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SAFAR KI SURUWAAT.....
AJNABI SE MADAD AUR MULAQAAT......
Train ke aate hi hum apni boggy talash kar apni seat par pahuch gaye....aur apna saman set kar liya........
Humara 1st class AC wala coach tha aur hamari seat aamne-samne thi aur baki uper wali do seats khali thi......yani koi nahi aaya tha abhi tak un par.......
Main aaraam se sheat par baith kar khidki se baahar dekhne laga....tabhi mujhe ek ande ka thela dikha...jaha log garma-garam omlet kha rahe the....
Ab yaha main bata du..ki omlet meri kamjori hai...isliye main omlet dekh kar lalcha gaya aur ammi se bahar jane ka bolne laga.....
Par ammi ne mujhe saaf mana kar diya....par jab maine baar-baar zid ki...to ammi ne bola ki wo khud ja kar omlet lati hai....par tu nhi jayga...
Ab mujhe to omlet khana tha....to main maan gaya....aur ammi mere liye train se nikal kar platform pe omlet banwale nikal gai.....
Isi dauran hamare coach me ek jawaan aadmi dakhil hua......mene dekha ki wo kareeb 6 feet ka hatta-katta mard....
Dekhne me ekdam gora....aur ghane kale baalon wala mard.....jisne ek tight t-shirt aur jeanse pahni hui thi.,.....
Uski personality aisi robadaar thi ki main to us waqt unko dekh kar darne hi laga tha.........
Khair....unhone apni seat dekhi aur apna bag sheat par rakh diya......aur fir mere paas aa kar baith gaye....
Aur jaise hi wo mere baju me baithe....to main thoda sa seham kar khidki ki taraf sarak gaya......
Par saayad wo mera dar samajh gaye aur muskura kar mujhe dekhne lage......
Aadmi- kya hua beta.....tum mujhe dekh kar saham kyo gaye....main koi bhoot thodi na hu......jo mujse door bhaag rahe ho......haa...
Main(dheere se)- nhi...wo to main....yu hi....
Aadmi- accha chhodi.....ye batao....naam kya hai tumara.........
Main- aa..asif....
Aadmi- are..daro mat asif....accha ye batao....kaha ja rahe ho....
Main- bangalore...
Aadmi- ohh.....main bhi wahi ja raha hu....par tum itne lambe safar me akele....ya kisi ke sath aaye ho....?
Main- ammi hai sath me......
Aadmi- ohh...par hai kaha tumhari Ammi.....washroom gai kya.....
Main- nhi....wo bahar gai hai.....mere liye omlet lene.....
Aadi – “Hmmm....waise abhi train chhutnee me kuch time hai.....chalo main bhi kuch nasta le aata hu.....tum bhi apni ammi ko dekh kar bula lo...hmm...
Ye bol kar wo aadmi uth kar bahar nikal gaya....aur main bhi khidki se ammi ko dekhne laga....
Ammi abhi bhi ande ke thele par thi...aur omlet banne ka intzaar kar rahi thi....kyoki thele par bahut bheed thi...saayad isliye unko waqt lag raha tha....
Ammi ko khidki se dekhne ke baad main bhi sheet se uth kar gate par aa gaya....aur wahi se ammi ko dekhne laga.....
Khair....thodi der baad jab train jane wali seeti baji....to mene dekha ki tab ammi bas omlet lene hi wali thi...matlab wo pack ho raha tha....
Par seeti bajne ki wajah se main thoda ghabraya....to maine ammi ko jor se awaaz di.............
Aur meri aawaaj sun kar ammi ne mujhe hath se isara kiya...ki wo bas aa hi rahi hai....
Main(man me)- chalo....omlet waqt par ban gaya.....
Par tabhi maine dekha ki ammi omlet lene ke baad ek dusri fukaan par chali gai....pani ki bottle khareedne...
Aur us shop par bhi bheed thi...isliye ammi ko kuch waqt lag gaya....aur jab ammi waha se free hui....to usi waqt train chal padi....
To main ghabra jar ammi-ammi pukarne laga....aur ammi bhi the da teji se train ki taraf bhaag padi...
Khair....ammi bhaag kar train me to aa gai....par kyoki unke hatho me saamaan tha....to wo saamaan mujhe dekha teji se train me chadi....
Aur is jaldbaji me wo apne aapko sambhaal nhi paai...aur gate ke andar aate waqt apna balance kho kar aage girne lagi...
Ammi ko girta dekh meri cheekh hi nikal gai thi...par tabhi maine dekha ki ek hatte-kaate mard ne ammi ko apne hatho se sambhaal liya tha.....
Wo mard wahi tha....jo mujhe meri sheet par mila tha.....wo saayad dusre gate se pahle hi train me chad chuka tha....
Matlab ye tha...ki ammi ke bade-bade doodh us mard ke hatho me the....aur ammi thodi ghabraai hui thi....
Khair...chand minuton me hi ammi ek dam se sambhali aur ek hath se side me sahara le kar seedhi khadi hone lagi....wahi us mard ne bhi ammi ke doodho ko padke huye unge seedha hone me madad kar di....
Aadmi- theek to ho....lagi to nhi na....
Ammi(jhijhak kar)- nhi....theek hu....sukriya...
Aadmi- koi baat nhi.....apni sheet par jaiye....gate par kjada hona theek nhi...
Ammi- hmm...chal asif....
Fir ammi mujhe le kar apni sheet par aa gai...aur waha hum dono omlet khane lage.....
Khair....hum omlet kha kar free huye aur aaraam se sheet par baith gaye....ki tabhi wo aadmi waha dakhil hua....jise dekh kar ammi ekdam se saham gai....
Ammi- aa..aap....kya hua....
Aadmi- kuch nhi...asal me...yaha meri sheet bhi hai....ye uper wali....
Ammi- ohh.....
Aadmi- agar paresaani na ho to main yaha baith sakta hu...wo kya hai...abhi need to aane nhi wali...to...
Ammi(beech me)- bilkul.....baithiye na....
Fir wo aadmi mere baju me aa kar baith gaya.....matlab ab uska chehra ammi ke just saamne tha.....
Khair train station se chal chuki thi.....aur kuch der me hi train ne raftaar pakad li.......aur aise hi kareeb 15 minute gujar gaye....
Hum abhi tak apni -apni jagah chupchaap baithe the...mai window seat pe betha tha aur mere samne ammi aur mere baju me wo aadmi....
Fir ain aaraam se baitha hua kurkure khane laga.....aur maine dekha ki ammi khidki ki taraf najren kiye huye baithi thi...aur wo aadmi apne mobile me busy tha....
Par ye aadha sach tha....asal me wo aadmi apni najren meri ammi ke uper bhi lagaaye huye tha....
Wo thodi der ammi ko ghoorta aur jaise hi ammi ki najren uski taraf hoti...to wo bapis mobile me dekhne lagta....
Mujhe laga ki ye sab normal hi hai...par asal me wo normal nhi tha.....wo aadmi wakai meri anmi ko dekh raha tha....khas kar ammi ka bhara hua seena....jis par se ab dupatta thoda sarak chuka tha...aur ammi ke bade-bade doodh uper se hi saaf samjh aa rahe the....
Maine kuch der tak to jyada gour nhi kiya...par jab mujhe laga ki us aadmi ki najren sahi nhi...to maine chupke se uski najron ka peecha kiya...
Aur maine paaya ki wo wakai ammi ke doodho ko taad raha tha...aur ab to use ammi ke doodho ke beech ki daraar bhi dikhne lagi thi....kyoki ammi ka dupatta jo sarak chuka tha....
Aur jaise hi mujhe te samjh aaya...to mere jishm me sursuri hone lagi....kyoki aaj pahli baar koi mard meti ammi ko itni siddat se dekh raha tha....jo mujhe bada accha ahsaas kara raha tha.....
Aur fir thodi der baad mujhe ek jhatka laga....jab maine dekha...ki meri ammi bhi us aadmi ko dekh rahi thi....
Halaki lagataar to nhi...par beech-beech me dekh leti thi...
Aur jab maine ye dekha...to main sochne laga...ki agar ammi ko ye pata hai...ki ye aadmi unhe dekh raha hai...to ammi ne apna dupatta sahi kyo nhi kiya....
Kya ammi ko ye pata nhi....ki us aadmi ki najren kaha hai....ya fir wo sab jaan kar bhi anjaan bani hui hai....
Ye sab mujhe samjh nhi aa raha tha....kyoki ek to mujhe pakka yakeen nhi tha ki ammi ko kitna pata hai....aur uper se mujhe need bhi aane lagi thi.....
Main- ammi....need si aa rahi hai....
Ammi- huh....haa...to tu let ja....suniye....aap yaha aa jayge....wo mere bete ko need aa rahi hai....
Aadmi- ha kyo nhi....aaraam se leto beta.....
Aur ye bol kar wo aadmi uth kar ammi ke baju me aa kar baith gaya.....
Aadmi- waise tumhara naam kya hai....maaf karna...ab tak puch hi nhi paya.....
Main(man me)- ye kya....seedha tum hi bolne laga.....aise bol raha hai jaise purani pahchaan ho...huh....
Ammi(muskura kar)- main shamin....aur ye mera beta asif....aur aap...
Aadmi- aadi....matlab aaditya....par log jyadatar aadi hi kahte hai....tum bhi aadi hi bolo......waise tum kaha ja rahi ho.....
Main(man me)- ye kya...main ise bata to chuka hu ki hum bangalore ja rahe hai....hmm...line to nhi maar raha na....
Ammi- ji bangalore.....aur aap...
Aadi- main bhi tumhare sath chaluga...matlab bangalore.....
Ammi- ohh...theek hai....
Itna bol kar ammi ne pani ki bottle li aur pani peene lagi....aur aadi ne bhi apni najren mobile me laga di.....aur main bade aaraam se aankhe moond kar let gaya....par mera dhyaan ab bhi un dono ki taraf hi tha....khas kar aadi ki taraf....
Khair.....fir thodi der tak waha kamoshi chhai rahi.....ammi khidki ki taraf sir tika kar baith gai...aur aadi bhi mobile me lag gaya....
Par aadi is tarah se baitha tha...ki uski najar aasaani se ammi ki taraf ja rahi thi...aur wo baar-baar ammi ke seene ko dekh raha tha....
Wahi meri ammi bhi beech-beech me aafi ko dekh leti thi....aur is beech kafi baar dono ki najren bhi mili....par dono hi muskura kar apne-apne kaam par lag jatr the.....
Mujhe abhi tak aisa kuch nhi laga tha...ki kahi kuch gadbad hai.....haa...ye sach tha ki aadi ki najren meri ammi ke gadraaye jushm par thi....aur wo sahi bhi tha....meri ammi hai hi kamaal ki....
Aur main bhi ye dekh kar khush tha...ki ammi ko yu taadne wala mard ek bahut hi handsome aur hatta-katta hai....
Par abhi tak ammi ne usko kisi tarah ki line nhi di thi...halaki wo use dekh leti thi...par unke chehre se aisa kuch samjh nhi aaya tha ki unge aadi pasand hai....
Khair....aise hi time nikla aur meri aankh lag gai....aur jab meti aankh khuli....to maine dekha ki train ruki hui thi....aur ammi sheet par nhi thi....aur na hi aadi...
Main hadbada kar utha aur khidki se dekhne laga....par waha mujhe kuch nhi dikha....to main uth kar gate par aa gaya....
Aur tab mujhe thodi door ek dukaan par ammi dikhai di.....wo saayad kuch khareed rahi thi.....
Aur tabhi mujhe aadi bhi dikha....jo ek dusri dukaan par khada hua cold drink pi raha tha......
Main un dono ko dekh kar relax hua aur ammi ke aane ka intzaar karne laga.....
( is waqt hum agra me the...aur waqt tha 10 ke aas-paas ka)
Aur tabhi train ka horn baja aur train start ho gai.....aur horn sunte hi ammi pani ki bottle ke kar train ki taraf bhaag padi....aur aadi bhi...
Par ammi train tak pahuch pati....usse pahle hi unka oair ek kele ke chhikle par aa gaya...aur wo fisal kar gutne ke bal gir gai...
Main(joor se)- ammi......
Meri aawaaj sun kar aadi ne piche dekha aur paua ki ammi takleef se karahti hui zameen oar padi hui hai...
Aadi- asif.....tum mat aana...main lata hu teti ammi ko....
To aadi ne mujhe wahi rukne ka bola aur jaa kar ammi ko uthane lage....par ammi ko ek ghutne me chot aai thi...to wo uth bhi nhi paai...
Aadi- kosis karo....train chal padi hai....
Ammi- aahh...mera ghutna....mujhse chala nhi ja raha...aah....
Aadi- koi baat nhi.....main kuch karta hu....
Aadi ne itna bola aur ammi ko sahara de kar khada kar liya.....par ammi se chala nahi ja raha tha........aur wahi train bhi bad chuki thi......
Isliye aadi ne apne majboot bajuon se ammi ko apni god me utha liya aur fatafat daudte huye train me chadh gaye......
Aadi ki ye harqat dekh kar mere sath-sath har saksh...jo unhe dekh raha tha ......wo sab aadi ki taakat ko dekh kar dang reh gaye the.........
Aakhir ek bhari hui aurat ko uthakar tezi se bhaagna aur train pakadna har kisi ke bas ki baat to nahi hoti na........
Fir jaise hi aadi ammi ko le kar gate tak aaye to waha kuvh aur ligo ne unhe uthaar kar khada kar liya aur aadi bhi train me aa gaye......aur fir automatic door band ho gaya......
Is hadhbadahat ke dauran ammi ki dupatta unke seene se nikal kar neeche latak chuka tha.....aur unka seena ab saaf-saaf kurti me kasa hua dikh raha tha.....
Isliye jab aadi ne ammi ko sahara de kar sheet par chalne ko bola...to unka dhyaan ammi ke gore seene par chala gaya....aur unki najren wahi gad gai...jaha ammi ke dono doodh aapas me judte the.......
Fir aadi ne ek baar fir se ammi ko god me utha liya...aur aami ne bhi mana nhi kiya...kyoki unke ghutne me takleef thi...
Main bhi unke paas hi khada tha....par unki nazare ammi ke seene se hatne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi...wo kuch der tak loby main ammi ko god main uthaye waise hi khade the.....aur humare aas-paas khade sab log humko hi dekh rahe the.....
Par ammi ko unki koi fikr nhi thi...kyoki unke to hosh hawaash hi gum the....kyoki wo aaj pahli baar aise giri thi....wo bhi train ko pakadte huye....itne logo ke saamne....
Aur main.....main to us waqt is ghatna ko le kar dar gaya tha...yaha tak ki rone laga tha...kyoki mujhe laga ki aami rah gai aur train nikal jaygi.....
( ASAL ME MAINE KABHI AKELE SAFAR NHI KIYA THA.....AUR TRAIN SE BHI BAHUT KAM SAFAR HUA THA MERA....
AUR FIR YE TO EK ALAG HI MULK THA...TO THODA JYADA HI DAR GAYA THA....)
Khair...aadi meri ammi ko god me le kar aage badne hi wale the...ki tabhi mere paas khade ek shakhs ne meri haalat dekh kar aadi ko bola.....
""Are sir.......aap apni biwi ke sath apne bache ko bhi sambhaliye dekhiye kitna dar gaya hai......dekhiye....""
Jab us shakhsh ne ye kaha to aadi ka dhyan ammi ke seene se hat gaya...aur wo mujhe dekhne lage.....
Par unhone us aadmi ki baat sun kar ye nhi bola ki meri ammi se unka koi rishta nahi.......
Wo to bas mujhe chalne ka bol kar ammi ko god me uthaaye sheet ki taraf chal pade......
Mujhe aadi ke rabaiye par hairaani hui....par sabse jyada hairani hui ammi par....aakhir wo kyo kuch nhi boli....wo bhi bol sakti thi na...ki unka aadi se koi rishta nhi....
Par tabhi maine ye bhi socha...ki saayad ammi abhi bhi hosh me nhi...wo ghabraai hui hai....to unhone kuch suna hi na ho...
Isliye main bhi chupchaap unke pichhe-picche sheet par aa gaya....
AAGE DEKHIYE...KI KAISE EK AJNABI SE HUMARI PAHCHAAN PUKHTA HUI....AUR USNE FIR KYA KIYA.....YE AGLE UPDATE ME.....
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