Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)
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Mega Update
Update - 51
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Maine mom & dad ke gaal chume or teleport hokar guruji ke paas pohoch gaya.
Waise maine guruji ke paas aane ka faisla isliye liya tha ki mujhe saari behno ko unki saza deni thi.
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NEXT --
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Maine jate hi guruji ke charan sparsh kiye, vo mera hi intzaar kar rahe the.
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Guruji - vats! Raat zyada ho chuki hai, ab so jaao. Kal subha se tumhara abhyas aarambh hoga.
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Main - jaisi aapki ichchha guruji.
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Main guruji ki us jhopdi me hi so gaya.
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Subha guruji ke uthane se meri neend khuli, or maine paas me beh rahe sheetal jharne me snan liya,
Or guruji ke paas aaya,
Guruji ne pehle mujhe dhiyaan me baitha diya,
Or uske baad talvaar baazi ki prectise shuru karvai,
Phir maine thodi der rest liya,
Or uske baad phir mantaro ka uchcharan kiya,
In sab me kab subha se shaam ho gayi, pata hi nahin chala.
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Guruji - Vats! Aaj ke mantar uchcharan ke baad tumhare andar itni shakti aa chuki hai ki,
tum jo man me sochoge, vo ho jayega, jis cheez ki ichchha jataoge,
vo saamne aa jayegi, or ab tumhen har baar mantra padhne ki zaroorat nahin hai.
Ab tum hava me ud sakte ho, or paani me saans le sakte ho.
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Main - jee gurudev.
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Phir maine magic se khana mangaya or ham khakar sone chale gaye.
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Yahan to poora din precise chalti rahi,
Ham chalte hain haveli ki taraf.
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Subha sab breakfast kar rahe the ki Dadaji bole-
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Dadaji (dad se)- Keshav beta, ye sagar kahan hai?… abhi tak utha nahin hai kya?
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Dad - pitaji, uske ek dost ka accident ho gaya tha,
jo ki ab coma me hai, or sagar vahin gaya hai, or jab tak uska dost theek nahin ho jata, vo vahin rahega... Shayad 2 mahine ya usse zyada.
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Ye baat sabhi ke sar par bomb ki tarhan lagi, or saari behne shocked ho gayin.
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Dadaji - Kyaaaa? 2 mahine ke liye gaya hai, or hamse milkar bhi nahin gaya.
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Dad - Pitaji, emergency hone ke karan vo mujhe bata kar nikal gaya, vo kisi ko pareshan nahin karna chahta tha.
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Dadaji - or uski sagai ka kya??
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Dad - pitaji, sagai to ab uske aane ke baad hi hogi.
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Unki baat se sabhi santusht hi gaye, sivaye behno ke, saari behno ne jaldi - jaldi breakfast kiya or sabhi uth kar ek room me ikattha huin.
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Priya (rote hue mansi se)- Manu didi,
mujhe lagta hai ki, bhai hamse naraaz hokar gaye hain.
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Mansi (usko dilasa dete hue)- tum ruko ek minute,
main jaanti hun ki bhai ke dost kon - kon hain,
yahan tak ki mere paas raju bhaiyya ka no. bhi hai.
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Ye kehte hue usne raju ko phone mila diya, or thodi der baaten karke vo boli-
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Mansi (udaas hote hue)- Bhai ke sirf 2 hi dost hain, jo bilkul theek - thaak hain, or pallavi bhi ekdam fit hai,
Mujhe lagta hai, priya theek keh rahi hai, vo hamse naraaz hokar hi gaye hain.
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Ye sunkar saari behno ki aakhon me aansu aa gaye, or vo ekdusre se chipat kar rone lagin.
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Tabhi Anjalika appear hui, or usko dekhte hi saari behno ne use gher liya.
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Mansi (rote hue)- Anju didi, bhai kahan hain? Plzz bata dijiye na.
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Anjalika (sabko shaant karte hue)- Sabhi shaant ho jaao, or ye batao ki tum sabne unko naraaz hi kyon kiya tha?
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Sakshi (nam aakhon se)- Wo kal bhai kaya se kaan me baaten kar rahe the, or unhone 10 lacks ka diamond necklace bhi gift kiya tha,
To isi liye, hame laga ki bhai ka chakkar chal raha hai
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Anjalika (gusse me)- Bewkoof ho tum sab, ekdam bewkoof,
tumhen pata bhi hai ki jo gift Rocky ne kaya ko diya tha uspar likha tha "Sakshi & siblings" matlab vo gift tum sabki taraf se tha,
akele rocky ki taraf se nahin.
Or jis kaya ki tumlog baat kar rahi ho,
vo ek problem me thi,
to rocky ne uske kaan me sirf itna hi kaha tha ki "tension mat lo,
sab theek ho jayega".
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Ab saari behno ko apni galti ka ehsaas hua,
par ab pachhtaye hot kya jab chidiya chug gayi khet.
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Saari behne apni galti yaad karke ro rahi thin, or sabse zyada to priya ki halat kharaab thi, kyonki uski sagai hone vali thi, jo filhaal tal gayi thi,
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Priya (rote hue)- Ab bhai mujhse shadi nahin karenge, sagai bhi nahin ki.... Or vo rote rote behosh ho gayi..
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Anjalika ne use hosh me laya, to vo phir se ro padi..
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Anjalika (dilasa dete hue)- Dekho, tum sabhi shaant ho jao, rocky abhi kaam se gaye hain, or 2 mahine baad hi aayenge... Or unhone mujhe tum sab ka dhiyan rakhne ke liye bola hai..
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Vo sabhi shaant ho gayin, or khud se vada kiya, ki vo kabhi bhi rocky par shak nahin karengi.
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Or idhar main chain ki neend so raha tha..
ki mere kaano me aawaazen aane lagin.. "Bachaoo Bachaaao" or main ekdam se uth baitha, maine apni aakhen band kin to mujhe kuchh danav ek gaw me aag lagate hue nazar aaye, un becharo ki jhopdiyan jal rahi thin, or vo chillate hue idhar - udhar bhaag rahe the.
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Main turant khada hua, or sidha us gaw me teleport ho gaya,
or jahan - jahan aag lagi hui thi,
us taraf ek phook maar di,
aag turant hi bujh gayi,
phir maine apna hath aage kiya,
Mere hath me se ek nile rang ki roshni nikli,
jisse jo jhopdiyan jal gayi thin,
vo pehle jaisi ho gayin.
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Vahan ke log ye chamatkaar apni phati aakhon se dekh rahe the,
Or maine hath aage karke apni sword ko yaad kiya, or phoch gaya un danavon ke saamne, vahan par 8 - 10 danav the.
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1 Danav - Oh! To tu hai vo, jisne kal hamare sathiyon ko mara tha, ab tu nahin bachega.. kyonki tu akela hai.
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Main - Suvaaro ka jhund chahe kitna bhi bada ho jaye, sher ki dahad se hi bhaag jata hai.
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Or ye kehte hue maine apni sword me apni energy daal di, or apni sword ko full speed se lehrane laga, itne vo mere vaar ko samajh paate vo swaha hote chake gaye, par maine ek ko nahin mara, sirf uski ek aankh phod di, or ek bazu kaat di, vo betahasha cheekh raha tha, main usse bola-
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Main (danav se)- Ja or jakar bol apne kabile ke mukhiya se ki ya to dharti chhod kar apne sathiyo ke sath yahan se chala ja varna tayyar ho jaao, yudh ke liye.
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Vo to vahan se aisa gayab hua jaise gadhe ke sar se seengh, uske jate hi sabhi gaw vale Meri jay - jay kaar karne lage, par main unse bola-
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Main (zor se)- Main koi bhagwan nahin hun, sirf mahakal ka bheja hua unka bhakt hun, or in danavo ka sarvnash karne aaya hun.
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Ye sab kehkar main vahan se teleport ho gaya..
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Ab zara chalte hain yahan se bohot door kahin badlon me basi ek duniya ki taraf-
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Ek ladki kisi ki yaad me ek talaab ke kinare leti hui hai.
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Ladki (apne man me)-
Dhalti Hui Shaam Me Aaj Bhi Unka Intzaar Hai.
Thak Kar Ye Aakhen Bojhil Hone Lagi Hain, Phir Bhi Unka Intzaar Hai.
Soch Ke Ye Dil Muskura Deta Hai Ki Aayega Ek Din Vo,
Aakhen Pathra Gayin Phir Bhi Unka Intzaar Hai.
Wo Sath Jeene Ke Vade Khuwabo Me Kiya Karte Hain,
Hai Mujhe Us Par Yakeen Isliye Unka Intzaat Hai.
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Phir vo uth kar baith gayi or khud se boli-
Laski (khud se)- khuwabon me sirf aapki chhavi hi nazar aati hai,
Asli chehra to aaj tak na dikha.
Sirf ek parchhayi si nazar aati hai.
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Tabhi ek ladki uske paas aayi or boli-
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Vo ladki - Leeza didi, aaj kal, kahan khoi rehti ho,
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Leeza - are menka tum yahan kab aayin.
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Menka - Wah! Mere aane ka bhi pata nahin chala, (shararat se) - aaj to bata hi do, ki kon hai vo, jo aapki neend or chain uda le gaya hai.
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Leeza - Kash! Uski koi tasveer hoti, vo sirf ek parchhai hai, jiski kalpna nahin ki ja sakti.
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Menka (khushi se naachte hue)- Yeee, apni didi to gayin, or ho gayin pyaar me pagal.
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Leeza (uske sar par ek chapat lagate hue)- Chal! Bhadmash kahin ki, ye bata ki tum yahan ka rasta kaise bhool gayin.
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Menka - Are haan yaad aaya, main aapko bulane aayi thi, maa aapko bula rahi hai, or mujhe pata tha ki aap yahin milogi. Ab jaldi chalo mahel me.
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Leeza (uske sath chalte hue)- pata nahin kya ho gaya hai mujhe, na bhookh lagti hai, na pyaas, na neend aati hai, or na hi chain milta hai.
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Menka (haste hue)- Aapko pyaar ho gaya hai didi, maine kaafi suna hai ki -
Pyaar Me Neend Ud Jati Hai,
Hay! Koi Hamse Bhi Mohobbat Kar Le,
Kasam Se Neend Bohot Aati Hai.
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Uski is shayri se dono hasne lagin,
Or aise hi baaten karti hui mahel me chali gayin.
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Or idhar Haveli ke ek kamre me, ek ladki akeli baithi hui siskiyon se rote hue khud se baaten kar rahi thi,
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Ladki (apne aap se)- Mujhe maaf kar dijiye, maine aap par shaq kiya,
Ek baar vapas aa jaiyye,
ab main kabhi aap par shaq nahin karungi..
Plzz ek baar vapas aa jaiyye...
Meri vajha se hamari sagai bhi nahin ho payi...
Agar aap jald vapas nahin aaye to bhagwaan ki kasam main zaher kha lungi,
Ye kehkar vo ladki or zyada rone lagi..
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Idhar main pohcha guruji ke paas .
Guruji- To kaho vats! Kaisi rahi aaj ki ladai?
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Main (guruji ke pair chhukar)- Bas guruji, ye samajh lijiye ki aaj mere saamne vo bohot kamzor lag rahe the.
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Guruji (mere sar par hath rakhkar)- Beta ye to bas shuruwat hai, abhi to bohot kuchh baki hai,
Or ab tum jinnlok jane ki tayyari karo..
kuchh din baad tumhen us or nikalna hai..
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Main - Jo aagya gurudev.
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Phir kuchh din or yun hi nikal gaye,
In dino me main bohot balshali ho chuka tha, or maine aadhe se zyada danavon ka vinash kar diya tha,
Main apna chehra dhak kar hi jata tha, kisi bhi ladai me,
Or News Channels par Meri dhoom machi hui thi,
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Or Mom & Dad puri family ke sath ghar ko lout gaye the, dada ji se baad me aane ka kehkar, kyonki dad ka bussiness tha, or mansi, sakshi, Priya & sheetal ki study bhi thi.
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Din partidin saari behno ki halat kharaab hoti ja rahi thi, vo na to theek se khatin thin, na zyada kisi se baaten karti thin, sirf apne room me jakar mujhe yaad karke roti rehti thin.
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Ab main unke paas jana to chahta tha, lekin pehle in danavo ko maarna or jinnlok jana bhi zaroori tha, main bhi bohot chintit tha, ki
jinnlok me kya hoga mere sath,
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Or aakhir vo din aa hi gaya, jis din mujhe jimnlok ki taraf nikalna tha.
To ... Be ... Continued
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Thanks for the reading and your first comment on this thread yara.
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∆ Abhi hero ne sirf apni powers, apne laida hone ke maksad or guruji ke baare me hi bataya hai,
Or haan sath sath ye bhi keh diya hai ki jo bhi ladki meri zindagi me aaye usko aapko accept karna hoga.
Ye hero apne mom - dad ko bol chuka hai..
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Jai Mahakaal
Acme
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Fantastic update bhai......
Kamal ka likhate ho aap...
Keep writing and keep rocking
Kamal ka likhate ho aap...
Keep writing and keep rocking
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