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Fantasy Aryamani:- A Pure Alfa Between Two World's

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awesome update sir

to arya ko pareshaan karne wale ab uske uske sath rahne walo ko bhi nishana bana rahe hai. inn logo ko pata nahi hai na ki ye log kis aag me hath dal rahe hai marenge sale sab ke sab.

palak bhi kamal hai apne gharwalo ko batakar jaa rahi hai ki wo kisi ke ladke ke sath ghumne jaa rahi hai aur use ye viswas bhi hai ki uske gharwale uski jasoosi nahi karenge aur palak ke ghar walo ko bhi apni beti par pura bharosa hai ki wo kuch galat nhi karegi. ise kahte hai idol family sab ka ek dusre par bharosa.

arya aur palak ko bhi ghumne ke liye itni khatrnak jagah hi mili jaha sabka jala hi nishedh hai dekhte hai abhi yaha koi action dekhne ko milta hai ya nahi.

to arya ko pareshaan karne wala kon hai iska arya ko pahle se pata hai. aur ab lagta hai arya bhi action ke mood me aa raha hai dhire dhire ab dekhte hai somwar ko arya kitno ki band bajata hai.

lagta hai palak ko bhi shak to hone laga hai ki arya ka warewolfs ke sath koi to sambhandh hai dekhte hai use sachayi kab pata lagti hai

kul milakar kahani abhi puri tarah se suspense me hi chal rahi hai aur un suspence par se parda sirf nain sir hi utha sakte hai ab wo suspense kab khatam karte hai ye to unke mood par hi dipend karta hai.

eagerly waiting for next todu fodu update sir
Aap na kahani ke mood ko samajhti nahi hai... Abhi Aryamani khud sabko samjhne ki kosis kar raha hai shayad isliye abhi marenge nahi koi :D ..... Aur jab ummid nahi hogi tab maar kaat karwana hai... :D

Nahi suspense ko banaye rakhne ka bahut jyada ko irada hi nahi hai... Ek suspense jayega tabhi yo dusra suspense aayega.... Jald hi sab pata chalega aur ummid hai story aap sab ka entertainment poora banaye rakhegi...
 

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कहानी की मोड़ जितनी रोचक होता जा रहा है शायद उतना ही खुंखार भी
हर तरफ साजिशों की मकड़जाल दिख रहा है
पर नायक हर शख्स एवं हर चाल से वाकिफ़ है
देखते हैं यह मोड़ आगे कहाँ ले जाता है
कौन पर्दे के पीछे है
नायक कैसे पहुँचता है
हाँ और एक बात
मैं उत्सुक हूँ नायक की प्रेम निवेदन देखने के लिए
Hahaha.... Dhire dhire kahani apne sabab par hogi... Makajaal hatenge banege .. bus aise hi sath nibhate rahe ...
 
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