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Fantasy Aryamani:- A Pure Alfa Between Two World's

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वेयरवोल्फ और उसके शिकार की अहम जानकारी


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Ye to saaf hai hai ki aarya yaha kisi maksad se aaya hai, pariwar me aarya kafi lokpriya hai aese peso aur pyar ki barish ho rhi hai ki koi kya hi kahe, pariwar me bhi bahut pyar hai aur unke bich tikhi nok jhok dikhana nain bhai ki speciality hai, kher aarya Khushi 2 ready to ho rha hai, magar college me hangama jabardast hone ki ummid hai ab ja bhi BMW se rha hai to centre of attraction to banega hi, dekhte hai kaha le chalti ye kahani aage
Haan aapne bilkul sahi andaja lagaya 4 sal baad aise hi nahi ladka lauta hai lekin lautne ke pichhe ki vajah aur uss vajah se jo rayta hua usse jab match karenge to ek hi baat niklega... Bsdk aaya hi kyon phone par hi pata kar leta... :D ... Khair baat jo bhi hai update 50 tak hi open hoga tabtak andaza lagate rahiye :D

Baki college ka scene aaj se shuru hai... Dekhiye hota kya hai..
 

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Nain भाई, लास्ट के दो अप्डेट्स पढ़ कर तो बस यही लगा कि गिफ्ट और पैसों की बरसात हो रही है।
खैरियत है कि कहानी है, वरना हार्ट फैल ही करवा दोगे आप तो।
Hahahaha... Dekhiye aap to jante hi hain... Main thoda to deta hi nahi apne kisi charecter ko... Ekadh ko jane dijiye :D isliye dil majboot karke padha kijiye :D
 

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Awesome update nain sir

Aapke too young too old story ke bich me rokne ka jo bhi dukh tha wo is story ko read karne ke bad ab utna feel nahi ho raha hai.
story ke abhi tak ke sare update maine kal night me hi read kiye aur kya shaandar story likhi hai aapne
aapki har story ko padhkar aisa lagta hai ki bas aur koi story hai hi nahi aur bs ye story chalti hi rahe
jab aapne love story based stories likhi hai to lagta hai ki aap love stories ko behtar tarike se explain kar pate hai but jab aapki fantasy based story padhti hu to uska to level hi kuch aur hi hota hai aur shayad yahi ek ache writer ki nishani hoti hai ki wo jis bhi tarah ki story likhe use hi best bana deta hai

Ab aate hai aapki is story par jisme aapki story ki shuruwat hui do dosto se jo gangtonk me rahte hai dono hi pariwarik taur par sampann pariwar se belong karte hai lekin done ko hi khatro se khelna pasand hai aur inki yahi bat inhe khas banati hai.
Story me jaha aryamani ek samajhdar insan hai wahi uska dost nishant thoda dilfaink kism ka banda hai.
Aryamani ki pahle ek love story rah chuki hai jisse wo bichad gaya aur jab uski body ko jangal me ek ghar ke backyard me dekha tb use pata chala ki asal me wo ek warewolf thi. uski maut ke gam me aryamani warewolfs ke ek jhundh me jakar fas gaya jaha uski ache se li gayi:winkiss: uske bad story ke agle part main story ke dusre kirdaro ko bhi dikhaya aapne jisme pramukh taur par prahri sanstha hai jiska kam insano ko supernetural powers se bachane ka hai

Ab dekhna ye hai ki ab kyoki arya bhi ek warewolf hai aur prahri sanstha se jude log uske hi pariwar ke log hai to wo log arya ke warewolf hone ki bat ko kaise pacha pate hai.
Sath hi sath ye bhi abhi to rahasya hi bana hua hai ki arya kaise un warewolfs ke jhund se bachkar nikal paya? ye kuch sawal hai jinke abhi jawab milne baki hai.

Ek aur bat sir mera personally aisa manna hai ki story ki pace thodi jyada hai aur mujhe lagta hai aapko ise thoda slow karna chahiye baki aap mujhse behtar jante hai.

Overall story ka plot bahut hi shaandar hai aur ummed rahegi ki ye bhi aapki dusri stories ki tarah hi super duper hit rahegi.
Thanks a lot nitya ji... Kya bhar bhar ke tarif kiya hai aapne... 2 raat se sapne me aapke comment hi dikh rahe the... Thankoo sooo much...

Ab aate hai prahari aur arya ke wolf hone par to... Uska maza apne poore ufan par hoga rahi baat wolf house aur Germany ki to wahan ka toofa update 70 se 75 ke bich ho sameta jayega... Tabtak thoda dhairya rakhiye... Aur aise hi lallantop comment dete rahiye... :woohoo:

Rahi baat story ke pace ki shurwaat 50 update ka pace high hai... Uske baad aapko wave pace dekhne milega jahan kabhi story high pace me rahegi aur fir dhire se low hokar fir se high hogi... Naya experiment hai... Dekhiye kitna lubhata hai yah reader ko...
 

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Aapki shikayat dur kar di hu sir abhi story par comment kari hu to agar kuch galat likha ho to maaf karna sir kyoki likhne ki jyada aadat nahi hai sir to kuch bhi galat ho to ignore kijiyega
Galat to mujhe kahin kuch dikha hi nahi.. baki aap itna kahti hai to maan lete hain.. kuch galat likha hoga... Ignore bhi kar dete hain... Wo kya hai apne audience se pange lene ki khata se jab superstar khak ho sakte hain fir meri kya bisat :D
 
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