Incest apne hi pita ka pita bana
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Bbbb bhai chal kya raha hai,pichali bar bhi isi kahani ki copy kiya tha tumne aur baad mein original writer jo yaha abhi same kahani likh rahe hain uske complaint ke baad story ko banned kiya tha fir bhi wohi galati...pata nahi kya ho gaya hai tumko pehle hi teen kahaaniyan pending pe hai uska to update 3-6 mahina lagate ho aur jis kahani pe banned dal diya tha use wapas likh rahe ho.. matlab kuch bhi..aap yahape kafi purane hai agar aap hi aisa karne lage to baaki yo se kya ummid..jis kahani se aapka naam aaya hai uske update ka pata nahi aur jisse badnam huye ho uski kahani wapas likh rahe ho...is badnami se acha gap lo
haa ye story yaha per pehle bi likhi thi per isko baaned kar diya gaya tha per kyu maine is story ko us writer ke bikul alag andaz mi likha tha yaha har story maa bete sasur bahu bhai behen ke beech hoti hi to phir kisi ko kya fark padta hi us writer ne apne story mi ki ghar ka mard banaya wo kaise huwa bete ke shadi apni uski mousi se karwai to is ghr ka mard ko kaise bana is ghar per us ki hukumat kaise ho sakti hi wo to tab hi ho sakti hi jab wop is ghar ki sab se badi aurat ko apni mohar laga de agar us per uska hukam chalega tab hi sab ghar per chalega baki agar aap ko koi interst nahi to i dont care per jo muje acha lagata hi wo hi mi likhta hu baki aap logo ki marzi
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Bhai copy paste karna koi story likhna nehi kehta, Aapne wahi kia. Haan agar aap us story apne andaaz me likhna chahte hain to aur baat hai. Acchi story ke liye wishes
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daadi ne jaydaad ke kagaz papa ki or bada diye
daadi; ab is per sign kar de
per papa muh niche ko jhukaye soch rahe the
main door khada sab dekh raha tha ki daadi papa se baat kar rahi thi tabhi papa ne meri or dekha or muje awaz laga kar apne pass bulaya to mi fouran bina der kiye unki or chalne laga to papa nahi kyu daadi m naana naani meri or dekhne lage muje bada ajeeb laga or mi jaa kar papa ki side mi khada ho gaya
main; papa aap ne muje bulaya
papa; haa wo
daadi ; ravi tu is wat bunty ko kyu bula raha hi tumhe pata hai naa hum yaha kitni jaroori baat kar rahe hi , tu ye jummedari utha or bunty tu yaha se jaa abhi tu bacha hi yaha bahut jaroori baat ho rahi hi . daadi ne us samay bacha to keh diya per us samay naa to daadi ye baat janti thi ki jisse wo bacha bol kar yaha se bhaga rahi hi agge chal wo bacha uske hone waale bacho ka baap banega wo ye faisla lene se samay usse waha se bhaga rahi thi kal wo is ghar ke sab chote bade faisle wo hi lega uski izzazat ke bina is ghar mi koi bi kuch nahi kar payega khair kahani per aate hi
main sochne laga meri kya galti hi jo muje daant pad gayi mi ulte paow wapis jaane laga to papa ne muje rok liya
papa ; mi apna faisla suna raha hu , maa
daadi ; kya matlab?
papa ; mi is ghar ka mard nahi balki meri jagah bunty banega ghar ka mard.
papa ne jaise hi apni jagah muje ghar ka mard malik banane ki baat uthai daadi nana naani sab shock ho kar papa ki or dekhne lage jab li mi waha khada ye soch raha tha ki papa ye kya bol rahe hi
daadi ; tuze pata bi hi tu kya bol raha hi, pagal to nahi ho gaya tu
naana ji ; damaad ji ye aap kya bol rahe hi
papa ; wahi jo aaplog sun rahe hi bunty hi is jaydad ka malik banega or is ghar ka mard bi wo uthayega pita ji ki sari zimmedariya
daadi; ye nahi ho sakta
papa kyu nahi ho sakta ye
daadi; kyuki tu hi is ghar ka bada beta hi or tere hote huye koi dusra is ghar ka mard nahi ban sakta
un sab ki tarah mi bi shocked tha or samaj nahi paa raha tha ki mi ghar malik or ghar ka mard ?kyu?
papa; kyu nahi ban sakta akhir ye mera beta hi
daadi bunty abhi bahut chota hi
papa; itna samajdar hi maa or akhir wo hi to is ghar ka waris hi or rahi baat chota hone hi to ab itna chota bi nahi pura mard ho chuka hi
daadi; haa hai lekin...................
thodi der waha sannata cha gaya mi kuch bolne hi waala tha
daadi; ab is per sign kar de
per papa muh niche ko jhukaye soch rahe the
main door khada sab dekh raha tha ki daadi papa se baat kar rahi thi tabhi papa ne meri or dekha or muje awaz laga kar apne pass bulaya to mi fouran bina der kiye unki or chalne laga to papa nahi kyu daadi m naana naani meri or dekhne lage muje bada ajeeb laga or mi jaa kar papa ki side mi khada ho gaya
main; papa aap ne muje bulaya
papa; haa wo
daadi ; ravi tu is wat bunty ko kyu bula raha hi tumhe pata hai naa hum yaha kitni jaroori baat kar rahe hi , tu ye jummedari utha or bunty tu yaha se jaa abhi tu bacha hi yaha bahut jaroori baat ho rahi hi . daadi ne us samay bacha to keh diya per us samay naa to daadi ye baat janti thi ki jisse wo bacha bol kar yaha se bhaga rahi hi agge chal wo bacha uske hone waale bacho ka baap banega wo ye faisla lene se samay usse waha se bhaga rahi thi kal wo is ghar ke sab chote bade faisle wo hi lega uski izzazat ke bina is ghar mi koi bi kuch nahi kar payega khair kahani per aate hi
main sochne laga meri kya galti hi jo muje daant pad gayi mi ulte paow wapis jaane laga to papa ne muje rok liya
papa ; mi apna faisla suna raha hu , maa
daadi ; kya matlab?
papa ; mi is ghar ka mard nahi balki meri jagah bunty banega ghar ka mard.
papa ne jaise hi apni jagah muje ghar ka mard malik banane ki baat uthai daadi nana naani sab shock ho kar papa ki or dekhne lage jab li mi waha khada ye soch raha tha ki papa ye kya bol rahe hi
daadi ; tuze pata bi hi tu kya bol raha hi, pagal to nahi ho gaya tu
naana ji ; damaad ji ye aap kya bol rahe hi
papa ; wahi jo aaplog sun rahe hi bunty hi is jaydad ka malik banega or is ghar ka mard bi wo uthayega pita ji ki sari zimmedariya
daadi; ye nahi ho sakta
papa kyu nahi ho sakta ye
daadi; kyuki tu hi is ghar ka bada beta hi or tere hote huye koi dusra is ghar ka mard nahi ban sakta
un sab ki tarah mi bi shocked tha or samaj nahi paa raha tha ki mi ghar malik or ghar ka mard ?kyu?
papa; kyu nahi ban sakta akhir ye mera beta hi
daadi bunty abhi bahut chota hi
papa; itna samajdar hi maa or akhir wo hi to is ghar ka waris hi or rahi baat chota hone hi to ab itna chota bi nahi pura mard ho chuka hi
daadi; haa hai lekin...................
thodi der waha sannata cha gaya mi kuch bolne hi waala tha
main; papa aap kya bol rahe hi or ye sab kya chal raha hi muje kuch bi samaj nahi aa raha
lekin meri baat per kisi ne dhyan nahi diya
tabhi daadi ne naani se kaha
daadi ; samdhan ji mi ravi se akele mi baat karna chahti hu to naana naani waha se uth kar chale gaye
daadi ; bunty ab tu bi jaa
mi jaise hi jaane laga papa bol pade
papa; bunty yahi rukega maa ye baat iske liye jan na bahut zaroori hi
mai ruk gaya
daadi; ravi kya baat hi tu muj se kya chupa raha hi
papa; maa ap ko bahut pehle se hi sab kuch bata dena chahta tha per pata nahi kyu bata nahi paya lekin ab mere pass ab aap ko batane ke ilawa dusra or koi rasta nahi hi
daadi; saaf saaf bata kya baat hi
papa; maa ap janti hi naa ki 15 sal pehle mera accident ho gaya tha or muje gehri chot aayi thi
daadi ; haa janti hu
papa ; us accident mi mere andruni hisse per chot aayi thi jis se mi ab wo kaam nahi kar sakta
mi ye baat sun kar shocked ho gaya ki papa ne itni badi kyu chupai or is sab ke jaydad ka malik banane se kya connection
daadi; kya
mi ye kya sun rahi hu itni badi baat tumhe hum se chupai
papa; maa mu bahut sharminda tha isliye
daadi papa ki baat sun kar chup ho gayi or kabhi papa ki or or kabhi to kabhi meri or dekhne lagi.
papa maa is jaydad or gharko sambhalne ke liye mard hona jaroori hi
daadi; haa ab mi samjane lagi hu ki tu is ghar ka mard nahi ban sakta
papa; ab is ghar mi ek hi mard bacha hi wo hi mera beta bunty
dadi; tune sahi kaha ki bunty hi is ghar ka mard hi tuje kya lagta hi bunty ye sab sambhal payega
ye baat bol kar daadi meri or dekhne lagi lekin muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha
main; papa ye sab kya chal raha hi muje to kuch bi samaj mi nahi aa raha
lekin meri baat per kisi ne dhyan nahi diya
tabhi daadi ne naani se kaha
daadi ; samdhan ji mi ravi se akele mi baat karna chahti hu to naana naani waha se uth kar chale gaye
daadi ; bunty ab tu bi jaa
mi jaise hi jaane laga papa bol pade
papa; bunty yahi rukega maa ye baat iske liye jan na bahut zaroori hi
mai ruk gaya
daadi; ravi kya baat hi tu muj se kya chupa raha hi
papa; maa ap ko bahut pehle se hi sab kuch bata dena chahta tha per pata nahi kyu bata nahi paya lekin ab mere pass ab aap ko batane ke ilawa dusra or koi rasta nahi hi
daadi; saaf saaf bata kya baat hi
papa; maa ap janti hi naa ki 15 sal pehle mera accident ho gaya tha or muje gehri chot aayi thi
daadi ; haa janti hu
papa ; us accident mi mere andruni hisse per chot aayi thi jis se mi ab wo kaam nahi kar sakta
mi ye baat sun kar shocked ho gaya ki papa ne itni badi kyu chupai or is sab ke jaydad ka malik banane se kya connection
daadi; kya
mi ye kya sun rahi hu itni badi baat tumhe hum se chupai
papa; maa mu bahut sharminda tha isliye
daadi papa ki baat sun kar chup ho gayi or kabhi papa ki or or kabhi to kabhi meri or dekhne lagi.
papa maa is jaydad or gharko sambhalne ke liye mard hona jaroori hi
daadi; haa ab mi samjane lagi hu ki tu is ghar ka mard nahi ban sakta
papa; ab is ghar mi ek hi mard bacha hi wo hi mera beta bunty
dadi; tune sahi kaha ki bunty hi is ghar ka mard hi tuje kya lagta hi bunty ye sab sambhal payega
ye baat bol kar daadi meri or dekhne lagi lekin muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha
main; papa ye sab kya chal raha hi muje to kuch bi samaj mi nahi aa raha
main; ye sab kya baate chal rahi hi papa.aap log ye sab kya baate kar rahe ho mere palle to kuch nahi pad raha
papa; yahi ki mi tumhe apni jagah is ghar ka mard banana chahta hu is jaydad ka malik
main; lekin papa mi itni badi jaydad ko sambhal nahi sakta muje iska koi idea nahi hi
papa; wo sab tu muj per chod de mi teri help karunga or teri daadi bi
main; to phir thik hi muje koi pareshani nahi hi meri baat sun kar daadi meri or dekh kar sochne lagi ki haa bunty sambhal sakta hi , lekin kya bunty ye janta hi ki is ghar ka mard hone ka kya matlab hi , kya ye wo sab kar payega
main; kya matlab ghar sambhalne ka ?jaydad sambhalne naa
daadi jan chuki thi ki mi ghar ghar ka mard ban na ka asli matlab mi nahi samaj paaya tha
daadi; bunty ko kuch pata bi hi is baare mi
papa; maa isko baad mi sab bata dunga
papa ; bunty tum is ghar ke mard bante ho to tumhe apne daada ji jagah leni hogi is ghar ki sab aurato ki zimmedari uthani hogi
main; papa maine kab mana kiya hi uthaunga naa
papa ; dekho beta tumhe apne daada ji ki jagah leni hogi is ghar ban ne liye or sab se pehle apni daadi ko wo haq dena hoga jo tumare daada ne diya tha
main; papa aap kon se haq ki baat kar rahe hi kya dena hoga daadi ko
papa; tumari daadi ke jeevan jo berang
ho gaya hai na us mi rang bharne hoge unhe apna naam dena hoga shadi karni hogi
main ye sun kar jor se chillaya , kya or daadi ki or dekha jo sharm se apne chehre ko niche kiya sharma rahi thi
or apni aankhe ghuma kar idhar udhar dekh rahi thi
main; kya?aap pagal ho gaaye hi kya papa . aap majak nto nahi kar rahe. daadi se shadi
papa ; nahi bunty mi koi majak nahi kar raha hu tuze apni daadi se shadi karni hogi
ye sab sun kar muje bahut bada jhatka laga or mi gusse se waha se chala gaya
papa; yahi ki mi tumhe apni jagah is ghar ka mard banana chahta hu is jaydad ka malik
main; lekin papa mi itni badi jaydad ko sambhal nahi sakta muje iska koi idea nahi hi
papa; wo sab tu muj per chod de mi teri help karunga or teri daadi bi
main; to phir thik hi muje koi pareshani nahi hi meri baat sun kar daadi meri or dekh kar sochne lagi ki haa bunty sambhal sakta hi , lekin kya bunty ye janta hi ki is ghar ka mard hone ka kya matlab hi , kya ye wo sab kar payega
main; kya matlab ghar sambhalne ka ?jaydad sambhalne naa
daadi jan chuki thi ki mi ghar ghar ka mard ban na ka asli matlab mi nahi samaj paaya tha
daadi; bunty ko kuch pata bi hi is baare mi
papa; maa isko baad mi sab bata dunga
papa ; bunty tum is ghar ke mard bante ho to tumhe apne daada ji jagah leni hogi is ghar ki sab aurato ki zimmedari uthani hogi
main; papa maine kab mana kiya hi uthaunga naa
papa ; dekho beta tumhe apne daada ji ki jagah leni hogi is ghar ban ne liye or sab se pehle apni daadi ko wo haq dena hoga jo tumare daada ne diya tha
main; papa aap kon se haq ki baat kar rahe hi kya dena hoga daadi ko
papa; tumari daadi ke jeevan jo berang
ho gaya hai na us mi rang bharne hoge unhe apna naam dena hoga shadi karni hogi
main ye sun kar jor se chillaya , kya or daadi ki or dekha jo sharm se apne chehre ko niche kiya sharma rahi thi
or apni aankhe ghuma kar idhar udhar dekh rahi thi
main; kya?aap pagal ho gaaye hi kya papa . aap majak nto nahi kar rahe. daadi se shadi
papa ; nahi bunty mi koi majak nahi kar raha hu tuze apni daadi se shadi karni hogi
ye sab sun kar muje bahut bada jhatka laga or mi gusse se waha se chala gaya
mere waha se jaane ke baad papa daadi se
papa; maa tumhe abhi ye sab batane ki kya zaroorat thi mi bunty ko ye sab baad mi bata deta.
daadi ; tum hi to kehte the ki bunty ab bada ho gaya hi. usse to ye sach jaan naa bahut jaruri hi .
papa ; lekin mai .... baad mai . khair chodo maa mi usse samja dunga
daadi ; to jaa kar bunty ko bata ki ghar ka mard ban ne ka kya matlab hi
papa; maa mi bunty ko mana lunga per usko kuch waqt dijiye
mi us samay kisi ki bi baat sun ne ke liye tayyar nahi tha or dusre hi din goan se apne ghar nikalne ke nikalne lage
daadi ; ravi tumhe bunty ko samjaya ya nahi
papa; nahi maa wo kuch sun na bi nahi chahta
daadi; to phir kya kiya jaaye
papa; muje thoda waqt do maa mi akash ko samja dunga
daadi; waqt hi to nahi hai
papa kuch waqt to do maa kaha naa mi bunty ko samja lung
daadi thik hi jaldi se bunty ko mana le warna
papa; warna kya maa
daadi ; warna mi ye jimmedari kisi or ko de dungi jo is ghar jaydad malik or ghar ka mard banega phir tu janta hi naa
papa; aap chinta maat karo mi bunty ko mana lunga baki aap sambhal lena
daadi thik hi tu jaldi se bunty ko mana le tab tak jaydad ka kagaz tayar karwati hu
papa ; thik hi maa or phir papa mi or maa ghar se nikal pade
papa; maa tumhe abhi ye sab batane ki kya zaroorat thi mi bunty ko ye sab baad mi bata deta.
daadi ; tum hi to kehte the ki bunty ab bada ho gaya hi. usse to ye sach jaan naa bahut jaruri hi .
papa ; lekin mai .... baad mai . khair chodo maa mi usse samja dunga
daadi ; to jaa kar bunty ko bata ki ghar ka mard ban ne ka kya matlab hi
papa; maa mi bunty ko mana lunga per usko kuch waqt dijiye
mi us samay kisi ki bi baat sun ne ke liye tayyar nahi tha or dusre hi din goan se apne ghar nikalne ke nikalne lage
daadi ; ravi tumhe bunty ko samjaya ya nahi
papa; nahi maa wo kuch sun na bi nahi chahta
daadi; to phir kya kiya jaaye
papa; muje thoda waqt do maa mi akash ko samja dunga
daadi; waqt hi to nahi hai
papa kuch waqt to do maa kaha naa mi bunty ko samja lung
daadi thik hi jaldi se bunty ko mana le warna
papa; warna kya maa
daadi ; warna mi ye jimmedari kisi or ko de dungi jo is ghar jaydad malik or ghar ka mard banega phir tu janta hi naa
papa; aap chinta maat karo mi bunty ko mana lunga baki aap sambhal lena
daadi thik hi tu jaldi se bunty ko mana le tab tak jaydad ka kagaz tayar karwati hu
papa ; thik hi maa or phir papa mi or maa ghar se nikal pade
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