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(dada ji) Thakur samsher paratap singh
(dadi ji) sandhya devi
(chacha) thakur dharmveer pratap singh
(chachi) sharmila singh
Mina aur rina :- sisters
Rina hero ki lover aur sex partner
Mina hero ki lover aur sex partner
(chote chacha) :- thakur veer pratap singh
(me) :- thakur rajveer pratap singh
Rajni :- hero ki asli maa (dead)
Ranveer :- hero ke pita (dead)
Nana :- shekhar chaudhry
Nani :- sima Chaudhary
B. Mama :- arun
Mami :- kamini
C. Mama :- sanjay
Mosi :- deepa
Sanika :- mosi ki beti
Swati :- sanika ki dost
(guide) aacharya raghwendra
Kaal :- hero inhi ke shaktiyon ka uttaradhikari hai
(hero ke roop)
King
Yodha
Sadhu
Tantrik
Angel
Devil
Side characters
Mira ma :- hero ke liye maa saman aur hero ki pahali sex partner
Sakshi :- hero par crush hai aur uski second sex partner
Kajri :- ye bhi hero ki sex partner hai
Bheema :- dadaji ka right hand
Shera :- bheema ka chota beta
Sangram :- bheema ka bada beta
Shiva :- bheema ka bhatija
Billa :- nanaji ka right hand
Some upcoming character
Lakshmi :- main heroine
Lakshmi ke pita :- sunil singh
Others not have to much role
Pandit ji :- lakshmi ke gharwalon ke kulguru
JASIEN :- hero ka jinn aur jinnlok ka rajkumar
Mr. Negative :- the one of the villain
Suba :- the slave of Mr. Negative
Umir :- also slave of Mr. Negative
Mahamahim unknown villain
(Brijesh) Prabhu the great god from eternal religion
Powers of hero
1) sapt chakr
2) five element
3) slow mode
4) third eye
5) his varients (roop)
6) vijayi dhanush
7) mayavi shaktiya (from tantrik)
8) satvik shaktiya (from sadhu)
9) knowledge
10) chakra astra
11) weponide dragon
12) tamsik tatva (from devil)
13) satvik tatva (ashta vidhi) (from angel)
14) the reaper army (devils army)
The powers of heroine
1) super strength
2) flying ability
3) mind control ability
4) the Carnage Queen
5) the Carnage Army
6) The wepons creating ability
7) the carnage armour
8) copy cat
And some more characters are comming in future
Jin characters ka kahani me jyada roll nahi hai unhe ignore kia gaya hai

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[Naik]

Update 137

Agli subah jab meri aakh khuli toh didi waha nahi thi jise dekh ke mujhe ek baar to laga ki woh sab sapna tha lekin jab mujhe meri haalat ka andaja hua toh pata chala ki ye sab sapna nahi balki sach tha phir me uthke sabse pahle baathroom me jake fresh ho gaya

Aur phir dhyan lagane laga jiske baad mene ek round mere antarman me bhi mara jisme ab pahle se bhaut changes hue the ab antarman pahle se bhi zyada bada aur shaktishali mahsoos ho raha tha jiske baad mene apne sabhi roopon se aaj raat ke plan ko leke kuch der discuss kiya jiske baad mene apna dhyan tod kar niche chala gaya

Jaha par sabhi log pahle se maujood the me bhi achanak sare pariwar ko dekh kar khush ho gaya tha khaaskar apne dono bahnon ko rina didi aur unki judwa bahan aur hum teeno me sabse badi mina didi unke aur rina didi me kewal kuch minutes ka hi antar tha mina didi jyadatar samay apne nana nani ke hu ghar rahti thi

Kyunki unke nana nani ke mom ke alawa koi aur santaan nahi thi jis wajah se woh hum tinon ko hi apne pota poti ke tarah maante the lekin jo bhi mere saath bachpan me hua tha uske baad me kabhi unke pass nahi gaya tha jis wajah se mina didi hi jyada samay unke saath bitane lagi thi aur phir jab unka bond strong ho gaya toh saal me 6 mahinon ke liye mina didi apne nana nani ke ghar hi rahti thi aur baki 6 mahine woh humare saath rahti thi

Phir mene sabse pahle dadaji aur baki sare badon ko pranam kiya dadaji ne sabhi panditon aur mehmano ke rahne ka bandobast gaon me hi kar diya tha jis wajah se unka surprise bana rahe phir jab mera sabse milke hua toh phir sab ne milke breakfast kiya j

Jaha mujhe nanaji ne bataya ki aaj dupehar mami ke pregnant hone ke khushi me party rakhi hai jis liye sabko bulaya hai phir sab party ke liye taiyar hone chale gaye jiske baad dupehar ko ghar me hi ek choti si party ka intezaam kar diya tha

Aur us party me sirf kuch special guests hi invited the uske baad jab party khatam hui toh sab kamron me chale gaye jaha me apne kamre me jake fresh ho jata hu aur thodi der ke liye dhyan lagane lagta hoon wahi niche sabhi log shaam ko rakhe gaye rajyabhishek ki planning kar rahe hote hai

Mina Didi :- dadaji aaj raj ke rajyabhishek ki sari taiyari ho gayi hai na

Dadaji :- ha mina sab taitariya ho gayi hai aur jo baki hai use bhima aur billa dono milke pure kar dinge

Rina :- aaj kitna maja aayega na jab bhai shergarh aur surajgarh dono hi rajyon ka king banega

Dadi :- raja toh woh pahle hi ban chuka hai rina abhi toh bas ek announcement jaise hoga

Swati :- (confused hoke) pahle hi ban chuka hai matlab kya hai aapka dadiji

Nani :- matlab ye hai ki jab raj ne sab gaav walon ke dil ne jagah banayi tabhi woh unka raja ban gaya hai abhi toh bas uske sar pe mukut rakh ke use raja ghoshit karna hai

Dadaji :- bilkul sahi (dad se) waise dharmveer aur arun tum dono ko toh kuch problem nahi hai na ki tumhare bachon ko chodke hum raj ko ye jimmedari somp rahe hai

Mama :- bilkul nahi uncle ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe ho raj ko hum koi jimmedari nahi somp rahe hai balki uske jo bhi paya hai apne kabiliyat se hi paya hai hum sab se pahle dono hi rajyon ki praja ne hi apna raja chuna hai aur raj iske kabil bhi hai

Dad :- aur pita ji aapne ye kaise soch liya ki mujhe kuch problem hogi me toh jab se raj ne janam liya hai tabhi se aapko bol raha hoon ki raj hi aapka uttaradhikari hoga

Jaha ye sab baate kar rahe the toh wahi me apne room me baithe hue un sabhi ki baate sun raha tha dhyan me baithne ki wajah se meri senses pure ghar me fail gayi thi jisse mujhe ghar ke kone kone me ho rahi sari baate sunayi dene lagi thi lekin jab mene sabka plan suna toh mere chehre pe ek muskan si cha gayi sabka apne prati pyaar dekh ke

Wahi jab shaaam ko sab mujhe surprise dene ke liye bula rahe the toh mene bhi unhe surprise dene ke liye jo king ka costume mene kharida tha woh mene pahan liya aur jab me woh pahan kar sabke samne gaya toh mera ye roop dekh kar sabhi shocked ho gaye the

Mene na sirf costume king ki tarah pahna tha balki mene king wale roop ko bhi apna sharir de diya tha jisse mere chehre ka glow mera aura aur meri aawaj sab kuch ek Chakravarty raja jaisa strong and powerful ho gaya tha

Jisse mere chal me bhi ek rubab tha wahi jab me sabke saamne gaya to sab shock ke mare apne ap khade ho gaye

Nana :- (shock se) raj ye tumhare kapde

Me :- (bich me hi) kyu surprise sirf aap hi de sakte ho kya ye mera surprise socha agar mera rajyabhishek tay aap logo ne kar hi diya hai toh kyu na me bhi isme aap sab ka saath du kyu kaisa lag raha hoon me

Mere aawaj me aaya wajan ko mahsus karke koi bhi kuch bol nahi pa raha tha khair phir mene sabko relax kiya phir hum sab us jagah pahuch gaye jaha pe dada aur nana ne milkar mere rajyabhishek ki taiyari ki thi

Waha pe bhima kaka aur unka sara pariwar bhi maujood tha aur dad ke kuch business partners bhi the jisme laxmi aur uska pariwar bhi tha phir pure riti riwajon se mera rajyabhishek kiya gaya aur jaha mujhe speech bhi deni thi

Jo kaam mere king wale roop ne sambhal liya tha

Wahi dusri taraf jab se laxmi ne mujhe dekha tha uske man me ek alag hi jung chal rahi thi hua yu ki jab me sabke samne aaya toh mene phir se apna sharir king ko sonp diya jisse king ka aura phir se release ho gaya jise mahsoos kar laxmi ke pratibimb chouk gayi

(laxmi aur uske pratibimb me hone wali sari baate unke man me hongi jisse koi aur unhe sun nahi payega)

Laxmi :- kya hua tum itne shocked me kyu ho

Pratibimb :- is ladke ka aura mujhe shock kar raha hai is jamane me bhi itna powerful aura woh bhi ek king ke jaisa jaroor ye koi khas ladka hai

Laxmi :- lagta hai tumhe ye pasand aa gaya hai lekin meri choice itni kamjor nahi hai sorry

Pratibimb :- kyaa pasand nahi apne ghamand ko chodo laxmi yaad rakhna ye ghamand hi tumhe ek din barbaad karga me abhi bhi kah rahi hu ye ladka

Abhi pratibimb kuch aur bolti ki tabhi use kuch mahsoos hone lagta hai

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Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Jaha sab Raj ko surprise Dena chahte Thai wahi Raj n sabko surprise ker badhiya
Yeh Laxmi kuch ziada hi ghamnd h apne AAP
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update

 

[Naik]

Update 138

Laxmi :- kya hua tum itne shocked me kyu ho

Pratibimb :- is ladke ka aura mujhe shock kar raha hai is jamane me bhi itna powerful aura woh bhi ek king ke jaisa jaroor ye koi khas ladka hai

Laxmi :- lagta hai tumhe ye pasand aa gaya hai lekin meri choice itni kamjor nahi hai sorry

Pratibimb :- kyaa pasand nahi apne ghamand ko chodo laxmi yaad rakhna ye ghamand hi tumhe ek din barbaad karga me abhi bhi kah rahi hu ye ladka

Abhi pratibimb kuch aur bolti ki tabhi use kuch mahsoos hone lagta hai

Pratibimb :- lakshmi jaldi chalo rakt chad wali rat aarambh ho gayi hai aur un logon ne mere mani ke dusre hisse ko bhi jagrit kar liya hai

Lakshmi :- kyaa chalo jaldi woh dusra hissa mera hai woh kaise uska use kar sakte hai chalo jaldi

Pratibimb :- hum waha ladkiyon ko bachane ke liye ja rahe hain na ki koi shaktiya lene

Lekin lakshmi uski baton ko ignore karke waha se nikal gayi

Wahi abhi mera rajyabhishek sampoorn ho gaya tha aur kewal daan punya ki hi rasam bachi thi jo kuch der baad thi

Abhi me apne seat par baitha tha ki tabhi mere man me mujhe JASIEN ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi

JASIEN :- aaka rakt chand wali raat aarambh ho gayi hai hume jald se jald nikalna hoga

Me :- ok me samajh gaya

Phir me waha se washroom ka bahana bana kar nikal gaya aur wahi maujood ek ghar me chala gaya jaha is waqt mere alawa koi nahi tha toh mene turant mera duplicate taiyaar kar liya is magic ka pata mujhe kaal ki di hui kitab se chala tha

Jiske baad mene us duplicate ko bahar bhej diya aur khud JASIEN ke wale costume me aa gaya aur uske baad JASIEN ke madad se ek teliport karne ke liye portal ka nirmaan kiya aur pahuch gaya jaha bali di jane wali thi

Jaise hi me waha pahucha mere dimaag me ladkiyon ke chikhne ki aawaj gunjane lagi jisse mera gussa badhta hi ja raha tha

Me jaise hi us factory me enter karna chaha waise hi un mr. Negative ke chamchon dwara banaye kawach ne mera rasta rok diya

Me :- (gusse me) is kawach ki toh me abhi

Itna bolke mene apne tri netra ko jagrit kiya aur phir me apne tri netra se us kawach par blast karne hj wala tha ki tabhi mere man me DEVIL ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi

Devil :- ye kya kar rahe ho raj is tuchhe se jadu par tri netra ka istemaal aise toh tum is kawach ke sath pure emaarat ko tabah kar doge saath me hi imaarat ke andar ke logon ko bhi

Me :- toh me kya karu

Devil :- tumhe kya karna hai ye me tumhe baad me batata hu pahle ye kaam jaroori hai toh ab aage mujhe samhalne do

Itna bolke Devil ne mere sharir ko apne control me le liya jaiae hi devil ne mere sharir ko apne control me liya waise hi JASIEN ka costume bhi mere sharir se hat gaya aur ab me devil ke costume me tha

Devil :- (khud ko dekhte hue) mera costume change karna hoga kitna purana style ho gaya hai

Uske itne bolte hi uske sarir ke kapde badal gaye ab kuch aise kapde the

Devil :- ab hui na 21vi sadi wali baat ab bahut salon baad me shikar karne me maja aayega

Uske baad devil ne ek jordaar punch us kawach pe maar diya jisse wo kawach turant tut gaya

Wahi dusri taraf kuch der pahle

Jaise hi lakshmi us celebration se nikli woh bhi mere tarah ek khali ghar me chali jaha jate hi uske sharir ke uper achanak se lal rang ki parat si chipakne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte uske sharir pura us parat me chup gaya abhi woh kuch aise dikh rahi thi

Lakshmi :- ye kya hai jo mere sharir pe chipak gaya hai

Pratibimb :- ye mera CARNAGE QUEEN ka costume hai ise kaatne ki taakat kisi bhi dharti ke hathiyaar me nahi hai

Lakshmi :- acha tum carnage queen ho aur tumhare pass kewal 3 hi shaktiya hai ye kaise kya tum itni kamjor ho

Carnage queen :- apni zuban samhalke lakshmi abhi meri aadhi hi urja hai isiliye me apni sari shaktiyon ka istemaal nahi kar sakti nahi toh agar meri carnage army jagrut ho gayi toh is pure dharti ke logon ko me apna gulam bana sakti hoon

Carnage queen ke itna bolte hi lakshmi gahari soch me pad gayi aur lakshmi ko aise sochte dekhkar turant hi carnage queen ko realise ho gaya ki abhi abhi usne kya bol diya hai

C. Queen :- dekho lakshmi sab bhul jao mene jo kuch bhi bola

Lakshmi :- (bich me hi rokte hue) mere pass puri carnage ki army hai aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi use jagrit karne ke liye kya krna hoga ruko me samajh gayi woh mani ka aadha bhag chalo jaldi ab ye duniya humari mutthi me hogi

Itna bolke woh piche ke raste se us ghar ke bahar nikal gayi aur phir ek jordaar jump lagake udne lagi (bilkul jaise supergirl udne ke liye jump maarti hai)

Wahi dusri taraf kuch jyada der pahle

Is waqt usi factory me Mr. Negative aur uske 2no chamche maujood the

Mr. Negative :- sari taiyari ho gayi hai na koi galti nahi honi chahiye samjhe

Chamcha 1 :- aap chinta mat kijiye mene apne asuri sainikon ko bahar tainat kiya hai wohi kisi ko bhi andar aane nahi denge

Chamcha 2 :- woh apna kaam tabhi kar payenge na jab koi mere lagaye hue kawach ko tod paye jo ki na mumkin hai

Mr. Negative :- good ab tum dono jao aur us mani ko leke aao

Phir chamcha 1 waha se nikal gaya aur phir jab aaya toh uske haath me ek box tha jisme woh mani tha jaise hi Mr. Negative ne woh box khola toh uske andar rakhe mani se ek adrushya urja nikalne lagi (isi urja se carnage queen ko rakt chand ki raat ke shuru hone ka pata chala tha abhi bhi isi urja se woh is jagah ka rasta dhoondh pa rahi thi)

Uske baad Mr. Negative woh mani le gaya aur dono chamche bhi uske piche chale gaye

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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Badhiya zabardast
Dekhte h ab yeh Devil kitna kaher barpata h yaha

 

[Naik]

Update 139

Abhi me yani devil us godawn ke bahar hi khade the jaise hi devil ne kawach ko toda tha waise hi pure watawaran me us kawach ke tutne ki aawaj gunj uthi thi jise sun kar godawn ke andar se 5 aadmi daudte hue bahar nikale sabhi ke hath talwar thi jisme se black rays nikal rahi thi jinhe dekh ke devil ke chehre par bhi ek muskaan si aa gayi

Devil :- ohh dekho toh raj humare swagat ke liye khud asuri sainik aa rahe hai chalo ab khek ko aarambh kar dete hai

Itna bolke devil bhi style me chalte hue unke taraf jane laga jaise hi woh unke pass pahucha waise hi un pachon me se jo sab se aage tha usne apni talwar se devil par humla kiya lekin devil ne uske hath ko pakad ke use marod diya phir usike hath se uske pet me talwaar ghusadi ye scene dekh kar baki charon ki speed kam hui lekin woh ruke nahi balki ab 2 logon ne ek saath humla kiya lekin devil ne is baar bhi un dono ke hath ko pakad kar itni tej maroda ki un donon ka hath unke kandhe se alag ho gaya wahi jab unka hath unke kandhe se alag hua toh unki jordaar chikh watawaran me fail gayi toh devil in dono ke sar ko aapas me itni jorse bhida diya ki un dono ka sar andon jaisa fut gaya abhi ye dekh kar baki dono ki himmat toh nahi ho rahi thi aage badhne ki lekin woh the toh asur hi bina maar khaye kaha sunenge wahi hua baki dono ne bhi devil par humla karne ki sochi lekin isse pahle woh humla karte usse pahle hi devil ne unhe gardan se utha liya aur gardan ko itni jor se pakda tha ki unki gardan hi tut gayi aur dono bhi mare gaye wahi jab devil ne godawn ke andar enter kiya toh waha pahle se hi 20 30 asuri sainik maujood the jinhe dekh ke devil ne apna right hand aage kiya toh uske haath me rk black sword aa gayi jis me se aag nikal rahi thi jise dekh kar sare asuri sainion ki hawa hi tight ho gayi uske baad devil ne wahi khade khade apni talwar ko spin kane laga jisse uske talwaar se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi jiski chapet me aakar sare sainik aise hi mare gaye

Wahi kuch der pahle jab devil ne apne punch se kawach ko toda tha toh us kawch ke tutne ki aawaj andar bhi sunayi di thi jise sunkar waha ke sare sainik toh satark ho gaye the lekin ye aawaj Mr. Negative ke kano tak bhi pahuchi thi

Mr. Negative :- suba (chamcha 2) ye bahar kaisi aawaj hai kua ho raha hai bahar

Suba :- aur kya hoga boss jaroor is umir (chamcha 1) ke asuri sainikon me aapas me ladayi shuru ho gayi hogi woh bhi toh iske jaise hi hai bilkul bail buddhi

Abhi umir (chamcha 1) kuch bolta ki tabhi Mr. Negative ne bolna start kiya

Mr. Negative :- suba jao check karo yaad rakhna abhi bus bali prakriya bachi hai aur usme mujhe koi dikkat nahi chahiye aur umir tum bali ke liye ek ek karke ladkiyon ko lao

Suba :- ji boss

Itna bolke woh bahar chala gaya jaise hi woh bahar aaya toh usne devil ki taakat dekh uske kadam wahi ruk gaye aur jab devil ne sare asur sainikon ko maarne ke baad jab apni sword ko swing karna band kiya toh uski nazar waha khade suba pe padi aur jab usne suba ko dekha toh devil ke face par shaitaani muskaan aa gayi jise dekh suba turant hi andar ki aur bhag gaya aur usko aise bhaagte dekh devil bhi uske pche jane laga

Suba andar aake sidha mr. Negative ke pass chala gaya

Suba :- boss humare uper humla hua hai jaroor ye wahi hoga jiske pass us carnage queen ke shaktiyon ka aadha hissa hai jisse uske pass ye taakate aa gayi hai

Abhi suba bol hi raha tha ki tabhi me bhi waha pahuch jata hoon aur jab meri nazar Mr. Negative ke chehre par padi toh mujhe phir se wahi sapne yaad aa gaye jaha ye ladkiyon ki bali chadha raha tha use dekhte hi me debil se bolta hu

Me :- devil ab meri baari hai in teenon ko toh me hi marunga

Devil :- lekin abhi toh mujhe maja aane laga tha

Lekin me bina kuch sune turant apne sharir ko kabu kar leta hu aur jaise mere sharir pe phir se mera kabu ho jata hai toh JASIEN ka costume bhi turant hi mere sarir pe aa jata hai mujhe aise roop badalte dekh woh teeno bhi shock rah jate hai

JASIEN (mere man me) :- aaka ab baari hai aap mere wepons ko use karo

Me :- tumhare konse wepons

JASIEN :- jis dragon ko aapne pakada hai woh ek tarike ka wepons ka pura stock hai jo ki dragon ke roop me hai

Phir JASIEN mujhe un hathiyaaron ke baare me badata hai ye sab hone ke liye kewal kuch seconds ka hi samay laga tha

Me :- Aaj inhe me kisi hathiyaar se nahi balki apne haathon se maarna chahunga

JASIEN :- jo hukum mere aaka

Uske baad me dheere dheere chalte hue un teenon ke pass jane lagta hoon jise dekh kar Mr. Negative ne apne dono chamchon ko aage kar diya

Sabse pehla humla mujh par suba ne kiya uski talwar se usne meri gardan kaatne ki koshis ki lekin mene uska hath pakad ke uske waar ko wahi rok diya aur uske pet me laat maar di jisse woh dur jake gir gaya

Wahi suba ke girte hi umir ne bhi mere par apne talwar se humla kiya lekin uska waar mere tak pahuch pata usse pahle hi mene apne kick se uske hath par attack kiya jisse uski talwaar jamin par gir gayi aur phir mene uske sine par ek puch maar diya jisse wo bhi thodi door jake gir gaya

Wahi mere se maar khane ke baad suba sidha Mr. Negative ke pass chala gaya

Suba :- aaka lagta hai iske pass hi shakti mani ka aadha tukda hai isiliye ye itna shaktishali hai hume yaha se jana hoga kyunki agar isne aadhe tukde ko bhi pa liya toh ise rokna humare liye na mumkin ho jayega abhi hume bhaagna hoga baad me apni puri shakti se humla karenge hum

Itna bolke suba ne ek portal ko create kar diya jise dekh suba aur Mr. Negative dono uske andar chale gaye aur phir umir bhi uske andar jane laga lekin woh ja pata usse pahle hi mene use pakad kar usi pathar pe lita diya aur mere andar ka sara gussa me use maar ke nikalne laga

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Aaj ke liye itna hi
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Badhiya zabardast
Lekin kaam poora nahi huwa kia mr.negativ waha se nikal payega ya Raj use aaj hi khatam ker payega dekhte h kia hota ha aage
Shaandar update

 

[krish1152]

Nice update

 

[Rusev]

Update 139

Abhi me yani devil us godawn ke bahar hi khade the jaise hi devil ne kawach ko toda tha waise hi pure watawaran me us kawach ke tutne ki aawaj gunj uthi thi jise sun kar godawn ke andar se 5 aadmi daudte hue bahar nikale sabhi ke hath talwar thi jisme se black rays nikal rahi thi jinhe dekh ke devil ke chehre par bhi ek muskaan si aa gayi

Devil :- ohh dekho toh raj humare swagat ke liye khud asuri sainik aa rahe hai chalo ab khek ko aarambh kar dete hai

Itna bolke devil bhi style me chalte hue unke taraf jane laga jaise hi woh unke pass pahucha waise hi un pachon me se jo sab se aage tha usne apni talwar se devil par humla kiya lekin devil ne uske hath ko pakad ke use marod diya phir usike hath se uske pet me talwaar ghusadi ye scene dekh kar baki charon ki speed kam hui lekin woh ruke nahi balki ab 2 logon ne ek saath humla kiya lekin devil ne is baar bhi un dono ke hath ko pakad kar itni tej maroda ki un donon ka hath unke kandhe se alag ho gaya wahi jab unka hath unke kandhe se alag hua toh unki jordaar chikh watawaran me fail gayi toh devil in dono ke sar ko aapas me itni jorse bhida diya ki un dono ka sar andon jaisa fut gaya abhi ye dekh kar baki dono ki himmat toh nahi ho rahi thi aage badhne ki lekin woh the toh asur hi bina maar khaye kaha sunenge wahi hua baki dono ne bhi devil par humla karne ki sochi lekin isse pahle woh humla karte usse pahle hi devil ne unhe gardan se utha liya aur gardan ko itni jor se pakda tha ki unki gardan hi tut gayi aur dono bhi mare gaye wahi jab devil ne godawn ke andar enter kiya toh waha pahle se hi 20 30 asuri sainik maujood the jinhe dekh ke devil ne apna right hand aage kiya toh uske haath me rk black sword aa gayi jis me se aag nikal rahi thi jise dekh kar sare asuri sainion ki hawa hi tight ho gayi uske baad devil ne wahi khade khade apni talwar ko spin kane laga jisse uske talwaar se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi jiski chapet me aakar sare sainik aise hi mare gaye

Wahi kuch der pahle jab devil ne apne punch se kawach ko toda tha toh us kawch ke tutne ki aawaj andar bhi sunayi di thi jise sunkar waha ke sare sainik toh satark ho gaye the lekin ye aawaj Mr. Negative ke kano tak bhi pahuchi thi

Mr. Negative :- suba (chamcha 2) ye bahar kaisi aawaj hai kua ho raha hai bahar

Suba :- aur kya hoga boss jaroor is umir (chamcha 1) ke asuri sainikon me aapas me ladayi shuru ho gayi hogi woh bhi toh iske jaise hi hai bilkul bail buddhi

Abhi umir (chamcha 1) kuch bolta ki tabhi Mr. Negative ne bolna start kiya

Mr. Negative :- suba jao check karo yaad rakhna abhi bus bali prakriya bachi hai aur usme mujhe koi dikkat nahi chahiye aur umir tum bali ke liye ek ek karke ladkiyon ko lao

Suba :- ji boss

Itna bolke woh bahar chala gaya jaise hi woh bahar aaya toh usne devil ki taakat dekh uske kadam wahi ruk gaye aur jab devil ne sare asur sainikon ko maarne ke baad jab apni sword ko swing karna band kiya toh uski nazar waha khade suba pe padi aur jab usne suba ko dekha toh devil ke face par shaitaani muskaan aa gayi jise dekh suba turant hi andar ki aur bhag gaya aur usko aise bhaagte dekh devil bhi uske pche jane laga

Suba andar aake sidha mr. Negative ke pass chala gaya

Suba :- boss humare uper humla hua hai jaroor ye wahi hoga jiske pass us carnage queen ke shaktiyon ka aadha hissa hai jisse uske pass ye taakate aa gayi hai

Abhi suba bol hi raha tha ki tabhi me bhi waha pahuch jata hoon aur jab meri nazar Mr. Negative ke chehre par padi toh mujhe phir se wahi sapne yaad aa gaye jaha ye ladkiyon ki bali chadha raha tha use dekhte hi me debil se bolta hu

Me :- devil ab meri baari hai in teenon ko toh me hi marunga

Devil :- lekin abhi toh mujhe maja aane laga tha

Lekin me bina kuch sune turant apne sharir ko kabu kar leta hu aur jaise mere sharir pe phir se mera kabu ho jata hai toh JASIEN ka costume bhi turant hi mere sarir pe aa jata hai mujhe aise roop badalte dekh woh teeno bhi shock rah jate hai

JASIEN (mere man me) :- aaka ab baari hai aap mere wepons ko use karo

Me :- tumhare konse wepons

JASIEN :- jis dragon ko aapne pakada hai woh ek tarike ka wepons ka pura stock hai jo ki dragon ke roop me hai

Phir JASIEN mujhe un hathiyaaron ke baare me badata hai ye sab hone ke liye kewal kuch seconds ka hi samay laga tha

Me :- Aaj inhe me kisi hathiyaar se nahi balki apne haathon se maarna chahunga

JASIEN :- jo hukum mere aaka

Uske baad me dheere dheere chalte hue un teenon ke pass jane lagta hoon jise dekh kar Mr. Negative ne apne dono chamchon ko aage kar diya

Sabse pehla humla mujh par suba ne kiya uski talwar se usne meri gardan kaatne ki koshis ki lekin mene uska hath pakad ke uske waar ko wahi rok diya aur uske pet me laat maar di jisse woh dur jake gir gaya

Wahi suba ke girte hi umir ne bhi mere par apne talwar se humla kiya lekin uska waar mere tak pahuch pata usse pahle hi mene apne kick se uske hath par attack kiya jisse uski talwaar jamin par gir gayi aur phir mene uske sine par ek puch maar diya jisse wo bhi thodi door jake gir gaya

Wahi mere se maar khane ke baad suba sidha Mr. Negative ke pass chala gaya

Suba :- aaka lagta hai iske pass hi shakti mani ka aadha tukda hai isiliye ye itna shaktishali hai hume yaha se jana hoga kyunki agar isne aadhe tukde ko bhi pa liya toh ise rokna humare liye na mumkin ho jayega abhi hume bhaagna hoga baad me apni puri shakti se humla karenge hum

Itna bolke suba ne ek portal ko create kar diya jise dekh suba aur Mr. Negative dono uske andar chale gaye aur phir umir bhi uske andar jane laga lekin woh ja pata usse pahle hi mene use pakad kar usi pathar pe lita diya aur mere andar ka sara gussa me use maar ke nikalne laga

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Nice update bro

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[Smith_15]

Update 140

 

[parkas]

Update 139

Abhi me yani devil us godawn ke bahar hi khade the jaise hi devil ne kawach ko toda tha waise hi pure watawaran me us kawach ke tutne ki aawaj gunj uthi thi jise sun kar godawn ke andar se 5 aadmi daudte hue bahar nikale sabhi ke hath talwar thi jisme se black rays nikal rahi thi jinhe dekh ke devil ke chehre par bhi ek muskaan si aa gayi

Devil :- ohh dekho toh raj humare swagat ke liye khud asuri sainik aa rahe hai chalo ab khek ko aarambh kar dete hai

Itna bolke devil bhi style me chalte hue unke taraf jane laga jaise hi woh unke pass pahucha waise hi un pachon me se jo sab se aage tha usne apni talwar se devil par humla kiya lekin devil ne uske hath ko pakad ke use marod diya phir usike hath se uske pet me talwaar ghusadi ye scene dekh kar baki charon ki speed kam hui lekin woh ruke nahi balki ab 2 logon ne ek saath humla kiya lekin devil ne is baar bhi un dono ke hath ko pakad kar itni tej maroda ki un donon ka hath unke kandhe se alag ho gaya wahi jab unka hath unke kandhe se alag hua toh unki jordaar chikh watawaran me fail gayi toh devil in dono ke sar ko aapas me itni jorse bhida diya ki un dono ka sar andon jaisa fut gaya abhi ye dekh kar baki dono ki himmat toh nahi ho rahi thi aage badhne ki lekin woh the toh asur hi bina maar khaye kaha sunenge wahi hua baki dono ne bhi devil par humla karne ki sochi lekin isse pahle woh humla karte usse pahle hi devil ne unhe gardan se utha liya aur gardan ko itni jor se pakda tha ki unki gardan hi tut gayi aur dono bhi mare gaye wahi jab devil ne godawn ke andar enter kiya toh waha pahle se hi 20 30 asuri sainik maujood the jinhe dekh ke devil ne apna right hand aage kiya toh uske haath me rk black sword aa gayi jis me se aag nikal rahi thi jise dekh kar sare asuri sainion ki hawa hi tight ho gayi uske baad devil ne wahi khade khade apni talwar ko spin kane laga jisse uske talwaar se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi jiski chapet me aakar sare sainik aise hi mare gaye

Wahi kuch der pahle jab devil ne apne punch se kawach ko toda tha toh us kawch ke tutne ki aawaj andar bhi sunayi di thi jise sunkar waha ke sare sainik toh satark ho gaye the lekin ye aawaj Mr. Negative ke kano tak bhi pahuchi thi

Mr. Negative :- suba (chamcha 2) ye bahar kaisi aawaj hai kua ho raha hai bahar

Suba :- aur kya hoga boss jaroor is umir (chamcha 1) ke asuri sainikon me aapas me ladayi shuru ho gayi hogi woh bhi toh iske jaise hi hai bilkul bail buddhi

Abhi umir (chamcha 1) kuch bolta ki tabhi Mr. Negative ne bolna start kiya

Mr. Negative :- suba jao check karo yaad rakhna abhi bus bali prakriya bachi hai aur usme mujhe koi dikkat nahi chahiye aur umir tum bali ke liye ek ek karke ladkiyon ko lao

Suba :- ji boss

Itna bolke woh bahar chala gaya jaise hi woh bahar aaya toh usne devil ki taakat dekh uske kadam wahi ruk gaye aur jab devil ne sare asur sainikon ko maarne ke baad jab apni sword ko swing karna band kiya toh uski nazar waha khade suba pe padi aur jab usne suba ko dekha toh devil ke face par shaitaani muskaan aa gayi jise dekh suba turant hi andar ki aur bhag gaya aur usko aise bhaagte dekh devil bhi uske pche jane laga

Suba andar aake sidha mr. Negative ke pass chala gaya

Suba :- boss humare uper humla hua hai jaroor ye wahi hoga jiske pass us carnage queen ke shaktiyon ka aadha hissa hai jisse uske pass ye taakate aa gayi hai

Abhi suba bol hi raha tha ki tabhi me bhi waha pahuch jata hoon aur jab meri nazar Mr. Negative ke chehre par padi toh mujhe phir se wahi sapne yaad aa gaye jaha ye ladkiyon ki bali chadha raha tha use dekhte hi me debil se bolta hu

Me :- devil ab meri baari hai in teenon ko toh me hi marunga

Devil :- lekin abhi toh mujhe maja aane laga tha

Lekin me bina kuch sune turant apne sharir ko kabu kar leta hu aur jaise mere sharir pe phir se mera kabu ho jata hai toh JASIEN ka costume bhi turant hi mere sarir pe aa jata hai mujhe aise roop badalte dekh woh teeno bhi shock rah jate hai

JASIEN (mere man me) :- aaka ab baari hai aap mere wepons ko use karo

Me :- tumhare konse wepons

JASIEN :- jis dragon ko aapne pakada hai woh ek tarike ka wepons ka pura stock hai jo ki dragon ke roop me hai

Phir JASIEN mujhe un hathiyaaron ke baare me badata hai ye sab hone ke liye kewal kuch seconds ka hi samay laga tha

Me :- Aaj inhe me kisi hathiyaar se nahi balki apne haathon se maarna chahunga

JASIEN :- jo hukum mere aaka

Uske baad me dheere dheere chalte hue un teenon ke pass jane lagta hoon jise dekh kar Mr. Negative ne apne dono chamchon ko aage kar diya

Sabse pehla humla mujh par suba ne kiya uski talwar se usne meri gardan kaatne ki koshis ki lekin mene uska hath pakad ke uske waar ko wahi rok diya aur uske pet me laat maar di jisse woh dur jake gir gaya

Wahi suba ke girte hi umir ne bhi mere par apne talwar se humla kiya lekin uska waar mere tak pahuch pata usse pahle hi mene apne kick se uske hath par attack kiya jisse uski talwaar jamin par gir gayi aur phir mene uske sine par ek puch maar diya jisse wo bhi thodi door jake gir gaya

Wahi mere se maar khane ke baad suba sidha Mr. Negative ke pass chala gaya

Suba :- aaka lagta hai iske pass hi shakti mani ka aadha tukda hai isiliye ye itna shaktishali hai hume yaha se jana hoga kyunki agar isne aadhe tukde ko bhi pa liya toh ise rokna humare liye na mumkin ho jayega abhi hume bhaagna hoga baad me apni puri shakti se humla karenge hum

Itna bolke suba ne ek portal ko create kar diya jise dekh suba aur Mr. Negative dono uske andar chale gaye aur phir umir bhi uske andar jane laga lekin woh ja pata usse pahle hi mene use pakad kar usi pathar pe lita diya aur mere andar ka sara gussa me use maar ke nikalne laga

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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai VAJRADHIKARI bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....

 

[Tiger 786]

Update 73
ab mene bhi ab jaise than liya tha ki yaha se jald se jald nikal ke hi rahunga isliye ab me chate hue hi bina ruke nishani banane laga lekin ye itna bhi aasan nahi tha
Me jab bhi chalte hue nishani banane ki try karta meri speed slow ho jati aur mujhe piche se koi dhakka de deta ab chalte hue mera balance nahi ban pa raha tha jisse me jamin par gir jata abhi me uth hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe ek idea aaya aur me waise hi jamin par lait kar aage badhne laga lekin me abhi kuch hi aage gaya tha ki tabhi mujhe aisa laga ki kisine koi bhari cheej mere pich ke uper laad di hai jisse ab na me aage badh pa raha tha aur na hi mera dimag kaam kar raha tha jisse me thak haar kar phir khada ho gaya aur jab khada hoke me apni thakan ko control kar hi raha tha ki tabhi phir se kisi ne mujhe dhakka de diya jisse me gira toh nahi lekin me ab jamin par baith gaya tha ab jab me jamin par baith gaya toh na ab koi dhakka lag raha tha na kisi tarah ka bhar mahsoos ho raha tha jisse me ab waise hi baithe baithe aaram karne laga aur apni thakan utarne laga jab mujhe thodi rahat mehsoos hone lagi toh me apne aas pass ke mahol ko samajhne laga aur aage ki planning karne laga jab mujhe kuch bhi pata nahi chala toh me waise hi baithe hue dhyan lagane laga jisse ab mera dimag bhi shant ho raha tha ki tabhi mere kano me guide ki aawaj aane lagi aur aakhon ke saamne kuch din pahle ka scene aa gaya
Guide (in memory) :- badi badi samasyaon ki taraf dekhne se pahle choti adchanon ke baare me wichar karo kyunki agar tum choti choti adchanon me phase rahoge toh kabhi badi samasya ka samadhan nahi dhundh paoge
Jab mujhe guide ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi toh me bhi samajh gaya ki ab mujhe kya karna hai
sabse pahle maine sare baton ke baare me sochna shuru kia phir un sab ko priority ke hisab me tolne laga jaise mera maksad tha is bhu bhulaiya se bahar nikalna jiske liye mujhe uska sahi rasta dhundhna hoga jiske liye mujhe har diwal pe ek sign banana tha ki me usi raste ka phir se use na karu lekin iske liye mujhe us force ka pata lagana tha ki jisse woh mujhe baar baar gira na sake
Ab sara plan mere mind me taiyar tha ab me dhyan laga ke sabse pahle mere aas pass hone wale sare movements ko sense karne laga jisse mujhe mere sharir ke aas pass kuch movements mahsoos hone lagi jisse mahsoos karke mere chahre par bhi ab muskaan aa gayi thi
Phir me waise hi aakhe band karke khada ho gaya aur jaise hi mene us movement ko phir se sense kiya mene usi directon me apni puri taakat ke saath punch maar diya aur jab mene aakhe kholi toh mere saamne koi nahi tha balki jamin par kuch pathar ke tukde pade hue the matlab mujhe is pathar ka use karke baar baar dhakka diye ja rahe the jab meri nazar mere hath par gayi toh mere hath par lal rang ki mitti lagi hui thi jo shayad usi pathar ki thi lekin ab meri ek adchan dorr ho gayi thi ab mujhe yaha se bahar nikalne par focus karna tha toh mene unhi pathar ke tukdon me se ek piece uthake waha ki diwaron par nishani bana di aur aage ki taraf chalne laga aise ki kuch der chalne ke baad mujhe bahar jane ka rasta bhi mil gaya jisse mujhe bahut khushi hui lekin woh jyada der tiki nahi kyunki me bhul bhulaiya se toh bahar aa gaya tha lekin ye chunouti khatam nahi hui thi
Abhi mere saamne ek rasta tha jo kisi tunnel ki tarah bana hua tha jab mene woh rasta dekha toh uspr badhne laga kyunki waha aur koi dusra rasta nahi tha abhi mene chalte hue aadha rasta hi cross kia tha ki tabhi mere samne se ek badi chattan aake mujhse takrayi jiske force se me phir se us tunnel ke starting me aa gaya tha
Me :- (man me) mujhe aur tez hona hoga
Phir me tezi se us tunnel me daudne laga jiske wajah se mene aadha rasta toh bina kisi dikkat ke cross kar liya tha lekin phir se wahi hua us badi chattan ne mujhe starting me bhej diya
Aise hi 10 se 15 try karne ke baad bhi me success nahi hua jabki me har baar apni speed badhata ja raha tha mene ek do baar us chattan ko todne ka bhi try kiya lekin kuch nahi hua balki me jitni force se punch maarta woh uske dugane force se mujhe phir se starting me pheck deta ab mere kapde jagah jagah se phat gaye the aur sharir ke kuch kuch hisson se abhi khoon bhi bahane laga tha isiliye ab mene kuch der aaram karne ka faisla liya aur ab tak ke mere jitne bhi try kiye the unke baare me sochne laga tabhi mere dimag me ek idea aaya or me phir se us tunnel ke andar jane laga lekin me is baar na bhag raha tha na hi kuch soch raha tha balki ab me bas chale ja raha tha aise chalte hue me kuch dur hi pahucha tha toh mujhe woh chattan dikhayi dene lagi use dekh ke me jaha tha wahi ruk gaya aur us chattan ke mere karib aane ka intezaar karne laga jaise hi woh chattan mere karib aayi me turanr side ho gaya jisse woh chattan bina mujhe chue piche ki aur nikal gayi uske jate hi mene bhi phir se chalna shuru kar diya
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Awesome update

 

[Tiger 786]

Update 74
Ab tak aapne dekha
chalte hue me kuch dur hi pahucha tha toh mujhe woh chattan dikhayi dene lagi use dekh ke me jaha tha wahi ruk gaya aur us chattan ke mere karib aane ka intezaar karne laga jaise hi woh chattan mere karib aayi me turanr side ho gaya jisse woh chattan bina mujhe chue piche ki aur nikal gayi uske jate hi mene bhi phir se chalna shuru kar diya
Ab aage
aise hi kuch der aur chalne ke baad ab ek saath 2 chattane mere taraf aane lagi thi jinko aur aate dekh me phir se dewar se sat kar khada ho gaya jisse woh chattane mujhe sirf chukar nikal gayi lekin is baar inke chune se mujhe asahniya pida ka anubhav hua jiske wajah se abhi me chal bhi nahi pa raha tha chalna toh door ki baat mere me ab khade rahne ki bhi taakat nahi thi jiski wajah se me wahi gir gaya aur dard se tadapne laga tabhi meri nazar saamne se aa rahe ab tak ke sabse bade chattan par padi jiska size hi itna bada tha ki woh lag bhag pure tunnel ko cover karke chal raha tha jab woh mere taraf aa raha tha toh me jamin me ho rahe kampan ko bhi me mahsoos kar pa raha tha jisse ye toh tay tha abhi tak jo bhi hua woh bas trailer tha abhi aur bhi badi chunnautiya aani baki hai jinke liye me taiyar nahi hu mujhe abhi aur training ki jarurat hai
Yahi sochte hue mere muh se woh nikal gaya jo shayad nahi nikalna chahiye tha
Me :- me haar maanta hu mujhe abhi aur abhyas ki jarurat hai mujhse ab aur nahi hoga
Mere ye bolte hi woh chattan jo mere taraf badh rahi thi woh jaha thi wahi par woh tut gayi aur uske woh chote chote tukde aake mere uper girne lage jisse mujhe aur bhi kai jagah choti moti chote aayi lekin jab woh chattan puri tarah tut gayi toh bahar jane ka rasta bhi khul gaya
Phir me kaise taise apne dard par kabu pa kar us raste se bahar nikal gaya aur ab mere saamne tha bahar jane ka darwaja jiske dusre aur me apne room ko dekh sakta tha jaise hi me us raste se bahar naikalne laga waise hi mere nazar samne baithe ek 3 muh wala sher par gayi jise dekh ke hi meri aage badhne ki himmat hi nahi hui isiliye me jaha tha wahi baith gaya aur us sher ke jane ki rah dekhne laga abhi itna chalke aur itni chote khane ke baad mere me himmat nahi thi ki me phir se kisi se bhi ladai karu ya ab kuch aur karu isiliye me wahi baith gaya aur dhyan lagane laga kyunki mujhe bhi ab thodi der relaxing ki jarurat thi toh me dhyan laga ke relax hi kar raha tha ki tabhi mere samne jo sher baitha tha uski jordaar darkali se mera dhyan tut gaya jab mene uske aur dekha toh woh wahi aaram se laita tha toh me phir se dhyan lagane laga lekin is baar kisi aadmi ki aawaj mujhe aane lagi
Aawaj :- aa gaya rotdu bacha
Jab ye aawaj mere kano me padi toh mera dhyan phir se tut gaya lekin jab mene aas pass dekha toh waha koi bhi nahi tha me abhi yaha waha dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe phir se us aadmi ki aawaj sunayi di
Aawaj :- dekho is bache ko kaise murkhon ki taraf yaha waha dekh raha hai
Jab mene dhyan se dekha toh wahi 3 muh wale sher ka ek sar ye bol raha tha jise dekh aur sun ke toh mere aaschrya se aakhe hi phati ki phati rah gayi me abhi use dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi us sher ke 2 sar ne bhi bolna shuru kia
Head 2 :- dekho toh is rotdu ko kaise hume ghur raha hai jaise pahli baar kisi sher ko bolte hue dekh raha hai
Head1 :- dekho toh thodi der pahle kaise ro raha tha (meri nakal karte hue) me haar maanta hu mujhe abhi aur abhyas ki jarurat hai mujhse ab aur nahi hoga
Aise hi dheere dheere us sher ke 3no sar mera majak udane lage jisse mujhe bhi ab gussa aane laga tha lekin mene apne gusse ko jaise taise karke kabu kiya aur dhyan lagane laga mujhe dhyan lagata dekh woh aur bhi jyada majak udane lage jisse muhe gussa toh bahut aa raha tha lekin maine jaise taise apne gusse par control karke dhyan lagane laga lekin jab me dhyan lagane laga toh woh 3no sar ek saath bahut jor se chillane lage jisse mera dhyan baar baar bhang ho raha tha jis wajah se ab mera gussa apne charam par tha lekin phir bhi me apne gusse ko kabu karke phir se dhyan lagane laga lekin woh abhi bhi chilla rahe the lekin maine is baar apna dhyan bhang nahi hone diya jisse mujhe dhyan lagane me safalta bhi prapt ho gayi ab us sher ki aawaj aana bhi band ho gayi thi aur me shanti se dhyan laga pa raha tha jisse jald hi mujhe apne sharir me ek nayi urja ka sanchar hote hue mahsoos hone laga jisse mere sare ghav bhar gaye aur thakan bhi mit gayi jab mujhe sharir me sancharit urja ka aabahs hone laga toh ab me bhi dhyan se uth gaya jab mene apna dhyan toda toh saamne ka nazara dekhke toh mere hosh hi ud gaye me abhi apne kamre me soya hua tha aur didi mere pass hi mujhse lipat ke so rahi thi ye dekhke toh mere dimag ne hi kaam karna band kar diya ki mene jo itni mehanat ki itna dard saha woh sab jhut tha kewal mere man ka waham tha

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