Sci-FI Aryan - the rule maker

[Rohini19]

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[Abhishek Kumar98]

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Bhai ek month ho Gaya

 

[Emre]

Update 1

Aadhi raat mai
ahhhhhhhh nahiiiiiii......

Aryan jor se chilate huye apne nind se jaag uthaa

ye Aryan kaa is hafte kaa chatta bura sapna tha..

jab se usne uss panoti pathar ko ghar pe laya tha tab se uske sath kuch bhi acha nahi ho raha tha..

usne bahot bar uss pathar ko fekne kaa bhi try kiya par koyi fayada nahi hua tha..

kyo ki jab bhi wo pathar ko fek deta uske agle hi din usse bura sapna aata tha aur wo patthar firse uske pass vapas aa jata tha..

ab to uske pass wo patthar fekne ke liye bhi sahas nahi ho raha tha
tabhi uske room se bahar se uski maa ki chinta janak aawaj aayi

maa - kya hua beta fir se bura sapna dekha kya .. pata nahi kiski buri najar mere bete ko lagi hai jo mere bete ko iss tarah ke bure sapne aa rahe hai mai kal hi tuzhe mandir lekar chalti hoo pandit ji se keh kar pooja karayege to sab thik ho jayega

apni maa ki aavaj sunkar Aryan thoda hosh mai aa gaya aur gehri sanse lete huye apne aap ko shant karne laga....

iss duniya mai uska apne maa ke siwa koyi aur nahi tha jab se wo samjhne laga tha tab se uski parvarish maa ne hi ki thi

apne maa ko chinta mai dekh kar aryan samjhate huye kaha

Aryan - kuch nahi maa ab sab thik hai aap so jao kal aapko kaam pe bhi to jana hai..

aryan ki baat sunkar uski maa ko tasali huyi aur unhone kaha

maa - thik hai mai sone jaa rahi hoo ab tum bhi apni nind puri karlo kal se tumhare college ki chuthiya bhi khatm ho rahi hai..

itna keh kar aryan ki maa aryan ke sir ko sehlakar waha se chali gayi

Aryan abhi bhi uss bure sapne ko bhula nahi paa raha tha jisme wo khood ek bhayanak aakriti mai badal gaya tha jo naa to ek insaan ki thi yaa nahi kisi jaanwar ki thi uss aakriti ko dekh kar kuch aisa lag raha tha jaise wo kisi Rakshas ki ho...

Aryan ye sab soch hi raha tha ki thabhi uski najar uss pathar pe gayi jo aaj pata nahi kyo andheri raat mai bhi chamak raha tha

ye dekh aryan ne jaise hi Patthar ko uthaya usme se achanak se tej roshni nikle ne lagi aur wo sidha jaa kar Aryan ke ankho mai samane lag gayi..

tabhi usse apne andar se ek awaj aayi

[ Ding system loading 1% 10% 25% 50% 100% system loading complete]

jaise hi countdown khatam hua tabhi uske sarr mai thoda thoda dard hone laga aur system ke bare me jankari load hone lagi thi

ye system ek advance civilization ke jaane mane scientist ne banayi thi..

ye system har ek species chahe wo animal ho yaa insects ho yaa plant jo bhi living things the unke Genes ka parikshan kar ke uski khubhiya system dharak ke andar load kar sakta tha..

Agar ache se samjha jaye to ab Aryan kisi bhi sajiv rachna ki khubiyo ko apne andar load kar sakta tha

par iske kuch limitations the....
jab tak aryan pahle load kiye huye genes ke khubiyo ko 100% istemaal karna nahi sikh leta tab tak usse agle gene load karne ki permission nahi thi..

Aryan ne jaise hi saari information samjhi usse apne aap pe yakin nahi ho raha tha..

wo abhi bhi iss hakikat ko sapna hi samjh raha tha..

par uske ankho ke samne system ke load huye panel ko dekh kar ab usse ispe bharosa hone laga tha..

Ab aryan chahe to kisi marvel yaa DC films ke hero ke taraha superpower paa sakta tha ...

aryan bachpan se hi padhai mai
class mai 1st tha par family condition ke chalte wo kabhi kabhi part time job kar leta tha jiske vajah se uske college mai grades bhi kam ho gaye the..

uska class pure college mai sabse hoshiyar bacho ka class tha jisme yaa to kafi genius bache the aur yaa to rich bache the jo apne family connection ke chalte iss class mai transfer huye the...

Class mai sare bache Aryan ke gareebi kaa majak udate the jo aryan bina kuch kahe sun leta tha..

par in sab ke bich bhi uski ek ladki dost thi jo Aryan ke school se uske sath hi padhti thi Aryan ko wo kafi achi lagti thi par usne apne halat ko dekh kar kabhi usko dost se badh kar nahi dekha..

par ab system ke wajah se uske andar ek nayi energy aayi thi uska aatmvishwas bhi badh chuka tha...

kya aryan ab uss ladki ko apne dil ki baat bata payega..

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Wahi dusri taraf city ke ek aalishan colony mai aaj yaha bade se ghar mai 2 ladke aur 3 ladkiya bhethi drinks kar rahi thi

ussi bich ek ladke ne kaha

L1 - kya hua arohi lo naa tum bhi drink lo waise bhi kal se to fir se college shuru hoga hamari party vagera sab band ho jayega

Arohi - sorry... raaj muzhe tanu aur simmi ( simran ) ko ghar drop karna hai iss liye aaj tum hi drink kar lo...

raaj - ghar drop karna konsi badi baat hai wo to driver ko keh kar ho jayega .. kya tumhe bura to nahi laga jab ham ne tumhare ashiq (Aryan) ke bare mai kuch kaha to..

Arohi - nahi aise koyi baat nahi hai ham to sirf dost hai...

arohi ki baat sunkar sath hi baithi tanu ne kaha..

Tanu - Arohi dosti apne bara bari mai hoti hai .. wo ladka sirf tumhara use kar raha hai dekho kabhi naa kabhi wo bhi baki ladko ke tarahi tum ko dost bana kar purpose karne kaa try karega...

tanu ki baat sunkar arohi ne kuch nahi kaha vahi sath mai bethe dusre ladke ke ne kaha...

L2 - muzhe bhi tanu ki baat sahi lag rahi hai tumhe uss ladke se duriya bana ke rakhni chahiye ye gareeb ladke dosti ko hi pyar kaa naam de dete hai..

simmi - haa rishab sahi keh rah hai arohi tum to kafi samajhdar ho fir bhi tum uss ladke ko chodd kyo nahi deti

apne dost ki baate sunkar arohi bhi apne aur aryan ke dosti ke bare mai sochne lagi thi wo aryan ko sirf dost hi manti thi...

usne iss baare mai kabhi nahi socha tha usse aryan ek accha ladka lagta tha jiske sath wo ek acchi dost thi aur kuch nahi...

Arohi ko aise khayalo mai khoye dekh kar rishabh ne sab ko isharo mai chup kara diya aur..

Rishab - ham ye sab kyo discuss kar rahe hai aaj hamara vacation kaa last day lets enjoy ...

aur itna keh kar rishabh ne sabka mood light karte huye firse drinks banane laga gaya...

ab kya hoga kal college mai jaan ne ke liye follow karte rahe hai Aryan - The Rule Maker

Nice Start...but jyada bakaiti na krna time to time update dete rehna...

 

[Emre]

Bhai ek month ho Gaya

Bhai..LG rha likh nhi pa rhe hai....isliye drop krdiya...Maine story padhi to LGA...3 pages hai to 2 update hogey km se km pr yha to mahino se update ka pta hi nhi hai....aise hi krte hai ye log 1 update ka idea HOTA hai bs Inka.......#TUM SE NA HO PAYEGA .....TO REHNE DO TUM....@ReBeL

 

[core123]

Nice bhai

 

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