske saare sharir ke bhi jakham gayab ho chuke thye yaha tak ki uska wo pair bhi ab thik-thak nazar arha tha ho jo abhi thodi samay pahle illidan se ladne mai kharab ho gya tha

Lawdasur ko apni body mai ek alg hi trh ki power mahsus hone lagti hai usse pata chal gya tha ki ab wo koi sadharan Lawdasur nahi raha ab uske pass do chize hai phli ek illidan ki wo talwaar jisse wo koi bhi hattiyaar bana sakta hai or dusri ye Taaz Lawdasur ko ab itna hi anumaan lagna baaki tha or jab use ye anumaan lag chuka tha to ab usnai apne raajy ke aas pass raajiyo mai kahar dhana suru kar diya koi bhi raajy uske saamne tik nhi paate thye kisi bhi raajy ki raajao ki powers uske Taaz ki power ke saamne nahi chal paati thi or sabhi raajyo ko haarna padta tha sabhi raajyo ko hara kar Lawdasur nai shirf ek hi raajy banaya jiska naam "kingdom of Lawdasur" rakha gya or esi bich Lawdasur nai kayi taantariko se Teleportsion, fire power ka gyaan pratap kar chuka tha kahi naa khi use Ye lagta tha thi agr kabhi wo Taaz yaa talwaar ke bina rahega to uske pass khud ki koi power hone chahiye or Lawdasur ka ye sochna ek din kaam kar gya jab Ajgar or najumi nai uski talwaar or Taaz usse chin liya tha tab shirf uske pass shirf uski hi teleportsion or fire power thyi jiski madat se wo waha se bhaag nikalta tha

Ansh : Hmm yaar tumne to bahot kasht uthaye hai magr mujhe ek baat ye samjh mai nahi aayi wo taaz sharapit kese hai kya sharap hai us taaz ko tumne to ye nahi bataya mujhe.....?

Lawdasur : Taaz koi sharapit nahi hai

Ansh : Umm..... Par tumne abhi mujhe bataya ki tumhare lok mai sharapit jungle mai wo sharapit taaz thi jo tumne use leliya hai......?

Lawdasur : wo sharapit taaz nahi hai balki taaz dharan karne waala sharapit ho jaata hai

Ansh : kyaaaaaa Abe mujhe sharapit taaz pehna diya ab mai sharapit ho gya yaar ab mai kya karu kis ke pass jaau

Lawdasur : Ansh....... Ansh

Ansh : Abe kya Ansh ansh meri gaand maar di sharapit taaz pahna kar

Lawdasur : Ansh meri baat to suno puri

Ansh : ab kiya sunna hai ab mai sharapit ho gya yaar ab meri gaand mara jaayegi ab mai kaha jaau Kiske pass dada ji ko bataa du kya, nahi nahi h ankit ko bata deta hu wo sayad meri kuch madat kar de lekin bc wo mazak samjhega koi yakin nahi karega mera ab mai kya karu batao ab mai kya karu

Ansh : tum chup kiyu ho kuch batate kiyu nhi ho es sharap se kese mai chutkara paau

Lawdasur : tum pahale apna muh to band karoge tab naa mai kuch bolu

Ansh : umm........ oh ok ab bolo

Lawdasur : taaz sharapit nahi hai balki wo ek Kaali duniya ka aane ka Marg hai use hm Kaali duniya ka darwaja bhi kah sakte hai

Ansh : darwaja.....?

Lawdasur : H darwaja jab maine taaz dharan kiya tha tab mujhe taaz ki shaktiya Bahot achi lagne lagi thyi ek adbhut shaktiy Jiski powers ki koi had nahi Aesa maano jese tum khud ek shaktisaali ho khud shaktimaan ho

Ansh : kya kaha shaktimaan Wo jo Bachchan mai tv par Durdarshan channel par aata tha

Lawdasur : yaaaah mai yaha real apni kahani bata raha hu or tum tv ki baat kar rahe ho Tum yaar meri baat to suno phle

Ansh : oh

Lawdasur : taaz ki power ka koi ant nahi hai or naa hi uski koi Hadd hai taaz kitna shaktisaali tha or usmai kon kon se powers thye ye pata lagane ke liye maine kuch jaadugaro or taantariko se pata lagaya to pata chala wo Kaali duniya ka ek aane ka Marg hai jisse hamare lok ke bahar ki kaali shaktiya aa sakti hai or hamare lok ko samapt kar sakti hai

Lawdasur : ye baat jab mujhe pata chali tb se hi mai wo kaali shaktiyo ke aane ka Marg ka darwaja bhundhne ki koshish karne laga lekin hamre sabhi jadugar or tantrik ye kabhi pata nhi laga paaye ki wo darwaja kha hai or kese khulega maine bahot saalo se es baat ko jaanne ki khoshish karta rha par mujhe kuch nhi pata chala jo jab pata chala tab Taaz mere haatho se jaa chuka tha

Ansh : kya pata chala kaha hai wo darwaja......?

Lawdasur : wo darwaja kahi or nhi balki wo khud Taaz hi darwaja hai

Ansh : Kya kaha Taaz hi wo kaali shaktiyo ke aane ka darwaja hai

Lawdasur : H Ansh wo khud ek darwaja hai or ye baat mujhe tab pata chala tab ajgar nai Taaz ko tudne ki khoshish ki

Ansh : Lekin wo ajgar un kaali shaktiyo ko kiyu bulana chahta hai

Lawdasur : Pata nhi lekin

Ansh : dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai ok ab chalo ghr chalte hain

Jese hi Ansh park se nikalne waala hota hai tabhi Lawdasur use ruk deta hai

Lawdasur : Ansh ruko

Ansh : kya hua ab.......?

Lawdasur : hummmm..... Haaaaaa.... Ye khushbu

Ansh : khushbu.......? Kesi khushbu

Lawdasur : Udhar se aarhi hai tumhari left se

Ansh apne left side ki trf dekhta hai to usse thodi hi duri par ek ped dikhai deta hai or us ped ke piche se kisi trh ka dhuwa aate huye dikhayi deta hai jise dekh kar Ansh jab waha ped ke pass jata hai to dekhta hai waha teen aadmi bethye huye thye jinke haatho mai chilam tha jo usse hi wo log dhuwa nikal kar bahar hawa mai chhod rahe thye jise dekh kar Lawdasur khus hote huye bolta hai

Lawdasur : are waah Tutima

Ansh : ( man mai) Tutima......?

Lawdasur : h Tutima mera pasindida

Ansh : (man mai) pasindida..... Abe yaar ye ganja hai

Lawdasur : H wo tumhare lok mai bula jaata hoga par mere log mai ese Tutima bolte hai jaya inse maango

Ansh : ( man mai) kya kaha maangu par kiyu......?

Lawdasur : pine ke liye

Ansh : (man mai) kya pine ke liye tumhara dimaag to thik hai naa

Lawdasur : Tum ek baar pi kar dekho to tumhe maza aayega Ansh

Ansh : ( man mai) nhi nhi mai nhi pine wala samjhe tum

Abhi Ansh Lawdasur se baate hi kar raha tha ki tabhi waha ganja pine waalo mai se ek aadmi bolta hai

Aadmi : kya hua bacche pina hai kya aa pi le bhai tu bhi

Ansh : are nhi thank you mai nhi pita

Lawdasur : pile Ansh zindgi ka maza hai

Ansh : (man mai) nhi to nhi

Tabhi dusra aadmi chilam ko Ansh ki trf badhate huye bolta hai

Aadmi : soch kya raha hai bacche aaja or ek do kash maar le tujhe teri saari thakan or saare tension dur ho jaayenge

Ansh : (man mai) tension dur ho jaayenge bhala ese pine se kese tension dur ho jaayenge

Lawdasur : phle pi to le saare tension dur ho jaayega

Ansh : ( man mai) tum apna muh band kro jara tum to khud ek tension ho

Ye bol kar Ansh chilam pakadta hai or ek kast leta jese hi wo chilam ki phli kast leta hai use joro se khasi aajati hai jisse wo khasne lagta hai or use khasta hua dekh kar wo teeno aadmi haste huye bolte hai

Admi : koi baat nhi phli baar hota hai tum bubaara kast maaro lekin dhayan rahe dhuwa gale tak naa jaaye

Ansh badi hi shawdhaani ke saath kast maarta hai usnai 4,5 kast maara hi tha ki wo apni duniya mai kho jaata hai use har chiz achi lagne lagti hai apne haatho mai pakdi huyi chilam chilam mai jalti huyi gaanje ki khushbu yaha tak ki uska sharir bhi halka-halka saa mahsus lagne lagta hai ye hi sab ki anubhuti karte huye Ansh bad-badaate huye kahata hai

Ansh : are waah kya kamal ki chiz hai yaar ye to maza hi aagya dost agr aap ki izzat ho to 1,2 baar or pilu please

Aadmi : ab tumne hame dost dola to maarle

Ansh 1,2 kast or maarne ke baad chilam unko de deta hai or apne jeb se unko 100 rupay nikal kar deta hai wo teeno aadmi dikhne mai koi majdur hi lag rahe thye

Aadmi : are ye kya dost bhi bolta hai or paise bhi deta hai kya yaar

Ansh : are nahi ye aap log apne paise se laaye honge to ye uske liye aap phir se apne liye kharid lena please rakh lo

US aadmi nai Ansh se 100 ka note lete huye use ek gaanje ki pudiya or ek chilam thama deta hai or bolta hai

Aadmi : chal teri baat maan li ab tu ye rakh le mana mat karna

Ansh : ok Thanx

Thoda der Ansh wahi betha hai or jese hi use kuch halka saa gaanja ka asar kam hote huye mahsus hota hai to wo apne ghr ki trf nikal jata hai

Dusri trf..........

Sandhiya ko suchna milti hai ki jo Buddha sp office aaya tha use kisi park mai dehosi mai paaya gya hai or ab use hospital mai rakha gya hai jisse milne ke liye Sandhiya waha chali jaati hai

Sandhiya : Aap jara batane ka kast karenge aap aaj subh sp office kiyu gye thye

Buddha : Kya kaha aap nai mai bhala sp office kiyu jaaunga mai to subha park mai gya tha daily hi jaata hu par pata nhi aaj waha kiyu behosh ho gya acha khasa mai park mai tahal raha tha jab wo ladki mere pass aayi

Sandhiya : ladki kon ladki........

Buddha : pata nhi kon ladki thi maine kabhi use park mai nhi dekha tha wo mere pass aayi

Buddha aadmi nai Sandhiya ko waha ki haalat bata diya jo kuch uske saath bita tha

Sandhiya apne pass waale hawldaar se khati hai......

Sandhiya : thik hai inka bayan lelo or inke pahchan waalo ko suchit kardo

Hawldaar : ji madam

Sandhiya : ( man mai) phir se ek ladki aakhir ye ladki hai kon or ye chahti kya hai kya hai iska maksad



Ansh ka Ghar..........


Saam ko sabhi dinar kar rahe thye ek saath beth kar or subhash ji bhi aagye thye or unhone bataya ki Sp vishwash ka kal subh body postmortem ho kar aayegi or kal hi Saara kirya karm ho jayega

Dihre - dhire sab apna apna dinar nipta kar apne apne room mai chale jaate hai shayama apne room ka darwaja jese hi band karti hai wese hi Ansh ke darwaje ke niche se Dhuwa bahar nikalne lagta hai.

Ab aage.......
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Sandhiya Ye jaan payegi Wo ladki Rudaali kon hai or uska maksad kiya hai, ab Ansh kya karne waala hai ye jaanne ke liye bane rahe hamare saath or likes, comments, reviews karna naa bhule

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lucky@khan bhai.....
Nice and beautiful update.....

 

[Waseem]

Kamaal

 

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Update 19
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Hm readers nai pichi baar dekha ek trf Ansh or Rudaali ek dusre se bhid gye thye or Dusri trf subhash ko kabar lag gyi thi ki sp vishwash ka kisi nai hattya kar diya hai jise dekhne ke liye wo Ansh ke saath chale jaate hai or wahi par sandhya bhi thi jo kisi se baate kar rahi thi wo bhi Rudaali ke baare mai.


AAb Aage........
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Ansh : ( man mai ) ye madam kis Rudaali ki baat kar rahi thyi

Lawdasur : Pata nhi yaar par uski baato se mujhe lagta hai ye usi Rudaali ki baat kar rahi hai

Ansh : ( man mai ) par ye baat kisse kar rahi thi or gyi kaha

Luwdasur : mujhe lagta hai jisse bhi baat kar rahi thi usi ke pass gyi hai

Ansh : ( man mai ) Hmm hme inka picha karna chahiye

Lawdasur : picha.... Par kiyu.....?

Ansh : Dekha to jaaye ye usi Rudaali ke liye gyi hai yaa kisi or Rudaali ke liye agr waha mujhe Rudaali mil gyi to use maza charkha dunga pichli baar to bach ke bhaag gyi thyi par ab nhi bach sakegi

Lawdasur : pagal mat bano Ansh Tumhe kya lagta hai tum Rudaali se Takra sakte ho wo bhi bina Taaz ki power ke bager sayad tumne Rudaali ko halke mai le liya hai ansh

Ansh : ( man mai) Umm....?

Lawdasur : jis hisaab se wo tumse lad rahi thi mujhe nahi lagta hai wo tum se seriously lad rahi thi phir bhi wo tumpar bhari pad rahi thi or wo tumko hara bhi sakti thi par pata nhi aesa kya hua jo wo ek dum se ladna chhod kar waha se chali gyi

Ansh : pata nhi yaar wo kiyu bhaag gyi par tumhari ek baat shi lgti hai us time mujhe bhi lag raha tha ki mai usse ab or nahi lad paunga

Ansh : phir bhi hme chalna chahiye ye pata karne ke liye ki madam jis Rudaali ka naam le rahi thi ye wahi hai yaa nhi

Ansh : tumne ek baat notice nhi ki Rudaali to Hmse Taaz lene aayi hai to ye madam ko Uski kabar kese hai khi kuch to hai yaar hme pata lagana hoga

Lawdasur : Wo to tum thik kaha rahe ho Ansh par tum yaha se jaaoge kese

Ansh : (man mai) kese kya yaar apni bike se madam ka picha karte hai naa

Lawdasur : or tumhare dada ji

Ansh : Dada ji....? Mtlb Oh yaar ye to maine socha hi nhi dada ji se kya bol kar jau....?

Ansh abhi ye hi soch raha tha ki wo kese apne dada se koi saa bahana kar ke waha se nikal jaaye tabhi uske dada nai usko awaaj diya

Subhash : Ansh

Ansh : ji dada

Ansh apne dada ke pass aata hai or Subhash ji usse Kahate hai......

Subhash : beta tum ghr chale jaao mai Sayam ke saath uske ghr jaunga thoda uske ghr par ruk ke hi ghr aaunga beta agr jarurat padi to mai Ranjeet yaa Aanand ko bula lunga wo log mujhe ghr chhod denge tum ab jao

Ye baat sunke Ansh ander hi ander khus ho jata hai or apne dada ko H bol kar waha se apni bike lekar sandhya ki Gaadi ka picha karne lag jata hai single road hone ki wajh se Sandhiya ki Gaadi Dikh jaati hai or kuch hi der baad sandhya ki Gaadi ek hospital ke bahar rukti hai or fat se Sandhiya Gaadi se nikal kar hospital ke ander jaane ke liye teji ke saath badhti hai jise dekh kar ansh Lawdasur se bolta hai

Ansh : ( man mai) ye yaha hospital mai kiyu aayi hai.....?

Lawdasur : pata nhi ab ander jaa kar pata chalega

Ansh : ( man mai) hmm chalo tab

Sandhiya icu ke room mai aajati hai or uske piche piche Ansh icu ke gate ke bahar rukjata hai or gate thoda khula rakta hai

Icu ke ander ek police waala betha hua tha or jese hi wo Sandhiya ko ander aate huye dekhta hai to fat se apni jagh se khada hote huye Sandhiya ko salute maarta hai or ye wahi insaan hai jisnai Sandhiya ko phone kar ke Bata raha tha

Sandhiya apne saamne ek ventilator par lete ek aadmi ke pass jaate huye kahti hai........



Sandhiya : Bolo sanjay Kon hai wo log jisnai pahadi ke pass bite 2 raato mai Sabhi police waalo ko maara hai kitne log thye, kya unmai se kisi ko tum pahchante ho yaa unka Huliya bata sakte ho to mai sketch expert ko bula lu

Sanjay : Mam wo..... Wo.. Cc.... Chaku.....Tal.....talwaar Gayyyyyyb maaaaar..... Maaarrrr

Sandhiya : h chaku chaku kya sanjay bolo aage bolo

Sanjay thoda hichkicha kar dol raha tha or uski awaaj bhi uske gale se thodi si dhimi nikal rahi thi jiske karan Sandhiya ko kuch kuch samjh mai aarha tha to kuch kuch samjh mai nhi aarha tha

Sanjay : C.... C.... Chaku, Talwaar, Gayab

Sandhiya : Aage kya sanjay kya chaku, talwaar, gayab bolo sanjay

Sandhiya ke ek saath itne sawaalo ki jhadi laddta hua dekh kar waha khada wo police waala bol padta hai....

Policewala : madam ji thoda araam se puchiye doctor nai bola hai eski halat abhi najuk hai to hme esse kam baat chit karna hai maine esse pucha to bas ye itna hi bola Rudaali, talwaar, chaku, gayab

Ansh : ( man mai) Rudaali.......?

Icu ka darwaja thoda khula rahne ki wajh se ander ki baat bahar khade Ansh sun paa raha tha

Sandhiya ko bhi lagne laga ki sayad usnai kuch jayada hi jaldbaaji mai itne sawal puch diye wo apne aapko thoda shant karte huye sanjay se bade hi aram se puchti hai

Sandhiya : tum aram se batao or saaf bolne ki koshish karo taaki mujhe tumhari baat samjh mai aaye

Sanjay : m.... Mam in sab ke piche shirf e...... ek.... ek ladki hai Or uske pass chaku, talwaar or G... G.... gayab hone ki shaktiya hai

Sanjay ki saanse ukhadi ukhadi si lag rahi thyi use bolne mai taklif ho rahi thi jiske karan Sandhiya ko phir se sanjay ki aadhi baat samjh mai aarhi thi or aadhi nhi

Sandhiya : mai kuch samjhi nhi sanjay kiya tum mujhe suru se bata sakte ho

Sanjay ki saanse ab kuch jayada hi ukhadne lagi thyi or ab uski saanse ful bhi rahi thi use bolne mai taklif bhi ho raha tha wo jab bolta to uske gale mai dard hone lagta hai magr fir bhi wo apne dard ki pida ko bardash karte huye Sandhiya ko bataye jaa raha tha or thodi hi der mai wo Sandhiya ko suru se saari baate bata deta hai Kese Raaju apne dosto ke saath pahad waale jgh par gya tha to use waha par ek ladki milti hai jo uska Haath kaat deti hai or jab uski team raju ke do saathi or apni team ke saath wo pahad waali jagh gye to waha kya kya hua or kese usne dar ke maare Rudaali ki madat ki Ansh ka pata lagane mai or usne hi S.P vishwash se pata lagane ke liya bhi Rudaali ko bataya or kese Rudaali nai Inspector balveer ke saath saath uske pure team ko bhi khatam kiya or last mai kese usnai sanjay ko bhi chalti huyi trak ke aage phek diya suru se last tak aap biti Sandhiya ko sab kuch bata deta hai

Sandhiya sanjay ki baate snukar ek dum shaant khadi thyi or use dekh kar aesa lag raha tha jese uska dimaag kaam karna band ho gya ho wo bs ek taktaki nazar kar ke sanjay ko dekhe jaa rahi thyi or idhar icu ke bahar gate par sanjay ki baate sunkar Ansh ke sharir mai ek current saa mahsusu hota hai

Sandhiya : Sanjay lagta hai tumhe abhi araam ki jarurat hai tum kya bol rahe ho tumko kuch samjh mai aa raha bhi hai yaa nhi bhala koi Gayab kese ho sakta hai or koi kisi ka Roop kese badal sakta hai, koi baat nhi tum abhi araam karo jab tumko lagne lagega ki tum ab thik ho to apna bayaan dedena ok

Sanjay : nhi mam mai s... Sach bol. Raha hu wo sab ko m... Maar degi k.... Kisi ko n.... Nhi chhodegi sab ko m.... M.... Maar........

Itna bolte huye sanjay ki dono aankho ki putliya uper ki trf ho jaati hai or wo mar jaata hai jise dekh kar Sandhiya ghabraate huye sanjay ka dono side khande ko pakad kar hilaate huye kahati hai.......

Sandhiya : sanjay...... Sanjay..... O god Doctor ko bulaao

Inspector : ji mam

Itna bol kar wo inspector icu ke bahar jaane lag jaata hai apni tarf inspector ko aate dekh kar ansh waha se nikal kar hospital ke bahar aajata hai or apni bike start kar ke nikal jaata hai Kuch der baad Ansh apni bike ek park ke pass rukta hai or bike se utar kar wo park mai chala jata hai tabhi Lawdasur kahta hai

Lawdasur : kya hua tum yaha kiyu ruk gye......????

Ansh : ( man mai) Tumne hospital mai us aadmi ki baat suni wo kya kah raha tha Rudaali nai bahot police waalo ko mara hai, or shirf Mujhse Taaz lene ke liye, or Mujhe dhundte huye wo Sp vishwash uncle ke paas bhi gyi or waha par unke saath saath sabhi ko maar diya

Ansh chillate huye kahta hai........

Ansh : Yaaaahhhhhh......... Ye kya ho raha hai Ek Ladki ek Taaz ke liye itne saare logo ko kese maar sakti hai wo bhi shirf ek Taaz ke liye

Lawdasur : Wo Taaz koi aam yaa sadharn Taaz nhi hai Ansh es Taaz ke liye naa jaane kitne saare log maare gye or naa jaane or kitne maare jayenge

Ansh : ( man mai) matlb mai kuch samjha nhi....?

Lawdasur : batata hu mai tumko.....

Lawdasur Ansh ko batata hai jab wo apne Raajy Lawdasur raajy ka raaja tha tab uske raajy mai bahot Vikas ho raha tha uska raajy modern technique karne mai aage tha jiski wajh se waha ke aap pas raajyo ko uske raajy se jaln hone lagti thyi or esi jaln ke chalte wo hamesa Lawdasur raajy par hamla kar ke uske raajy ko kabja karne ki koshish karte rahte thye magr Lawdasur ke suj-buj or hamla karne ka tarika se wo hamesa maat khaa jaate thye

wo khate hai naa Agr leader budhimaan ho to wo hajaro ki bhid kuch hi Minto mai jama kar sakta hai or kuch hi mintu mai hajaro ki bhid hata-bata sakta hai

aesa hi kuch tha Lawdasur wo hamesa apne raajy ko ek acha raajy banana chahta tha usne kabhi bhi kisi dusre raajy par hamla nhi kiya wo shirf apne raajy mai hi khus tha, magr uski ye khusi jayada dino tak nhi chali ek din waha ke aap pass ke sabhi raajiyo nai milkar uske raajy par ek saath hamla kardiya saamne waale ki sainaye uske sainao ke mukable karib 40 Gunna jayada thi or unmai se kuch raajyo ke raajao ke pass apni-apni powers thi jis wajh se use wah jag haarna padta hai or uska raajy kabza ho jaata hai badi muskil se wo apne aap ko bachte-bachate huye jungle ki trf bhaag jaata hai use maalum tha ki uske piche es jungle mai koi nahi aayega kiyu ke ye jungle ek sharapit jungle thi

Lawdasur apne aap ko to bacha kar jungle mai aajata hai or jab wo jungle ke bicho bich aata hai to use ahshas hota hai ki usnai bahot badi galti kar di hai yaha aakar Lawdasur abhi wapas jungle se bahar nikalne ke liye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi use koi halchal sunai dene lagti hai wo apne charo tarf dekhne ki khoshish karta hai magr waha jayada kohra hone ki wajh se use kuch saaf-saaf nhi dikhai de rahi thi halchal badhne lag jaati hai Aesa lag raha tha koi chiz hawa mai ud raha ho jise sunkar Lawdasur ghabrajata hai or apni talwaar ko apni mutthi mai kas leta hai

Lawdasur ke ander dar sama chuka tha use itna to abhas ho chuka tha ki yaha kuch to hai jo uski hi trf bahd raha hai Lawdasur talwaar ko or bhi jayada kas kar pakde huye apne charo tarh dekhe jaa raha tha ki tbhi koi hawa mai udta hua uske saamne aata hai or uske sine par apne dono laato se maarta hai jiske wajh se Lawdasur piche ke bal jaa girta hai

Lawdasur apne aap ko sambhalte huye khada hota hai tabhi use ek baar or jor daar dhakka lagta hai or wo phir niche gir jaata hai

Lawdasur zamin par gira pada hua tha wo lete lete hi apne saamne dekhne ki koshish karta hai magr kohra hone ki wajh se use saaf kuch dikhayi nhi deta phir bhi use thoda bahot kuch kuch dikhayi de raha tha uski trf koi aarha tha or wo jese jese uski trf aata jaa raha tha wese wese hi wo dikhayi bhi dene lagta hai karib 10 kadam ki duri par wo aakar khada ho gya or kahne laga

??? : Tumne yaha aakar Galti ki yaha bahot se log Taaz lene ke liye aaye magr koi wapas zinda nahi jaa paya, jo bhi Taaz lene ke liye aaya maine usse uski jaan leli aur ab tumhari bhi jaan mai lunga



illidan Taaz ka pahredaar.........


use dekhte hi Lawdasur ke rongate khade ho jaate hai or honge bhi kiyu nahi uske saamne ko shaks khada tha wo koi sadharan nahi tha uska kad kaafi bada tha karib-karib Lawdasur ke kad se dhed guna bada uski laal laal aankhe thi uski bhujaaye kaafi majbut or kasi huyi thi or uske pith ke piche do bade-bade par (wing) thye uske sir par do bade-bade Singh ( horn) lage thye or use dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki wo kitna shaktishaali hai wo apne right hand mai apni talwaar ko ghumaate huye kahata hai

Illiadn : Yaha jo bhi aaya wo apni jaan gawa betha yaha jo bhi Taaz lene ke liye aaya maine uske sharir ke tukde-tukde kar diye ab tumhari baari hai Hwewweww

Ye bol kar wo Lawdasur par waar karta hai or Lawdasur apni talwaar se uska waar rok deta hai or kahata hai



Lawdasur : nahi mai yaha wo sharapit Taaz lene ke maksad se nahi aaya hu mai to bas.........

Lawdasur nai itna hi kaha ta ki use apne pet par ek laat padne ka ahsha hota hai or wo dur jaa girta hai

Illiadn : Tum chahe koi bhi bahana karlo tum maroge hi mai Taaz ka pahredaar hu or mere rahte huye koi bhi Taaz nahi le sakta hai

Lawdasur apni jagh se khada hota hai or wo badi hi gusse mai kahta hai.....

Lawdasur : To tumhare marne ke baad to

Illiadn :... .???

Dono mai Ghamasan suru ho jaati hai



Kaafi der tak dono ek dusre se tadte rahte hai mage Lawdasur par Illiadn hawi ho raha tha or kaafi had tak Lawdasur ko chhote lagi thyi or esi bich Lawdasur nai bhi Illiadn ke sine par ek waar kar diya tha jiske chalte illidan hawa mai udte huye kahta hai

Illiadn : Hmm acha ladlete ho acha talwaarbaaj ho magr itna acha talwaarbaaj hone ka kiya fayda wese bhi tum marne waale hi ho

kaafi der tak ladai karne se Lawdasur thak chuka tha ab uska saath uska sharir nahi de paa raha tha uski talwaar ab use bhari bhari saa mahsus hone lagti hai jiske wajh se uske muthiyo se uski talwaar chhut kar niche gir jaati hai thakan ke wajh se wo apna kawach bhi nikal fekta hai ab to nihatta ho chuka tha wo itna thak gya tha ki use apne pairo par bhi khada hone mai dikkat ho rahi thi or uska ek left pair bhi khayal ho chuka tha or ye sab hote huye dekh kar Illiadn hasta hai or bolta hai.........

Illiadn : Hahaha tum to thak gye lekin phir bhi tum auro se kaafi der tak tike rahe mere saamne kaafi himmat hai tumhare ander lekin itna himmat ka kiya fayda jab tumko mere haatho hi marna hai Hahahaha

Itna bol kar wo tezi ke saath hawa mai udta huwa Lawdasur ke pass aata hai or apni talwaar Lawdasur ka gala kaatne ke liye badhata hai abhi uski talwaar Lawdasur ke gale se thodi hi duri par thi ki achanak pata nahi kaha se Lawdasur ke sharir mai furti aajati hai or wo side hattaye huye apni kamr mai lage Chaaku ko nikalta hai or Illiadn ke pith par kud jaata hai pith par aate hi Lawdasur chaaku ko uske pith mai ghusa deta hai jisse illidan hakka bakka rah jaata hai use samjh mai hi nahi aata hai ki ye sab itni jaldi kese ho gya

Lawdasur thaka jarur tha par uski himmat tuti nahi thyi or wo ye bhi jaan gya tha ki jab tak illidan udta rahega tab tak wo usse kabi bhi jit nahi paayega es liye usnai ek saryant racha usnai apni talwaar or kawach es liye pek diya taaki wo jab illidan ke pith par jaaye to uski raftaar tez ho raftaar tez hone ke liye hi usnai apne sharir se wajan kam kiya tha

Apni pith par Chaaku lagte hi illidan uper ki trf uddane lag jaata hai wo assmaan mai uper jaa kar Hawe mai gota lagane chahta hai taaki gota lagane se uski pith par se Lawdasur gir jaaye magr uska ye plan fel ho jaata hai jab Lawdasur uski ek left par ( wing) ko apne left haath se pakad kar Illiadn ki pith se chaaku nikal kar uske right par (wing) ko chaaku se phad deta hai par (wing) patte hi illidan apna udne ka control kho bhethta hai or wo Lawdasur ke saath sidha zamin par jaa girta hai dono ek dusre se karib 10,15 kadam ki duri par pade huye thye thodi der baad illidan apni jagh se uthta hai uske pith ke piche hi Lawdasur pada hua tha illidan apna right par ( wing) kholne ki koshish karta mai magr wo puri tarah se khol nhi pata jise dekh kar illidan ko samjh mai aajata hai ki wo ab ud nhi sakta uka right par (wing) ab kharab ho chuka hai illidan gusse mai apni dono muthiya bichte huye mudta hai or Lawdasur ke pass aate huye apne dono haatho se uska gala pakad kar use hawa mai utha leta hai

illidan : Maine tujhe kamjor samjh kar galti kar diya magr ab nhi ab tu marega mere haatho

Lawdasur ka gala ghutta chala jaata hai illidan uske gale par barabar dabaw banaye jaa raha tha jis karan Lawdasur ki aankhe uper ko uthne lag jaati hai phir bhi Lawdasur apni himmat ek jut karte huye apne dono haath uthata hai or ek jhatke ke saath wo illidan ke sir ke dono Singh (horn) ko pakad leta hai or apni puri taakat ke saath dono Singh ( horn) ko dono side se ghichne lag jaata hai

Apne Singh ( horn) par dabaw pate hi illidan Lawdasur ka gala or bhi jor se dabane lag jaata hai jise dekh kar Lawdasur apne dono pair illidan ke sine par rakh kar apni puri jaan lagate huye uske dono Singh ( horn) ko do side se chir deta hai Singh ( horn) do side se chira jaane ke karan illidan ka sir do tukkdo mai fat jaata hai or wo wahi gir kar mar jaata hai or use marta huwa dekha kar Lawdasur chillate huye bolta hai......

Lawdasur : Mai........ mai Lawdasur hu Lawdasurrrrrrrr yaaaaahhhhhhhhhh

Lawdasur bahot lahun-luhan ho chuka tha or uska ek pair bhi ache se kaam nahi kar raha tha jiski wajh se use khada hone mai bhi dikkat ho rahi thi Tabhi waha ka mousam thoda saaf hone lagta hai jiski wajh se Lawdasur dekhta hai ki uske saamne hi thodi dur par ek pahad tha jo ki ek minaar ki trh bana hua tha or us minaar ko dekh kar Lawdasur ko samjhte der nahi lagi ki ye wahi minaar hai jo usne sunna tha ki jungle mai shirf ek hi aesa minaar hai jiske uper wo sharaapit Taaz rakha hua hai or us Taaz ki raksha karne ke liye illadan naam ka koi ek Janwar yaa rachach waha rahta hai ye hi sochte huye pata nhi Lawdasur ko kiya sujhta hai ki wo pahle illidan ki talwaar uthata hai or langdate-langdate minaar ki trf jaane lagta hai kuch hi samay mai wo langdate-landate minaar ki upri chhoti par pahuch jaata hai ab uske saamne ek barf ( ice) ki pardashi diwaar thi jo karid 8 feet uchi thi



or us barf ki diwaar ke bicho-bich mai wah Taaz raha huwa tha Taaz dekhne mai badi hi adbhut lag raha tha or us Taaz ke bich mai ek bule color ka Diamond laga hua tha Lawdasur us Taaz ko ek pal ke liye dekhta hai or apni talwaar ko apni muthiya mai pakadte huye diwaar par marne lagta hai kaafi der se wo dewaar par talwaar se war karta rahta hai magr wo diwaar tut nahi rahi thi bas kuch Chhote-Chhote tukde us barf ki diwaar se tut ke niche gir rahe thye ab Lawdasur thak chuka tha magr diwaar tutne ka naam hi nhi le raha tha Achank se Lawdasur ke dimaag mai ek baat ghumne lagti hai jab wo illidan se lad raha tha tab illidan talwaar ko kayi parkaar se badal le raha tha kabhi use do bhaago mai kar deta tha to kabhi use bhala bana deta tha to kabhi kuch or ab illidan ki talwaar uske haatho mai thi matlb ab wo bhi chahe to uski talwaar ko kisi bhi hattiyar mai badal sakta hai ye hi soch kar Lawdasur 4,5 kadam piche hatte huye talwaar ki taraf dekhte hai or apne man hi man mai sochta hai ki talwaar ek hathode mai badal jaaye abhi Lawdasur nai itna hi socha tha ki talwaar ek bhari-bharkam hathode mai badal chuka tha

Talwaar hathode mai badalta dekh kar Lawdasur use majbuti ke saath pakadta hai or badi hi tezi ke saath barf ki diwaar par maara hai jisse diwaar ek hi baar mai gir jaati hai or Taaz uske saamne zamin par padi hui hoti hai Lawdasur Taaz ke pass jaata hai or apni talwaar ko zamin mai gadte huye Taaz uthate huye bolta hai........

Lawdasur : Bura ka ant burai se hi shi

Ye bol kar Lawdasur wo Taaz apne sir par pahen leta hai Taaz pahnte hi uske sharir mai ek bijli jese dudne lagti hai or uska sarir kayi jagh se fatne lagta hai or wo zamin par gir padta hai thodi der tak Lawdasur jamin par gira pada hua tha uske baad wo apne ghutno de bal uth kar betha hai or apne dono haatho ki trf dekhta hai to pata hai uske thaaho ke saare jakham gayab thye or haatho ke saath saath uske saare sharir ke bhi jakham gayab ho chuke thye yaha tak ki uska wo pair bhi ab thik-thak nazar arha tha ho jo abhi thodi samay pahle illidan se ladne mai kharab ho gya tha

Lawdasur ko apni body mai ek alg hi trh ki power mahsus hone lagti hai usse pata chal gya tha ki ab wo koi sadharan Lawdasur nahi raha ab uske pass do chize hai phli ek illidan ki wo talwaar jisse wo koi bhi hattiyaar bana sakta hai or dusri ye Taaz Lawdasur ko ab itna hi anumaan lagna baaki tha or jab use ye anumaan lag chuka tha to ab usnai apne raajy ke aas pass raajiyo mai kahar dhana suru kar diya koi bhi raajy uske saamne tik nhi paate thye kisi bhi raajy ki raajao ki powers uske Taaz ki power ke saamne nahi chal paati thi or sabhi raajyo ko haarna padta tha sabhi raajyo ko hara kar Lawdasur nai shirf ek hi raajy banaya jiska naam "kingdom of Lawdasur" rakha gya or esi bich Lawdasur nai kayi taantariko se Teleportsion, fire power ka gyaan pratap kar chuka tha kahi naa khi use Ye lagta tha thi agr kabhi wo Taaz yaa talwaar ke bina rahega to uske pass khud ki koi power hone chahiye or Lawdasur ka ye sochna ek din kaam kar gya jab Ajgar or najumi nai uski talwaar or Taaz usse chin liya tha tab shirf uske pass shirf uski hi teleportsion or fire power thyi jiski madat se wo waha se bhaag nikalta tha

Ansh : Hmm yaar tumne to bahot kasht uthaye hai magr mujhe ek baat ye samjh mai nahi aayi wo taaz sharapit kese hai kya sharap hai us taaz ko tumne to ye nahi bataya mujhe.....?

Lawdasur : Taaz koi sharapit nahi hai

Ansh : Umm..... Par tumne abhi mujhe bataya ki tumhare lok mai sharapit jungle mai wo sharapit taaz thi jo tumne use leliya hai......?

Lawdasur : wo sharapit taaz nahi hai balki taaz dharan karne waala sharapit ho jaata hai

Ansh : kyaaaaaa Abe mujhe sharapit taaz pehna diya ab mai sharapit ho gya yaar ab mai kya karu kis ke pass jaau

Lawdasur : Ansh....... Ansh

Ansh : Abe kya Ansh ansh meri gaand maar di sharapit taaz pahna kar

Lawdasur : Ansh meri baat to suno puri

Ansh : ab kiya sunna hai ab mai sharapit ho gya yaar ab meri gaand mara jaayegi ab mai kaha jaau Kiske pass dada ji ko bataa du kya, nahi nahi h ankit ko bata deta hu wo sayad meri kuch madat kar de lekin bc wo mazak samjhega koi yakin nahi karega mera ab mai kya karu batao ab mai kya karu

Ansh : tum chup kiyu ho kuch batate kiyu nhi ho es sharap se kese mai chutkara paau

Lawdasur : tum pahale apna muh to band karoge tab naa mai kuch bolu

Ansh : umm........ oh ok ab bolo

Lawdasur : taaz sharapit nahi hai balki wo ek Kaali duniya ka aane ka Marg hai use hm Kaali duniya ka darwaja bhi kah sakte hai

Ansh : darwaja.....?

Lawdasur : H darwaja jab maine taaz dharan kiya tha tab mujhe taaz ki shaktiya Bahot achi lagne lagi thyi ek adbhut shaktiy Jiski powers ki koi had nahi Aesa maano jese tum khud ek shaktisaali ho khud shaktimaan ho

Ansh : kya kaha shaktimaan Wo jo Bachchan mai tv par Durdarshan channel par aata tha

Lawdasur : yaaaah mai yaha real apni kahani bata raha hu or tum tv ki baat kar rahe ho Tum yaar meri baat to suno phle

Ansh : oh

Lawdasur : taaz ki power ka koi ant nahi hai or naa hi uski koi Hadd hai taaz kitna shaktisaali tha or usmai kon kon se powers thye ye pata lagane ke liye maine kuch jaadugaro or taantariko se pata lagaya to pata chala wo Kaali duniya ka ek aane ka Marg hai jisse hamare lok ke bahar ki kaali shaktiya aa sakti hai or hamare lok ko samapt kar sakti hai

Lawdasur : ye baat jab mujhe pata chali tb se hi mai wo kaali shaktiyo ke aane ka Marg ka darwaja bhundhne ki koshish karne laga lekin hamre sabhi jadugar or tantrik ye kabhi pata nhi laga paaye ki wo darwaja kha hai or kese khulega maine bahot saalo se es baat ko jaanne ki khoshish karta rha par mujhe kuch nhi pata chala jo jab pata chala tab Taaz mere haatho se jaa chuka tha

Ansh : kya pata chala kaha hai wo darwaja......?

Lawdasur : wo darwaja kahi or nhi balki wo khud Taaz hi darwaja hai

Ansh : Kya kaha Taaz hi wo kaali shaktiyo ke aane ka darwaja hai

Lawdasur : H Ansh wo khud ek darwaja hai or ye baat mujhe tab pata chala tab ajgar nai Taaz ko tudne ki khoshish ki

Ansh : Lekin wo ajgar un kaali shaktiyo ko kiyu bulana chahta hai

Lawdasur : Pata nhi lekin

Ansh : dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai ok ab chalo ghr chalte hain

Jese hi Ansh park se nikalne waala hota hai tabhi Lawdasur use ruk deta hai

Lawdasur : Ansh ruko

Ansh : kya hua ab.......?

Lawdasur : hummmm..... Haaaaaa.... Ye khushbu

Ansh : khushbu.......? Kesi khushbu

Lawdasur : Udhar se aarhi hai tumhari left se

Ansh apne left side ki trf dekhta hai to usse thodi hi duri par ek ped dikhai deta hai or us ped ke piche se kisi trh ka dhuwa aate huye dikhayi deta hai jise dekh kar Ansh jab waha ped ke pass jata hai to dekhta hai waha teen aadmi bethye huye thye jinke haatho mai chilam tha jo usse hi wo log dhuwa nikal kar bahar hawa mai chhod rahe thye jise dekh kar Lawdasur khus hote huye bolta hai

Lawdasur : are waah Tutima

Ansh : ( man mai) Tutima......?

Lawdasur : h Tutima mera pasindida

Ansh : (man mai) pasindida..... Abe yaar ye ganja hai

Lawdasur : H wo tumhare lok mai bula jaata hoga par mere log mai ese Tutima bolte hai jaya inse maango

Ansh : ( man mai) kya kaha maangu par kiyu......?

Lawdasur : pine ke liye

Ansh : (man mai) kya pine ke liye tumhara dimaag to thik hai naa

Lawdasur : Tum ek baar pi kar dekho to tumhe maza aayega Ansh

Ansh : ( man mai) nhi nhi mai nhi pine wala samjhe tum

Abhi Ansh Lawdasur se baate hi kar raha tha ki tabhi waha ganja pine waalo mai se ek aadmi bolta hai

Aadmi : kya hua bacche pina hai kya aa pi le bhai tu bhi

Ansh : are nhi thank you mai nhi pita

Lawdasur : pile Ansh zindgi ka maza hai

Ansh : (man mai) nhi to nhi

Tabhi dusra aadmi chilam ko Ansh ki trf badhate huye bolta hai

Aadmi : soch kya raha hai bacche aaja or ek do kash maar le tujhe teri saari thakan or saare tension dur ho jaayenge

Ansh : (man mai) tension dur ho jaayenge bhala ese pine se kese tension dur ho jaayenge

Lawdasur : phle pi to le saare tension dur ho jaayega

Ansh : ( man mai) tum apna muh band kro jara tum to khud ek tension ho

Ye bol kar Ansh chilam pakadta hai or ek kast leta jese hi wo chilam ki phli kast leta hai use joro se khasi aajati hai jisse wo khasne lagta hai or use khasta hua dekh kar wo teeno aadmi haste huye bolte hai

Admi : koi baat nhi phli baar hota hai tum bubaara kast maaro lekin dhayan rahe dhuwa gale tak naa jaaye

Ansh badi hi shawdhaani ke saath kast maarta hai usnai 4,5 kast maara hi tha ki wo apni duniya mai kho jaata hai use har chiz achi lagne lagti hai apne haatho mai pakdi huyi chilam chilam mai jalti huyi gaanje ki khushbu yaha tak ki uska sharir bhi halka-halka saa mahsus lagne lagta hai ye hi sab ki anubhuti karte huye Ansh bad-badaate huye kahata hai

Ansh : are waah kya kamal ki chiz hai yaar ye to maza hi aagya dost agr aap ki izzat ho to 1,2 baar or pilu please

Aadmi : ab tumne hame dost dola to maarle

Ansh 1,2 kast or maarne ke baad chilam unko de deta hai or apne jeb se unko 100 rupay nikal kar deta hai wo teeno aadmi dikhne mai koi majdur hi lag rahe thye

Aadmi : are ye kya dost bhi bolta hai or paise bhi deta hai kya yaar

Ansh : are nahi ye aap log apne paise se laaye honge to ye uske liye aap phir se apne liye kharid lena please rakh lo

US aadmi nai Ansh se 100 ka note lete huye use ek gaanje ki pudiya or ek chilam thama deta hai or bolta hai

Aadmi : chal teri baat maan li ab tu ye rakh le mana mat karna

Ansh : ok Thanx

Thoda der Ansh wahi betha hai or jese hi use kuch halka saa gaanja ka asar kam hote huye mahsus hota hai to wo apne ghr ki trf nikal jata hai

Dusri trf..........

Sandhiya ko suchna milti hai ki jo Buddha sp office aaya tha use kisi park mai dehosi mai paaya gya hai or ab use hospital mai rakha gya hai jisse milne ke liye Sandhiya waha chali jaati hai

Sandhiya : Aap jara batane ka kast karenge aap aaj subh sp office kiyu gye thye

Buddha : Kya kaha aap nai mai bhala sp office kiyu jaaunga mai to subha park mai gya tha daily hi jaata hu par pata nhi aaj waha kiyu behosh ho gya acha khasa mai park mai tahal raha tha jab wo ladki mere pass aayi

Sandhiya : ladki kon ladki........

Buddha : pata nhi kon ladki thi maine kabhi use park mai nhi dekha tha wo mere pass aayi

Buddha aadmi nai Sandhiya ko waha ki haalat bata diya jo kuch uske saath bita tha

Sandhiya apne pass waale hawldaar se khati hai......

Sandhiya : thik hai inka bayan lelo or inke pahchan waalo ko suchit kardo

Hawldaar : ji madam

Sandhiya : ( man mai) phir se ek ladki aakhir ye ladki hai kon or ye chahti kya hai kya hai iska maksad



Ansh ka Ghar..........


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