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Wawooooo excellent birrilant fantastic good update
Oh to pohnch hi gay maharani ki jaga pe
Or laryi bhi shandar thi Maza a gia
Oh bechari Sonam
Let's see what happend
Oh to pohnch hi gay maharani ki jaga pe
Or laryi bhi shandar thi Maza a gia
Oh bechari Sonam
Let's see what happend
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Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha
Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha
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Update 19
Is awaz ke sath sab ka dihan mere taraf chala gaya
Mere ankhain ik dam laal ho gai mere andar b pariwartan shuru ho gaya mere urja jaha the waha ik laal roshni ne sab apne lapet me le liya
Me ne apna hatha apni ranion ke taraf kiya to wo net un se door ho gaya or charo ka jisam chamakne laga likin sonam waise he pare rahe
Sonam ke jisam ko na hilta daikh ke mera gussa or bhar gaya or waha ke zameen hilne lagi or tez hawaye chalni lagi
Me ne ik taraf daikha or hath agge kiya jiss sainik ko me ne hawa me paink diya tha wo wapis udar hawa me ponch gaya
Jo talwar sonam ke jisam me the me ne us taraf hath kiya to wo talwar sonam ke jisam se bahir nikal aye
Me gusse se us sainik ke taraf daikh raha tha wo daar ke mare kampne laga
Me talwar ke taraf ishara kiya to talwar sidhe ho gai or ungli ke sath ishara kiya to wo is sainik ke taraf bhar gai full speed se
Sainik ye daikh ke cheekh para or ankhain band kar le
Talwar us sainik ko cheerte howe nikalti us se pehle he maharani sainik or talwar ke beach a gai or apne talwar se us talwar ke do tukre kar diye
Maharani ab gusse se mere taraf daikh rahe the or me us ke taraf
Is sab ke beach sonam ke taraf kisi ne dihan he nhi diya tha jaise he me ne us ke jisam se talwar nikali us ka zakham khud ba khud bharne laga
Q k mere ranion ke jisam mujh se jure howe the to manikantak ke mani ke waja se us ka zakam khud ba khud bhar gaya
Or yaha me or maharani ik dosre ko gusse se daikh rahe the
Maharani ke hath me talwar the me ne hath ko jatka diya to mere hath me b meri divya talwar a gai or hamle me me ne pehel ke or maharani par hamla kar diya
Me full force se age bhara tha is liye jaise he mere or maharani ke talwar takrai me force se isse peche dakeel raha tha or 3 ya char dewrain thor kar me ne usse paink diya
Mere hamle se maharani sambal gai ab us ke ankhon me b shole dehek uthe or jaise me ne hamla kiya tha wahi hamla maharani ne kar diya or mujhe he 3 diwaron ke phar gira diya
Ab hum dono dehekti ankhon se ik dusre ko daikh rahe the
Me uth ke kara howa or dobara maharani pe hamla kiya is bhar wob tayar the wo b agge bhare or hum dono ka yudh shuru howa na wo peche hath rahe the na me
Hum dono ke talwaro se chingarian nikal rahe the hum ne ik dosre ko peche dakela or ik dosre pe apne tatwo se hamla shuru kar diya bijli se bijli takrate or agg se agg
Maharani kissi b angle me mujh se kaam na the bilkul barabre ke takar de rahe the
Shaid abbe me apne nai powers ko control nhi kar pa raha tha is liye
Is bech apni ranion ka haal to me batana bhool gaya
Jaise he net un se door howa to wo charo hawa me urr gai behoshi ke halat me likin sheild ko activate nhi kar pai q k sheild pancho ke milne se activate hoti the or sonam neche pare the ab us ke zakham b pore bhar gai or us ka jisam b chamak utha or wo b hawa me uth gai
Jaise he pancho ka connection jora sheild activate ho gai
Mere or maharani ke larai me neche masoom logo ka kafi nuksaan ho raha tha is liye us sheild ne hum dono ko gair liya ab hum dono ke larai sheild ke andar ho rahe the
Ab bhair ke log bilkul safe the
Humare ik dusre pe hamle janlewa ho rahe the talwar or tatwa donok e shakti ka use kar rahe the
Mere red urja ab or bharne lage ye urja kuch zyada he the jaise jaise urjha bhar rahe the waise waise me maharani pe bhari phar raha tha
Me ne ik or war maharani pe kiya or us ke talwar toot gai or wo shield se bahir ja gire zameen pe usse pehle he kafi chotain lag chuki the ab force se zameen par girne se wo behosh ho gai
Likin mera gussa kham hone ka naam he nhi le raha tha me ne ik zoor ke dhar mari to shield me b dharar phar gai or zameen hilne lage
Logo ke ghar bhar or zameen ke tukre hawa me uthne lage or tabhi ik kali talwar zameen or shield ko cheerte howe mere dusre hath me a gai
Jaise he us talwar ko me ne hath me pakra mera laal urja jo bekabo ho raha tha us ne apne andar kench liya or mera gussa b shant hone laga
Mere ranian ka jisam mere kareeb a gaya or shield dobara se thek ho gai me b normal hone laga likin ankain ab b band the mere
Bahir ka mahool b normal ho gaya sab ankhain phare ye sab daikh rahe the
Maharani ko b hosh a gaya us ke behne us ke gird bette howe the daar un ke ankhon me saaf nazar a raha tha
Kuch dair baad me or mere rania zameen pe utre sheild b khatam ho gai or watawarn b sahi ho gaya
Jab me ne ankhain khole to sath me mere ranion ke ankhain b khul gai
Ankhain kholte he main ne idar udar daikha jaise he mere nazar sonam pe pare jo sahi salamat kare the me doar ke us ke pass gaya or usse apni bahoo me khas liya
Sonam b mere bahoo me sama gai
Shan…yaar is tarah ka mazak na karo mere sath ik pal ke liye to mujhe laga me ne tume kho diya agar tujhe kuch ho jata to yaha koib jevet na rehta sab kuch tabah kar deta me
Sonam…ap ke hote howe mujhe bala kuch ho sakta hai bilkul nhi
Shan…likin galti to ke hai in logo ne or is ke saza ke inne de ke raho ga
Ye kehte sath he mere expression phr change ho gai
Me ne sonam ko bahoo se azad kar diya or phr maharani ke taraf mor gaya
Mere talware ab b mere hatho me the
Shan…tum ne mere ranion ke jaan lene chahe ab apni jaan ke khair manao aj na tum bacho ge na he tumara rajiya
Ye kehte sath he mere red urja phr active ho gai
Shan…LEO,SERPENT,SITALLLLL
Mere jisam se leo or serpent nikal ayya or sital dragon me change ho gai
Mere urja ne charo ranion ko b gair liya or wo golden colour me change ho gai tamal,diya,riya or miya b apne asli jinn roop me samne a gai
Maharani ko apna or apne rajiya ka ant samne dikh raha tha
Abbi me kuch or kehta ke mera locket chamka or baba mere samne kare ho gai
Gurudev ko daikhte he mere ankhain normal ho gai or me un ke samne ik gutne pe baith gaya
Q k wo mere guru the un ka samman mujh pe farz tha
Shan…gurudev ap….
Guru g…beta shant ho jao pehle us ke baad bat kare ge
Un ke baat sun ke me dihan mudra me bait gaya
Tamal diya riya or miya pehle gaib ho gai us ke baad mere ranian normal ho gai or akhir me leo or serpent wapis mere jisam me samma gai
Ab srf talware mere hath me the
Guru g…beta inne b apne andar samma lo
Un ke baat sun ke mera dihan mere talwaro pe chala gaya jinne me bilkul bhol gaya tha ke ye ab b mere hath me hai
Me ne phr ankhain band ke or dono talware b mere andar chale gai jab black talwar mere andar gai to mujhe kafi taqleef howe likin me ne bardasht kar le
Jab sab kuch ho gaya to me phr baba ke samne a gaya
Shan…hukum kare gurudev
Guru g…beta ye tum kya karne ja rahe the
Shan…maafi chaho ga gurudev likin inno ne mere sonam ko jaan se marne ke koshish ke hai
Guru g…wo to me ne tume pehle he is ke bare me bata diya tha ta ke tum khud ko tayar kar lo
Shan…gurudev mere ranian mere zindagi hai agar inne kissi ne taqleef dene ke bare me socha b to me un ke zindagi narak bana do ga or is do take ke rani ne meri ranion ko jaan se marne ka adesh diya tha
Ye kehte kehte mera krodh phr bharne laga ye sab us laal urja ke waja se ho raha tha
Guru g…beta is waqt tume nai shaktian parapt howe hai or wo tum par havi ho rahi hai is liya tumara krodh baar baar barh raha hai waise b tumara yaha ka karya samapt ho gaya hai tum ab wapis chale jao or apni in shaktion pe kaboo pao jo b maharani ne kiya wo is rajiye ke liye kiya tha tum to khud ik raja ho phr aise parastiti me tum kya karte
Shan…gurudev ap beshak sahi hai likin aise paristiti me b me kisi nirdish ko marne k adesh kabhi b na deta
Guru g…jo ho gaya so ho gaya usse badla nhi ja sakta sonam ab bilkul sahi hai ab tum wapis jao ye mera adesh hai
Shan…jo agya gurudev
Issi ke sath baba gaib ho gai or me khara ho gaya or apna portal khol diya
Shan…chalo chale yaha se
Sab portal me chale gai likin me jate jate rukh gaya
Shan…tumare kismat ache hai maharani agar gurudev bech me na atte to tum or tumare is rajiye ko me rakh me badal daita
Ye kehte kehte mere ankhain phr laal ho gai or maharani or us ke behno ka dil kamp utha
Meb portal me chala gaya or ponch gaya apni ship pe jaha sabhi sastha rahe the
Mere waha ke jane ke baad maharani or us ke behno ne chen ka sans liya
B1…didi khon tha ye
B2…ab chup b karo jaan bache
B4…haan mujhe to apni mout samne nazar a rahi the
Likin maharani ke dil me shan ne halchal peda kar de the usse hara ke q k aj thak wo kisi se nhi hari the
Inne yahi rehne daite hai wapis chalte hai apne hero ke pass
Shan apni ranion ke sath tore pyar bare lamhe guzar raha tha us ke baad sab so gai
Agli subah sab fresh howe or ship me he dihan me chale gai
Shan apne shaktion ke pass pocha to waha red urja the jo kafi unstable the or sab se zyada the leo ke urha ke samne mere red sword ghom rahe the or serpent ke samne mere blach sword or in ke peche the red urja ka gola
Me sedha us ke pass gaya or us pe hath rakh ke ankhain band kar le
Kuch dair baad wo urja stable hone lage or akhir me bilkul shant ho gai
Is urja ka akhar leo or serpent ke urja se 10 guna zyada tha gurudev issi shakti ke baat kar rahe the jo mere andar chupe howe the
Aj me ne ye urja b pa le hai ab daikhte hai agge kaha ka adesh milta hai
Dosto ab kahani apne end ke taraf bhar rahi hai lagta hai ab is safar ka ant hone wala hai bht socha ke isse or likho likin koi plot zehen ke nhi a raha is liya ab is story ko b alweda kehna ka samay nazdeek a raha hai
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Is awaz ke sath sab ka dihan mere taraf chala gaya
Mere ankhain ik dam laal ho gai mere andar b pariwartan shuru ho gaya mere urja jaha the waha ik laal roshni ne sab apne lapet me le liya
Me ne apna hatha apni ranion ke taraf kiya to wo net un se door ho gaya or charo ka jisam chamakne laga likin sonam waise he pare rahe
Sonam ke jisam ko na hilta daikh ke mera gussa or bhar gaya or waha ke zameen hilne lagi or tez hawaye chalni lagi
Me ne ik taraf daikha or hath agge kiya jiss sainik ko me ne hawa me paink diya tha wo wapis udar hawa me ponch gaya
Jo talwar sonam ke jisam me the me ne us taraf hath kiya to wo talwar sonam ke jisam se bahir nikal aye
Me gusse se us sainik ke taraf daikh raha tha wo daar ke mare kampne laga
Me talwar ke taraf ishara kiya to talwar sidhe ho gai or ungli ke sath ishara kiya to wo is sainik ke taraf bhar gai full speed se
Sainik ye daikh ke cheekh para or ankhain band kar le
Talwar us sainik ko cheerte howe nikalti us se pehle he maharani sainik or talwar ke beach a gai or apne talwar se us talwar ke do tukre kar diye
Maharani ab gusse se mere taraf daikh rahe the or me us ke taraf
Is sab ke beach sonam ke taraf kisi ne dihan he nhi diya tha jaise he me ne us ke jisam se talwar nikali us ka zakham khud ba khud bharne laga
Q k mere ranion ke jisam mujh se jure howe the to manikantak ke mani ke waja se us ka zakam khud ba khud bhar gaya
Or yaha me or maharani ik dosre ko gusse se daikh rahe the
Maharani ke hath me talwar the me ne hath ko jatka diya to mere hath me b meri divya talwar a gai or hamle me me ne pehel ke or maharani par hamla kar diya
Me full force se age bhara tha is liye jaise he mere or maharani ke talwar takrai me force se isse peche dakeel raha tha or 3 ya char dewrain thor kar me ne usse paink diya
Mere hamle se maharani sambal gai ab us ke ankhon me b shole dehek uthe or jaise me ne hamla kiya tha wahi hamla maharani ne kar diya or mujhe he 3 diwaron ke phar gira diya
Ab hum dono dehekti ankhon se ik dusre ko daikh rahe the
Me uth ke kara howa or dobara maharani pe hamla kiya is bhar wob tayar the wo b agge bhare or hum dono ka yudh shuru howa na wo peche hath rahe the na me
Hum dono ke talwaro se chingarian nikal rahe the hum ne ik dosre ko peche dakela or ik dosre pe apne tatwo se hamla shuru kar diya bijli se bijli takrate or agg se agg
Maharani kissi b angle me mujh se kaam na the bilkul barabre ke takar de rahe the
Shaid abbe me apne nai powers ko control nhi kar pa raha tha is liye
Is bech apni ranion ka haal to me batana bhool gaya
Jaise he net un se door howa to wo charo hawa me urr gai behoshi ke halat me likin sheild ko activate nhi kar pai q k sheild pancho ke milne se activate hoti the or sonam neche pare the ab us ke zakham b pore bhar gai or us ka jisam b chamak utha or wo b hawa me uth gai
Jaise he pancho ka connection jora sheild activate ho gai
Mere or maharani ke larai me neche masoom logo ka kafi nuksaan ho raha tha is liye us sheild ne hum dono ko gair liya ab hum dono ke larai sheild ke andar ho rahe the
Ab bhair ke log bilkul safe the
Humare ik dusre pe hamle janlewa ho rahe the talwar or tatwa donok e shakti ka use kar rahe the
Mere red urja ab or bharne lage ye urja kuch zyada he the jaise jaise urjha bhar rahe the waise waise me maharani pe bhari phar raha tha
Me ne ik or war maharani pe kiya or us ke talwar toot gai or wo shield se bahir ja gire zameen pe usse pehle he kafi chotain lag chuki the ab force se zameen par girne se wo behosh ho gai
Likin mera gussa kham hone ka naam he nhi le raha tha me ne ik zoor ke dhar mari to shield me b dharar phar gai or zameen hilne lage
Logo ke ghar bhar or zameen ke tukre hawa me uthne lage or tabhi ik kali talwar zameen or shield ko cheerte howe mere dusre hath me a gai
Jaise he us talwar ko me ne hath me pakra mera laal urja jo bekabo ho raha tha us ne apne andar kench liya or mera gussa b shant hone laga
Mere ranian ka jisam mere kareeb a gaya or shield dobara se thek ho gai me b normal hone laga likin ankain ab b band the mere
Bahir ka mahool b normal ho gaya sab ankhain phare ye sab daikh rahe the
Maharani ko b hosh a gaya us ke behne us ke gird bette howe the daar un ke ankhon me saaf nazar a raha tha
Kuch dair baad me or mere rania zameen pe utre sheild b khatam ho gai or watawarn b sahi ho gaya
Jab me ne ankhain khole to sath me mere ranion ke ankhain b khul gai
Ankhain kholte he main ne idar udar daikha jaise he mere nazar sonam pe pare jo sahi salamat kare the me doar ke us ke pass gaya or usse apni bahoo me khas liya
Sonam b mere bahoo me sama gai
Shan…yaar is tarah ka mazak na karo mere sath ik pal ke liye to mujhe laga me ne tume kho diya agar tujhe kuch ho jata to yaha koib jevet na rehta sab kuch tabah kar deta me
Sonam…ap ke hote howe mujhe bala kuch ho sakta hai bilkul nhi
Shan…likin galti to ke hai in logo ne or is ke saza ke inne de ke raho ga
Ye kehte sath he mere expression phr change ho gai
Me ne sonam ko bahoo se azad kar diya or phr maharani ke taraf mor gaya
Mere talware ab b mere hatho me the
Shan…tum ne mere ranion ke jaan lene chahe ab apni jaan ke khair manao aj na tum bacho ge na he tumara rajiya
Ye kehte sath he mere red urja phr active ho gai
Shan…LEO,SERPENT,SITALLLLL
Mere jisam se leo or serpent nikal ayya or sital dragon me change ho gai
Mere urja ne charo ranion ko b gair liya or wo golden colour me change ho gai tamal,diya,riya or miya b apne asli jinn roop me samne a gai
Maharani ko apna or apne rajiya ka ant samne dikh raha tha
Abbi me kuch or kehta ke mera locket chamka or baba mere samne kare ho gai
Gurudev ko daikhte he mere ankhain normal ho gai or me un ke samne ik gutne pe baith gaya
Q k wo mere guru the un ka samman mujh pe farz tha
Shan…gurudev ap….
Guru g…beta shant ho jao pehle us ke baad bat kare ge
Un ke baat sun ke me dihan mudra me bait gaya
Tamal diya riya or miya pehle gaib ho gai us ke baad mere ranian normal ho gai or akhir me leo or serpent wapis mere jisam me samma gai
Ab srf talware mere hath me the
Guru g…beta inne b apne andar samma lo
Un ke baat sun ke mera dihan mere talwaro pe chala gaya jinne me bilkul bhol gaya tha ke ye ab b mere hath me hai
Me ne phr ankhain band ke or dono talware b mere andar chale gai jab black talwar mere andar gai to mujhe kafi taqleef howe likin me ne bardasht kar le
Jab sab kuch ho gaya to me phr baba ke samne a gaya
Shan…hukum kare gurudev
Guru g…beta ye tum kya karne ja rahe the
Shan…maafi chaho ga gurudev likin inno ne mere sonam ko jaan se marne ke koshish ke hai
Guru g…wo to me ne tume pehle he is ke bare me bata diya tha ta ke tum khud ko tayar kar lo
Shan…gurudev mere ranian mere zindagi hai agar inne kissi ne taqleef dene ke bare me socha b to me un ke zindagi narak bana do ga or is do take ke rani ne meri ranion ko jaan se marne ka adesh diya tha
Ye kehte kehte mera krodh phr bharne laga ye sab us laal urja ke waja se ho raha tha
Guru g…beta is waqt tume nai shaktian parapt howe hai or wo tum par havi ho rahi hai is liya tumara krodh baar baar barh raha hai waise b tumara yaha ka karya samapt ho gaya hai tum ab wapis chale jao or apni in shaktion pe kaboo pao jo b maharani ne kiya wo is rajiye ke liye kiya tha tum to khud ik raja ho phr aise parastiti me tum kya karte
Shan…gurudev ap beshak sahi hai likin aise paristiti me b me kisi nirdish ko marne k adesh kabhi b na deta
Guru g…jo ho gaya so ho gaya usse badla nhi ja sakta sonam ab bilkul sahi hai ab tum wapis jao ye mera adesh hai
Shan…jo agya gurudev
Issi ke sath baba gaib ho gai or me khara ho gaya or apna portal khol diya
Shan…chalo chale yaha se
Sab portal me chale gai likin me jate jate rukh gaya
Shan…tumare kismat ache hai maharani agar gurudev bech me na atte to tum or tumare is rajiye ko me rakh me badal daita
Ye kehte kehte mere ankhain phr laal ho gai or maharani or us ke behno ka dil kamp utha
Meb portal me chala gaya or ponch gaya apni ship pe jaha sabhi sastha rahe the
Mere waha ke jane ke baad maharani or us ke behno ne chen ka sans liya
B1…didi khon tha ye
B2…ab chup b karo jaan bache
B4…haan mujhe to apni mout samne nazar a rahi the
Likin maharani ke dil me shan ne halchal peda kar de the usse hara ke q k aj thak wo kisi se nhi hari the
Inne yahi rehne daite hai wapis chalte hai apne hero ke pass
Shan apni ranion ke sath tore pyar bare lamhe guzar raha tha us ke baad sab so gai
Agli subah sab fresh howe or ship me he dihan me chale gai
Shan apne shaktion ke pass pocha to waha red urja the jo kafi unstable the or sab se zyada the leo ke urha ke samne mere red sword ghom rahe the or serpent ke samne mere blach sword or in ke peche the red urja ka gola
Me sedha us ke pass gaya or us pe hath rakh ke ankhain band kar le
Kuch dair baad wo urja stable hone lage or akhir me bilkul shant ho gai
Is urja ka akhar leo or serpent ke urja se 10 guna zyada tha gurudev issi shakti ke baat kar rahe the jo mere andar chupe howe the
Aj me ne ye urja b pa le hai ab daikhte hai agge kaha ka adesh milta hai
Dosto ab kahani apne end ke taraf bhar rahi hai lagta hai ab is safar ka ant hone wala hai bht socha ke isse or likho likin koi plot zehen ke nhi a raha is liya ab is story ko b alweda kehna ka samay nazdeek a raha hai
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE AGR KOI SUGGESION HO TO ZAROOR SHARE KIJYE GA
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Are yar itni jaldi end mat karna yarr tum story to boht zabardast start karte ho magar end boht sada or bakwas sa karte ho plzz is thora lamba la kar chalna