Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[spritemathews]

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[Arjun Singh 72]

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[Baba__Bhai]

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Aadhe ghante me de raha hun .. bhai..
Bas finishing reh gayi hai...

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Congrats for completing 100 pages..and i think you are the fastest one to complete 100 pages. Waiting for mega update bhai

Thanks so much for the wish...

Next update aadha ghante me..

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Waiting for next update. Congrats for completing 100 pages..

Thanks so much for the wish..

Next update bas aadha ghante me

 

[sonukale]

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[CG]

Penalty lagegi re bawa

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Mega Update - 18​

EX -

Phir pallavi ne mujhe apna address diya
Or main chal diya uske ghar usko pick karne.

NEXT -

10 minute ke baad meri car ruki pallavi ke gate par ..
Jo ke ek 3BKH ka flat tha.

Pallavi ek middle class family se belong karti hai.
Maine car park karke uske gate par bell ki ..
gate uski mummy ne khola

Intro. Time
Vaishali - Pallavi's Mom
38 year's old
Dil ki ekdum saaf or House wife hain.
Eklouti beti hai Pallavi,
isi liye usse jaan se zyada pyaar karti hain.

Deepak - Pallavi's Father
40 year's old
Bikes ki agency hai khud ki
Sankarik aadmi hain.

Now back to the story -

Main (Aunty ke pair chhukar)- Namaste! Aunty Ji.

Aunty (Mujhe dekhte hue)- Jeete raho beta,
waise kon ho tum,
or kisse milna hai.

Main - Aunty main pallavi ka friend hun.
Uski scooty repair ke liye gayi hai
Isi liye use pick karne aaya hun.

Aunty - Tum Rocky ho na

Main - Haan Aunty, Aapko kaise pata chala.

Aunty - Sara din pallavi tumhare bare me hi baaten karti hai..ki rocky aisa hai, vaisa hai...
Isi liye pehchan gayi..
(Mujhe andar bulate hue)

Aao - Aao andar aao beta

Aunty ne mujhe andar aane ka rasta diya..
main unke peeche peeche andar chala gaya.

Main- Aunty pallavi kahan hai..

Aunty - Beta vo apne room me tayyar ho rahi hai,
tum yahan sofe par baitho,
main use bas abhi bhejti hun.

(Unhone ek kamre ki or jate hue bola)

Main - O.K. Aunty... Please jaldi karna , ham late ho rahe hain..
Aunty bina kuchh javaab diye andar chali gayin..

Main sofe par baith gaya or pallavi ke room ki taraf dhiyan se dekhne laga

Tabhi main shock reh gaya..

Mujhe room ke aar - paar dikhai dene laga..andar pallavi apne baal bana rahi thi ..

Or uski mom usse kuchh keh rahi thin..

Maine socha jab dekh sakta hun to zaroor sunne ki power bhi hogi..

Main apne kano par zor dene laga..
Or mujhe unki aavaz bhi aane lagi..

Pallavi - Hahahahahha, Nahin mom aisa kuchh nahin hai, vo sirf mera dost hai..

Vaishali - Chal jhuti, mujhe to tum dono ka koi chakkar lagta hai..

Pallavi (Sharmate hue)- Stop it mom. Matlab kuchh bhi!

Vaishali - waise bohot handsome hai..
agar teri jagha main hoti to kabhi ka usko "I Love You" bol diya hota.

Pallavi (Bohot zyada sharmate hue)- Moooommm.

Vaishali - Achchha - Achchha theek hai tu ja jaldi, vo tera intzaar kar raha hai ...

Pallavi - Bas shoes pehen kar aati hun..

Itne me ek kaam karne vali bai mujhe coffee dekar chali gayi..
Or main coffee peene laga.

Pallavi ki mom bhi mere samne ke sofe par aakar baith gayin..
or mujhse baaten karne lagin..

Vaishali - To beta aap rehte kahan ho.

Main - Aunty Aapne Keshav thakur ka naam suna hai..

Vaishali - Haan beta vo to is sheher ke jane mane business man hain .

Main - Aunty main unhin ka beta hun.
"Rocky Thakur"

(Aunty ye sunkar shocked ho gayin)

Main - Aunty kahan kho gayin..

Vaishali (shock se bahar aate hue) - Beta tumhare Mom-Dad ne bohot achchhe sanskar diye hain tumhen.

Main - Thanks Aunty.

Itne me pallavi tayyar hokar aa gayi..

Or vahin khade hokar mujhe dekhne lagi..
Main (Khade hote hue)- Pallavi kahan kho gayin , chalo jaldi, ham late ho rahe hain.

Pallavi - Haan, Hmm , Chalo
Or ham dono bahar aaye or car me baith gaye.

Pallavi mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi.

Main (Mazaak karte hue)- Aise mat dekh pagli, (Dil par hath rakhkar) Idhar kuchh - Kuchh hota hai..

Pallavi buri tarhan sharma gayi..

Pallavi - Waise aaj tum kuchh zyada hi smart lag rahe ho..

Main - Kyon, pehle nahin lagta tha.

Pallavi - Nahin, pehle bhi lagte the par aaj kuchh zyada lag rahe ho..

Ham aise hi khatti - Meethi baaten karte hue college pohche.

Maine car park ki or car se bahar aaya..

(Itne me vahi ladki jo us din meri car ke sath photo khichva rahi thi)
Usne apni scooty meri car ke paas park ki or mujhe dekhkar ek smile pass karte hue meri taraf aane lagi..

Main or pallavi car se utar kar Raju & Hans ka intzaar kar rahe the.

Main - Pallavi phone to laga zara hans ya raju ko..
kahin vo class me to nahin pohoch gaye.

Pallavi - Haan, Abhi call karti hun.

Itne me vo ladki chalte hue hamare paas aa gayi.

Ladki - Hi, I am Sakshi.

Main - Kya main aapko janta hun?

Sakshi - Ji wo main aapse sorry bolne aayi thi us din ke liye.
Jab main aapki car ke sath photo shoot kara rahi thi apni friends ke sath.
Or maine anjane me aapse galat bol diya tha.

Main - koi baat nahin, main aisi chhoti - moti baaton par dhiyan nahin deta.

Sakshi - (Apna hath aage karte hue)- Kya ham friends ban sakte hain?

Main (Hath mila kar)- Haan, kyon nahin,

(Pallavi phone par baat karte hue hame bohot gusse me dekh rahi thi)

Maine pallavi ki taraf dekha to usne ek phiki si smile kar di.

Pallavi phone cut karte hue mujh se

Pallavi - Rocky chalen class me Hans or Raju dono hi class me hain.

Main (Sakshi se)- Sakshi isse milo,

Ye hai meri sabse achchhi dost Pallavi.

Ye sunkar pallavi ka chehra khil gaya..

Vo bade pyaar se mujhe dekhne lagi.

Sakshi ne pallavi se hand shake kiya..

Main - Achchha shakshi ham baad me milte hain..
abhi class ka time ho gaya hai.

Sakshi - Theek hai, main bhi sath chalti hun, waise Main BBA 2nd year me hun..

Or girls hostel me rehti hun.
Ham sab college ke andar chal diye.

Main - That's Good.

College ki ladkiyan aaj mujhe ghoor - ghoor kar dekh rahi thin.
Or pallavi & shakshi ki taraf to mano kha jane vali nazron se dekh rahi thin..

Ham sidiyon se chalte hue first floor par pohche.

Shakshi - guys, meri class yahin hai..

Main - O.K. to ham chalte hain.
Tabhi sakshi ki 2 friends uske paas aayin..

Sakshi (Hame introduce karate hue) - inse miliye ye meri friends hain.

Main & Pallavi - Hello

Or friends ye hain mere dost - Rocky & Pallavi

Uski friends - Inhen kon nahin janta,
ye to is college ki shan hain.

Main - Achchha hame chalna chahiye. Ham late ho rahe hain.

Or ham un sabko bye karke nikle 2nd floor par jahan hamari class thi.

Class ke bahar Raju or Hans hath oopar karke khade the.
Unko aise dekhkar main or pallavi pet pakadkar hasne lage..

Main (Haste hue)- Abe tum kis jurum ki saza bhugat rahe ho.

Hans - Yarr, wo rachna madem ko to tu janta hi hai kitni strict hain,

10 minute late the, madem me punish kar diya...
BC Aisa lag raha hai jaise vapas school me aa gaye hon.

Tabhi raju hasne laga

Pallavi - Ab tujhe kya hua?

Raju (Haste hue)- Ham to sirf 10 minute late the,
to hamari ye halat hai.

Tum dono to 15 minutes late ho tumhari halat sachkar hasi aa gayi.

Main - chal dekhte hain,
kya hota hai

Main or pallavi ek sath - May i gate in mam.

Rachna (Hamari taraf dekhte hue halke gusse me)- Tum aaj phir se late.

Main (Masoom si shakal banakar)-
Soorry mam,
pallavi ki scooty repair ke liye gayi hai..
isko pick karne ke chakkar me late ho gaya.

(Madem ke chehre par smile aa gayi)

Rachna - Theek hai is baar maaf kiya
Par agli baar nahin chalega.
Chalo aao andar.

Maine ek baar Hans & Raju ki taraf drkha, wo hairat se hame hi dekh rahe the,
maine unhen aankh maar di or pallavi ke sath class me jakar baith gaya.

Madem padhate hue poore lacture me mujhe hi dekhti rahi.

Or pallavi usko (gusse se)

Lacture over hua to madem mujhse-

Rachna - Rocky, jo lacture free ho usme mere cabin me aana .. tumse kuchh kaam hai..

(Poori class hairat se madem ki taraf dekh rahi thi)
To... Be... Continued

 

[Aron]

Nice update let see what happen in cabin....?

 

[CG]

Nice update lekin bhai kya hua hai aaj Guests aaye hain to dhyaan kyun bhatakaa rahe ho..... aaj wala update aisa lagaa jaise aane wale update ke bich ki koi kadi ho.... kuch khaas nahi lagaa sorrry bhai .

dekhte hain Madam kya karti hain Cabin mein and Pallavi kaise react karti hai Madam ke bahar jaane se....

Keep rocking

Abhay ki stories padh rahe hain sabhi...bahut hi achhi hai lekin Abhay thoda sa slow ho gaya hai may be due to some personal work and no doubt he writes very nice story......

You guys keep rocking.

Dekhte hain kal ke update mein kya gul khilaate ho