Erotica ASHAAN (karz) Romance+thrill+lust(completed)

[King]

ab main koi professional writter to hoo nahi pehli baar story likh rha hoo isliye koi galati ho jaye to maaf kar dena. ab aap dosto ko main jada bore naa karte hue kahani ki taraf le chalta hoo....(dosto ye sirf mere dimaag se banayi hui story hai iska reality se koi lena-dena nahi hai isliye bas story samajh ke hi enjoy karna.....pasand aa jaye to bhi naa aaye to bhi atleast meri galati jarur btana taaki aagey se main galati ko dubara na karu...dosto kahani thodi lambi hai or boring bhi isliye jinko sirf sex enjoy karna hai unse main pehle hi hath jod kar maafi maang rha hoo... iss story me aapko action, imotion, suspence, love, lust, sex, sab milega lekin thoda sabar karna padega umeed hai aap sab dost mera sath denge....to chalte hain kahani ki taraf.....)



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[King]

Memorable Comments

Wow Boss story gajab likhi hain kaun kah sakta hain ki aap pro nahi ho boss kafi badiya story hain. Maza aa gaya pad kar. Ab dheeray dheeray neer ko purana yaade bhi aa rahi hain but jhalak ki tarah dekhtey hai ki aage story kha pohacti hai. Waiting for next update.

Wah ji suparb update he bhai. Akhir shera ko kuch 2 yaad ata ja raha he. Yaha khushi ki bat ye he ki use pichla to yaad aa raha he lekin wo aaj ke logo ko bhi nahi bhul raha he. Yaar nazi se bhi chudayi karwa do.
Waiting 4 next updaye

Wow bohat hi zabardast. Lagta hain heena bhi neer ke ishaq me doob chuki hain fiza and nazi ki tarah. Dekhay kab yah dono iqraar aur izhar karri hain. Idhar neer ko apni asliyat ke aur ansh milne shuru ho gaye hai aur aaj to usko apna naam bhi mil gaya.

Ek hain anar yaha kitney bimar yaha wali halat ho gayi hain shera aka neer ki yaha par. Ab dekhtey hai ki kia karta hain neer aur kisko apnata hain shayad fiza to pregnecy ki wajah sai shayad race se peechay hole phir eeh jayegi fiza and hina. Aur yah bhi dekhna hoga ki uski yadasht ka kaun sa ansh aayega ab.

waah kamaal ka likha hai bhai update.... chalo accha hai Mouka to milaa sudharne ka.

lagtaa hai saare tests paas kar lega Shera aur
khan ko jo shaq hai wo sab bhi clear ho jaayenge

waiting for next update

Wow Aaj shera ka itihaas khul ke samne aaya lagta to nahi but sixth sense kahta hai ki shayad Shera ki memory nahi gayi thee aur yah yadasht ka natak kar raha hai. Ab baqi to aap jantey honge

Wow Aaj shera ka itihaas khul ke samne aaya lagta to nahi but sixth sense kahta hai ki shayad Shera ki memory nahi gayi thee aur yah yadasht ka natak kar raha hai. Ab baqi to aap jantey honge

is baar kam se kam Sarpanch ne gaadi mein to bhejaaa.... KLPD karke kam se kam paidal to nahi chalnaa padegaaaa

aaj raat kiski fatne wali hai bure tarike se.... Naazi ji ya Fiza sara gussa KLPD ka kahin to niklega...

Nice update King

keep it up bro

Arey yaar yah neer ki to ek hi din me 2 baar KLPD ho gayi hain. Aur yah Nazi ki baat ko kuch zada nahi le lia hain lagta hain ab thok ke hi maaf karega wo usko. Aur Dr. Khan apna khel khel hi gaya aur usnay puri yadast mitane ki koshish kar dali lagta hai wo puri tarah se Shera ko maar kar Neer o wujood me lana chahta hain.

BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR AUR INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI.
NEER NAZI SE NARAJ HO GAYA HAI.AB NAZI MANANE ME LAGI HAI AUR YE KYA BHAI NEER BEEMAR HO GAYA OH YE TOH BAHUT HI JHOL LAG RAHA HAIAGER HEENA DOCTOR KO NA LATI TOH PATA NAHI KYA HOTA AB TOH YE DEKHANA HAI AISA KISNE AUR KYU KIYA NEER KI YADDAAST MTANE KI DAWAA KISNE DI.

Lo ji kar lo baat jiss dawai ko ye log samajh rahe the ki isase yad dasta waas ayegi usase to jo ayi he wo Bhi chali jani thi. Ye to achha hua ki shera ne apne time par jyada sharab ka sewan kiya tha jisase dwai reaction kar gayi aur use ulti ho gayi. Leki ab sawal ye he ki ye dwai di kisne inspector ne ya fir dr ne .
Waiting 4 next update

Nice update bro very good and hot story



Dekhte hai ab kya hoga neer jab gangster kr sath hoga toh kya woh police ka sath dega ya gangsters ka kya uski yadasht wapas aayegi agar aayegi toh kon kon se raaz kholenge


Or gangster group kya karega neer ko aapnayega ya nhi or waha par neer apne sex ka jugaad kaise karega



Dekhte hai nice one bro aage ka intezaar


Waiting for next update

kya jabardast tarike se li hai Rizwana ki

abhi tak ke scene ko dekh kar to pyaar hi lag raha hai Rizwana ka Neer ke liye....dekhte hain Naazi, Heena, Fiza ise apnaati hain ya nahi.

Aage kya hota hai kal subah Khan ko kaise rokti hai rizwana aur uski bedhangi chaal ko dekh kar Khan ko shaq hota hai ya nahi

kaafi time ho gaya dost update do jaldi se

WAAH KYA BAAT HAI

mast update tha.... badaa bhi tha kuch kuch yaad aa raha hai chaahe dhundhlaa hi sahi

purani koi mashuka naa milegi kya idhar Shera ko Japani k alawa

Wah bhau maja aa gayela he. Ab ayega maza jab sher apne Jungle me khud utarega. Waqayi me bahut hi majedar update tha. Balki ise padkar aiaa lag raha tha kijause sab kuch meri akho ke samne live chal raha ho aur ye kabhi khatam hi na ho.
Waiting 4 next update

Nice yaara nice update


Sala ab dekhte hai yeh chota sa shaikh sahab kya karta hai jab use pata chalega ke uski marne ke liye khud uske baap ne bheja hai yaani baba ne shera ki tarafse toh gaao wale baba but confuse kar diya yaha sherane unhe chota shaikh ko lag raha hoga ke sala ab gangster baba ne shera ko kyu bheja


Sahi hai bro sahi jaa rahe ho kismat ne bachaya shera ko uski baat yaha pe koi nhi samjhega wahh sahi hai ekdam sahi point



Nice and fantastic update bro


Superb story

Waiting for next update

Bahot hi shandar aur lajawab update bhai
Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai,
Your update was awesome Hats off to you bro keep rocking we love your story and your writing skills,
Keep going
We will wait for next update.....☆

 

[ʜeisenberg]

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[Night Warrior]

Congrats bro

 

[Love 1994]

Congrats bhai

 

[King]

Baat aaj se kuch saal purani hai. Raat ka waqt tha or pahadi rasta tha bareesh bohot tez ho rhi thi. sunsaan sadak par main tez raftaar se apni car bhagaa rha tha. Police mera pichha kar rhi thi or meri gaadi par goliyo ki bochhar ho rhi thi meri peeth par or kandhe par bhi 2 goli lagi hui thi lekin main fir bhi bohot tez raftaar se car chala rha tha ki achanak kisi police wale ki goli meri car ke tyre par lagi or meri gaadi jo ki tez raftaar me thi jake ek pahadi se dhalaan ki taraf niche badhne lagi or ek ped ke sahare meri car hawa me latak gyi ab main or meri car ek gehri khaayi or ek kamzor se ped par latak rhe the maine bohot koshish karke car ko pichhe ki taraf reverse kiya or gaadi ko khayi me jane se bacha liya lekin isse pehle ki main car se bahar nikalta police ki jeep khayi ke pass aake ruk gyi or tabhi meri aankho ke samne bhi andhera chhane laga uske kuch pal baad jab mujhe hosh aya to mujhe apne seene me tez dard ho rha tha or meri poori kameez khoon se bheeg gyi thi shayad unn policewalo ne mujhe car se utaarkar goli maar di thi or phir mujhe wapis car me bitha kar dhalaan ki taraf car ko dhakka de rhe the.

Main uss waqt 1/2 behosh tha or 1/2 hosh me tha phir bhi khud ko bachane ki poori koshish kar rhe tha. maine car ko sambhalne ki bohot koshish ki lekin sambhaal nahi paa rha tha break par apne pao ka poora dabav dene ke bawjood bhi gaadi ghisat kar pahadi se niche jaa giri or dhadaaam ki awaaz ke sath paani me gir gyi or car ka stairing mere sir me lga or behoshi ne mujhe apni aagosh me poori tarah le liya uske baad kya hua kya nahi mujhe kuch nahi yaad. Main nahi janta main kab tak uss paani me rha or paani ka tez bahaav mujhe or meri gaadi ko kaha tak bahake le gya. Jab aankh khuli to khud ko ek chhote se kamre me paya lekin jab maine chaarpayi se uthane ki koshish ki to mere hath-pair mera sath nahi de rhe the or zor lgane par poore shareer me dard ki ek lehar doud gyi. Itna me achanak ek budha aadmi mere pass jaldi se aaya or mere kandhe par hath rakhkar mujhe letne ka ishara kiya.

 

[King]

Baba: beta tum kaun ho kya naam hai tumhara?

Main: (mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi tha ki main kaun hoo bohot yaad karne par bhi kuch yaad nahi aa rha tha ki meri pichhali jindagi kya thi or main kaun hoo.isliye bas uss budhe aadmi ko or iss jagah ko dekh rha tha ki achanak ek awaaz mere kaano se takrayi)
Baba: kya hua beta btao na kaun ho tum kaha se aaye ho?
Main: mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai ki main kaun hoo.....(apne sir par hath rakhkar) yeh jagah konsi hai
Baba: beta humne tumhe paani se nikala hai meri beti aksar nadi kinare jati hai waha usko kinare par pade tum mile. jab tum unko mile to bohot buri tarah zakhmi or behosh the woh or meri bahu tumhe yha le aayi.
Main: Achaa!!!!!! baba main yha kitne din se hoo?
Baba: beta tumko yha 3 maheene se jada hone wale hain tum itne din yha behosh pade the. jitna ho saka meri beti or bahu ne tumhara ilaaj kiya hum gareebo se jitna ho saka humne tumhari khidmat ki.
Main: essa mat kahiye baba aapne jo mere liye kiya aap sabka bohot-bohot shukriya. lekin mujhe kuch bhi yaad kyo nahi hai.
Baba: beta tumhare sir me bohot gehri chot thi jisko bharne me bohot waqt lag gya mumkin hai uss ghaav ki wajah se tumhari yaddasht chali gyi ho. 


itne me ek ladki ki awaaz sunayi di....Baba akele-akele kisse baat kar rhe ho....sathhiya gye ho kya or kamre me aa gyi. (meri nazar uss par padi to maine sir se pair tak usko dekha or uska poora jayeza liya) dikhane me patli si lekin lambi, kaale baal, badi-badi aankhen, gora rang, kale rang ka salwaar kamiz jispar chhote-chhote phool bane the or kandhe se kamar par bandha hua dupatta chaal me azeeb sa be-dhangapan.

Baba :- dekh beti inko hosh aa gya (khush hote hue)
Nazi :- arre!!!  aapko hosh aa gya ab kaise ho...kya naam hai aapka....kaha se aaye ho aap (ek sath kai sawaal)
Baba : beti zara saans to le itne sare sawaal ek sath puchh liye pehle poori baat to suna kar.
Nazi :- (mooh bnakar) Achha bolo kya hai?
Baba :- beti inko hosh to aa gya hai lekin inko yaad kuch bhi nahi hai yeh sab apna pichhla bhool chuke hain.
Nazi :- (apne mooh par hath rakhte hue) haaye! ab inke gharwalo ko kaise dhoondhenge?

itne me baba meri taraf dekhte hue.

Baba:- beta tum abhi thik nahi ho or bohot kamjor ho isliye aaram karo yeh meri beti hai nazi yeh tumhari achhe se dekh-bhaal karegi or tum fikar na karo sab thik ho jayega. hum sab tumhare liye dua karenge.(or dono baap beti kamre se bahar chale gye)

yeh baat mere liye kisi jhatke se kam nahi thi ki naa to mujhe yeh pta tha ki main kaun hoo or nahi kuch mujhe mera pichhla kuch yaad tha uper se main 3 maheene se yha pada hua tha. ek hi sawaal mere dimaag me bar-bar aa rha tha ki main kaun hoo....akhir kaun hoo main achanak mere sir me dard hone laga isliye maine apni purani zindagi ke bare me jada nahi socha or apne zakhamo ko dekhne lga meri body ki kaafi jagah par patti bandhi hui thi. main iss parivaar ke bare me soch rha tha ki kitne neq log hai jinhone yeh jante hue ki main ek ajnabi hoo na sirf mujhe bachaya balki itne maheene tak mujhe sambhala bhi or meri dekh-bhaal bhi ki.main apni socho me hi gumm tha ki achanak mujhe kisi ke qadamo ki awaaz sunayi di. maine sir uthake dekha to ek ladki kamre me aati hui nazar aayi yeh koi dusri ladki thi baba ke sath jo aayi thi woh nahi thi woh shayad bhaagkar aayi thi isliye usse saans chadha hua tha...yeh fiza thi jo yeh sunkar bhagti hui aayi thi ki mujhe hosh aa gya hai.

maine nazar bharke usse dekha....dikhane me na jada lambi na jada chhoti, rang gora, nasheeli si aankhen, peele rang ka salwaar kameez  or sir par saleeke se dupatta odhe hue lekin woh dupatta bhi uski chhatiyo ki banawat ko chhupane me naakam tha) main abhi uske roop rang hi gor se dekh rha tha ki achanak ek awaaz ne mujhe chonka diya.

 

[King]

Introduction ​

Neer (shera) :- Age- 26 saal, height - 6.1" (Main hero)



Haidar Ali (baba) :- Age 65 saal, dubla or patla (budha side roll me hi rahega)



Naaz (nazi) :- Age- 22 saal, height- 5.6" figure- 34-28-36 (baba ki beti)



Qasim :- Age- 31 saal, height- 5.8" (baba ka beta ek sharabi or londiya baaz jo ab unke sath nahi rehta )



Fiza :- Age-29 saal, height- 5.2" figure- 36-30-38 (Qasim ki biwi)​

 

[King]

Congrats for the new thread bhai

Waiting

Congrats bro

Congrats bhai

every1

 

[anrohit]

Superb Update Bro ....