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Update 27
Kuch dair aise he bate chalte rahe aise he do din beet gai or a gai amawas ke raat
Thek bara baje 4 log kale labade me ik kai ke pass kare the or har ik ke hath me ik kala chaku tha
Admi 1…waqt a gaya hai dosto
Ye sunte he sab ne apni apni garden pe chaku rakh ke pair diya or khud ko kai me gira diya
Abbi mushkhil se 10 min he guzre ho ge ke puri darti hilne lag gai or us ke sath he ik khufnak hansi gunjne lagi or sath he ik saaya namudar ho gaya
Saya…hahahaha me azad ho gaya ab pore brahman me mera raj ho ga hahaha likin pehle apne dushman ko khatam kar ke apna wada b pora karna hai hahahaha
Wahi dusri taraf jab bokhamp ayya to me or meri raniya bokhamp ke waja se uth gai
Shan…wo a gaya hai
Husna…khon
Shan…wahi jo qaid tha ab wo azad ho gaya hai agar apne wade ka pakka howa to thek warna tabhai ka ik naya dor shuru ho ho jai ga
Sona…to karna kya hai
Shan…sab tayar ho jao
Sab magic se tayar ho gai
Shan ne ik portal khola or ik khali planet pe ponch gaya jaha par sirf pahar or pather the
Shan…sab dihan me baith jao or sab apni apni shakti azad kar do
Sab ne aisa he kiya jaise he sab ne apni shakti azad ke waise he king of darkness(KD) ko in ke urja ka pata chal gaya
KD…hahaha maza ayye ga mujhe lalkar raha hai tu to aisa he sahi ab dikata ho tujhe
Ye kehte sath he KD waha se gaib ho gaya or agle he pal shan jaha tha waha ponch gaya
KD…hahahaha bht khub to dharti se itni dor bolaya hai ta ke zyada tabahi na ho
Shan…haan me ne socha khul ke lara jai warna waha me sahi se lhar nhi pata
KD…fikar na karo waha pe hote to b tabahi na hote ik lamhe ke baat the or tumara sar tumare dhar se alag hota
Shan…bato ka koi faida nhi shuru kare
KD…shock se me to issi intizar me ho
Ye kehte sath he shan ne us par hamla kar diya
Magar KD apni jaga se hila thak nhi wo apni jaga kara raha
Shan ka hamla us thak ponch he nhi pa raha tha
Shan ne bht khoshish ke punches kicks koi b chez us adrishya diwar ko par nhi kar pai
Jab koi hamla KD ko chu na saka to shan ne peche jump liya
Shan…tum sab ab door ho jao ab larai bhayanak hone wale hai
Issi ke sath us ke sare ranian waha se hath gai or Ik unche jaga ja kar kare ho gai
KD…tum ne apni khoshish kar le ab mere bare
Issi ke sath palk japkte wo shan ke pass poncha
Ik lamhe me shan par pata nhi kitne gunse pare shan b ghin nhi paya or na he shan ya us ke ranian us ke hath daikh saki
Agle pal wo shan se dhor ho gaya
Or shan lahu lohaab waha ghir para agle he pal shan ke ghaw khud ba khud bharne lage
Kuch he phal me wo bilkul thek waha khara ho gaya
KD…maza ayya
Shan kuch keh nhi saka q k KD us ke andaze se kahi zyadw taqatwar tha jis ke shan ne umeed nhi ke the
Shan ne apne dono hatho ko jatka diya or dono swords us ke hatho me a gai
Issi ke sath KD ke ankhain chamke or waha pe tez hawaain chalne lage
Shan ne jaldi se apne dono swords apne samne kar de q k wo hawa blades me tabdeel ho gai the jo talwar se taqra kar khatam ho gai
Jaise he hawa khatam howe shan ne teze se us par hamla kar diya or war karne laga
Anu…ye kya ho raha hai mujhe to aisa lag raha hai ke KD un ke sath khel rahe hai
Sital…lag nhi raha aisa he hai
Sital ke awaz me ghurahat the sab ne us ke taraf daikha to us ke ankhain laal the jis se andaza ho raha tha ke wo kitna gussa hai shan ke waja se wo khud par kabo rakhe howe the
Sona…sital abbi shant ho jao abbi hum kuch nhi kar sakte unno ne hame door rehne ko kaha hai
Sital…issi liye abbi thak khud ko kabo kiye howe ho
Waha shan KD pe apni talwar se war kar raha tha magar KD aram se doghe kiye ja raha tha
Shan ka koi war usse chu b nhi pa raha tha
Tabhi KD ke ankhain phr chamke or ik lamhe me phr shan par kai gunse lage jis se wo phr gail ho gaya
Thori dair me us ke gaow phr bhar gai ab shan kob gussa anne laga
Shan…LEO,SERPENT
Leo dhar ke sath or Serpent punkhar ke sath bahir a gaya
KD…wah ye kuch naya hai chalo in ke sath b kela jai
KD ne ab thak apne hath nhi nikale the serpent ne tezi se KD ko jakar liya or us ke shakti sukhne laga
Jis se KD muskura utta or apni shakti release kar de jald he serpent ne usse chor diya q k us ke shakti kafi zyada the serpent usse sokh na saka
Us ke baad Leo ne hamla kar diya leo us adrishya kawach se takra gaya or tez hawaye chalne lage
Leo ab usse dakelne laga jis se KD ke muskurahat khatam ho gai or wo serious nazar anne laga
Jab ke leo ab b gurra raha tha isse ke sath KD ke ankhain phr chamke or leo par hamla howa likin leo ko is se koi farak nhi phara
Ye daikh ke serpent b harkat me a gaya or wo b us ke kareeb a gaya
Issi ke sath KD ne apni full power phr release kar de or dono ko sirf power force se dhor paink diya
Ab mere pass or koi chara nhi tha me ne apne dono hath oper kiye or apni taqat ko akhate karne laga
Jis me tora time lag raha tha aisa karte he leo or serpent mujh me samma gai
KD…lagta hai ye tumari akhri koshish hai ye b azma kar daikh lo ta ke tumare umeed ko khatam kar sako
Shan…jaise tumare marzi
Me ne apni ranion ke taraf daikha or sar hilla diya to unno ne b apni shakti mere shakti me milane shuru kar de
Ham sab ke shakti ne ab bht bayankar akhar le liya tha
Is ko daikh ke KD b chintit nazar anne laga to us ne b apni kali shakti ko akhar dena shuru kar diya
Apni shakti ke prabhav me me b urne laga KD ke shakti b mere shakti jitne ho gai or me ne gola us ke taraf paink diya yahi us ne b kiya
Hum dono ke shaktian apas me takra gai hum dono he apni shakti ik dusre ke taraf dakeel rahe the jo ke hil b nhi rahe the
Jis ka prabhav shakti pe hone laga or wo dono shaktian apass me milne lag gai jis se white and black apas me mil gai or wo ik gola ban gaya
Ab KD tora tora kar ke us gole ko mere taraf dakelne laga q k ab mere shakti khatam hone lage
Jis se KD ke chehre par muskurahat chane lage tori he dair me mere sare shakti khatam ho gai or mere red urja activate ho gai or us gole me milne lage jis se us ka colour change hone lag gaya or wo rainbow colour ka gola ban gaya
Mere red shakti b ab jawab dene lag gai the or gole ka time b patne wala ho gaya mere ankhain ab bojal hone lag gai qk me bht zyada urja laga chuka tha
Jaise he mere ankhain band hone lage waise he wo gola phat gaya ik dhamka howa
Usse ke sath mere ankhain band ho gai or me b is damake ke chapet me a gaya q k me hawa me tha behosh hote sath he me neche girne laga jis se me us ke chapet me a gaya
Waha har taraf dua pail gaya jab dua hata to waha mera naam o nishan nhi raha or mere raniao ke ankhon me ansoo a gai
Sital…nhi ye nhi ho sakta me un ke shakti mehsoos nhi kar pa rahe
Sab gutno ke bal bait gai
KD…hahahahaha mere dushman me ne kaha tha na me tume sab se pehle khatam karo ga hahahaha daikh lo me ne apna wada pora kiya tumara naam o nishan he hamesha ke liye mita diya
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE DOSTO
Kuch dair aise he bate chalte rahe aise he do din beet gai or a gai amawas ke raat
Thek bara baje 4 log kale labade me ik kai ke pass kare the or har ik ke hath me ik kala chaku tha
Admi 1…waqt a gaya hai dosto
Ye sunte he sab ne apni apni garden pe chaku rakh ke pair diya or khud ko kai me gira diya
Abbi mushkhil se 10 min he guzre ho ge ke puri darti hilne lag gai or us ke sath he ik khufnak hansi gunjne lagi or sath he ik saaya namudar ho gaya
Saya…hahahaha me azad ho gaya ab pore brahman me mera raj ho ga hahaha likin pehle apne dushman ko khatam kar ke apna wada b pora karna hai hahahaha
Wahi dusri taraf jab bokhamp ayya to me or meri raniya bokhamp ke waja se uth gai
Shan…wo a gaya hai
Husna…khon
Shan…wahi jo qaid tha ab wo azad ho gaya hai agar apne wade ka pakka howa to thek warna tabhai ka ik naya dor shuru ho ho jai ga
Sona…to karna kya hai
Shan…sab tayar ho jao
Sab magic se tayar ho gai
Shan ne ik portal khola or ik khali planet pe ponch gaya jaha par sirf pahar or pather the
Shan…sab dihan me baith jao or sab apni apni shakti azad kar do
Sab ne aisa he kiya jaise he sab ne apni shakti azad ke waise he king of darkness(KD) ko in ke urja ka pata chal gaya
KD…hahaha maza ayye ga mujhe lalkar raha hai tu to aisa he sahi ab dikata ho tujhe
Ye kehte sath he KD waha se gaib ho gaya or agle he pal shan jaha tha waha ponch gaya
KD…hahahaha bht khub to dharti se itni dor bolaya hai ta ke zyada tabahi na ho
Shan…haan me ne socha khul ke lara jai warna waha me sahi se lhar nhi pata
KD…fikar na karo waha pe hote to b tabahi na hote ik lamhe ke baat the or tumara sar tumare dhar se alag hota
Shan…bato ka koi faida nhi shuru kare
KD…shock se me to issi intizar me ho
Ye kehte sath he shan ne us par hamla kar diya
Magar KD apni jaga se hila thak nhi wo apni jaga kara raha
Shan ka hamla us thak ponch he nhi pa raha tha
Shan ne bht khoshish ke punches kicks koi b chez us adrishya diwar ko par nhi kar pai
Jab koi hamla KD ko chu na saka to shan ne peche jump liya
Shan…tum sab ab door ho jao ab larai bhayanak hone wale hai
Issi ke sath us ke sare ranian waha se hath gai or Ik unche jaga ja kar kare ho gai
KD…tum ne apni khoshish kar le ab mere bare
Issi ke sath palk japkte wo shan ke pass poncha
Ik lamhe me shan par pata nhi kitne gunse pare shan b ghin nhi paya or na he shan ya us ke ranian us ke hath daikh saki
Agle pal wo shan se dhor ho gaya
Or shan lahu lohaab waha ghir para agle he pal shan ke ghaw khud ba khud bharne lage
Kuch he phal me wo bilkul thek waha khara ho gaya
KD…maza ayya
Shan kuch keh nhi saka q k KD us ke andaze se kahi zyadw taqatwar tha jis ke shan ne umeed nhi ke the
Shan ne apne dono hatho ko jatka diya or dono swords us ke hatho me a gai
Issi ke sath KD ke ankhain chamke or waha pe tez hawaain chalne lage
Shan ne jaldi se apne dono swords apne samne kar de q k wo hawa blades me tabdeel ho gai the jo talwar se taqra kar khatam ho gai
Jaise he hawa khatam howe shan ne teze se us par hamla kar diya or war karne laga
Anu…ye kya ho raha hai mujhe to aisa lag raha hai ke KD un ke sath khel rahe hai
Sital…lag nhi raha aisa he hai
Sital ke awaz me ghurahat the sab ne us ke taraf daikha to us ke ankhain laal the jis se andaza ho raha tha ke wo kitna gussa hai shan ke waja se wo khud par kabo rakhe howe the
Sona…sital abbi shant ho jao abbi hum kuch nhi kar sakte unno ne hame door rehne ko kaha hai
Sital…issi liye abbi thak khud ko kabo kiye howe ho
Waha shan KD pe apni talwar se war kar raha tha magar KD aram se doghe kiye ja raha tha
Shan ka koi war usse chu b nhi pa raha tha
Tabhi KD ke ankhain phr chamke or ik lamhe me phr shan par kai gunse lage jis se wo phr gail ho gaya
Thori dair me us ke gaow phr bhar gai ab shan kob gussa anne laga
Shan…LEO,SERPENT
Leo dhar ke sath or Serpent punkhar ke sath bahir a gaya
KD…wah ye kuch naya hai chalo in ke sath b kela jai
KD ne ab thak apne hath nhi nikale the serpent ne tezi se KD ko jakar liya or us ke shakti sukhne laga
Jis se KD muskura utta or apni shakti release kar de jald he serpent ne usse chor diya q k us ke shakti kafi zyada the serpent usse sokh na saka
Us ke baad Leo ne hamla kar diya leo us adrishya kawach se takra gaya or tez hawaye chalne lage
Leo ab usse dakelne laga jis se KD ke muskurahat khatam ho gai or wo serious nazar anne laga
Jab ke leo ab b gurra raha tha isse ke sath KD ke ankhain phr chamke or leo par hamla howa likin leo ko is se koi farak nhi phara
Ye daikh ke serpent b harkat me a gaya or wo b us ke kareeb a gaya
Issi ke sath KD ne apni full power phr release kar de or dono ko sirf power force se dhor paink diya
Ab mere pass or koi chara nhi tha me ne apne dono hath oper kiye or apni taqat ko akhate karne laga
Jis me tora time lag raha tha aisa karte he leo or serpent mujh me samma gai
KD…lagta hai ye tumari akhri koshish hai ye b azma kar daikh lo ta ke tumare umeed ko khatam kar sako
Shan…jaise tumare marzi
Me ne apni ranion ke taraf daikha or sar hilla diya to unno ne b apni shakti mere shakti me milane shuru kar de
Ham sab ke shakti ne ab bht bayankar akhar le liya tha
Is ko daikh ke KD b chintit nazar anne laga to us ne b apni kali shakti ko akhar dena shuru kar diya
Apni shakti ke prabhav me me b urne laga KD ke shakti b mere shakti jitne ho gai or me ne gola us ke taraf paink diya yahi us ne b kiya
Hum dono ke shaktian apas me takra gai hum dono he apni shakti ik dusre ke taraf dakeel rahe the jo ke hil b nhi rahe the
Jis ka prabhav shakti pe hone laga or wo dono shaktian apass me milne lag gai jis se white and black apas me mil gai or wo ik gola ban gaya
Ab KD tora tora kar ke us gole ko mere taraf dakelne laga q k ab mere shakti khatam hone lage
Jis se KD ke chehre par muskurahat chane lage tori he dair me mere sare shakti khatam ho gai or mere red urja activate ho gai or us gole me milne lage jis se us ka colour change hone lag gaya or wo rainbow colour ka gola ban gaya
Mere red shakti b ab jawab dene lag gai the or gole ka time b patne wala ho gaya mere ankhain ab bojal hone lag gai qk me bht zyada urja laga chuka tha
Jaise he mere ankhain band hone lage waise he wo gola phat gaya ik dhamka howa
Usse ke sath mere ankhain band ho gai or me b is damake ke chapet me a gaya q k me hawa me tha behosh hote sath he me neche girne laga jis se me us ke chapet me a gaya
Waha har taraf dua pail gaya jab dua hata to waha mera naam o nishan nhi raha or mere raniao ke ankhon me ansoo a gai
Sital…nhi ye nhi ho sakta me un ke shakti mehsoos nhi kar pa rahe
Sab gutno ke bal bait gai
KD…hahahahaha mere dushman me ne kaha tha na me tume sab se pehle khatam karo ga hahahaha daikh lo me ne apna wada pora kiya tumara naam o nishan he hamesha ke liye mita diya
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE DOSTO
Mr.Bond
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Bhai bohot hi jaandar update tha par KD bach gaya or apna hero gayab ho gaya ye kya hua apna hero aakhir gaya kaha kyoki mara to hai nahi
agle update ka besabri se intezaar
Shahrukh
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Awesome update bhai keep posting dekhna ye hai aage kya hota hai
Akil
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Bro yeh toh confirm hai ki woh abhi mara nahin hai maybe woh wahaan pahunch gaya ho shakti pravaah ke zari'e jahaan uske parents hon
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Aamir.2000
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ye kia hogya ye king of darkness to bhut takatwar nikla shan ki pori urja khtm hogai aur ye abh tk hns rha h ab kia guru ji ki atma bachaegi hero ko ya kch aur hoga
jldi agla update dena dost
waiting for more