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Superb Update--------------------To Be Continue
Update - 100
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Ye gunde badmashon ka tareeka hota hai, wo sirf apne godfather ko hi itni izzat dete hain,
Mera to sala seena chouda ho gaya, kyonki billa pure sheher ka
mana hua badmash tha, par iska concept alag tha,
Ye bigde hue ameero ko lutkar gareebon ki madad karta tha.
Or pure nainital ka Don tha.
Kahir! Main ghar pohcha or vahan kuchh naye chehron ko dekhkar
Chounk gaya.
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Ab Aage -
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Maine door par jakar bell bajai, Leeza ne door open kiya,
Mujhe andar se kuchh anjan logon ki awazen aa rahi thin,
Maine isharon se leeza se puchha to usne kaha - khud hi
dekh lo.
Main bhi der na karte hue andar chala gaya,
Vahan dekha to sitting (baithne ki jagah - couch) me
1 aadmi roti hui Mansi ko dilasa de raha tha,
Uski akhon me bhi aansu the, sath me 1 aurat bhi thi, jo priya
ke sar par hath phirate hue usse baten kar rahi thi,
Or thodi doori par ek masoom si ladki baithi hui thi, jo idhar - udhar
dekh rahi thi,
Wo admi mujhe dekhte hi khada ho gaya, or lagbag bhagte hue mere paas aaya, or mujhe zor se gale laga liya.
pichhe se wo aurat bhi aayi, or mere sar par hath phirane lagi,
Thodi der ke baad unki pakad dheeli hui, to wo mujhse alag hokar khade ho gaye, main unhen hairat bhari nazron se dekh raha tha,
or pehchanne ki koshish kar raha tha,
Wo Nam aakhon se bole -
Admi - Beta, main tera mama hun.
Unke itna bolte hi maine unko dobara gale se laga liya,
Main (gale lagaye hue nam aakhon se) - Mama ji, kahan the aap
kahan - kahan nahin dhundha aapko.
Mama ji (mujhse alag hokar)- mere bachche, main bhi salon se
tum sab ko dhundh raha hun, wo to akhbar me didi or jija ji ki
khabar padhi tabh jakar tumhara pata chala.
(or wo rone lage)
Main unko chup karane laga, or unke sath dheere - dheere
chalte hue wapas sitting me baith gaye.
phir main mami ji se baat karne laga, mama - mami ne hame
Apni beti se introduce karaya.
Wo bohot masoom si thi, main usse gale lag kar mila.
Wo bhi bohot khush hui.
Intro Time -
Mama - Nagesh Thakur - 44 years
Mami - Chanda Devi - 41 years
Preeti - Nagesh or chanda ki beti
Age - 18 years (12th class)
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with Attractive face
ham baat-cheet karte rahe phir aunty or leeza ne lunch laga diya,
Phir sabhi ne sath me lunch kiya.
Lunch karke maine Mama ji ko aaram karne ko bola-
or khud sakshi ka hath pakad kar ek room me le gaya,
or usse bola. -
Main - sakshi, Mama - Mami ka dhiyan rakhna, or shopping
par kal chalenge, mujhe thoda urgent kaam aa gaya hai,
Raju se milne jana hai.
Sakshi (mujhe ghoorte hue)- ye kya khichdi pak rahi hai tum
dono ke bich, subha se tum raju bhaiya ke sath gayab the,
or ab phir jana hai, mujhe reason chahiye.
Main kuchh javaab deta usse pehle hi leeza or mansi bhi room
me aa gayin, to sakshi ne unhen sari baat namak - mirch laga
kar batai.
Mansi - tabhi main sochun ke ye hamme intrest kyon nahin le
rahe, ab samajh aaya, ke inka taste hi change ho gaya hai.
Leeza tukur tukur hamari taraf dekh rahi thi.
or mand - mand muskura rahi thi.
Main (haste hue)- tum pagal ho gayi ho kya, itni khubsurat
ladkiyon ko chhodkar main kya us ke pichhe jaunga.
Mansi - to hame poori baat batao, varna ham to aisa hi sochenge.
Main - achchha theek hai suno -
Maine unhen pallavi vala metter poora bata diya.
Tabh jakar unhen rahat mili, or main jaldi aane ka
bolkar raju se milne chal diya, mujhe mariya se milna tha.
Udhar Jinnlok me -
Jungal me bheeshan aag lagi hui thi,
Or vahan se kuchh door adrishye (ek chhipi hui jagha)
[jo kisi ko dikhai nahin de sakti jabtak khud raja na chahe]
Ek Mahel
Jahan par jinnlok ke Raja Aghora ka parivar or kuchh khas log
Baithkar meeting kar rahe hain.
Rajkumari Menka (thoda ghabrai hui)- pitaji, hame lagta hai ab
apko Sagar ji ko vapas bulana padega, varna isi tarhan chalta raha
to wo din door nahin jab jinnlok tabahi ki kagaar par hoga.
Senapati - ham Rajkumari se sehmat hain maharaj, apne hi rajye
me hame chhipkar rehna pad raha hai, aisa kab tak chalega.
Raja Aghora - Main tum sab se sehmat hun, par wo ek insan hai,
Wo abhi apne oopar hue hamle se shayad dar gaya hai,
apne pariwar ko lekar wo bohot zyada Posasive hai.
Iska samadhan hame kisi or tareeke se karna hoga.
Rajkumari Menka - Pitaji, agar aap kahen to ham Leeza didi se,
madad maang sakte hain.
Aghora - Nahin rajkumari, ye ab hamari samasya hai,
ham isse khud hi nibtenge, jab tak pani sar se oopar na aa jaye.
Raja Aghora (senapati se)- Senapati, tum turant jao, or Rajguru
ko yahan par bulao, ab to vahi ekmatra resta hain.
Senapati (khade hote hue)- jo agya rajan.
Udhar ShaitaanLok Me
Yahan dhol - nagade baj rahe the, kuchh khushi ka mahol tha,
Kyonki Shaitaan aadha jaag chuka tha,
or 2 din me poora jagne vala tha.
Yahan par aaj Shaitaan ka poora parivar mojood tha,
Or sab "Andhera Kayam Rahe" ke naare laga rahe the.
Shaitan ki beti (Marsie) ne apne hath dikha kar sab ko shant kiya
Marsie - 2 din baad pitaji (shaitan lok me malik) poori tarhan se
jaag jayenge, uske baad kuchh mahine me wo apni poori
shakti wapas ap lenge, or phir hoga sare lokon ka vinash
Or sab par hamara raaj.
Uski baat se ek baar phir poora planet naaro se gunj utha.
Or shaitan ke liye taza khoon ka bandovast karne ke liye
har lok se pakdi gayi kuwari ladkiyon ki bali ka intzam
kiya jane laga.
Idhar Dharti-Lok Me
Main sab baton se anjan, apni car Raju ke ghar ki taraf bhaga
raha tha. Or kuchh hi der me main raju ke ghar par pohoch gaya.
Door unki maid ne khola, mere puchhne par Raju ke room ki taraf
ishara karke wo chali gayi.
Main bhi chal diya raju se milne, par is baar maine room ka door
knock karna theek samjha.