Fantasy Antariksh Ka Badshah Shan

[Badshah Khan]

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OK bhai we will wait

 

[Last benchers]

Okkk bhai we will wait

 

[Acme]

Thanks for starting this story...

 

[Salu12]

Thank u guys for ur support koshish yahi hai ke jitna ho sake utna jaldi update de do bas ik time line diya hai ke agar is month update na de saka to next month se ye proper start ho jai ge

Congratulations bro intzar rhi ga bs jaldi sharo karna sabar nhi hota ap ki story bhot achi hoti ha

 

[Prince2000]

INTRODUCTION

Shan(Biswa) : Hero
Jay(Missing) : Hero Father
Renu(Missing) : Hero Mother

Shera : Hero ko jis ne pala
Sona : Shera Daughter (Hero 1st Wife)
Sital(Dragon) : Hero 2nd Wife
Swarna(Rajkumari) : Hero 3rd Wife
Sonam(Sab Se Choti) : Hero 4th Wife
Husna(Queen) : Hero 5th Wife
Tamal : Jin (Hero ka Ghulam)
Salaka : Jin (Hero ki Ghulam)
Mohan : Friend
Sohan : Friend
Ajit : Swarna ka bhai
Sujit : Swarna ka bhai

Dada g : Rajnath
Dadi : Lakxmi
1st Beta :Aloknath
Patni : Shalini
Aloknath Beta : Surajnath
Aloknath Beti : Priyanath
2nd Beta : Ganganath
Patni : Mohini
Ganganath Beta : Vijaynath
Ganganath Beti : Survinath

Nana g : Raghukant
Nani (DEAD)
Beta : Harikant
Harikant Beta : Rabikant
Harikant Beti : Naina
Harikant Beti : Komal

Voctor : Mom Dad Friend
Rossy : Victor’s Wife
Mariya : Victor’s Daughter

 

[Prince2000]

Update 01

Shan is waqt apne kaksh me beta howa tha or soch raha tha k kaise apne pariwar ko ik kare
Survi or priya se b dosti ho gai or suraj or vijay se b ab reh gai naina komal or rabi
Itna to me ne jaan liya tha ke rabi ik acha larka hai bas dost usse galat mil gai the or ye b ke rabi priya se pyar karta hai usse sudarna asan hai likin naina or komal ke sath meri pehli milakat itni ache na rahi oper se thapar b mara ab pata nhi wo kaise react kare ge
Tabhi mariya g kamre me gusse
Mariya…kya howa aj college nhi jana kya
Shan…are haan q nhi janna bas apni socho me gum tha pata he nhi chala
Me mariya g ke sath neche a gaya jaha mere charo ranian tayar beti the hum sab college ke liye nikal gai college me enter hote sath he sab ke nazar hum pe chali gai hum sab gari se nikle or canteen ke taraf chale gai
Jaha aj rabi apne dosto ke sath baitha tha hum jab canteen me gusse to sab ke nazar hum pe gai rabi ke dost ne b usse kuch kaha to wo b hume daikhne laga
Likin phr sar jathak kar apni sochom e gum ho gaya hum b ja ke ik table par baith gai or nashta order kar diya
Tabhi priya or survi b canteen a ponche or idar udar daikne lagi priya ke nazar b rabi b pare ik lamhe ke liye us ke nazar us pe ruki likin phr jab hume daikha to hamari tarafa gai
Rabi ne jaise he priya ko daikha us ke ankhain chamak utte or us ke nazrain us ka pecha karne lagi priya ko b is baat ka pora ahsas tha likin us ne ignore kar diya
Survi…hello biswa g kaise hai ap
Shan…I m good ao baitho
Priya…ap ko apna wada yaaf hai na
Shan…me apni zaban ka pakka ho
Sital…waise ab fighting q sikhna chahti hai
Sona…haan ye sawal mere maan me b tha
Survu…hamarr dada g kehte hai ke larki hona ache baat hai likin kamzor hona buri baat is liye bachpan se he hum fighting seek rahe hai
Shan…aj ap ke bhai nazar nhi a rahe
Priya…is me khon se bhari baat hai wo is waqt class me ho ge kal unne yaha ap ke sath daikh ke hum chonk gai the wo yaha khabhi nhi atte bas kitabain he un ke dunia hai
Shan…to bataiye kaha sekhna chahe ge ap
Priya…club kaisa rahe ga
Shan…daikyr priya g me ne ap ko sikane ka wada zaroor kiya hai likin club join karne ka nhi is liye koi or jaga batai
Priya or survi sochne lagi phr tori dair baad
Priya…kya ap hamare ghar a sakte hai waha hume koi disturb nhi kare ga
Or me isse baat ka intizar kar raha tha
Shan…haan q nhi ab mujhe address bata de me aj sham ponch jao ga 7 baje
Survi…thek hai hum ap ka wait kare ge
Or address bata ke nikal gai
In sab bato ke doran rabi hume he daikh raha tha or kha jane wali nazro se mujhe daikh raha tha
Swarna…jaan ab ka bhai ap ko daikh raha hai
Sab ke jankari or tasveere me ne charo ke mind me daal de the
Sonam…likin itne gusse se q daikh rahe hai
Me hans diya
Shan…wo to daikhe ga he priya mujh se baat jo kar rahe the
Sona…matlab
Sital…acha to ye baat hai
Theno sital ko daikne lagi
Sital…wo priya ko pyat karte hai or priya hamare pati se baat kar rahi the is liye jaal raha hai hamri jaan se
Sab ye baat sun kar hans di
Shan…chalo class chalte haib hai udar he ho ge
Sab phr class ke taraf janne lage likin char ankhain inne daikh ke herat me chali gai chale daikhte hai ye khon hai
Oohhhh ye to wahi hai jiss ne hame thapar mara tha mujhe daikhte he dono ka hath apne galo pe chala jata hai
Ye koi or nhi naina or komal he the jo aj kai dino bad college aye the
Naina…chal komal pochte he is se ke hame thaper q mara
Komal…nhi ruk ja abbi nhi jab akela ho ga tab baat kare ge abbi nhi
Phr wo dono apni class chali gai or hum apni
Class me vijay or suraj bhai dono he apni maksoos jaga baithe the me b ja ke un ke peche baith gaya
Shan…or dosto kya haal hai
Vijay & suraj…thek
Shan…yaar tum logo ka parai ke ilawa kya masrofiyat hai
Suraj…history ke books parhna
Me ne apna sar pet liya
Shan…nhi mera matlab hai enjoy kaise karte ho
Vijay…parh kar
Shan…yaar me poch raha ho ke koi extra activity hai tum dono ke
Dono ik sath…nhi
Tabhi teacher class me aya or sab khamosh ho gai phr issi tarah classes chalti rahi or half time ho gaya aj me phr dono ko kenchta howa canteen le gaya jaha ik or musibat mera intizar kar rahi the
Abbi hum canteen me gusne wale the ke ke ik inspector ne mujhe kandhe se pakra me peche mora to samjh gaya
Inspector…q b college me gundagardi karta hai mla sahib ke bete ko mara hai tu ne
Us ka is tarah pakarna kafi tha meri ranion ke gusse ko hawa dene ke liye
Is se pehle ke me kuch bolta ya samjhta sital ne apna kaam kar diya tha ik karara thapar inspector ke gaal par lag chuka tha or wo chakra kar wahi behosh ho gaya
Ye daikh ke sare students ke sitti pitti ghum ho gai or sital aag ugalti ankhon se us inspector ko ghur rahi the
Sital…tere himmat kaise howe in pe hath dalne ke apni okat se zyada urna sehat or zindagi dono ke liye hanikarak hota hai
Baki hawaldar b wahi jamme reh gai ik inspector par shaid aj kisi ne pehli dafa hath uthaya tha
Shan…sital shant ho jao
Me ne us ke kande pe hath rakha to sital tora shant ho gai
Tabhi me ne tamal ko maan me kuch kaha
Tamal…g malik
Shan…haan bhai hawaldar sahib zara is inspector ka mobile to utana abbi ik phone anne wala hai isse
Sare hawaldar b dare howe the ke jo inspector ka ye haal kar sakte hai to un ka kya ho ga ik hawaldar ne jaldi se inspector ka phone utha liya or tabhi phone bajne laga
Hawaldar…hello
Phone……..
Hawaldar…g sahib g sahib samjh gaya sahib
Or phone rakh diya itni se baat par he wo hawaldar pasina pasina ho gaya tha
Dosra Hawaldar…kya howa kis ka phone tha
Hawaldar…CM ka isse nokri se nikal diya hai or hume wapis janne ko kaha hai
Hawaldar ke ye kehne pe sare students ke hawa tight ho gai or mere honto pe muskurahat cha gai
Shan…issi jaldis e hospital le jao warna bechara kahi mar he na jai
Or me muskurata howa apni ranion ke sath or bhaion ke sath canteen me ghus gaya
Shan…to bolo dosto aj lunch box me kya hai
Sona…haan bhai bola tha aj zyada le ke anna
Sonam…me ne be
Suraj…are are ruku to sab ke liye lai hai ye lo
Aj wo dono dusrr tifan me khana laye the jo bhara tha
Sital…aj to mr pehle shuru karo ge
Me us ke baat sun ke muskura diya q k me janta tha me jab thak shuru na karo ye theno nhi khati or sonam b in ke daikha daike aisa he karne lagi the
Shan…are kaka zara metr dono dosto ke liye jo fresh hai wo garam kar ke lana
Kaka…abbi laya biswa beta
Kaka b shan ke ache vivhaar ke waja se usse bht pasand karta tha
Or me wapis sital ke taraf daikhne laga jis ne tifan to khol liya tha likin kuch kaya nhi abbi thak
Suraj…kya howa sital khao na ya pasand nhi hai
Sital...nhi nhi suraj bhai aise baat nhi hai wo kya hai na kal biswa ne sab se pehla kaha tha to aj b wo he shuru kare phr hum b kha le ge
Vijay…are biswa ko churo bht laye hai wo b kha le ga tum shuru karo
Or me beta muskura raha tha
Shan…haan haan sital tum he ne to abbi kaha tha k aj tum pehle shuru karo ge shuru karo
Sital soch rahi thi ke kya kare me ne usse or pareshan karna munasib na samjha
Shan…zara me b to daikho aj kaisa taste hai
Or uth kar tifan se pehla niwala le liya jaise he me ne pehla niwala liya mere charo jaan ne phir khana shuru kiya
Tabhi mariya g b hamare pass a gai
Mariya…are wah aj to ghar ka khana kaya ja raha hai khon laya tha sath
Sital…are nhi nhi ye hum nhi le ke aye ye to suraj bhai or vijay bhai le ke aye hai
Mariya…to un ka tiffan tumarr pas q hai
Sonam…who kya hai na didi ye khana canteen se zyada swadisth hai
Vijay…biswa jitna mujhe pata chala hai tum 10 saal baad abroad se wapis aye ho right
Shan…g aisa he hai
Vijay…phr tum pancho itni purr hindi kaise bol lete ho ye to yaha b ab rarr hai pure hindi bolna
Shan…waha gaya zaroor tha magar apni zuban or apna culture nhi bola or bahir ke desho me ap apna culture or zuban ke ahmiyat ka pata chalta hai is liye
Suraj…sahi kaha jo chez ap ke pass ho us ke value us ke janne ke baad he pata chalte hai
Pht aise he baat cheet karte howe half time khatam howa or hum class me chale gai chuti ke baad hum sab ghar a gai
Rossy…a gai bacho aj ka din kaise guzara
Shan…poche mat aunty is sital ne aj to mujhr b dara diya
Sital…mere samne ap pe koi hath dale ga to usse cher par do ge samjh ap
Shan…haan haan meri jaan samjh gaya
Rossy…howa kya
Phr shan ne sab bata diya
Rossy…bht acha kiya beta aise logo ke sath aisa he karna chahye
Tabhi victor uncle b a gai jo kafi pareshan the
Shan…kya howa uncle ap pareshan q dikh rahe hai
Victor…bas beta kya karo mujh se jo ho sakta hai kar raha ho likin logo ko is ka ahsas he nhi hai ke ye kitna khatrnak hai
Shan…kya khatarnak hai uncle
Victor…beta kuch countries zameen ke parath ko kamzoor kar rahe hai kuch paise kamane ke liye likin wo ye nhi jante ke is ka parinam un ko he sehna pare ga pahle claimt change ho ga phr pani khatam ho jai ga phr zameen banjar hone lage ge
Sona…ye to kafi pareshani wali baat hai
Swarna…is tarah to ye sari darti he nasht ho jai ge
Victor…yahi meri pareshani ka vishay hai kr kaise in ko roko or isse waja se ab thak mujh pe hamle ho rahe hai ke me ye tasveere dikane band kar do
Shan…us se ap befikar rahe tamal ap ke suraksha kar raha hai is liye wo ap ko nuksan nhi poncha sakte ap apna kaam karte rahye
Victor…haan beta ab thak tum he mujhe bachate a rahe ho
Shan…maa ne shaid isse liye mujhe ap ke pass baija hai ke yaha mere zarorat hai
Victor…kya renu ne likin kaise
Shan…un ke yaadain mujh me mojood hai uncle unne yado ke waja se to me yaha poncha ho aj me apne dada g ke ghar jane wala ho
Victor…wo kaise?
Shan…meri do behne fighting ke dewani hai or unno ne mujhe larte howe daikh liya bas phr kya tha wo to zid pakar kar baith gai ke unne sikna hai aj isse liye waha ja raha ho
Victor…to kya irada hai waha ja ke kya karna hai
Shan…abbi socha nhi hai jo ho raha hai usse ke sath chal raha ho
Sonam…kya hum b jai ge ap ke sath
Shan…tum charo waha kya karo ge tum ghar par raho
Sital…sahi kaha waha se hume koi khatra nhi hai
Shan…yar kuch to apne pati pe barosa rakho
Swarna…ap par to khud se zyada hai magar larkiyon par nhi hai
Sona…acha hai wo nilam in ke nazdeek dobara nhi aye warna is dafa to me ne he usse maar daina tha
Shan…acha acha jaan ab sab shant ho jao me nikal raha ho theek hai
Sab ne sar hila diya
Shan…tamal salaka
Tabhi dono waha prakhat ho gai
Dono…g malik
Shan…me bahir ja raha ho ghar ke suraksha tum dono ke zimidari hai
Dono…g malik
Or adrishya ho gai
Me b nikal para apne dada g ke ghar daikhte hai waha kya hota hai

AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE DOSTO

 

[Jaat boy]

Update 01

Shan is waqt apne kaksh me beta howa tha or soch raha tha k kaise apne pariwar ko ik kare
Survi or priya se b dosti ho gai or suraj or vijay se b ab reh gai naina komal or rabi
Itna to me ne jaan liya tha ke rabi ik acha larka hai bas dost usse galat mil gai the or ye b ke rabi priya se pyar karta hai usse sudarna asan hai likin naina or komal ke sath meri pehli milakat itni ache na rahi oper se thapar b mara ab pata nhi wo kaise react kare ge
Tabhi mariya g kamre me gusse
Mariya…kya howa aj college nhi jana kya
Shan…are haan q nhi janna bas apni socho me gum tha pata he nhi chala
Me mariya g ke sath neche a gaya jaha mere charo ranian tayar beti the hum sab college ke liye nikal gai college me enter hote sath he sab ke nazar hum pe chali gai hum sab gari se nikle or canteen ke taraf chale gai
Jaha aj rabi apne dosto ke sath baitha tha hum jab canteen me gusse to sab ke nazar hum pe gai rabi ke dost ne b usse kuch kaha to wo b hume daikhne laga
Likin phr sar jathak kar apni sochom e gum ho gaya hum b ja ke ik table par baith gai or nashta order kar diya
Tabhi priya or survi b canteen a ponche or idar udar daikne lagi priya ke nazar b rabi b pare ik lamhe ke liye us ke nazar us pe ruki likin phr jab hume daikha to hamari tarafa gai
Rabi ne jaise he priya ko daikha us ke ankhain chamak utte or us ke nazrain us ka pecha karne lagi priya ko b is baat ka pora ahsas tha likin us ne ignore kar diya
Survi…hello biswa g kaise hai ap
Shan…I m good ao baitho
Priya…ap ko apna wada yaaf hai na
Shan…me apni zaban ka pakka ho
Sital…waise ab fighting q sikhna chahti hai
Sona…haan ye sawal mere maan me b tha
Survu…hamarr dada g kehte hai ke larki hona ache baat hai likin kamzor hona buri baat is liye bachpan se he hum fighting seek rahe hai
Shan…aj ap ke bhai nazar nhi a rahe
Priya…is me khon se bhari baat hai wo is waqt class me ho ge kal unne yaha ap ke sath daikh ke hum chonk gai the wo yaha khabhi nhi atte bas kitabain he un ke dunia hai
Shan…to bataiye kaha sekhna chahe ge ap
Priya…club kaisa rahe ga
Shan…daikyr priya g me ne ap ko sikane ka wada zaroor kiya hai likin club join karne ka nhi is liye koi or jaga batai
Priya or survi sochne lagi phr tori dair baad
Priya…kya ap hamare ghar a sakte hai waha hume koi disturb nhi kare ga
Or me isse baat ka intizar kar raha tha
Shan…haan q nhi ab mujhe address bata de me aj sham ponch jao ga 7 baje
Survi…thek hai hum ap ka wait kare ge
Or address bata ke nikal gai
In sab bato ke doran rabi hume he daikh raha tha or kha jane wali nazro se mujhe daikh raha tha
Swarna…jaan ab ka bhai ap ko daikh raha hai
Sab ke jankari or tasveere me ne charo ke mind me daal de the
Sonam…likin itne gusse se q daikh rahe hai
Me hans diya
Shan…wo to daikhe ga he priya mujh se baat jo kar rahe the
Sona…matlab
Sital…acha to ye baat hai
Theno sital ko daikne lagi
Sital…wo priya ko pyat karte hai or priya hamare pati se baat kar rahi the is liye jaal raha hai hamri jaan se
Sab ye baat sun kar hans di
Shan…chalo class chalte haib hai udar he ho ge
Sab phr class ke taraf janne lage likin char ankhain inne daikh ke herat me chali gai chale daikhte hai ye khon hai
Oohhhh ye to wahi hai jiss ne hame thapar mara tha mujhe daikhte he dono ka hath apne galo pe chala jata hai
Ye koi or nhi naina or komal he the jo aj kai dino bad college aye the
Naina…chal komal pochte he is se ke hame thaper q mara
Komal…nhi ruk ja abbi nhi jab akela ho ga tab baat kare ge abbi nhi
Phr wo dono apni class chali gai or hum apni
Class me vijay or suraj bhai dono he apni maksoos jaga baithe the me b ja ke un ke peche baith gaya
Shan…or dosto kya haal hai
Vijay & suraj…thek
Shan…yaar tum logo ka parai ke ilawa kya masrofiyat hai
Suraj…history ke books parhna
Me ne apna sar pet liya
Shan…nhi mera matlab hai enjoy kaise karte ho
Vijay…parh kar
Shan…yaar me poch raha ho ke koi extra activity hai tum dono ke
Dono ik sath…nhi
Tabhi teacher class me aya or sab khamosh ho gai phr issi tarah classes chalti rahi or half time ho gaya aj me phr dono ko kenchta howa canteen le gaya jaha ik or musibat mera intizar kar rahi the
Abbi hum canteen me gusne wale the ke ke ik inspector ne mujhe kandhe se pakra me peche mora to samjh gaya
Inspector…q b college me gundagardi karta hai mla sahib ke bete ko mara hai tu ne
Us ka is tarah pakarna kafi tha meri ranion ke gusse ko hawa dene ke liye
Is se pehle ke me kuch bolta ya samjhta sital ne apna kaam kar diya tha ik karara thapar inspector ke gaal par lag chuka tha or wo chakra kar wahi behosh ho gaya
Ye daikh ke sare students ke sitti pitti ghum ho gai or sital aag ugalti ankhon se us inspector ko ghur rahi the
Sital…tere himmat kaise howe in pe hath dalne ke apni okat se zyada urna sehat or zindagi dono ke liye hanikarak hota hai
Baki hawaldar b wahi jamme reh gai ik inspector par shaid aj kisi ne pehli dafa hath uthaya tha
Shan…sital shant ho jao
Me ne us ke kande pe hath rakha to sital tora shant ho gai
Tabhi me ne tamal ko maan me kuch kaha
Tamal…g malik
Shan…haan bhai hawaldar sahib zara is inspector ka mobile to utana abbi ik phone anne wala hai isse
Sare hawaldar b dare howe the ke jo inspector ka ye haal kar sakte hai to un ka kya ho ga ik hawaldar ne jaldi se inspector ka phone utha liya or tabhi phone bajne laga
Hawaldar…hello
Phone……..
Hawaldar…g sahib g sahib samjh gaya sahib
Or phone rakh diya itni se baat par he wo hawaldar pasina pasina ho gaya tha
Dosra Hawaldar…kya howa kis ka phone tha
Hawaldar…CM ka isse nokri se nikal diya hai or hume wapis janne ko kaha hai
Hawaldar ke ye kehne pe sare students ke hawa tight ho gai or mere honto pe muskurahat cha gai
Shan…issi jaldis e hospital le jao warna bechara kahi mar he na jai
Or me muskurata howa apni ranion ke sath or bhaion ke sath canteen me ghus gaya
Shan…to bolo dosto aj lunch box me kya hai
Sona…haan bhai bola tha aj zyada le ke anna
Sonam…me ne be
Suraj…are are ruku to sab ke liye lai hai ye lo
Aj wo dono dusrr tifan me khana laye the jo bhara tha
Sital…aj to mr pehle shuru karo ge
Me us ke baat sun ke muskura diya q k me janta tha me jab thak shuru na karo ye theno nhi khati or sonam b in ke daikha daike aisa he karne lagi the
Shan…are kaka zara metr dono dosto ke liye jo fresh hai wo garam kar ke lana
Kaka…abbi laya biswa beta
Kaka b shan ke ache vivhaar ke waja se usse bht pasand karta tha
Or me wapis sital ke taraf daikhne laga jis ne tifan to khol liya tha likin kuch kaya nhi abbi thak
Suraj…kya howa sital khao na ya pasand nhi hai
Sital...nhi nhi suraj bhai aise baat nhi hai wo kya hai na kal biswa ne sab se pehla kaha tha to aj b wo he shuru kare phr hum b kha le ge
Vijay…are biswa ko churo bht laye hai wo b kha le ga tum shuru karo
Or me beta muskura raha tha
Shan…haan haan sital tum he ne to abbi kaha tha k aj tum pehle shuru karo ge shuru karo
Sital soch rahi thi ke kya kare me ne usse or pareshan karna munasib na samjha
Shan…zara me b to daikho aj kaisa taste hai
Or uth kar tifan se pehla niwala le liya jaise he me ne pehla niwala liya mere charo jaan ne phir khana shuru kiya
Tabhi mariya g b hamare pass a gai
Mariya…are wah aj to ghar ka khana kaya ja raha hai khon laya tha sath
Sital…are nhi nhi ye hum nhi le ke aye ye to suraj bhai or vijay bhai le ke aye hai
Mariya…to un ka tiffan tumarr pas q hai
Sonam…who kya hai na didi ye khana canteen se zyada swadisth hai
Vijay…biswa jitna mujhe pata chala hai tum 10 saal baad abroad se wapis aye ho right
Shan…g aisa he hai
Vijay…phr tum pancho itni purr hindi kaise bol lete ho ye to yaha b ab rarr hai pure hindi bolna
Shan…waha gaya zaroor tha magar apni zuban or apna culture nhi bola or bahir ke desho me ap apna culture or zuban ke ahmiyat ka pata chalta hai is liye
Suraj…sahi kaha jo chez ap ke pass ho us ke value us ke janne ke baad he pata chalte hai
Pht aise he baat cheet karte howe half time khatam howa or hum class me chale gai chuti ke baad hum sab ghar a gai
Rossy…a gai bacho aj ka din kaise guzara
Shan…poche mat aunty is sital ne aj to mujhr b dara diya
Sital…mere samne ap pe koi hath dale ga to usse cher par do ge samjh ap
Shan…haan haan meri jaan samjh gaya
Rossy…howa kya
Phr shan ne sab bata diya
Rossy…bht acha kiya beta aise logo ke sath aisa he karna chahye
Tabhi victor uncle b a gai jo kafi pareshan the
Shan…kya howa uncle ap pareshan q dikh rahe hai
Victor…bas beta kya karo mujh se jo ho sakta hai kar raha ho likin logo ko is ka ahsas he nhi hai ke ye kitna khatrnak hai
Shan…kya khatarnak hai uncle
Victor…beta kuch countries zameen ke parath ko kamzoor kar rahe hai kuch paise kamane ke liye likin wo ye nhi jante ke is ka parinam un ko he sehna pare ga pahle claimt change ho ga phr pani khatam ho jai ga phr zameen banjar hone lage ge
Sona…ye to kafi pareshani wali baat hai
Swarna…is tarah to ye sari darti he nasht ho jai ge
Victor…yahi meri pareshani ka vishay hai kr kaise in ko roko or isse waja se ab thak mujh pe hamle ho rahe hai ke me ye tasveere dikane band kar do
Shan…us se ap befikar rahe tamal ap ke suraksha kar raha hai is liye wo ap ko nuksan nhi poncha sakte ap apna kaam karte rahye
Victor…haan beta ab thak tum he mujhe bachate a rahe ho
Shan…maa ne shaid isse liye mujhe ap ke pass baija hai ke yaha mere zarorat hai
Victor…kya renu ne likin kaise
Shan…un ke yaadain mujh me mojood hai uncle unne yado ke waja se to me yaha poncha ho aj me apne dada g ke ghar jane wala ho
Victor…wo kaise?
Shan…meri do behne fighting ke dewani hai or unno ne mujhe larte howe daikh liya bas phr kya tha wo to zid pakar kar baith gai ke unne sikna hai aj isse liye waha ja raha ho
Victor…to kya irada hai waha ja ke kya karna hai
Shan…abbi socha nhi hai jo ho raha hai usse ke sath chal raha ho
Sonam…kya hum b jai ge ap ke sath
Shan…tum charo waha kya karo ge tum ghar par raho
Sital…sahi kaha waha se hume koi khatra nhi hai
Shan…yar kuch to apne pati pe barosa rakho
Swarna…ap par to khud se zyada hai magar larkiyon par nhi hai
Sona…acha hai wo nilam in ke nazdeek dobara nhi aye warna is dafa to me ne he usse maar daina tha
Shan…acha acha jaan ab sab shant ho jao me nikal raha ho theek hai
Sab ne sar hila diya
Shan…tamal salaka
Tabhi dono waha prakhat ho gai
Dono…g malik
Shan…me bahir ja raha ho ghar ke suraksha tum dono ke zimidari hai
Dono…g malik
Or adrishya ho gai
Me b nikal para apne dada g ke ghar daikhte hai waha kya hota hai

AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE DOSTO

Awesome start bhai

 

[John Cena]

Boht boht khoob bhai maza a gya kafi time baad lagta ha is story dibara jaan a rahi ha keep it up

 

[David W]

Thank you for the update bhai... Isme aur bhi updates hai but nahi mil raha hai. Shan ke aage ke updates mein vo survi priya and other 3 members ke sath fighting hua... as a worrior usne sabko guide kiya. Mariya ke friend ko help karta hai jo apni propty bechna chahti hai aapne papa ke illaj ke liye but bhai bolne par vo raat mein aake unhe cure karta hai. Uske baad vo aapne kingdom mein jata hai jaha use ek niyotha milta hai for war from female rule kingdom. Jaab queen ko shan ke baare mein aapne manthri se pata lagtha hai vo decesion lethi hai as 5 wife for shan but shan didn't accept her as his wife but being adamant she comes with him. Once they get back to delhi their was one college fight and all cousins come to his palace from their they get to know about his true identity. Meanwhile their cousins starts loving him and he accepts all.

Please ask for missing updates.

 

[bd sharkar]

Fabulous start bhai...koi ey nehi bata sakta ap is stroy ka 2 nd writerho....Thank you for restart this