Fantasy Antariksh Ka Badshah Shan
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Shan or baki sab ghar chale gai wahi kahi door ik bar phr ik meeting ho rahi thr
A1…haan bolo A5 ye itni emergency meeting q bolai hai
A5…kuch 2 hafte pehle me india gaya tha waha par ponchte he me ne ik bht taqatwar urja mehsoos ke hai jo bht zyada the likin wo sab kuch waqt ke liye tha phr us ke baad wo mehsoos hona band ho gai the or ye urja pure white the matlb achai ke urja
A3…tumara dimagh kharab ho gaya hai is darti pe koi aisa insan nhi ho sakta jis ke pas itne urja ho or wo b pure white
A1…kya tum ne usse khoja nhi
A5…issi liye itna late howa ho un chand min ke ilawa wo urja phr mujhe mehsoos nhi howe me ne bht khoshish ke usse dondne ke likin nakaam raha
(Dosto abbi bata daita ho jab A5 ne shan ke urja ko mehsoos kiya tha wo wo waqt tha jab shan sab ke sath wapis apne planet ja raha tha q us waqt us ne apni shakti azaad kar de the apne planet jane ke liye ie liye wo A5 ko mehsoos howe the)
A1…agar tumare baat sach hai to ye bht gambeer masla hai hume kuch b kar ke us shakti ko dond kar khatam karna ho ga
A2…sahi kaha warna wo hamare malik ke liye koi problem na kare kar de
A4…bilkul sahi to batao kya kare is ka
A1…sab se bara masla hai us shakti ko dondna ik bar mil jai phr khatam karna asan hota hai
A2…to pehle us ko dondte hai me khud jata ho waha or usse dond ke khatam kar daita ho
A1…thek hai likin dihan se
A6…thek hai aj ye meeting yahi khatam hoti hai
BACK TO HERO
Abbi hum college se wapis ghar ja rahe the ke salaka waha a gai
Shan…kya howa salaka
Salaka…malik jo bande hamare ghar pr nazar rakh rahe the unno ne hamare ghar me kuch lagaya hai jise wo camera bol rahe the
Ye sun ke mere honto pe muskurahat a gai
Shan…salaka sare camero ko nasht kar do
Salaka…g malik
Or is ke sath wo adrishya ho gai
Mariya…ye kya tha ghar pe camere khon laga gaya hai
Shan…mere dada g ke admi hai jo mujh par nazar rakh rahe hai aj ja ke baat karo ga un se
Mariya…likin wo tumara yaqeen kare ge
Shan…karna pare ga warna ye sab karne ke zarorat he kya hai
Sona…jaan ye kuch jaldi nhi ho jai ga
Swarna…haan jaan abbi tora wait kar le
Shan…abbi sirf socha hai kiya nhi waha ja ke daiko ga phr jis tarah howa usse hisab se agge kuch karo ga
Us ke baad hum ghar ponch gai or sab ja ke fresh hone lage husna sirf khamosh reh ke apne ap ko nai mahool me dhal rahe the
Phr kuch khas howa nhi sham ko me nikal gaya dada g ke ghar
Aj mujhe guard ne nhi roka or me gari le ke sedha andar chala gaya jaha ground me dono survi or priya practice kar rahi the
Mere gari daikhte he dono rok gai or meri taraf a gai
Survi…kaise he ap biswa g
Shan…hum to thek hai ap dono batao mene jo kaam diya tha wo kar rahi ho
Priya…bilkul ab to weight b max kar diya hai pehle tori problem howe likin ab sab thek hai
Shan…chalo ye b acha hai jis din match ho us din utar dena ta ke tum dono ko pata hal jai is training ka
Survi…ap ko kaise pata ke hum ne hissa liya howa hai
Us ke baat pe me muskura diya
Shan…bas laga liya apne students ka pata
Abbi hum baat he kar rahe the ke dadi ne hume daikh liya or andar bola liya
Hum theno andar chale gai mr ne jate he un ke pair chuwe
Dadi…kaise ho biswa beta
Shan…bilkul thek ho dadi ap kaise hai
Dadi…me b thek hu wapis kab aye beta
Shan…kal he aya ho dadi waise aj koi nazar nhi a raha
Dadi…bas tori dair me sab idar he ho ge
Tori dair me dadi se he baat karta raha ik ik kar ke sab apne kamro se nikalne lage
Alok…to biswa ho aye US se
Shan…g bas tori problem the is liye jana para
Tabhi dada g b waha a gai un ko daikh ke sab kare ho gai me b or ja ke un ke pair chuwe suraj or vijay b a gai
Dada g…waise biswa beta kuch apne mata pita ke bare me batao
Shan(muskura ke)…kya batao dada g batain aise hai ke koi vishwas nhi kare ga
Dadi…q beta vishwas q nhi kare ge
Shan…q k me ne kabhi unne daikha he nhi or na he mere pass un ke koi tasveer hai is liye me un ke bare me kuch nhi janta
Dada…likin tum un ke naam to jante ho na
Shan…haan dada g janta ho likin ye b sach hai ke me ne unne kabhi daikha nhi hai
Dada g…waise to tum ne apne pita ka naam jay bataya tha likin maa ka nhi bataya
Shan…mere maa ka naam
Wo abbi itna he bola tha ke usse kisi strong black power ka ahsas howa or sirf shan ko nhi bal ke shan ke pancho patnion ko b is ka ahsas ho gaya or unno ne jaldi se shan ko phone milaya
Dada g…kya howa beta apne bataya nhi
Tabhi shan ka mobile bajne lag gaya
Or wo phone pe lag gaya
Sona…ap ne mehsoos kiya is kali shakti ko
Shan…haan me ghar a raha ho
Shan…dada g me baad me bata do ga ik emergency ho gai hai mujhe jana pare ga
Ye kehte sath he shan waha se nikal gaya kisi ko kuch pochne ka moka he nhi mila jab thak unne hosh ayya shan gare tezi se nikal ke chala gaya
Ganga…lagta hai koi serious baat hai jo wo itne tezi se nikla hai
Dada g…haan lagta aise he hai
Me sedha apne ghar a gaya jaha mere pancho jaan haal me bethi howi the
Mujhe daikhte he pancho meri taraf a gai
Sital…ap ne wo mehsoos kiya jo humne kiya
Shan…haan jaan guru g ne mujhe bataya tha ke yaha koi bare kali shakti qaid hai or merea nusar ye usse shakti ko manne wala koi ho ga
Tabhim era locket chamakne lag gaya or us me se guru g ke awaz aye
Guru g…sahi kaha putar ye usse shakti ko manne wala hai or unne tumari shakti ka abhas ho gaya hai
Shan…likin ye kaise mumkin hai gurudev me ne apni shakti ko band kiya howa hai
Guru g…jab tum sab wapis ja rahe the tab in ka ik admi yahi tha or us waqt portal kolte waqt tumne apni shakti ko azad kar diya tha issi liye unne tumara abhas ho chuka hai
Shan…ab mere liya kya adesh hai guru g
Guru g…issi kam ke liye tum yaha ayye ho ab apni pehli serhi pe kadam rakho or age barro
Shan…jo agya gurudev
Guru g…vijay bawa
Swarna…guru g ke batao ka kya matlb howa
Shan…mujhe ab us ka samna karna ho ga
Husna…me b jao ge ap ke sath
Shan…nhi is bar me akele jao ga zara me b to daikho ye kitne pani me hai or is par koi baat nhi ho ge
Is ke bad kissi ne kuch nhi kaha
Sital…likin apna chehra badal lijye ta ke koi ap ko pehchan na pai
Shan…ye sahi kaha tum ne
Us ke baad me ne apne baba shera ka chehra apna liya likin insan ka or teleport ho gaya ik pahari ilake me jaha koi nhi rehta tha
Waha ponchne ke baad me ne apni powers release kar de ta ke us ko mera ahsas ho jai kareeb adhe gante ke baad waha halchal hone lage or kala dowa waha cha gaya
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE
Shan or baki sab ghar chale gai wahi kahi door ik bar phr ik meeting ho rahi thr
A1…haan bolo A5 ye itni emergency meeting q bolai hai
A5…kuch 2 hafte pehle me india gaya tha waha par ponchte he me ne ik bht taqatwar urja mehsoos ke hai jo bht zyada the likin wo sab kuch waqt ke liye tha phr us ke baad wo mehsoos hona band ho gai the or ye urja pure white the matlb achai ke urja
A3…tumara dimagh kharab ho gaya hai is darti pe koi aisa insan nhi ho sakta jis ke pas itne urja ho or wo b pure white
A1…kya tum ne usse khoja nhi
A5…issi liye itna late howa ho un chand min ke ilawa wo urja phr mujhe mehsoos nhi howe me ne bht khoshish ke usse dondne ke likin nakaam raha
(Dosto abbi bata daita ho jab A5 ne shan ke urja ko mehsoos kiya tha wo wo waqt tha jab shan sab ke sath wapis apne planet ja raha tha q us waqt us ne apni shakti azaad kar de the apne planet jane ke liye ie liye wo A5 ko mehsoos howe the)
A1…agar tumare baat sach hai to ye bht gambeer masla hai hume kuch b kar ke us shakti ko dond kar khatam karna ho ga
A2…sahi kaha warna wo hamare malik ke liye koi problem na kare kar de
A4…bilkul sahi to batao kya kare is ka
A1…sab se bara masla hai us shakti ko dondna ik bar mil jai phr khatam karna asan hota hai
A2…to pehle us ko dondte hai me khud jata ho waha or usse dond ke khatam kar daita ho
A1…thek hai likin dihan se
A6…thek hai aj ye meeting yahi khatam hoti hai
BACK TO HERO
Abbi hum college se wapis ghar ja rahe the ke salaka waha a gai
Shan…kya howa salaka
Salaka…malik jo bande hamare ghar pr nazar rakh rahe the unno ne hamare ghar me kuch lagaya hai jise wo camera bol rahe the
Ye sun ke mere honto pe muskurahat a gai
Shan…salaka sare camero ko nasht kar do
Salaka…g malik
Or is ke sath wo adrishya ho gai
Mariya…ye kya tha ghar pe camere khon laga gaya hai
Shan…mere dada g ke admi hai jo mujh par nazar rakh rahe hai aj ja ke baat karo ga un se
Mariya…likin wo tumara yaqeen kare ge
Shan…karna pare ga warna ye sab karne ke zarorat he kya hai
Sona…jaan ye kuch jaldi nhi ho jai ga
Swarna…haan jaan abbi tora wait kar le
Shan…abbi sirf socha hai kiya nhi waha ja ke daiko ga phr jis tarah howa usse hisab se agge kuch karo ga
Us ke baad hum ghar ponch gai or sab ja ke fresh hone lage husna sirf khamosh reh ke apne ap ko nai mahool me dhal rahe the
Phr kuch khas howa nhi sham ko me nikal gaya dada g ke ghar
Aj mujhe guard ne nhi roka or me gari le ke sedha andar chala gaya jaha ground me dono survi or priya practice kar rahi the
Mere gari daikhte he dono rok gai or meri taraf a gai
Survi…kaise he ap biswa g
Shan…hum to thek hai ap dono batao mene jo kaam diya tha wo kar rahi ho
Priya…bilkul ab to weight b max kar diya hai pehle tori problem howe likin ab sab thek hai
Shan…chalo ye b acha hai jis din match ho us din utar dena ta ke tum dono ko pata hal jai is training ka
Survi…ap ko kaise pata ke hum ne hissa liya howa hai
Us ke baat pe me muskura diya
Shan…bas laga liya apne students ka pata
Abbi hum baat he kar rahe the ke dadi ne hume daikh liya or andar bola liya
Hum theno andar chale gai mr ne jate he un ke pair chuwe
Dadi…kaise ho biswa beta
Shan…bilkul thek ho dadi ap kaise hai
Dadi…me b thek hu wapis kab aye beta
Shan…kal he aya ho dadi waise aj koi nazar nhi a raha
Dadi…bas tori dair me sab idar he ho ge
Tori dair me dadi se he baat karta raha ik ik kar ke sab apne kamro se nikalne lage
Alok…to biswa ho aye US se
Shan…g bas tori problem the is liye jana para
Tabhi dada g b waha a gai un ko daikh ke sab kare ho gai me b or ja ke un ke pair chuwe suraj or vijay b a gai
Dada g…waise biswa beta kuch apne mata pita ke bare me batao
Shan(muskura ke)…kya batao dada g batain aise hai ke koi vishwas nhi kare ga
Dadi…q beta vishwas q nhi kare ge
Shan…q k me ne kabhi unne daikha he nhi or na he mere pass un ke koi tasveer hai is liye me un ke bare me kuch nhi janta
Dada…likin tum un ke naam to jante ho na
Shan…haan dada g janta ho likin ye b sach hai ke me ne unne kabhi daikha nhi hai
Dada g…waise to tum ne apne pita ka naam jay bataya tha likin maa ka nhi bataya
Shan…mere maa ka naam
Wo abbi itna he bola tha ke usse kisi strong black power ka ahsas howa or sirf shan ko nhi bal ke shan ke pancho patnion ko b is ka ahsas ho gaya or unno ne jaldi se shan ko phone milaya
Dada g…kya howa beta apne bataya nhi
Tabhi shan ka mobile bajne lag gaya
Or wo phone pe lag gaya
Sona…ap ne mehsoos kiya is kali shakti ko
Shan…haan me ghar a raha ho
Shan…dada g me baad me bata do ga ik emergency ho gai hai mujhe jana pare ga
Ye kehte sath he shan waha se nikal gaya kisi ko kuch pochne ka moka he nhi mila jab thak unne hosh ayya shan gare tezi se nikal ke chala gaya
Ganga…lagta hai koi serious baat hai jo wo itne tezi se nikla hai
Dada g…haan lagta aise he hai
Me sedha apne ghar a gaya jaha mere pancho jaan haal me bethi howi the
Mujhe daikhte he pancho meri taraf a gai
Sital…ap ne wo mehsoos kiya jo humne kiya
Shan…haan jaan guru g ne mujhe bataya tha ke yaha koi bare kali shakti qaid hai or merea nusar ye usse shakti ko manne wala koi ho ga
Tabhim era locket chamakne lag gaya or us me se guru g ke awaz aye
Guru g…sahi kaha putar ye usse shakti ko manne wala hai or unne tumari shakti ka abhas ho gaya hai
Shan…likin ye kaise mumkin hai gurudev me ne apni shakti ko band kiya howa hai
Guru g…jab tum sab wapis ja rahe the tab in ka ik admi yahi tha or us waqt portal kolte waqt tumne apni shakti ko azad kar diya tha issi liye unne tumara abhas ho chuka hai
Shan…ab mere liya kya adesh hai guru g
Guru g…issi kam ke liye tum yaha ayye ho ab apni pehli serhi pe kadam rakho or age barro
Shan…jo agya gurudev
Guru g…vijay bawa
Swarna…guru g ke batao ka kya matlb howa
Shan…mujhe ab us ka samna karna ho ga
Husna…me b jao ge ap ke sath
Shan…nhi is bar me akele jao ga zara me b to daikho ye kitne pani me hai or is par koi baat nhi ho ge
Is ke bad kissi ne kuch nhi kaha
Sital…likin apna chehra badal lijye ta ke koi ap ko pehchan na pai
Shan…ye sahi kaha tum ne
Us ke baad me ne apne baba shera ka chehra apna liya likin insan ka or teleport ho gaya ik pahari ilake me jaha koi nhi rehta tha
Waha ponchne ke baad me ne apni powers release kar de ta ke us ko mera ahsas ho jai kareeb adhe gante ke baad waha halchal hone lage or kala dowa waha cha gaya
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE
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awesome one sir ji
sorry for late review
well apko dekh ke bahut acha lga mja aa gya updates padh ke
SHAN ka ab real mai samna hone vala hai uss se jiske liye vo yahan aaya hai halanki yeh uska pehla kadam hai dekhte hai SHAN kaise uss burai ke bakht ka samna karta hai kyunki inn sabko uski kaafi strong kaali urja mehsoos hui hai dekhne mai mja aayega
well DADA JI abhi bhi apna shak dur kar rhe hain unke mann mai 2 baten chal rhi hongi
1. SHAN vakai unka pota hai aur unke bete VIJAY ka beta hai halanki Kaise iss time unke pass iska javab na hoga kyunki unhe bass lgta hai kyunki SHAN dikhne mai apne MAA BAAP jaisa hai aur vo vahi naam use kar rha hai jo uske real MAA BAAP ne diya tha BISWA.
2. yeh uss scientist ki kisi tarah ki chal hai jisse vo apna dushman mante hain
well dekhte hain sach kaise bahar aayega aur kya lekar aayega
KEEP WRITING
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YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
sorry for late review
well apko dekh ke bahut acha lga mja aa gya updates padh ke
SHAN ka ab real mai samna hone vala hai uss se jiske liye vo yahan aaya hai halanki yeh uska pehla kadam hai dekhte hai SHAN kaise uss burai ke bakht ka samna karta hai kyunki inn sabko uski kaafi strong kaali urja mehsoos hui hai dekhne mai mja aayega
well DADA JI abhi bhi apna shak dur kar rhe hain unke mann mai 2 baten chal rhi hongi
1. SHAN vakai unka pota hai aur unke bete VIJAY ka beta hai halanki Kaise iss time unke pass iska javab na hoga kyunki unhe bass lgta hai kyunki SHAN dikhne mai apne MAA BAAP jaisa hai aur vo vahi naam use kar rha hai jo uske real MAA BAAP ne diya tha BISWA.
2. yeh uss scientist ki kisi tarah ki chal hai jisse vo apna dushman mante hain
well dekhte hain sach kaise bahar aayega aur kya lekar aayega
KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
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