Fantasy Antariksh Ka Badshah Shan
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awesome one man mja aa gya
matlab A1 kaafi takatwar hoga as compare to A2 jo bhi ho dekh lenge usse bhi
A6 ko SHAN ka asal chehra toh na dikhega kyunki vo SHERA ka chehra insani roop mai lga kar ldega shayad toh itni fikar na hai
DADA ji bhi ab aar parr ki baat karenge shayad kyunki unki har SHAN ke samne nakaam ho rhi hai aur vo sach jan na bhi chahte hai toh ab best tarika direct baat chit hi hai well dekhte hain kya hita hai
aapki writing skill kaafi achi hai bhai hopefully aage story aur bhi jyada majedar ho jayegi
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matlab A1 kaafi takatwar hoga as compare to A2 jo bhi ho dekh lenge usse bhi
A6 ko SHAN ka asal chehra toh na dikhega kyunki vo SHERA ka chehra insani roop mai lga kar ldega shayad toh itni fikar na hai
DADA ji bhi ab aar parr ki baat karenge shayad kyunki unki har SHAN ke samne nakaam ho rhi hai aur vo sach jan na bhi chahte hai toh ab best tarika direct baat chit hi hai well dekhte hain kya hita hai
aapki writing skill kaafi achi hai bhai hopefully aage story aur bhi jyada majedar ho jayegi
KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
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Maza to tb aayega...
Jub Shaan apne Parivaar se Rubaru hoga,
kya reaction hoga..??
Dada dadi, Chachi, Mama, Bhai-Bahen
Bahut maza aayega...uss feeling ko feel karne mein....
Prince bhai Update thoda jaldi aur Bade diya karo bhai.......
Jub Shaan apne Parivaar se Rubaru hoga,
kya reaction hoga..??
Dada dadi, Chachi, Mama, Bhai-Bahen
Bahut maza aayega...uss feeling ko feel karne mein....
Prince bhai Update thoda jaldi aur Bade diya karo bhai.......