Incest ARJUN : A WARRIOR

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CHAPTER – 1

{THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN}


UPDATE – 2

NEXT DAY :

CITY : MUMBAI

LOCATION : THAKUR VILLA

Jaante hi hain aap iss ghar ko to, filhaal iss ghar ke baahar khada tha Main. Waise to Zyadatar mera chehra sapaat aur aankhen sooni si hi raha karti hain par iss waqt ek krodh ki jawaala meri aankhon mein saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi. Mere haath mein do bags the, jinmein of course mera samaan tha. Tabhi gate ke paas khade ek guard ki nazar mujhpar padi aur fir uski aankhen failti chali gayi. Wo andar ki taraf bhaaga ek hi pankti ko laghbhag chillate huye – “Maalik... Maalik... Arjun Baba aa gaye!!”

Maine apne dimaag mein panap rahe anekon vichaaron ko jhatka aur andar ki taraf badh gaya. Main abhi ghar ki chaukhat par pahuncha hi tha ke andar ki taraf se laghbhag bhaagte huye ek buzurg vyakti aaye. Mujhe dekhkar unki aankhen bheegti chali gayi, wo kitne khush the iska andaza main laga paa raha tha. Maine apne bags ko chhoda aur unke paaon chhoo liye. Unhone mujhe uthaya aur apne gale se laga liya. Wo meri peeth par thapthapate huye aansoon baha rahe the, wahin unke peechhe hi kuchh aur shakhs bhi khade the. Jahaan unmein se do ko dekh kar mere chehre par halki khushi aayi wahin baaki dono ko dekh kar ek hi jhatke mein wo khushi kafoor ho gayi.

Khair, un buzurg vyakti joki mere Dadaji the, unhone kaafi derr mujhe gale lagaye rakhe aur jab wo alag huye to unke chehre par saare jahaan ki khushi thi. Unhone mere sar par haath fera aur,

DADAJI : Bahut waqt laga diya tune aane mein, bahut intezaar karwaya hai tune iss boodhe ko.

Fir, main unke peechhe ki taraf badha aur wahaan khade aadmi joki mere Chacha the unke paaon chhuye, wo bhi behadh garmjoshi se mujhse mile aur unke baad main Chachi se mila. Unhone sadaiv hi mujhe apne khud ke bete jaisa hi maana tha. To nischit hi unka behadh zyada emotional ho jaana laazmi tha. Khair, jab main in sabse mil liya to wahaan khade ek aur aadmi – aurat joki mere Maa – Baap the meri taraf badhne ko huye. Par tabhi maine apna haath aage kar diya, mere Jabde bhinche huye the aur aankhon mein ek tapish thi jisse un dono ne mehsoos kar liya tha. Wo ruk gaye aur laachari bhari nazron se mujhe dekhne lage. Abhi main kuchh aur sochta ke tabhi mujhe peechhe se ek aawaz aayi – “BHAIYAAAA...” jisse sunkar main palta.

Wahaan seedhiyon ke nazdeek khada tha ek ladka aur do ladkiyaan jinme se ek ladki (Anvita) par meri aankhen atak gayi thi. Wo bhi apalak mujhe hi nihaare jaa rahi thi. Ek chumbakiya taakat thi uski aankhon mein jo main unke alawa kahin aur dekh hi nahi paa raha tha. Wo chehra jiss se main sabse adhik prem karta tha, kitni mayoosi... Kitna gam, kitni peeda thi uske uss haseen rukhsaar par. Tabhi uske saath mein khadi ladki aur ladka (Sneha – Dhruv) meri aur bhaage aur mere gale lag gaye. Un dono ki aankhon mein bhi aansoon the, kuchh derr baad jab wo alag huye to maine dono ke sar par haath fera. Par iss dauraan meri nazren bas ussi chehre par hi atki huyi thi.

Wo dono bhi jaise mere mann ki baat samajh gaye the aur muskurate huye side hatt gaye. Main dheeme kadmon se uss ladki ki taraf badha aur uske saamne jaakar khada ho gaya. Maine apne kaanpte haath ko uthaya aur jaise hi uske chehre par sparsh karne waala tha wo palatkar seedhiyon se oopar ki taraf bhaag gayi. Main thaga sa khada usse jaate dekhta raha aur aakhir kaar kitne hi waqt baad meri aankhon se bhi neer chhalak hi gaya. Mujhe bahut ajeeb si anubhuti ho rahi thi uske jaane se, tabhi Sneha chalti huyi mere paas aayi aur mere kandhe par haath rakhkar boli,

SNEHA : Bhaiya, wo bahut zyada dard mein hai. Aapke jaane ke baad usne khudko ek shell mein band kar liya hai, yahaan tak ki kisi se baat tak nahi karti wo. Par maine kayi baar usse aapki photo se baatein karte dekha hai. Aap hi usse pehle jaisa bana sakte hain ab...

Main bina uski poori baat sune oopar ki taraf chal diya. Hamesha se uska aur mera kamra ek hi tha. Aur main abhi ussi kamre ke baahar khada tha. Baar – baar main apna haath utha raha tha par darwaaze tak pahunchte hi jaise uski shakti apna dum tod deti. Tabhi maine ek lambi saans kheenchi aur darwaaze ko halka sa jhatka de diya, agle hi pal wo khulta chala gaya. Wo kamra, wo bilkul waisa hi tha jaisa main usse chhod gaya tha bas ek cheez alag thi aur wo thi meri tasveeren... Kamre ki har deewar par bas meri hi tasveeren thi. Baaki uss kamre ka rang, arrangement ya fir sajaawat sab kuchh waisa hi tha. Yahaan tak ki wo sugandh jo ab tak mujhmein basi thi, wo bhi jeevant thi uss kamre mein.

Maine chaaron taraf nazar ghumaayi par wo kahin nahi thi lekin sisakne ki aawaz spasht sunaayi de rahi thi. Main dheeme kadmon se aage badha to paaya ke wo bistar ke doosri taraf neeche baithi aur ghutnon mein apna munh dabaaye ro rahi thi. Usse yun dekh kar mera kaleja kaanp gaya.Main uske nazdeek gaya aur ghutnon par baith gaya.

Maine apne kaanpte haathon se uska chehra uthana chaaha aur kuchh der baad kaamyab hua. Derr isliye kyonki usne virodh to poora kiya ke wo chehra chhippaye rakhe par kaamyab naa huyi. Wo lagaatar roye jaa rahi thi par meri taraf ek nazar bhi nahi daali.

MAIN : S... Sw... Sweet...

Main abhi wo shabd poora bhi nahi kar paaya tha ke usne waapis se apna sar jhatakte huye usse ghutnon mein daba liya aur bolo,

ANVI : Jaaiye, chale jaaiye... Unnnhh... Kyonn aaye ho ab... Unnhhh... Itne saal to yaad nahi aaya ke main bhi iss duniya mein hoon... Unhhh...

Mujhe aese laga maano ke meri saansein rukne lagi hon. Uske wo shabd pighle huye lohe ke samaan lage mujhe apne kaanon mein. Main wahaan ruk nahi paa raha tha, par fir bhi maine uske haathon ko thaama aur,

MAIN : Please... Please aesa mat bolo... Main sirf tere liye lauta hoon, please aesa mat kar, mujhe...

Aage ke shabd jaise halak mein hi reh gaye. Zubaan bhi daga kar chuki thi. Main ladkhadate kadmon se utha aur mud gaya. Ab tak meri aankhen bhi paani se tar ho chuki thi. Par jaise hi main aage badhne ko hua peechhe se usne meri ungli thaam li. Ye ehsaas... Iss ehsaas se main parichit tha, poori tarah se parichit tha. Wo jab bhi bachpan mein mujhe apne paas rokna chahti yunhi meri ungli thaam liya karti.

Aaj fir jaise wo wahi chhoti si bachi ban gayi thi. Main palta aur uski taraf dekha to paaya ke wo mujhe hi tak rahi thi. Ek guhaar thi, ek iltija thi uski aankhon mein jo mujhe keh rahi thi ke ab mat jaana... Ab kabhi mat jaana. Main ek baar firse neeche baith gaya aur uske chehre ko apne haathon mein thaam liya. Main bina kuchh bole ek tak usse hi dekhe jaa raha tha. Kuchh palon baad main uske chehre par jhuka aur uski dono aankhon par baari – baari se kiss kar di.

Bas shayad uske emotions trigger ho gaye aur wo ek jhatke mein mujhse lipat gayi aur foot – foot kar rone lagi. Main samajh raha tha ke wo kya feel kar rahi hogi aur isiliye maine usse rone diya aur uske sar par haath ferne laga. Naa jaane kab tak wo roti aur rahi aur jab shaant huyi to mujhse alag hokar mere chehre par kisses ki bauchhar kar di. Uska bartaav saaf dikha raha tha uska intezaar, uski tadap aur uski chahat.

Aur fir dobara mujhse lipat gayi aur mere seene par apne foolon se haathon se maarne lagi. Uski iss nadaani par mujhe rote huye bhi hansi aa gayi. Aaj kitne hi waqt baad main dil se muskuraya tha.Usne jab meri hansi ki aawaz suni to meri taraf yun dekhne lagi jaise wo Police mein ho aur main gunahgaar. Haalanki, gunahgaar to tha main, uska gunahgaar tha main jo mujhse sabse adhik prem karti thi. Tabhi wo hua jo maine kabhi socha naa tha, main jaise hi usse dobara gale lagaane ko hua,

“CHATTAAAAKKK...CHATTAAAAKKK...CHATTAAAAKKK...”

Ek ke baad ek teen thappad maare usne mere gaal par aur idhar main awaak sa munh faade usse dekhne laga. Agle hi pal usne dono haathon se meri shirt ka collar pakda aur apne chehre ki taraf mujhe kheench liya. Wo meri aankhon mein jhaankte huye boli,

ANVI : How dare you!! Aapki himmat kaise huyi mujhe akela chhodkar jaane ki. Jab aap jaante ho ke main aapke bina nahi reh sakti, fir kyon gaye mujhe chhodkar aur ab mann kiya to waapis aa gaye. Meri feelings, mere emotions ki koyi parwaah hi nahi hai. Main aapse kabhi baat nahi karungi... Kabhi nahi!!

Aur itne kehkar usne mujhe ek jhatke ke saath door kar diya. Main abhi bhi iss sab ko process karne ki koshish mein laga tha, jo mujhse kabhi tezz aawaaz mein baat tak nahi karti thi aaj usne mujhe teen – teen thappad raseed kar diye the. Tabhi, ek baar fir uski aankhon se aansoon tapakne lage, maine aage badhkar usse zor se khudmein bheench liya. Wo purzor Koshish kar rahi thi meri pakad se nikalne ki par maine yunhi usse jakde rakha.

MAIN : Please Maaf kar de mujhe. Chaahe to aur maar le par aese berukhi mat kar, please maaf karde...

Par wo aese hi meri pakad se chhootne ki koshish mein lagi rahi. Tabhi main uss se alag hua aur apni jeb se ek Kit – Kat nikaal kar uske saamne kar di. Ye uski favourite chocolate thi aur jab bhi wo udaas hoti thi ya mujhse rooth jaati thi, main aksar usse issi ke zariye manaya karta tha. Maine uski aankhon mein dekha aur kaha,

MAIN : Ab to Maaf karde SWEETY...

Uska nickname jiss se kewal main hi usse pukaara karta tha, aaj fir ye naam mere mukh se sunkar uske aansoon tham gaye aur wo apni jagmag aankhon se mujhe dekhne lagi. Maine apni baanhe faila di aur uski aur dekh kar haan mein sar hilaya, bas fir kya tha, ek prem poorn aalingan mein shaamil ho gaye hum dono. Jab hum alag huye to wo mere gaal par haath ferne lagi aur meri aur glaani bhari nazron se dekhne lagi.

ANVI : I'm Sorr...

MAIN : Shhh... Tera hakk hai!!

Wo kuchh aur kehti uss se pehle,

MAIN : Chal aa sona nahi hai tujhe!?

Aksar wo kisi naa kisi kaam se bachne ke liye neend ka bahaana kar meri god mein sar rakh kar so jaaya karti thi. Usne muskurate huye haan mein sar hila diya aur bed par meri god mein sar rakhkar let gayi. Main uske baalon ko sehlaate huye uske kandhe ko thapki dene laga jiske falswaroop wo kuchh derr mein so gayi aur main bhi uske chehre ko taakte huye neend ki vaadiyon mein kho gaya.


YESTERDAY (AFTER THE MANALI INCIDENT) :

CITY : MANALI

PLACE : NEW DAWN HOTEL & RESTAURANT

ROOM NO. 312...

Iss kamre mein maujood hain do ladkiyaan,ek to wahi Camera waali ladki aur doosri jisne uske behosh hone par usse jagaaya tha. So, jaise hi ye hosh mein aayi to “ARJUNNN” Shabd chillati huyi uthi. Iski condition aur dobara se mausam kharaab hone ke dar se iske saathi isse yahaan waapis le aaye aur iss waqt ye dono ladkiyaan yahaan iss kamre mein thi.

LADKI : AHANA tu theek hai na??

AHANA : Haan baba kitni baar poochhegi.

LADKI : Ab tension hogi to poochhungi hi naa! Waise ek baat bata tu mujhse baatein kabse chhippane lagi?

AHANA : Kyon pareshaan kar rahi hai bekaar mein.Tujhe pata to hai ke main tujhse kuchh nahi chhippati.

LADKI : Achha aesa hai, To jab tune Boyfriend bana liya hai to mujhe bataya kyun nahi!?

AHANA (Shocked) : Kya bakwaas kar rahi hai!? Mera Boyfriend, matlab kuchh bhi...

LADKI : Main bakwaas kar rahi hoon. To ye Arjun kaun hai?

ARJUN... Ye naam sunte hi ek alag sa connection feel hua usse iss naam se, iss naam waale insaan se. Wo apne jeevan mein ab tak kisi bhi Arjun se nahi mili thi par jaane kyon ek aakarshan, ek kashish thi iss naam mein jo usse sochne par majboor kar rahi thi.

LADKI : Dekha kaise sochne lagi! Soch le, bahaana soch le, ab hum to paraaye ho gaye hain tere liye... Ab hame kaahe bataaiyegi apne Saiyaan Ji ke baare mein!!

Ek naatakiya tone mein kahi thi ye baat usne apne honthon par ek sharaarti muskaan liye aur ”Saiyaan Ji” kehte waqt uska lehza kuchh adhik hi shaitaani tha.

AHANA : Bakwaas band karegi. Main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko...

LADKI : Sun rahe ho naa Gaaon waalon!! Kaise jhooth bol rahi hai ye ladki... “Main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko”!! Hey Bhagwaan, kitna badal gaya Insaan...

Usski nakal karte huye kahi thi wo line isne jisse sunkar Ahana bhi muskaaye bina naa reh saki.

AHANA : Bas kar drama company. Kaha naa main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko.

LADKI : Ae bhaav kyon khaati hai. Bata naa, kaisa hai dikhne mein,hot hai... Hot to hoga hi agar tune pasand kiya hai to!! Bata naa...

AHANA : Aeeee bas kar yahaan main jisse jaanti tak nahi tu pata nahi kya – kya soche jaa rahi hai.

LADKI : Fir tu uska naam lete huye kyon uthi!?

AHANA : Wahi to mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai. Main tujhe shuru se batati hoon. Main waterfall ki photos click kar rahi thi ke tabhi wo aandhi wageraah aane lagi. Fir wo kohra, uske baad shayad main behosh ho gayi. Jab main hosh mein aayi to uss se just pehle mujhe kuchh visions dikhe jo bilkul real lag rahe the.

VISION – 1 :

Ye scene hai ek Jungle ka jismein ek ladki jo aur koyi nahi balki Ahana hi hai, ek jheel ke kinaare baithi hai.Ek behadh hi khubsurat jheel hai ye jiski sundarta mein koyi bhi kho jaaye. Aas – paas bade – bade aur ghane pedd hain joki kuchh ajeeb si shapes aur sizes ke hain. Jheel mein kayi prakaar ki machhliyaan tairti dikh rahi hain kyonki uska paani bilkul transparent hai arthat ek dum swachh jal. Ahana ne ek long dress pehni huyi hai jaisi aksar royal families ki hoti hai. Tabhi ek ladki peechhe se bhaagte huye aati hai, uski dress bhi Ahana jaisi hi hai par chehra kuchh dhundhla dikh raha hai...

LADKI : Chal jaldi Ahana, wo aa gaye hain!!

Ye sunkar Ahana ki khushi dekhne yogya thi, wo bina kuchh kahe ya sune ek disha ki taraf bhaagti huyi chali gayi.

VISION – 2 :

Yahaan iss scene mein Do yuvak hain jo ek bheeshan yuddh mein lage huye hain. Dono ka hi chehra dhundhla sa hai. Dono ki shaktiyaan aapas mein takra rahi hain aur kuchh hi waqt mein ek yuvak ne doosre vyakti joki poore kaale kapdon mein tha usse neeche gira diya. Wo uske oopar antim prahaar karne hi waala tha ke tabhi...

KHAAACHHHHH...

Ek talwaar peechhe se uske chhati mein ghus gayi aur dard se jhoojhta hua jab wo palta to uski aankhen kuchh adhik hi failti chali gayi aur bas yahi shabd nikle uske munh se...

“ Dhokha... Dhokha... Badla lungaa main... Main Waapis Aaungaaaa...”

VISION – 3 :

Ye drishya hai ek behadh hi bade kamre ka jismein bistar par baithi hai ek ladki jiska pet foola hua hai aur spasht dikh raha hai ke wo Maa ban ne waali hai. Tabhi achanak hi uske daayen haath ki ek ungli mein pehni angoothi gaayab ho gayi. Wo pehle to chaunki par jaise hi usse ehsaas hua ke iska matlab kya hai uske munh se cheenkh nikal gayi – “NAHHHHHIIIIII...”

Aur issi cheenkh ke agle hi pal wo ladki raakh ke dher mein badal gayi!!

VISIONS FINISHED...

AHANA : Jaise hi ye Visions khatam huye mujhe ek chehra dikha aur apne aap hi meri aankhen khul gayi aur maybe wo Arjun naam bhi mere munh se nikla.

Wo ladki bas munh faade ye sab sun rahi thi, ab uske liye to ye cheez asaadharan hi thi.Khair, kuchh derr inki baatein chali fir Ahana kisi aur hi soch mein gum ho gayi.

AHANA (Mann Mein) : Sorry, KIARA... Par main wo Saanp waali baat tujhe nahi bata sakti. Tu Bharosa hi nahi karegi. Par mujhe uske baare mein pata lagaana hai. Wo Saanp bahut alag tha aur mujhe usse dekhkar itna gussa kyon aa raha tha. Jabki mujhe dar bhi lag raha tha. Dono feelings ek saath mein, kaise!?

Khair, Ahana ke alawa koyi aur bhi tha jispar kal ki uss ghatna ka gehra asar hua tha. Aaiye jaan lete hain uska haal bhi.


UNIDENTIFIED LOCATION :

Wo Saanp jiska naam shayad BOTIS tha, uss pathhar mein ghus gaya. Aur uske baad ek ajeeb si jagah par prakat hua par iss waqt wo apne human form mein tha arthat aadam roop mein. Wo iss waqt khada tha ek raakshas jaise dikhne waale praani ke saamne. Usne laal rang ke kapde pehne huye the, haath mein ek Bhaala tha aur sar par do seeng (horns) bhi maujood the. Wo jalti huyi nigaahon se iss saanp ko dekh raha tha aur iss bechaare ki jaan halak mein atki huyi thi.

AADMI : Himmat kaise huyi tumhaari khaali haath lautne ki. Wo ladki, kahaan hain uski shaktiyaan!?

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... COMMANDER maafi... Maafi... Ye gulaam aapse maafi maangta hai... Main uss ladki ko maarne hi waala tha ke tabhi mera zehar kisi ne apne andar samaa liya!! Hisss... Hisss...

Wo aadmi jhat se apni jagah se uth gaya aur aankhen faade iss Aadmi roopi saanp ko dekhne laga.

AADMI : Kya kaha tumne, Tumhara zehar, kisine apne mein samaa liya. Asambhav!!! LORD ki power ko koyi kaise rok sakta hai.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Main bhi hairaan hoon COMMANDER. Main aapko sab kuchh batata hoon...

Iske baad usne poore scene ka bakhaan uss aadmi ke saamne kar diya. Wo aadmi hairaan pareshaan sa ho gaya par asli dhamaaka abhi baaki tha.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... COMMANDER... Ek aur baat bhi hai... Hisss... Hisss...

AADMI : Kya!?

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Maine uss Dhuen mein kisi ki urjaa mehsoos ki thi. Hisss... Hisss...

AADMI : Kiski Urjaa...

Aur jo naam uss Saanp ne kaha usse sunkar uss Aadmi ka halak sookh gaya. Wo dhamm se neeche gira aur apni aankhon aur saanson ko kaaboo karta hua kuchh sochne laga. Par ek baat to tay thi ke uski jaan Laghbhag nikal hi gayi thi. Kaaran wo naam jiski urjaa ki charcha ho rahi thi...

SNAKE : Usmein “STYGIAN” ki urjaa thi wo bhi bahut zyada maatra mein!!




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CHAPTER – 1

{THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN}


UPDATE – 1

CITY : DELHI

LOCATION : NATIONAL COLLEGE OF ENGINEERING

“ARJUN... You're Late...”

Ye shabd kahe the ek formal suit ko pehne vyakti ne jo iss College ke Convocation Hall ki entry ke paas khade the. In shabdon ko recieve karne waale end par tha ek ladka jo koyi aur nahi balki “MAIN” hi tha.Jiske jawaab mein,

“Sorry Sir, won't happen again!!”

SIR ( Smiles ) : I know My Boy... Go take your seat.

Main bina kuchh kahe bas sar haan mein hilaakar aage badh gaya. Jab main hall mein pahuncha to wahaan baithe zyadatar students aur Staff ki nazren bhi mujhpar hi tik gayi. Main chalta hua middle row mein baithe ek ladke ke bagal mein baith gaya.

LADKA : Aa gaya tu, kya baat aaj late kaise hua?

MAIN : Maine Saara intezaam kar diya hai. Tujhe aaj hi nikalna hai!!

Wo meri baat sunkar ek dum serious ho gaya. Fir kuchh sochkar,

LADKA : Hmm... Thik hai. Par wahaan se aage kaise jaana hai ye tune abhi tak nahi batya hai.

MAIN : Kuaan pyaase ke paas nahi aata... Pyaasa Kuyen ke paas jaata hai. Tujhe bhi wahaan pahunchkar hi pata chal jaayega.

Usne mere tark par bas muskurakar sar hila diya. Tabhi, hall mein ek shaanti chhaa gayi. Reason – College ke Dean jo Stage par pahunch chuke the.

DEAN : So, Hello All the Genius Students of NCE. Jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain ke aaj hum sab yahaan Convocation ceremony ke liye ikattha huye hain. Main aapko batana chahunga ke iss baar bhi hamare Institute ka Result 100% raha hai.

Ye sunkar sabhi students ke chehre khil gaye. Aakhir fail hone ki chinta se mukt jo ho gaye the.

DEAN : Aaj hamare beech Delhi ke Education Minister bhi maujood hain aur wo Institute ke Top 3 rankers ko apne shubh haathon se degree pradaan karenge. So without wasting any time, main unhe stage par bulana chahunga ke wo aayen aur toppers ko puraskrit karen.

Iske baad wo Minister stage par pahunche aur jo ladki 3rd thi usse Graduation ki degree aur ek Trophy di.

DEAN : Ab, baari hai uss student ki jisne College mein 2nd rank achieve kiya hai – VIHAAN SINGH...

Iss naam ki ghoshna par mere saath mein baitha ladka khush hote huye stage ki taraf badh gaya. Ji haan ye Vihaan hi tha, mera param mitra. Usse bhi uski degree aur award se samaanit kiya gaya.

DEAN : And ab baari hai Institute ke Topper ki aur mujhe ye batate huye behadh khushi ho rahi hai ke iss baar jisne Hamare College mein first rank haasil kiya hai wahi University Topper bhi hai & the name is – ARJUN THAKUR...

Sabhi chhatron ke sar apne aap hi meri aur ho gaye. Main bina kisi adhik excitement ko dikhaaye utha aur stage ki taraf badh gaya. Stage par pahunchkar maine Dean aur Special Guest dono ko hi greet kiya. Prize ke taur par mujhe degree aur trophy ke alawa ek All India Scholarship mili, jiske falswaroop Main kisi bhi college se Free Of Cost Post-graduation kar sakta tha.

Iske baad kuchh derr tak ye programme chala aur fir saare students ko disperse kar diya gaya. Mujhe aur saath hi Vihaan ko bhi sabhi congratulate kar rahe the par jahaan mera chehra bhaavheen tha wahin Vihaan kaafi chintit lag raha tha. Main uske paas gaya,

MAIN : Kyon pareshaan ho raha hai!? Kuchh nahi hoga. Chill kar, marne nahi dunga tujhe filhaal main.

VIHAAN : Filhaal...

Maine bas usse dekh kar ek shaitaani smile bikher di. Hum dono College se nikalkar apne Flat par pahunche aur Vihaan ek bag uthakar Airport ki taraf nikal gaya.

UNIDENTIFIED LOCATION :

Ek bahut hi ajeeb si jagah hai ye, aas – paas kisi insaan ya jaanwar ka to kya, ped – paudhon tak ka naam – o – nishaan nahi hai. Zameen ka rang bhi ajeeb hai, laal gehra laal maano yahaan khoon ki holi kheli gayi ho. Waise to filhaal subah ka samay hai par yahaan chaaron taraf ujaale ka ek katra tak nahi hai. Andhere ki chaadar se dhaki ye jagah sachmein behadh khaufnaak hai.

“ Apollyon Nizrin Apollyon...
Jinvir Sikliosis Apollyon!!
Kinhit girden Hitrit Apollyon...
Hixxot Hixxot Apollyon Apollyon!!

Hobden Ristik Nerin Beleth...
Jindin Deavin Fillin Beleth!!
Gonnin Gitris Dinen Beleth...
Claxxot Claxxot Beleth Beleth!! ”

Ye shabd the jo fizaon mein goonj rahe the. Jo bhi in shabdon ko bol raha tha uski aawaz nischit hi behadh dheemi thi par in shabdon se jo intensity Paida ho rahi thi wo kaan se khoon nikaal dene ka maada rakhti thi. Khair, yahaan aas – paas kahin koyi bhi ghar ya kuchh bhi aesa nazar nahi aa raha tha par aawaz saaf sunaayi de rahi thi.

Ohhh!! Ye aawaz to zameen ke neeche se utpann ho rahi hai. Chaliye aapko Zameen ke neeche ke drishya se bhi ru – baroo karaya jaaye. Adbhut, yahi shabd niklata hai munh se ye dekhne ke baad. Kaha jaata hai ke Paatal Lok zameen ke neeche hai aur ye uska live example tha. Ek behadh hi daraavni aur badsoorat jagah. Chaaron taraf sookhe huye khoon ke nishaan, kankaal aur kayi saare hathiyaar bhi maujood hain. Par kamaal ki baat ye hai ke ye sabhi hathiyaar behadh hi ajeeb hain. Maano ke Puraane Zamaane se laaye gaye hon!! Dhanush, Bhaala, Talwaar aur inhi ke bhai – bandhu samajh sakte hain aap in hathiyaaron ko.

Iss jagah ke beechon – beech kuchh ajeeb se jeev – jantu maujood the. Unki appearance se lag raha tha jaise wo sab pathhar ke bane ho. Ya fir ek bade se pathhar par nakkashi karke unhe banaya gaya ho. Unki unchaayi kareeban 8–9 feet hogi aur ginti thi 5. Yahi the wo musicians jo upar likhi gayi lines bol rahe the ya chinghaad rahe the pata nahi. Wo sab ek bistar ke chaaron taraf khade the aur uss bistar par pada tha ek ajeeb sa praani. Uska chehra nahi dekha ja sakta tha kyonki uske oopar ek kaale rang ka dhuaan maujood tha par uska baaki shareer kaafi ajeeb sa tha. Uspar itni drawings bani thi ke samajh nahi aa raha tha ke Uske shareer par tattoos hain ya Tattoos par uska shareer.

Khair, wahin par ek roshni chamak rahi thi aur wo ek darwaaza sa lag raha tha. Kyonki jo bed par maujood shakhs tha uske munh se lagaatar nikal raha kaala dhuaan uss roshni numa darwaaze par jaakar gayab ho raha tha.

Kuchh derr tak yahi prakriya chali aur uske baad bistar par pada shakhs gaayab ho gaya. Wahin wo paancho Patthar ke bane jeev apni – apni jagah par gir gaye jaise behosh ho chuke hon. Ab wahaan agar kuchh tha to sirf wo roshni jismein se ek hi aawaz sunaayi de rahi thi –

“ Hahahahah... Hahahahah... Hahahahah... ”

CITY : MUMBAI

LOCATION : THAKUR VILLA

Jiss ghar ki charcha Introduction mein huyi thi wahi ghar, ya agar bangla kahun to zyada better hoga. Iss ghar ke ek kamre mein maujood hain ek ladki aur uske saath hai ek ladka...

LADKA : Pata nahi kab sab theek hoga!?

LADKI : Hmmm... Ab to bas unka intezaar hai. Ek baar wo aa jaayen to shayad sab kuchh sahi ho paaye.

LADKA : Right, par mujhe thodi tension bhi ho rahi hai kahin sab kuchh ulta naa ho jaaye.

LADKI : Tu hamesha manhoos hi rahiyo. Kabhi bhi positive to sochega nahi tu.

LADKA : SNEHA... Positive baaton se hi sab kuchh nahi ho jaata. Tu khud soch agar unke aane se problem aur badh gayi to? Kya guarantee hai ke wo aakar aasani se sab kuchh bhula denge?

SNEHA : I wish ke sab kuchh sahi ho jaaye DHRUV...

DHRUV : Hope so too... Chalo kam se kam ANVI to theek ho hi jaayegi unke aane se!!

SNEHA : Ye tune sahi kaha, ek wahi hain jo usse waapis se puraane waali mastikhor ladki bana sakte hain.

DHRUV : Wo din... Main bahut miss karta hoon un dinon ko. Kitna achha time tha naa, hum sab saath milkar khela karte the.

Darwaaze par khadi ek ladki in dono ki baatein sun rahi thi aur shayad wo bhi wahi chahti thi jo ye dono chahate the. Wo inke paas hi andar gayi aur,

LADKI : Tum dono tension mat lo wo bahut samajhdar hai. Dekhna wo aakar sab kuchh sahi kar dega!!

In dono ke chehron par bhi khushi ki lakeerein dikhne lagi.

SNEHA : Kaash aesa hi ho Di. Fir hum paancho milkar firse pehle jaisi dhoom machaayenge.

LADKI : Haan tujhe to bas uchhal kood hi karni hai...

SNEHA : Kya HIMANI Di aap bahut hi boring ho!!

HIMANI : Chal chal ab thoda kitaaben bhi khol ke dekh le. Kahin baad mein roti fire ke main fail ho gayi.

SNEHA : Main nahi hoti fail. Waise Di Kab aa rahe hain Bhai? Aapko to phone kiya hi hoga unhone!?

HIMANI : Hmm... Keh to raha tha ke kal aa jaayega. Baaki uske mood ka kaunsa kuchh pata rehta hai.

Kuchh derr tak inki baat cheet chali fir ye sabhi apne – apne kaamo mein mashgool ho gaye. Issi bangle ke ek alag kamre mein bistar par akeli gum sum si baithi hai ek ladki. Bed se tek lagaaye side waali khidki se baahar ki taraf dekh rahi hai. Jaane kin khayalon mein khoyi hai wo. Tabhi usne apne pillow ke neeche se ek tasveer nikaali aur uspar haath ferne lagi.

Dard to nischit hi tha uske chehre, aankhon mein mayoosi bhi saaf dikh rahi thi par fir bhi uski aankhon mein aansoon nahi the. Wo shaant thi, behadh shaant. Jaise ke khud ke andar apne saare dukhon ko samete jaa rahi ho. Kisi ke intezaar mein, kisi kandhe ke intezaar mein jispar sar rakh kar wo apne ashkon ko bahaa sake.

Uske antarmann mein bas ek hi baat chal rahi thi, ek hi tasveer chal rahi thi aur ussi tasveer ko yaad karte huye wo soch rahi thi :

“ I miss you Bhai... I miss you so much!! Kab aaoge aap, aap to mujhe bhool Gaye hona. Bhool gaye ho ke aapki ek behen bhi hai, jo aapke bina nahi reh sakti, please mere paas aa jaao bhai. Please!! ”

Usne uss tasveer ko apne seene se laga liya jaise wo uss photo se gale mil rahi ho, aur ek gehri neend mein chali gayi.

PLACE : THAKUR & CO.

Desh ke sabse badi business mein se ek, THAKUR & CO.. ka ye office jahan hum maujood hain, ye office hi kaafi hai batane ke liye ke kitni badi company hai ye. Iss office ke ek Cabin mein baithe hain ek vyakti, cabin ke baahar name plate par likha hua tha – RAJVEER THAKUR [M.D.]...

Wo yahaan baithe kisi gehri soch mein gum hain. Unke saamne ek aur aadmi bhi maujood hai aur unhe sochon mein gum dekh kar wo bhi haalat bhali – bhaanti samajh rahe hain. Tabhi wo khoye – khoye hi bole,

RAJVEER : Kya wo mujhe maaf karega!?

AADMI : Kya kaha Bhaisahab Aapne??

RAJVEER : SAMARTH... wo kabhi mujhe maaf kar paayega? Main kitna bura baap hoon naa jo apni hi aulaad ke sath ye sab kiya.

SAMARTH kuchh nahi bole bas apne bade bhai ki taraf hi dekhte rahe,

RAJVEER : Tum batao Samarth... Kya wo mujhe maaf karega??

Unhone ek lambi saans chhodi aur bole,

SAMARTH : Bhaisahab, agar aapne usse maara hota peeta hota, daanta hota, gaaliyan di hoti, yahaan tak ki jaan se bhi maar diya hota... Tab bhi haste huye ye sab sweekar kar leta par... (Pause) Par uss sabke kaaran jo haalat Anvi ki huyi hai aapko lagta hai uske liye wo kabhi aapko maaf kar paayega!?

Wo bhi nishabd se ho gaye the iss baat par aur dobara se apni sochon mein kho gaye.

CITY : MANALI

PLACE : JOGINI FALLS

Manali mein stith ye ek bahut hi manmohak jharna jiski khubsurti dekhte hi banti hai. Issi jharne ke kareeb haath mein camera liye khadi hai ek ladki, aur chaaron taraf ke view ki tasveeren click kar rahi hai. Iss ladki ke nazdeek hi maujood hain kayi aur ladke – ladkiyan bhi, prateet hota hai jaise group mein trip par aaye hon ye sabhi.

Uss camera waali ladki ka dhyaan keval photos kheenchne par hi laga hua hai ke tabhi wahaan achanak se hi tezz hawaayein chalne lagti hain. Jo kuchh hi palon mein aandhi ka roop le chuki thi. Wo ladki wahin ek patthar ke paas baith gayi kyonki abhi chal paana sambhav nahi tha. Wahin uske saath ke baaki log bhi paas hi kisi na kisi cheez ke nazdeek baith gaye.

Tabhi, aasman mein bijli ki garjana hone lagi aur ek dhundh si fiza mein failne lagi. Kuchh hi palon mein kohre ke kaaran visibility shunya ho chuki thi. Wahaan maujood koyi bhi aas – paas ka kuchh nahi dekh paa raha tha. Tabhi uss Camera waali ladki ke paas ek prakaash fail gaya. Par agar baahar se koyi dekhta bhi to wahaan sab kuchh gaayab nazar aata. Saaf shabdon mein kahun to iss roshni ne uss ladki ko cover kar liya tha jiss kaaran se baahar se wo invisible ho gayi thi.

Uss ladki ki ye sab dekh kar saansein atakne lagi. Tabhi uske shock ko badhaata hua wo patthar jiske kareeb wo baithi thi do tukdon mein bant gaya aur jo cheez uss pathhar se baahar aayi usse dekh kar to uss ladki ki saansein laghbhag band hi ho chuki thi. Kyonki wo ek behadh hi daraawna saanp tha. Yes, a Snake. Uski appearance bahut hi ajeeb thi. Mostly uski Skin Safed rang ki thi par beech – beech mein kaale aur neele rang ki maujoodgi bhi dikh rahi thi. Saath hi uske oopar ek talwaar ki tasveer bhi bani huyi thi.

Achanak hi usne apna fan (sar) uthaya aur apna munh kholkar funkaar maarne laga. Ab to wo ladki apne aap ko mara hua samajhne lagi thi ke tabhi wo behosh ho gayi ya kahun ke behosh kar di gayi kyonki uske sar ke oopar ban chuka tha ek golden colour ka dhuaan. Aur ye sab dekh kar shayad wo saanp bhi hairaan reh gaya tha kyonki wo idhar – udhar apna sar ghumaane laga tha. Tabhi wo saanp ek gol chakkar mein ghoomne laga aur jab uski speed itni zyada ho gayi ke wo dikhna hi band ho chala, tabhi...

Wo saanp ek aadmi mein badal gaya. 6 feet se zyada ki height, shareer par kaale kapde, munh se baahar latakte do bade zehrile daant aur haath mein maujood ek talwaar. Uski appearance kisi ko bhi dara dene ke liye kaafi thi. Wo uss golden colour ke dhuen ki taraf jalti huyi nigaahon se dekhne laga.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Kaun ho tum!? Himmat kaise huyi mere raaste mein aane ki. Hisss... Hisss...

Tabhi uss dhuen mein hulchul hone lagi aur achanak hi usmein se aawaz aayi,

DHUAAN : Tu jaanta hai ke kispar hamla karne jaa rha tha tu??

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Wo mera shikaar thi. Main uske saath kuchh bhi karun. Tu kaun hai rokne waala? Hisss... Hisss...

DHUAAN : Hahahaha... Shikaar! Tu inka shikaar karega!! Hahahaha...

SNAKE : Hisssss... Hisssss... Ab tu dekh, mujhe lalkaarne ka nateeja!! Hisssss... Hisssss...

Aur us aadmi numa saanp ne uss camera waali ladki ki taraf foonk maar di. Ye koyi aesa – waisa hamla nahi tha balki usne apna zeher foonka tha uss ladki ke oopar. Par tabhi apne aap hi uss zeher ki direction badli aur wo oopar ki taraf behta hua uss Golden Dhuyen mein sama gaya aur ye dekh kar uss Saanp ki aankhen fati ki fati reh gayi. Wo hairaan pareshaan sa maamla samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

DHUAAN : Kaha tha na maine bewakoof ke tu inhe chhoo bhi nahi sakta.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Nahi ye naamumkin hai, mera zehar... Mera zehar bekaar kaise ho sakta hai??LORD ki shakti hai mere zehar mein... Ye koyi maamoli zehar nahi tha ye mera...

DHUAAN : BOTIS ka zehar tha...

Ye sunkar ek baar firse uss aadmi roopi saanp ki aankhen hairat se fail gayi.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Tum kaun ho!? Kaun ho tum... Mujhe koyi aese hi nahi Pehchaan sakta. Hisss... Hisss...

DHUAAN : Tu na mujhe pehchaan sakta hai naa inhe jinpar tu hamla karne aaya tha. Jaa chala jaa yahaan se warna kahin maara naa jaaye!!

Wo Saanp apni taakat ko bhali bhaanti jaanta tha aur khud par poora yakeen bhi tha usse par jo kuchh abhi hua tha, specially uski identity koyi jaanta tha ye usse dara raha tha. Wo waapis apni saanp ki form mein lauta aur ussi patthar mein ghus gaya. Wo patthar bhi pehle ki hi tarah waapis se jud gaya. Wo Golden Dhuaan kuchh der wahin raha fir gaayab ho gaya.

Ab poore ilaake mein ek shaanti thi. Hawayein tham chuki thi aur kohra bhi hatt chuka tha. Wo sabhi log uss camera waali ladki ke kareeb aaye to usse neeche behosh gira paaya. Unmein se ek aur ladki ne uska sar apni god mein rakh liya aur uske gaalon ko thapthapaate huye usse uthaane lagi.

LADKI : Aankhen kholo... Aankhen kholo... Utho AHANA!!

Tabhi uss camera waali ladki ne apni aankhen kholi aur ek hi shabd chillate huye uthkar baith gayi aur wo shabd tha – “ARJUNNNNN...”

CITY : DELHI

LOCATION : JANPATH

Delhi ke Janpath ke paas hi ek khaali maidaan mein iss waqt khaad tha Main. Mere saamne khade the kuchh aadmi jo oonchi kad – kaathi ke hatte – katte bande the. Sabhi formal suit – boot pehne huye the. Tabhi,

Main : Tum sabko abhi ke abhi KOLKATA ke liye nikalna hai. Wahaan tumhe Vihaan milega. Tum sabko dhyaan rakhna hai ke uspar koyi bhi khatra naa aaye. Jiss kaam ke liye wo gaya hai wo bahut zyada zaroori hai aur agar uss kaam mein koyi chook huyi toh...

Maine sentence to adhoora chhod diya par meri aankhon mein dikh rahi darindagi se wo sabhi parichit the. Isiliye unhone kaanpte huye haan mein sar hila diya.

Maine aasman ki taraf dekha aur bas inhi shabdon ko budbudaya : Aur yahaan se shuru hoti hai...

“THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN...”




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CITY : MUMBAI

LOCATION : THAKUR VILLA

Jaante hi hain aap iss ghar ko to, filhaal iss ghar ke baahar khada tha Main. Waise to Zyadatar mera chehra sapaat aur aankhen sooni si hi raha karti hain par iss waqt ek krodh ki jawaala meri aankhon mein saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi. Mere haath mein do bags the, jinmein of course mera samaan tha. Tabhi gate ke paas khade ek guard ki nazar mujhpar padi aur fir uski aankhen failti chali gayi. Wo andar ki taraf bhaaga ek hi pankti ko laghbhag chillate huye – “Maalik... Maalik... Arjun Baba aa gaye!!”

Maine apne dimaag mein panap rahe anekon vichaaron ko jhatka aur andar ki taraf badh gaya. Main abhi ghar ki chaukhat par pahuncha hi tha ke andar ki taraf se laghbhag bhaagte huye ek buzurg vyakti aaye. Mujhe dekhkar unki aankhen bheegti chali gayi, wo kitne khush the iska andaza main laga paa raha tha. Maine apne bags ko chhoda aur unke paaon chhoo liye. Unhone mujhe uthaya aur apne gale se laga liya. Wo meri peeth par thapthapate huye aansoon baha rahe the, wahin unke peechhe hi kuchh aur shakhs bhi khade the. Jahaan unmein se do ko dekh kar mere chehre par halki khushi aayi wahin baaki dono ko dekh kar ek hi jhatke mein wo khushi kafoor ho gayi.

Khair, un buzurg vyakti joki mere Dadaji the, unhone kaafi derr mujhe gale lagaye rakhe aur jab wo alag huye to unke chehre par saare jahaan ki khushi thi. Unhone mere sar par haath fera aur,

DADAJI : Bahut waqt laga diya tune aane mein, bahut intezaar karwaya hai tune iss boodhe ko.

Fir, main unke peechhe ki taraf badha aur wahaan khade aadmi joki mere Chacha the unke paaon chhuye, wo bhi behadh garmjoshi se mujhse mile aur unke baad main Chachi se mila. Unhone sadaiv hi mujhe apne khud ke bete jaisa hi maana tha. To nischit hi unka behadh zyada emotional ho jaana laazmi tha. Khair, jab main in sabse mil liya to wahaan khade ek aur aadmi – aurat joki mere Maa – Baap the meri taraf badhne ko huye. Par tabhi maine apna haath aage kar diya, mere Jabde bhinche huye the aur aankhon mein ek tapish thi jisse un dono ne mehsoos kar liya tha. Wo ruk gaye aur laachari bhari nazron se mujhe dekhne lage. Abhi main kuchh aur sochta ke tabhi mujhe peechhe se ek aawaz aayi – “BHAIYAAAA...” jisse sunkar main palta.

Wahaan seedhiyon ke nazdeek khada tha ek ladka aur do ladkiyaan jinme se ek ladki (Anvita) par meri aankhen atak gayi thi. Wo bhi apalak mujhe hi nihaare jaa rahi thi. Ek chumbakiya taakat thi uski aankhon mein jo main unke alawa kahin aur dekh hi nahi paa raha tha. Wo chehra jiss se main sabse adhik prem karta tha, kitni mayoosi... Kitna gam, kitni peeda thi uske uss haseen rukhsaar par. Tabhi uske saath mein khadi ladki aur ladka (Sneha – Dhruv) meri aur bhaage aur mere gale lag gaye. Un dono ki aankhon mein bhi aansoon the, kuchh derr baad jab wo alag huye to maine dono ke sar par haath fera. Par iss dauraan meri nazren bas ussi chehre par hi atki huyi thi.

Wo dono bhi jaise mere mann ki baat samajh gaye the aur muskurate huye side hatt gaye. Main dheeme kadmon se uss ladki ki taraf badha aur uske saamne jaakar khada ho gaya. Maine apne kaanpte haath ko uthaya aur jaise hi uske chehre par sparsh karne waala tha wo palatkar seedhiyon se oopar ki taraf bhaag gayi. Main thaga sa khada usse jaate dekhta raha aur aakhir kaar kitne hi waqt baad meri aankhon se bhi neer chhalak hi gaya. Mujhe bahut ajeeb si anubhuti ho rahi thi uske jaane se, tabhi Sneha chalti huyi mere paas aayi aur mere kandhe par haath rakhkar boli,

SNEHA : Bhaiya, wo bahut zyada dard mein hai. Aapke jaane ke baad usne khudko ek shell mein band kar liya hai, yahaan tak ki kisi se baat tak nahi karti wo. Par maine kayi baar usse aapki photo se baatein karte dekha hai. Aap hi usse pehle jaisa bana sakte hain ab...

Main bina uski poori baat sune oopar ki taraf chal diya. Hamesha se uska aur mera kamra ek hi tha. Aur main abhi ussi kamre ke baahar khada tha. Baar – baar main apna haath utha raha tha par darwaaze tak pahunchte hi jaise uski shakti apna dum tod deti. Tabhi maine ek lambi saans kheenchi aur darwaaze ko halka sa jhatka de diya, agle hi pal wo khulta chala gaya. Wo kamra, wo bilkul waisa hi tha jaisa main usse chhod gaya tha bas ek cheez alag thi aur wo thi meri tasveeren... Kamre ki har deewar par bas meri hi tasveeren thi. Baaki uss kamre ka rang, arrangement ya fir sajaawat sab kuchh waisa hi tha. Yahaan tak ki wo sugandh jo ab tak mujhmein basi thi, wo bhi jeevant thi uss kamre mein.

Maine chaaron taraf nazar ghumaayi par wo kahin nahi thi lekin sisakne ki aawaz spasht sunaayi de rahi thi. Main dheeme kadmon se aage badha to paaya ke wo bistar ke doosri taraf neeche baithi aur ghutnon mein apna munh dabaaye ro rahi thi. Usse yun dekh kar mera kaleja kaanp gaya.Main uske nazdeek gaya aur ghutnon par baith gaya.

Maine apne kaanpte haathon se uska chehra uthana chaaha aur kuchh der baad kaamyab hua. Derr isliye kyonki usne virodh to poora kiya ke wo chehra chhippaye rakhe par kaamyab naa huyi. Wo lagaatar roye jaa rahi thi par meri taraf ek nazar bhi nahi daali.

MAIN : S... Sw... Sweet...

Main abhi wo shabd poora bhi nahi kar paaya tha ke usne waapis se apna sar jhatakte huye usse ghutnon mein daba liya aur bolo,

ANVI : Jaaiye, chale jaaiye... Unnnhh... Kyonn aaye ho ab... Unnhhh... Itne saal to yaad nahi aaya ke main bhi iss duniya mein hoon... Unhhh...

Mujhe aese laga maano ke meri saansein rukne lagi hon. Uske wo shabd pighle huye lohe ke samaan lage mujhe apne kaanon mein. Main wahaan ruk nahi paa raha tha, par fir bhi maine uske haathon ko thaama aur,

MAIN : Please... Please aesa mat bolo... Main sirf tere liye lauta hoon, please aesa mat kar, mujhe...

Aage ke shabd jaise halak mein hi reh gaye. Zubaan bhi daga kar chuki thi. Main ladkhadate kadmon se utha aur mud gaya. Ab tak meri aankhen bhi paani se tar ho chuki thi. Par jaise hi main aage badhne ko hua peechhe se usne meri ungli thaam li. Ye ehsaas... Iss ehsaas se main parichit tha, poori tarah se parichit tha. Wo jab bhi bachpan mein mujhe apne paas rokna chahti yunhi meri ungli thaam liya karti.

Aaj fir jaise wo wahi chhoti si bachi ban gayi thi. Main palta aur uski taraf dekha to paaya ke wo mujhe hi tak rahi thi. Ek guhaar thi, ek iltija thi uski aankhon mein jo mujhe keh rahi thi ke ab mat jaana... Ab kabhi mat jaana. Main ek baar firse neeche baith gaya aur uske chehre ko apne haathon mein thaam liya. Main bina kuchh bole ek tak usse hi dekhe jaa raha tha. Kuchh palon baad main uske chehre par jhuka aur uski dono aankhon par baari – baari se kiss kar di.

Bas shayad uske emotions trigger ho gaye aur wo ek jhatke mein mujhse lipat gayi aur foot – foot kar rone lagi. Main samajh raha tha ke wo kya feel kar rahi hogi aur isiliye maine usse rone diya aur uske sar par haath ferne laga. Naa jaane kab tak wo roti aur rahi aur jab shaant huyi to mujhse alag hokar mere chehre par kisses ki bauchhar kar di. Uska bartaav saaf dikha raha tha uska intezaar, uski tadap aur uski chahat.

Aur fir dobara mujhse lipat gayi aur mere seene par apne foolon se haathon se maarne lagi. Uski iss nadaani par mujhe rote huye bhi hansi aa gayi. Aaj kitne hi waqt baad main dil se muskuraya tha.Usne jab meri hansi ki aawaz suni to meri taraf yun dekhne lagi jaise wo Police mein ho aur main gunahgaar. Haalanki, gunahgaar to tha main, uska gunahgaar tha main jo mujhse sabse adhik prem karti thi. Tabhi wo hua jo maine kabhi socha naa tha, main jaise hi usse dobara gale lagaane ko hua,

“CHATTAAAAKKK...CHATTAAAAKKK...CHATTAAAAKKK...”

Ek ke baad ek teen thappad maare usne mere gaal par aur idhar main awaak sa munh faade usse dekhne laga. Agle hi pal usne dono haathon se meri shirt ka collar pakda aur apne chehre ki taraf mujhe kheench liya. Wo meri aankhon mein jhaankte huye boli,

ANVI : How dare you!! Aapki himmat kaise huyi mujhe akela chhodkar jaane ki. Jab aap jaante ho ke main aapke bina nahi reh sakti, fir kyon gaye mujhe chhodkar aur ab mann kiya to waapis aa gaye. Meri feelings, mere emotions ki koyi parwaah hi nahi hai. Main aapse kabhi baat nahi karungi... Kabhi nahi!!

Aur itne kehkar usne mujhe ek jhatke ke saath door kar diya. Main abhi bhi iss sab ko process karne ki koshish mein laga tha, jo mujhse kabhi tezz aawaaz mein baat tak nahi karti thi aaj usne mujhe teen – teen thappad raseed kar diye the. Tabhi, ek baar fir uski aankhon se aansoon tapakne lage, maine aage badhkar usse zor se khudmein bheench liya. Wo purzor Koshish kar rahi thi meri pakad se nikalne ki par maine yunhi usse jakde rakha.

MAIN : Please Maaf kar de mujhe. Chaahe to aur maar le par aese berukhi mat kar, please maaf karde...

Par wo aese hi meri pakad se chhootne ki koshish mein lagi rahi. Tabhi main uss se alag hua aur apni jeb se ek Kit – Kat nikaal kar uske saamne kar di. Ye uski favourite chocolate thi aur jab bhi wo udaas hoti thi ya mujhse rooth jaati thi, main aksar usse issi ke zariye manaya karta tha. Maine uski aankhon mein dekha aur kaha,

MAIN : Ab to Maaf karde SWEETY...

Uska nickname jiss se kewal main hi usse pukaara karta tha, aaj fir ye naam mere mukh se sunkar uske aansoon tham gaye aur wo apni jagmag aankhon se mujhe dekhne lagi. Maine apni baanhe faila di aur uski aur dekh kar haan mein sar hilaya, bas fir kya tha, ek prem poorn aalingan mein shaamil ho gaye hum dono. Jab hum alag huye to wo mere gaal par haath ferne lagi aur meri aur glaani bhari nazron se dekhne lagi.

ANVI : I'm Sorr...

MAIN : Shhh... Tera hakk hai!!

Wo kuchh aur kehti uss se pehle,

MAIN : Chal aa sona nahi hai tujhe!?

Aksar wo kisi naa kisi kaam se bachne ke liye neend ka bahaana kar meri god mein sar rakh kar so jaaya karti thi. Usne muskurate huye haan mein sar hila diya aur bed par meri god mein sar rakhkar let gayi. Main uske baalon ko sehlaate huye uske kandhe ko thapki dene laga jiske falswaroop wo kuchh derr mein so gayi aur main bhi uske chehre ko taakte huye neend ki vaadiyon mein kho gaya.


YESTERDAY (AFTER THE MANALI INCIDENT) :

CITY : MANALI

PLACE : NEW DAWN HOTEL & RESTAURANT

ROOM NO. 312...

Iss kamre mein maujood hain do ladkiyaan,ek to wahi Camera waali ladki aur doosri jisne uske behosh hone par usse jagaaya tha. So, jaise hi ye hosh mein aayi to “ARJUNNN” Shabd chillati huyi uthi. Iski condition aur dobara se mausam kharaab hone ke dar se iske saathi isse yahaan waapis le aaye aur iss waqt ye dono ladkiyaan yahaan iss kamre mein thi.

LADKI : AHANA tu theek hai na??

AHANA : Haan baba kitni baar poochhegi.

LADKI : Ab tension hogi to poochhungi hi naa! Waise ek baat bata tu mujhse baatein kabse chhippane lagi?

AHANA : Kyon pareshaan kar rahi hai bekaar mein.Tujhe pata to hai ke main tujhse kuchh nahi chhippati.

LADKI : Achha aesa hai, To jab tune Boyfriend bana liya hai to mujhe bataya kyun nahi!?

AHANA (Shocked) : Kya bakwaas kar rahi hai!? Mera Boyfriend, matlab kuchh bhi...

LADKI : Main bakwaas kar rahi hoon. To ye Arjun kaun hai?

ARJUN... Ye naam sunte hi ek alag sa connection feel hua usse iss naam se, iss naam waale insaan se. Wo apne jeevan mein ab tak kisi bhi Arjun se nahi mili thi par jaane kyon ek aakarshan, ek kashish thi iss naam mein jo usse sochne par majboor kar rahi thi.

LADKI : Dekha kaise sochne lagi! Soch le, bahaana soch le, ab hum to paraaye ho gaye hain tere liye... Ab hame kaahe bataaiyegi apne Saiyaan Ji ke baare mein!!

Ek naatakiya tone mein kahi thi ye baat usne apne honthon par ek sharaarti muskaan liye aur ”Saiyaan Ji” kehte waqt uska lehza kuchh adhik hi shaitaani tha.

AHANA : Bakwaas band karegi. Main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko...

LADKI : Sun rahe ho naa Gaaon waalon!! Kaise jhooth bol rahi hai ye ladki... “Main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko”!! Hey Bhagwaan, kitna badal gaya Insaan...

Usski nakal karte huye kahi thi wo line isne jisse sunkar Ahana bhi muskaaye bina naa reh saki.

AHANA : Bas kar drama company. Kaha naa main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko.

LADKI : Ae bhaav kyon khaati hai. Bata naa, kaisa hai dikhne mein,hot hai... Hot to hoga hi agar tune pasand kiya hai to!! Bata naa...

AHANA : Aeeee bas kar yahaan main jisse jaanti tak nahi tu pata nahi kya – kya soche jaa rahi hai.

LADKI : Fir tu uska naam lete huye kyon uthi!?

AHANA : Wahi to mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai. Main tujhe shuru se batati hoon. Main waterfall ki photos click kar rahi thi ke tabhi wo aandhi wageraah aane lagi. Fir wo kohra, uske baad shayad main behosh ho gayi. Jab main hosh mein aayi to uss se just pehle mujhe kuchh visions dikhe jo bilkul real lag rahe the.

VISION – 1 :

Ye scene hai ek Jungle ka jismein ek ladki jo aur koyi nahi balki Ahana hi hai, ek jheel ke kinaare baithi hai.Ek behadh hi khubsurat jheel hai ye jiski sundarta mein koyi bhi kho jaaye. Aas – paas bade – bade aur ghane pedd hain joki kuchh ajeeb si shapes aur sizes ke hain. Jheel mein kayi prakaar ki machhliyaan tairti dikh rahi hain kyonki uska paani bilkul transparent hai arthat ek dum swachh jal. Ahana ne ek long dress pehni huyi hai jaisi aksar royal families ki hoti hai. Tabhi ek ladki peechhe se bhaagte huye aati hai, uski dress bhi Ahana jaisi hi hai par chehra kuchh dhundhla dikh raha hai...

LADKI : Chal jaldi Ahana, wo aa gaye hain!!

Ye sunkar Ahana ki khushi dekhne yogya thi, wo bina kuchh kahe ya sune ek disha ki taraf bhaagti huyi chali gayi.

VISION – 2 :

Yahaan iss scene mein Do yuvak hain jo ek bheeshan yuddh mein lage huye hain. Dono ka hi chehra dhundhla sa hai. Dono ki shaktiyaan aapas mein takra rahi hain aur kuchh hi waqt mein ek yuvak ne doosre vyakti joki poore kaale kapdon mein tha usse neeche gira diya. Wo uske oopar antim prahaar karne hi waala tha ke tabhi...

KHAAACHHHHH...

Ek talwaar peechhe se uske chhati mein ghus gayi aur dard se jhoojhta hua jab wo palta to uski aankhen kuchh adhik hi failti chali gayi aur bas yahi shabd nikle uske munh se...

“ Dhokha... Dhokha... Badla lungaa main... Main Waapis Aaungaaaa...”

VISION – 3 :

Ye drishya hai ek behadh hi bade kamre ka jismein bistar par baithi hai ek ladki jiska pet foola hua hai aur spasht dikh raha hai ke wo Maa ban ne waali hai. Tabhi achanak hi uske daayen haath ki ek ungli mein pehni angoothi gaayab ho gayi. Wo pehle to chaunki par jaise hi usse ehsaas hua ke iska matlab kya hai uske munh se cheenkh nikal gayi – “NAHHHHHIIIIII...”

Aur issi cheenkh ke agle hi pal wo ladki raakh ke dher mein badal gayi!!

VISIONS FINISHED...

AHANA : Jaise hi ye Visions khatam huye mujhe ek chehra dikha aur apne aap hi meri aankhen khul gayi aur maybe wo Arjun naam bhi mere munh se nikla.

Wo ladki bas munh faade ye sab sun rahi thi, ab uske liye to ye cheez asaadharan hi thi.Khair, kuchh derr inki baatein chali fir Ahana kisi aur hi soch mein gum ho gayi.

AHANA (Mann Mein) : Sorry, KIARA... Par main wo Saanp waali baat tujhe nahi bata sakti. Tu Bharosa hi nahi karegi. Par mujhe uske baare mein pata lagaana hai. Wo Saanp bahut alag tha aur mujhe usse dekhkar itna gussa kyon aa raha tha. Jabki mujhe dar bhi lag raha tha. Dono feelings ek saath mein, kaise!?

Khair, Ahana ke alawa koyi aur bhi tha jispar kal ki uss ghatna ka gehra asar hua tha. Aaiye jaan lete hain uska haal bhi.


UNIDENTIFIED LOCATION :

Wo Saanp jiska naam shayad BOTIS tha, uss pathhar mein ghus gaya. Aur uske baad ek ajeeb si jagah par prakat hua par iss waqt wo apne human form mein tha arthat aadam roop mein. Wo iss waqt khada tha ek raakshas jaise dikhne waale praani ke saamne. Usne laal rang ke kapde pehne huye the, haath mein ek Bhaala tha aur sar par do seeng (horns) bhi maujood the. Wo jalti huyi nigaahon se iss saanp ko dekh raha tha aur iss bechaare ki jaan halak mein atki huyi thi.

AADMI : Himmat kaise huyi tumhaari khaali haath lautne ki. Wo ladki, kahaan hain uski shaktiyaan!?

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... COMMANDER maafi... Maafi... Ye gulaam aapse maafi maangta hai... Main uss ladki ko maarne hi waala tha ke tabhi mera zehar kisi ne apne andar samaa liya!! Hisss... Hisss...

Wo aadmi jhat se apni jagah se uth gaya aur aankhen faade iss Aadmi roopi saanp ko dekhne laga.

AADMI : Kya kaha tumne, Tumhara zehar, kisine apne mein samaa liya. Asambhav!!! LORD ki power ko koyi kaise rok sakta hai.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Main bhi hairaan hoon COMMANDER. Main aapko sab kuchh batata hoon...

Iske baad usne poore scene ka bakhaan uss aadmi ke saamne kar diya. Wo aadmi hairaan pareshaan sa ho gaya par asli dhamaaka abhi baaki tha.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... COMMANDER... Ek aur baat bhi hai... Hisss... Hisss...

AADMI : Kya!?

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Maine uss Dhuen mein kisi ki urjaa mehsoos ki thi. Hisss... Hisss...

AADMI : Kiski Urjaa...

Aur jo naam uss Saanp ne kaha usse sunkar uss Aadmi ka halak sookh gaya. Wo dhamm se neeche gira aur apni aankhon aur saanson ko kaaboo karta hua kuchh sochne laga. Par ek baat to tay thi ke uski jaan Laghbhag nikal hi gayi thi. Kaaran wo naam jiski urjaa ki charcha ho rahi thi...

SNAKE : Usmein “STYGIAN” ki urjaa thi wo bhi bahut zyada maatra mein!!




Iss Update Mein Itna Hi... Next Update tak ke liye Bye – Bye...



Bane Rahiye!

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[The king]

CHAPTER – 1

{THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN}


UPDATE – 2

NEXT DAY :

CITY : MUMBAI

LOCATION : THAKUR VILLA

Jaante hi hain aap iss ghar ko to, filhaal iss ghar ke baahar khada tha Main. Waise to Zyadatar mera chehra sapaat aur aankhen sooni si hi raha karti hain par iss waqt ek krodh ki jawaala meri aankhon mein saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi. Mere haath mein do bags the, jinmein of course mera samaan tha. Tabhi gate ke paas khade ek guard ki nazar mujhpar padi aur fir uski aankhen failti chali gayi. Wo andar ki taraf bhaaga ek hi pankti ko laghbhag chillate huye – “Maalik... Maalik... Arjun Baba aa gaye!!”

Maine apne dimaag mein panap rahe anekon vichaaron ko jhatka aur andar ki taraf badh gaya. Main abhi ghar ki chaukhat par pahuncha hi tha ke andar ki taraf se laghbhag bhaagte huye ek buzurg vyakti aaye. Mujhe dekhkar unki aankhen bheegti chali gayi, wo kitne khush the iska andaza main laga paa raha tha. Maine apne bags ko chhoda aur unke paaon chhoo liye. Unhone mujhe uthaya aur apne gale se laga liya. Wo meri peeth par thapthapate huye aansoon baha rahe the, wahin unke peechhe hi kuchh aur shakhs bhi khade the. Jahaan unmein se do ko dekh kar mere chehre par halki khushi aayi wahin baaki dono ko dekh kar ek hi jhatke mein wo khushi kafoor ho gayi.

Khair, un buzurg vyakti joki mere Dadaji the, unhone kaafi derr mujhe gale lagaye rakhe aur jab wo alag huye to unke chehre par saare jahaan ki khushi thi. Unhone mere sar par haath fera aur,

DADAJI : Bahut waqt laga diya tune aane mein, bahut intezaar karwaya hai tune iss boodhe ko.

Fir, main unke peechhe ki taraf badha aur wahaan khade aadmi joki mere Chacha the unke paaon chhuye, wo bhi behadh garmjoshi se mujhse mile aur unke baad main Chachi se mila. Unhone sadaiv hi mujhe apne khud ke bete jaisa hi maana tha. To nischit hi unka behadh zyada emotional ho jaana laazmi tha. Khair, jab main in sabse mil liya to wahaan khade ek aur aadmi – aurat joki mere Maa – Baap the meri taraf badhne ko huye. Par tabhi maine apna haath aage kar diya, mere Jabde bhinche huye the aur aankhon mein ek tapish thi jisse un dono ne mehsoos kar liya tha. Wo ruk gaye aur laachari bhari nazron se mujhe dekhne lage. Abhi main kuchh aur sochta ke tabhi mujhe peechhe se ek aawaz aayi – “BHAIYAAAA...” jisse sunkar main palta.

Wahaan seedhiyon ke nazdeek khada tha ek ladka aur do ladkiyaan jinme se ek ladki (Anvita) par meri aankhen atak gayi thi. Wo bhi apalak mujhe hi nihaare jaa rahi thi. Ek chumbakiya taakat thi uski aankhon mein jo main unke alawa kahin aur dekh hi nahi paa raha tha. Wo chehra jiss se main sabse adhik prem karta tha, kitni mayoosi... Kitna gam, kitni peeda thi uske uss haseen rukhsaar par. Tabhi uske saath mein khadi ladki aur ladka (Sneha – Dhruv) meri aur bhaage aur mere gale lag gaye. Un dono ki aankhon mein bhi aansoon the, kuchh derr baad jab wo alag huye to maine dono ke sar par haath fera. Par iss dauraan meri nazren bas ussi chehre par hi atki huyi thi.

Wo dono bhi jaise mere mann ki baat samajh gaye the aur muskurate huye side hatt gaye. Main dheeme kadmon se uss ladki ki taraf badha aur uske saamne jaakar khada ho gaya. Maine apne kaanpte haath ko uthaya aur jaise hi uske chehre par sparsh karne waala tha wo palatkar seedhiyon se oopar ki taraf bhaag gayi. Main thaga sa khada usse jaate dekhta raha aur aakhir kaar kitne hi waqt baad meri aankhon se bhi neer chhalak hi gaya. Mujhe bahut ajeeb si anubhuti ho rahi thi uske jaane se, tabhi Sneha chalti huyi mere paas aayi aur mere kandhe par haath rakhkar boli,

SNEHA : Bhaiya, wo bahut zyada dard mein hai. Aapke jaane ke baad usne khudko ek shell mein band kar liya hai, yahaan tak ki kisi se baat tak nahi karti wo. Par maine kayi baar usse aapki photo se baatein karte dekha hai. Aap hi usse pehle jaisa bana sakte hain ab...

Main bina uski poori baat sune oopar ki taraf chal diya. Hamesha se uska aur mera kamra ek hi tha. Aur main abhi ussi kamre ke baahar khada tha. Baar – baar main apna haath utha raha tha par darwaaze tak pahunchte hi jaise uski shakti apna dum tod deti. Tabhi maine ek lambi saans kheenchi aur darwaaze ko halka sa jhatka de diya, agle hi pal wo khulta chala gaya. Wo kamra, wo bilkul waisa hi tha jaisa main usse chhod gaya tha bas ek cheez alag thi aur wo thi meri tasveeren... Kamre ki har deewar par bas meri hi tasveeren thi. Baaki uss kamre ka rang, arrangement ya fir sajaawat sab kuchh waisa hi tha. Yahaan tak ki wo sugandh jo ab tak mujhmein basi thi, wo bhi jeevant thi uss kamre mein.

Maine chaaron taraf nazar ghumaayi par wo kahin nahi thi lekin sisakne ki aawaz spasht sunaayi de rahi thi. Main dheeme kadmon se aage badha to paaya ke wo bistar ke doosri taraf neeche baithi aur ghutnon mein apna munh dabaaye ro rahi thi. Usse yun dekh kar mera kaleja kaanp gaya.Main uske nazdeek gaya aur ghutnon par baith gaya.

Maine apne kaanpte haathon se uska chehra uthana chaaha aur kuchh der baad kaamyab hua. Derr isliye kyonki usne virodh to poora kiya ke wo chehra chhippaye rakhe par kaamyab naa huyi. Wo lagaatar roye jaa rahi thi par meri taraf ek nazar bhi nahi daali.

MAIN : S... Sw... Sweet...

Main abhi wo shabd poora bhi nahi kar paaya tha ke usne waapis se apna sar jhatakte huye usse ghutnon mein daba liya aur bolo,

ANVI : Jaaiye, chale jaaiye... Unnnhh... Kyonn aaye ho ab... Unnhhh... Itne saal to yaad nahi aaya ke main bhi iss duniya mein hoon... Unhhh...

Mujhe aese laga maano ke meri saansein rukne lagi hon. Uske wo shabd pighle huye lohe ke samaan lage mujhe apne kaanon mein. Main wahaan ruk nahi paa raha tha, par fir bhi maine uske haathon ko thaama aur,

MAIN : Please... Please aesa mat bolo... Main sirf tere liye lauta hoon, please aesa mat kar, mujhe...

Aage ke shabd jaise halak mein hi reh gaye. Zubaan bhi daga kar chuki thi. Main ladkhadate kadmon se utha aur mud gaya. Ab tak meri aankhen bhi paani se tar ho chuki thi. Par jaise hi main aage badhne ko hua peechhe se usne meri ungli thaam li. Ye ehsaas... Iss ehsaas se main parichit tha, poori tarah se parichit tha. Wo jab bhi bachpan mein mujhe apne paas rokna chahti yunhi meri ungli thaam liya karti.

Aaj fir jaise wo wahi chhoti si bachi ban gayi thi. Main palta aur uski taraf dekha to paaya ke wo mujhe hi tak rahi thi. Ek guhaar thi, ek iltija thi uski aankhon mein jo mujhe keh rahi thi ke ab mat jaana... Ab kabhi mat jaana. Main ek baar firse neeche baith gaya aur uske chehre ko apne haathon mein thaam liya. Main bina kuchh bole ek tak usse hi dekhe jaa raha tha. Kuchh palon baad main uske chehre par jhuka aur uski dono aankhon par baari – baari se kiss kar di.

Bas shayad uske emotions trigger ho gaye aur wo ek jhatke mein mujhse lipat gayi aur foot – foot kar rone lagi. Main samajh raha tha ke wo kya feel kar rahi hogi aur isiliye maine usse rone diya aur uske sar par haath ferne laga. Naa jaane kab tak wo roti aur rahi aur jab shaant huyi to mujhse alag hokar mere chehre par kisses ki bauchhar kar di. Uska bartaav saaf dikha raha tha uska intezaar, uski tadap aur uski chahat.

Aur fir dobara mujhse lipat gayi aur mere seene par apne foolon se haathon se maarne lagi. Uski iss nadaani par mujhe rote huye bhi hansi aa gayi. Aaj kitne hi waqt baad main dil se muskuraya tha.Usne jab meri hansi ki aawaz suni to meri taraf yun dekhne lagi jaise wo Police mein ho aur main gunahgaar. Haalanki, gunahgaar to tha main, uska gunahgaar tha main jo mujhse sabse adhik prem karti thi. Tabhi wo hua jo maine kabhi socha naa tha, main jaise hi usse dobara gale lagaane ko hua,

“CHATTAAAAKKK...CHATTAAAAKKK...CHATTAAAAKKK...”

Ek ke baad ek teen thappad maare usne mere gaal par aur idhar main awaak sa munh faade usse dekhne laga. Agle hi pal usne dono haathon se meri shirt ka collar pakda aur apne chehre ki taraf mujhe kheench liya. Wo meri aankhon mein jhaankte huye boli,

ANVI : How dare you!! Aapki himmat kaise huyi mujhe akela chhodkar jaane ki. Jab aap jaante ho ke main aapke bina nahi reh sakti, fir kyon gaye mujhe chhodkar aur ab mann kiya to waapis aa gaye. Meri feelings, mere emotions ki koyi parwaah hi nahi hai. Main aapse kabhi baat nahi karungi... Kabhi nahi!!

Aur itne kehkar usne mujhe ek jhatke ke saath door kar diya. Main abhi bhi iss sab ko process karne ki koshish mein laga tha, jo mujhse kabhi tezz aawaaz mein baat tak nahi karti thi aaj usne mujhe teen – teen thappad raseed kar diye the. Tabhi, ek baar fir uski aankhon se aansoon tapakne lage, maine aage badhkar usse zor se khudmein bheench liya. Wo purzor Koshish kar rahi thi meri pakad se nikalne ki par maine yunhi usse jakde rakha.

MAIN : Please Maaf kar de mujhe. Chaahe to aur maar le par aese berukhi mat kar, please maaf karde...

Par wo aese hi meri pakad se chhootne ki koshish mein lagi rahi. Tabhi main uss se alag hua aur apni jeb se ek Kit – Kat nikaal kar uske saamne kar di. Ye uski favourite chocolate thi aur jab bhi wo udaas hoti thi ya mujhse rooth jaati thi, main aksar usse issi ke zariye manaya karta tha. Maine uski aankhon mein dekha aur kaha,

MAIN : Ab to Maaf karde SWEETY...

Uska nickname jiss se kewal main hi usse pukaara karta tha, aaj fir ye naam mere mukh se sunkar uske aansoon tham gaye aur wo apni jagmag aankhon se mujhe dekhne lagi. Maine apni baanhe faila di aur uski aur dekh kar haan mein sar hilaya, bas fir kya tha, ek prem poorn aalingan mein shaamil ho gaye hum dono. Jab hum alag huye to wo mere gaal par haath ferne lagi aur meri aur glaani bhari nazron se dekhne lagi.

ANVI : I'm Sorr...

MAIN : Shhh... Tera hakk hai!!

Wo kuchh aur kehti uss se pehle,

MAIN : Chal aa sona nahi hai tujhe!?

Aksar wo kisi naa kisi kaam se bachne ke liye neend ka bahaana kar meri god mein sar rakh kar so jaaya karti thi. Usne muskurate huye haan mein sar hila diya aur bed par meri god mein sar rakhkar let gayi. Main uske baalon ko sehlaate huye uske kandhe ko thapki dene laga jiske falswaroop wo kuchh derr mein so gayi aur main bhi uske chehre ko taakte huye neend ki vaadiyon mein kho gaya.


YESTERDAY (AFTER THE MANALI INCIDENT) :

CITY : MANALI

PLACE : NEW DAWN HOTEL & RESTAURANT

ROOM NO. 312...

Iss kamre mein maujood hain do ladkiyaan,ek to wahi Camera waali ladki aur doosri jisne uske behosh hone par usse jagaaya tha. So, jaise hi ye hosh mein aayi to “ARJUNNN” Shabd chillati huyi uthi. Iski condition aur dobara se mausam kharaab hone ke dar se iske saathi isse yahaan waapis le aaye aur iss waqt ye dono ladkiyaan yahaan iss kamre mein thi.

LADKI : AHANA tu theek hai na??

AHANA : Haan baba kitni baar poochhegi.

LADKI : Ab tension hogi to poochhungi hi naa! Waise ek baat bata tu mujhse baatein kabse chhippane lagi?

AHANA : Kyon pareshaan kar rahi hai bekaar mein.Tujhe pata to hai ke main tujhse kuchh nahi chhippati.

LADKI : Achha aesa hai, To jab tune Boyfriend bana liya hai to mujhe bataya kyun nahi!?

AHANA (Shocked) : Kya bakwaas kar rahi hai!? Mera Boyfriend, matlab kuchh bhi...

LADKI : Main bakwaas kar rahi hoon. To ye Arjun kaun hai?

ARJUN... Ye naam sunte hi ek alag sa connection feel hua usse iss naam se, iss naam waale insaan se. Wo apne jeevan mein ab tak kisi bhi Arjun se nahi mili thi par jaane kyon ek aakarshan, ek kashish thi iss naam mein jo usse sochne par majboor kar rahi thi.

LADKI : Dekha kaise sochne lagi! Soch le, bahaana soch le, ab hum to paraaye ho gaye hain tere liye... Ab hame kaahe bataaiyegi apne Saiyaan Ji ke baare mein!!

Ek naatakiya tone mein kahi thi ye baat usne apne honthon par ek sharaarti muskaan liye aur ”Saiyaan Ji” kehte waqt uska lehza kuchh adhik hi shaitaani tha.

AHANA : Bakwaas band karegi. Main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko...

LADKI : Sun rahe ho naa Gaaon waalon!! Kaise jhooth bol rahi hai ye ladki... “Main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko”!! Hey Bhagwaan, kitna badal gaya Insaan...

Usski nakal karte huye kahi thi wo line isne jisse sunkar Ahana bhi muskaaye bina naa reh saki.

AHANA : Bas kar drama company. Kaha naa main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko.

LADKI : Ae bhaav kyon khaati hai. Bata naa, kaisa hai dikhne mein,hot hai... Hot to hoga hi agar tune pasand kiya hai to!! Bata naa...

AHANA : Aeeee bas kar yahaan main jisse jaanti tak nahi tu pata nahi kya – kya soche jaa rahi hai.

LADKI : Fir tu uska naam lete huye kyon uthi!?

AHANA : Wahi to mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai. Main tujhe shuru se batati hoon. Main waterfall ki photos click kar rahi thi ke tabhi wo aandhi wageraah aane lagi. Fir wo kohra, uske baad shayad main behosh ho gayi. Jab main hosh mein aayi to uss se just pehle mujhe kuchh visions dikhe jo bilkul real lag rahe the.

VISION – 1 :

Ye scene hai ek Jungle ka jismein ek ladki jo aur koyi nahi balki Ahana hi hai, ek jheel ke kinaare baithi hai.Ek behadh hi khubsurat jheel hai ye jiski sundarta mein koyi bhi kho jaaye. Aas – paas bade – bade aur ghane pedd hain joki kuchh ajeeb si shapes aur sizes ke hain. Jheel mein kayi prakaar ki machhliyaan tairti dikh rahi hain kyonki uska paani bilkul transparent hai arthat ek dum swachh jal. Ahana ne ek long dress pehni huyi hai jaisi aksar royal families ki hoti hai. Tabhi ek ladki peechhe se bhaagte huye aati hai, uski dress bhi Ahana jaisi hi hai par chehra kuchh dhundhla dikh raha hai...

LADKI : Chal jaldi Ahana, wo aa gaye hain!!

Ye sunkar Ahana ki khushi dekhne yogya thi, wo bina kuchh kahe ya sune ek disha ki taraf bhaagti huyi chali gayi.

VISION – 2 :

Yahaan iss scene mein Do yuvak hain jo ek bheeshan yuddh mein lage huye hain. Dono ka hi chehra dhundhla sa hai. Dono ki shaktiyaan aapas mein takra rahi hain aur kuchh hi waqt mein ek yuvak ne doosre vyakti joki poore kaale kapdon mein tha usse neeche gira diya. Wo uske oopar antim prahaar karne hi waala tha ke tabhi...

KHAAACHHHHH...

Ek talwaar peechhe se uske chhati mein ghus gayi aur dard se jhoojhta hua jab wo palta to uski aankhen kuchh adhik hi failti chali gayi aur bas yahi shabd nikle uske munh se...

“ Dhokha... Dhokha... Badla lungaa main... Main Waapis Aaungaaaa...”

VISION – 3 :

Ye drishya hai ek behadh hi bade kamre ka jismein bistar par baithi hai ek ladki jiska pet foola hua hai aur spasht dikh raha hai ke wo Maa ban ne waali hai. Tabhi achanak hi uske daayen haath ki ek ungli mein pehni angoothi gaayab ho gayi. Wo pehle to chaunki par jaise hi usse ehsaas hua ke iska matlab kya hai uske munh se cheenkh nikal gayi – “NAHHHHHIIIIII...”

Aur issi cheenkh ke agle hi pal wo ladki raakh ke dher mein badal gayi!!

VISIONS FINISHED...

AHANA : Jaise hi ye Visions khatam huye mujhe ek chehra dikha aur apne aap hi meri aankhen khul gayi aur maybe wo Arjun naam bhi mere munh se nikla.

Wo ladki bas munh faade ye sab sun rahi thi, ab uske liye to ye cheez asaadharan hi thi.Khair, kuchh derr inki baatein chali fir Ahana kisi aur hi soch mein gum ho gayi.

AHANA (Mann Mein) : Sorry, KIARA... Par main wo Saanp waali baat tujhe nahi bata sakti. Tu Bharosa hi nahi karegi. Par mujhe uske baare mein pata lagaana hai. Wo Saanp bahut alag tha aur mujhe usse dekhkar itna gussa kyon aa raha tha. Jabki mujhe dar bhi lag raha tha. Dono feelings ek saath mein, kaise!?

Khair, Ahana ke alawa koyi aur bhi tha jispar kal ki uss ghatna ka gehra asar hua tha. Aaiye jaan lete hain uska haal bhi.


UNIDENTIFIED LOCATION :

Wo Saanp jiska naam shayad BOTIS tha, uss pathhar mein ghus gaya. Aur uske baad ek ajeeb si jagah par prakat hua par iss waqt wo apne human form mein tha arthat aadam roop mein. Wo iss waqt khada tha ek raakshas jaise dikhne waale praani ke saamne. Usne laal rang ke kapde pehne huye the, haath mein ek Bhaala tha aur sar par do seeng (horns) bhi maujood the. Wo jalti huyi nigaahon se iss saanp ko dekh raha tha aur iss bechaare ki jaan halak mein atki huyi thi.

AADMI : Himmat kaise huyi tumhaari khaali haath lautne ki. Wo ladki, kahaan hain uski shaktiyaan!?

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... COMMANDER maafi... Maafi... Ye gulaam aapse maafi maangta hai... Main uss ladki ko maarne hi waala tha ke tabhi mera zehar kisi ne apne andar samaa liya!! Hisss... Hisss...

Wo aadmi jhat se apni jagah se uth gaya aur aankhen faade iss Aadmi roopi saanp ko dekhne laga.

AADMI : Kya kaha tumne, Tumhara zehar, kisine apne mein samaa liya. Asambhav!!! LORD ki power ko koyi kaise rok sakta hai.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Main bhi hairaan hoon COMMANDER. Main aapko sab kuchh batata hoon...

Iske baad usne poore scene ka bakhaan uss aadmi ke saamne kar diya. Wo aadmi hairaan pareshaan sa ho gaya par asli dhamaaka abhi baaki tha.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... COMMANDER... Ek aur baat bhi hai... Hisss... Hisss...

AADMI : Kya!?

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Maine uss Dhuen mein kisi ki urjaa mehsoos ki thi. Hisss... Hisss...

AADMI : Kiski Urjaa...

Aur jo naam uss Saanp ne kaha usse sunkar uss Aadmi ka halak sookh gaya. Wo dhamm se neeche gira aur apni aankhon aur saanson ko kaaboo karta hua kuchh sochne laga. Par ek baat to tay thi ke uski jaan Laghbhag nikal hi gayi thi. Kaaran wo naam jiski urjaa ki charcha ho rahi thi...

SNAKE : Usmein “STYGIAN” ki urjaa thi wo bhi bahut zyada maatra mein!!




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CHAPTER – 1

{THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN}


UPDATE – 1

CITY : DELHI

LOCATION : NATIONAL COLLEGE OF ENGINEERING

“ARJUN... You're Late...”

Ye shabd kahe the ek formal suit ko pehne vyakti ne jo iss College ke Convocation Hall ki entry ke paas khade the. In shabdon ko recieve karne waale end par tha ek ladka jo koyi aur nahi balki “MAIN” hi tha.Jiske jawaab mein,

“Sorry Sir, won't happen again!!”

SIR ( Smiles ) : I know My Boy... Go take your seat.

Main bina kuchh kahe bas sar haan mein hilaakar aage badh gaya. Jab main hall mein pahuncha to wahaan baithe zyadatar students aur Staff ki nazren bhi mujhpar hi tik gayi. Main chalta hua middle row mein baithe ek ladke ke bagal mein baith gaya.

LADKA : Aa gaya tu, kya baat aaj late kaise hua?

MAIN : Maine Saara intezaam kar diya hai. Tujhe aaj hi nikalna hai!!

Wo meri baat sunkar ek dum serious ho gaya. Fir kuchh sochkar,

LADKA : Hmm... Thik hai. Par wahaan se aage kaise jaana hai ye tune abhi tak nahi batya hai.

MAIN : Kuaan pyaase ke paas nahi aata... Pyaasa Kuyen ke paas jaata hai. Tujhe bhi wahaan pahunchkar hi pata chal jaayega.

Usne mere tark par bas muskurakar sar hila diya. Tabhi, hall mein ek shaanti chhaa gayi. Reason – College ke Dean jo Stage par pahunch chuke the.

DEAN : So, Hello All the Genius Students of NCE. Jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain ke aaj hum sab yahaan Convocation ceremony ke liye ikattha huye hain. Main aapko batana chahunga ke iss baar bhi hamare Institute ka Result 100% raha hai.

Ye sunkar sabhi students ke chehre khil gaye. Aakhir fail hone ki chinta se mukt jo ho gaye the.

DEAN : Aaj hamare beech Delhi ke Education Minister bhi maujood hain aur wo Institute ke Top 3 rankers ko apne shubh haathon se degree pradaan karenge. So without wasting any time, main unhe stage par bulana chahunga ke wo aayen aur toppers ko puraskrit karen.

Iske baad wo Minister stage par pahunche aur jo ladki 3rd thi usse Graduation ki degree aur ek Trophy di.

DEAN : Ab, baari hai uss student ki jisne College mein 2nd rank achieve kiya hai – VIHAAN SINGH...

Iss naam ki ghoshna par mere saath mein baitha ladka khush hote huye stage ki taraf badh gaya. Ji haan ye Vihaan hi tha, mera param mitra. Usse bhi uski degree aur award se samaanit kiya gaya.

DEAN : And ab baari hai Institute ke Topper ki aur mujhe ye batate huye behadh khushi ho rahi hai ke iss baar jisne Hamare College mein first rank haasil kiya hai wahi University Topper bhi hai & the name is – ARJUN THAKUR...

Sabhi chhatron ke sar apne aap hi meri aur ho gaye. Main bina kisi adhik excitement ko dikhaaye utha aur stage ki taraf badh gaya. Stage par pahunchkar maine Dean aur Special Guest dono ko hi greet kiya. Prize ke taur par mujhe degree aur trophy ke alawa ek All India Scholarship mili, jiske falswaroop Main kisi bhi college se Free Of Cost Post-graduation kar sakta tha.

Iske baad kuchh derr tak ye programme chala aur fir saare students ko disperse kar diya gaya. Mujhe aur saath hi Vihaan ko bhi sabhi congratulate kar rahe the par jahaan mera chehra bhaavheen tha wahin Vihaan kaafi chintit lag raha tha. Main uske paas gaya,

MAIN : Kyon pareshaan ho raha hai!? Kuchh nahi hoga. Chill kar, marne nahi dunga tujhe filhaal main.

VIHAAN : Filhaal...

Maine bas usse dekh kar ek shaitaani smile bikher di. Hum dono College se nikalkar apne Flat par pahunche aur Vihaan ek bag uthakar Airport ki taraf nikal gaya.

UNIDENTIFIED LOCATION :

Ek bahut hi ajeeb si jagah hai ye, aas – paas kisi insaan ya jaanwar ka to kya, ped – paudhon tak ka naam – o – nishaan nahi hai. Zameen ka rang bhi ajeeb hai, laal gehra laal maano yahaan khoon ki holi kheli gayi ho. Waise to filhaal subah ka samay hai par yahaan chaaron taraf ujaale ka ek katra tak nahi hai. Andhere ki chaadar se dhaki ye jagah sachmein behadh khaufnaak hai.

“ Apollyon Nizrin Apollyon...
Jinvir Sikliosis Apollyon!!
Kinhit girden Hitrit Apollyon...
Hixxot Hixxot Apollyon Apollyon!!

Hobden Ristik Nerin Beleth...
Jindin Deavin Fillin Beleth!!
Gonnin Gitris Dinen Beleth...
Claxxot Claxxot Beleth Beleth!! ”

Ye shabd the jo fizaon mein goonj rahe the. Jo bhi in shabdon ko bol raha tha uski aawaz nischit hi behadh dheemi thi par in shabdon se jo intensity Paida ho rahi thi wo kaan se khoon nikaal dene ka maada rakhti thi. Khair, yahaan aas – paas kahin koyi bhi ghar ya kuchh bhi aesa nazar nahi aa raha tha par aawaz saaf sunaayi de rahi thi.

Ohhh!! Ye aawaz to zameen ke neeche se utpann ho rahi hai. Chaliye aapko Zameen ke neeche ke drishya se bhi ru – baroo karaya jaaye. Adbhut, yahi shabd niklata hai munh se ye dekhne ke baad. Kaha jaata hai ke Paatal Lok zameen ke neeche hai aur ye uska live example tha. Ek behadh hi daraavni aur badsoorat jagah. Chaaron taraf sookhe huye khoon ke nishaan, kankaal aur kayi saare hathiyaar bhi maujood hain. Par kamaal ki baat ye hai ke ye sabhi hathiyaar behadh hi ajeeb hain. Maano ke Puraane Zamaane se laaye gaye hon!! Dhanush, Bhaala, Talwaar aur inhi ke bhai – bandhu samajh sakte hain aap in hathiyaaron ko.

Iss jagah ke beechon – beech kuchh ajeeb se jeev – jantu maujood the. Unki appearance se lag raha tha jaise wo sab pathhar ke bane ho. Ya fir ek bade se pathhar par nakkashi karke unhe banaya gaya ho. Unki unchaayi kareeban 8–9 feet hogi aur ginti thi 5. Yahi the wo musicians jo upar likhi gayi lines bol rahe the ya chinghaad rahe the pata nahi. Wo sab ek bistar ke chaaron taraf khade the aur uss bistar par pada tha ek ajeeb sa praani. Uska chehra nahi dekha ja sakta tha kyonki uske oopar ek kaale rang ka dhuaan maujood tha par uska baaki shareer kaafi ajeeb sa tha. Uspar itni drawings bani thi ke samajh nahi aa raha tha ke Uske shareer par tattoos hain ya Tattoos par uska shareer.

Khair, wahin par ek roshni chamak rahi thi aur wo ek darwaaza sa lag raha tha. Kyonki jo bed par maujood shakhs tha uske munh se lagaatar nikal raha kaala dhuaan uss roshni numa darwaaze par jaakar gayab ho raha tha.

Kuchh derr tak yahi prakriya chali aur uske baad bistar par pada shakhs gaayab ho gaya. Wahin wo paancho Patthar ke bane jeev apni – apni jagah par gir gaye jaise behosh ho chuke hon. Ab wahaan agar kuchh tha to sirf wo roshni jismein se ek hi aawaz sunaayi de rahi thi –

“ Hahahahah... Hahahahah... Hahahahah... ”

CITY : MUMBAI

LOCATION : THAKUR VILLA

Jiss ghar ki charcha Introduction mein huyi thi wahi ghar, ya agar bangla kahun to zyada better hoga. Iss ghar ke ek kamre mein maujood hain ek ladki aur uske saath hai ek ladka...

LADKA : Pata nahi kab sab theek hoga!?

LADKI : Hmmm... Ab to bas unka intezaar hai. Ek baar wo aa jaayen to shayad sab kuchh sahi ho paaye.

LADKA : Right, par mujhe thodi tension bhi ho rahi hai kahin sab kuchh ulta naa ho jaaye.

LADKI : Tu hamesha manhoos hi rahiyo. Kabhi bhi positive to sochega nahi tu.

LADKA : SNEHA... Positive baaton se hi sab kuchh nahi ho jaata. Tu khud soch agar unke aane se problem aur badh gayi to? Kya guarantee hai ke wo aakar aasani se sab kuchh bhula denge?

SNEHA : I wish ke sab kuchh sahi ho jaaye DHRUV...

DHRUV : Hope so too... Chalo kam se kam ANVI to theek ho hi jaayegi unke aane se!!

SNEHA : Ye tune sahi kaha, ek wahi hain jo usse waapis se puraane waali mastikhor ladki bana sakte hain.

DHRUV : Wo din... Main bahut miss karta hoon un dinon ko. Kitna achha time tha naa, hum sab saath milkar khela karte the.

Darwaaze par khadi ek ladki in dono ki baatein sun rahi thi aur shayad wo bhi wahi chahti thi jo ye dono chahate the. Wo inke paas hi andar gayi aur,

LADKI : Tum dono tension mat lo wo bahut samajhdar hai. Dekhna wo aakar sab kuchh sahi kar dega!!

In dono ke chehron par bhi khushi ki lakeerein dikhne lagi.

SNEHA : Kaash aesa hi ho Di. Fir hum paancho milkar firse pehle jaisi dhoom machaayenge.

LADKI : Haan tujhe to bas uchhal kood hi karni hai...

SNEHA : Kya HIMANI Di aap bahut hi boring ho!!

HIMANI : Chal chal ab thoda kitaaben bhi khol ke dekh le. Kahin baad mein roti fire ke main fail ho gayi.

SNEHA : Main nahi hoti fail. Waise Di Kab aa rahe hain Bhai? Aapko to phone kiya hi hoga unhone!?

HIMANI : Hmm... Keh to raha tha ke kal aa jaayega. Baaki uske mood ka kaunsa kuchh pata rehta hai.

Kuchh derr tak inki baat cheet chali fir ye sabhi apne – apne kaamo mein mashgool ho gaye. Issi bangle ke ek alag kamre mein bistar par akeli gum sum si baithi hai ek ladki. Bed se tek lagaaye side waali khidki se baahar ki taraf dekh rahi hai. Jaane kin khayalon mein khoyi hai wo. Tabhi usne apne pillow ke neeche se ek tasveer nikaali aur uspar haath ferne lagi.

Dard to nischit hi tha uske chehre, aankhon mein mayoosi bhi saaf dikh rahi thi par fir bhi uski aankhon mein aansoon nahi the. Wo shaant thi, behadh shaant. Jaise ke khud ke andar apne saare dukhon ko samete jaa rahi ho. Kisi ke intezaar mein, kisi kandhe ke intezaar mein jispar sar rakh kar wo apne ashkon ko bahaa sake.

Uske antarmann mein bas ek hi baat chal rahi thi, ek hi tasveer chal rahi thi aur ussi tasveer ko yaad karte huye wo soch rahi thi :

“ I miss you Bhai... I miss you so much!! Kab aaoge aap, aap to mujhe bhool Gaye hona. Bhool gaye ho ke aapki ek behen bhi hai, jo aapke bina nahi reh sakti, please mere paas aa jaao bhai. Please!! ”

Usne uss tasveer ko apne seene se laga liya jaise wo uss photo se gale mil rahi ho, aur ek gehri neend mein chali gayi.

PLACE : THAKUR & CO.

Desh ke sabse badi business mein se ek, THAKUR & CO.. ka ye office jahan hum maujood hain, ye office hi kaafi hai batane ke liye ke kitni badi company hai ye. Iss office ke ek Cabin mein baithe hain ek vyakti, cabin ke baahar name plate par likha hua tha – RAJVEER THAKUR [M.D.]...

Wo yahaan baithe kisi gehri soch mein gum hain. Unke saamne ek aur aadmi bhi maujood hai aur unhe sochon mein gum dekh kar wo bhi haalat bhali – bhaanti samajh rahe hain. Tabhi wo khoye – khoye hi bole,

RAJVEER : Kya wo mujhe maaf karega!?

AADMI : Kya kaha Bhaisahab Aapne??

RAJVEER : SAMARTH... wo kabhi mujhe maaf kar paayega? Main kitna bura baap hoon naa jo apni hi aulaad ke sath ye sab kiya.

SAMARTH kuchh nahi bole bas apne bade bhai ki taraf hi dekhte rahe,

RAJVEER : Tum batao Samarth... Kya wo mujhe maaf karega??

Unhone ek lambi saans chhodi aur bole,

SAMARTH : Bhaisahab, agar aapne usse maara hota peeta hota, daanta hota, gaaliyan di hoti, yahaan tak ki jaan se bhi maar diya hota... Tab bhi haste huye ye sab sweekar kar leta par... (Pause) Par uss sabke kaaran jo haalat Anvi ki huyi hai aapko lagta hai uske liye wo kabhi aapko maaf kar paayega!?

Wo bhi nishabd se ho gaye the iss baat par aur dobara se apni sochon mein kho gaye.

CITY : MANALI

PLACE : JOGINI FALLS

Manali mein stith ye ek bahut hi manmohak jharna jiski khubsurti dekhte hi banti hai. Issi jharne ke kareeb haath mein camera liye khadi hai ek ladki, aur chaaron taraf ke view ki tasveeren click kar rahi hai. Iss ladki ke nazdeek hi maujood hain kayi aur ladke – ladkiyan bhi, prateet hota hai jaise group mein trip par aaye hon ye sabhi.

Uss camera waali ladki ka dhyaan keval photos kheenchne par hi laga hua hai ke tabhi wahaan achanak se hi tezz hawaayein chalne lagti hain. Jo kuchh hi palon mein aandhi ka roop le chuki thi. Wo ladki wahin ek patthar ke paas baith gayi kyonki abhi chal paana sambhav nahi tha. Wahin uske saath ke baaki log bhi paas hi kisi na kisi cheez ke nazdeek baith gaye.

Tabhi, aasman mein bijli ki garjana hone lagi aur ek dhundh si fiza mein failne lagi. Kuchh hi palon mein kohre ke kaaran visibility shunya ho chuki thi. Wahaan maujood koyi bhi aas – paas ka kuchh nahi dekh paa raha tha. Tabhi uss Camera waali ladki ke paas ek prakaash fail gaya. Par agar baahar se koyi dekhta bhi to wahaan sab kuchh gaayab nazar aata. Saaf shabdon mein kahun to iss roshni ne uss ladki ko cover kar liya tha jiss kaaran se baahar se wo invisible ho gayi thi.

Uss ladki ki ye sab dekh kar saansein atakne lagi. Tabhi uske shock ko badhaata hua wo patthar jiske kareeb wo baithi thi do tukdon mein bant gaya aur jo cheez uss pathhar se baahar aayi usse dekh kar to uss ladki ki saansein laghbhag band hi ho chuki thi. Kyonki wo ek behadh hi daraawna saanp tha. Yes, a Snake. Uski appearance bahut hi ajeeb thi. Mostly uski Skin Safed rang ki thi par beech – beech mein kaale aur neele rang ki maujoodgi bhi dikh rahi thi. Saath hi uske oopar ek talwaar ki tasveer bhi bani huyi thi.

Achanak hi usne apna fan (sar) uthaya aur apna munh kholkar funkaar maarne laga. Ab to wo ladki apne aap ko mara hua samajhne lagi thi ke tabhi wo behosh ho gayi ya kahun ke behosh kar di gayi kyonki uske sar ke oopar ban chuka tha ek golden colour ka dhuaan. Aur ye sab dekh kar shayad wo saanp bhi hairaan reh gaya tha kyonki wo idhar – udhar apna sar ghumaane laga tha. Tabhi wo saanp ek gol chakkar mein ghoomne laga aur jab uski speed itni zyada ho gayi ke wo dikhna hi band ho chala, tabhi...

Wo saanp ek aadmi mein badal gaya. 6 feet se zyada ki height, shareer par kaale kapde, munh se baahar latakte do bade zehrile daant aur haath mein maujood ek talwaar. Uski appearance kisi ko bhi dara dene ke liye kaafi thi. Wo uss golden colour ke dhuen ki taraf jalti huyi nigaahon se dekhne laga.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Kaun ho tum!? Himmat kaise huyi mere raaste mein aane ki. Hisss... Hisss...

Tabhi uss dhuen mein hulchul hone lagi aur achanak hi usmein se aawaz aayi,

DHUAAN : Tu jaanta hai ke kispar hamla karne jaa rha tha tu??

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Wo mera shikaar thi. Main uske saath kuchh bhi karun. Tu kaun hai rokne waala? Hisss... Hisss...

DHUAAN : Hahahaha... Shikaar! Tu inka shikaar karega!! Hahahaha...

SNAKE : Hisssss... Hisssss... Ab tu dekh, mujhe lalkaarne ka nateeja!! Hisssss... Hisssss...

Aur us aadmi numa saanp ne uss camera waali ladki ki taraf foonk maar di. Ye koyi aesa – waisa hamla nahi tha balki usne apna zeher foonka tha uss ladki ke oopar. Par tabhi apne aap hi uss zeher ki direction badli aur wo oopar ki taraf behta hua uss Golden Dhuyen mein sama gaya aur ye dekh kar uss Saanp ki aankhen fati ki fati reh gayi. Wo hairaan pareshaan sa maamla samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

DHUAAN : Kaha tha na maine bewakoof ke tu inhe chhoo bhi nahi sakta.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Nahi ye naamumkin hai, mera zehar... Mera zehar bekaar kaise ho sakta hai??LORD ki shakti hai mere zehar mein... Ye koyi maamoli zehar nahi tha ye mera...

DHUAAN : BOTIS ka zehar tha...

Ye sunkar ek baar firse uss aadmi roopi saanp ki aankhen hairat se fail gayi.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Tum kaun ho!? Kaun ho tum... Mujhe koyi aese hi nahi Pehchaan sakta. Hisss... Hisss...

DHUAAN : Tu na mujhe pehchaan sakta hai naa inhe jinpar tu hamla karne aaya tha. Jaa chala jaa yahaan se warna kahin maara naa jaaye!!

Wo Saanp apni taakat ko bhali bhaanti jaanta tha aur khud par poora yakeen bhi tha usse par jo kuchh abhi hua tha, specially uski identity koyi jaanta tha ye usse dara raha tha. Wo waapis apni saanp ki form mein lauta aur ussi patthar mein ghus gaya. Wo patthar bhi pehle ki hi tarah waapis se jud gaya. Wo Golden Dhuaan kuchh der wahin raha fir gaayab ho gaya.

Ab poore ilaake mein ek shaanti thi. Hawayein tham chuki thi aur kohra bhi hatt chuka tha. Wo sabhi log uss camera waali ladki ke kareeb aaye to usse neeche behosh gira paaya. Unmein se ek aur ladki ne uska sar apni god mein rakh liya aur uske gaalon ko thapthapaate huye usse uthaane lagi.

LADKI : Aankhen kholo... Aankhen kholo... Utho AHANA!!

Tabhi uss camera waali ladki ne apni aankhen kholi aur ek hi shabd chillate huye uthkar baith gayi aur wo shabd tha – “ARJUNNNNN...”

CITY : DELHI

LOCATION : JANPATH

Delhi ke Janpath ke paas hi ek khaali maidaan mein iss waqt khaad tha Main. Mere saamne khade the kuchh aadmi jo oonchi kad – kaathi ke hatte – katte bande the. Sabhi formal suit – boot pehne huye the. Tabhi,

Main : Tum sabko abhi ke abhi KOLKATA ke liye nikalna hai. Wahaan tumhe Vihaan milega. Tum sabko dhyaan rakhna hai ke uspar koyi bhi khatra naa aaye. Jiss kaam ke liye wo gaya hai wo bahut zyada zaroori hai aur agar uss kaam mein koyi chook huyi toh...

Maine sentence to adhoora chhod diya par meri aankhon mein dikh rahi darindagi se wo sabhi parichit the. Isiliye unhone kaanpte huye haan mein sar hila diya.

Maine aasman ki taraf dekha aur bas inhi shabdon ko budbudaya : Aur yahaan se shuru hoti hai...

“THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN...”




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[Naik]

CHAPTER – 1

{THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN}


UPDATE – 2

NEXT DAY :

CITY : MUMBAI

LOCATION : THAKUR VILLA

Jaante hi hain aap iss ghar ko to, filhaal iss ghar ke baahar khada tha Main. Waise to Zyadatar mera chehra sapaat aur aankhen sooni si hi raha karti hain par iss waqt ek krodh ki jawaala meri aankhon mein saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi. Mere haath mein do bags the, jinmein of course mera samaan tha. Tabhi gate ke paas khade ek guard ki nazar mujhpar padi aur fir uski aankhen failti chali gayi. Wo andar ki taraf bhaaga ek hi pankti ko laghbhag chillate huye – “Maalik... Maalik... Arjun Baba aa gaye!!”

Maine apne dimaag mein panap rahe anekon vichaaron ko jhatka aur andar ki taraf badh gaya. Main abhi ghar ki chaukhat par pahuncha hi tha ke andar ki taraf se laghbhag bhaagte huye ek buzurg vyakti aaye. Mujhe dekhkar unki aankhen bheegti chali gayi, wo kitne khush the iska andaza main laga paa raha tha. Maine apne bags ko chhoda aur unke paaon chhoo liye. Unhone mujhe uthaya aur apne gale se laga liya. Wo meri peeth par thapthapate huye aansoon baha rahe the, wahin unke peechhe hi kuchh aur shakhs bhi khade the. Jahaan unmein se do ko dekh kar mere chehre par halki khushi aayi wahin baaki dono ko dekh kar ek hi jhatke mein wo khushi kafoor ho gayi.

Khair, un buzurg vyakti joki mere Dadaji the, unhone kaafi derr mujhe gale lagaye rakhe aur jab wo alag huye to unke chehre par saare jahaan ki khushi thi. Unhone mere sar par haath fera aur,

DADAJI : Bahut waqt laga diya tune aane mein, bahut intezaar karwaya hai tune iss boodhe ko.

Fir, main unke peechhe ki taraf badha aur wahaan khade aadmi joki mere Chacha the unke paaon chhuye, wo bhi behadh garmjoshi se mujhse mile aur unke baad main Chachi se mila. Unhone sadaiv hi mujhe apne khud ke bete jaisa hi maana tha. To nischit hi unka behadh zyada emotional ho jaana laazmi tha. Khair, jab main in sabse mil liya to wahaan khade ek aur aadmi – aurat joki mere Maa – Baap the meri taraf badhne ko huye. Par tabhi maine apna haath aage kar diya, mere Jabde bhinche huye the aur aankhon mein ek tapish thi jisse un dono ne mehsoos kar liya tha. Wo ruk gaye aur laachari bhari nazron se mujhe dekhne lage. Abhi main kuchh aur sochta ke tabhi mujhe peechhe se ek aawaz aayi – “BHAIYAAAA...” jisse sunkar main palta.

Wahaan seedhiyon ke nazdeek khada tha ek ladka aur do ladkiyaan jinme se ek ladki (Anvita) par meri aankhen atak gayi thi. Wo bhi apalak mujhe hi nihaare jaa rahi thi. Ek chumbakiya taakat thi uski aankhon mein jo main unke alawa kahin aur dekh hi nahi paa raha tha. Wo chehra jiss se main sabse adhik prem karta tha, kitni mayoosi... Kitna gam, kitni peeda thi uske uss haseen rukhsaar par. Tabhi uske saath mein khadi ladki aur ladka (Sneha – Dhruv) meri aur bhaage aur mere gale lag gaye. Un dono ki aankhon mein bhi aansoon the, kuchh derr baad jab wo alag huye to maine dono ke sar par haath fera. Par iss dauraan meri nazren bas ussi chehre par hi atki huyi thi.

Wo dono bhi jaise mere mann ki baat samajh gaye the aur muskurate huye side hatt gaye. Main dheeme kadmon se uss ladki ki taraf badha aur uske saamne jaakar khada ho gaya. Maine apne kaanpte haath ko uthaya aur jaise hi uske chehre par sparsh karne waala tha wo palatkar seedhiyon se oopar ki taraf bhaag gayi. Main thaga sa khada usse jaate dekhta raha aur aakhir kaar kitne hi waqt baad meri aankhon se bhi neer chhalak hi gaya. Mujhe bahut ajeeb si anubhuti ho rahi thi uske jaane se, tabhi Sneha chalti huyi mere paas aayi aur mere kandhe par haath rakhkar boli,

SNEHA : Bhaiya, wo bahut zyada dard mein hai. Aapke jaane ke baad usne khudko ek shell mein band kar liya hai, yahaan tak ki kisi se baat tak nahi karti wo. Par maine kayi baar usse aapki photo se baatein karte dekha hai. Aap hi usse pehle jaisa bana sakte hain ab...

Main bina uski poori baat sune oopar ki taraf chal diya. Hamesha se uska aur mera kamra ek hi tha. Aur main abhi ussi kamre ke baahar khada tha. Baar – baar main apna haath utha raha tha par darwaaze tak pahunchte hi jaise uski shakti apna dum tod deti. Tabhi maine ek lambi saans kheenchi aur darwaaze ko halka sa jhatka de diya, agle hi pal wo khulta chala gaya. Wo kamra, wo bilkul waisa hi tha jaisa main usse chhod gaya tha bas ek cheez alag thi aur wo thi meri tasveeren... Kamre ki har deewar par bas meri hi tasveeren thi. Baaki uss kamre ka rang, arrangement ya fir sajaawat sab kuchh waisa hi tha. Yahaan tak ki wo sugandh jo ab tak mujhmein basi thi, wo bhi jeevant thi uss kamre mein.

Maine chaaron taraf nazar ghumaayi par wo kahin nahi thi lekin sisakne ki aawaz spasht sunaayi de rahi thi. Main dheeme kadmon se aage badha to paaya ke wo bistar ke doosri taraf neeche baithi aur ghutnon mein apna munh dabaaye ro rahi thi. Usse yun dekh kar mera kaleja kaanp gaya.Main uske nazdeek gaya aur ghutnon par baith gaya.

Maine apne kaanpte haathon se uska chehra uthana chaaha aur kuchh der baad kaamyab hua. Derr isliye kyonki usne virodh to poora kiya ke wo chehra chhippaye rakhe par kaamyab naa huyi. Wo lagaatar roye jaa rahi thi par meri taraf ek nazar bhi nahi daali.

MAIN : S... Sw... Sweet...

Main abhi wo shabd poora bhi nahi kar paaya tha ke usne waapis se apna sar jhatakte huye usse ghutnon mein daba liya aur bolo,

ANVI : Jaaiye, chale jaaiye... Unnnhh... Kyonn aaye ho ab... Unnhhh... Itne saal to yaad nahi aaya ke main bhi iss duniya mein hoon... Unhhh...

Mujhe aese laga maano ke meri saansein rukne lagi hon. Uske wo shabd pighle huye lohe ke samaan lage mujhe apne kaanon mein. Main wahaan ruk nahi paa raha tha, par fir bhi maine uske haathon ko thaama aur,

MAIN : Please... Please aesa mat bolo... Main sirf tere liye lauta hoon, please aesa mat kar, mujhe...

Aage ke shabd jaise halak mein hi reh gaye. Zubaan bhi daga kar chuki thi. Main ladkhadate kadmon se utha aur mud gaya. Ab tak meri aankhen bhi paani se tar ho chuki thi. Par jaise hi main aage badhne ko hua peechhe se usne meri ungli thaam li. Ye ehsaas... Iss ehsaas se main parichit tha, poori tarah se parichit tha. Wo jab bhi bachpan mein mujhe apne paas rokna chahti yunhi meri ungli thaam liya karti.

Aaj fir jaise wo wahi chhoti si bachi ban gayi thi. Main palta aur uski taraf dekha to paaya ke wo mujhe hi tak rahi thi. Ek guhaar thi, ek iltija thi uski aankhon mein jo mujhe keh rahi thi ke ab mat jaana... Ab kabhi mat jaana. Main ek baar firse neeche baith gaya aur uske chehre ko apne haathon mein thaam liya. Main bina kuchh bole ek tak usse hi dekhe jaa raha tha. Kuchh palon baad main uske chehre par jhuka aur uski dono aankhon par baari – baari se kiss kar di.

Bas shayad uske emotions trigger ho gaye aur wo ek jhatke mein mujhse lipat gayi aur foot – foot kar rone lagi. Main samajh raha tha ke wo kya feel kar rahi hogi aur isiliye maine usse rone diya aur uske sar par haath ferne laga. Naa jaane kab tak wo roti aur rahi aur jab shaant huyi to mujhse alag hokar mere chehre par kisses ki bauchhar kar di. Uska bartaav saaf dikha raha tha uska intezaar, uski tadap aur uski chahat.

Aur fir dobara mujhse lipat gayi aur mere seene par apne foolon se haathon se maarne lagi. Uski iss nadaani par mujhe rote huye bhi hansi aa gayi. Aaj kitne hi waqt baad main dil se muskuraya tha.Usne jab meri hansi ki aawaz suni to meri taraf yun dekhne lagi jaise wo Police mein ho aur main gunahgaar. Haalanki, gunahgaar to tha main, uska gunahgaar tha main jo mujhse sabse adhik prem karti thi. Tabhi wo hua jo maine kabhi socha naa tha, main jaise hi usse dobara gale lagaane ko hua,

“CHATTAAAAKKK...CHATTAAAAKKK...CHATTAAAAKKK...”

Ek ke baad ek teen thappad maare usne mere gaal par aur idhar main awaak sa munh faade usse dekhne laga. Agle hi pal usne dono haathon se meri shirt ka collar pakda aur apne chehre ki taraf mujhe kheench liya. Wo meri aankhon mein jhaankte huye boli,

ANVI : How dare you!! Aapki himmat kaise huyi mujhe akela chhodkar jaane ki. Jab aap jaante ho ke main aapke bina nahi reh sakti, fir kyon gaye mujhe chhodkar aur ab mann kiya to waapis aa gaye. Meri feelings, mere emotions ki koyi parwaah hi nahi hai. Main aapse kabhi baat nahi karungi... Kabhi nahi!!

Aur itne kehkar usne mujhe ek jhatke ke saath door kar diya. Main abhi bhi iss sab ko process karne ki koshish mein laga tha, jo mujhse kabhi tezz aawaaz mein baat tak nahi karti thi aaj usne mujhe teen – teen thappad raseed kar diye the. Tabhi, ek baar fir uski aankhon se aansoon tapakne lage, maine aage badhkar usse zor se khudmein bheench liya. Wo purzor Koshish kar rahi thi meri pakad se nikalne ki par maine yunhi usse jakde rakha.

MAIN : Please Maaf kar de mujhe. Chaahe to aur maar le par aese berukhi mat kar, please maaf karde...

Par wo aese hi meri pakad se chhootne ki koshish mein lagi rahi. Tabhi main uss se alag hua aur apni jeb se ek Kit – Kat nikaal kar uske saamne kar di. Ye uski favourite chocolate thi aur jab bhi wo udaas hoti thi ya mujhse rooth jaati thi, main aksar usse issi ke zariye manaya karta tha. Maine uski aankhon mein dekha aur kaha,

MAIN : Ab to Maaf karde SWEETY...

Uska nickname jiss se kewal main hi usse pukaara karta tha, aaj fir ye naam mere mukh se sunkar uske aansoon tham gaye aur wo apni jagmag aankhon se mujhe dekhne lagi. Maine apni baanhe faila di aur uski aur dekh kar haan mein sar hilaya, bas fir kya tha, ek prem poorn aalingan mein shaamil ho gaye hum dono. Jab hum alag huye to wo mere gaal par haath ferne lagi aur meri aur glaani bhari nazron se dekhne lagi.

ANVI : I'm Sorr...

MAIN : Shhh... Tera hakk hai!!

Wo kuchh aur kehti uss se pehle,

MAIN : Chal aa sona nahi hai tujhe!?

Aksar wo kisi naa kisi kaam se bachne ke liye neend ka bahaana kar meri god mein sar rakh kar so jaaya karti thi. Usne muskurate huye haan mein sar hila diya aur bed par meri god mein sar rakhkar let gayi. Main uske baalon ko sehlaate huye uske kandhe ko thapki dene laga jiske falswaroop wo kuchh derr mein so gayi aur main bhi uske chehre ko taakte huye neend ki vaadiyon mein kho gaya.


YESTERDAY (AFTER THE MANALI INCIDENT) :

CITY : MANALI

PLACE : NEW DAWN HOTEL & RESTAURANT

ROOM NO. 312...

Iss kamre mein maujood hain do ladkiyaan,ek to wahi Camera waali ladki aur doosri jisne uske behosh hone par usse jagaaya tha. So, jaise hi ye hosh mein aayi to “ARJUNNN” Shabd chillati huyi uthi. Iski condition aur dobara se mausam kharaab hone ke dar se iske saathi isse yahaan waapis le aaye aur iss waqt ye dono ladkiyaan yahaan iss kamre mein thi.

LADKI : AHANA tu theek hai na??

AHANA : Haan baba kitni baar poochhegi.

LADKI : Ab tension hogi to poochhungi hi naa! Waise ek baat bata tu mujhse baatein kabse chhippane lagi?

AHANA : Kyon pareshaan kar rahi hai bekaar mein.Tujhe pata to hai ke main tujhse kuchh nahi chhippati.

LADKI : Achha aesa hai, To jab tune Boyfriend bana liya hai to mujhe bataya kyun nahi!?

AHANA (Shocked) : Kya bakwaas kar rahi hai!? Mera Boyfriend, matlab kuchh bhi...

LADKI : Main bakwaas kar rahi hoon. To ye Arjun kaun hai?

ARJUN... Ye naam sunte hi ek alag sa connection feel hua usse iss naam se, iss naam waale insaan se. Wo apne jeevan mein ab tak kisi bhi Arjun se nahi mili thi par jaane kyon ek aakarshan, ek kashish thi iss naam mein jo usse sochne par majboor kar rahi thi.

LADKI : Dekha kaise sochne lagi! Soch le, bahaana soch le, ab hum to paraaye ho gaye hain tere liye... Ab hame kaahe bataaiyegi apne Saiyaan Ji ke baare mein!!

Ek naatakiya tone mein kahi thi ye baat usne apne honthon par ek sharaarti muskaan liye aur ”Saiyaan Ji” kehte waqt uska lehza kuchh adhik hi shaitaani tha.

AHANA : Bakwaas band karegi. Main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko...

LADKI : Sun rahe ho naa Gaaon waalon!! Kaise jhooth bol rahi hai ye ladki... “Main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko”!! Hey Bhagwaan, kitna badal gaya Insaan...

Usski nakal karte huye kahi thi wo line isne jisse sunkar Ahana bhi muskaaye bina naa reh saki.

AHANA : Bas kar drama company. Kaha naa main nahi jaanti kisi Arjun ko.

LADKI : Ae bhaav kyon khaati hai. Bata naa, kaisa hai dikhne mein,hot hai... Hot to hoga hi agar tune pasand kiya hai to!! Bata naa...

AHANA : Aeeee bas kar yahaan main jisse jaanti tak nahi tu pata nahi kya – kya soche jaa rahi hai.

LADKI : Fir tu uska naam lete huye kyon uthi!?

AHANA : Wahi to mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai. Main tujhe shuru se batati hoon. Main waterfall ki photos click kar rahi thi ke tabhi wo aandhi wageraah aane lagi. Fir wo kohra, uske baad shayad main behosh ho gayi. Jab main hosh mein aayi to uss se just pehle mujhe kuchh visions dikhe jo bilkul real lag rahe the.

VISION – 1 :

Ye scene hai ek Jungle ka jismein ek ladki jo aur koyi nahi balki Ahana hi hai, ek jheel ke kinaare baithi hai.Ek behadh hi khubsurat jheel hai ye jiski sundarta mein koyi bhi kho jaaye. Aas – paas bade – bade aur ghane pedd hain joki kuchh ajeeb si shapes aur sizes ke hain. Jheel mein kayi prakaar ki machhliyaan tairti dikh rahi hain kyonki uska paani bilkul transparent hai arthat ek dum swachh jal. Ahana ne ek long dress pehni huyi hai jaisi aksar royal families ki hoti hai. Tabhi ek ladki peechhe se bhaagte huye aati hai, uski dress bhi Ahana jaisi hi hai par chehra kuchh dhundhla dikh raha hai...

LADKI : Chal jaldi Ahana, wo aa gaye hain!!

Ye sunkar Ahana ki khushi dekhne yogya thi, wo bina kuchh kahe ya sune ek disha ki taraf bhaagti huyi chali gayi.

VISION – 2 :

Yahaan iss scene mein Do yuvak hain jo ek bheeshan yuddh mein lage huye hain. Dono ka hi chehra dhundhla sa hai. Dono ki shaktiyaan aapas mein takra rahi hain aur kuchh hi waqt mein ek yuvak ne doosre vyakti joki poore kaale kapdon mein tha usse neeche gira diya. Wo uske oopar antim prahaar karne hi waala tha ke tabhi...

KHAAACHHHHH...

Ek talwaar peechhe se uske chhati mein ghus gayi aur dard se jhoojhta hua jab wo palta to uski aankhen kuchh adhik hi failti chali gayi aur bas yahi shabd nikle uske munh se...

“ Dhokha... Dhokha... Badla lungaa main... Main Waapis Aaungaaaa...”

VISION – 3 :

Ye drishya hai ek behadh hi bade kamre ka jismein bistar par baithi hai ek ladki jiska pet foola hua hai aur spasht dikh raha hai ke wo Maa ban ne waali hai. Tabhi achanak hi uske daayen haath ki ek ungli mein pehni angoothi gaayab ho gayi. Wo pehle to chaunki par jaise hi usse ehsaas hua ke iska matlab kya hai uske munh se cheenkh nikal gayi – “NAHHHHHIIIIII...”

Aur issi cheenkh ke agle hi pal wo ladki raakh ke dher mein badal gayi!!

VISIONS FINISHED...

AHANA : Jaise hi ye Visions khatam huye mujhe ek chehra dikha aur apne aap hi meri aankhen khul gayi aur maybe wo Arjun naam bhi mere munh se nikla.

Wo ladki bas munh faade ye sab sun rahi thi, ab uske liye to ye cheez asaadharan hi thi.Khair, kuchh derr inki baatein chali fir Ahana kisi aur hi soch mein gum ho gayi.

AHANA (Mann Mein) : Sorry, KIARA... Par main wo Saanp waali baat tujhe nahi bata sakti. Tu Bharosa hi nahi karegi. Par mujhe uske baare mein pata lagaana hai. Wo Saanp bahut alag tha aur mujhe usse dekhkar itna gussa kyon aa raha tha. Jabki mujhe dar bhi lag raha tha. Dono feelings ek saath mein, kaise!?

Khair, Ahana ke alawa koyi aur bhi tha jispar kal ki uss ghatna ka gehra asar hua tha. Aaiye jaan lete hain uska haal bhi.


UNIDENTIFIED LOCATION :

Wo Saanp jiska naam shayad BOTIS tha, uss pathhar mein ghus gaya. Aur uske baad ek ajeeb si jagah par prakat hua par iss waqt wo apne human form mein tha arthat aadam roop mein. Wo iss waqt khada tha ek raakshas jaise dikhne waale praani ke saamne. Usne laal rang ke kapde pehne huye the, haath mein ek Bhaala tha aur sar par do seeng (horns) bhi maujood the. Wo jalti huyi nigaahon se iss saanp ko dekh raha tha aur iss bechaare ki jaan halak mein atki huyi thi.

AADMI : Himmat kaise huyi tumhaari khaali haath lautne ki. Wo ladki, kahaan hain uski shaktiyaan!?

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... COMMANDER maafi... Maafi... Ye gulaam aapse maafi maangta hai... Main uss ladki ko maarne hi waala tha ke tabhi mera zehar kisi ne apne andar samaa liya!! Hisss... Hisss...

Wo aadmi jhat se apni jagah se uth gaya aur aankhen faade iss Aadmi roopi saanp ko dekhne laga.

AADMI : Kya kaha tumne, Tumhara zehar, kisine apne mein samaa liya. Asambhav!!! LORD ki power ko koyi kaise rok sakta hai.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Main bhi hairaan hoon COMMANDER. Main aapko sab kuchh batata hoon...

Iske baad usne poore scene ka bakhaan uss aadmi ke saamne kar diya. Wo aadmi hairaan pareshaan sa ho gaya par asli dhamaaka abhi baaki tha.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... COMMANDER... Ek aur baat bhi hai... Hisss... Hisss...

AADMI : Kya!?

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Maine uss Dhuen mein kisi ki urjaa mehsoos ki thi. Hisss... Hisss...

AADMI : Kiski Urjaa...

Aur jo naam uss Saanp ne kaha usse sunkar uss Aadmi ka halak sookh gaya. Wo dhamm se neeche gira aur apni aankhon aur saanson ko kaaboo karta hua kuchh sochne laga. Par ek baat to tay thi ke uski jaan Laghbhag nikal hi gayi thi. Kaaran wo naam jiski urjaa ki charcha ho rahi thi...

SNAKE : Usmein “STYGIAN” ki urjaa thi wo bhi bahut zyada maatra mein!!




Iss Update Mein Itna Hi... Next Update tak ke liye Bye – Bye...



Bane Rahiye!

Bahot behtareen
Shaandaar update bhai
Lajawab

 

[Sabhi91]

CHAPTER – 1

{THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN}


UPDATE – 1

CITY : DELHI

LOCATION : NATIONAL COLLEGE OF ENGINEERING

“ARJUN... You're Late...”

Ye shabd kahe the ek formal suit ko pehne vyakti ne jo iss College ke Convocation Hall ki entry ke paas khade the. In shabdon ko recieve karne waale end par tha ek ladka jo koyi aur nahi balki “MAIN” hi tha.Jiske jawaab mein,

“Sorry Sir, won't happen again!!”

SIR ( Smiles ) : I know My Boy... Go take your seat.

Main bina kuchh kahe bas sar haan mein hilaakar aage badh gaya. Jab main hall mein pahuncha to wahaan baithe zyadatar students aur Staff ki nazren bhi mujhpar hi tik gayi. Main chalta hua middle row mein baithe ek ladke ke bagal mein baith gaya.

LADKA : Aa gaya tu, kya baat aaj late kaise hua?

MAIN : Maine Saara intezaam kar diya hai. Tujhe aaj hi nikalna hai!!

Wo meri baat sunkar ek dum serious ho gaya. Fir kuchh sochkar,

LADKA : Hmm... Thik hai. Par wahaan se aage kaise jaana hai ye tune abhi tak nahi batya hai.

MAIN : Kuaan pyaase ke paas nahi aata... Pyaasa Kuyen ke paas jaata hai. Tujhe bhi wahaan pahunchkar hi pata chal jaayega.

Usne mere tark par bas muskurakar sar hila diya. Tabhi, hall mein ek shaanti chhaa gayi. Reason – College ke Dean jo Stage par pahunch chuke the.

DEAN : So, Hello All the Genius Students of NCE. Jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain ke aaj hum sab yahaan Convocation ceremony ke liye ikattha huye hain. Main aapko batana chahunga ke iss baar bhi hamare Institute ka Result 100% raha hai.

Ye sunkar sabhi students ke chehre khil gaye. Aakhir fail hone ki chinta se mukt jo ho gaye the.

DEAN : Aaj hamare beech Delhi ke Education Minister bhi maujood hain aur wo Institute ke Top 3 rankers ko apne shubh haathon se degree pradaan karenge. So without wasting any time, main unhe stage par bulana chahunga ke wo aayen aur toppers ko puraskrit karen.

Iske baad wo Minister stage par pahunche aur jo ladki 3rd thi usse Graduation ki degree aur ek Trophy di.

DEAN : Ab, baari hai uss student ki jisne College mein 2nd rank achieve kiya hai – VIHAAN SINGH...

Iss naam ki ghoshna par mere saath mein baitha ladka khush hote huye stage ki taraf badh gaya. Ji haan ye Vihaan hi tha, mera param mitra. Usse bhi uski degree aur award se samaanit kiya gaya.

DEAN : And ab baari hai Institute ke Topper ki aur mujhe ye batate huye behadh khushi ho rahi hai ke iss baar jisne Hamare College mein first rank haasil kiya hai wahi University Topper bhi hai & the name is – ARJUN THAKUR...

Sabhi chhatron ke sar apne aap hi meri aur ho gaye. Main bina kisi adhik excitement ko dikhaaye utha aur stage ki taraf badh gaya. Stage par pahunchkar maine Dean aur Special Guest dono ko hi greet kiya. Prize ke taur par mujhe degree aur trophy ke alawa ek All India Scholarship mili, jiske falswaroop Main kisi bhi college se Free Of Cost Post-graduation kar sakta tha.

Iske baad kuchh derr tak ye programme chala aur fir saare students ko disperse kar diya gaya. Mujhe aur saath hi Vihaan ko bhi sabhi congratulate kar rahe the par jahaan mera chehra bhaavheen tha wahin Vihaan kaafi chintit lag raha tha. Main uske paas gaya,

MAIN : Kyon pareshaan ho raha hai!? Kuchh nahi hoga. Chill kar, marne nahi dunga tujhe filhaal main.

VIHAAN : Filhaal...

Maine bas usse dekh kar ek shaitaani smile bikher di. Hum dono College se nikalkar apne Flat par pahunche aur Vihaan ek bag uthakar Airport ki taraf nikal gaya.

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Ek bahut hi ajeeb si jagah hai ye, aas – paas kisi insaan ya jaanwar ka to kya, ped – paudhon tak ka naam – o – nishaan nahi hai. Zameen ka rang bhi ajeeb hai, laal gehra laal maano yahaan khoon ki holi kheli gayi ho. Waise to filhaal subah ka samay hai par yahaan chaaron taraf ujaale ka ek katra tak nahi hai. Andhere ki chaadar se dhaki ye jagah sachmein behadh khaufnaak hai.

“ Apollyon Nizrin Apollyon...
Jinvir Sikliosis Apollyon!!
Kinhit girden Hitrit Apollyon...
Hixxot Hixxot Apollyon Apollyon!!

Hobden Ristik Nerin Beleth...
Jindin Deavin Fillin Beleth!!
Gonnin Gitris Dinen Beleth...
Claxxot Claxxot Beleth Beleth!! ”

Ye shabd the jo fizaon mein goonj rahe the. Jo bhi in shabdon ko bol raha tha uski aawaz nischit hi behadh dheemi thi par in shabdon se jo intensity Paida ho rahi thi wo kaan se khoon nikaal dene ka maada rakhti thi. Khair, yahaan aas – paas kahin koyi bhi ghar ya kuchh bhi aesa nazar nahi aa raha tha par aawaz saaf sunaayi de rahi thi.

Ohhh!! Ye aawaz to zameen ke neeche se utpann ho rahi hai. Chaliye aapko Zameen ke neeche ke drishya se bhi ru – baroo karaya jaaye. Adbhut, yahi shabd niklata hai munh se ye dekhne ke baad. Kaha jaata hai ke Paatal Lok zameen ke neeche hai aur ye uska live example tha. Ek behadh hi daraavni aur badsoorat jagah. Chaaron taraf sookhe huye khoon ke nishaan, kankaal aur kayi saare hathiyaar bhi maujood hain. Par kamaal ki baat ye hai ke ye sabhi hathiyaar behadh hi ajeeb hain. Maano ke Puraane Zamaane se laaye gaye hon!! Dhanush, Bhaala, Talwaar aur inhi ke bhai – bandhu samajh sakte hain aap in hathiyaaron ko.

Iss jagah ke beechon – beech kuchh ajeeb se jeev – jantu maujood the. Unki appearance se lag raha tha jaise wo sab pathhar ke bane ho. Ya fir ek bade se pathhar par nakkashi karke unhe banaya gaya ho. Unki unchaayi kareeban 8–9 feet hogi aur ginti thi 5. Yahi the wo musicians jo upar likhi gayi lines bol rahe the ya chinghaad rahe the pata nahi. Wo sab ek bistar ke chaaron taraf khade the aur uss bistar par pada tha ek ajeeb sa praani. Uska chehra nahi dekha ja sakta tha kyonki uske oopar ek kaale rang ka dhuaan maujood tha par uska baaki shareer kaafi ajeeb sa tha. Uspar itni drawings bani thi ke samajh nahi aa raha tha ke Uske shareer par tattoos hain ya Tattoos par uska shareer.

Khair, wahin par ek roshni chamak rahi thi aur wo ek darwaaza sa lag raha tha. Kyonki jo bed par maujood shakhs tha uske munh se lagaatar nikal raha kaala dhuaan uss roshni numa darwaaze par jaakar gayab ho raha tha.

Kuchh derr tak yahi prakriya chali aur uske baad bistar par pada shakhs gaayab ho gaya. Wahin wo paancho Patthar ke bane jeev apni – apni jagah par gir gaye jaise behosh ho chuke hon. Ab wahaan agar kuchh tha to sirf wo roshni jismein se ek hi aawaz sunaayi de rahi thi –

“ Hahahahah... Hahahahah... Hahahahah... ”

CITY : MUMBAI

LOCATION : THAKUR VILLA

Jiss ghar ki charcha Introduction mein huyi thi wahi ghar, ya agar bangla kahun to zyada better hoga. Iss ghar ke ek kamre mein maujood hain ek ladki aur uske saath hai ek ladka...

LADKA : Pata nahi kab sab theek hoga!?

LADKI : Hmmm... Ab to bas unka intezaar hai. Ek baar wo aa jaayen to shayad sab kuchh sahi ho paaye.

LADKA : Right, par mujhe thodi tension bhi ho rahi hai kahin sab kuchh ulta naa ho jaaye.

LADKI : Tu hamesha manhoos hi rahiyo. Kabhi bhi positive to sochega nahi tu.

LADKA : SNEHA... Positive baaton se hi sab kuchh nahi ho jaata. Tu khud soch agar unke aane se problem aur badh gayi to? Kya guarantee hai ke wo aakar aasani se sab kuchh bhula denge?

SNEHA : I wish ke sab kuchh sahi ho jaaye DHRUV...

DHRUV : Hope so too... Chalo kam se kam ANVI to theek ho hi jaayegi unke aane se!!

SNEHA : Ye tune sahi kaha, ek wahi hain jo usse waapis se puraane waali mastikhor ladki bana sakte hain.

DHRUV : Wo din... Main bahut miss karta hoon un dinon ko. Kitna achha time tha naa, hum sab saath milkar khela karte the.

Darwaaze par khadi ek ladki in dono ki baatein sun rahi thi aur shayad wo bhi wahi chahti thi jo ye dono chahate the. Wo inke paas hi andar gayi aur,

LADKI : Tum dono tension mat lo wo bahut samajhdar hai. Dekhna wo aakar sab kuchh sahi kar dega!!

In dono ke chehron par bhi khushi ki lakeerein dikhne lagi.

SNEHA : Kaash aesa hi ho Di. Fir hum paancho milkar firse pehle jaisi dhoom machaayenge.

LADKI : Haan tujhe to bas uchhal kood hi karni hai...

SNEHA : Kya HIMANI Di aap bahut hi boring ho!!

HIMANI : Chal chal ab thoda kitaaben bhi khol ke dekh le. Kahin baad mein roti fire ke main fail ho gayi.

SNEHA : Main nahi hoti fail. Waise Di Kab aa rahe hain Bhai? Aapko to phone kiya hi hoga unhone!?

HIMANI : Hmm... Keh to raha tha ke kal aa jaayega. Baaki uske mood ka kaunsa kuchh pata rehta hai.

Kuchh derr tak inki baat cheet chali fir ye sabhi apne – apne kaamo mein mashgool ho gaye. Issi bangle ke ek alag kamre mein bistar par akeli gum sum si baithi hai ek ladki. Bed se tek lagaaye side waali khidki se baahar ki taraf dekh rahi hai. Jaane kin khayalon mein khoyi hai wo. Tabhi usne apne pillow ke neeche se ek tasveer nikaali aur uspar haath ferne lagi.

Dard to nischit hi tha uske chehre, aankhon mein mayoosi bhi saaf dikh rahi thi par fir bhi uski aankhon mein aansoon nahi the. Wo shaant thi, behadh shaant. Jaise ke khud ke andar apne saare dukhon ko samete jaa rahi ho. Kisi ke intezaar mein, kisi kandhe ke intezaar mein jispar sar rakh kar wo apne ashkon ko bahaa sake.

Uske antarmann mein bas ek hi baat chal rahi thi, ek hi tasveer chal rahi thi aur ussi tasveer ko yaad karte huye wo soch rahi thi :

“ I miss you Bhai... I miss you so much!! Kab aaoge aap, aap to mujhe bhool Gaye hona. Bhool gaye ho ke aapki ek behen bhi hai, jo aapke bina nahi reh sakti, please mere paas aa jaao bhai. Please!! ”

Usne uss tasveer ko apne seene se laga liya jaise wo uss photo se gale mil rahi ho, aur ek gehri neend mein chali gayi.

PLACE : THAKUR & CO.

Desh ke sabse badi business mein se ek, THAKUR & CO.. ka ye office jahan hum maujood hain, ye office hi kaafi hai batane ke liye ke kitni badi company hai ye. Iss office ke ek Cabin mein baithe hain ek vyakti, cabin ke baahar name plate par likha hua tha – RAJVEER THAKUR [M.D.]...

Wo yahaan baithe kisi gehri soch mein gum hain. Unke saamne ek aur aadmi bhi maujood hai aur unhe sochon mein gum dekh kar wo bhi haalat bhali – bhaanti samajh rahe hain. Tabhi wo khoye – khoye hi bole,

RAJVEER : Kya wo mujhe maaf karega!?

AADMI : Kya kaha Bhaisahab Aapne??

RAJVEER : SAMARTH... wo kabhi mujhe maaf kar paayega? Main kitna bura baap hoon naa jo apni hi aulaad ke sath ye sab kiya.

SAMARTH kuchh nahi bole bas apne bade bhai ki taraf hi dekhte rahe,

RAJVEER : Tum batao Samarth... Kya wo mujhe maaf karega??

Unhone ek lambi saans chhodi aur bole,

SAMARTH : Bhaisahab, agar aapne usse maara hota peeta hota, daanta hota, gaaliyan di hoti, yahaan tak ki jaan se bhi maar diya hota... Tab bhi haste huye ye sab sweekar kar leta par... (Pause) Par uss sabke kaaran jo haalat Anvi ki huyi hai aapko lagta hai uske liye wo kabhi aapko maaf kar paayega!?

Wo bhi nishabd se ho gaye the iss baat par aur dobara se apni sochon mein kho gaye.

CITY : MANALI

PLACE : JOGINI FALLS

Manali mein stith ye ek bahut hi manmohak jharna jiski khubsurti dekhte hi banti hai. Issi jharne ke kareeb haath mein camera liye khadi hai ek ladki, aur chaaron taraf ke view ki tasveeren click kar rahi hai. Iss ladki ke nazdeek hi maujood hain kayi aur ladke – ladkiyan bhi, prateet hota hai jaise group mein trip par aaye hon ye sabhi.

Uss camera waali ladki ka dhyaan keval photos kheenchne par hi laga hua hai ke tabhi wahaan achanak se hi tezz hawaayein chalne lagti hain. Jo kuchh hi palon mein aandhi ka roop le chuki thi. Wo ladki wahin ek patthar ke paas baith gayi kyonki abhi chal paana sambhav nahi tha. Wahin uske saath ke baaki log bhi paas hi kisi na kisi cheez ke nazdeek baith gaye.

Tabhi, aasman mein bijli ki garjana hone lagi aur ek dhundh si fiza mein failne lagi. Kuchh hi palon mein kohre ke kaaran visibility shunya ho chuki thi. Wahaan maujood koyi bhi aas – paas ka kuchh nahi dekh paa raha tha. Tabhi uss Camera waali ladki ke paas ek prakaash fail gaya. Par agar baahar se koyi dekhta bhi to wahaan sab kuchh gaayab nazar aata. Saaf shabdon mein kahun to iss roshni ne uss ladki ko cover kar liya tha jiss kaaran se baahar se wo invisible ho gayi thi.

Uss ladki ki ye sab dekh kar saansein atakne lagi. Tabhi uske shock ko badhaata hua wo patthar jiske kareeb wo baithi thi do tukdon mein bant gaya aur jo cheez uss pathhar se baahar aayi usse dekh kar to uss ladki ki saansein laghbhag band hi ho chuki thi. Kyonki wo ek behadh hi daraawna saanp tha. Yes, a Snake. Uski appearance bahut hi ajeeb thi. Mostly uski Skin Safed rang ki thi par beech – beech mein kaale aur neele rang ki maujoodgi bhi dikh rahi thi. Saath hi uske oopar ek talwaar ki tasveer bhi bani huyi thi.

Achanak hi usne apna fan (sar) uthaya aur apna munh kholkar funkaar maarne laga. Ab to wo ladki apne aap ko mara hua samajhne lagi thi ke tabhi wo behosh ho gayi ya kahun ke behosh kar di gayi kyonki uske sar ke oopar ban chuka tha ek golden colour ka dhuaan. Aur ye sab dekh kar shayad wo saanp bhi hairaan reh gaya tha kyonki wo idhar – udhar apna sar ghumaane laga tha. Tabhi wo saanp ek gol chakkar mein ghoomne laga aur jab uski speed itni zyada ho gayi ke wo dikhna hi band ho chala, tabhi...

Wo saanp ek aadmi mein badal gaya. 6 feet se zyada ki height, shareer par kaale kapde, munh se baahar latakte do bade zehrile daant aur haath mein maujood ek talwaar. Uski appearance kisi ko bhi dara dene ke liye kaafi thi. Wo uss golden colour ke dhuen ki taraf jalti huyi nigaahon se dekhne laga.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Kaun ho tum!? Himmat kaise huyi mere raaste mein aane ki. Hisss... Hisss...

Tabhi uss dhuen mein hulchul hone lagi aur achanak hi usmein se aawaz aayi,

DHUAAN : Tu jaanta hai ke kispar hamla karne jaa rha tha tu??

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Wo mera shikaar thi. Main uske saath kuchh bhi karun. Tu kaun hai rokne waala? Hisss... Hisss...

DHUAAN : Hahahaha... Shikaar! Tu inka shikaar karega!! Hahahaha...

SNAKE : Hisssss... Hisssss... Ab tu dekh, mujhe lalkaarne ka nateeja!! Hisssss... Hisssss...

Aur us aadmi numa saanp ne uss camera waali ladki ki taraf foonk maar di. Ye koyi aesa – waisa hamla nahi tha balki usne apna zeher foonka tha uss ladki ke oopar. Par tabhi apne aap hi uss zeher ki direction badli aur wo oopar ki taraf behta hua uss Golden Dhuyen mein sama gaya aur ye dekh kar uss Saanp ki aankhen fati ki fati reh gayi. Wo hairaan pareshaan sa maamla samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

DHUAAN : Kaha tha na maine bewakoof ke tu inhe chhoo bhi nahi sakta.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Nahi ye naamumkin hai, mera zehar... Mera zehar bekaar kaise ho sakta hai??LORD ki shakti hai mere zehar mein... Ye koyi maamoli zehar nahi tha ye mera...

DHUAAN : BOTIS ka zehar tha...

Ye sunkar ek baar firse uss aadmi roopi saanp ki aankhen hairat se fail gayi.

SNAKE : Hisss... Hisss... Tum kaun ho!? Kaun ho tum... Mujhe koyi aese hi nahi Pehchaan sakta. Hisss... Hisss...

DHUAAN : Tu na mujhe pehchaan sakta hai naa inhe jinpar tu hamla karne aaya tha. Jaa chala jaa yahaan se warna kahin maara naa jaaye!!

Wo Saanp apni taakat ko bhali bhaanti jaanta tha aur khud par poora yakeen bhi tha usse par jo kuchh abhi hua tha, specially uski identity koyi jaanta tha ye usse dara raha tha. Wo waapis apni saanp ki form mein lauta aur ussi patthar mein ghus gaya. Wo patthar bhi pehle ki hi tarah waapis se jud gaya. Wo Golden Dhuaan kuchh der wahin raha fir gaayab ho gaya.

Ab poore ilaake mein ek shaanti thi. Hawayein tham chuki thi aur kohra bhi hatt chuka tha. Wo sabhi log uss camera waali ladki ke kareeb aaye to usse neeche behosh gira paaya. Unmein se ek aur ladki ne uska sar apni god mein rakh liya aur uske gaalon ko thapthapaate huye usse uthaane lagi.

LADKI : Aankhen kholo... Aankhen kholo... Utho AHANA!!

Tabhi uss camera waali ladki ne apni aankhen kholi aur ek hi shabd chillate huye uthkar baith gayi aur wo shabd tha – “ARJUNNNNN...”

CITY : DELHI

LOCATION : JANPATH

Delhi ke Janpath ke paas hi ek khaali maidaan mein iss waqt khaad tha Main. Mere saamne khade the kuchh aadmi jo oonchi kad – kaathi ke hatte – katte bande the. Sabhi formal suit – boot pehne huye the. Tabhi,

Main : Tum sabko abhi ke abhi KOLKATA ke liye nikalna hai. Wahaan tumhe Vihaan milega. Tum sabko dhyaan rakhna hai ke uspar koyi bhi khatra naa aaye. Jiss kaam ke liye wo gaya hai wo bahut zyada zaroori hai aur agar uss kaam mein koyi chook huyi toh...

Maine sentence to adhoora chhod diya par meri aankhon mein dikh rahi darindagi se wo sabhi parichit the. Isiliye unhone kaanpte huye haan mein sar hila diya.

Maine aasman ki taraf dekha aur bas inhi shabdon ko budbudaya : Aur yahaan se shuru hoti hai...

“THE QUEST FOR STYGIAN...”




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Bane Rahiye!

Superb bro.....
Ye update bahut hi kamal ka tha. Lagta hai ye story meri ummid se kahi zayada romanchak hone wala hai.
Aapse request hai ki story mai suspense or romance banaye rakhe wo v balance karke agar adhik romance v ho jata hai to story se interest kam hone lagta hai. Is liye dono ka balance hona bahut jaruri hai....
Aap ki lekhni se to ye nahi lagta ki aap koi naye writter hai balki bahut hi experienced writter lag rahe hai. Isly mere kahne ka koi matlab nhi rah jata hai aap ye baatein bhala bhati jante honge....

Aapke agle update ka intezar rahega....