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Dusre din hi shaan ne ek plan banaya ………
"Tirpti…. where are you…."
Shaan tripti ko dhund raha tha…..tripti garden me mili…..wo padho ke saath selfie le rahi thi……
Shaan….." Oye chipkali chal …..hume kahi jana he…"
Tripti…." Kaha bhaiya….."
Namrata bhi wohi aa gayi thi tehelne to indono ki baate sun li….." Kaha jane ki jaldi he subah subah dhoop bhi nikla nehi abhi tak aur tum …"
Shaan…." Maasi hum camping karne jaa rahe he….."
Tripti camping ke naam pe unchal padi ….
Namrata……." Kya ….itni thand me kaha camping karne jaa rahe ho…….suna he is seher ke junglon me bhediya rehte he khatarnaak janwar rehte he……"
Shaan……" Aisa kuch nehi he….yeha camping ke liye bohot se surakshit jagah he….….sayed aapko pata nehi ye seher tourism ke liye hi Famous he aur log pahadon me junglon me hi camping karte he…..zaha khatra he woha restrictions ka board laga diya he Forrest department ne….. don't worry me bawakuf nehi hoon…."
Namrata ki bolti band ho gayi ….kuch bolne ko huya nehi bas muh bana ke muh pher li…..
Tripti….." Mom tension mat lo…..shaan bhaiya sab sambhal lenge…..chalo shaan bhaiya….."
Shaan ne puri taiyariya kar li camping ka har saman cooking se le ke shelter tak saman liya..,…………….. phir shaan ne apne teeno yaaron ko phone lagaya ………
Tripti 15 minute me taiyar ho gayi aur ghar ke bahar lounge me aa gayi……." Bhaiya hume keise jayenge…."
Shaan……" Hum dono to bike pe jayenge…..un teeno ulllu ke pattho ko is pick-up truck me bhejenge….."
Aur teeno ulle ke patthe aa chuke the jo shaan ki baat ko achche se sun bhi liya……
Jatin….." Chutiye tu jayega is cruiser bike se aur hum tere bodyguard ban ke is truck se jayenge……'"
Tripti….." are is car me luxurious facilities he …..iske career he isliye pickup truck bolte he….. Isuzu d max automatic wala he ye…… bike se zyada to iski kimat he zyada he gadho……"
Jatin vikram ungli kar ke bola….." Dekha tripti ji kitni positive thinking ki he……bola tha maine ye car mast he isme hum bade aadmi legenge……"
Vikram ……"sale lodu maine thori bola tha aisa kuch…..tune hi bola he…"
Jatin……" Par tere man to yehi tha na……me tere man padh sakta hoon…."
Preeti……" Tum dono phir suru ho gaye…..car me chala rahi hoon tum dono gadho ko baithna he to baitho…."
Shaan …." Ek minute mom se see off kar ke aa raha hoon…."
Vikram……" lo ek aur laadla ….jaa jaldi ja ke aa…."
Shaan dour kar ghar me gaya aur Mrs.baladev ke kamre me gaya………reena office jaane ke liye taiyar ho rahi thi wo formal blazer pehen rahi thi………
Shaan….." Mom….we are going…"
Reena taiyar hone me karyarat thi ….. dressing mirror me make-up kar rahi thi……" Huu…..go carefully and ride the bike slowly……."
Shaan uske karb gaya aur apni mom ki baju pakad ke bola……" Look at me mom……"
Reena shaan ki taraf dekhne lagi…….. lekin zindegi me koi baar look at me mom kaha he lekin aaj us lafz me kuch alag hi ehsaas tha ……jeise kuch ikrar karna chahta ho…..reena ne aisa kabhi mehsoos nehi kiya apne bete shaan ke abha ko ……wo bhi laajmi sanjida ho gayi bete ki aakhon me jhakne lagi lekin uska beta usse aankhe nehi mila paa raha tha………lamha madhyam gati se sarhad hawa mukkamal hona chahta tha…….
Shaan bilkul shant tha ek haath dressing table pe rakh ke dusre haath apni mom ki kalai pakad ke aise khada tha jeise shugathit nirbal khada ho kisi tarah ped jamaye ……aakho me saaf jhalak raha tha jeise wo kuch kehna chahta ho magar keh nehi paa raha ho……Ek dar jo use piche khichne ki kashish kar raha he ya wo samajh hi nehi paa raha he uske dil ka kya abhilasha he…….
Reena uski maa thi……dil ke karib…..chehra dekh ke hi jeise shaan ki dil ki baat samajh jaati thi……..wo bhi thori bhramit thi pehli baar jo apne bete ka aisa lahega dekh rahi thi……lekin wo samajh gayi bhali bhati ki shaan ka yeha aane ka maksad kya he……..
Bina kuch soche samjhe reena apne bete ke itne karib ho gaye ki dono ki saasein ek dusre se takrane lage……reena ne snehta se apni aankhe band kar ke labo ko bete ke labon se chata di………
Shaan ne apni honth khol ke reena ki lipstick se sringar hoth pine laga halke halke salike se……..kuch das ya pandhra second me shaan ne apne hontho ko reena se alag kar liya……is ksan lamhon ki chumban ne reena ne koi pratikriya nehi diya isliye shaan ko laga ki uski mom ko sayed achcha na laga ho…..
Dono ki palke jhapakne lage …..jeise dusri baat pe kendrit hona chahte ho……lekin mahol aisa ban gaya tha ki dono sharminda thi ……
Shaan dhire swar me bola….." Oke bye mom…."
Reena….." One minute…."
Shaan ruk gaya…….reena ne bade laad pyaar se apni mulayam unguthe se bete ke hontho pe lage lipstick ka nissan poch ke boli……" Take care baby…..aur us chulbuli ka bhi dhyaan rakhna…….akela mat chhodne aur tent lagane se pehle jagah ko achche se check karna ki koi jehrili jok ya massar naa ho…"
Shaan bas mini second ke liye apni mom ki aankho me dekh "hmm" kar ke kamre se bahar nikal gaya ………
Shaan ne dekha ki Courtyard me uske teeno mumune dost car ke Saath gayeb he…..bas tripti bike pe baithi itra rahi thi…
Shaan…." Ye log nikal gaye kya…….."
Tripti….." Haan bhaiya…….wo log to kabka chale gaye……"
Shaan…." Benchodon ko batata hoon pohoch ke."""
Shaan ne bike star kar di ……tripti khushi se piche baith gayi aur shaan ke kandhe pe hath rakh di…….shaan ne bike gate se bahar kar liya aur watchmen ne gate band kar diya…..
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Wadiyon se nikle rajpath me shaan ki bike shaan se dour raha tha……..gujarti gadiya ek pal ke liye raftar dhima kar ke shaan ki bike ko dekhte huye guzarne lage the ya phir wo acceleration dena hi bhool jate the bike shaan o shoukat dekh ke……..
Tripti ko garv ho rahi thi…….wo bhi kya karti log wohi samajh rahe the jo samjhna chahiye …….…….
Tripti…." Shaan bhaiya……."
Shaan……"hmm bolo…."
Tripti……" Hume log gf bf samajh rahe he…"
shaan……" kya kare aise hi he log ……ye log rajdhani express se race laga ke gaye kya…"
tripti….." preeti didi bohot fast car chalati he…..aap bhi thora fast chalao na….kya bel gadi ki tarah chala rahe ho…"
shaan….." mohtarma is sheher me
highway me speet limit 100 aur aur cuty me 50 ki he…….speed limit todne me bohot zurmana lagta he…."
tripti….." kya bhaiya…aap itne fattu ho….. City me maan liya ki woha camera aur sensor lage hote he…… Highway me aisa kuch nehi he….."
shaan ka bhi josh ubal gaya aur reb karte huye hawa ki chidhte huye Highway pe chal rahi ekka dukka gadiyon ko overtake karte huye 140 km ki speed me chala raha tha…….wakai me use use thrill mehsoos ho raha tha…….
Yojna ke mutabik gantavya sthan pe pohoch gaye sare…….……dopeher ka waqt ho raha tha 11 baje ………
Preeti ….." Kuch bhi kaho tumahri bike slow he…."
Shaan muskuraya……" Very funny…."
Jatin…." Veeru kya jhakas place he…..wo dekho foreigner tourist …..kya mast mast maal he be safedi ki samkar jeise.…….."
Uske baat sayed puri khatam hi nehi hui thi ki preeti ne uske pichwade me laat maari ………sab haas pade .…….lekin preeti sarma gayi prawah me beh ke usne apni dil ki baat badhwa de di.….…
Jatin……" Aankhe dekhne ke liye hi diya he to kya dekhh bhi na…".
Vikram……." Oye sidkunde……bakwas band kar aur khana lane jaa hum achchi jagah ka intezam karte he tent lagane ka…."
Shaan….."haan…..meine gas stove to le ke aaya hoon par hum se to koi paani bhi nehi ubalega……to lunch ka aur dinner ka khana le ke aana….ye le bike ki sabi"
Jatin ne bike ki sabi catch kiya aur jaane laga lekin mud ke masoos sa sakal bana ke bola……" Yaar kucho paise to mere paas sirf 200 rupaye he…"
Sab haas pade …..preeti ne beg se do hazar ki do laal patti nikal ke di…." Ye le aur haa beer mat laiyon…..uske badle achchi si wine le ke aana…."
Shaan….." Cloudy Bay….mera favourite wine……tum logo ko bhi maza aayega….."
Vikram……." Uske liye to pauwa bhi amrit he baandar kya jaane adrakh ka swad …."
Jatin….." Chutiye mat bhool pauwa maar ke hi pina shikha tha ……jep me 10 rupay tak nehi rehta tha is jatin ne tujhe roz pilata tha …..ab sale ulti kar raha he mere ehsaas ka……kide pade laude me"
Shaan ……" Oye bas bas……tu nikal nehi to yehi samadhi ban jayega tera….."
Jatin bike le ke chala gaya……..
Shaan……" Ok hum do teem me bat jayenge…….preeti aur me pacchim ki taraf jaate he……vikram tum tripti ko le ke uttar ki taraf chale jaao…..zaha tent lagane ki sunidha nazar aaye call karna…"
Dono do teem me bichar gaye ……..
Shaan……" Vikram…….is bachchi ko akele mat chhodna ……aur khusjli wali jehrile padho se door rakhna……ise samjha dena ki keise jungle me fuk fuk ke paao rakhe jate he…."
Tripti chilla ke boli…." I'm now adult…..bachchi kehna band karo bhaiya……."
Shaan aur preeti pacchim ki taraf rukh kiya……dono jhadon ke bich rasta banate huye jungle ek andar chale jaa rahe the sabdhani se…….
Shaan ka preeti ko apne saath laane ka maksad kuch aur hi tha…….kafi dino se preeti se akele me milna chahta tha lekin waqt nehi nikal paa raha tha……
Shaan…." Preeti….."
Preeti…." Haa bolo kya huya…."
Shaan……" Me tumhe keisa lagta hoon…."
Preeti muskurai……" Kya matlab he tumhara…… Jungle me mangal karne ki soch rahe ho to bhool jaao……"
Shaan has pada……" Is waqt agar jatin yeha hota mere jagah to kya use tum apne saath jungle me mangal karne dogi …"
Preeti piche mud ke ghurne lagi use……." Dekho bakwaas mat karo……"
Shaan ko maza aa raha tha preeti ko chedne me….." I'm serious preeti……dekho dost ki tarah kuch baatein karna chahta hoon jatin ke baare me….agar tum nehi karna chahte ho to me tumhe force nehi krunga…"
Preeti kuch pal soch ke boli……" Kya baatein karna chahte ho uski…..kahi usne to tumhe baat karne ko to nehi bheja he…."
Shaan….." Are nehi…..woh bhi tumhari tarah hi he dil baatein chupa ke rakhta he…….."
Preeti…" come to the point…..saaf saaf bolo kya kehna chahte ho…"
Shaan….." Ok I'm right on point…….kya tum usse pyaar nehi karti….."
Preeti…." Pata nehi.….."
Shaan…." Magar woh tumse sach me pyaar karta he .….magar darta he tum na kar do…..aur use lagta he tumhare kabil nehi he…garib he tumhe wo kuch nehi de payega……"
Preeti.……" To me kya karu…."
Shaan……." Kis tarah ki ladki ho yaar …..banda tumse pyaar karta he tumhare itni parva karta he tumhare apni pyaar kurbaan kar raha he yaar…."
Preeti……" Baat ye nehi he shaan……woh future pe focus nehi he…….kaal ko agar wo jamidari na utha paye to kya……meri bhi to kuch armaan he……"
Shaan..……" Yaar tum jaante ho banda kitna talented he…….gaming career me bohot aage bad sakta he B.tech ke saath game developer ki qualifications bhi uske paas……..sayed Tumhe lagta he wo future pe Focus nehi he lekin aisa nehi he ……maine dekha he jab woh kaam karta he ek dum devotion aur engrossed se kaam karta he..……woh apne budhe maa baap ko chhod ke is seher se bahar nehi jaana chahta he……uski ek badi behen bhi to he jiski abhi tak shadi nehi hui he…..wo tension me he lekin humare samne dikhata nehi he……"
Preeti kuch soch kar boli……." Lekin use himmat karna hoga…….wo mujhe bhao hi nehi deta……."
Shaan……" Suna tha ladkiya in mamlon me chalak he lekin nehi…….woh bhao deta he lekin sayed tum hi nazar nehi de paati……"
Preeti…" Tum chahte ho ki hum zabardasti couples ban jaye……"
Shaan muskura ke bola…." Aisa nehi he…I think you two are made for each other……."
Preeti……" Okay……i will think about it"
Shaan ka phone bajne lagta he…….vikram ka phone tha…….vikram batata he ki nadi ke kinare tent lagane ka good place he……aur koi tourism ne woha tent lagaye he…..Dono dono bapach car ke paas aate he aur saare saman le ke uttar ki taraf jaate he…..
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Wadiyon se nikle rajpath me shaan ki bike shaan se dour raha tha……..gujarti gadiya ek pal ke liye raftar dhima kar ke shaan ki bike ko dekhte huye guzarne lage the ya phir wo acceleration dena hi bhool jate the bike shaan o shoukat dekh ke……..
Tripti ko garv ho rahi thi…….wo bhi kya karti log wohi samajh rahe the jo samjhna chahiye …….…….
Tripti…." Shaan bhaiya……."
Shaan……"hmm bolo…."
Tripti……" Hume log gf bf samajh rahe he…"
shaan……" kya kare aise hi he log ……ye log rajdhani express se race laga ke gaye kya…"
tripti….." preeti didi bohot fast car chalati he…..aap bhi thora fast chalao na….kya bel gadi ki tarah chala rahe ho…"
shaan….." mohtarma is sheher me
highway me speet limit 100 aur aur cuty me 50 ki he…….speed limit todne me bohot zurmana lagta he…."
tripti….." kya bhaiya…aap itne fattu ho….. City me maan liya ki woha camera aur sensor lage hote he…… Highway me aisa kuch nehi he….."
shaan ka bhi josh ubal gaya aur reb karte huye hawa ki chidhte huye Highway pe chal rahi ekka dukka gadiyon ko overtake karte huye 140 km ki speed me chala raha tha…….wakai me use use thrill mehsoos ho raha tha…….
Yojna ke mutabik gantavya sthan pe pohoch gaye sare…….……dopeher ka waqt ho raha tha 11 baje ………
Preeti ….." Kuch bhi kaho tumahri bike slow he…."
Shaan muskuraya……" Very funny…."
Jatin…." Veeru kya jhakas place he…..wo dekho foreigner tourist …..kya mast mast maal he be safedi ki samkar jeise.…….."
Uske baat sayed puri khatam hi nehi hui thi ki preeti ne uske pichwade me laat maari ………sab haas pade .…….lekin preeti sarma gayi prawah me beh ke usne apni dil ki baat badhwa de di.….…
Jatin……" Aankhe dekhne ke liye hi diya he to kya dekhh bhi na…".
Vikram……." Oye sidkunde……bakwas band kar aur khana lane jaa hum achchi jagah ka intezam karte he tent lagane ka…."
Shaan….."haan…..meine gas stove to le ke aaya hoon par hum se to koi paani bhi nehi ubalega……to lunch ka aur dinner ka khana le ke aana….ye le bike ki sabi"
Jatin ne bike ki sabi catch kiya aur jaane laga lekin mud ke masoos sa sakal bana ke bola……" Yaar kucho paise to mere paas sirf 200 rupaye he…"
Sab haas pade …..preeti ne beg se do hazar ki do laal patti nikal ke di…." Ye le aur haa beer mat laiyon…..uske badle achchi si wine le ke aana…."
Shaan….." Cloudy Bay….mera favourite wine……tum logo ko bhi maza aayega….."
Vikram……." Uske liye to pauwa bhi amrit he baandar kya jaane adrakh ka swad …."
Jatin….." Chutiye mat bhool pauwa maar ke hi pina shikha tha ……jep me 10 rupay tak nehi rehta tha is jatin ne tujhe roz pilata tha …..ab sale ulti kar raha he mere ehsaas ka……kide pade laude me"
Shaan ……" Oye bas bas……tu nikal nehi to yehi samadhi ban jayega tera….."
Jatin bike le ke chala gaya……..
Shaan……" Ok hum do teem me bat jayenge…….preeti aur me pacchim ki taraf jaate he……vikram tum tripti ko le ke uttar ki taraf chale jaao…..zaha tent lagane ki sunidha nazar aaye call karna…"
Dono do teem me bichar gaye ……..
Shaan……" Vikram…….is bachchi ko akele mat chhodna ……aur khusjli wali jehrile padho se door rakhna……ise samjha dena ki keise jungle me fuk fuk ke paao rakhe jate he…."
Tripti chilla ke boli…." I'm now adult…..bachchi kehna band karo bhaiya……."
Shaan aur preeti pacchim ki taraf rukh kiya……dono jhadon ke bich rasta banate huye jungle ek andar chale jaa rahe the sabdhani se…….
Shaan ka preeti ko apne saath laane ka maksad kuch aur hi tha…….kafi dino se preeti se akele me milna chahta tha lekin waqt nehi nikal paa raha tha……
Shaan…." Preeti….."
Preeti…." Haa bolo kya huya…."
Shaan……" Me tumhe keisa lagta hoon…."
Preeti muskurai……" Kya matlab he tumhara…… Jungle me mangal karne ki soch rahe ho to bhool jaao……"
Shaan has pada……" Is waqt agar jatin yeha hota mere jagah to kya use tum apne saath jungle me mangal karne dogi …"
Preeti piche mud ke ghurne lagi use……." Dekho bakwaas mat karo……"
Shaan ko maza aa raha tha preeti ko chedne me….." I'm serious preeti……dekho dost ki tarah kuch baatein karna chahta hoon jatin ke baare me….agar tum nehi karna chahte ho to me tumhe force nehi krunga…"
Preeti kuch pal soch ke boli……" Kya baatein karna chahte ho uski…..kahi usne to tumhe baat karne ko to nehi bheja he…."
Shaan….." Are nehi…..woh bhi tumhari tarah hi he dil baatein chupa ke rakhta he…….."
Preeti…" come to the point…..saaf saaf bolo kya kehna chahte ho…"
Shaan….." Ok I'm right on point…….kya tum usse pyaar nehi karti….."
Preeti…." Pata nehi.….."
Shaan…." Magar woh tumse sach me pyaar karta he .….magar darta he tum na kar do…..aur use lagta he tumhare kabil nehi he…garib he tumhe wo kuch nehi de payega……"
Preeti.……" To me kya karu…."
Shaan……." Kis tarah ki ladki ho yaar …..banda tumse pyaar karta he tumhare itni parva karta he tumhare apni pyaar kurbaan kar raha he yaar…."
Preeti……" Baat ye nehi he shaan……woh future pe focus nehi he…….kaal ko agar wo jamidari na utha paye to kya……meri bhi to kuch armaan he……"
Shaan..……" Yaar tum jaante ho banda kitna talented he…….gaming career me bohot aage bad sakta he B.tech ke saath game developer ki qualifications bhi uske paas……..sayed Tumhe lagta he wo future pe Focus nehi he lekin aisa nehi he ……maine dekha he jab woh kaam karta he ek dum devotion aur engrossed se kaam karta he..……woh apne budhe maa baap ko chhod ke is seher se bahar nehi jaana chahta he……uski ek badi behen bhi to he jiski abhi tak shadi nehi hui he…..wo tension me he lekin humare samne dikhata nehi he……"
Preeti kuch soch kar boli……." Lekin use himmat karna hoga…….wo mujhe bhao hi nehi deta……."
Shaan……" Suna tha ladkiya in mamlon me chalak he lekin nehi…….woh bhao deta he lekin sayed tum hi nazar nehi de paati……"
Preeti…" Tum chahte ho ki hum zabardasti couples ban jaye……"
Shaan muskura ke bola…." Aisa nehi he…I think you two are made for each other……."
Preeti……" Okay……i will think about it"
Shaan ka phone bajne lagta he…….vikram ka phone tha…….vikram batata he ki nadi ke kinare tent lagane ka good place he……aur koi tourism ne woha tent lagaye he…..Dono dono bapach car ke paas aate he aur saare saman le ke uttar ki taraf jaate he…..
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Nadi kinare pattharon me tent lag chuka tha……shaan ,preeti ,vikram aur tripti ne teen camping tent khada kiya……
Vikram……." Bhai teen tent ki kya zaroorat thi…..do hi kafi he thand me maza aata…."
Shaan….." Na beta…..aisi galti dubara me nehi karunga…. yaad he pichli baar tere pedo ki angutha mere naak me ghuste ghuste puri raat guzri thi….ek me dono ladkiya dusre me tum dono namune ek saath aur tisre me main akela rahunga….ye ab tak jatin aaya kyu nehi….."
Tripti….." Kahi tinde bike wazan sambhal na paa kar kahi gira pada to nehi….."
Shaan….." Preeti …zara call lagao to use…..paas hi market he isnti samna lane me ghanta bhar to nehi lagta he…."
Preeti call lagane hi wali thi ki jatin bike le ke aa gaya saman ke saath…..lekin uske haath me kuch tha jo chaaron asambhit nazro se dekh rahe the….
Vikram….." Ye kya he be tere haath me…"
Jatin raja ki tarah chaati phula ke bola….." Hahahah……shikar ……me aa raha tha to ye khorgosh dikh gaya phir kya mere shikari dadaji ka khoon jo tha mere me ek jhapte me iska shikar kar liya……"
Vikram……" Chal fattu….tu aur shikar .…… raste me kahi mara pada tha wohi utha ke le aaya…."
Tripti….."how cruel are you……is bechare ko kyu mara tumne….."
Jatin….."jab paka ke iska gosh khilaunga naa tab kahegi tab bolegi wao kya swad he iske…."
Shaan ne jatin ke chehre ki bhao se jaan gaya ki jatin juth bol raha he…." Sach sach bata kaha se mila ye tujhe…."
Jatin chaaron ko dekhne laga…..aur use ehsaas ho gaya ki uske baat pe koi eking nehi kar raha he to wo akhir sach bol diya….." Are bike ke niche aa gayi thi bechari….takkar lag gaya tha thori jaan bachi thi mujhe laga ye nehi bachega to pura maar ke le aaya……"
Vikram….." Yehi he shikari dadaji ka pota ….."
Sab haasne lage…………..
Phir sabhi ne lunch kiya halke phulke tarike se …… aur ghumne nikal pade ……..paanchon jungle me ghumne nikle….tripti bas photo khiche jaa rahi thi…….
Paanchon ko ek sundar natural place mila jiske khubsurti ka bayan karna kisi rachak ko bulane pade us jagah…..
Preeti……" Kyu naa hum is place ko humare game ke liye design kare "..
Tripti….." Nice idea……me 360 views leta hoon….."
Shaan…." Tere mobile ke camere se nehi hoga……4k shoot wale camere se seen lena hoga……hum baad me camera le ke aayenge….."
Chaaron shaam tak ghuma phira aur tent me aa ke bonfire jalaya …..jatin khorgosh ko aag me pakane laga …….
Tripti……" Shaan bhaiya……is jungal me bhediya nehi he kya….."
Preeti….." He par is area me nehi…..kyu tujhe bhediya dekhna he kya…."
Tripti…." Haan bohot man he real me dekhne ka…… maine vampire aur wolf ki bohot si movies dekhi he…."
Jatin….." Mera ek hi favourite he twilight movie…….all time favourite he mera…."
Shaan…." Mera bhi…….wo movies dekh ke to me do din tak imagination tha yaar…"
Vikram……" Maine puri series dekhi he….par last do part mujhe itna khas nehi laga…."
Preeti….." Par sare ke sare achche lage….kash agla part bhi aata ……jackup is my favourite character……uske body uske muscals …..sochte hi goosebump aate he…."
Jatin use ghurne laga…..ye dekh ke baki teeno muskurane laga……
Jatin ko chidhane ke liye vikram bola……."haan….kya muscals he na..…… koi bhi ladkiya fida ho jaye…..kahi tum bhi fida to nehi ho preeti uspe ……"
Preeti muskura ke kuch bolne hi wali thi ki jatin jor se bol ke sabka dhyaan hata diya us topic se….…" Gosh pak gaya he bolo koun koun sa pich khayega…."
Tripti ..……" Me leg pich lungi…."
Shaan……" Ye lo nirday ki bhukh dikh gayi"
Tripti….." Chup raho bhaiya..……ab paka hi liya to waste kyu karna….."
Sab mil ke gosh khane lage…..raat bhi dinner kar ke sab apne tent me chale gaye…….
Shaan kambal ke andar ghus ke mobile nikala……..aur apni mom ko phone lagaya……
Us taraf se Mrs.baldev ki suruli awaaz aayi……." Haa baby bolo….."
" So gayi thi aap…."
" Haa bas abhi aankh lag gayi thi…kya huya kuch baat he…"
" just nothing special……aise hi….. okay good night mom….."
" Wait….you missed me….."
" Deeply…..pura din aapne ek call tak nehi kiya "
Kuch pal bas phone pe ek dusre ki saason ki awaaz sunai diya……
" Baby I'm so sorry…….dinner kiya…."
" Haan…"
" Man kar raha he tumhare woha aa jau abhi……"
" me too….. but….."
" I miss you so much baby……."
" Mom Love you so much…."
" Love you to baby…….subah jaldi aana.….."
" Itni subah nehi pohoch paunga…..aap to 9 baje office chali jaati he…."
" Tum kaho to me office jana hi chhodh doon baby……kaal tumhare liye pura din wait karungi…"
" Hhm….so go on a date with me….."
" Hihihihi…..Will you take your mother on a date?……. okay done intezar karungi……"
Tabhi tent ki zip khone ki awaaz hui aur shaan ne jaldi se bola….." Ok bye mom…mere dost aaye he…" Aur call disconnected ka diya…..
Shaan ne dekha tripti uske tent ka zipp khol ke aa gayi aur band kar ke bina anugya liye uske kambal me ghus gayi…..
Shaan….." Tikli tu yeha kya kar rahi he….."
Tripti……" Bhaiya preeti baas maar rahi he…"
Shaan….." Matlab.."
tripti……" fart ……"
shaan…….." yuk….sachchi ….."
tripti………" muchchi…….lagta he gas ho gayi use….."
shaan……" achcha thik he so jaa……meri pyari behna……."
dono blanket ke andar chipak ke so gaye……….nadi kinara nijaat par chuka tha jeise ek sannata shaya huya he………jhadiyon me se keet pangang ki ajib si su su sa sa awaaz gunj rahi thi ……… Minus degreee celcius Temperature me nadi ke paani me kahi kahi sadar ban rahi thi ……leher ki surili awaaz gunj rahi thi………..un logo ke kshetra me 500 meter door aas paas dusre tourist bhi camping kar rahe the…..sab mast dhun me the mausam ko upbhog kar rahe the……….
Shaan ko neend nehi aa raha tha…… uska bada man kar raha tha phir se apni mom se baat karen phone ke dwara …..lekin uski cousin sister uski chaati me shir rakh ke sone lagi baahe dale…….thori hi der me shaan kuch asahej ho gaya……………
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