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Shikari_golu

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No problem bro, The main charactor is Saima, and rest are auxiliary, the main antagonist is Rahman and Saima, Lallan is the story driver.

Kabhi dusri story bhi update karo...ya band kar di ???

Benaami bewafaai.....?
 
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Yes most probabily closed, too much unnecessary opposition, 'cuckold' type stories are not really to anyone's fancy as I gathered from the comments.

Yes i know...infact i dont like cuckold too.....but i expected some paypack in that story...,..dats y i was waiting....

u never ever explain , why nd how wife & sis start cheating nd become slave.....

i wanted to see some payback frm hubby nd also want to know dat why both women doing all dat stuff......

Ok....keep going with this.....gud luck
 
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Yes i know...infact i dont like cuckold too.....but i expected some paypack in that story...,..dats y i was waiting....

u never ever explain , why nd how wife & sis start cheating nd become slave.....

i wanted to see some payback frm hubby nd also want to know dat why both women doing all dat stuff......

Ok....keep going with this.....gud luck

Yes their was a payback.

It was a old story malyalam exibee story, I can give a synopsis, The local goon basically forcefully seduced the wife, the plot was to destroy the influential family, and he basically trained her to be a slut via blackmail, and she resisted as much she could but her lust with time overcame her and with her husband's influence she become a willing slut, and the guy when found about his wife's behavior instead of confronting her first tried to ignore the issue, and when he found out about her, and how clinically she cheated on him, he tried to force his fantasy on her to have sex with his friend behind his back, he delved and tried to find everything about her, and their he found about her wife's connection to that goon, where her wife betrayed him, and humiliated him with the goon and created a sting to expose the family's heir in sex scandal which destroyed the family's name, and many fatwa is issued against them, his sister when she found about this, confronts her brother but broken she is unable to get through him, and depressed he kills himself, she then finds about the web that has destroyed her family and found about the goon and her brother's wife, who had fled the country, she then follows her and.. you know revenge.

There is some modification to the main story, the wife not supposed to be full on slut, but blackmailed, and the guy was suppose to make her full on slut, but according to the poll I converted to slut, and the child she kept was because the goon has threatened to burn her whole family down so she kept it, but accoring to poll, I made her a willing partner, and their was no sex scene between the guy's friend and wife, but he had imagined the whole encounter in his mind, and then slowly forced her wife to have sex with his friend to fulfill his fantasy, for which he had provided the blackmailing photos to his friend himself, and the arbi neighbor is also injection.
 
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.. hello, ..hello, ..biji main bol raha hun rahman, ..ha bolo rahman, kya hal, sab khairiyat se to hai na, rahman.. ha biji, sab sahi hai, biji wo kuch paise bhijwa deti to bara meharbani ho jati, ..paise, kitne chahiye tumhe, rahman.. aap 20 bis lakh bhijwa do biji, ..achcha main bank me dalwa dungi, ek baat aur tha rahman, rahman.. kya hua sanjeeda biji, sanjeeda.. wo ek bahut hi galeez aadami ghar aa gaya tha, rahman.. kon galeez, uska naam kya tha, sanjeed.. mujhe naam uska nahi malum rahman, lekin wo bahut giri hui bate bol raha tha mere bare me, rahman.. achcha, sanjeeda.. achcha kya bol rahe ho rahman, main kitna dar gayi thi, rahman.. wo dikhane me kaisa tha, sanjeeda.. thoda patla tha, normal hi tha, uske baal ghungharele the, rahman.. aap dariye nahi biji main kuch karta hun, sanjeeda.. aap use janate ho, phone kat jata hai... rahman apne phone ko kas ke pakad leta hai.. lallan.

lallan raat ke waqt apne chote se kamare me baitha hua tha, aur hiba ke sapno me khoya hua tha, wo use apne sath shadi kar ke rakhna chahta tha, aur hiba bhi yahi chahti thi, khaskar ab jab hiba ke sauhar ne dusari nikah kar ek aur begum le aaya tha, hiba din raat dukhi rahane lagi thi, aur us ghar me naukar sa ban gayi thi, lekin lallan apne beti mahira ke liye kuch bhi kadam nahi utha raha tha, lallan ab kamane laga tha, aur wo apne atit se kafi dur chala gaya tha, uske upar saima ka bahut bada upkar tha jisne uske pairo ka apration kara ke use chalane layakh banaya tha, aur us valikan ka bhi, lekin ab wo un sab se dur rahta tha, khaskar saima se, jis ke karib wo jab bhi jata uska jindagi nash hone ke kagar pe chala jata tha.

lallan sam ko baith apne liye khana bana raha tha, aur kuch gana gun guna raha tha, tabhi use aisa mehsoo hua ki koi use dekh raha hai, aur wo waha se uth kar bahar jaa kar idhar udhar dekhane lagata hai, lekin use waha koi nahi dikhata hai, aur wo andar aa kar wapas khana banane lagata hai, lallan uske bad kha pi ke so jata hai, lekin uske andar se wo ajeeb sa dar nahi jata ki koi use dekh raha hai, agle din lallan apne kam pe chala jata hai, lekin uska dimag us ahsas pe laga rahta hai, jaise koi chaya uska picha kar rahi hai, lallan apna din bhar kam karta hai, aur saam ko ghar aa jata hai, aur apne kam kar so jata hai, lekin usko wo ahsas lagatar ho raha tha, isi tarah kuch din baad wo kaam par tha aur use hiba ka call aata hai, aur lallan ko wo batati hai ki uska ghar pe intejaar kar rahi hai, aur lallan khusi se dophar ko hi chutti le ke wapas apne kamare pe chala jata hai, jaha pe hiba pehale se maujood thi aur khana bana rahi thi, lallan ko dekh hiba.. aa gaye, jaldi se tayyar ho jao, tumhare liye paneer banaya hai, lekin lallan hiba ko piche se pakad leta hai, ..meri jannu, main to tujhe khane aaya hun, lekin hiba use dhakka de ke hata deti hai.. hato yaha se, mujhe tang nahi karo, aur lallan waha se hichak ke nahane chala jata hai, aur hiba khana banane lagati hai,

kuch der baad

..hiba mera tauliya dena, mujhse chut gaya hai, lekin koi jawab nahi aata hai, ..hiba, hiba sun lo na, lekin koi jawab nahi aata hai, lallan thoda gussa hone lagata hai.. hiba main aise hi aa jaunga bahar, to dusare taraf se kisi aami ki awaz aati hai.. to aao na, jise sun lallan bhinge kapade se chupe turant darate hue bahar nikalata hai, ..hiba hiba, aur lallan waha pe teen aadami ko khade dekhata hai, lallan ..kon ho tum log, aur hiba kaha hai, .. tu iska khasam hai, main man hi nahi sakta, aur wo hasane lagate hai, aur waha bagal me hiba behosh padi hui thi, aur uske muh se khun ris raha tha, aur jise dekh lallan ko gussa aa jata hai, ..tum madarchod, harami, aur waha bagal me pade ek penchkas ko utha unke taraf daudata hai, lekin isse pehale ki wo kuch kar pata, ..lallan tujhe main is se jyada samajhdar samajhata tha, lallan wahi ruk jata hai aur piche dekhane lagata hai, waha pe rahman khada tha, aur phir wo hiba ke taraf dekhata hai iske sir pe unme se ek ne bandookh laga rakha tha, ..abhi to ye sirf behosh hai, agar ek galat kadam utaya to, tu to jayega hi, sath me ye bhi jayegi, lallan dar jata hai.. rahman maine tera itna madad kiya, lekin is se pehale kuch aur lallan bolata ki, rahman.. sant ho ja, dekhe to is houri ko, aur rahman hiba ke paas pahunch jata hai, ..agar ye hila to sidhe khopadi uda saale ka, ..thik bhaijaan, aur rahman hiba ko gardan pakad ke utha leta hai, ..rahman ruk ja, nahi to mujh se bura koi nahi hoga, sale tujhe jinda yahi gad dunga, rahman lallan ke in khokhali bate sun ke hasane lagata hai, aur hiba ke bah rahe khun se uska lipstick karane lagata hai, ..lallan tu kuch nahi kar payega, aur hiba ka salwar utarane lagata hai, lallan.. rahman madarjaat, hat waha se, aur penchkas ko utha rahman ke tara bhagata hai, aur un gundo me se ek apne bandookh ke piche se uske muh pe hamala karata hai, aur lallan ke muh se khun nikalane lagata hai, rahman ise dekh hasane lagata hai aur hiba ko mamme ko hath me le leta hai.. lallan tu bada bewkoof hai, sale tu sanjeeda ke yaha kyu gaya, lallan wahi pe gira hua tha.. mujhe maaf kar do, mujhse galti ho gayi, please alh ke liye hiba ko chor do, rahman.. tujhe kya laga tu mujhse bach jayega, aur is karname ke baad, aur hiba ko sir ke bal patak se uksa pyajama aur chaddi kichane lagata hai, lallan apna sir us taraf kar jab ye dekhata hai, to uska dimag phir kharab ho jata hai, aur wo phir uth rahman ke taraf bhagata hai, aur uske do gunde use pakad leta hai, aur teesara uske pet me ghuse marane lagata hai, ..sale teri aukaat kya hai, ..bhaijaan pe hath uthayega, aur lallan behoshi ke tara jane lagata hai, rahman apna pant utar ke apna khada lund behosh hiba ke andar daal deta hai, ..in madarchod ko yaha utha ke laa, aur wo teeno gunde lallan ko pakaad ke rahman ke paas le aata hai, rahman.. bahut sahi rand hai teri, kasam se ekdam rui, lallan waha pe behoshi ke kagar phunchane lagata hai.. randi nahi hai ye, meri.... aur behosh hone lagata hai, uske ankh se anshu girne lagata hai, tabhi lallan ke kan me hiba ke dard bhare karahane ki awaz aati hai aur lallan apne pure taqat se aage jhapat ke kisi billi ke tarah rahman ka kan pe dal phasa deta hai, rahman.. haaaiiiii, tum sab dekh kya rah ho, ye mera kaan ukad dega, aur unme se ek gunda goli chala deta hai, aur lallan ko lagata hai ki wo ab gaya, lekin lallan apne ek chute hath se apna sarir chuta hai, use koi goli nahi lagi thi, aur lallan is afra tafri me bandookh chin leta hai, aur rahman ke sine pe tan deta hai.. tum sab aaya se bhag jao, nahi to aaj sab ko jinda gad dunga, rahman apne sine pe bandookh dekh dar ke kanpane lagata hai, rahman apna pant khinchata hai ki lallan ko ahsas hota hai rahman ne kya kiya, aur wo rahman ke hath pe goli chala deta hai, rahman.. tum tum tum, dekh kya rahe ho, khatam karo ise, aur rahman ke gunde point blanck se rahman ke pith pe goli chala deta hai, ek do teen, aur wahi pe dhadam se lallan gir jata hai, aur wo sab afra tafri me bhag jate hain, lekin lallan abhi bhi jinda tha aur uske pith pe kafi wajan tha, aur kisi ne goli ko lallan pe lagane se rok diya tha, aur wo hiba thi jo abhi lallan ke pith se mrit padi hui thi, aur uska khoon lallan ke bhinge hue sarir pe ris raha tha, aur lallan wahi pade pade ro raha tha.

Kafi der baad lallan ko hosh aaya, aur wo apne upar se hiba ke sarir ko hataya, aur wahi pe baith gaya, use tab hiba ke dwara likha hua, uske khoon se, pe pada, waha hiba ne urdu me likha tha, lallan bahut jyada padha likha nahi tha, lekin chitrakari ka kaam karte karte use kuch sab bhasa me aa gaya tha aur waha hiba ne apne khoon se "mahira " likha tha, jise padh lallan bilkul tut gaya aur hiba ke mrit lash ke bagar jinda lash ki tarah so gaya.
 

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abe ye kya bakchodi ho gayi lallan ke saath .. bas ek hiba he to thi .. jo uske ghatiya jeevan mein ek roshini thi .. ab wo bhi cheen li iss MC rehman ne ...
 
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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

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lallan waha se uth jata hai, aur hiba ke mrit pade sarir ko dekh wahi dharasayi pad jata hai, lekin uske andar ka aag bhadakane lagata hai, aur waha se wo uth jata hai, aur hiba ke sarir ko utha ke bistar pe lita deta hai, aur waha pe kafi der rota hai, phir bahut muskil se uthta hai, aur apne ghar pe pade ek chakku utha leta hai.

Rahman us pure ghatana ke baad sidhe sanjeeda ke ghar pe jane lagata hai apne gundo ke sath, use bhi goli lag gaya tha, aur isi wajah se wo jald se jald sanjeeda ke ghar se kisi aspatal jana chahta tha, aur use sanjeeda se paise bhi lene the, ..bos aapne usko choda tha, rahman.. kya kahna chahta hai be, ..samjha nahi, wo randi kisi bade ghar ki thi, agar jach ho gayi to sale tum to gaye, rahman uski bat ko dhyaan se sunata hai,.. gadi mod, aur hame sare saboot khatam karana hoga aur wo wapas lallan ke ghar ke taraf apna gadi mod deta hai, aur kuch de me pahunch jatein hain, aur rahman apne gundo se pure ghar pe petrol se bhinga deta hai, aur ek tilli se aag laga deta hai, aur sabkuch dhu dhu kar ke jalane lagata hai, aur wo ghar kisi khandar ki tarah gir jata hai, aur phir wo sab waha se nikal jatein hain.

lallan waha se pehale hi nikal jata hai, aur sidhe rahman ke bangale pe jata hai, aur wahi pe andar ghus ke intejaar karane lagata hai, lallan ka aankh me sirf khun bah raha tha, aur lallan ka pagalpan pure saroor pe tha.

sanjeeda.. bhai ye kya ho gaya aapko, goli kaise lag gayi, rahman.. us aadami ko samjhane gaya tha, usne ye goli chala diya aapi, us paagal ne kisi aur ka khun bhi kar diya hai, sanjeeda.. bhaijan aap turant doctor ke paas chalo, rahman.. nahi aapi, aap kisi doctor ko yahi bula lo, agar aspatal gaya to police aa jayegi, sanjeeda.. to kya hua bhaijaan, aapne koi gunah thode kiya jo aap dar rahe ho, rahman.. nahi aapi, aap samjh nahi rahi, ye duniya bahut kharab hai.

lallan rahman ka daaru ka kuch botal gatak liya tha aur wahi pe kisi pagal kutte ki tarah baitha hua tha, lekin pure ek din bit jaane ke baad bhi koi nahi aaya to, lallan ne daaru se pura ghar jala ke aag laga di, aur akbar sahab ka pustaini ghar dhu dhu kar jalane laga, aur iska khabar kuch der me rahman ke paas aur pure pariwar ke paas pahuncha, aur sab wapas bangale ke taraf jaane lage, rahman, rahim, sanjeeda, saima aur kuch dur ke ristedaar sab kuch der ke fansale me bangale ko pahunchane lage, aur rahman ka halat goli lagane ki wajah se thoda kamjod tha, sheikh khandan pe aisi bade hamale se sare news wale, aur mla mp sab waha pahunchane lage, rahim janana chahta tha ki aag kaise lagi, aur police ashwasan diya ki sab kuch pata kiya jayega, lallan wahi sadako pe baith ye sab nautanki dekh raha tha, aur wo kuch sant hone ka intejaar karane laga, aur aisa kuch nahi ho raha tha, aur upar se karib 100 police wale pure ghar ko ghere hue the, lekin lallan ab kuch farak nahi pad raha tha, aur raat ko naukar ka bhes bana ke lallan ghar me ghus gaya jo kuch bachcha hua tha, aur apna muh chipa ke mali ka kaam karane laga, use waha pe sanjeeda aur saima dikhi aur uske andar ka gussa satwe asman pe chala gaya lekin wo apne aap ko sambhalane laga, uske samane hiba ka mrit sarir pada bar bar aa raha tha, aur uske andar pagalpan ka dauda par raha tha, aur raat ko sab khane ko baith jate hain, tabhi lallan rahman ke samane jata hai, aur apne sir se kapada hata deta hai, aur rahman ko ye kisi dheeme gati ke chalchitra jaisa dikh raha tha, kisi bure sapane ki tarah lallan uske samane uske ghar walo ke samane khada tha, aur rahman ko lallan chakku utha ke uske upar hamala karate hue dikhae pad raha tha, aur lallan ke chaku se war rahman ke gale pe karata hai, aur dusara uske sine pe, aur rahman wahi girane lagata hai, ..tujhe kya laga, ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, baki pariwar ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki yaha ho kya raha hai, lekin is se pehale wo kuch karate sochate rahman ka sarir jamin pe gid jata hai, sanjeeda bahut jod se chikhati hai jis se bahar khade polis halchal me aati hai, aur daud ke ghar jaane lagati hai, ki rahim apna bandook nikal ke lallan pe chalata hai lekin lallan jhuk ke rahman ka bandook nikal leta hai, jo use malum tha ki kaha rakhata hai, aur lallan khada hoke rahim pe goli chalata hai, lekin rahim ke aage use bachchane ke liye saima aa jaati hai, aur saima ke sair ke 3 goli lagati hai, aur wo wahi pe gir jaati hai, lallan wahi par kisi pagalon ki taraf hanf raha tha.. ha ha ha ha ha ha, aur lallan ko rahman hilate hue mehsoos hua to, wo ek goli rahman ke sir pe laga ke chala deta hai, itana ho jane ke baad polis andar ghusati hai, aur waha ka drisya dekh wo bhi hakka bakka ho jate hain, aur wo turant lallan aur rahim ko pakadate hain, jo ek dusare pe bandook tane hua tha.

Aur turant saima aur rahman ko aspatal le jaya jata hai, jaha rahman mrit ghosit kar diya jata hai, aur saima ek bahut critical halat me thi, aur sanjeeda aur rahim bahar baith roye jaa rahe the.
 
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