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Badhiya update bhai dekhte hain pallavi ko kaise bachata he
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Bahot shaandaar update bhai--------------------
Update - 97
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Meri aankh khulte hi Leeza kiss karna band kar diya,
Or sidhi hokar jane lagi,
Maine uska hath pakd liya,
Leeza (kasmasate hue) - chhodiye na, aapke liye coffee
lani hai,
Main - haye! Coffee kis ko chahiye, mujhe to ek jaam
pila do apne garam hothon se,
Wo haste hue apna hath chhuda kar room se bahar
bhaag gayi,
Main utha or fresh hokar bahar aya, or keeza ke hath
ki coffee li, jaise hi maine apna phone dekha,
Mera matha thanak gaya 11 miss call
Oh shit!
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Ab Aage -
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11 misscalls dekh kar meri fat gayi, ye shaina
to meri jaan le legi, kya karun, phone karun ya
nahin? Main abhi soch hi raha tha, ki uska phir
se phone aane laga,
or main phone uthate hue chhat (terrise) par
chal diya,
Main - hello,
Phoebe - hello ke bachche, ab time mila mera
phone uthane ka ? (Wo gussa karte hue boli)
Main - Sorry yarr, phone silent par tha.
Phoebe - achchha sun, ek buri khabar hai!
Mujhe to ye sunte hi pasina aane laga,
bure - bure khayal man me aane lage,
Main (ghabrate hue)- kya hua, kya buri khabar
hai?
Phoebe - jiska Bio-Data tumne mujhe bheja tha
kya naam tha uska , haan! Pallavi, uske pita ji
Deepak ne un dono maa beti ko dhokha diya,
Main - what? Ye kaise ho sakta hai? Uncle to
Cancer patient hain, unko to main khud hospital
me bharti karva kar aya tha.
Phoebe - sabse pehli baat, deepak ko 1st stage
cancer start hua tha, jiska ilaaj 1 mahine me hi ho
gaya tha,
or dusri baat, wo ghar aa gaya, uske 1 hafte ke baad
pallavi ke account se croron rupees ka tranjection hua
Mujhe bank se pata chala,
pallavi ke account me jitne bhi paise the, Deepak ne
Dhokhe se ya majboor karke sab apne Account me
transfer karva liye, or apna ghar or bike agency bechkar,
un dono ko sath lekar chandigarh chala gaya, vahan
par unko chhodkar farar ho gaya, uska abhi tak koi
pata nahin chala hai, par jaldi hi main pata laga lungi.
Ye sab sunkar meri akhon se ansu beh rahe the,
Chehra ekdam sapat ho gaya tha, gusse se akhon
me angare dahek rahe the.
Main (halki awaz me)- pallavi or aunty kahan hain is
wakht? Or kaisi hain?
Phoebe (ek gehri sans chhodte hue) - Pallavi or uski
maa abhi sath hi hain ******* naam ki dhram-shala
me tehri hui hain. Or pallavi ka ilaaj ***** naam ke ek
sarkari hospital me chal raha hai.
Main (ghabrate hue)- kya hua use?
Phoebe - wo ye sadma bardasht nahin kar payi hai,
wo ye manne ko tayyar nahin hai ke uske papa ne
uske or uski maa ke sath cheat kiya hai.
Main - theek hai, main kuchh karta hun, tu ek kaam
kar bas deepak ka pata laga, kisi kone me to chhipa
hoga haramzada, main usko aisi saza dunga ke wo
roz hazaron mout marega.
Phoebe - relax yarr, sun tu jaldi me kuchh bhi mat
karna, kyonki deepak kahin bhi chhipa ho, par uski
nazar apni biwi or beti par zaroor hogi,
to jo bhi karna soch samajh kar karna, aage tum
khud samajhdar ho.
Main (ek thandi sans chhodte hue)- theek hai,
main dhyan rakhunga.
Phoebe - chal rakhti hun phone, or jaldi hi tujhe
khushkhabri deti hun.
Main - ok bbye!
Phoebe - bye.
Maine phone cut kiya or apne aansu saaf karke
Chat par lage hue washbasen par apna muh
dhokar, chhat par hi ghumte hue aage ka plan
banane laga.
Main (apne man me)- haan ye theek rahega.
or man hi man kuchh decide karke niche ki taraf chal
diya.
Niche aya to sab dining dable par mera hi intzaar kar
rahe the, maine sab ko Good Morning wish kiya,
or apne sochon me gum sheetal ki bagal me ja
baitha, or breakfast ek plate me nikal kar khane
laga, jab maine nigah uthakar dekha to sab meri taraf
hi dekh rahe the.
Main - what?
Sakshi - ye to hame puchhna chahiye, kya hua hai
apko?
Mansi - lagta hai bhai aaj jeb khali hone ke dar se
dar gaye hain. (Usne shopping ke liye yaad dilaya)
Sheetal (kuchh sochte hue)- nahin kal actully, sakshi
didi ne bhai ko dudh nahin pilaya tha, or lagta hai
leeza didi ne bhi mana kar diya hoga.
Sab uski baton se khilkhilate hue hasne lagin, vahin
Leeza to sharam se gadhi ja rahi thi, usko shayad
raat yaad aa gayi hogi.
Aunty - are ye bhi koi hasne vali baat hui, ja sheetal
Dudh lekar aa or apne bhai ko pila de.
Aunty ki baat sunkar baki sab muh niche ko karke
hasne lagin, vahin sheetal ne apna sar peet liya.
Usko baton se mera mood bhi achchha ho gaya tha
Main (sab se)- aaj college se ghar aane ke baad,
sab milkar shopping par chalenge.
Sab meri baat se khush ho gayin. or ham breakfast
karke nikle apne school/college.
Maine sakshi ko college drop kiya or raju ko phone
karke bula liya. Wo canteen me hi tha.
Abhi 8 : 30 hue the.
Sakshi - bhai aap class nahin aa rahe kya?
Main - mujhe kuchh zaruri kam hai, tum jao main
half time par milta hun.
Wo OK kehkar cahi gayi, or raju bhi aa gaya,
Maine Raju ko gadi me baithne ke liye bola,
or gadi chalane laga.
In Car
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Main - Raju, Pallavi musibat me hai,
Raju - kya?......
Main - beech me mat bol, or dhiyan se meri baar sun.
{isne haam me sar hilaya}
Main - tu ye pata kar pallavi kar ghar kisne kharida hai,
or usko kisi bhi keemat par vapas uske naam kara.
Ye ke blank check.
(Main usko ek check par sign karta hua bola)
or check usko de diya.
Main - main ja raha hun pallavi ko vapas lane jahan
bhi wo hai, tu ye kaam pura kar, or jo cheez jaisi
thi vapas vaisa hi kar de, or paise chahiyen to mang
lena.
Raju - Theek hai bhai, tu apna kaam kar main apna
karta hun.
Maine usko pallavi ke ghar ke bahar utaar diya,
vahan par abhi bhi lock kaga hua tha,
Raju - yahan to lock laga hai.
Main - yahan aas - paas malum kar koi na koi bata
dega.
Ye bolkar main vahan se nikla, or raste me se hi
phupa ji ko phone laga diya.
Phupa ji - Hello, haan beta bol.
Main - phupa ji, mujhe abhi urgent helecopter
chahiye rent par, main ***** maidaan me hun.
Phupa ji - theek hai beta 10 minute wait karo
main bhejta hun.
Main - Ok, or is bare me kisi ko pata batana mat.
Phir maine ek bande ko phone lagaya, or usko bhi
vahin bula liya. Or gadi ek maidaan me park kar di.
Ab main helecopter kar intzaar karne laga.
15 minute me hi heleCopter aata hua dikhai diya
Or ek Black Scorpio aakar ruki
jisme se 4 bande
utre jo black kapde pehne hue the, or hathiyaton se less the.
maine unko helecopter me bithaya.
Unme se jo unka leader tha 'Billa' wo bola-
Billa - bhai kya kaam aa gaya jo urgent bula liya.
Main - meri ek friend musibat me hai, main usko
lene ja raha hun, tum bas sath rehna or jispar
bhi shak ho usko uda dena, baaki sab main dekh
lunga. Matlab tumhen full security deni hai.
Billa - bhai aap tension mat lo, ham dekh lenge.
Main - kaam ho gaya to 20 lakh dunga.
Wo charo khush ho gaye, or usne 2 snipers ko
bhi phone karke bula liya, jo hame vahin milne
vale the.
or 2 ghante me hi ham chandigarh pohoch gaye.
Maine pehle hi ek car hire kar li thi.
Ham car me baithe or chal diye, phoebe ke diye
hue address par. Raste me se hamne dono
snipers ko bhi pick kar liya.
Vahan se ham sidhe dharm-shala pohche
par hame vahan koi bhi nahin mila.
Phir ham us hospital me pohche jahan pallavi
admit thi.
Hospital me receptionist ne bataya ki wo general
Ward me hai, maine apne sath aye logon ko ward
ke bahar hi khada kiya or khud andar chala gaya.
Andar pohochkar dekha to main dang reh gaya,
or mere aansu behne lage.
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Nice update bro
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