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Subah sab se pehle mere ankh khule or me fresh ho ke sab ko utaya or garden me dihan me bait gaya
Kuch dair baad sab a ke dihan me bait gai ab sab ache se dihan lagane lage the mujhe kuch sikana nhi para
Gante thak dihan me baitne ke baad me sab ko fighting sikane laga q k ab wo sab meri shaktian b the
Ik ghanta training ke bad hum sab fresh howe or nashta karne lage aj kisi ka college jane ka mood nhi tha is liye sab gomne ka program banate hai victor uncle office ke liye nikal jate hai or hum gumne ke liye
Sara din gumne me guzar gaya raat ko bahir he diner kar ke a kar apne kamro me chale gai
Me gehre nend me tha ke tabhi mujhe ik mard or orat dikhe jo kisi gehri andere jaga me the waha par siwaye andere ke kuch b na tha
Or na he un dono ke chehre mujhe saaf dikai de rahe the me abbi un ke taraf barne ka soch he raha tha ke mere ankh khul gai
Me pura pasine me bhiga howa tha
Shan(maan me)…ye kaisa sapna tha or khon the wo dono
Shan ne apni jaan pe nazar dorai to sb so rahi the
Shan ne b apne dimagh se is baat ko jatka or sona ko apni baho me le ke so gaya
Agla ik hafta aise he guzar gaya us ke bad shuru howa sports festival jis me takreban 10 colleges ne participate kiya tha
Ye festival ik hafta chalna tha or inne ke college me tha is liye inno ne security ka b acha intizam kiya tha ta ke koi nakhushgawar waqya na ho jai
Sab se pehla sport tha cricket ka jis me hamare college ke team or hamare rival college ke team he ik dusre ko ache takkar de rahe the baki colleges me koi zyada dair nhi tikka
(SPORTS PAR ZYADA NHI LIKHO GA JO IMPORTANT HO GA WAHI LIKHO GA)
Isse tarah first day cricket 2nd day hockey third day volley ball 4th day tennis
Is ke baad barria ye 5th day kr karate compitition jis me survi or priya ne b participate kiya tha
Me b ja ke audience me bait gaya baithe he mujhe priya or survi nazar a gai wo b participants me khadi the
Abbi un ko daikh ke me muskura raha tha likin jald he mere honto ke muskurahat gaib ho gai waha ik shaks ko daikh ke
Me apne ass pass daikhna laga to mere jaan mujh se pochne lagi
Sona…kya howa jaan
Shan…wo waha kya kar rahi hai
Sital…ab partiyogita hai koi b hissa le sakta hai to us ne b le liya
Sonam…haa di wo to humare sath reh ke b bilkul khamosh rehte hai
Swarna…aj usse mokka mila hai tora hath pair hilane ka to hum q roke
Shan…jaan wo darti pe nai hai or us ke shakti ka koi zyada dair mukabla nhi kar pai ga
Sital…us ke fikar ap mat kare hum ne pehle he usse sab samjha diya hai
Swarna…or waise b ap ke behne to tori takkar de he sakti hai
Ab mere chehre par pareshani the q k survi or priya beshak state champion the likin wo dono milkar b husna ka mukabla nhi kar sakti
Me waha se utha or stage ke taraf chala gaya or survi or priya ko awaz de
Sorvi…arre biswa g ap hame pata tha ap aj zaroor aye ge
Shan…mujhe batao ke aj kal tum kitna weight laga rahe ho
Priya…ab hum maximum weight laga rahe hai or is ko b 3 din ho gai hai
Shan…thek hai ab apne weight utar do compitition khatam hone thak
Survi…kya baat hai biswa g ap kuch pareshan nazar a rahe hai
Shan…haan is compitition me koi aisa b hai jis ka mukabla tum dono milkar b nhi kar sakte is liye weight hatwa diye hai ta ke tum khul kar usse chunoti de sako
Priya…khon hai wo
Shan…jab mokable start ho ge tume khud pata chal jai ga is liye sawdhan rehna
Ye keh ke me wapis a gaya or survi or priya participants ko daikhne lagi
Survi…aye priya wo daikh ye wahi hai na jo biswa g ke sath hoti hai
Priya…are haan ye wahi hai kahi biswa g issi ke baat to nhi kar rahe the
Survi…mujhe b aisa he lagta hai chal weights utarte hai
Or dono ne apne weights utar ke apne saman ke pas rakh diye
Priya…oohhhh ab jisam halka lag raha hai in ke bina
Survi…sahi kaha ab zara khul ke lhar sake ge
Waha jab me apni jaga pe baita to
Sona…kya kaha ap ne un se
Shan…kuch nhi bas weights utarne ko kaha ta ke khul ke lhar sake
Sital…ap ko kya lagta hai us se wo husna ka mukabla kar sake ge
Shan…nhi likin husna ko b tora maza anna chahye na
Sonam…hahahaha sahi kaha ap ne
Phr mukable start ho gai husna survi or priya apne apne mukable bht asani se jeet rahi the
Survi…priya tum ne kuch mehsoos kiya
Priya…haan yaar hamre power or speed bht zyada hai
Survi…haan yaar me bht koshish kar rahi ho apne ap ko control karne ke
Priya…haan pareshani to mujhe b ho rahi hai mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise mere andar ke power bahir anne ko betab hai
Survi…bilkul aisa mere sath b hai likin ye aam larkiyn hai agar in pe istimal kiya to kahi in ke hadiyan na fracture ho jai
Priya…agar biswa g ne weights nikalne ko kaha hai to us ke koi khas waja ho ge bagair waja wo aisa bilkul na kehte
Survi…chalo jo ho ga daikh le ge
Theno semi finals me ponch gai the husna ka mukabla priya se or survi ka mukabl dosre college ke larki se ho raha tha
Pehla mukabla survi or larki ka howa jo survi ne bht asani se jeet liya us ke baad bari aye priya or husna ke
Dono amne samne kari the jaise he bell howe priya ne husna pe hamla kar diya jisse husna ne aram se block kar diya
Us keb aad to priya ne hamle shuru kar diya priya filhal apne normal speed se lhar rahi the
Husna muskura rahi the wo ik yudha the apni zindagi me us ne kai laraya lari thi or jeete the ik larai ko chor kar or jis se hari the wo aj us ka pati hai
Priya ne jab daikha ke normal speed or attack se kam nhi ban raha to wo piche jump kar ke kari ho gai
Sare audience khmosh un ke fight daikh rahi the survib gour se husna ke block ko daikh rahi the ta ke koi blind spot mil jai ab husna koi anari to thi nhi jo aise galti karti
Ab thak ke fight se wo samjh gai the ke biswa g ne is ke bare me he inne warn kiya tha
Priya piche jump karne ke baad ij lambe sans leti hai or khud ko shant karte hai or ankhin band karti hai
Kuch seconds baad wo apni ankain kolti hai
Ab us ke ankhon me ik naya josh tha us ne ab khud ko roka nhi or apni full speed ka use kiya jo ke us ke training ka phal tha or sath me full power ka b
Husna tayyar the q k wo janti the dono behno ko un ka pati train kar raha hai is liye husna ne b apni bht he tori se power use ke ta ke wo priya ke power se kiye gai hamlo ka jawab de sake
Priya ne apni full power se ik flying round kick husna ko mara jo ke husna ne block kar diya ab thak husna ne sirf block he kiya tha
Ab husna ke chehre ke expression change hone lage priya apne war ko khali jata daikh ke heran ho gai likin jaise he us ne husna ke expressions ko daikha satark ho gai
Jaise he priya apne attack ko block hone ke baad zameen par land karne wali the us ne husna ko neche jukte howe daikh liya
Priya ko usse waqt pata chal gaya husna kya karne wali hai
Jaise he priya ka ik pair zameen ko touch howa usse pair par zoor daal kar usne jump mare
Thek usse waqt husna ka pair priya ke pairo ke neche se guzar gaya
Priya ne back flip le the or ab sawdan ho ke husna ko daikha
Q k husna ne pehle dafa priya pe attack kiya tha
Ab husna b attackind mode me a gai the jaise he usne priya ko back flip karte daikha wo b us par attck kar diya
Priya pehle he sawdhan the is liye jaise he husna ne hamla kiya priya ne block kar diya
Sare audience khamosh ho ke in ke fight daikh rahe the q k ab in ke fight shuru howe kafi time ho gaya tha
Ab thak kisib fight me itna time nhi laga or dono ik dosre ko barabar ke takkar de rahe the
Likin shan or us ke panian janti the ke husna priya se srf khel rahe hai
Priya me itne power or speed nhi hai ke wo husna ka mokabla kar sake
Priya b soch rahe the ke agr biswa g ke training na mile hote to wo husna ka mokabla kabhi na kar pati
Likin priya akhir ik amm larki the wo thakne lagi the or akhir kar husna ne usse gira diya jis se priya compition se bahir ho gai
Husna ye mokabla jeet gai or final me ponch gai thi jaha ab husna ka mokabla survi se tha
Adhe gante baad survi or husna stage pe kare the
Dono ik dosre ke ankho me daikh rahe the
Jaise he mokabla shuru howa survi ne hamle me pehel ke or bilkul priya ke tarah attack kar rahe the
Q k survi priya ke fight dekh chuki te is liye us ne kuch plan bana liya tha or husna b is fighting pattern se heran zaroo the
Husna b porani pattern se chalne lagi wo daikhna chahti the ke survi akhir karna kya chahti the
Jaise he survi ne flying round kick mare husna ne b pehle jaise block kiya or jiase he survi land karne wali the husna ne exact wahi kiya jaise us ne pehle kiya tha jo survi ne daikh liya
Husna ke mind me yahi tha ke survi b priya ke tarah back flip le ge magar survi ke dimagh me kuch or chal raha tha
Jaise he survi ka pair zameen ko touch howa us ne bilkul priya ke tarah apne pair me zoor diya likin back ke bajaye us ne agge ko kalabazi kai or husna ke samjhne se pehle he us ke peth pe survi ne ik lath jhar de jis se husna ka santulant bighar gaya or wo larkara kar age ho gai
Magar giri nhi ye aj pehli dafa is ke sath howa tha ke shan ke ilawa kisi ne fight me issi chwa tha
Husna us hamle se sambhal gai the likin ab usse gussa a gaya tha or gusse ke waja se us ke andar se us ke power release hone lagi the jo shan or baki charon ne mehsoos kar le the
Husna gusse me palat kar war karne he wali the ke tabhi………..
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE
Subah sab se pehle mere ankh khule or me fresh ho ke sab ko utaya or garden me dihan me bait gaya
Kuch dair baad sab a ke dihan me bait gai ab sab ache se dihan lagane lage the mujhe kuch sikana nhi para
Gante thak dihan me baitne ke baad me sab ko fighting sikane laga q k ab wo sab meri shaktian b the
Ik ghanta training ke bad hum sab fresh howe or nashta karne lage aj kisi ka college jane ka mood nhi tha is liye sab gomne ka program banate hai victor uncle office ke liye nikal jate hai or hum gumne ke liye
Sara din gumne me guzar gaya raat ko bahir he diner kar ke a kar apne kamro me chale gai
Me gehre nend me tha ke tabhi mujhe ik mard or orat dikhe jo kisi gehri andere jaga me the waha par siwaye andere ke kuch b na tha
Or na he un dono ke chehre mujhe saaf dikai de rahe the me abbi un ke taraf barne ka soch he raha tha ke mere ankh khul gai
Me pura pasine me bhiga howa tha
Shan(maan me)…ye kaisa sapna tha or khon the wo dono
Shan ne apni jaan pe nazar dorai to sb so rahi the
Shan ne b apne dimagh se is baat ko jatka or sona ko apni baho me le ke so gaya
Agla ik hafta aise he guzar gaya us ke bad shuru howa sports festival jis me takreban 10 colleges ne participate kiya tha
Ye festival ik hafta chalna tha or inne ke college me tha is liye inno ne security ka b acha intizam kiya tha ta ke koi nakhushgawar waqya na ho jai
Sab se pehla sport tha cricket ka jis me hamare college ke team or hamare rival college ke team he ik dusre ko ache takkar de rahe the baki colleges me koi zyada dair nhi tikka
(SPORTS PAR ZYADA NHI LIKHO GA JO IMPORTANT HO GA WAHI LIKHO GA)
Isse tarah first day cricket 2nd day hockey third day volley ball 4th day tennis
Is ke baad barria ye 5th day kr karate compitition jis me survi or priya ne b participate kiya tha
Me b ja ke audience me bait gaya baithe he mujhe priya or survi nazar a gai wo b participants me khadi the
Abbi un ko daikh ke me muskura raha tha likin jald he mere honto ke muskurahat gaib ho gai waha ik shaks ko daikh ke
Me apne ass pass daikhna laga to mere jaan mujh se pochne lagi
Sona…kya howa jaan
Shan…wo waha kya kar rahi hai
Sital…ab partiyogita hai koi b hissa le sakta hai to us ne b le liya
Sonam…haa di wo to humare sath reh ke b bilkul khamosh rehte hai
Swarna…aj usse mokka mila hai tora hath pair hilane ka to hum q roke
Shan…jaan wo darti pe nai hai or us ke shakti ka koi zyada dair mukabla nhi kar pai ga
Sital…us ke fikar ap mat kare hum ne pehle he usse sab samjha diya hai
Swarna…or waise b ap ke behne to tori takkar de he sakti hai
Ab mere chehre par pareshani the q k survi or priya beshak state champion the likin wo dono milkar b husna ka mukabla nhi kar sakti
Me waha se utha or stage ke taraf chala gaya or survi or priya ko awaz de
Sorvi…arre biswa g ap hame pata tha ap aj zaroor aye ge
Shan…mujhe batao ke aj kal tum kitna weight laga rahe ho
Priya…ab hum maximum weight laga rahe hai or is ko b 3 din ho gai hai
Shan…thek hai ab apne weight utar do compitition khatam hone thak
Survi…kya baat hai biswa g ap kuch pareshan nazar a rahe hai
Shan…haan is compitition me koi aisa b hai jis ka mukabla tum dono milkar b nhi kar sakte is liye weight hatwa diye hai ta ke tum khul kar usse chunoti de sako
Priya…khon hai wo
Shan…jab mokable start ho ge tume khud pata chal jai ga is liye sawdhan rehna
Ye keh ke me wapis a gaya or survi or priya participants ko daikhne lagi
Survi…aye priya wo daikh ye wahi hai na jo biswa g ke sath hoti hai
Priya…are haan ye wahi hai kahi biswa g issi ke baat to nhi kar rahe the
Survi…mujhe b aisa he lagta hai chal weights utarte hai
Or dono ne apne weights utar ke apne saman ke pas rakh diye
Priya…oohhhh ab jisam halka lag raha hai in ke bina
Survi…sahi kaha ab zara khul ke lhar sake ge
Waha jab me apni jaga pe baita to
Sona…kya kaha ap ne un se
Shan…kuch nhi bas weights utarne ko kaha ta ke khul ke lhar sake
Sital…ap ko kya lagta hai us se wo husna ka mukabla kar sake ge
Shan…nhi likin husna ko b tora maza anna chahye na
Sonam…hahahaha sahi kaha ap ne
Phr mukable start ho gai husna survi or priya apne apne mukable bht asani se jeet rahi the
Survi…priya tum ne kuch mehsoos kiya
Priya…haan yaar hamre power or speed bht zyada hai
Survi…haan yaar me bht koshish kar rahi ho apne ap ko control karne ke
Priya…haan pareshani to mujhe b ho rahi hai mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise mere andar ke power bahir anne ko betab hai
Survi…bilkul aisa mere sath b hai likin ye aam larkiyn hai agar in pe istimal kiya to kahi in ke hadiyan na fracture ho jai
Priya…agar biswa g ne weights nikalne ko kaha hai to us ke koi khas waja ho ge bagair waja wo aisa bilkul na kehte
Survi…chalo jo ho ga daikh le ge
Theno semi finals me ponch gai the husna ka mukabla priya se or survi ka mukabl dosre college ke larki se ho raha tha
Pehla mukabla survi or larki ka howa jo survi ne bht asani se jeet liya us ke baad bari aye priya or husna ke
Dono amne samne kari the jaise he bell howe priya ne husna pe hamla kar diya jisse husna ne aram se block kar diya
Us keb aad to priya ne hamle shuru kar diya priya filhal apne normal speed se lhar rahi the
Husna muskura rahi the wo ik yudha the apni zindagi me us ne kai laraya lari thi or jeete the ik larai ko chor kar or jis se hari the wo aj us ka pati hai
Priya ne jab daikha ke normal speed or attack se kam nhi ban raha to wo piche jump kar ke kari ho gai
Sare audience khmosh un ke fight daikh rahi the survib gour se husna ke block ko daikh rahi the ta ke koi blind spot mil jai ab husna koi anari to thi nhi jo aise galti karti
Ab thak ke fight se wo samjh gai the ke biswa g ne is ke bare me he inne warn kiya tha
Priya piche jump karne ke baad ij lambe sans leti hai or khud ko shant karte hai or ankhin band karti hai
Kuch seconds baad wo apni ankain kolti hai
Ab us ke ankhon me ik naya josh tha us ne ab khud ko roka nhi or apni full speed ka use kiya jo ke us ke training ka phal tha or sath me full power ka b
Husna tayyar the q k wo janti the dono behno ko un ka pati train kar raha hai is liye husna ne b apni bht he tori se power use ke ta ke wo priya ke power se kiye gai hamlo ka jawab de sake
Priya ne apni full power se ik flying round kick husna ko mara jo ke husna ne block kar diya ab thak husna ne sirf block he kiya tha
Ab husna ke chehre ke expression change hone lage priya apne war ko khali jata daikh ke heran ho gai likin jaise he us ne husna ke expressions ko daikha satark ho gai
Jaise he priya apne attack ko block hone ke baad zameen par land karne wali the us ne husna ko neche jukte howe daikh liya
Priya ko usse waqt pata chal gaya husna kya karne wali hai
Jaise he priya ka ik pair zameen ko touch howa usse pair par zoor daal kar usne jump mare
Thek usse waqt husna ka pair priya ke pairo ke neche se guzar gaya
Priya ne back flip le the or ab sawdan ho ke husna ko daikha
Q k husna ne pehle dafa priya pe attack kiya tha
Ab husna b attackind mode me a gai the jaise he usne priya ko back flip karte daikha wo b us par attck kar diya
Priya pehle he sawdhan the is liye jaise he husna ne hamla kiya priya ne block kar diya
Sare audience khamosh ho ke in ke fight daikh rahe the q k ab in ke fight shuru howe kafi time ho gaya tha
Ab thak kisib fight me itna time nhi laga or dono ik dosre ko barabar ke takkar de rahe the
Likin shan or us ke panian janti the ke husna priya se srf khel rahe hai
Priya me itne power or speed nhi hai ke wo husna ka mokabla kar sake
Priya b soch rahe the ke agr biswa g ke training na mile hote to wo husna ka mokabla kabhi na kar pati
Likin priya akhir ik amm larki the wo thakne lagi the or akhir kar husna ne usse gira diya jis se priya compition se bahir ho gai
Husna ye mokabla jeet gai or final me ponch gai thi jaha ab husna ka mokabla survi se tha
Adhe gante baad survi or husna stage pe kare the
Dono ik dosre ke ankho me daikh rahe the
Jaise he mokabla shuru howa survi ne hamle me pehel ke or bilkul priya ke tarah attack kar rahe the
Q k survi priya ke fight dekh chuki te is liye us ne kuch plan bana liya tha or husna b is fighting pattern se heran zaroo the
Husna b porani pattern se chalne lagi wo daikhna chahti the ke survi akhir karna kya chahti the
Jaise he survi ne flying round kick mare husna ne b pehle jaise block kiya or jiase he survi land karne wali the husna ne exact wahi kiya jaise us ne pehle kiya tha jo survi ne daikh liya
Husna ke mind me yahi tha ke survi b priya ke tarah back flip le ge magar survi ke dimagh me kuch or chal raha tha
Jaise he survi ka pair zameen ko touch howa us ne bilkul priya ke tarah apne pair me zoor diya likin back ke bajaye us ne agge ko kalabazi kai or husna ke samjhne se pehle he us ke peth pe survi ne ik lath jhar de jis se husna ka santulant bighar gaya or wo larkara kar age ho gai
Magar giri nhi ye aj pehli dafa is ke sath howa tha ke shan ke ilawa kisi ne fight me issi chwa tha
Husna us hamle se sambhal gai the likin ab usse gussa a gaya tha or gusse ke waja se us ke andar se us ke power release hone lagi the jo shan or baki charon ne mehsoos kar le the
Husna gusse me palat kar war karne he wali the ke tabhi………..
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE
Hunterrrr69
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Prince2000 behtreen update Bhai .... Shan ne rok dia vhi pr bcz he knows USS attack se survi bahut Jada ghayal hojati aur Jo Shan Ka plan hai vo kharab hojata
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Nice update. Lagta hai matter ab serious hone laga hai isliye shayad ab shaan beech mei aake husna ko roke.
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Behtarin update bhai majha aagaya yar or fight seen bhi badhiya raha lekin ab survi ki halat sayad kharab hone vali he waiting for next update
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Thanks Price Bhai Update dene ke liye...
Maza aa gaya....
aKahi Husna Chont na pahucha de...gusse mein aakar....
Pakka Shaan Mind to mind baat karke Rok dega...warna Jaan bhi ja sakti hai...
waiting for next
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kya mast update hai bhai mja aa gya
well HUSNA ne lgta hai college join kar liya tha jab aayi thi issliye tournament mai hai shyad yaad na hai mujhe khair jo bhi fight interesting rhi akhir SURVI ne HUSNA ko gussa dila hi diya well SHAN sambhal lega usse yeh dikkat na hai koi
yeh jo SHAN ko sapne mai kahin apne MAA-BAAP toh na dikhai diye hain jo kisi na kisi tarah safe hain well jo bhi hai yeh kuch jyada hi unexpected tha halanki inn characters ke intro mai bhi inhe mysterious hi shiw kiya gya hai let's see kya hota hai
well agar vo dono SHAN ke MAA-BAAP hi hain toh SHAN ko jald pta chal hi jayega aur ab dekhna yeh hai ki DADA JI ko kaise handle kiya jaye aur upler se yeh match bhi kaafi bade suspense par jakar ruka hai
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well HUSNA ne lgta hai college join kar liya tha jab aayi thi issliye tournament mai hai shyad yaad na hai mujhe khair jo bhi fight interesting rhi akhir SURVI ne HUSNA ko gussa dila hi diya well SHAN sambhal lega usse yeh dikkat na hai koi
yeh jo SHAN ko sapne mai kahin apne MAA-BAAP toh na dikhai diye hain jo kisi na kisi tarah safe hain well jo bhi hai yeh kuch jyada hi unexpected tha halanki inn characters ke intro mai bhi inhe mysterious hi shiw kiya gya hai let's see kya hota hai
well agar vo dono SHAN ke MAA-BAAP hi hain toh SHAN ko jald pta chal hi jayega aur ab dekhna yeh hai ki DADA JI ko kaise handle kiya jaye aur upler se yeh match bhi kaafi bade suspense par jakar ruka hai
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...MATHUR