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Waah bhai akaya baat hai disciption mai bata rahe ho ki bracket mai naa likhauga sach jhut kaa pata hum laagaye Woh bhi kar lenge ussmai kayaa
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Antique Love [अनोखा प्यार]
Ye story poori tarhan se kalpnik hai iska kisi bhi dharm ya naam se koi sambandh nahin hai ....
Ye story ek pari, jinni, hero ki behen or hero ke beech hue pyar par aadharit hai.
Isme aapko imagination or creation sab milega..
Or ye story hai ek pyare se parivar ki jisme sukh-dukh, pyar-mohobbat-nafrat,
samman - apnan sab dekhne ko milega.
Is story me aapko (Incest, Love, Romance, Magic, Fantasy & Thriller) sab kuchh milega
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Main koi professional writer nahin hun
Ye meri pehli story hai...
Main 6 saal se sex stories read kar raha hun
Or 2 saal se xossip ka reader tha, ab XF par aya hun..
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Waise to main bhi student hun. Sath me ek chhota mota bussiness bhi hai.
kafi busy life hai par phir bhi main
Is story par daily update dene ki koshish karunga.
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Doston comment zaroor karna or batana ki kya - kya kamiya hain story me Main us kami ko poora karunga
Note - (Is story me main baaki writers ki tarhan paregrap ke aage (jhooth) aisa nahin likhunga,
aapko khud hi apna common sense use karke pata karna hoga ki, hero kahan jhooth bol raha hai kahan sach).
Index neeche hai
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INDEX
Update - 01 .............. Update - 51
Update - 02 .............. Update - 52
Update - 03 .............. Update - 53
Update - 04 .............. Update - 54
Update - 05 .............. Update - 55
Update - 06 .............. Update - 56
Update - 07 .............. Update - 57
Update - 08 .............. Update - 58
Update - 09 .............. Update - 59
Update - 10 .............. Update - 60
Update - 11 .............. Update - 61
Update - 12 .............. Update - 62
Update - 13 .............. Update - 63
Update - 14 .............. Update - 64
Update - 15 .............. Update - 65
Update - 16 .............. Update - 66
Update - 17 .............. Update - 67
Update - 18 .............. Update - 68
Update - 19 .............. Update - 69
Update - 20 .............. Update - 70
Update - 21 .............. Update - 71
Update - 22 .............. Update - 72
Update - 23 .............. Update - 73
Update - 24 .............. Update - 74
Update - 25 .............. Update - 75
Update - 26 .............. Update - 76
Update - 27 .............. Update - 77
Update - 28 .............. Update - 78
Update - 29 .............. Update - 79
Update - 30 .............. Update - 80
Update - 31 .............. Update - 81
Update - 32 .............. Update - 82
Update - 33 .............. Update - 83
Update - 34 .............. Update - 84
Update - 35 .............. Update - 85
Update - 36 .............. Update - 86
Update - 37 .............. Update - 87
Update - 38 .............. Update - 88
Update - 39 .............. Update - 89
Update - 40 .............. Update - 90
Update - 41 .............. Update - 91
Update - 42 .............. Update - 92
Update - 43 .............. Update - 93
Update - 44 .............. Update - 94
Update - 45 .............. Update - 95
Update - 46 .............. Update - 96
Update - 47 .............. Update - 97
Update - 48 .............. Update - 98
Update - 49 .............. Update - 99
Update - 50 .............. Update - 100
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KEEP SUPPORT
&
KEEP REGARDS TO BABA
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Sabaka Charchater aaache sai chuna hua lagata hai ekdum badhiyaaCharacters Introduction
Family Intro.
Hero - Rocky (Sagar)
Age - 19
Hight - 5.10
Colour - Fair & Blue Eyes
Attractive body 6 pack abs with cute face athletes body sath me boxing champion bhi hai
{state level tak khela hai "Gold Medalist" hai boxing me}
Ladkiyan marti hain ispe
par ye kisi ko bhaw nahin deta keval apni family or friends se baat karta hai.
Agar koi ladki isko bina shirt ke dekh le to bas isme hi kho jaae.
Aadat me Bilkul apne papa par gaya hai
Bohot hi nek or shareef.
BCA 1st year me hai
12th me district topper hai
Iski jaan apni behen me basti hai
Papa ka ladla hai.
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Sister - Mansi {Manu} pyar ka naam
Age - 18
Hight - 5.6
Figure - 32 - 28 - 32
Colour - Fair & blue eyes
Very cute girl & very modern
Zyadatar jeans top hi pehenti hai
12th me hai apni class ki topper
Bilkul apni maa par gayi hai
Apne bhai se bohot pyar karti hai.
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Father - Keshav Thakur
Age - 40 years
Hight - 5.10
Abhi bhi 30 saal ke lagte hain...
Or daily Yoga & Natural workout karte hain
Sheher me Computer parts ki
Import/ Export ki Company hai khud ki
Or sath me ek mall bhi hai jo inhone
Rockey ke naam kar rakha hai..
Apni patni or dono bete or beti se bohot pyar karte hain
Khaskar apne bete se ...
Kyonki vo ek nek or shareef ladka hai.
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Mother - Archna Devi
Age - 38
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with cute & Attractive face
Figure - 38 - 34 - 38
Ye house wife ( घरेलू महिला ) hain.
Or apni family se bohot pyar karti hain.
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Dada - Thakur Vishnupratap (विष्णुप्रताप) 70 years
Dadi - Koshalya Devi 65 years
Gaw ki haveli me apne bade bete Gajendra ke sath rehte hain
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Chacha - Thakur Gajendra Singh (गजेन्दर)
Age - 44 years
Vishnupratap ki gaw me pushteni zameen hai or ye kheton or mazdooron ka hisab kitab karte hain
Chachi - Meenakshi Devi
Age - 42 years
Gharelu mahila hain bohot sundar hain
Figure - 36 - 32 - 36
Sakshi - Gajendra or Meenakshi ki beti
Age - 20 years (BBA 2nd year)
Padhai me average hai
Colour - Fair with sexy body
Figure - 34 - 30 - 34
Hight - 5.5
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Bua - Rekha Thakur 34 years
Pratap Thakur - Rekha ke pati 36 years
Priya - Rekha or Pratap ki beti (12th class)
18 years , Cute face & sexy body
Figure- 30 - 28 - 32
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Nana - Birjesh Thakur (Died)
Nani - Neelima Devi (Died)
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Mama - Nagesh Thakur - 44 years
Mami - Chanda Devi - 41 years
Preeti - Nagesh or chanda ki beti
Age - 18 years (12th class)
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with Attractive face
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Mausa - Jitendra Thakur 50 years
Masi - Sulochna Devi 48 years
Vikas - beta 22 years
( Bank me job karta hai)
Nisha - beti (B.Tech 3rd Year CS)
Age - 20 years
Hight - 5.5
Colour - Fair with sexy body
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Friends intro.
1). Hans (हंस)
Age - 19
rocky ke sath hi 10th & 12th kiya tha
Or ab bhi sath me hi padhta hai
good looking or mastmola banda hai ... apne dost par jaan bhi dene ko tayyar rehta hai
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2). Raju
Age - 19
Rocky ka bachpan ka dost or best friend hai
Or nursery se college tak sath hi hain
Rocky or raju ke papa dost hain isliye Dono ki family bhi aapas me milti rehti hain har wedding party me... ya kisi bhi sukh dukh me
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3). Pallavi (College friend)
Age - 19
Hight - 5.6
Colour - Fair with sexy body
Figure - 32 - 28 - 34
Eyes - light green { कंजी आँखें }
( chalta phirta sex bomb hai ) bohot ladke marte hain par ye kisi ko bhaw nahin deti sirf apne group se hi baaten karti hai or Rocky ke liye love feelings hain par aaj tak keh nahin payi
Vaishali - Pallavi's Mom
38 year's old
Dil ki ekdum saaf or House wife hain.
Eklouti beti hai Pallavi,
isi liye usse jaan se zyada pyaar karti hain.
Deepak - Pallavi's Father
40 year's old
Bikes ki agency hai khud ki
Sankarik aadmi hain.
Note- (Rocky ke Friends ke mummy papa or bhai behno ka intro unka wakht aane par hoga).
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Other character intro.
Leeza - JinnLok ki rajkumaari
Menka - Leeza ki chhoti behen
Aghora - Leeza ke father & Jinnlok ke king
Avanti - Mother & Queen of Jinnlok
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Anjalika (Anju) - Pari
Rocky se bachpan se pyaar karti hai
Dil ki ekdum saaf or bohot pyaari hai.
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Rachna - College Teacher
(रचना)
Age- 26 years
Figure - 36-32-36
Bole to ek dam solid peace.
Shadi shuda hai par husband out of country job karta hai .)
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Shaitaan & Party intro - "Update - 58"
Note-
(Bhailog baki ke jitne characters add honge unka intro baad me hoga or yahan bhi update hota rehega).
Nice update
Update -- 1
Nainital sheher me 'Naini Jheel' ke
kinare bani hui hai ek pyari si
Villa Jiska naam uske bahar lage hue
Marble ke patthar par Golden colour se
likha hua hai.
"Thakur Villa"
Bohot hi alishan villa hai
Is villa ko banvane me ek baar ko to
Thakur Keshav bhi karze me aa gaye the..
Phir apne achchhe bussiness ke chalte jaldi hi recovery kar li.
Is villa me sabke apne separate rooms hain.
Or Rocky ne apne papa se kahkar neeche 1 private Gym bhi add karva rakha hai
Jisme vo daily exercise karta hai
Ek Bada hall hai jahan dining table rakhi hui hai.
Neeche bohot saare rooms hain
(Villa me Itne rooms to hote hi hain isliye couning nahin likhi)
1 room me Rocky ke mom - dad rehte
baki ke Guest rooms hain.
Sabhi rooms me Washroom attached hain.
(Par jab bhi Rocky ki koi bhi
cousin sisters aati hain vo
zyadatar sirf rocky na manu ke sath hi sona pasand karti hain.)
Hall me hi ek taraf kitchen hai.
Hall se hi Stairs hain first floor
par jane ke liye.
Oopar 1st floor par bohot se rooms hain ek hamare hero Rocky ka hai
Rocky ka room sabse unique hai
Matlab sabse zyada bada or zaroorat ki har cheez se bhara hua king size bed ke sath.
Barabar me hi doosra room
Is ghar ki sabse pyari & cute girl mansi ka hai
Mansi ka room bhi kisi
rajkumari ke room se kam nahin hai...
Usne apne room ko is
tarhan sajaya hai ki dekhne vale ko yahi lagega ki ye ladki safai par kitna
dhiyan deti hai.
{Haan ye baat alag hai ki vo soti
zyadatar apne bhai ke room me hi hai.}
baki ke rooms band hain...
Sabhi rooms me Toilet & Bathroom attech hain
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(Ab Aate Hain Story Par)
Roz ki tarhan Rocky subha 5 baje sokar utha or
Fresh hokar apni daily exercise ke liye
Neeche chal diya
1 ghanta Exercise karne ke baad
kitchen me jakar 2 cup coffee
banakar chal diya apni gudiya ke room me
Room lock nahin tha ...
Rocky ne andar jakar dekha to mansi
So rahi thi ... sote hue badi
hi pyari lag rahi thi ...
Rocky ne pyar se uske sar
par hath phera uske baad
uske phoole phoole galo par kiss kiya ...
Jisse mansi kasmasane
lagi or uske chehre par
ek pyari si muskaan aa gayi.
Or smile karte hue boli
Mansi - Good Morning Sweetu Bhaiyya
Rocky - Good Morning sweety
Chalo uth jao school nahin jana kya
Mansi - Bhai sone do na... (masoom sa chehra banate hue)
Rocky (with smile)- chal notanki uth rahi hai ya neeche se mummy ko bheju..
Mansi (jaldi se uth kar baithte hue)- uth rahi hun dara kyon rahe ho...
Rockey (haste hue)- dara nahin raha sweety jaldi uth jao aaj mera first day hai college me
Or main first day hi late nahin hona chahta.
Mansi (Khush hote hue)- Maain to bohot excited hun..
aaj jo bhi
College me ho aap vapas aakar zaroor batana
(Ye dono bachpan se hi har baat share karte hain)
Rocky - Achchha theek hai pehle tu fatafat fresh ho kar coffee pee varna thandi ho jaegi...
Mansi - Thanks bhai coffee ke liye..
Rocky - Chal pagal bhai ko Thanks bolti hai... Ye to meri roz ki duty hai... (Smile)
Mansi - Hahahahah O.K bhai...
Aap neeche chaliye main aati hun fresh hokar or coffee peekar .
Rocky - Jaldi aana neeche mummy papa wait kar rahe honge Dining table par
Kehte hue rocky neeche chala gaya
Neeche dining table par papa akhbar padhte hue chai ki chuskiyan le rahe the ...
Rocky - Good Morning dad
Dad - Good Morning beta aao - aao baitho.
To barkhudar Aaj to aapka college me first day hai
Rocky - Ji dad sahi kaha aapne.
Dad- Agar koi ragging kare to call kar dena
Rocky - Dad main sambhal lunga waise bhi main akela kahan ja raha hun sath me raju or hans to hain unhone bhi mere sath hi admission liya hai.
Dad - hmm theek hai... apni car le jana
Rocky - Dad aapko to pata hai na mujhe show off karna kitna bura lagta hai
Isse pehle ki dad kuchh javaab dete
(Mom kitchen se bahar aate hue)
Mom - Kyon subha - subha mere bete ko pareshan kar rahe ho
Dad - lo ji ab apne bete se pyar bhi nahin jata sakta
Mom (dad ko ghoorte hue)- Haan haan tum hi karte ho pyar ham to karte hi nahin..
Rocky - Good Morning mom
Mom - Good Morning beta... teri gudiya kahan hai ... uthi nahin abhi tak
Itne me mansi bhi seediyan utarti hui
Mansi - Good Morning everyone...
Sabhi - Good Morning...
Rocky - mom aaj breakfast me kya hai
Mom - beta aaj mansi ki pasand ka hai
Shahi Paneer, chhole & poori or Rayta.
Rocky - isme naya kya hai ... ye to roz hi hota hai.. mansi ki pasand ... kyon manu
Mansi - Thanks mom... jee bhai .. because, Mom love me so much...
Rocky - koi baat nahin mere papa hain na mujhe pyar karne ke liye...
Papa - haan ji bilkul...
Isi tarhan mazak masti ke sath bteakfast khatam hota hai...
Phir rocky apne room me jakar kapde change karta hai college jane ke liye.
To... Be... Continued