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FINAL UPDATE NO. 1
Main nazi ke sath sex karke kaafi thakk gya tha isliye kuch hi der me mujhe neend ne apni aagosh me le liya. abhi mujhe soye hue kuch hi der hui thi ki meri jeb me pada mera phone bajne laga jisse achanak meri jaag khul gyi. Maine apne uper leti nazi ko jaldi se side par kiya or khud beth kar jeb me hath daal kar phone dekhne laga. Maine phone dekha to display par rasool likha tha. Maine jaldi se phone kaan ko lagaya or nazi ke pas bethkar hi rasool se baat karne laga.
Main : Haa rasool bhai kya haal hai.
Rasool: main kheriyat se hoo bhai tum kaise ho.
Main : main bhi thik hoo. Btao kaise phone kiya tha.
Rasool : bhai mujhe abhi khabar mili hai ki tumhara shikaar khan ki aaj shaadi hai or woh ek gaav me jaa rha hai.
Main : (hastey hue) yaar tumhari garden badi lambi hai waha bethe hue bhi sab jagah mooh maarte rehte ho.
Rasool: (hastey hue) Bhai main to tumhara kaam hi asaan kar rha hoo jaldi se sultaanpura ke liye nikal jao waha aaj khan jarur aayega shaadi karne ke liye.
Main : Tumhare khabari ne tumko yeh nahi btaya ki main kaha hoo.
Rasool : kaha ho bhai...?
Main : Main iss waqt khan ke kabhi naa hone wale sasural me betha uska intezaar kar rha hoo.
Rasool : waah... kya baat hai Chha gye yaar shera bhai.... Lekin yaar tumko pta kaise chala ki khan aaj sultanpura ayega.
Main : kismat bhi koi chij hoti hai yaar main to yha kuch or kaam se aya tha lekin sala panga kuch or hi ho gya phir mujhe khan ka pta chala to main yhi ruk gya.
Rasool : bhai tumko waha kis aadmi se kaam pad gya or waha tumhara kon hai.
Main : yaar ye wahi gaav hai jaha mujhe nayi zindagi mili thi main to yha unn farishto se milne aya tha lekin yha jab khan ka pta chala to main yhi ruk gya.
Rasool : Achha... to yeh baat hai.... bhai aapko kuch btana tha.
Main : Woh chhod pehle meri baat sunn... tujhse ek kaam tha yaar
Rasool : hukum karo bhai jaan hazir hai.
Main : Asal me yaar ek panga ho gya hai.
Rasool : kya hua bhai sab khairiyat to hai.
Main : (khada hoke kamre se bahar jate hue) Yaar ek mint hold kar...
(Nazi ko dekhte hue) Nazi tum ruko main zra baat karke aaya
Nazi : (haa me sir hilate hue) Hhhmmm
Main : yaar rasool darasal panga yeh hua hai ki jis ladki se khan ki shaadi hone wali hai woh ladki mujhse pyaar karti hai or woh mujhse shaadi karna chahti hai or jinhone meri jaan bachayi thi woh bhi ab iss duniya me nahi rhe bichari unki ladki ek dam akeli ho gyi hai.
Rasool : bhai to isme sochna kaisa aap unko bhi yhi le aao naa khan ko marne ke baad.
Main : wahi to bta rha hoo naa yaar....
Rassol : ji bhai bolo...
Main : khan yha akela nahi aayega uske sath kaafi log honge agar mujhe kuch ho jaye to inn dono ko main waha gaav me tumhare pass bhej dunga tum inka khayaal rakhna.
Rasool : bhai kaisi baat kar rhe ho tumko kuch nahi hoga tum inko khud leke aaoge or mujhe tumhare nishane par poora aitbaar hai or fir mujhe laga shayad tumko pta nahi hoga isliye maine uss gaav me apne kuch aadmi bhi bheje hain jo aapki madad kar sake.
Main : (hairaan hote hue) kya.... konse aadmi kon log aa rhe hain yha...
Rasool : bhai mujhe laga aapko shayad pta nahi hoga isliye hum hi khan ka game baja denge isliye maine waha apne log bhej diye hain.
Main : achha kiya ab muqabla barabari ka hoga woh log kab tak yha pohonch jayenge.
Rasool : bhai aap lala ko phone karke puch lo naa apne tamaam logo ke sath wahi aa rha hai ab to shayad pohonchne wale bhi honge.
Main : achha... chalo thik hai ab tum phone mat karna.... hum jald hi milenge.
Uske baad maine phone rakh diya or aane wale lamhe ke bare me sochne laga shaam ho chuki thi poori haveli kisi nayi-naweli dulhan ki tarah roshni se jag-maga rhi thi khan ke bhi aane ka waqt ho gya tha. Abhi main apni socho me gumm tha ki pichhe se achanak mujhe nazi ne pakad liya or meri peeth par apna sir rakh liya or waise hi mujhse chipak kar khadi ho gyi.
Nazi : maine sab sunn liya hai... jo kuch tum apne dost ko keh rhe the
Main : (palat te hue) kya sun liya hai...
Nazi : main tumko ek baat bohot achhe se bta deti hoo mera iss duniya me tumhare or Neer ke siwaye koi nahi hai agar tumne mujhe akele kahi bhejne ka socha bhi to main khud apni jaan le lungi.
Main : bakwas mat karo.... maine jo bhi kiya woh sirf tumhari heena ki or Neer ki safety ke liye kiya tum janti ho bahar khan ke kitne log aa gye honge. Bahar kuch bhi ho sakta hai yaar.
Nazi : mujhe nahi pta jayenge to sab sath jayenge nahi to main bhi nahi jaungi.
Main : yaar niche jab goliyaan chalna shuru hongi to main tum teeno ko sambhalunga ya unka muqabla karunga.
Nazi : (mooh pherte hue) mujhe kuch nahi pta...
Main : achha baba thik hai jaisi tumhari marzi... ab to khush....
Nazi : (haa me sir hilake muskurate hue mujhe gale se laga kar) Hhhmmm...
Tabhi patakho ki or dhol ke nagado ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi or logo ka shor-sharaba bhi sunayi dene laga.
Main : Lagta hai woh log aa gye hain... chalo ab tum jaldi se teiyaar ho jao tab tak main gaadi me se asla or goliyaan le aata hoo thik hai.
Nazi : (haa me sir hilate hue) achha...
Main : kuch bhi ho jaye tum haveli ki uss taraf nahi aaogi samajh gyi tum Neer ko leke gaadi me betho main heena ko leke aata hoo tum gaadi ke pass hi hmara intezaar karna....
Nazi : (haa me sir hilate hue) thik hai.... Apna khayaal rakhna.
Maine bina kuch bole ek nazar nazi ko muskura kar dekha fir palatkar jaha Neer soya hua tha waha gya uske maathe ko chooma or wapis darwaza kholkar tez kadmo ke sath bahar ki taraf nikal gya. Chhote gate se bahar jane se pehle maine ek baar phir palat kar dekha nazi ab bhi mujhe hi dekh rhi thi uske chehre se mere liye fikar saaf dikhayi de rha tha. Uske baad main bahar aaya or apni gaadi ki diggi me se hathiyaar nikalne laga. Maine jaldi se apna bag khola usme se jaldi se ek pen or ek kaagaz ka tukda nikala jiss par maine apne gaav tak jane ka pta or rasta likha or usse apni jeb me daal liya. Main mann hi mann dua karne laga ki iski jarurat na pade. Ab mera ek hi target tha khan or uske aadmi isliye ab meri kahi hui baat poori karne ka waqt aa gya tha.... yaa to marna tha yaa maar dena tha. maine apne bag me se apne kapde ek side par kiye or jaldi se 2 pistol uthayi or uski magzine check karke maine dono pistol ko apne jootoki zuraabo me daal liya ek revolver me maine goliyaan bhari or uske apni pent me belt ke pass fitt kar liya. Ab mere pass bag me sirf 3 pistol hi bachi jinme se ek ko maine car ke aagey wale hisse me stairing wheel ke pass rakh diya or baaki 2 pistol ko maine apni pent ke pichhe wale hisse me taang liya or apni shrt bahar nikaal lee jisse kisi ko meri pistol nazar naa aaye. uske baad maine gaadi ki diggi ko band kiya Fir maine jaldi se lala ko phone kiya kuch hi pal me usne phone utha liya.
Main : kaha hai lala...
Lala
khush hote hue) bhai khan ka kaam karne jaa rha hoo... sultanpura gaav me.Main : khan ko maarne ke liye...
Lala : haa bhai... kyo maante ho naa apne bhai ke dimaag ko... tum usko kaha-kaha dhoondh rhe the or maine usko ek jhatke me dhoondh liya.
Main : main sultanpura me hi hoo tum jaldi se jaldi yha pohoncho shaam hone wali hai or main tumhara hi intezaar kar rha hoo.
Lala : bhai iska matlab tum pehle se wahi mojud ho.
Main : laale jis school me tu mujhe padha rha hai waha ka principal aaj tak mujhse tution leta hai jo tum log sochte ho usse pehle woh baat main soch chuka hota hoo.
Lala : (hastey hue) bas bhai ab to gaav ke pass hi hain hum kuch hi der me pohonch jayenge aap bas hmara intezaar karo hum kuch hi der me aa rhe hain.
Main : thik hai tum ander hi aa jana main ander jaa rha hoo.
Lala : pagal jaisi baat mat kar yaar bhai tu akela hai ander khan ke bohot log honge.
Main : Ab to kitne bhi log ho... Baba ki dua se aaj main sab par akela bhi bhaari hoo.
Lala : bhai baat to suno...
Uske baad maine bina uski koi baat sune phone rakh diya or bhagta hua haveli ki aagey ki taraf chala gya jaha gate pehle se khula hua tha or kaafi log darwaze ke samne khade the. Main inn logo ke hote hue ander nahi jaa sakta tha kyoki log meri umeed se bhi jada the. main jaldi se ek ped ke pichhe chhip gya or sahi moqe ka intezaar karne laga. Thodi der baad ek police wala mujhe ped ki janib aata hua dikhayi diya isliye main jaldi se ped ka tana pakadkar uper chadh gya. woh aadmi jhoomta hua aa rha tha shayad woh nashe me tha usne charo taraf dekha or fir apni pent ki zipp kholkar ussi ped ke samne peshaab karne laga jiske uper main betha tha. Mujhe ek tarqeeb soojhi maine jaldi se apni taangey ped ki shaakh me phasayi or ulta hoke uss aadmi ko garden se pakad liya or uper ko khinchkar uski garden ko jhatke se marod diya woh aadmi bina koi awaaz kiye wahi mar gya uske baad maine uss aadmi ko bhi ped ke uper khinch liya. Fir uske sare kapde utaare or uske kapde khud pehan liye woh aadmi wardi me tha isliye agar uski wardi main pehan leta to mujh par koi bhi shaq nahi kar sakta tha. Lekin masla ab pistol ko rakhne ka tha kyoki shrt ander karne ki wajah se pistol bahar se dikhayi de sakti thi isliye maine 2 pistol ko wapis apne jooto me daal liya or 2 pistol ko shrt ke ander waise hi rakh liya or 1 pistol ko maine apni topi ke niche rakh liya. Ab 3 pistol bachi thi 2 meri khud ki or ek uss policewale ki service revolver jo shayad ander mere kaam aa sakti thi. Main jaldi se ped se niche utra or 2 revolver ko wahi pass hi ek jhadiyo me rakh diya or 1 uss policewale ki revolver jo uski wardi me hi fitt thi usko waise hi rehne diya. Ab main bina koi awaaz kiye samne khadi bheed me shamil ho gya or unn logo ke sath main bhi ander ghus gya ab main charo taraf dekh rha tha lekin meri nazare sirf khan ko hi dhoondh rhi thi. Tabhi ek policewala mere pass aya or mere kandhe par hath rakh diya.
Aadmi: bhai machis hai kya cigratte jalani hai.
Main : (naa me sir hilate hue) nahi... (main nahi chahta tha ki woh policewala mera chehra dekhe isliye uski taraf peeth karke hi khada rha)
Admi : konse department se ho janab....
Main : Narcotics Department
Admi : Narcotics se to main bhi hoo kya naam hai bhai (mujhe palat te hue)
Main : (uski taraf palat te hue) Sheraaa....
Admi : (apni pistol nikal kar mere sir par taante hue) kon hai oye tu...
Main : (uske mooh par hath rakh kar usk sir me jor se kohni maarte hue) Tera baap...
Woh aadmi behosh hoke wahi gir gya waha kaafi log the isliye maine usko kandhe ke sahara deke apne sath khada kar liya or usko kahi girane ki jagah dekhne laga. pass hi mujhe ek bada sa Phool daan nazar aya maine usko uske piche gira diya or ander chala gya jaha jashan ka mahol tha sab log hath me jaam liye khade the. Meri nazare charo taraf khan ko dhoondh rhi thi lekin khan mujhe kahi bhi nazar nahi aa rha tha. Main waqt zaya nahi karna chahta tha isliye hall ke charo taraf ghumne laga or waha khade logo ke hathiyaro ka jayeza lene laga jisse mujhe yeh pta chal sake ki mujh par kitne log goliyaan chala sakte hain. Waha jadatar log to saade kapde me hi nazar aa rhe the sirf ginti ke kuch hi log the jo meri tarah wardi me mojud the. Main nahi chahta tha ki jab main khan par goli chalau to mujh par bhi goliyo ki bareesh shuru ho jaye isliye maine ek-ek karke sabko khamoshi se khatam karne ka socha. Main jaldi se jake ek parde ke pichhe chhip gya jaha 2 policewale khade the. Main unke pichhe se gya unke mooh par hath rakha or zor se unka sir khambe me maara jisse woh dono behosh ho gye uske baad maine dono ko parde ke pichhe hi khinch liya or wahi gira diya uske baad main parde ke pichhe se hota hua aagey badha to mujhe ek or aadmi wardi me nazar aaya. maine jaldi se jake usko bhi pichhe se pakad liya or apni dono baaju me uski garden ko pakad kar jhatke se tod diya or usko bhi parde ke pichhe kar diya.
Ab main aagey nahi jaa sakta tha kyoki aagey parda nahi tha or logo ki kaafi bheed bhi thi isliye maine charo taraf nazar daudayi or samne mujhe kuch log bethe hue nazar aaye main chup-chap jake unn logo me hi beth gya or kisi ko shaq na ho isliye ek jaam apne hath me logo ko dikhane ke liye pakad liya. Kuch der waha bethe rehne ke baad mujhe seedhiyo se niche utarta hua khan nazar aaya woh samne jake stage par beth gya uske pass hi chaudhary (heena ka baap) bhi khada tha. Mere pass achha moqa tha usse maarne ka lekin main chahta tha ki usko pehle pta chale ki usko kyo maara gya isliye maine apna hath pistol se hata liya or mooh niche karke beth gya taaki woh mujhe dekh naa sake. Abhi mujhe waha bethe kuch hi der hui thi ki ek hath mere kandhe par pada or pichhe se awaaz aayi...
Aadmi : oye khabiz tujhe yha bade logo me bethne ko kisne bola hai chal bahar daffa ho or security ka khayaal rakh sale ko daru peene ki padi hai.
Main : (bin kuch bole apni kursi se khada hote hue) ji janab.
Main uthkar bahar jane laga to uss aadmi ne pichhe se ek pistol meri peeth par rakh di.
Aadmi : apne aap ko bohot hoshiyaar samjhta hai sheraaa... tujhe kya lagta hai tu yha aake hmare logo ko maarega or humko pta bhi nahi chalega ab bina koi awaz kiye chup-chap mere sath chal nahi to yhi goli maar dunga.
Main bina kuch bole uske aagey chalne laga. woh mujhe seedhiyo se uper ki taraf le gya main nahi janta tha ki woh aadmi kon hai or mujhe kaise janta hai. Mere seedhiyan chadhte hue usne meri kamar par latki pistol bhi utaar lee or meri kamar par hath rakh kar check karte hue meri kameez me mojud 2 pistol bhi nikal lee ab mere pass sirf 3 pistol thi 1 jo meri topi me mojud thi or baaki 2 mere jutto me thi. Main chup chaap dheere-dheere seedhiyan chadh rha tha or uss aadmi se nizaat paane ka rasta soch rha tha.
Aadmi : khan bhai sahi the tu sala yha jarur aayega or dekho aa bhi gya yha marne ke liye.
Main : Madarchod thokna hai to goli chala dimaag mat chaat mera.
Aadmi : tu chal to sahi beta itni bhi kya jaldi hai marne ki... Ek baar khan bhai ka nikaah ho lene de tujhe to fursat se marenge sale gaddar.
Main : gaddar main nahi tera haramkhor khan hai jisne har kadam par mere sath fareb kiya hai.
Hum log baaten karte hue uper aa gye woh aadmi mujhe ek kamre me le gya jaha pehle se kuch log mojud the. Unhone mujhe ek kursi par bithaya or baandh diya sath hi mere sir se topi utaar di jisme maine ek pistol bhi rakhi hui thi.
Aadmi : oye nawab yeh le khan bhaijaan ka tohfa sambhaal kar rakh main unko btake aata hoo ki aashiq kutte ki maut marne ko khud hi aa gya hai.
Main : Marne nahi bhenchod tumhari maarne aaya hoo agar ek baap ka hai to khol mere hath phir tujhe btata hoo ki main yha marne aaya hoo yaa tum sab ki qabar bnane aaya hoo.
Aadmi : Mere mooh par mukka maarte hue.... ssssss zor se to nahi lagi shera.
Main : Agar mere hath azaad ho gye to tujhe fursat se maarunga bhenchod sher ko bandh kar mardangi dikhata hai sale na-mard.
Nawab: (mujhe laat marte hue) sale me garmi bohot hai yaar iska to ilaaj main karta hoo tu jaa farookh yha se or khan bhai ko leke aa.
Uske baad woh farookh naam ka aadmi kamre se bahar chala gya ab mere aas-pass kuch log mojud the jihone mujh par laate or mukko ki barsaat shuru kardi. Main bandha hua tha isliye jawab bhi nahi de sakta tha lihaja pada rha or unki maar khata rha. Kuch der mujhe maarne ke baad woh log wapis bed par jaake beth gye or sharab peene lage. Maine zameen par kursi se bandha hua gira pada tha or woh log mujhse ek dam be-fikar the maine achha moqa jaan kar apne bandhe hue hatho par poora zor laga diya jisse mere hatho par bandhi rassi toot gyi or mera ek hath azaad ho gya maine jaldi se apne dusre hath ki rassi bhi kholi or waise hi pada rha. Ab main sahi moqe ke intezaar me tha ki kab unki mujhse nazar hate taaki main apne pairo ki rassi khol saku. Lekin kuch hi der me farookh waha wapis aa gya isliye main wapis bandhi hui halat me hi rassi ko apne dono hatho se pakde hue leta rha.
Farookh : oye kameeno apne baap ko utha to dete salo itna maarne ko kisne bola tha.
Aadmi : yaar hum kya karte sala bohot kadwa bolta hai hmara bheja ghuma rha tha ab dekh kaise khamosh hoke pada hai.
Farookh : Khan bhai ne bola hai ki nikaah ke baad woh iska bhi kaam kar denge tab tak isko baandh kar rakho.
Aadmi : thik hai...
Uske baad achanak farookh ke pichhe-pichhe waha khan bhi aa gya...
Khan : Arre waah aap bhi shareek hai janab iss mubarak moqe par... Btane ki zehmat uthayenge ki kis khushi me yha aana hua.
Main : teri maarne aaya hoo madarchod.
Khan : (hastey hue) sale teri garmi kabhi nahi jayegi naa... (mera mooh pakadte hue) Tu chij kya hai yaar sala tujhe 5-5 goli maro tab bhi tu bach jata hai. koi bhi ladki ho sala tujhe dekhte hi kapde utaar kar khadi ho jati hai woh sali doctorni.... kya naam tha uska.... haa yaad aaya Rizwana.... woh bhi sale tere chakkar me phas gyi or mujhse baghawat kar gyi or rana ko bhej diya tere pass meri sachhayi btane ko... yeh to achha hua ki waqt par mujhe pta chal gya or maine rana or rizwana ko waqt par khatam karwa diya warna mera kaam to bohot kharab ho jana tha.
Main : kya Rizwana or rana ko tune marwaya tha or Mujhe goli tumne maari thi? (Matlab rizwana ka pyaar jhooth nahi sach tha or main uss bichari ko kitna galat samajh rha tha jisne mere liye apni jaan de di)
Khan : Haaaa... Chhote ke sath partnership jo karni thi. Chal aaj lage hath teri yaddasht ko bhi thoda sa taaza kar deta hoo.
Main : lekin mere sath tune dhokha kyo kiya main to tera sath dene tak ko raazi tha or mujhe kuch yaad bhi nahi tha.
Khan : Dekh yaar bura mat maan lekin bussiness ka asool hai agar khud uper jana hai to kisi na kisi ko to niche girana hi padega mere pass maal tha lekin koi tagdi keemat dene wala buyer nahi tha isliye maine chhote se hath mila liya. Lekin tera sheikh baba iss baat ki ijajat kabhi nahi deta kyoki druggs ka sara dhandha tu sambhalta tha or jab tak tu tha tere baba sheikh ko bhi hum rastey se nahi hata sakte the kyoki unki dhaal tu tha. Isliye humne socha ki pehle tujhe hi rastey se hata dete hain fir budha to tere ghum me hi mar jayega or chhote bhi Baba sheikh ki kursi par beth jayega lekin afsos woh sala bhi bach gya.
Main : (khan ki baat sunn kar mujhe sab yaad aane laga ki kaise main uss din deal karne ke liye jaa rha tha jab police ki ek jeep mere pichhe pad gyi or mujhe par andha-dhoondh goliyaan chalane lagi jisse ek goli meri gaadi ke tyre par lagi or gaadi ka balance bigad gya gaadi ek chattaan ke sath jake takaayi or mera stairing wheel se sir takra gya or woh khan hi tha jisne mujhe gaadi se nikaal kar mujh par goliyaan chalayi thi or fir mujhe mara hua samajh kar gaadi samet khayi se niche dhakka de diya. Mujhe sab kuch yaad aa gya tha ki yhi woh haramkhor tha jisne mujh par goli chalayi thi) Madarchod aaj tak woh goli nahi bani jo shera ko maar sake or heena se nikaah ke sapne dekhna chhor de usse pehle hi main tujhe jahannum pohoncha dunga or yaad rakhna meri ek goli bhi teri gaand phaadne ke liye kaafi hai... Kyoki shera ki maar or shera ka waar kabhi khaali nahi jata or jis par padta hai woh aadmi saari jindagi uth nahi sakta.
Khan : (haste hue) Sapna achha hai... sale tu to khud mere reham-o-karam par hai tu mujhe marega... Main chahu to tujhe abhi masal sakta hoo lekin pehle nikaah ho jaye fir aake teri khabar leta hoo. Wese bhi woh heena sali bohot tareef karti hai teri... Tu dekhna tere samne heena ko nangi karke suhaagraat manaunga or phir uski aankho ke samne tujhe goli marunga. Oye nawab iska khayaal rakhna bohot harami hai dekhna yeh khulne naa paye.
Nawab : ji khan sahab.
Uske baad khan kamre se bahar chala gya or farookh ko mere samne bith kar chala gya.
Main : Oye chutiye... Mujhe paani peela bhosdi ke...
Farookh : (gusse se mera kolar pakadte hue) sale chutiya kisko bola....
Main : tere ko bola gandi naali ke keedey...
Farookh : (gusse ) Aaaawww.... kyo marna chahta hai sale khan bhai ka hukum nahi hota to abhi tujhe goli maar deta.
Main : sale har kaam khan ki gaand me ghus kar hi karta hai yaa khud me bhi dum hai.
Farookh : (mere pet me mukka marte hue) Sale dum dekhna hai tujhe mera dikhata hoo tujhe dum ... (yeh bolne ke sath hi usne 2 mukke or mere pet maare) Hawa nikali sale...
Main : kyo bhosdi ke thakk gya yaa gaand phat gyi....
Farookh : Yeh marega aaj mere hath se... (yeh bolte hi usne mere mooh par mukka maara)
Maine tezi se apna hath aagey kar liya or uska mukka hawa me hi pakad liya. jisse dekhkar uski aankhen bahar aane ko ho gyi.
Main : madarchod bola tha tujhe ki mujhe thok de tu nahi maana.... Ab dekh main tum sabki yha kaise qabar bnata hoo.
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